前言
?出于对剑桥雅思的爱恨交加，出于对那些需要完成留学梦移民梦的人的感同身受，出于对那些在烤鸭路上屡战屡败屡败屡战的人的精神支持，出于对那些仍在迷茫、仍在盲目背单词、仍在疯狂买参考书、仍在迷恋机经的人的劝勉与鼓励，出于对网络上面所谓出售雅思写作7分资料的虚假广告的无比痛恨，出于对某些所谓名师名校培训机构的不齿不屑，出于那些迷恋习惯背诵范文依赖别人的鸭子们的真诚忠告，出于对那些急需在7月1日之前考到雅思4个7（澳洲会计毕业生，你懂的）的人的理解和帮助，出于上天对我的眷顾和怜悯，出于·········出于因为我曾经也是这么一种人，也是有这么一种经历，我决定，无偿地，毫无保留地，完整地分享我在过去三月自己总结的雅思复习计划和资料（本人曾经的弱项是写作和口语（对，是曾经，哈哈！），所以，我的资料绝大多数都是写作和口语）~~~
?争取写一篇最全最好的雅思写作经验分享，和更多的鸭友们远离全聚德烤鸭店的火海！
从4年前为了完成踏进悉尼大学的留学梦，到现在努力实现的澳大利亚梦，雅思成为了一个绕不开的情意结。其中走了特别多的弯路，摔了特别多的跤，失去了很多，也收获了很多。从当初的总分6.5而单科不低于6分的大学门槛到现在的A类4个7的独木桥，对于这个来自英国的―老熟人‖，可谓百般滋味在心头。雅思的备考也是一种―被烤‖，在烤鸭过程中，一不小心，有可能首先被这只鸭给烤焦了。焦虑，迷茫，急躁，失落，绝望，期待，紧张，亢奋，XX失调等所有更年期综合症状都会在备考的过程中轮番上映。
从2010年12月到2011年2月底，我一共参加了4次雅思考试(12月11日，1月22日，2月12日和2月26日)，成绩为：
12月11日：听力：7.0，阅读：6.5，写作：6.0，口语：6.0
01月22日：听力：6.5，阅读：7.0，写作：6.0，口语：7.0
02月12日：听力：7.0，阅读：7.5，写作：6.5，口语：8.5
02月26日：听力：7.0，阅读：7.5，写作：7.5，口语：7.0
03月05日：听力：7.0，阅读：7.5，写作：7.0，口语：8.0
可以说，在过去的三个月里面，我感受过裸考过后无言以对的惶恐，体味过努力过后略有进步的喜悦，忍受着就差0.5、与目标无比接近却未能接近的失落，最后，苦尽甘来。因为这次考试，至少再一次让我确信‖天道酬勤―。NO SWEAT, NO SWEET; NO PAIN, NO GAIN。
如果说高考是一条独木桥，那么雅思就是一个无底洞。为了填上这个洞，能用上的方法都用上了，比如说连续报5次雅思考试，下载最新的机经，把慎小嶷《十天》系列书全买了，大包围准备所有的口语和写作topic，上培训班，找老外批改作文，去卧龙岗考试（在国内的话，我会选择贵阳，海口等考点），喝红牛穿红内裤，等等，甚至连吃奶的力都用上了，此处略去一万字。
雅思其实一场持久战，更是一场心理战。在征服雅思的过程中，我们眼前最最最大的敌人不是雅思本身，而是我们自己。无论在复习过程中感到怎样的痛苦，还是在考试过程中经历了什么样的折磨，还是在知道成绩后受到何种的打击，我们都必须自我鼓励，必须乐观向上。
只要站起来的次数比跌倒的多，就是成功
不淡定便蛋疼，淡定的心态是王道
?对于目标分数为5~5.5分的朋友，你们是最幸福的，因为你们有最多的资本去犯错，最多的机会去折腾考官，有最大的可能一次通过。雅思对于你们来说是一次游戏。
?对于目标分数为6~6.5分的朋友，你们应该窃喜，因为你们比5分的朋友有更多的自我优越性，又不需要承担那些只属于7分朋友的精神压力。想想，只需要6~6.5分，你就能踏进一所比国内任何一所大学都要牛的海外名牌大学，这是一种多么美好的憧憬和动力。
?对于目标分数为7分，特别是要考到4个7的朋友，你们应该感到荣幸，因为你们终于能够找到机会去为自己正名。这是一场人生竞赛的缩影。它是一个门槛，同样也是一个里程碑。冲过去了，雅思就变成了一种精神；跌下来了，雅思也不外乎是一朵浮云。
?对于目标分数为8分，特别是要考到4个8的朋友（2011年7月1日之后毕业想申请PR 的澳洲会计毕业生），或许你会埋怨命运总在跟你开玩笑，或许你会选择放弃选择离开，但我想说的是，这同样是一场游戏，只不过跟你玩耍的对象变成了命运。不要泄气，经过这一役，能够战胜命运的人以后终究会成为强者。
?对于目标分数为9分的朋友，我突然想到一个问题，从新中国成立到现在，能够当上国家主席的人一共有7个，但是从新中国成立至今，雅思能考满分的不多于5人。这就意味着你们正在为一个比当上中华人民共和国国家主席还要难的目标发起冲击，并且将要感受一份比那7个老头还有伟大的荣誉感~~哈哈，想着就觉得美了
?对于一战未能成功的朋友，你要相信下一次就是罗曼蒂登陆，胜利在望了
?对于二战未能成功的朋友，证明雅思需要你三顾茅庐的诚意
?对于三战未能成功的朋友，想想当年的红军也是靠四渡赤水才能从土匪变成解放军的
?对于四战未能成功的朋友，你下一次的考试必将风调雨顺，五谷丰登
?对于五战未能成功的朋友，想想当年诸葛亮为了完成辅汉兴刘的大业也是六出祁连山
?对于六战未能成功的朋友，继续想想当年诸葛亮七擒孟获，才能收复人心，看来还是诸葛亮比较讲义气，为我们鸭友团提供了那么多励志的故事
?对于七战未能成功的朋友，你应该高兴，因为下一次就是八仙过海，为你各显神通了
?对于八战未能成功的朋友，你下一次的考试必定有九牛二虎之力
?对于九战未能成功的朋友，恭喜你，你成功了，你成功地颠覆了雅思考试制度，相信那些英国人也不想再折腾你了，因为你的下一站是十全十美~~
上面说了那么多题外话，只是想和大家分享一下在征服雅思过程中的一一些心理感受。好吧，其实无论做什么事情，永远都是痛并快乐着。
写作分享篇
17个不能回避的雅思写作问题
经过三个月的复习总结和4次的实战，我总结了17个关于雅思写作不能回避的核心问题。这17问题一直贯穿在我整个复习的过程。相信只要弄明白这17个问题，我觉得我们离写作7分就无比接近了。对于那些即将参加3月19日，4月2日，4月16日，5月7日等鸭友团来说，我觉得要搞懂问题1，2，6，7，8，13这6个问题最为迫切。如果能做好的话，分数一定能提高的。
1考官是怎么改卷子的？标准是怎样的？
2雅思写作7分是什么样的概念？
3雅思写作6分与7分或者6.5分与7分的距离有多远？
4怎么制定雅思写作复习计划？
5考试前需要写多少篇的大作文和小作文？
6写作模版管用吗？
7雅思写作需要背多少个词汇？
8雅思写作需要什么样的句型？
9雅思写作需要多复杂的从句和语法？
10我们对雅思写作的误区
11鸭友们通常会犯哪些语法错误，能有效避免吗？什么样的语法错误是致命的？
12雅思写作能速成吗？平时需要多看英文报纸吗？
13小作文重要吗？容易写吗？应该怎么复习
14怎么安排大作文和小作文的写作顺序和时间
15要买参考书吗？什么样的参考书？
16参加培训班管用吗？
17网络上面所谓的―名师‖雅思写作预测有用吗？
推荐书目
在准备雅思的过程当中，或许很多人都会像我曾经那样不惜一切代价地去买所谓的名师参考书，因为我们都会自觉不自觉地自我游说：1450块的考试报名费都交得起了，还介意那几十块钱的参考书费吗。其实，有时候想想，我们买的书越多，证明我们越不自信；而且参考书一多，复习计划就会更乱。所以，到目前为止，我只觉得以下几本书稍微有点价值
1. 慎小嶷《十天突破雅思写作》
?优点：比较系统地总结了雅思写作的方方面面，而且我最欣赏它的地方是让烤鸭的必备词汇量降到最低。
?缺点：想想当全中国80%以上的烤鸭都人手一本的时候，它就不再是烤鸭战场上的大规模杀伤性武器了。
2. 慎小嶷《十天突破写作完整真题库》
?优点：比较系统地收集和归类不同类型的雅思题目，我最欣赏它的地方是它能让考生觉得―原来9分作文都是不外如是‖，而且我们能很好地找出差距。
?缺点：看了这本书，你会很容易地掉进那个―大包围‖的题海战术，你会有意无意地想把所有topics 都写了，你会有意无意地背诵别人的观点和9分范文。这样的复习方法是致命的。
3. 吴建业《最新雅思考试胜策》之写作
?优点：有很多很好的例句和观点，能让考生从例句中掌握单词，熟悉观点
?缺点：观点太多，没有针对性，而且topics 很少，因为这边书是2003年的产物。它已经远远落后雅思写作题库的更新速度
4. 吴建业《最新雅思考试胜策》之词汇
?优点：对于渴望背单词的朋友，这本书足够你背了，而且那些词都是按照topics来划分的，所以比其他垃圾词汇书又进了一步。
?缺点：我从来反对盲目背单词，更加反对那些为了使用某个单词而要自己的观点妥协的做法。单词是一把双刃剑，它既是武器，又是负担。
注意：以上仅仅属于本人观点和切身感受，也并非为某作者卖广告。我觉得吧，除了上述这四本书，其他的话，可以放到微波炉里面烤一下，看看有没有烤鸭的味道~~~嘻嘻
TASK 1 小作文
曾经一直忽视小作文，甚至认为雅思写作约等于是写一篇250字的大作文。轻视它的原因可以归结为，字数少(只要150字)，不需要个人观点(纯粹描述客观figures)，有固定的单词和句型，分数只占总分的1/3···直到后来与考官见面的时候，我才意识到小作文的杀伤力。This is especially true when it comes to those who only got band 6.5 but indeed demand band 7.0。有时候，6.5分到7分的距离，小作文起了决定性的作用。
按照剑桥雅思的分类，小作文可为：柱状图(bar chart)，饼图(pie chart)，曲线图(line graph)，表格(table)，地图(map)和流程图(processing chart)。当然，这只是按照这些图表的属性和特征来归类。为什么我要费那么多笔墨在这个人所共知的问题上面呢？经过我1个月的练习和研究，我发现，如果按照这样的归类，我们得总结出6套相对应的模版(句型和词汇)。其实这样是吃力不讨好，事倍功半的，因为这样的归类方法严重地影响了我们的复习方案和练习计划，而且并没有很好地反应出task 1的本质要求。
我的个人认为，应该把柱状图，饼图，曲线图和表格看作一个总体，然后区分出是纵向比较还是横向比较（下面会继续解释它们的区别和应对方案）；然后地图题是一类，流程图是另外一类。也就是说按照本人的经验，task1 小作文按照图表的本质应该分为：横向比较，纵向比较，地图题和流程图。
Part 1 纵向比较和横向比较
由于雅思写作task 1中，柱状图，饼图，曲线图和表格占了绝大多数，所以这个板块应该作为复习的重点。每当我们拿到题目的时候，我们第一件事应该做什么？对，看图表（果然是一句废话）！！其实我的意思是，我们得首先观察它们究竟是：不同物体在同一时间点的比较（即横向比较），还是单一物体在不同时间点的比较（即纵向比较）。这一点非常非常非常非常非常重要！！！因为不同的比较，有着不同的内在比较关系。详细分析如下
横向比较：由于没有时间的变动，因此不存在物体或数据的波动，也就是说，那些描述变化趋势、描述变化特征的词汇和句型完全不适用。此时此刻，我们要focus的是
?首先我们要找出极值（最大值和最小值）
?然后客观地、略有筛选地描述剩余数据（若数据太多，则有所侧重；若数据不多，则全部描述）
?接着就是高潮了--找出不同数据之间的共同特征和大小比较（比如说，谁和谁一样大/小，谁是谁的几分之几，谁是谁的多少倍）
?高潮过后，就需要有一个意犹未尽但有心无力的总结
纵向比较：顾名思义，就是由于时间的推移，不同物体和数据之间发生了量的变化，也就是说，这时候关于描述变化趋势和变化特征的词汇和句型就用得上了。此时此刻，我们要concentrate的是
?首先客观描述变化的大体趋势（是升高了还是降低了，是多了还是少了）
?然后描述变化的具体特征（是怎样增加的，是怎样减少的，幅度如何，速率如何）?接着找出变化趋势相似的不同物体，然后客观描述一下，以减少单词和词汇的重复使用，避免啰嗦
?同样，这里也需要一个纵横全局的归纳和总结
说了那么多，估计你们也看烦看腻了。毕竟很多人都想着一蹴而就，想着尽可能多背单词多抄句型。好吧，闲话不多说，上货！请大家验明正身！！
程度副词
多于：More than, just over, over
少于：Less than, just under
几乎：Approximately, almost, nearly
完全：Exactly, precisely
表示列举data/information句型
1.Overall, A has the largest number of名词(NO1) and B the smallest (NO2). C and D both have NO3; E has NO4.
Overall, Sweden has the largest number of enrolled students (17) and Syria the smallest(5). France and Spain both have 12 students; Germany has 11. It is noticeable that France and Germany have similar profiles.
2.A has the most+名词+doing (NO1); B is next with NO2, while C has NO
3. D and E have (相同) NO4 each
Sweden has the most students studying CAD (9); Spain is next with 7, while France has 6. Germany and Syria have 4 CAD students each.
3.According to the pie chart, A, which is %, is the most···among the total···, then next is B with %, followed by C, making up %; and finally come E, F and G at %, %, % respectively.
According to the pie chart, chicken, which is 40%, is the most popular among the total meat sold, then next is pork with 20%, followed by beef, making up 18%; and finally come lamb, fish and other at 15%, 5% and 2% respectively.
纵向比较
1.Experience/witness/see/enjoy+修饰词(最高级)+增加/减少/震荡
Experience/enjoy + a significant/the most dramatic + decrease/increase
增加: increase, growth, rise 减少: decrease, drop
快速: dramatic, drastic 缓慢: gradual, steady, slow
大幅: significant, substantial 小幅: moderate, slight
震荡: considerable/marked/sharp/minor fluctuation
2.The number of··· was No1 in Yr and rose/reduced by % to No2
The number of miles that car traveled was 3199 in 1985 and rose by 50% to 4806 in the subsequent years.
增加/上升: increase, rise, grow 急促上升: jump, soar to, surge to
减少/下降: decrease, drop, decline 急促下降: plummet to, plunge to
3.主语+上升/减少to···or 主语+上升/减少by
4.The percentage/proportion/number of is修饰词larger/ smaller than that of 修饰词明显: substantially, obviously轻微: slightly, moderately
5.A修饰词increase/decrease occurred
修饰词大幅: considerable, significant, substantial 小幅: moderate, slight
6.表示不变的状态：主语remain constant/unchanged/stable/steady at
表示趋势的句型
1.there is a downward/ upward/ opposite/ general/ dominant trend
下降的/上升的/相反的/总体的/主要的趋势
2.···tend to be more/less preferred 倾向越来越受(不)受欢迎
As can be seen from the table, walk and certain short-distance transportation, such as cycled and local bus tend to be less preferred.
3.There is a considerable increase/decrease in···
There is a considerable increase in total miles by all modes of transportation, compared with the data (4,740 miles) in 1985.
表示比较增长或减少趋势
B also rose/increased/grew during this period, but less sharply
decreased/declined/dropped
The sales of games software also rose during this period, but less sharply.Sales
increased from about 13 billion dollars in 2000 to just under 20 billion dollars three years later.
表示相同相似变化趋势的句式
A similar situation was seen in the···, where
A similar situation was seen in the wholesale and retail trade sector, where the number of women rose from about 550 000 in 1975 to almost 800 000 two decades later. There are some similarities between A and B
Be similar to/ A has something in common with B
表示变化特征的词汇
表示超过的词语
Outnumber比···多，在数量上超过
In this profession, women outnumber men by two to one.
= there are twice as many women as men 在这个行业，女性人数是男性的两倍
The number of men outnumbered women by four to one. 我们的人数以4比1超过他们Exceed超过···数量
The price will not exceed $100.
Overtake (在数量或重要性方面)大于，超过
Nuclear energy may overtake oil as the main fuel.
表示连续的时间段
1.over a span of···years
= over the period from···to···
= in the years between···and···
2.during the same period
3.in the No. years spanning from 19xx through 19xx
= from···to···within the 5 years period
4.from then on
= from this time onwards
= in the subsequent years.
横向比较
1.···程度副词doubled/trebled三倍/quadruple四倍/halve减半(NO. vs NO.), while···doubled/trebled/quadrupled/halved which were数字(年份) and数字(年份) respectively.
The figure by long distance bus more than doubled during the same period (54 miles vs. 124 miles), while the miles by taxi trebled which were 13 miles and 42 miles respectively.
2.表示―A占总体的多少‖或―A为B···倍‖或―A为B的···分之···"
3.···数字(A+B), of which A were···and B were···
Italy received 20 million visitors, of which 1.2 million were from the UK and 1.8 million were from the USA.
4. ···had a higher/lower total number of名词than any of the other+名词France had a higher total number of visitors than any of the other countries on the list.
表示比较的句型
1.likewise,句子. 同样地，···
Likewise, the use of other, unspecified, forms of transport also increased.
2.By contrast/In comparison,句子. 相反地，···
By contrast, the long distance vehicle enjoyed a significant increase over the period, spanning from 1985 to 2000, although there exists some differences.
In comparison, student expenditure in country C was considerably lower, at only US$1500 per year
https://www.doczj.com/doc/857970169.html,pared with the data (数字) in年份,句子. 与···相比较，···
Overall, there is a considerable increase in total miles by all modes of transportation, compared with the data (4,740 miles) in 1985.
4.···had half/twice/triple·times as many可数名词as···, but/yet the number of···and···was the same.
Australia had half as many visitors as Thailand (3 million vs6 million), but the number of visitors to those countries from the UK and the USA was the same, 0.3 million.
5.句子, while句子.
12 million Americans visited Canada while 5.5 million visited Mexico.
6.···had a higher/lower total number of···than any of the other+名词复数France had a higher total number of visitors than any of the other countries on the list.
表示―%‖的词语
百分比：percentage, proportion, share
高：High, large – highest, largest
低：low, small—lowest, smallest
表示―占%‖的词组
正向：A constitute/occupy/account for/compose/comprise B A占B的%
负向：% of B be composed of A (总体)有%的(某一元素)
% of名词be composed of(总体)有%的(某一元素)
Around 15% of our diet is composed of protein. 我们的饮食中大约有15%的蛋白质composes (某一元素)构成总体的%
Christians compose around 2.5% of the country’s population 基督教徒占这个国家人口的2.5%
Comprise构成
Older people comprise a large proportion of those living in poverty.
Constitute构成
Constitute around 60% of the total/a larger percentage (around 20%) of
Constitute the majority of the labour force. 占劳动力的大多数
Occupy 占据
Dry lands occupy a third of the world’s surface. 陆地占了地球表面的三分之一
Account for (数量上，比例上)占
The Japanese market accounts for 35% of the company’s revenue. 日本市场占公司收入
的35%.
对了，差点忘了，要区分数据是data 还是percentage.这个决定了相对应的词汇
如果大家能够熟练地掌握我上述的总结和归纳的话，相对对于以上四种图表一定能够得心应手了
Part 2 地图题
地图是最近比较流行的题目，本人连续考的4次雅思写作里面，居然有两次都是地图题（12月11日和2月26日）。不过对于应付这种题型，大家不用害怕，其实没什么大不了的。慎小嶷最近的新书《十天突破写作完整真题库》里面的DAY 1O(page 297~318)，有详细的
归纳。以下内容均为摘抄该书的章节。恳请大家尊重别人的知识产权，在没有得到原作者允许的情况下，请勿用于商业用途~~
表示―A位于‖
A is located/situated/lies···
A is just off the road to···A就在通向某地的路边上
A is right at the center of··· A就在···的正中央
表示―A靠近或者紧挨着B‖:A is next to/near/close to
表示―A在距离B某一面···公里处‖
A is located/situated/lies···kilometers/miles to the east/west/north/south of B
表示―A位于B内的某个部分‖
A is located/ situated/ lies in the eastern/western/northern/southern part of B
表示―A在B的某个角上‖
A lies/is located/is situated on/at the east/west/north/south/corner of B
表示―剩下的‖部分：The rest of the···
表示―道路通向/河流流向某处‖: The road runs from···to···
The river runs/ flows from···to···
表示―沿着河流/道路‖:Along with river/road Alongside the river/road
表示―A在道路或者河流的某一侧‖
A is located/situated/lies on the north/south side of the river/ the road
e.g. situated on the south side of the River Thames, this hotel offers its guests an ideal location in central London
表示―A与B仅一河之隔/仅一路之隔‖:A is right across from B
表示―A在道路或河流的南北端‖
A is located/situated/lies on the north/south end of the river/the road
表示―A在B的对面‖:A is opposite B
表示―A在B某一侧的边界上‖
A is located/situated/lies on the eastern/western/northern/southern border of B
表示―A在B某侧的边缘上‖
A is located/situated/lies on the eastern/western/northern/southern edge of B
表示―A朝北/朝南/面朝公园等‖
A faces north/south
A faces towards the north/ the south
A faces a park
表示―斜向的方位‖:
东北north-east 东南south-east
西北north-west 西南south-west
表示建筑物的布局：Layout
指一个建筑物周边的环境：The surroundings of a building
表示―A占据了某个空间‖：A occupies
表示A由几个不同的部分组成：A consists of/ is composed of/ is made up of B, C and D 表示A的长度是：The length of A is···=A is···in length
表示A的宽度是：The width of A is···=A is···in width
表示A的面积是：A is···in area
The farm is 50 kilometers in area
The building almost doubled in floor area.
表示大约：approximately, roughly, about, around
表示一块地：a patch of land/ a stretch of land
表示从A·延伸到·：A extended/ stretched from···to···
The park extended from Main Street to King George Street
This period stretched from the mid-eighteenth century to the late nineteenth century 表示比较，―与···所不同的是‖
Unlike A, B
Compared with A, B
A···while/ whereas B···
In comparison/ in contrast/ by contrast, B
表示可以―使用‖：available
表示可以―容纳‖：can accommodate
表示理论上讲：in theory, theoretically, hypothetically
表示但事实上：but in reality/ however, realistically/ yet in practice/ but in fact/
as a matter of fact, though
表示在某处建造了A：A was built in=was constructed in=was established in
表示在某处又增建了A：A was added to=an addition was made to···,which was A
表示改动原建筑或原场地：v. change/ modify/ remodel
n. change/modification/remodeling
表示A被改造成了B：A was turned into/ was transformed into/ was converted into B
表示A被搬走或拆掉：A was removed/ demolished/ taken down from···
表示A被B取代了：A was replaced by B/ A made way for B
表示A的面积缩小：the size of A was reduced to only half of/ one third of the original size 表示A的面积扩大:A was expanded to twice its size=the size of A almost doubled
表示A向XX方向延伸：expand/extend northward/southward/eastward/westward
表示A经历了：A experienced/ witnessed/saw
起初：at first=initially=in the beginning=originally
接着：then=next=after that=in the following stage=in the next/subsequent period=afterward
在这个阶段：at this point=in this phase=in this stage
最终：finally=eventually=in the end
Part 3 流程图
对于流程图，本人从来没有准备过。我觉得没必要捡了芝麻丢了西瓜。毕竟它出现的频率很低，而且几乎很难准备。有见及此，对于那些在考试当中遇到流程图的烤鸭们，我只能说：―不要慌，不要怕，前面就是天堂，一路走好！！‖
TASK 2 大作文
Part 1. 考官是怎么改卷子的？
知己知彼，百战百胜，所以―考官是怎么改卷子的，他以什么为标准的评分‖的尤为重要。经过朋友的介绍，我认识了Steward，他是一位资深的写作老师和改卷老师，在悉尼大学语言
中心工作(那些在悉尼的朋友，如果想找他的话，请给我留言，我有他的联系方式)。我上了他两小时的课，他帮我改了12篇大作文和2篇小作文。我觉得这短短的两小时，远远比上什么新东方新航道环球雅思什么保7班精品班重要得多得多。after all，很多中国雅思老师还是处于意淫阶段。
看着他改了12篇文章，发现他改作文的模式非常非常的mechanical，他说考官一般会在1小时内改六份作文（including task 1 and task2），那就是说平均5分钟改一篇。在这五分钟里，他就死死地盯着评分规则，从task response, coherence and cohesion, lexical resources, grammatical range and accuracy 这四个方面评分。而且让我无比深刻的是：雅思是一门语言能力考试，它侧重于测试学生的语言表达能力，而不是思维能力。记住：核心词是语言表达！！
Part 2. 雅思写作7分是什么样的概念
以下是雅思写作的7分标准
(a). task response:
?addresses all parts of the task
?presents a clear position throughout the response
?presents, extend and supports main ideas, but there may be a tendency to over-generalise and/or supporting ideas may lack focus.
用中文最简单的理解是：首尾都要回答问题，允许泛泛而谈。这就是说，我们没必要花太多的精力去考虑观点是否绝对严谨是否意义深刻，关键是要告诉考官你的思考逻辑。这就是剑桥雅思的魅力，它要考你的不是你的思维能力，而是你的语言表达能力。哪怕在ridiculous 的观点，只要你能用最恰当的语言去表达，你也可以同样得7分（当然，如果你的目标是8分，你就当我痴人说话吧）。还有就是说，很多题目本身包含很广泛的概念，很多大学教授用十几万字都解释不清的关系，怎么就能让我们这些门外汉用三言两语就解释好呢。说了这么多，我想说的是，如果你从一开始就习惯背诵满分作文，习惯复制别人的观点，这样的复习方法会很吃力（我不敢说是错的，那是确实低效，甚至有赌博成分），事倍功半。毕竟我们都是正常人，我们都有自己的思考能力和理解能力，我们说的每一个观点都是make sense，不make sense的是我们没把那个观点说清楚。
(b). coherence and cohesion
?logically organises information and ideas, there is clear progression throughout ?lises a range of cohesive devices appropriately although there may be some under-or over use
?presents a clear topic within each paragragh
用中文最简单的意思是：分段分点，每点之前必须有连接词。这一点非常非常容易达到（我总结了大量这样的词汇，明天或者后天上传上来）。然后那个考官最为推介的范式（以argumentation的题目为例，因为report类的文章更死板了）：开头段+主体段（让步一段，支持（反对）两段）+结尾段。其实说白了，就是我们最熟悉不过的模版。也就是说，模版是非常有用的，之所以变成没用（serve no helpful purpose）是因为用模范的那个人没有用（想起粤语里面的一句歇后语，叫―太监撒尿‖）。至于怎么用模版才能变得不落于俗套，下文回答问题7的时候会有详细分析。
(c). lexcial resource
?uses a sufficient range of vocabulary to allow some flexibility and precision
?uses less common lexical items with some awareness of style and collocation ?may produce occasional erros in word choice, spelling and/or word formation
用中文最简单的意思是：足够就好，不需要多；一两个大词就够，不需要滥。一说到单词，相信我们并不陌生，甚至认为学英语就是背单词，写作就是单词的选美与堆砌。尽管我们都知道这是不对的，但是依旧默默地坚持着，比如说背诵一大堆同义词代换，一大堆除了莎士比亚见过之外其他人都没见过的大词。这样的复习会很累而且会逐渐把雅思写作从逻辑表述变成词汇大杂烩。至于何谓是足够的单词，何谓是less common lexical items，这就是问题6的范畴了。经过我写了大概30篇雅思作文，我觉得我们需要的词汇其实真的不多（我的词汇表一定会upload上来，估计在明天或者后天）。我想说的是，记单词最好的方法是，把单词放到句型或者例句上面来，然后句型或者例句一定要与雅思写作topic 相关。如果不相关，证明那个词就算记住了，也不会用。
(d). Grammatical range and accuracy
?uses a variety of complex structures
?produces frequent error-free sentences
?has good control of grammar and punctuation but may make a few mistake
用中文最简单的意思是：句子结构多样性和允许语法错误的存在。对于句子结构多样性，这一点，我觉得我们中国学生肯定没问题的，什么定语从句，什么名词性从句，什么状语从句，倒装句，虚拟语态，被动语态等，我们只会过犹不及。从我的个人经验来看，我有时候会把定语从句和同位语从句搞乱（并不是我们不知道有什么不同，而是一紧张就很容易忽视了）。说到语法错误，我可以说，我们中国学生最最最常犯的语法错误都是非常低级（请参考part.4内容）。
Part 3. 雅思写作7分所需要的词汇
(a). 雅思写作必备连词--只要掌握了这些连词，就能符合到coherence and cohesion 7分以上的要求
以下为英语写作(雅思写作，学术论文等)必备的连词汇总。以下的内容参考了悉尼大学本科学生orientation handbook里面关于如何preparing for essays的总结，再加上本人的积累。有些连词与下面的句型汇总重合，请以句型汇总为重点。对于应该雅思写作和大学学术论文绝对绰绰有余，希望能帮助大家。
为了更好地分享我的经验，我将以下的词语划分成三组
?用下划线highlight的是适用那些总感觉雅思写作写不长、写不满250字、需要灌水的同学
?用粗体highlight的是适用于那些每次都写得太长、写爆格，务实的同学
?用斜体highlight的是适用于那些有强烈大词欲，渴望用大词整死考官的同学
?To signal sequence or addition
Accordingly, actually, additionally, afterwards, again, also, and, another, as was previously stated, as well as, at the same time, besides this, consistent with this, correspondingly, equally important, finally, further, furthermore, in addition, in a like manner, in the first place, in the same way, including, initially, last, likewise, more importantly, moreover, next, originally, overall, primarily, similarly, to begin with, too, what is more.
?To signal time
After, afterward, as long as, at first, at last, at length, at the same time, before, concurrently, currently, during, finally, following, immediately, in the future, in the meantime, last but not least, later, meanwhile, next, once, presently, rarely, simultaneously, sometimes, subsequently, then, this time, until, until then, whenever, while.
?To show results
Accordingly, as a result, consequently, for this reason, hence, in other words, in that case, it follows that, it is evident that, otherwise, owing to, resulting from this, so it can be seen that, that being the case, therefore this implies, this suggests that, thus, under these circumstances.
?To introduce evidence/support/reasons
Contradictory to this, contrarily, in support of this, it follows, this is clear because, the evidence for···is, the reasons for···are, this is supported by, to affirm this, to attest to this, to corroborate, to explain, to further confirm, to further verify, to list, to substantiate this, in substantiation.
?To signal repetition, summary, or conclusion
Accordingly, all in all, all together, as a final point, as a result, as I have noted, as
indicated earlier, as mentioned, as previously stated, as we have seen, briefly, by and large, consequently, finally, given these facts, hence, in brief, in conclusion, in other words, in short, in summary, to sum up, in summation, on the whole, overall, since, so, summing up, then, therefore, thus, thus we can see that, to conclude, to recapitulate, to repeat, to review.
?To introduce causes or effects
Accordingly, as a result, because, consequently, due to, for as much as, for that reason, hence, in as much as, in that, in view of, on account of, owing, since, then, therefore, thus, to narrow the focus, after all, from this perspective, from this point of view, given this context, in fact, in order to, in other words, in particular, in this case, in this context, indeed, particularly, put another way, specifically, that is, this is particularly true when, under certain, circumstances, up to a point, with this in mind.
?To contrast,
After all, although, alternately, and yet, at the same time, be that as it may, bu, contrastingly, conversely, despite, dissimilarly, even though, for all that, however, in contrast, in contrast to this, in opposition to this, in reality, in spite of this, inconsistent with this is that, instead, meanwhile, nevertheless, nonetheless, notwithstanding, on the contrary, on the one hand, on the other hand, otherwise, paradoxically, rather than, regardless of, still, though, whereas, when in fact, yet.
?To compare
Also, analogous to, another similar issue is, at the same time, by the same token, equally, in comparison, in like manner, in similar fashion, in the same way, likewise, similarly.
?To clarify
In other words, that is, that is to say, this means that, to clarify, to elaborate, to explain, to paraphrase, to put it another way.
?To show purpose
In order to, in the hope that, for the purpose, with this end, to the end that, with this objective
?To dismiss
All the same, at any rate, either way, in any event, in either case, whatever happens.
?To signal concession
Admittedly, albeit, although it is true that certainly, even so, granted, it may appear that, knowing this, naturally, of course, this is only the case when, while this is true, while it may seem that.
?To signify a condition
Granting that, in the event of, on the condition that, providing that, so long as ?To prove examples
As an illustration, by way of example, for example, for instance, in particular, in support of this, notably, to demonstrate, to elaborate, to exemplify, to highlight, to illustrate,
specifically, that is.
?To reference
Concerning this, considering this, with respect to, with regards to
?To emphasise
Above all, as a matter of fact, certainly, chiefly, especially, importantly, in any case, in particular, indeed, it must be emphasised, that, mainly, mostly, notably, obviously, of course, particularly, primarily, specifically, truly, undoubtedly.
(b). 雅思写作必备同义词代换--只要掌握了这些连词，就能游刃有余地驾驭我们想要表达的观点，满足lexcial resource 7分要求
对于雅思写作，总有那么一个问题绕不开，那就是我们究竟需要积累多少个单词才能写出一篇能够完整表达我们观点的文章。有的老师说最起码要有6级的词汇量，有的老师(慎小嶷)说熟记286个单词就足够~~根据本人的经验，我觉得在一开始备考的时候，完全没有必要去考虑我们究竟需要多少个单词，因为在没有练笔就开始记单词的情况，我们的思路往往受我们所记过的单词的影响。在这样的惯性下，我们很可能很生硬地套用单词，而不是自然而然地抒发观点。我觉得只有在自己平时充分练笔(我自己大概写了30多篇雅思作文)的前提下，我们才知道我们自己究竟需要什么样的单词和词组，需要多少的同义词代换~~我的经验是：不要让单词成为自己的负担，最好是边写边积累，毕竟我们不是考GRE。哪怕是GRE词汇的巨人也可能成为雅思写作的侏儒~~关键是用词准确到位，清晰表达观点
以下是经过我30篇雅思写作练笔之后总结出来的75组必备的同义词代换，如果能熟练掌握，必定能让你们在驾驭和阐述观点的时候变得游刃有余~~其实不单单是为了雅思写作，出国留学不能避免的就是每个学期排山倒海的individual assignments和group works，相信以下的词汇对大家是有帮助的。
中性动词
1.导致：v. cause, bring about, give rise to, lead to, generate, create, Be a contributing factor to
2.认为：v. point out, argue, claim, assert, think, consider
3.强调：v. emphasize, bring/call attention to, accentuate, heighten, strengthen
4.集中：v. focus on, concentrate on
5.解决：v. combat, address, tackle, resolve, solve
雅思写作Task2范文：全球化使文化特征消失 由于通信和交通运输的飞速增长，整个社会迅速全球化。一些人担心这种全球化将导致文化特征的流失。你同意这种说法么？一起来看看这篇雅思范文是如何回答的吧！认真研读一定的雅思范文及作文模板可以帮助我们检验自己的写作水平，并能很好地吸收和应用优秀范文里的优秀内容。 Write about the following topic: As mass communication and transport continue to grow, societies are becoming more and more alike leading to a phenomenon known as globalization. Some people fear that globalization will inevitably lead to the total loss of cultural identity. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Model Answer: Globalization means that in some ways people around the world are becoming more and more similar. We often eat the same food, watch the same TV programmes, listen to the same music and we wear the same clothes. Some of this at least can be blamed on the spread of multinational brands available all over the world. On the surface, it may appear as if the global diversity of cultural identities is being lost. If, the argument goes, people in Tokyo and London look and dress the same, then that must mean that cultural differences are disappearing. However, I would argue that this is a very narrow definition of culture and that in fact cultural differences are as present as ever.
雅思G类大作文话题范文：教育话题 Evaluation of teachers You should spend about 40 minutes onthis task. Some people think that high schoolstudents should be given the freedom to evaluate and even criticize theirteachers, while others claim that this practice will disrupt the order inclassroom and lead to disrespect for teachers. What is your opinion? Write at least 250 words. Education: Sample Introduction Whether high school students should begiven the freedom to evaluate and criticize their teachers is a challengingissue in education. Some people support this practice while others believe thatit will be hard for the teachers to maintain classroom order and gain students’respect. Personally, I agree to the latter opinion, which is based on thefollowing three reasons. Main Body 1 First of all, it is difficult for highschool students to adopt a completely objective attitude towards their teacherswhen they are
雅思写作常见的8种语法错误 1 语序 从句不使用疑问句语序，而使用陈述句语序，即主语在前，谓语在后的顺序排列。 错例1 Canyou tell me how many students are there in this class? 正解： Can you tell me howmany students there are inthis class? 错例2 Theywere more worried about how far did they have to walk to get t o the trainstation and could they catch the train before it left. 正解： They were moreworried about how far they had to walk to get to the train station and if they could catch the train before it left. 改错练习： 1. It’ s hard to decide when and where will we hold the sports meeting. 2. If you want to learn about the latest developments and discoveriesfrom around the world, you will read about them in jo urnals and researchreports published in English, no matter whether are the scientists who wrotethem from China or Norway. 2 主谓一致和冠词的用法 注意主谓一致和冠词的用法 错例1 Apart-time job offers you chance to demonstrate your ability and appl ywhat you have learned in school. 正解：
词汇对于雅思写作的重要性 【导语】世上的事，只要肯用心去学，没有一件是太晚的。你只要记住你的今天比昨天进步了一点，那么你离你的梦想也就更近了一步。 一、词汇表达的专业性 话题词汇在雅思作文的用词中扮演了一个专业性的角色。很多考生在备考雅思写作的过程中往往会乱背词汇，缺乏针对性，更多烤鸭会出现背了用不上的问题。我们鼓励考生按照话题来熟悉词汇，然后通过范文来巩固模仿。话题词汇的使用会让表达更加专业，比如说教育类的词汇，“考试教育”一词，很多人会说是education which focus examination, 其实它的准确表达应该是exam-oriented education; 还有“同龄人”很 多学生会表达成people of same age, 背过话题词汇的考生应该都知道一个很简单的词peer; 还有媒体类的词汇“大众媒体”，“不良信息”不应该是字面理解的public media和bad information, 更好的应该说mass media和negative information; 还有 让人过目不忘的“青少年犯罪”一词，我们也会用juvenile delinquency来替换普通的teenager crime。通过上述的例子，我们可以很清楚地发现话题词汇的应用可以让作文表达更准确，更专业，考生可以充分利用这一部分词汇来为自己的作文润色加分。 二、用词的多样性 研读了大量的考官范文以及评分要求，我们不难发现考官非常注重repetition of words,所以准备一些替换词还是十分有必要的。词汇的多样性是一个人词汇量以及用词精准性的很好的体现。例如同样表达“解决问题”这个短语，我们可以说solve/cope with/deal with/tackle/address/combat the problems/issues。“注意，重视”可以表达成pay attention to /lay emphasis on /attach importance to。再举个例子，有个 题目要讨论computer games的优缺点，那整篇文章我们会一直提到这个词，所以我们可 以换种方式表达为indulgence in computer games或者being addicted to computer games. 使用替换词的时候要注意用词的精准性，考官并不一定想看见一篇文章有多少生僻和高难度的词，但是一些词的妙用以及替换确实会带来意想不到的润色功能。 三、让考官眼前一亮的词汇 经常看见有考生走入一个严重的误区，为了让自己的词汇“高级一点”，去网络或字典中找一个从未见过的生僻词，结果却适得其反。想让考官眼前一亮并不需要用高难词汇，
雅思大作文范文-全球化
雅思大作文范文-全球化
Some people believe that charities should give aid to those who need the aid most, wherever they live. Some people believe that charity organizations would better concentrate on people in their own countries instead. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Concern about humanitarian assistance has been heightened in recent years. Although it illustrates a moral ideal of mankind, many people who hold opposing views think that the welfare of fellow citizens is the priority. International aid has its weaknesses but its importance should not be denied. The main reason why international donation agencies should view international aid from a global perspective is that their funds can help the citizens of those recipient countries to combat poverty, disease and inequality. We should first recognize that citizens of developing countries are in desperate need of aid, because they are susceptible to natural or man-made disasters such as wars. In those war-torn or poverty-stricken countries, where resources are scanty, there is a high demand for food, medicine tents and shelters. In addition, humanitarian action can restore some of their basic rights, such as the right to receive education. This is also consistent with the universal principle of supporting vulnerable populations. Those who cannot provide financial support can work as international volunteers and deliver services, such as training and medical service, to those needy people. Despite the heightened importance of international aid, people have discovered
6分作文的评分标准 ? addresses all parts of the task although some parts may be more fully covered than others ? presents a relevant position although the conclusions may become unclear or repetitive ? presents relevant main ideas but some may be inadequately developed/unclear ? arranges information and ideas coherently and there is a clear overall progression ?uses cohesive devices effectively, but cohesion within and/or between sentences may be faulty or mechanical ? may not always use referencing clearly or appropriately; ? uses paragraphing, but not always logically ? uses an adequate range of vocabulary for the task ? attempts to use less common vocabulary but with some inaccuracy ? makes some errors in spelling and/or word formation, but they do not impede communication ? uses a mix of simple and complex sentence forms ? makes some errors in grammar and punctuation but they rarely reduce communication 雅思大作文话题之教育类 Some people think schools should only teach students academic subjects. Others think schools should also teach students how to discriminate between right and wrong. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 3 Some employers think that formal academic qualifications are more important than life experiences and personal qualities when they look for an employee. Why is it the case? Is it a positive or negative development? Schools should concentrate on teaching students the academic subjects that will be useful for their future careers. Subjects such as music and sports are not useful. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 2 Some people think children should obey the rules set by their parents and teachers set, but others think that less control will help children to deal with their future adult life. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 2 Some people think students should go to boarding schools instead of living at home. Do you agree or disagree? 2
作文写作十大类常见错误 一、句子不完整 ?1. 一个简单句有2个基本成分：主语和谓语动词，两者缺一不可。 ?错误： ?In china has more than 100 million subscribers to cable television. ?正确： ?China has more than 100 million subscribers to cable television. ?错误： ?One of the many benefits of travelling overseas learning how to cope with the unexpected. ?正确： ?One of the many benefits of travelling overseas is learning how to cope with the unexpected. ?2. 如果一个句子有从句，也必须保证从句的完整。 ?错误： ?Those who overweight or indulge in unhealthy diets are candidates for heart attacks. ?正确： ?Those who are overweight or indulge in unhealthy diets are candidates for heart attacks. ?3.介词后面一定要加名词、代词或从句做宾语。 ?错误： ?A marked character of cooperative learning is that personal success only springs from. ?正确： ?A marked character of cooperative learning is that personal success only springs from group success. ?4. 大多数情况下，比较级后面一般要加than，并且清楚指明所比较的对象。 ?错误： ?Divorce is more common. ?正确： ?Divorce is more common than it was one generation ago. 二、句子成分多余 ?1. 一个简单句通常只有一个主语，如果主语超过一个，要使用连词构成并列主语。 ?错误： ?Smoking, drinking are banned in many places of work. ?正确： ?Smoking and drinking are banned in many places of work. ?2.如果一个句子中出现多个谓语动词，要使用连词连接结，构成并列动词，或在一些句子中使用关系代词构成复合句。 ?错误：
If a product is of good quality and meets people's needs, people will buy it. Advertising is unnecessary and is no more than a type of entertainment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Advertisements, in various fields, are sprouting up in the screen at present. Some individuals ignore the influence the advertisements have on their shopping decision. I concede advertising plays an indispensible role in folks' life, not only a type of amusement. Frankly, it is determined by consumers' taste that which products they would like to purchase. In terms of loads of consumers' goods in the shopping shelves, a majority of folks, undoubtedly, turn to be more objective and balanced. That is to say, it is a prevalent tendency that the customers prefer the high-quality and more economical items, instead of being addicted to the advertisements. However, advertisements should not be thrown away from our daily life. Obviously, the advertising industry produces a wealthy of touching, original and stimulating advertisements for us. They function as an entertaining show and a funny break among the TV series or other programs. Additionally, another type of advertisements can teach us some educational lessons, such as keeping away from smoking, giving
雅思作文题目必备的十个雅思话题 一、教育类别 1. 教育会囊括一些什么内容？ 母题：It is generally believed that education is of vital importance to the development of individuals and the well-being of societies. What should education consist of to fulfill both these functions? (050312) 提示：本题围绕教育的两大功能来展开（个人与社会），准备好这篇文章，即可应付教育类话题中的最大分支—教育的功能，做到以不变应万变。对于社会角度，可以从促进经济发展、增加社会流动性(social mobility)、维护社会稳定这几个方面来展开，对于个人，可以写改变思维模式、有利于就业和便利生活来写。 子题：大学应当教授理论知识还是实践技能？大学的是应当把学生培养成合格的公民还是让他们自己得益？准备未来职业最好的方法是 上大学还是尽快离校积累工作经验？大学要不要扩招？中学阶段应 当提供通才教育还是专才教育？要不要延长义务教育年限？要不要 让农村地区的学生更容易上学？老师要教学生如何判断是非吗？ 2. 学校的科目谁来选择？
母题：Some people think that the government should decide which subjects students should study at the university, while others think that students should be allowed to apply for the subject they prefer. Discuss the two views and give your opinion. (060916) 提示：这类题目采取的策略就是“双批判”，因为题目中提供的两种选择往往都是错误的。 子题1：政府选课or 老师选课？学生选择所有的科目or根据兴趣自行选择？ 子题2：要不要学国际新闻？要不要学历史？要不要中学阶段就学习外语？要不要学数学哲学这类的科目？ 3. 什么样的教学方式最好？ 母题：Many people use distance-learning programmes (study material post, TV, Internet, etc.) to study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the benefit as much as attending college or university. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? (041113, 081023, 100515) 提示：远程教育最大的好处，就在于三个any：anybody, anywhere, any time. 缺点是缺乏师生之间以及学生之间的interaction, 缺乏
Some people believe that charities should give aid to those who need the aid most, wherever they live. Some people believe that charity organizations would better concentrate on people in their own countries instead. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Concern about humanitarian assistance has been heightened in recent years. Although it illustrates a moral ideal of mankind, many people who hold opposing views think that the welfare of fellow citizens is the priority. International aid has its weaknesses but its importance should not be denied. The main reason why international donation agencies should view international aid from a global perspective is that their funds can help the citizens of those recipient countries to combat poverty, disease and inequality. We should first recognize that citizens of developing countries are in desperate need of aid, because they are susceptible to natural or man-made disasters such as wars. In those war-torn or poverty-stricken countries, where resources are scanty, there is a high demand for food, medicine tents and shelters. In addition, humanitarian action can restore some of their basic rights, such as the right to receive education. This is also consistent with the universal principle of supporting vulnerable populations. Those who cannot provide financial support can work as international volunteers and deliver services, such as training and medical service, to those needy people. Despite the heightened importance of international aid, people have discovered
2020雅思写作语料库教育类：是否全部父母都该学习 育儿课程 教育类： Caring for children is probably the most important thing of the society. It is suggested that all mothers and fathers should be required to take the childcare training courses. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? 教育的孩子很重要，有人认为，所有的父母应该学习育儿课程，是否认同?(2020年1月19日雅思题目) 题目解析：提问中有典型的错误信息，即所有的父母，所以，本文写作策略为让步反驳，即为三分让步，七分反驳。 雅思小鹏哥让步反驳话题布局图： 首段：背景介绍 + 争议焦点 + 作家立场 二段：第一次支持作家立场以及细节或例证的展开 三段：第二次支持作家立场以及细节或例证的展开 四段：让步不支持的观点的合理性 + (加以反驳 ) 尾段：再次亮明观点 + (总结理由) 作家立场： 虽然我们不能低估亲自学习育儿课程可能带来的价值，但是不是所有的父母都能够亲自学习育儿培训课程。 雅思小鹏哥头脑风暴导言： 1. 小鹏哥喜欢看芒果台的《变形记》，有一集描述的是贵州贫困地区的留守儿童，他们的父母都在城市里打工，家庭贫困，父母辛苦
赚钱仅仅是维持孩子的基本生活和让孩子有机会接受更好的教育。这些父母，不可能有经济成本去专门学习育儿培训课程。 2. 对于很多社会精英来说，即使他们有经济实力参加育儿培训课程，但是，他们又没有时间和精力，所以，让他们专门学习育儿培训课程也是不现实的，即使他们可能有学习的愿望。 是否同意一种观点提问标志： Some people think that …… to what extent do you agree or disagree? 雅思小鹏哥全文布局图： 首段：背景介绍 +(争议焦点)+作家立场 父母是孩子们最初的老师，他们对于孩子们的性格培养以及精神成长有潜移默化的影响，所以，良好的教育方法是每个父母都应该学习的。我认为，虽然不能低估亲自学习育儿课程对于家长可能带来的利好，但是，不是所有的父母都能够亲自学习育儿培训课程。 二段：第一次支持作家立场 对于很多社会精英来说，例如，繁忙的企业家或文体明星，他们多数忙于事业发展，没有时间和精力去专门学习育儿课程。但是，他们能够努力赚钱，聘请专业的育儿老师来教育孩子，所以，父母的努力同样有助于孩子们的健康成长。 三段：第二次支持作家立场 对于贫困家庭来说，父母的可支配收入有限，学习育儿课程虽有利好，却会增加父母的经济负担，在现实生活中很难实现。例如，我喜欢看芒果台的《变形记》(一部纪录片)，有一集描述的是贵州贫困地区的留守儿童，他们的父母都在城市里打工，孩子们的生活非常贫困和艰苦，父母辛苦工作仅是维持孩子的基本生活和让孩子们接受良好教育。这些父母，不可能有经济成本去专门学习育儿培训课程。
海口朗阁名师解析常见雅思写作语法错误 朗阁海外考试研究中心杨晔 一、语序 从句不使用疑问句语序，而使用陈述句语序，即主语在前，谓语在后的顺序排列。 错例1：Can you tell me how many students are there in this class? 正解：Can you tell me how many students there are in this class? 错例2：They were more worried about how far did they have to walk to get to the train station and could they catch the train before it left. 正解：They were more worried about how far they had to walk to get to the train station and if they could catch the train before it left. 改错练习： 1. It’s hard to decide whe n and where will we hold the sports meeting. 2. If you want to learn about the latest developments and discoveries from around the world, you will read about them in journals and research reports published in English, no matter whether are the scientists who wrote them from China or Norway. 二、主谓一致和冠词的用法 错例1：A part-time job offers you chance to demonstrate your ability and apply what you have learned in school. 正解：A part-time job offers you a chance to demonstrate your ability and apply what you have learned in school.
雅思写作大作文范文雅思写作优缺点 living alone独自居住 今天我们雅思写作大作文范文的文章来研究下独自居住。以中国为例，许多年轻人到外地上大学。大学毕业之后就留在那个城市，而非回到家乡。他们通常自己居住在一个小房子里，承担各种各样的生活成本。这样固然是自由，但也容易引发各种各样的问题。那么这种趋势究竟是好是坏呢？小编搜集了一篇考官范文，以供大家参考。 雅思写作大作文题目 In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? 与以前相比，现在一些国家越来越多的人选择独自居住。你认识这一积极的发展还是消极的发展。 雅思写作大作文范文 In recent years it has become far more normal for people to live alone, particularly in large cities in the developed world. In my opinion, this trend could have both positive and negative consequences in equal measure. 最近几年，人们独自居住越来越常见，尤其是在发达国家的大城市中。在我看来，这一趋势带来的积极和消极影响基本相等。 The rise in one-person households can be seen as positive for both personal and broader economic reasons. On an individual level, people who choose to live alone may become more independent and self-reliant than those who live with family members. A young adult who lives alone, for example, will need to learn to cook, clean, pay bills and manage his or her budget, all of which are valuable life skills; an increase in the number of such individuals can certainly be seen as a positive development. From an economic perspective, the trend towards living alone will result in a greater demand for housing. This is likely to benefit the construction industry, estate agents and a whole host of other companies that rely on homeowners to buy their products or services. 从个人角度和更广的经济角度来看，独居家庭的上升可以被看作是有好处的。在个人层面，和那些与家庭共同居住的人相比，选择独居的人可能变得更加独立自主。例如，独居的年轻人需要学会做饭，打扫卫生，支付各种账单，并管理译文来自雅思自己的财产。所有这些都是有用的生活技能。这类人数量的上升当然可以被看作是有益的发展。从经济的角度来看，独自居住的趋势将会对住房产生更大的需求。这可能使建筑产业、房产中介以及一系列依赖房主购买他们产品或者服务的公司受益。 However, the personal and economic arguments given above can be considered from the opposite angle. Firstly, rather than the positive feeling of increased
雅思大作文范文：国际间合作 本文是雅思大作文范文：国际间合作，供大家阅读参考。认真研读一定的雅思范文及作文模板可以帮助我们检验自己的写作水平，并能很好地吸收和应用优秀范文里的优秀内容。 题目：Some people think the main benefit of international cooperationis in protection of the environment, while others think that the main benefit is in the world business. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 范文： There is no doubt that international cooperation, from private enterprisesto governments, has become increasingly prevalent (= more popular these years). It is on account of growingly global economy, and it is beneficial for almost every country in the world. 近年来，私企和政府间的国际化合作变得广泛而流行。这是由于经济全球化的趋势和世界各国的利益共同导致的。 People firmly believe that the international cooperation is good for environment protection. It is well awarethat every country has its unique way to protect environment. For example, the Dutch do well in disposing
雅思写作十大话题万能分类题库 一、教育 1. 教育应该包括哪些内容？ 母题：It is generally believed that education is of vital importance to the development of individuals and the well-being of societies. What should education consist of to fulfill both these functions? (050312) 提示：本题围绕教育的两大功能来展开（个人与社会），准备好这篇文章，即可应付教育类话题中的最大分支—教育的功能，做到以不变应万变。对于社会角度，可以从促进经济发展、增加社会流动性(social mobility)、维护社会稳定这几个方面 来展开，对于个人，可以写改变思维模式、有利于就业和便利生活来写。 子题：大学应当教授理论知识还是实践技能？大学的是应当把学生培养成吅格的公民还是让他们自己得益？准备未来职业最好的方法是上大学还是尽快离校积累工作经验？大学要不要扩招？中学阶段应当提供通才教育还是专才教育？要不要延长义务教育年限？要不要让农村地区的学生更容易上学？老师要教学生如何判断是非吗？ 2. 学校的科目谁来选择？ 母题：Some people think that the government should decide which subjects students should study at the university, while others think that students should be allowed to apply for the subject they prefer. Discuss the two views and give your opinion. (060916) 提示：这类题目采取的策略就是“双批判”，因为题目中提供的两种选择往往都是错误的。 子题1：政府选课or 老师选课？学生选择所有的科目or根据兴趣自行选择？ 子题2：只有学术科目重要，体育和音乐这样的课不重要，你同意吗？要不要学国 际新闻？要不要学历史？要不要中学阶段就学习外语？要不要学数学哲学这类的科目？ 提示：子题2与母题联系不大，需要准备这些科目各自的优点。 3. 什么样的教学方式最好？ 母题：Many people use distance-learning programmes (study material post, TV, Internet, etc.) to study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the benefit as much as attending college or university. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? (041113, 081023, 100515) 提示：远程教育最大的好处，就在于三个any：anybody, anywhere, any time. 缺点 是缺乏师生之间以及学生之间的interaction, 缺乏教师的moral guidance, 因为没有 体育课且久坐电脑前，会引发健康问题。 子题：私立学校好不好？留学好不好？要不要分快慢班？小组学习还是单独学习好？ 4. 谁来为学费买单？