概要写作专项练习（一）
1.阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
While many of us go to sleep before midnight, someteenagers choose to stay up much later.They are not driven by the burning desire to write a better essay or achieve a higher grade.Instead, they are busy playing online games.Known as young Internet addicts, they have long been a problem in China.A report released in 2016 by the China Youth Association for Network Development showed that there were over 24 million young Internet addicts among China’s young urban Internet users.The report also said that over 18 million youths had a tendency to develop Internet addiction.
To deal with the problem of Internet addiction among teenagers, the Cyberspace Administration of China has released draft regulations which carried out a ban on online gaming.If the regulations are adopted，under-18s would be banned from playing online games between midnight and 8 am.
As soon as the government’s draft law surfaced, it drew great attention from the public.Some applauded the law as a way to better protect minors(未成年人)，saying that too much overnight gaming is harmful to minors’health and believing the period between midnight and 8 am to be vital to human physical functions.However, others wondered whether itwould be practical if it came into effect, as minorscouldjust borrow their parents’IDs to register accounts to play online games.TheGuangmingDailysuggested that parents should help their teenagers find a
balance between the cyber world and the real world.
China is by no means the only one trying to fight against teenager gaming addiction.Germany introduced a regulation in 2002 in an attempt to stop minors from playing online games from 10 pm to 6 am.Meanwhile，the UK，the US and Australia have forced a rating system on computer games to make sure that teenagers cannot access “adult” content such as violence，sex or bad language.
【答案】
Many teenagers in China have become addicted to overnight online games.Thus，the government released a draft law to solve the long-lasting issue.Some people welcomed the law because it is beneficial to the teenagers’ health，while others doubted whether it would be effective.Actually, many other countries have also been making laws against the youth online addiction.
2.阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
A group of scientists led by Song Mingyang at the Massachusetts General Hospital analyzed data from two major studies involving more than 150,000 participants to determine whether people who consumed protein(蛋白质) from red and processed meats had a significantly higher death rate than those whogot their protein from plants.The analysis of the 32-year Nurses’ Health Study, followedby the Health Professionals Follow-Up Study at Harvard University，didn’t just look at the diets of the participants over ayear.It stared repeatedly—specifically how often they
consumed portions of particular types of food during the previous years—every four years.
Song’s team found that a 10 percent increase generally in proteins from anim als resulted in a 2 percent increase in death，and an 8 percent rise in death risk from heart disease.But a 3 percent increase in protein from plants ledtoa 10 percent decrease in death and a 12 percent drop in risk of death from cardiovascular-related(心血管相关的) death.
“The findings are clear,” said Song.“A research fellow at the hospital’s Clinical and Translational Epidemiology Unit concluded that plant-based proteins from sources such as beans，nuts，quinoa and seeds are a healthier choice than steaks or beef products such as hot dogs.I wouldn’t suggest that everyone switch to people not eating any animal products.That’s because certain meats—chicken and fish，for example—also result in a much lower death risk overall and from heart disease.”
“But the traditi onal American diet，popular with animal products such as burgers，meatballs，meatloaf，steaks，eggs and dairy，is associated with a variety of bad outcomes, ” Song said.In some cases, it’s not just that meat is bad and plants are good.Processed meats are filled with potentially unhealthy additives(添加剂)．Song said he set about the study because while others have suggested healthy benefits from a plant-based diet, none looked at the source of protein.“We were able to link information over the years.The data from the two large, long-term studies provided a unique opportunity to look at long-term health outcomes, ” he said.
【答案】Some researchers surveyed many people for years to find whether protein from meat or plants brings a higher death rate to human.Researchers have found that protein from plants works better at reducing death rate.But a balanced amount of meat is also good at reducing death rate.Song’s study has stated the source of proteins and figured out the benefits of animal products.
3.阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Mount Fuji is a world-famous mountain in Japan.It is one of Japan’s “Three Holy Mountains” along with Mount Tate and Mount Haku.
Mount Fuji is 3,776 meters high，and its perfect beautiful shape can be seen from all around.Mount Fuji presents different faces in different seasons.In Japan，people describe the mountain as “Diamond Fuji” when it is at dawn or dusk and as “Red Fuji” when the mountain is lit by the early morning sun.
Mount Fuji is an important part of Japanese culture.The mountain has been the subject of numerous works of art.It has also been part of Japan’s ancient faiths.
Mount Fuji is one of the world’s classic examples of a stratovolcano(层状火山), meaning that it is formed from many layers(层) of hardened lava(硬化熔岩) that has spread to produce a huge base.The last eruption(爆发) of Mount Fuji was in 1707.
There is a collection of hot springs and lakes nestled around Mount Fuji.The views over the springs are wonderful，with endless blue water，fresh green water plants and fish swimming lazily.You can soak(浸泡) in outdoor hot springs while
admiring the view ofMount Fuji and have Japanese food，such as fresh sweet fish.
At the northern foot of the mountain, about 1,000 meters above sea level, is the Fuji Five Lake area.The shores of the lakes are decorated with seasonal flowers.The image of Mount Fuji reflected on a lake surface is called “Upside-Down Fuji” in Japan.
The Japanese used to believe that God lived on Mount Fuji.Japan’s highest mountain and highest volcano is closely woven(编织) int o the country’s legends and art，and is drawing thousands of tourists.
【答案】The passage is about Mount Fuji, one of Japan’s “Three Holy Mountains”.It presents different faces in different seasons.It is one of the world’s classic examples of a stratovolcano.Around it there is a collection of hot springs and lakes.Seasonal flowers make the shores of the lakes beautiful.It attracts thousands of tourists.
4.阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
A million people will live on Mars within one hundred years.This is the brave expectation of Elon Musk，the founder of the space technology company Space X．“We need to fully focus on becoming a multi-planet civilization.That’s the next step,” he said in a recent interview with Aeon.Musk expects to see about 80,000 people living on Mars by 2040.
It’s all about protecting the human race from extinction，according to Musk.The Earth has always been a ticking(滴答作响的) time bomb.As the sun begins to die，
it will grow bigger，becoming what is known as a Red Giant.In 500 million years，the sun will have become large enough to kill any plant and animal life on the Earth，according to US scientist Edward Guinan.In a billion years，the Earth will have become a hot planet with little or no water.
The brave dream of getting the human race to Mars is not o nly Musk’s；others have made plans，too.A Dutch company set up the Mars One Foundation，hoping to be the first project to put humans on Mars.It received over 200,000 applications to become part of the first group of astronauts to go there.According to Mars One，human settlement on Mars is possible with existing technologies.
Water，food，energy and oxygen are needed for life anywhere.According to Mars One，water that was still in the Martian soil would be boiled and taken out.By using a process called “electrolysis”，astronauts could turn water into hydrogen and oxygen for breathing.Astronauts on the international space station have already done similar things.Food can also be grown in space.Certain plants such as lettuces and onions can be grown using LED light for different color spectra(光谱) and much less heat.NASA has been reaching this to prepare for visiting Mars.
【答案】According to Elon Musk, many people will live on Mars in the near future.By doing so, human beings can avoid being ruined by the increasingly bigger sun.Luckily, the dream for human to settle on Mars is made possible.Continuous scientific research can make water, food, energy and oxygen available in space and
on Mars.
5.阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Computers have changed the way a business functions to a large extent.In the past, corporate houses rented spaces for running accounting departments.It took months together to figure out profit or loss that a business had made or suffered.However, computers have become the backbone of all businesses now.Today, computers are used beyond bookkeeping(记账) purposes too.Almost everything that happens in an organization is recorded, worked upon and evaluated with the help of computers.
Imagining our lives without computers is next to https://www.doczj.com/doc/8815760147.html,puters were initially used only in workplaces.However, they soon became a household name, which revolutionized everything from school homework to grocery shopping.When the Internet came into being，it caused a great change in the way we functioned.Over a period of time，computers enabled working from home, which created a new type of employment.This gave usage of computers, within the confines(界限) of homes，a new part.As technology progressed，simple things such as shopping，booking tickets，buying a new house，searching for schools and colleges, researching for projects and medical information became a lot easier with entry of computers in every household.
As an indispensable tool in our lives, computers have changed the way we think in more ways than one.Today, all you have to do about finding answers is just
“Google it”! The online world of blogging, instant messaging, chatting and social networking not only leaves virtual traces, but unites the world in a completely unimagined way.This powerful medium is the great mode of mass communication which affects our thinking by providing people with a platform to voice their opinions and begin discussions that have brought about a change in the world.
Computers have pushed us to see different worlds and experience different cultures.The revolution in Egypt is the latest example of how computers changed the world.Today the identity of information technology is computers.Invention of this machine has changed the world’s perspective about cultures, economics, history and current affairs.Theadvent(到来) of computers has no doubt brought a revolutionary change in our existence.
【答案】Computers have brought great changes to our lives for the past few years.Firstly，computers have changed the traditional way that people do business greatly.Secondly, computers have become an important part of our lives and benefited us in many ways.Besides, computers have changed our way of thinking.More importantly, computers allow us to experience different cultures without leaving home.In conclusion, computers have been one of the greatest inventions.
6.阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Punishing children is a controversial(争议的) topic. Everybody has different
01 - Sales Strategies How can a company improve its sales? One of the keys to more effective selling is for a company to first decide on its “sales strategy”. In other words, what is the role of the salespe the salesperson’s job narrative, suggest ive, or consultive? The “narrative” sales strategy depends on the salesperson moving quickly into a standard sales presentation. His or her pitch highlights the benefit for the customer of a particular product or service. This approach is most effective for customers whose buying motives are basically the same and is also well suited to companies who have a large number of prospects on which to call. The “suggestive” approach is tailored more for the individual customer. The salesperson must be in a position to offer alternative recommendations that meet a particular customer’s n key aspect of the suggestive approach is the need for the salesperson to engage the buyer in some sort of discussion. The salesperson can then use the information from the customer to suggest an appropriate product or service. The final strategy demands that a company’s sales staff act as “consultants” for this role, the salesperson must acquire a great deal of information about the customer. They do this through market research, surveys, and face-to-face discussions. Using this information, the salesperson makes a detailed presentation tailored specifically to a consumers needs. More and more sales teams are switching from a narrative or a suggestive approach to a more consultative strategy. As a result, corporations are looking more at intangibles (无形资产) such as creativity and analytical skills and less at educational background and technical skills. Sales strategies are classified as narrative, suggestive and consultive. Salespeople use the narrative strategy to promote products with standard presentations. The suggestive approach requires the salesperson to recommend a suitable product after talking with customers. The consultive strategy demands that salespeople acquire information about customers and act as their “consultants”. Nowadays more and more sales teams prefer the consultive approach. (60 words) 02 - When You Hear the Final Whistle One of the hardest things for any sportsperson to do is to know when to retire. But even harder is finding the answer to the question “What am I going to do with the rest of my life?
概要写作范例五篇（附参考答案） 篇一： 阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。 Students who have used electronic cigarettes by the time they start ninth grade are more likely than others to start smoking traditional cigarettes and other tobacco products within the next year, according to a new study funded by the National Institutes of Health. Electronic cigarettes, or e-cigarettes, deliver nicotine to the lungs by heating a liquid solution that contains nicotine and other chemicals to produce a spray that the user takes in. As part of a survey of substance use and mental health among high school students in Los Angeles, the study compared the start of tobacco use among 222 students who had used e-cigarettes, but not any other tobacco products, and 2,308 who had neither used e-cigarettes or any other tobacco products when initially surveyed at the start of ninth grade. The 2,530 students who initially reported never using tobacco underwent follow-up assessments after six and 12 months. Students were
2017高考新题型英语概要写作 阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。 Getting rid of dirt, in the opinion of most people, is agood thing. However, there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt. In the early 16th century, people thought that dirt onthe skin was a means to block out disease, as medical opinion had it thatwashing off dirt with hot water could open up the skin and let ills in. Aparticular danger was thought to lie in public baths. By 1538, the French kinghad closed the bath houses in his kingdom. So did the king of England in began a long time when the rich and the poor in Europelived with dirt in a friendly way. Henry IV, King of France, was famouslydirty. Upon learning that a nobleman had taken a bath, the king ordered that,to avoid the attack of disease, th,e nobleman should not go out. Though the belief in the merit (好处）of dirt was long-lived，dirt has no longer beenregarded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18 century. Scientifically speaking,cleaning away dirt is good to health. Clean water supply and hand washing arepractical means of preventing disease. Yet, it seems that standards ofcleanliness have moved beyond science since World War II. Advertisementsrepeatedly sell the idea： clothes need to be whiter than white, cloths eversofter, surfaces to shine. Has the hate for dirt, however, gone too far? Attitudes to dirt still differ hugely nowadays. Manyfirst-time parents nervously try to warn their children off touching dirt,which might be responsible for the spread of disease. On the contrary, MaryRuebush， American immunologist(免疫学家），encourages children toplay in the dirt to build up a strong immune system. And the latter (后者）position is gaining some ground. 参选答案： One possible version： People have mixed opinions towards dirt on our skin.(要点 1 ) For a long time inhistory, people of some European countries, such as France, believed that dirtprotected people from getting ill.(要点 2 ) However, people began to change their attitudes todirt about 200 years ago. People have been told that washing dirt off our bodycan keep us healthy.(要点 3) However, some scientists believe that exposure to some dirt may helpour immune system.(要点 4) 评分原则： 1.本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。 2.评分时，先根据所写概要的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求 来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后绐分。 3.词败少于40的和多于80的，从总分中减去2分。 4. 评分时，应主要从以下四个方面考虑： (1)对原文要点的理解和呈现情况；
上海高考英语题型训练: 写作 2020高三第一学期期末质量抽查 IV. Summary Writing （10 分） Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point （s）of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible. 松江 It goes without saying that the language spoken by the majority of British people has the same name as the language spoken by most citizens of the U.S.A. Nonetheless, quite apart from well-documented lexical （词汇的）differences - pavement/sidewalk, lift/elevator, etc. - there are still some words and phrases which can cause confusion and misunderstanding between speakers of the two different forms. That's why sonic people say that Great Britain and the United States are nations separated by a common language. There are practical reasons for this. When the first English settlers arrived in what we now call America, the language they spoke was naturally the same as that spoken by their compatriots （同胞）on the other side of the Atlantic Ocean. However, they immediately saw things which didn't exist in Europe, often items used and made by Native Americans, such as canoes and moccasins and creatures such as buffalo. They also picked up words which they heard being used by other European immigrants. The word "boss”,for example, was used by settlers from Holland in New York in the mid-17th century. It comes from the Dutch word "baas'" which means master. The word "cookie" also comes from the Dutch "koekje”. There are many words, phrases and even grammatical structures which are mistaken for Americanisms （美式英语用语）in Britain when they are nothing of the sort. Very often, they represent not an American import, but an original form of British English which has disappeared in Britain. The verbs "guess” meaning think and “loan” me aning lend and the adjective "mad" meaning angry are frequently criticized as Americanisms, yet they all appeared in British English hundreds of years ago. In the case of “loan”, it was used as long ago as 1,200 years! In fact, English spoken in the UK has changed so thoroughly in the last 500 years that American English now represents the last place where some original British English forms can be found. 参考答案：Although American English and British English are the same language, there are great differences. Two reasons account for the phenomenon. New words were created after the first English settlers in America saw new things and learned words from other Europeans. Additionally, some original expressions have been changed by British people while they are still being used by Americans. 崇明 Giving Thanks This is the season for taking the time to reflect on what we're thankful for in life. Spending that time with friends and family to give thanks is what makes the holidays so special. But why should we limit it to just a few weeks in the years? Gratitude is a
概要写作新题型05 ◆选材特点 （1）所需阅读的短文词数在350以内； （2）所选材料体裁没有限制，以说明文、议论文和记叙文为主。 ◆评分参考 阅卷时主要考虑以下内容： （1）对原文要点的理解和呈现情况； （2）应用语法结构和词汇的准确性； （3）上下文的连贯性； （4）对各要点表达的正确性情况。 注意：理解准确，涵盖全部要求，完全使用自己的语言，准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇，得分相应比较高。相反，如果概要写作部分出现两句以上整句抄自原文现象，得分档次将会大大降低；所写内容与所提供内容无关不得分。 2. 考查能力 概要写作，简言之就是对所读过的文章简要概括，写出文章的中心大意，也可称之为摘要。写概要时，读者要是把文章的具体信息用一些具有概括功能的词和句表述出来，而不是抄袭文章的原句，更不是把细节性信息作为中心，而是要通过对文章中的单词、词组和句子进行合理转换，对文章的具体信息进行概括，再用合适的语言表述出来。这一题型主要考查学生对文章主旨大意的概括和准确获取关键词的能力，同时考查学生用简洁的语言概括文章重要信息的能力以及对文章整体结构的把握能力。因此，概要写作是基于阅读理解和书面表达，是二者的有机结合体，是阅读理解和书面表达的沟通桥梁。 3.写作步骤 1）细读原文。首先要仔细阅读短文，掌握文章主旨和结构，明确各段的大意。 2）弄清要求。新高考的概要写作是写全文概要，不是写某一部分的概要，或者就某些问题写出要点。． 3）列出原文要点。分析原文的内容和结构，将内容分项扼要表述并注意在结构上的顺序。在此基础上选出与文章主题密切相关的部分。 4）在写作时要特别注意下面几点： （1）概要应包括原文中的主要事实，略去不必要的细节。 （2）安排好篇幅的比例，概要应同原文保持协调，即用较多的文字写重要内容，用较少的文字写次要内容。
一 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 One time, the teachers at a school wanted to teach the students about airplanes. While all airplanes can fly, some are able to fly farther than others. This is because not all airplanes are built the same. For example, a fighter plane looks very different from a plane that people fly in when they want to go on a holiday. The teachers wondered how they could make students understand this. Then, the science teacher, Mr Moose, decided that the school should have a paper airplane contest. Every student would design a paper airplane. They would stand in a line in the playground behind the school. The students would take turns throwing their airplanes. The student whose airplane went the farthest would win. When Mr Moose announced the paper airplane contest to the students, they were very excited. A student named Paul, who was on the school sports team, said to everyone else that his
2020高考英语八大热点应用文范文以及新题型：读后续写，概要写作 假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东Mrs.Wilson 不在家，你准备外出，请给Mrs. Wilson写一留言条，内容包括： 1. 外出购物 2. 替房东还书 3. Tracy 来电话留言: 1 ）咖啡屋（Bolton Coffee）见面取消 2 ）此事己告知Susan 3 ）尽快回电 Mrs. Wilson I’m going out shopping and won’t be b ack until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 o’clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she had something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change. Yours sincerely,
1.读后续写主要考查什么能力？ 读后续写主要关注学生以下四个方面的能力： ①把握短文关键信息和语言特点的能力。学生需要了解所给短文的主要内容，清楚其关键词和语言结构的使用情况，并通过续写短文表现出来。 ②语言运用的准确性和丰富性。学生能准确、恰当地使用所学词汇和语言结构，还能够根据内容需要使用较多、较复杂的词汇和语言结构。 ③对语篇结构的把控能力。学生需要掌握上下文逻辑关系，所续写的短文与所给短文及段落开头语之间要有连贯性，所续写的短文内语句要连贯、有序。 ④创造性思维能力。学生所续写的短文要具有较丰富的内容，包含详细和生动的情景、态度和感情描述。 2.新题型的高考真题到底长什么样？ (2018年6月浙江高考真题) 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West. We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon.Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.
His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. “The day starts at dawn on my farm,”he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze (吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool. In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn’t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. “Don’t be late for supper,”Uncle Paul cried, “and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost!”“OK!”my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven (编织的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.
上海高考英语概要写作技巧 Rubrics for summary writing (2019-9-14) 评分标准: 1. 本题总分为15分, 其中内容10分, 语言5分。（这部分还有待最终确认，可能是5+5） 2. 评分时应注意的主要方面: 内容要点、信息呈现的连贯性和准确性。 3. 词数超过60，酌情扣分。 各档次给分要求: 内容部分 A. 能准确、全面地概括文章主旨大意，并涵盖主要信息。 B. 能准确概括文章主旨大意，但遗漏个别主要信息。 C. 能概括文章主旨大意，但遗漏部分主要信息。 D. 未能准确概括文章主旨大意，遗漏较多主要信息或留有过多细节信息。 E. 几乎不能概括文章的主旨大意，未涉及文中有意义的相关信息。 F. 完全未作答或作答与本题无关。 语言部分 A. 能用自己的语言连贯、正确地表述。 B. 能用自己的语言较连贯、正确地表述，但有个别语言错误。 C. 基本能用自己的语言连贯、正确地表述，但连贯性较差，且有少量不影响表意的语言错误。 D. 基本能用自己的语言表述，但连贯性较差，且严重语言错误较多。 E. 几乎不能用自己的语言连贯、正确地表述。 F. 完全未作答或作答与本题无关。 把握文体特点 记叙文：what who when where why how 议论文：opinion/ idea+ argument (supporting ideas / reasons) 说明文：phenomenon/ problem + reason + solution (cause and effect), introduction of an object (how it is made, how it is used, how it may change, what makes it new or significant) 新闻：a focus on the first paragraph, and the first or last sentence of the other paragraphs 样题解读 Dirt Getting rid of dirt, in the opinion of most people, is a good thing. However, there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt. In the early 16th century, people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease, as medical opinion had it that washing off dirt with hot water could open up the skin and let ills in. A particular danger was thought to lie in public baths. By 1538, the French king had closed the bath houses in his kingdom. So did the king of England in 1546. Thus began a long time when the rich and the poor in Europe lived with dirt in a friendly way. Henry IV, King of France, was famously dirty. Upon learning that a nobleman had taken a bath, the king ordered that, to avoid the attack of disease, the nobleman should not go out. Though the belief in the merit of dirt was long-lived, dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18 century. Scientifically speaking, cleaning away dirt is good to health. Clean water supply and hand washing are practical means of preventing disease. Yet, it seems that standards of cleanliness have moved beyond science since World War II. Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea: clothes need to be whiter than white, cloths ever softer, surfaces to shine.
2019高考英语概要写作技巧讲解 一、考点分析 （一）考查内容： 1、考查读懂文章内容的能力 2、考查识别作者写作目的的能力 3、考查归纳总结的能力 4、考查组织文章的能力 （二）评分要点 ?1）字数50左右 ?2）理解准确，涵盖全部要点 ?3）准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇 ?4）完全使用自己的语言 ?5）有效使用语句间的连接成分，结构紧凑 二、专题详解 定义： It is a brief, thorough and objective restatement of the main idea and key points of a longer composition. 读者在正确理解文章的基础上, 在不改变原文中心思想、 体裁和结构的前提下，用简明、精练的语句高度浓缩文章的主要内容和观点。 （三）写作方法 Step 1. 确定体裁，明确主题 Step 2. 明确文章结构（总-分，总-分-总，分-总，并列） Step 3. 划主题句与关键信息 Step 4. 写纲要，打草稿 Step 5. 润色成文
1) 找准体裁，提炼要点 按体裁 2) 语言：同义词 ① 同义转换：近义词、同义词和词组的替换，尽量用单词替换短语 （例 improve=promote, of great importance = greatly important ） ② ） ③ 句子重构：调整词类（名词、动词、形容词转换）、时态、语态（主动变被动）等 3) 衔接（替换；省略；增加）：表逻辑关系的连接词 替换：并列关系and, moreover, furthermore, in addition, 转折关系 but, instead, however, on the other hand 省略：并列观点有时可省略连接词;记叙文可省略衔接词。 增加：按逻辑关系，补充连接词firstly…, secondly…, finally…; and…, moreover…, furthermore…; but, instead, however, 例（一）
语法填空短文改错应用文写作读后续写(5) 语法填空 （山东省实验中学2020届高三第二次诊断性测试） 阅读下面短文，在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。 Sometimes we all need positive attitude tips to get through the day．What is this positive attitude anyway? It can be rather 56 (annoy)if you feel bad and I suggest you look at it positively．How? If you are really feeling low，there is no way you can jump to a 57 (total)positive outlook．But there is a way—taking small 58 (step)and learning new ways of thinking，little by little．If you take it as 59 way of life，only 60 (expect)to find ways to feel a little better，one day you’11 notice you 61 (change)your thinking． I've been following the path of positive thinking for over twenty years and I'm really happy I started to work on my thoughts．Sure I have gone 62 many unpleasant phases of life，63 with the positive attitude I walked through them and later found al1 those phases were blessings in disguise．Still，when you start your journey of positive thinking，you shall meet wonderful new people，with 64 you can share positive attitude．And that’s really 65 makes the whole journey so much fun．We are here for each other．I really hope these tips work for you! 短文改错 （2020山西太原阶段性测评） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的用斜线（\）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词 注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 I was a sweet and lovely girl during I was very young. Unfortunate, things changed. It all started when I was given smartphone in the eighth grade. I became fond of watching movies, chat online and playing addictive games. Naturally, I couldn’t make progresses in my study any more. What’s worse,
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2017高考新题型英语概要写作阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。 Getting rid of dirt, in the opinion of most people, is agood thing. However, there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt. In the early 16th century, people thought that dirt onthe skin was a means to block out disease, as medical opinion had it thatwashing off dirt with hot water could open up the skin and let ills in. Aparticular danger was thought to lie in public baths. By 1538, the French kinghad closed the bath houses in his kingdom. So did the king of England in 1546.Thus began a long time when the rich and the poor in Europelived with dirt in a friendly way. Henry IV, King of France, was famouslydirty. Upon learning that a nobleman had taken a bath, the king ordered that,to avoid the attack of disease, th,e nobleman should not go out. Though the belief in the merit (好处）of dirt was long-lived，dirt has no longer beenregarded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18 century. Scientifically speaking,cleaning away dirt is good to health. Clean water supply and hand washing arepractical means of preventing disease. Yet, it seems that standards ofcleanliness have moved beyond science since World War II. Advertisementsrepeatedly