南昌市外国语学校2017——2018学年下学期
高二英语短文改错专题练习
命题及审题人：邹乐铭2018.4.14
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The Great Wall is a great military fortification project in China that was regarded as a miracle in the history of ancient architecture. It went through more 2,500 years of the Chinese history but bestrides the vast terrain over a dozen of provinces in northern China. Although it has lost the its military value for a long time, it nevertheless reflects the dignity, confident, and independence of the Chinese people.
In 1987, UNESCO listed the Great Wall by a World Heritage Site. The Great Wall is a must-visit site for tourists worldwide where they come to China and Beijing. More of them put on T-shirts with Mao Zedong’s poetry said “You are not a man until you climbed up the Great Wall” when th ey happily climb the step of the Great Wall. The experience becomes unforgettable.
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Nowadays, this is common to hear about a young person getting this or that kind of serious disease.
A couple of day ago, a friend in her 20s asked me that I was familiar with some health products. She tells me that during the past two years, she got tired easily and seemed to be in state of sub-health. Twenty is the age in where one should feel filled with strong and energy. And some people at that age have started to worry about their health. Since we now have more access to information about keeping healthy, we should start to act responsible and pay special attention to improve our health.
C【2018届全国26省3月联考】
In my opinion, my father can always give me advices because he has experienced a lot. When he graduated in college, his first job was to work as an office clerk. Later he found life was boring to sit in office, so he decided to quit and then starts his travels to many places. Having been traveled a lot, my father broadened his vision great and then went back home. While he met my mother, she thought it was time to settle down. Interesting in his life experience, I can’t help thinking that if I go with him, I will meet many new persons with who I can make friends. I want to live like my father.
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The good news is whether there’ll be a men’s basketball match between China and Korea at the stadium of our city in this Sunday. It’s reported that a number of well-known basketball star will appear in the game so it’s a good cha nce for you to watch them playing live. I like basketball very much, but I know basketball is also your favorite sport, so I was inviting you to watch the game. If you are interesting, please let me know as soon as possibly. In that case, I can’t buy the t ickets ahead of time. Remember, match will start at nine o’clock on Sunday morning.
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Lending a hand to people make me happy. One day, I saw Sally, my assistant, cried. I asked her about my problem and she said that her mom was sick. She didn’t have enough money to have her mother fully examining, so I decided to give her one of my diamond ring. It didn’t cost as many as the others, but I knew that it would be in great help if she sold it. I recommended an online shop that I often bought jewelry. Sally sold it and used the money to let her mother to be hospitalized. It is great feeling that you can help other people.
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People celebrate the Lantern Festival across China every year. About two weeks before, I went to Yuyuan Garden Lantern Fair, one of busiest and grandest lantern fairs in China. I enjoyed locally snacks and traditional performances. Craftsmen at different stand sold their delicate handicrafts in reasonable prices. That impressed me most was various types of lanterns. I also learn to make a paper lantern. Although it wasn’t very beautiful, but it brought back my childhood memories. Today, many lantern fairs are still well preserving. It is a good way for us Chinese to know about my traditional culture.
G【2018届江西省临川二中高三1月考试】
Everyone tends have many problems while gaining knowledge . Therefore , your willingness to deal with these problems will eventually enable you to work it out. What I’d like to share is my approaches to solve the problems.
First, you must focus on which you are faced with. There seems to be a lot of attractive things, like computers or game. To stay focused, you can list these things and tell yourself you should touch them after finishing your work. Second, believe to yourself. Though there is no doubt that each of us might make mistakes or come across some tough problems in learning, but it can never be a reason for the loss of confidence.
Last , keep modest . Never fee1 embarrassing to turn to your teachers or classmates. Everyone in your surroundings can be your teacher.
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On-line voting becomes increasing popular. Many competitions get people involving in it. It is beneficial to some people, but it puts the others into a dilemma over if to vote or not. In my opinion, on-line voting should be welcomed, since it is just a way to participate public life. It is similar to ordinary voting events, which candidates go around to seek vote. In addition, the Internet make voting easy and convenient, regardless of time and space.
Things will turn much good if we can work out some rules for people to obey. Therefore, I hold a positive attitude of it.
I【2018届安徽六校教育研究会高三第二次联考】
Stockholm, the capital of Sweden, hopes to stop using fossil fuel (化石能源) completely by 2040. Now the city wants larger lorries what cause more pollution to use bio-fuel, which are produced from waste. Stockholm is also working with Fortum, an energy company, to take advantage a city-wide heating system, use waste heat from supermarkets and stadiums to supply heat for homes. However, the city is trying to change people behavior, step by step. On one newly built estate (庄园), people are providing with tablets that show its real-time energy usage. This is to help them good understand how they use and waste gas, water and electricity.
短文改错专题练习参考答案
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Whether 改成that
In this Sunday去掉in
star改成stars
you改成us
but改成and
was改成am
interesting改成interested
possibly改成possible
can’t改成can
在match前加the
[ 解析]
小题1考查表语从句引导词。句意：好消息是在我市体育场有一场中韩男子篮球比赛。Be动词后是表语从句，从句中不缺成分、不缺翻译，用that引导。故whether改成that。
小题2考查介词。this Sunday是时间状语，有指代词this，前面不用介词。故In this Sunday去掉in。
小题3考查名词。a number of许多，修饰名词复数。故star改成stars。
小题4考查代词。根据下文我也喜欢篮球，得知指代词错误，表示对于我们来说是个好机会。故you改成us。
小题5考查连词。前后是并列关系。故but改成and。
小题6考查动词时态。通篇是一般现在时，这里用过去时是错误的。故was改成am。
小题7考查形容词。表示人感兴趣，用ed形式。故interesting改成interested。
小题8考查形容词。as soon as possible 是固定短语，表示尽可能快的。故possibly改成possible。小题9考查情态动词肯定形式。根据句意得知，是表示我可以提前买票。故can’t改成can。
小题10考查冠词。表示特指中韩之间的这场男子篮球赛。故在match前加the。
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[ 解析]
本文主要讲了每个人在获得知识的过程中都会遇到许多问题。然而，你处理那些问题的意愿，最终能够让你解决它们。作者针对这一问题，给出了自己的建议。
考查固定短语。每个人在获得知识的过程中都会遇到许多问题。tend to常常，是固定短语。
考查连词。然而，你处理问题的那些意愿，最终能够让你解决它们。表示“然而”，所以Therefore 改成However。
考查代词。指代these problems，是复数，所以it改成them。
考查固定用法。approach to后面接v+ing，所以solve改成solving。
考查宾语从句。what you are faced with.是一个宾语从句，引导词在从句中作宾语，所以which改成what。
考查主谓一致。a lot of attractive things是复数意义，所以seems改成seem。
考查名词单复数。被a lot of修饰，所以用名词复数，game改成games。
考查固定短语。其次，要相信你自己。believe in相信，是固定短语，所以to改成in。
考查固定用法。though与but不能连用，所以去掉but。
考查v+ed。v+ed修饰人，v+ing修饰物，这里修饰人，所以embarrassing改成embarrassed。
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[ 答案]
第一句increasing 改成increasingly
第二句involving 改成involved
第二句去掉some
第三句if 改成whether
第三句public 前面加上in
第四句which 前面加上in
第四句vote 改成votes
第五句make 改成makes
第六句good 改成better
第七句of 改成towards
[ 解析]
第1题考查副词。副词修饰形容词，故increasing 改成increasingly。
第2题考查非谓语动词。参与其中是be involved in，get+ somebody+宾补，用过去分词表示被动，故involving 改成involved。
第3题考查冠词。泛指其他人前面不用定冠词，故去掉the。
第4题考查连词。whether…or not.是固定结构，表示是否，故if 改成whether。
第5题考查介词。participate in是固定短语，表示参加，故public 前面加上in。
第6题考查介词。voting events是先行词，表示在这些投票赛事中，用介词in，故which 前面加上in。
第7题考查名词。voting events得知在投票赛事中，候选人寻找多个选票。故vote 改成votes。第8题考查主谓一致。主语是Internet，谓语动词用单数，故make 改成makes。
第9题考查形容词比较级。much修饰比较级，故good 改成better。
第10题考查介词。attitude towards，表示对…态度，故of 改成towards。
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[ 解析]
第一处：考查冠词。句意：斯德哥尔摩，瑞典的首都，希望到2040年完全停止使用化石能源。“the capital of Sweden”是Stockholm的同位语，做同位语时，capital前不加冠词，故应将the 去掉。
第二处：句意：这座城市想让造成更多污染的大卡车使用生物燃料。分析句子结构，“what cause more pollution”是定语从句，修饰larger lorries，引导词在从句中做主语，指物，故该从句要用关系代词which/that引导。what不能引导定语从句。
第三处：考查主谓一致。“which are produced from waste”是定语从句，修饰bio-fuel，which指代bio-fuel，根据主谓一致原则，谓语动词应用第三人称单数形式is。
第四处：考查介词。take advantage of意为“利用……”，是固定短语，故要在advantage和a 之间加of。
第五处：考查非谓语动词。句意：斯德哥尔摩和一家名为Fortum的能源公司合作来利用全市供热系统，利用来自超市和体育馆的余热为家庭供暖。“use waste heat from supermarkets and stadiums to supply heat for homes”是方式状语，主句主语和use之间是主动关系，故要用现在分词作状语。
第六处：考查副词。句意：这座城市正在努力地逐步改变人们的行为。该句和上一句（斯德哥尔摩和一家名为Fortum的能源公司合作来利用全市供热系统，利用来自超市和体育馆的余热为家庭供暖）之间是并列关系，不是转折关系，故应将However改为“Besides/Moreover”。
第七处：考查名词所有格形式。句意：这座城市正在努力地逐步改变人们的行为。根据句意，修饰behaviour要用名词所有格形式，故应将people改为people’s。
第八处：考查被动语态。句意：在一个新建的庄园里，给人们提供了平板电脑。tablets和provide 之间是被动关系，故该句应用被动语态，将providing改为provided。
第九处：考查代词。在一个新建的庄园里，给人们提供了平板电脑，这些平板电脑可以显示人们实时的能源使用情况。该处指人们的能源使用情况，故应将its改为their。
第十处：考查比较级。句意：这有助于他们更好地了解他们如何使用水，电，气。结合句意，应将good改为better。
高三英语短文改错专项训练(每日一篇） (1) Last Sunday I saw the worst storm in years. It came sudden and went on for over three hours. After lunch, I went into my room to have a rest. The air was hotter, and all is quiet. Then a strong wind started to blow into my room. Pieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air and some flew out the open window. As I ran out to catch them, big drop of rain began to fall. When I came back into house, it was raining harder and harder. I tried very hard to close the window. Then I heard a loudly crashing(碰撞的)sound from the back of the house. When I ran out to find that a big tree had fallen down and broke the top of the back room. (2) I have been planning to join in our college basketball team next year, so now I am spending as more time as I can with other people who likes to play. They are teaching me the most important rules and technologies of the game, and I am getting the better all the time. We have a neighborhood team that play against other teams in the area. One of my neighbors is helping rest of us improved our skills. Tonight we are playing against one of the best teams in the city, and I think we can beat them if we won't make any mistakes. (3) Fang Tong is 34 years old, an actor, director and teacher of Beijing Opera Theater. Most of his students are from other part of China and have come to Beijing at a very young age of sixteen or seventeen. He hopes create an environment for his students that it is much more relaxing than the one he used to study in. He thought that an actor should relax himself when performing. Yet his students deep respect him and he never needs to raise his voice in order to be hearing. For his opinion, actors should go on even when they feel they have made a mistake in their performances because the moment is already gone but people can never be back to it. . . So art is always changing and
2015全国卷1 When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, we’ll live to regret it. 76. think –thought 77. countryside前加the78. or—and 79. on—with 80. been去掉81. seriously—serious82. airs—air 83. much—many 84. found—find85. your—our 2015全国卷2 One day , little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him drying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said,“How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried. ” Tony promised her that this would never happen again. 【答案】 71. parent改为parents72. on改为in73. very去掉74. looks改为looking75. where改为that 或者去掉 where76. begun改为began77. telling改为told78. a改为the79. saw后加his80. terrible 改为terribly 2015四川卷 Hi, Janice, It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing. As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out together during lunch and after school. We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me
高考英语短文改错20篇 1 Have you ever heard from the saying: All work and no 76． play make Jack a dull boy?What this means is that if you 77． study all the times you will become a boring person. You 78． must go out and having fun with your friends, otherwise 79． you will lose him. No one wants to be friends with the 80． person who that only works and studies. Perhaps you have 81． a confidence problem. Please try remember that the work 82． you do is for yourself rather than for anyone else. You do 83． not have to compete your classmates. No one can be 84． happier in studying seven days and seven nights a week. 85． 2 Dear Tracy， Although I'm 1 6 years old，but my father still treats 76. _____ me as a careless children. He doesn’t value my opinions.77. _ _____ He is very strict with me and often punishes me about 78. _ _____ leaving things lying around in the house while he did this 79. _ _____ all time. I think he fails to set an example to me to 80. _ _____ follow. But he often says：“Doing as I say，not as I do.”81. _ _____ Even worse，he points out my past mistakes to guests，82. _ _____ making me feel hurting. I love my father, but I can’t83. _ _____ bear what he does. I have been tried many times 84. _ _____ to talk with he but he never listens. Please, help me. 85. _ _____ Puzzled 3 Every morning Steve went to work by train. As he 76. _____________ has a long trip, he always buys newspaper. It helps 77. _____________ make the time passing more quickly. One Tuesday 78. _____________ morning, he turned over the sports page. He wanted 79. _____________ to see the report about an important football match 80. _____________ the night before. The report was so interesting that he forgot to get off at his station. He did not know it unless 81. _____________ he saw the sea. He got off at the next station, and had to wait 82. _____________ a long time for a train to go back. It was no doubt that he arrived 83. _____________ late at the office. His boss was angry when Sieve told to him 84. _____________ why he was late. “Work is very important than football! ”. 85. _____________
Last week my parents and I took a two-days trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan. As every one knows, it’s famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. The weather was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain. The three of them were very excited. As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories. On the way up I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly. Evening came down. We spent the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain. The food was expensive and the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow. （二） Many teachers worry about the effects of television with young people. According to studies, many children spend more time watching television than they spend in school. Because so much viewing, children may not be develop the habit of read and the ability to enjoy themselves. No one worries much about the radio program young people listen to, although radios can be very noise. Teachers also wonder about the effects of television commercials. On one year the average child will see 25,000 television commercials, all planned and written by grown-ups to make children to want things that they don't real need. （三） I’m the captain o f our school team so with my fellow players we’ve won sever al games. There will an important game next month. But one of the best player in our team told me just then that he wouldn’t play basketball once more. His parents asked him to spend in more time preparing for the college entrance examination. I feel sorry to him. But his parents think go to college is more important than playing sports and college was the only place for a smart boy like his son. So my friend had no choice. He wanted to make their parents happy. (四) When I first learned to write English, I ran into many difficulties . The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English. My teacher advised me to keep my diary. I followed her advice and should put down 100 words or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English .One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher .She liked it very much and reads it to the class .All said the story was a good one. Their word were a great encouragement to me. （五） Dear Ralph, I’m a newcomer here of a small town. I would describe myself as shy and quietly. Before my classmates, it seems always difficult for me to do things as well them. I'm sure they will laugh to me and see me as a fool. So I feel happy every day. Besides, I have few friends. I don't know that they don't like to talk with me. Sometimes, we talked to each other very well in class, but after class we become stranger at once. I am trying to improve the situation since it doesn’t seem to work. Can you tell me about what I should do? Yours, Xiao Wei
2020英语专题卷 专题十一：短文改错说明类专练 短文改错（每题1分，共40分） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。 A Chinese Dream is made up of ordinary people dreams. If someone asks me how 考点11 my Chinese dream is, and 考点12 I will answer it without hesitation：to be a good doctor. The reason when 考点10 I want to be a doctor is because考点11 I want to save as many lives that 考点13 I can. If 考点13 I was young, I got seriously injured in a terrible accident. Thanks to the doctors’ efforts, so I was brought back to life. Since then, which考点11 has always encouraged me is to be a good doctor. To make sure of 考点11 my dream can be realized, I have been studying hard so as 考点13 I can be admitted into a good medical college. Only in this way can I achieve my goal. B As we all know, to change the entire world is absolute考点06 impossible. But a number of small change考点04 can make a big difference. Every one has tasks that they fear to doing考点08. Think of a task that your dear one hated考点09, and do it for him or her! You can imagine the pleasure where 考点13 you see your bathroom unexpectedly cleaned. Next, whether your talent is singing, cooking and考点12 giving good advice, share it. You may not think your talent is interesting, but they
2010-2015年全国卷英语短文改错 2010年（全国卷I） It was a chance of a lifetime to win the first prize on the Story Writing Show. All I had to do was to write a story or present it. My teachers have been telling me how great my writing was. So if they had said was true, I would have a chance of winning the prize. What were better, I had useful help. There was Uncle Chen, gentleman living near my house, who was a very much famous writer. He agreed to reading my story and give me some advices on how to write like a real writer. 2010年（全国卷II） Christie was one of my best friend at high school. At that time, we often spend time together. Thank to her help, I made great progress in my study. Last year, she decided to study to abroad. In other words, we would be separated long time. Before her leaving off, I prepared a gift to show my best wishes to him. She said it was the best gift she has ever had. From then on, we’ve kept touch with each other through e-mails. I look forward to see her again in the near future. 2011年（全国卷I） One of my unforgettable memory of my school in Xinjiang is that of lunches we brought from our homes. I hold my lunch-box in my hand when I was going to school. The smell from it was very good. Since the lunch bell finally rang, my friends and me met under a tall tree and had our lunches. My best friend Aigulie was used to share her Nang with me. Nang is a specially kind of cake in Xinjiang. I like them very much. Now Aigulie and I study at different colleges or we can only see each other during the summer vacation. I think over her a lot and I miss the food and the good time we had together. 2011年（全国卷II） Dear George, It's been a week after we left your family and we are now back home. Thank you very much for showing them
1. Three friends and I was driving on a highway. While we were going at least 50 miles per hour, we passed over a car. It had broken down, stopped on the side of the road. My friend slows down, and pulled behind the other car. He got out of the car immediate and before I knew it he was helping the other person push the car down the road to a spot where wasn’t so close to the passing cars. From the way they were pushing the car, it looked as if my friend was pushing them all by himself. I thought my friend help a complete stranger like this was a great thing, but I won’t forget his good nature or character. 2. Dear Brad, I’m very glad to hear from you. In your last letter you ask about the post-80s in China. Actually I am the boy who belongs to this group. Comparing with our parents, life for us is getting much hard. The job market is tough and the house is expensively to afford. Now many girls prefer to marry with a man who owns a house and a car. Therefore, I don’t think love built on house and cars is true love, and I doubt how long it will last. As a matter of fact, though situations are tough today, a lot of we post-80s are making great efforts live a good life. I believe we will have a nice future. Li Hua 3. Good morning, ladies and gentlemen, Some of us are having problems about our parents, as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries. I fully understand why we are comfortable about it, but it is no need to feel too sadly. Our parents are checking in our bags or diaries to make sure we’re not getting into troubles. They have probably heard of some horrible stories about other kids and thinking we might do the same. Or perhaps they just want to connect with us and are doing it all wrong. My suggestion is: Tell them we want them to trust us as many as we’d like to trust them. If you don’t think you can talk to them, write them a letter and leave it lie around --- they are bound to read it. Thank you!
2016高考英语短文改错专练（一） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ）,并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 Passage 1 Las t Sunday, it was my father’s funny day. After supper, my father went to see the film. But in our surprise, he came back just about half an hour later. I asked him what was the matter. He smiled and told us about the funny thing what had happened in the cinema. He was sitting in his seat while a woman came to her and said the seat was hers. Surprising, they looked at their ticket carefully, only to find the seats shown in their tickets were the same while the colors were different. So they looked at the tickets carefully. After a while, my father apologized to the woman, saying, “Sorry, I make a mistake. Take this seat, please.” The fact was that his ticket found out under the glass on his desk was for the film a month ago. Passage 2 It was my first Mid-Autumn Festival spent with my parents when I was 12. In the early morning, my parents and I went to the park at their car. There were lots of visitors stood in the front of the ticket window. We waited a long time and buy three tickets. In the Tiger Mountain of the park, I was too eager to see the fierce frightened animals that I quickened my steps through the crowd. Unfortunately, I got separated from my parents. I had hard time looking for him, but I had no luck. Wandering in the park, I felt alone without any companions. Worse still, I had no money, so I had to walk home, covered as much as 5 kilometers. Passage 3 September 15, 2013 Fine One week ago, we finished our mid-exams. Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurt my foot. I was in greatly pain at that moment, but I tried to act as if nothing has happened until the class was over. Though I had difficulty walk back to my classroom, I still didn’t tell anyone but even refused the offer of help of my classmates. As result, the hurt i n my foot became bad. Now I know I’m wrong. We can tell others our need for
无锡市2015高考英语短文改错及阅读理解训练（1）（答案）短文改错（共10小题：每小扼l分，满分10分） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每旬中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、别除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个润字符号（ ），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉． 修改：在错的词下划一横线．并在该词下面写出修改后的词． 注意：1、每处错误及其修改均限一词． 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 A friend of mine was taking an English lesson to class of foreign adult students. After placing quite a number of everyday objects. on a table, and he asked them to give her the ruler, the book and”on. The class went v ery smooth and the students seemed interested in the work unless my friend tuned to an Italian student and said, "Give me the keys." The Italian looked surprising end somewhat at. a loss. Swing this, my friend thinks that the Italian hadn't heard him clearly. However, he repeated, "Give me the keys." The Italian then kissed him on both cheek. 【参考答案】4. A friend of mine was taking an English lesson to ∧class of foreign adult giving a students. After placing quite a number of everyday objects on a table, and he asked them to give her the ruler, the book and so on. The class went very smooth and the him smoothly students seemed interested in the work unless my friend turned to an Italian student until and said, “Give me the keys.” The Italian looked surprising and somewhat at a loss. surprised Seeing this, my friend thinks that the Italian hadn’t heard him clearly. However, he
高中英语短文改错超详细解题技巧 一短文改错的复习重点 1、考生必须熟悉设错方式：多词、少词、错词。 ⑴ 多词现象大多出现在冠词、介词、助动词、连词、语义重复及行文逻辑等方面。 ⑵ 少词现象主要出现在冠词、介词、副词、助动词、不定式符号to、连词等。 ⑶ 错词现象主要在冠词、介词、名词单复数、动词时态、非谓语动词、主谓一致、 代词、连词、词形。 2、考生平时应加强基本功训练，用一个“错题集”本把自己或同学在书面表达中出 现的错误归纳一下，以便考前复习。 二对全文的宏观把握 学生应把改错内容当作一篇小短文来理解，这样能对短文有个宏观把握，对上下文有 全面的了解。 在理解篇章的基础上逐句审读，分析判断，上下兼顾，把明显的、拿的准的题先做完，这样可以缩小包围圈，也有助于对全文的进一步理解。 三从语法角度审查 1、查看时态是否一致。 My favorite sport is football. I was a member of our football team. 全文都 是用的一般现在时，此句中的was显然与上下文语境不符，应改为am。 2、查看主谓是否一致。 Anyone may borrow books, and it cost nothing to borrow them. cost应改为costs，因其主语是it为形式主语，且上下文均为一般现在时。 3、查指代是否一致。 The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home.句中的主语the Smiths表的 是Smith一家人，因此指示代词his应改为their。 4、查平行结构是否平行一致。 由and, or, but, either...or..., neither...nor..., not only...but also..., as well as等并列连词和词组连接的结构可称为平行结构。
南昌市外国语学校2017——2018学年下学期 高二英语短文改错专题练习 命题及审题人：邹乐铭2018.4.14 A The Great Wall is a great military fortification project in China that was regarded as a miracle in the history of ancient architecture. It went through more 2,500 years of the Chinese history but bestrides the vast terrain over a dozen of provinces in northern China. Although it has lost the its military value for a long time, it nevertheless reflects the dignity, confident, and independence of the Chinese people. In 1987, UNESCO listed the Great Wall by a World Heritage Site. The Great Wall is a must-visit site for tourists worldwide where they come to China and Beijing. More of them put on T-shirts with Mao Zedong’s poetry said “You are not a man until you climbed up the Great Wall” when they happily climb the step of the Great Wall. The experience becomes unforgettable. B Nowadays, this is common to hear about a young person getting this or that kind of serious disease. A couple of day ago, a friend in her 20s asked me that I was familiar with some health products. She tells me that during the past two years, she got tired easily and seemed to be in state of sub-health. Twenty is the age in where one should feel filled with strong and energy. And some people at that age have started to worry about their health. Since we now have more access to information about keeping healthy, we should start to act responsible and pay special attention to improve our health. C【2018届全国26省3月联考】 In my opinion, my father can always give me advices because he has experienced a lot. When he graduated in college, his first job was to work as an office clerk. Later he found life was boring to sit in office, so he decided to quit and then starts his travels to many places. Having been traveled a lot, my father broadened his vision great and then went back home. While he met my mother, she thought it was time to settle down. Interesting in his life experience, I can’t help thinking that if I go with him, I will meet many new persons with who I can make friends. I want to live like my father. D The good news is whether there’ll be a men’s basketball match between China and Korea at the stadium of our city in this Sunday. It’s reported that a number of well-known basketball star will appear in the game so it’s a good chance for you to watch them playing live. I like basketball very much, but I know basketball is also your favorite sport, so I was inviting you to watch the game. If you are interesting, please let me know as soon as possibly. In that case, I can’t buy the tickets ahead of time. Remember, match will start at nine o’clock on Sunday morning. E Lending a hand to people make me happy. One day, I saw Sally, my assistant, cried. I asked her about my problem and she said that her mom was sick. She didn’t have enough money to have her mother fully examining, so I decided to give her one of my diamond ring. It didn’t cost as many as the others, but I knew that it would be in great help if she sold it. I recommended an online shop that I often bought jewelry. Sally sold it and used the money to let her mother to be hospitalized. It is great feeling that you can help other people.