高中英语新高考-作文指导与解读：细说高分作文隐蔽失分点
所谓高分作文隐蔽失分点，不是指句子里的主谓一致，冠词等低级错误，而是一些学生英语水平很好，但是往往因为不注意写作中的一些易错细节，导致作文失分。譬如以前我经常听人说：电脑节省了时间。这句话我们理解起来不难，但英语不行，因为电脑是物，怎么能节省时间呢？应该是这样说：电脑使我们节省了时间。说到底，就是英语在语义逻辑上很讲究，可以说是一根筋。这次寒假写作网课里，我们十个批改老师认真总结了同学们的这些错误，希望读者认真看看，一定大有好处。
我的应试写作教学思路三步：
1.积累词块，此阶段鼓励孩子多积累，多运用。
2.逻辑思维，此阶段要杜绝词块的盲目堆砌，要考虑主题句和支撑句是否逻辑上浑然一体。
3.注重简洁，此阶段要尽量把重复的意思给删掉，长难句能否用一个短语代替。
因此下面的错误整理归类也是按照这三个步骤来进行的。
一、语法错误
（1）省略不当（错误程度：五星）
例6：原句：Not only can they share secrets and growing pains in their life, but also can help each other when in adversity.
修改：
Not only can they share secrets and growing pains in their life, but they also can help each other when in adversity.
原因：not only…but also倒装后，第二个句子的主语不要漏掉。
（2）逻辑主语，前后矛盾（错误程度：四星）
例1：原句：First of all, to stay away from viruses, a balanced diet and sufficient sleep are both indispensable.
修改：
First of all, a balanced diet and sufficient sleep are both indispensable for us to stay away from viruses.
原因：不定式表目的的to do…/in order to…的逻辑主语必须和主句的主语一致。
例2：As an individual, we should do our part to protect the earth.
修改：
Each individual should do our part to protect the earth.
分析：an individual和we明显就在数上不一致，这种句子还是受汉语的影响大，英语中常用：Being the responsible individuals,we…
(3) 对称错误（错误程度：四星）
原句：the plan can bring home to the public the significance of having a harmonious society and finally fulfill people’s social responsibility.
修改：
the plan can bring home to the public the significance of having a harmonious society and finally help people fulfill their social responsibility.
分析：很多同学因为局子里有and, or连接的动词，但是写到后面忘记了两个动词的时态和非谓语形式是一致的。
二、逻辑错误
（1）偏离中心，东拼西凑（错误程度：五星）
例1：原句：As to me, the only child, sometimes I feel lonely, unable to find someone to talk with when I am confused. Fortunately, I have learned to relieve my pressure by going outdoors to enjoy sunshine and fresh air. It cultivates my mind.
修改：
Asto me, the only child, sometimes I feel lonely, unable to find someone to talk with when I am confused. If only I had a brother or a sister!
原因：作者后面半句与主题句没有任何联系，给人东扯西拉的感觉。很多作者洋洋洒洒几百词，实际上都是空洞无物。这种错误直接的后果就是，给人一种拼凑感，要解决这个问题，需要认真考虑句子的因果关系。
（2）汉式主语，直接翻译（错误程度：五星）
例2：原句：From my perspective, learning English is to broaden our horizons and appreciate another culture.
修改：
From my perspective, learning English can help us broaden our horizons and appreciate another culture.
原因：有些动词的主语不能是物体，不能按照汉语的习惯来。如何改正呢？这个其实要归根到汉语写作了。你如果仔细研究一下自己说的话或汉语作文，会发现有很多严格讲起来都是有语病或者产生歧义的。就如同上面这个句子，汉语说：学英语还可以欣赏另外一种文化。似乎也能明白。但是读者想想，学英语是动作，怎么能够欣赏文化呢？而英语是绝对的逻辑性语言，必须把话说得天衣无缝。
例3：We should be appropriate to play computer more should pay attention to the life of afriend.
修改：
We should be appropriate to play computer more should pay attention to the life of a friend.
分析：appropriate的用法是：it is appropriate (for sb) to do sth，我现在很害怕见到学生用sb is adj. to do，十有八九都是错误的。
例4：原句：Besides, compared with one child, the family with two children is likely to feel less lonely. Children can help strengthen familial emotional ties. The change of cultivating cooperation plays an indispensable role in shaping one’s values and good personality.
修改：
Besides,children with siblings are likely to feel less lonely. So the policy can help strengthen familial emotional ties and cultivate cooperation, which plays an indispensable role in shaping good personality.
分析：作者说“家庭会孤单”，应该是人感到孤单，非家庭。后面的说法有些也不是太好。
例5：Once addicted to them, young people have high possibility to end their promising future.
修改：
Once addicted to them, young people will be robbed of their promising future.
分析：该作者是直接套用汉语的说法，“我有可能做某事“，但英语中和possibility 搭配的又很少见到用人，倒是likely可以。
以上可见，对单词搭配的准确把握才是写作中避免汉式英语的关键。一个动词，主语是什么，宾语是什么，绝不是可以举一反三地去类推，都是有套路的。
（3）褒贬混用（错误程度：三星）
例6：In addition, the increasing globalization facilitates the transport of drugs into our country
修改：
In addition, the increasing globalization accelerates the transport of drugs into our country
分析：facilitate这个词可以说是高级词汇，但是你要明白它不是谁都可以作宾语，一般都是好事情，如growth, learning, communication等。
三、刻意累赘
（1）不必要的套话（错误程度：五星）
例6：I strongly approve of the policy.There are several reasons accounting for my supporting such a good policy.
修改：
I strongly approve of the policy for the following reasons.
分析：我们可以说Several factors accountfor the problem.但是如果前面还有主题句开场，不如合并在一起。类似的还有：
There is no doubt that…，这个要替换成without doubt或undoubtedly
Every coin has two sides.替换为：The other side of the coin cannot be ignored.
(2)意思的重复（错误程度：五星）
例7：On theway to academic success, there are not only ups and downs, gains and losses, joys and sorrows, but also thorns and toils,obstacles and setbacks, pains and healing, tears and failures.
修改：
The way to academic success is paved with thorns and roses.
分析：这个句子看起来很美，但是归根是受汉语的影响，英语中也有排比，但这种排比应该是用不同的方面表达一个内容。本句中，losses，sorrows，thorns and toils，obstacles and setbacks，pains，tears指的都是“挫折，失败“。
其实，还有很多学生是把一个句子的意思翻来覆去地说，英语讲的是一句话说清楚问题，不能兜圈子玩。
（3）“使”的臃肿（错误程度：五星）
例8：To begin with, as young people,they are curious about everything around them, making them easy to get addictedto drugs.
修改：
Tobegin with, young people's curiosity often drives them to try out drugs.
分析：学生好用make，这本身也没问题，但是一看到“使”就用make，这就很单调了，不可能让文章整体提升。以后遇到某人做了某事，使得事情发生。这时候，要想到用一个名词短语简化主句，即某人做了某事。
◆写作指导◆ 第一部分：个人情况介绍 个人情况介绍的字数不宜太多，通常是以给作者印象最深的特征为切入点，简单描述即可。介绍内容可以包括年龄、外貌、身份、性格、经历等。注意：行文时可使用介词短语、同位语结构等来说明人物身份、职务、称号等，使文章简洁、通顺。同时，使用并列句、复合句、非谓语动词等高级语句来增强语言表现力。 写作语料： 1. My Dad is the idol in my heart. 2. I have great admiration for Mr Sun, my English teacher, a middle-aged man of few words. (同位语补充说明人物身份、年龄与性格特征) 3. The person I admire most is Zhong Nanshan, who helped defeat SARS in 2003 and is once again leading an expert team to deal with the novel coronavirus. (用定语从句介绍人物事迹或贡献) 4. Zhong grew up in a family of doctors. His goal has always been to save as many lives as possible. (简单句介绍人物背景知识) 5. Of all the outstanding people, I admire Tu Youyou the most. She is the first Chinese scientist awarded the Nobel Prize in medicine in 2015 for her great achievements in curing malaria (疟疾). 6. Born to a musical family, Cyrus showed her talent for music when she was a little girl. She is a born singer and musical genius (天才). (分词作状语说明人物家庭背景) 7. As the head of the Shanghai expert team who treats COVID-19, Zhang Wenhong caught the public’s attention for his frank and funny speeches. (介词短语介绍人物身份) 小试牛刀： 1. 我的英语老师—林老师善良热心，我们每个人都很敬佩她。 _________________________________________________________ 2. 我最尊敬的人是我的姑姑，她是一位中年护士，在疫情爆发期间，一直在一线与新冠病毒作战。 _________________________________________________________ 第二部分：个人事迹介绍 不管是对杰出的人还是平凡的人的描写，同学们都要从小处入手描述其令人尊重和爱戴的原因，最好有细节描写或者举例说明。 写作语料： 1. 使用不同句型阐释爱戴某人的原因 a. I admire her for her great knowledge. (固定搭配admire sb for sth) b. His kindness and sense of humor won him great popularity among us. (简单句) c. It is her friendliness and sense of responsibility that make me admire her. (强调句型) d. The reason why I show respect for her is that she never loses her temper or raises her voic e. Instead, she always encourages me to solve problems independently. (表语从句介绍原因) e. I am deeply impressed by his unselfish (无私的) devotion (奉献) and strong sense of responsibility. 2. Miss Du is understanding and warmhearted. Her peaceful way of talking to us can make any
开头句型 1.As far as ...is concerned 就……而言 2.It goes without saying that... 不言而喻，... 3.It can be said with certainty that... 可以肯定地说...... 4.As the proverb says，正如谚语所说的 5.It has to be noticed that... 它必须注意到，... 6.It's generally recognized that... 它普遍认为... 7.It's likely that ... 这可能是因为... 8.It's hardly that... 这是很难的...... 9.It's hardly too much to say that... 它几乎没有太多的说… 10.What calls for special attention is that...需要特别注意的是 11.There's no denying the fact that...毫无疑问，无可否认 12.Nothing is more important than the fact that... 没有什么比这更重要的是… 13.what's far more important is that... 更重要的是… 衔接句型 1.A case in point is ... 一个典型的例子是... 2.As is often the case...由于通常情况下... 3.As stated in the previous paragraph 如前段所述 4.But the problem is not so simple. Therefore 然而问题并非如此简单，所以……
高中英语作文经典句型 一、~ the + ~ est +名词+(that)+主词+ have ever + seen(known/heard/had/read，etc) Mr. Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had. 张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。 二、Nothing is + ~~~ er than to + V Nothing is + more +形容词+ than to + V Nothing is more important than to receive education.没有比接受教育更重要的事。 三、~~~ cannot emphasize the importance of ~~~ too much. (再怎么强调……的重要性也不为过。) We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much. 我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。 四、There is no denying that + S + V……(不可否认的……) There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse. 不可否认的，我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。 五、It is universally acknowledged that +句子~~(全世界都知道……) It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us. 全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的。 六、There is no doubt that +句子~~(毫无疑问的……) There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired. 毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。 七、An advantage of ~~~ is that +句子(……的优点是……) An advantage of using the solar energy is that it won't create(produce)any pollution. 使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。 八、The reason why +句子~~~ is that +句子(……的原因是……) The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air. 我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。 九、So +形容词+ be +主词+ that +句子(如此……以致于……) So precious is time that we can't afford to waste it.时间是如此珍贵，我们经不起浪费它。 十、Adj + as + Subject(主词)+ be，S + V~~~(虽然……) Rich as our country is，the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory. {by no means = in no way = on no account一点也不} 虽然我们的国家富有，我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意。 十一、The + more + Adj + S + V，~~~ the + more + Adj + S + V ~~~(愈……愈……) The more books we read，the more learned we become.我们书读愈多，我们愈有学问。 十二、Have a great influence on ~~~(对……有很大的影响) Smoking has a great influence on our health. 抽烟对我们的健康有很大的影响。 十三、~~~ enable + Object(受词)+ to + V(……使……能够……) Listening to music enable us to feel relaxed. 听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。 十四、On no account can we + V ~~~(我们绝对不能……) On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge. 我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。 十五、It is time + S +过去式(该是……的时候了) It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems. 该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了。
作文类型及例文 一、看现象，讲道理 1．世博期间，上万的志愿者参加志愿工作，请你谈谈此现象的看法。 During the period of holding the World Expo in Shanghai, tens of thousands of citizens are participating in volunteer work, hoping to devote themselves to the grand occasion. As far as I am concerned, everyone ought to enter for it. Here are the reasons I want to mention. It can be argued that the advantages of doing unpaid volunteer work are enormous, because volunteer work is actually a two-way street. First of all, volunteer work should always benefit people who need help. Those who need help will feel happier due to our immediate help. On the other hand, as far as the young people ourselves are concerned, we have more opportunities to develop the sense of responsibility, independence as well as interpersonal skills in the process of helping others. Through this kind of work, we become confident and mature. In addition, we can make many friends and increase our chances of getting the jobs of our dreams. Furthermore, volunteer work plays an active role in building up a harmonious society. In a word, compared with the merits of volunteer work offered by the young adults, the demerits of that are just a few though they cannot be overlooked. The youth volunteers do make a difference by the voluntary work! Why not join them and do something for our country? 2．你班将组队参加学校组织的集体舞比赛(group dancing competition)，班长希望大家积极参与。对此谈谈你的想法。（09年高考题） 你的文章必须包括以下内容： 你是否会参加比赛 你做出该决定的具体理由 V ersion 1： A group dancing competition will be held in our school and the monitor calls on everybody to take an active part in it. While most of my classmates are still hesitating whether to participate, I have said yes to our monitor with great pleasure. Generally speaking, there are two reasons for my decision. First, it is a good opportunity for me to relax myself, which will enable me to study more efficiently. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy, so goes the saying, which clearly shows us the importance of relaxation. Besides, I think I am a good dancer after learning dance for more than five years. Participating in the contest will be a golden chance for me to show my dancing skills and make some contributions to the class. For the two reasons mentioned above, it is no surprise that I have such a strong enthusiasm on the group dancing competition. 二、标题作文 1．以“诚实是美德”(Honesty Is a Virtue)为题写一篇短文。短文的内容需包括： 1. 列举社会上的某些不诚实行为
英语作文模版经典解析 英语作文模版：对比观点题型 （1）要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。 1．有一些人认为…2．另一些人认为…3．我的看法… The topic of ①-----------------（主题）is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions of it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------（支持A 的理由一）What is more,③-------------理由二). Moreover, ④---------------(理由三). While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),⑥------------------（理由二）. Thirdly (finally),⑦------------------(理由三). From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------（我的观点）. The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因).As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice.
万能英语作文开头结尾经典高中英语作文开头 结尾 作为高中生要多重视英语作文开头的写作，而较好地方法就是多积累一些经典的作文开头部分。下面是WTT带来关于经典高中英语作文开头结尾的内容，希望能让大家有所收获! 经典高中英语作文开头结尾精选 1. The majority of students believe that part-time job will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills ,which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets.大部分学生相信业余工作会使他们有更多机会发展人际交往能力,而这对他们未来找工作是非常有好处的. 2.It is indisputable that there are millions of people who still have a miserable life and have to fact the dangers of starvation and exposure.无可争辩,现在有成千上万的人仍过着挨饿受冬的痛苦生活. 3.
Although this view is widely held ,this is little evidence that education can be obtained at any age and at any place.尽管这一观点被广泛接受,很少有证据表明教育能够在任何地点任何年龄进行. 4.No one can deny the fact that a person’s education is the most important aspect of his life.没有人能否人这一事实:教育是人生最重要的一方面. 5.People equate success in life with the ability of operating puter .人们把会使用计算机与人生成功相提并 经典高中英语作文开头结尾推荐 1. Recently the problem of ...has aroused people’s concern.最近，......问题已引起人们的关注。 2.Recently the problem of ...has been brought to public attention.最近，......问题已引起公众的广泛关注。 3.Recently, the problem of ...has
高中英语经典作文开头美句 1. It is high time that something was done about it For example _____In addition _____All these measures will certainly______ 2. Why______? The first reason is that ______The second reason is ______The third is ______For all this, the main cause of ______due to ______ 3. However, just like everything has both its good and bad sides, ______also has its own disadvantages, such as ______ 4. Nonetheless, I believe that ______is more advantageous 5. I fully agree with the statement that ______ because______ 6. 关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……There are different opinions among people as to ____ Some people suggest that ____ 7. 俗话说常言道……，它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即使在今天，它在许多场合仍然适用。There is an old saying______ It"s the experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct in many cases even today 8. 现在，……，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先，……;其次，……。更为糟糕的是……。Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life First, ____ Second,____ What makes things worse is that______ 9. 现在，……很普遍，许多人喜欢……，因为……，另外而且……。Nowadays，it is common to ______ Many people like ______ because ______ Besides，______ 10. 任何事物都是有两面性，……也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception，it has both advantages and disadvantages 1. Nonetheless, I believe that ______is more advantageous 2. I fully agree with the statement that ______ because______ 3. 关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……There are different opinions among people as to ____ Some people suggest that ____ 4. 俗话说常言道……，它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即使在今天，它在许多场合仍然适用。There is an old saying______ It"s the experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct in many cases even today
第一部分高考必备开头结尾 1.开头：Good morning everybody!it's my honor to speak here,and I am very glad to share my topic with you. Then today i'd like to talk something about......（大家早上好！能在这里做此次演讲我十分荣幸，也很高兴能跟大家一起分享我的主题，今天我想演讲的是......） 2.尊敬的评委，尊贵的来宾，女士们，先生们，大家晚上好！能够站在这里进行演说，我感到十分荣幸。今天我将和大家一起分享Honorable judges,distinguished guests,ladies and gentlemen,good evening! I feel really honored to stand here and make a speech.Today I'm going to look together with you into this question:…… 结尾：Ok,thank you for listening. That's all.（好了，谢谢各位的聆听，我的演讲结束了。） 第二部分高考必备相关句型 一. 名人名言类 As a proverb says，“ you are only young once.”（适用于已记住的名言） It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. （适用于自编名言） as everyone knows，no one can deny that…（适用于自编名言） 二. 数字统计类 According to a recent survey，about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation. 三. 结论类 Obviously（此为过渡短语），we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others. Obviously，it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem. Accordingly，I recommend that some measures be taken.
高中英语作文写作技巧分析 一、高中英语写作教学中存在的一些问题 与阅读理解相比，英语写作对学生的英语基础知识要求更高，要求学生要会根据的题目要求或者图表提供的信息用英语写一篇短文或报告，并且还要行文流畅、文体规范、语义连贯、结构完整，能够清晰的表达出自己的观点和态度。然而，高中生的英语作文水平却普遍呈现出这样的问题：由审题错误造成的跑题作文;行文中易犯基础的英语知识错误，如人称、时态、语法错误;英语语言匮乏，往往过多地重复使用一个单词或一种句型;全文 结构不完整，欠缺衔接的单词或句子，从而造成文章内容不连贯。针对这些现象，笔者认为，教师一定要尽可能快的帮助学生找准错误出现的根源，对症下药，改正错误，传授 一些英语写作的技巧，让学生在最后的冲刺阶段，勤于练习，争取写出结构完整、有文采、有深度的作文。 二、提高学生英语写作能力的技巧 1.练好基本功。 万丈高楼平地起，写作的基本功就是指要写顺一篇文章，尽量使用自己熟悉的简单句型，去描写人物或者叙述事情，而不要去追逐使用复杂句型，行文中单词、常见词语搭配、语态、时态都要力求准确，切勿出现错误，以免丢失基础分。全文一定要保持连贯性，这就要求在平常的练习中，要提前打好草稿，构建出完整的篇章结构，正确运用一些过渡词去表示文中出现的并列、递进或转折关系，以此来衔接全文，使文章显得连贯、流畅。其中表示并列关系的词语有：and, as well as, or; 表示转折关系的词汇有：but, yet, however;表示时间关系的词汇、词组：when, while, after, before, then, after that;表示顺序关系的有：firstly, secondly, lastly, shortlyafter 等;表示因果关系的有：because of, thanks to,therefore, thus, as a result; 表示目的的词组有：inorder to, in order that, so as to, so that; 列举事实的词组有：for example, such as; 表示结论关系的有：to conclude, in a word, in brief, to sum up, inshort;文章最后表示总结性的词组有：in general, inall, in a word, generally speaking 等等。上述要求是在英语写作中最基本的要求，只有把握好基础的知识，才能在此基础上加以提炼，写出文采好、有深度，能取得高分的文章。 2.行文中运用一些诀窍以提升文章整体水平。 首先，灵活变化词语来表述相同的意思。学生在写作中，如果是表达“喜欢”，往往会 将“like”进行到底，殊不知平常学了许多表述“喜欢”的单词和短语，有：love， enjoy，prefer， appreciate， be into，be fond of， care for 等，如果能将它们灵活运用到不同句 子中去表达“喜欢”的意思，那就能够使文章读来更加生动、更加富有表现力。比较这两个
高考英语作文的写作指导 一、写作指导 叙事类记叙文通常要将时间、地点、人物、事件、原因和结果等六个要素交代清楚。好的记叙文具有描述事件具体、人物逼真形象、故事生动感人、材料表现中心和写作主旨明确等特征。高考英语基础写作中的叙事类短文也需要具有记叙文写作的一般特点，但要求相对比较低，其考查重点在语言运用正确、句子连贯通顺、信息点表述完整等方面。写作时要注意以下几个方面的问题： 1. 严格按照基础写作的要求完成各个信息点，不要为了文章的生动而随意添加信息。 2. 信息点的表述不要完全按照题目所给的顺序，要适当重组信息点。 3. 记叙文写作的时态多数是用一般过去时，但也要注意灵活运用其它时态。 4. 叙事类记叙文的话题通常和中学生的生活阅历有关，如校园生活、旅游、交通、交友等，平时要注意积累这些方面的词汇和短语。 二、常用语句 1. 表达时间 a long time ago, at six o’clock in the morning, at the end of, at the weekend, before he came here, by the end of last term,
during the summer holidays, in a few years’ time, in the past, in the old days, in the past ten years, in August 2002, in winter vacation, in weekdays, last month, next week, on Sunday morning, on October 1st, since early in the 20th century, so far, up to now, not…until, while , etc. 2. 表达地点 at the crossing, at the end of the street, at the airport, at the village, at the foot of the mountain, at the bottom, at the top of, be located in, behind the park, be situated in, five kilometers to the north of Guangzhou, in the south of Guangdong Province, in the middle of the park, in Class 3 Grade 2, in the front of the bus, in front of the bus, in the tree, in Guangdong, in China, lies to the west of Sichuan, on the other side of the street, on both sides of the road, on the east coast of the Pacific Ocean ,on the right, etc. 3. 表达因果 as, as a result, because, because of, for, in the end, cause, result in, consequently, originate from, since, so, therefore, It is clear that… , It turns out to be… , The primary reason is … , etc.
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一. 介绍某地 （It's my honor to give you a brief introduction to..., ）located in the north/east/west/south of... , ...covers an area of...square kilometers with a population of ...and a long history of.... . . The climate here is pleasant, neither too hot in summer nor too cold in winter. As the first largest city and the capital city of..., it is the center of its political ,economic，scientific，educational，and cultural life.It is a place with many famous places of interest and tourist attractions. Not only can you pay a visit to...but you can also... Among which... is a must-see for tourists ,as it is well-known at home and abroad . A walk around... is a feast for the mind as well as the eye.The places around our city are rich in natural resources thanks to its humid climate and special natural situation.They are famous for....What’s more, It is very convenient for you to come to our city by bus/ train... So you are sure to have a wonderful time in...and I hope all of you will enjoy
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1假设你叫王明，昨天收到了笔友David的e-mail，得知他不久要到北京来学习中文。他想了解如何学好中文。请你用英文给他回复一封e-mail，介绍学习中文的体会和方法，提出你的建议，以及表达你帮助他学好中文的愿望。 【例文】 Dear David, I'm glad you'll come to Beijing to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful, and many foreigners are learning it now. It's difficult for you because it's quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. It's also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practise your listening. Do your best to talk with people in Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me. I'm sure you'll learn Chinese well. Hope to see you soon in Beijing. Yours, Wang Ming 语言学习开放式 2健康对于我们每个人来说是非常重要的，但你的父母天天忙于工作而忽略了这个问题，你很为他们担忧。请你以此为话题，并结合提示给他们写一封信。 提示：1.要走路去上班，而不是开车或坐车； 2.每周至少去体育馆锻炼一次，或打球、或游泳； 3.饮食要健康； 4.不要工作太晚，要早休息。 要求：1.短文结构完整，意思连贯，语言流畅，语法准确，符合逻辑； —100词左右；
出国留学的利弊分析高中英语作文 .写作作为英语教学的一个重点与难点一直为师生所关注。但在 实际的英语学习过程中,一些学生将更多的时间投入到见效较快的词汇、英语阅读等部分,而忽略了英语写作问题。近年来，越来越多人 选择出国留学。那么，出国留学到底是好还是不好呢?下面是橙子为 你整理的几篇关于出国留学的利弊分析高中英语作文，希望你能喜欢! 出国留学的利弊分析高中英语作文篇1 Recent years, more and more Chinese people have chosen to study abroad. To this tendency, some people think it is not good, as most of the overseas learners do not come back, whereas I hold a different opinion. In my opinion, it is a good thing that more Chinese people go abroad. There are three reasons. First, the overseas learners can improve their ability through the study. They can grasp advanced technologies and their language ability can be improved as well. Second, with the rapid development of China, more and more overseas learners will choose come back, using their abundant knowledge studied abroad to serve for the motherland. The third, the government and most domestic enterprises are willing to provide favorable treatments to 1 / 3
英语作文开头和结尾万能公式（附常用谚语100句） 开头万能公式 1. 开头万能公式一 名人名言 有人问了，“我没有记住名言，怎么办？尤其是英语名言？”，很好办：编！原理：我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的，包括我们欣赏的文章也是，所以尽管编，但是一定要听起来很有道理呦！而且没准将来我们就是名人呢！对吧？【经典句型】 A proverb says,“You are only young once.” 一个谚语说,“你只年轻一次。” （适用于已记住的名言） It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. 不用说,我们不能永远年轻。 （适用于自编名言） 【更多经典句型】
As everyone knows, No one can deny that… 众所周知，没有人能够否认... 2. 开头万能公式二 数字统计 要想更有说服力，就应该用实际的数字来说明。 原则上在议论文当中不应该出现虚假数字的，可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一，但编无妨，只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型：According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation. 根据一项最近的调查，大约78.9%的大学生想在毕业之后继续深造。 看起来这个数字文邹邹的，其实都是编造出来的，下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造： 题目：Honesty（城市） 根据最近的一项统计调查显示，大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。题目：Travel by Bike（骑自行车出行）