2019-2020年高考英语书面表达集训（十一）
【高阶特练】第三部分写作（共两节，满分35分）
第二节书面表达（满分25分）按照题目要求或提示来完成下列表述。
【高端点拨】每年高考后，我们一直在思索：英语高考中书面表达考什么、怎么考、如何写等系列高难表述问题。但是，通过与考生交流，我们发现他们的书面表达的思维能力并非不活跃，只是在他们的记忆库中存储的相应表达方式不足，或记忆有误，或根本是空白。拿到作文题目后，不愁没内容可写，只愁没词可用，或是写了不知是否正确，因此在表达过程中，要么被迫放弃，要么按照汉语的结构硬译，以致造成短文词不达意，错误地传递信息，分数也受到影响。针对考生在书面表达方面出现的问题，下面将谈谈高考书面表达的复习建议和答题技巧。
一、复习建议
（一）明确写作能力的培养和提高是一个日积月累的过程。高考英语书面表达题是一项综合性的测试。要写好一篇短文，考生不仅要具备熟练的谴词、造句和谋篇能力，而且需要熟知不同的写作策略。如果从高三年级开始准备，则必须保证有科学、全面的训练计划和足量的写作实践，在这方面，笔者要求学生从认识句子成分，到谴词成句，到练习基本句式，再到语段语篇的这样一个过程。当然有些学生在这过程中也坚持写日记，然后笔者给他们都进行了详细批改。这样学生既听从了老师的安排和指导，也没有忽视自己的独立实践与总结。
（二）注重平时的练笔。近几年考题的话题包括外国交换学生在华学习生活安排、少年健康问题、中学生业余生活、人们的生活变化、环境保护、中学生庆祝 xx年奥运会申办、举办成功等。对于这些话题，每个考生都不会感到无话可说，只要平时认真进行一些写作实践，就不难具备应付这类话题所必要的写作能力。
（三）明确写作方向。从近几年的情况来看，试题并没有特定的语篇或文体要求。虽然短文会用到记叙、说明或议论等表达方式，但这毕竟只是一个区区几十字的文段，远不足被称为记叙文、议论文、说明文或某种特定文体的文章。例如：书面表达材料要求根据一首诗的内容，描述其中的一位老师，这是单纯的记叙文;或者根据提示，写毕业赠言，其中首先要求表述好友在你心中的印象，并用一两个事例加以描述，然后表达祝愿，这其实也是记叙文;或者依据要求，让学生描述一位伟人，并说明自己喜欢他或她的原因，这还是记叙文。
（四）注意平时的词汇积累。针对考生平时练习时出现的没词可用，写了不知是否正确等情况，建议考生们采用听、读、写相结合的办法，增加语言输入，扩大存储量。高三年级不可避免地要进行大量的听和读的练习，在做完听力和阅读理解后，可以停下来，用一点时间有意识地增加针对写作的语言输入，比如将听过或读过的表达方式回忆一下并记住，或者将有用的短语标出来，记在笔记本上，以备事后记忆之用。注意选取的资料应与考生自己的写作水平相近，还要提高记忆的准确性。
二、解题技巧
高考英语书面表达题解题应遵循五步骤的原则进行。xx年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试大纲—英语中对写作这样要求：“要求考生根据提示进行书面表达，考生应能(1)准确使用语法和词汇。(2)使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思。
（一）仔细审题，确定要点。在开始写作这前一定要认真阅读题目中的所有信息(中文提示、图示、注意事项等)把需要表达的全部信息要点列成提纲，列要点时，如果提示是图表，要认真审图，从图中找出要表达的信息要点，如事件发生的背景，人物的衣着、表情、动作、位置、年龄、外貌、图中的英汉文字等，如果有参考词汇，一定要用上。
（二）根据要点，遣词造句。近年来高考书面表达的要求不断提高，高分文章要有较多的词汇，较高级的词汇用法。比如表达丰富可以用rich,但如果你用abundant这个词就属于较高级的词汇。再比如“他强调小心驾驶的重要”这个句子 He emphasized the importance of careful driving.其中“强调”这个词如果你用 attach much importance to 效果更佳。
（三）确定时态及人称，内容连贯，结构紧凑。高考书面表达评分标准明确规定，如人称错误要扣分，不同的文体一般都有基本时态。日记通常记叙发生过的事情，多用一般过去时。议论文多用一般现在时，通知等文体通常用一般将来时。每个句子写好之后，句与句之间要选择恰当的连接词。比如：(1)表示承接、递进用语，besides(并且)、what's more(并且)，moreover(而且)，firstly, secondly, finally(最后)，from now on (从此)，afterwards I after that(后来)，to make things worse/ what's worse(使事情更为糟糕的是)，the worst thing of all(最糟糕的是)。(2)表示转折关系用语。But, however, otherwise, though, despite, in spite of...(尽管)on the other hand(另一方面)，as(尽管)，all the same(尽管如此)。(3)表示因果关系用语。because/because of......for(因为)，owing to (由于)，thanks to (由于)，due to (由于)，so that (结果)。(4)归纳总结用语。to summarize(总而言之)，in short/in a word(简而言之)，on the whole(从总体看)，generally speaking(一般说来)，in my view(我的观点)，in conclusion(总之)。
（四）句式丰富，避免重词。英语书面表达评分标准第五档(21-25分)要求，“应使用较复杂结构，这要求学生不仅会运用基本句型，也要有意识地使用复杂句型，这是文章的亮点。如何使用复杂结构，本人认为适当运用非谓语结构(分词短语、动名词或不定式短语)、适当运用各种从句(定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句)，这些都是有效的途径。比如：When he arrived in Beijing, he gave me an e-mail.(时间状语从句。一般)→On arriving in Beijing, he gave me an e-mail. Having arrived in Beijing, he gave me an e-mail.(使用了介词+动名词和现在分词短语，分别作状语。高级) Hardly had he arrived in Beijing when he gave me an e-mail.(改变时态，句子结构。高级)I won't believe what he says.(一般)→No matter wh at he says, I won't believe it.(让步状从句，高级)。
（五）认真答写，卷面整洁。高考书面表达评分标准中对书写有较高要求。尤其是高考英语作文网上进行阅卷以来，如果书写较差，会影响到扫描质量，因此，考生在答卷时，一定要认真、清楚规范地书写，以保卷面整洁和美观，为争取高分作文做好铺垫。
三、修正小误
1、审题不够仔细，遗漏要点
2、语言基础知识薄弱，语法和拼写错误较多
3．句子结构错误①双谓语现象②句子结构混乱
4．动词使用错误①时态错误②语态错误③滥用be动词
5．汉语式英语
6. 不规则动词及常用词拼写错误
7. 名词单复数错误
8、词义模糊，用词不够准确
9、行文清晰，句子与句子间缺乏衔接.
10、逻辑错误，如：because与so或者although与but等同时出现在同一个句子里。
【考点精练】
Test 1
假定你是即将参加高考的高三学生李华，你的美国网友Mike在电子邮件中问及你的大学
设想。请你就此回一封电子邮件。内容包括：
1．打算学习什么专业；
2．如何度过课余生活；
3．寻求Mike的建议。
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
Thank you for your concern about my plan of the university life.____
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
Test 2
请你为《21st Century》写一篇报道, 介绍我校为高三学生创立的“心灵城堡（Soul Castle）”专
栏(column)，并谈谈自己的感想。
内容要点包括：
1.开设目的：缓解压力, 确保健康
2. 专栏优势：专业指导
3. 专栏内容：建议, 心声
4. 你的感想
注意：
1. 词数100左右
2. 开头语已为你写好(不计入总词数)
Our school has set up a column called “Soul Castle” for senior 3 students.
Test 3
假如你是李夏。你看到关国留学生Sharon 在网上发贴，.希望有人能帮助她提高普通话
(Mandarin）水平，她可以教英语作为回报。请银据以下提示用英语给她写一封电于哪件。
1.表达给她提供帮助的意愿；
2.说明你能胜任辅导的理由；
3.给出讲好普通话的两点建议；
4.提出你学习英语的具体需求。
注意：
1. 词数120左右，开头语已为你写好；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称；
Hi Sharon,
This is Li Xia. I learned from your post that you want to improve your
Mandarin___________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________
Li Xia
Test 4
近期，中国北方雾霾天气频频发生，PM2.5(可入肺颗粒物)与PM10(可吸入颗粒物)这两个此前不被人熟知的词最近一直被许多人提及，环境保护越来越受到人们的关注，作为一名青少年，我们如何尽自己的微薄之力来保护环境，请以学生会的名义发出一个倡议。
要点：
1．环保受到人们更多的关注；2.环境的现状；3.应采取的措施。
注意：词数120左右(格式已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇：雾霾天气the Dust-haze weather
Test 5
为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。
内容要点如下：
1．表示理解并给予安慰；
2．提出建议并说明理由。
注意：
1．词数120左右；
2．信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；
3．信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：temper n. 脾气，情绪
Hi Worried,
I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment.
_______
Test 6
某英文报正就“智能手机的利与弊”这一话题进行讨论。请你根据提示用英语写一篇短文给该报投稿，并
Smart phones have bee part of our daily life.
________________________________________________.
Test 7
最近，你校参加了某英文报纸正在开展的题为“中学生课堂注意力”的专栏讨论，并
请你代表学校给该英文报纸投稿。下面的表格为你校的调查结果（表中数据为学生人
数百分比）。请你根据所提供的信息做简要说明，并根据提示给出改善的建议。(字数
140).
中学生课堂注意力集中情况
及注意力不能集中的原因：改善注意力的建议：
能够集中注意力40％
不能够集中注意力60％
课堂干扰30％
睡眠不足与疲劳70％
________________________________________________________________
Test 8
假定你是李华，暑假你参加了英国游学活动，住在房东Tricia家中，回国后给房东写一封信表示
感谢，要点如下：
1、安全抵家
2、回顾英国游学体会
3、感谢房东的帮助
4、附寄两张合影
5、表达愿望
注意：1、词数100左右。
2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3、结束语已为你写好。
Dear Tricia,
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours
LiHua
Test 9
为配合我县开展“创建卫生文明城市(build a civilized and clean city)”活动，学校举办以“How to Behave Well”为主题的英语征文比赛。现在请你根据所给提示内容，用英语写一篇参赛短文。
提示：1. 衣着整洁；
2. 保持环境卫生，不随地吐痰和乱扔垃圾；
3. 待人有礼，乐于助人；
4. 遵守交通规则；
5. ……
要求：1. 文章必须包括所给提示中1—4 项内容，可展开思路，适当发挥；
2. 文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息；
3. 词数：80-100词左右。
How to Behave Well?
In order to build a civilized and clean city, we students should____________________________
Test 10
假如你是李华，最近收到一封英国笔友Tom的来信。他希望了解你校如何保证学生在校期间的安全。
注意：(1) 信的开头、结尾已给出、不计入总词数。
(2) 词数：100左右，信的内容可适当发挥以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：安全意识 awareness of safety 登记register(vi.) 保安 security guard Dear Tom,
I’m glad to receive your letter and thank you for your concern about our students’ security.
____________________________________________________________________________
We believe a safer school will provide us students a better learning environment.
Yours,
Li Hua
Test 11
你是高三学生李华，进入高三以来你发现你的同桌李雷总是抄作业，为此你很担心。所以借此次月考为契机，请你为他写封信
1. 客观分析抄作业的主要原因 (太难；懒，没兴趣；完成以愉悦老师)
2. 分析抄作业的危害（坏习惯：违反学校规定；失去独立思考的能力）
3. 提出解决方法（合理安排时间；有问题请教老师同学）
注意：1. 字数100词左右
2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
Dear friend,
I am worried about you because ____________________________________________________
Yours sincerely
Li hua
Test 12
假设你是李华，你的加拿大朋友Bob 给你发了一封电子邮件，想了解一下中国高中生对于大学的选择意向，于是你在班里进行了一次调查。请根据下表的信息，给Bob 回复一封电子邮件，告诉他调查结果，
2.电子邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Bob,
Last week I did a survey among the students in my class on what university they want to choose.
Yours,
Li Hua
Test 13
“中国梦”已经成为一个社会热点话题，根据最近央视的社会调查，不同的人群有不同的梦想。请结合表格提示，用英语写一篇关于“中国梦(Chinese Dream)”的演讲稿在你校将要举行的英语演讲比赛中
注意:
1. 对所给提示逐一陈述, 适当发挥,不要简单翻译。
2. 词数100 左右。开头已经写好, 不计入总词数。
3. 作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
Chinese Dream
“Chinese Dream” has bee a hot topic among Chinese people. According to a recent survey by CCTV, different groups of people have different dreams.
Test 14
假定你是李华。在校报英语专栏看到了学校“英语文化节”的一则招募启事，请阅读启事，并根据写
作要点和写作要求写一封应征邮件。
Volunteers Wanted
Our annual English Festival, which will be held on June 15-17, xx, is now looking for 20 student volunteers to provide service for Talent Show, Speech Contest, and English Debate. If you are interested, please send an application email at your earliest convenience to Ms.Chen at chenlaoshi@aef.
写作要点：
1.表示写信意图；
2.陈述应征目的；
3.说明应征条件（性格、能力等）。
写作要求：
1.邮件词数不少于100；
2.开头和结尾部分已写好，不计入总词数；
3.可根据情况增加细节，使行文连贯
4.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
Test 15
你校将要举办一次主题为“how to municate with friends”的英语演讲比赛，请你用
英语写一篇演讲稿。要点如下：
1.尊重并信任朋友
2.常与朋友聊天
3.换位思考问题
注意：
1. 词数100字以上。
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3.参考词汇：换位思考 put oneself in one’s shoes. Hello,everyone, I’d like to share my ideas about the topic of municating with our friends.
______________________________________________________
【高阶特练】xx高考英语-书面表达集训（十一）答案
Test 1
Test 2
Our school has set up a column called “Soul Castle” for senior 3 students. It is aimed at relieving pressure, and ensure the health of students. The column has the unique advantage that the experts in psychology can give us the expertise and guidance. It covers the thoughts and feelings of students and the professional suggestions.
From my point of view, not only does our school attach importance to our study but also put our mental health at the top of the list. It also provides a platform to municate with our teachers and parents. Moreover, we can get help and guidance from professionals to solve our mental problems. With its help, we can take the College Entrance Examination with confidence.
Test 3
Hi Sharon,
This is Li Xia. I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin. I am quite interested in it . I think I’m fit for it. As a student, I have been learning Mandarin for many years. In addition ,I am Chinese, which means Mandarin is a must for me to municate with others in my daily life. So I’m quite confident that I can help you learn Mandarin.
Learning Mandarin takes time, so if you want to learn it well ,you should spend much time practicing Mandarin everyday. As the saying goes, practice makes perfect. Besides, you can also read some books in Chinese、see some Chinese films and listen to some Chinese radio programmes. Speaking and listening are very important for a language learning, by which you are sure to make great progress.
In your post, you say you can teach English as a reward. It is just what I want. I’m eager
to improve my English. So, if you allow me to help you learn Mandarin, you can also help me improve my English. We can contact each other by video chat every night for half an hour in English and half an hour in Chinese, so that we can improve our oral speaking.
Hope for you early reply!
Yours Sincerely
Li Xia
Test 4
Test 5
Hi worried,
I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a had time at the moment.The truth is ereryone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don’t have to worry so much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret. Here are three useful tips:
First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel.This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rig of anger. And third, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards lift can be helpful in lifting your spirits.
I hope you’ll s oon feel calmer and carry on as normal.
Test 6
Smart phones have bee part of our daily life. No matter where we are, we can see people busy playing with their smart phones.
Smart phones benefit us. They not only help us get information around the world more quickly
and easily, but also escape the pressures of life.
However, every coin has two sides. When we spend too much time on smart phones, we don’t have time to municate face to face with our friends or family, and our life, studies and work will be badly affected.
In my opinion, we should avoid using smart phones too much except for the purpose of learning. Meanwhile, it’s necessary for us to take part in more outdoor activities.
Test 7
Our school has made a survey about how long middle school students can fix their attention in class during each period. The result shows that only 40% of the students can draw their attention to the class, while the rest of them can not concentrate on the lesson. 30% of the students think the problem is caused by all kinds of noises in the classroom; the other part of students consider the lack of sleep and tiredness as the major causes.
Therefore, we advise that the classroom be bright and the air inside stay fresh. As for students, they should try their best to be active in class in order not to be disturbed by others. During the breaks, they can take some exercises or have a little rest in the classroom.
Test 8
Dear Tricia,
I’ve e back home safely . Looking back to my stay in Britain, I felt so happy and satisf ied. The beautiful scenery and friendly people impressed me a lot . I also benefited a lot from learning together with local stduents. More importantly , your help and kindness made it easier for me to have a better understanding of British culturedn adapt to the life there . So I’m so grateful to you .
By the way , attached to the letter are two photos taken with you , which I believe will remind you of the happy time we spent together.
You are expected to e to China soon.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Hua
Test 9
How to Behave Well?
In order to build a civilized city, we students should try our best to behave well in the activities.
It's a good habit to keep our clothes clean and tidy. Our city should be kept clean every day. Don't throw litter or spit about. It's good manners to say "Thank you" and "Please" and so on. We should never say dirty words. Be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need. For example, when we are on a bus, we should give our seats to the old and the women with babies. We should also obey traffic rules. When the traffic lights are red, we should stop. And we'd better not talk or laugh loudly in public.
If everyone behaves well, our city will be more beautiful and more attractive
Test 10
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to receive your letter and thank you for your concern about our students’ security.
So far many measures have been taken to ensure the students’ security in and out of our school. The security issue has been emphasized on. We have organized several school meetings to strengthen the students’ awareness of safety about food, traffic and so on. By municating with parents often and in time, our school can supervise and ensure our safety. Besides, a proper number of security guards have been employed to guard the school under a clear duty. Stricter security measures have been taken by our school, including a requirement that all visitors provide identification and register. The students have been taught the ways to protect themselves from danger. For example, once we smell something unusual, we should report it to the school guard immediately. In my view, our school has been doing pretty well and we are looking forward to more effective measures.
We believe a safer school will provide us students a better learning environment.
Test 11
Dear friend,
I am worried about you because I find you copy others` homework occasionally. It is agreed that we students have to do masses of homework both at home and at school. Sometimes we do have some problems, too hard to work out. Moreover, lazy and uninterested in our lessons, some students copy others` homework not only to finish the assignments but also please our teachers.
Copying others` homework is a bad habit. For one thing, it is against the school rules. Being students, we should be honest and work hard. For another, copying others` homework too
often, we will lose the ability that can help us to think. So I would like to give you some suggestions. You should firstly arrange your time and homework reasonably. At the same time, if you have difficulties, you can turn to teachers and classmates for help.
Yours
Li Hua
Test 12
Dear Bob,
Last week I did a survey among the students in my class on what university they want to choose. Now I’m writing to tell you the results.
Twenty-five percent of my classmates want to choose universities in our province. They say they are more likely to be admitted if they apply to these universities. And they needn’t change their lifestyle too much. Seventy percent of them would like to choose universities in other provinces. Being away from home, they can bee more independent and there are more universities for them to choose from. The rest five percent of my classmates plan to choose foreign universities. One reason why they want to go abroad is that they can learn more about different cultures. Besides, it will be a great help to their foreign language study.
Your,
Li Hua
Test 13
Chinese Dream
“Chinese Dream” has bee a hot topic among Chinese people. According to a recent survey by CCTV, different groups of people have different dreams.
Urban residents dream of having easy access to modern transportation so that life will be easier and more convenient. Besides, they hope to enjoy a better living environment and more public facilities. What college students are mainly concerned about is employment. Their dream is to have well-paid jobs in future. Meanwhile, they hope the government will take measures to solve food safety problem so that people can enjoy healthy green food. As for the farmers, they hope that they can enjoy good and affordable medical care and their children can receive a good education.
As far as I am concerned, my dream is to be enrolled by a good university and be a talent who can make contributions to my country.
Test 14
Dear MS Chen ,
I’mLi Hua, a student from Class2, Grade 3. Looking forward to your reply.
Dear MS Chen ,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Class2, Grade 3. I’m writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer.
I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because, by offering my service, I will be able to improve my organizational ability, munication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public.
As an outgoing girl, I get along well with my classmates. Besides, I have such a good mand of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher. Successfully, I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class, which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates.
I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations. I will be gratefull if you could give me a kind consideration.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
Test 15
Hello, everyone, I’d like to share my ideas about the topic of municating with our friends. In the first place not only should we show respect for our friends but also it is necessary to trust them. With respect and trust given to them, they in return will certainly keep you whoever can be relied on, deepening your munication in some ways. Moreover, it’s good to have a chat with our friends at times, which will strengthen mutual understanding. Of course what we should pay more attention to is to put ourselves in their shoes, experiencing what they are thinking of and find out an appropriate way to municate better.
In one word, sincerity and consideration counts to make munication more smooth between our friends and us.