TOFEL independent writing
Question 1: agree/ disagree
Question 2: multiple choices
Question 3：preference
Question 4：senario
THE STRUCTURE:
Key elements :
Five paragraphs / words count 450+/ a logical cohesive, idiomatic arrangement Template:
The beginning
Hook: today’s young generation is expected to follow plenty of rules to the extent of being polite to rude people, which may mislead others to generate the idea that the modern world has too strict and rigid rules on young adults.
Transition：however, such a statements suffers from both logic and factual fallacies.
Points:as far as the development of societies, environmental impact and social stability are concerned,//引入下方需要讲述的三个原因I strongly hold that these rules are by no means too strict.
Point1+reasoning
Point 1: first it is necessary for the young to follow rules with the development of societies.
Reasoning: it is not only a good individual behavior but also demonstration of social convention.
Point2+exemplification
Moreover, there are//用于举例子rules we young people have to rule to ensure the welfare of the whole society.
The government has launched great compagins on preserving(保护) our environment, and especially the young have to follow the rules of throwing out garbage in After the last month, the whole city has举例子..
Point3+concession欲扬先抑
Last but not least, some people claim that strict rules might kill young people’s creativity.引出对手的观点
However, without rule, the society we live in will be unstable or in a chaotic state.
Imaging , if………举粒子反驳
The end
Analysis and brainstorming
Reservoir of high-level points
Prompt analysis and response
Idea generation and example
Practice: government should invest more in education than infrastructure to improve the society?
Agree disagree :one side 一边倒的写文章，只推荐一个
但是引用的道理不可以一边倒，要从很多方面多家思索。
Reservoir:添加你的蓄水池
叙述的角度：
High level—mid level—detail
https://www.doczj.com/doc/9610627897.html,cation is more effective than infrastructure in changing the world.///
2. It is more effective for the government to invest in education than infrastructure, because such an act generates greater long-term welfare.
3. in the long term, people will be able to learn more knowledge, enhance their professional skills, and change the world they live in, instead of simply enjoying easier rides to wherever they would like to go,..
Prompt
Agree / dis:找到问题的两面分别是什么
Multiple choices:
不用纠结于most之类的词，主要是说整体上的问题。
Idea generation and example
Example: teacher less respectful
Response:
1. less respected:
Due to technology
Too broad conception of teacher (culture)
Materialism in the society (finance)
2.respected:
Equality -less formality
Economy: those only seeking money are despised
Tech : higher standards
The grand opening:
Intriguing引人入胜, coherent, clear.
Hook:阐述一个社会现象，引入这个话题。However: logical , factual事实上,point 罗列所有的原因
需要在脑海里找到的内容：
我的观点，反方观点。
我的理由，反方的理由和事实陈述
套路化的写作：agree/disagree
It is hard to deny that infrastructure can provide jog opportunity for the society, and such a face leads impressionable people to generate the opinion that out government should give priority of its investment to infrastructure instead of education.
However, such a statement suffers from both logical and factual fallacies, and it should be examined meticulously.
As far as effectiveness, economy ,and equality are concerned, I strongly hold that our government should divert resources to education.
Formula
找一下公众号内的内容
Reasoning:
Coherent adequate: sufficient details, consistent
Point+ reasoning:
First and foremost, (point 1),as (fact 1). Meanwhile, (fact 2). Not to mention that (fact 3) 如何展开观点：
Follow:furthermore ,外加分号”;”introduce the fact before, what/how/why.
Fight : on the other hand, an investment in the infrastructure might give people an easier ride or faster internet, but it hardly enhance the inner quality the whole world. 驳斥另一方的观点
Follow and fight:用我的方法去驳斥对方的观点not to mention that these high educated citizens will be able to build better, stronger and more efficient infrastructure to serve the whole society.
Optional filler: long answer
To compensate for reasoning if the paragraph is not adequate enough;
Summary/conclusion/what if/ a small example
Summary:
therefore,the extent of the benefit of education is clear even to the laymen’s eyes外行, and out government should place a heavy emphasis on the investment in education if we don’t place enough对前文的论点进行一个假设weight on education, we will lack momentum in our future development, not only in the building of infrastructure but many other fields as well.
exemplification:
the formula::
Furthermore. The fact that (point 2 mid level) indicates that (point 2 high level)一个细节指出了一个观点
Take the case of (character), who/which (process). As a result,.
Had it not been for (process paraphrase) (character) would never (result paraphrase)
主角做了什么有什么结果假如不做会怎么样
Furthermore., the fact that education promotes the fundamentals of economic growth in the long-term indicates that the government should allocate recourses to education.
Take the case of Union, which once diverted a huge amount of fund to education in science and engineering.As a result, educated people such as Alex, revolutionized the
framework of Union’s industry and economy. These talented formed a synergy and transformed a poor country into one of the leading economies in the world.
Had it been for Union’s heavy emphasis on education, Union would never become a leading economy in the world.
如果举人的小例子:要把小例子和整体的特点联系起来，变成一个具有代表性的人物和例子。
Take the case of my friend alex, a typically student among thousands of others in the union, who once was an activist in social club in university, widely known for its support to extracurricular activities. Alex honed both his leadership and communication skills though participating in various activities. As a result, he received offers from multiple elite firms upon hid graduation.
自己做例子的联系
Furthermore, the fact that a better economic environment leading to a more excellent living condition (应该举具体的例子，创造工作之类的) indicated that we should fuel the measurement to prompt economy such as investing the infrastructure.
Furthermore，the fact that infrastructure projects can create jobs and greatly boost the economy indicated that the government should divert it resources to infrastructure construction. 用了新的词汇，给加大基础设施建设一个新的名字
Take the case of my hometown country, China, the entity which has the most completed system of basic infrastructure. China had 做修改用一些好的连词including not only completed built the longest train trails and but also the most tremendous mailing system in the world, which provides billions of working opportunities for the citizens from alternative provinces. As a result, the population of poor people in china had shrank a lot, which promotes the economy.
Take the case of china, which initiated and completed tons of infrastructure projects, including countless airports, the three gorges dam, and the world’s longest high-speed railway network. As a result china not only created jobs for millions of citizens but greatly stimulated its economy and improved the life quality of its citizens.
Ta ke the case of “new deal” enacted by R oosevelt, which initiated and completed tons of infrastructure projects, including the Hoover Dam and a massive high-speed railway network. As a result, “new deal” not only crated jobs for millions of citizens during the great depression, but simulated economy and improved the life quality of citizens.
Had it not been for china’s heavy emphasis on infrastructure, it would never been the influential county with a developed economy.
促进经济建设本身，只是一个宏观的概念，更多的是要引入一些小的做法，建设基础设施可以提供就业，从而可以增加财政收入。
Concession and ending
欲扬先抑：
Formula:
Nevertheless, a voice arises that (opposite detail in grand opening)
Ironically讽刺的, (facts against opposite detail)
Therefore, point 3
优秀的句子：
La y out the future path for a better society with …为未来铺平了..的路
结尾：
In a nut shell, I maintain that,…
Admittedly, as my favorite quote from 大家有不同的观点, and some people may oppose me .
However, I believe they will compromise after being exposed to my article.
教育：
常见背景描述：
with the advent of modernization，more and more employers are seeking for high-end talents and professionals to enhance their companies' overall competitiveness,
提高：
Enhance improve
优秀：
Marvelous、outstanding specialty, persistent character and destiny’s favor
诚实：
Sincerely, honest, earnest
过渡句：
i t is indeed necessary for all university students to sign up for history courses regardless of their major might be.
名人举例：
Take Bill Gates, the founder of the well-known Microsoft Corporation
商业：expertise 、commercial empire
学习压力重：
burdened with loads of assignments and presentations but plenty of professional qualifications to acquire.
papers and certificates because to him how to find a decent job is the first priority after his graduation.
Competitiveness: