【试卷总评】:本短文改错基本上是按照《新课标全国高考英语卷》中的短文改错题编写的专题训练,主要考查了新课标高考短文改错的备考主要知识和核心内容，在形式上保持了新课标全国新课标高考英语卷的形式，便于学生适应性训练。本专题总体上难度适中，适合高考二轮专题复习训练使用。练习基础性强，重点突出，覆盖面广，涉及了近几年高考英语新课标卷中所考查内容，信息丰富，设问新颖。练习注重了学生语言知识运用和语言能力的考查，有助于学生巩固知识、训练能力和提高纠错准确率。同时，练习所选的大多数语篇材料又是学生学习、训练写作地很好的范文，学生只要在纠错后，将其当做作文范文背诵，会对他们提供哦啊考作文成绩有很大帮助。试题导向明确，答案清楚，是一份学生二轮复习训练的好试题。
最新2013年高考英语短文改错专题训练及解析
（新课标人教版考区）
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My parents live in the country. They keep a dog calling Ah Fu. One day my parent went to work in the fields taking my little sister with Ah Fu along. While they working, my sister walked to the river nearby. Ah Fu followed her there. She was trying to pick a flower while she fell into the river. Ah Fu barked and jumped to the water immediate. When my parents heard Ah Fu barking they ran to the river. They saw Ah Fu swimming towards the bank carried my little sister. My parents praised Ah Fu warm. It was our brave Ah Fu who had saved my little sister.
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My parents live in the country. They keep a dog calling Ah Fu. One day my
called
parent went to work in the fields taking my little sister with Ah Fu and along. While parents and
they ^ working, my sister walked to the river nearby. Ah Fu followed her there. She were a
was trying to pick a flower while she fell into river. Ah Fu barked and jumped to the
when into
water immediate. When my parents heard Ah Fu barking, they ran to the river. They immediately
saw Ah Fu swimming towards the bank carried my little sister. My parents praised
carrying
Ah Fu warm. It was our brave Ah Fu who had saved my little sister.
Warmly
【解析】
1.此处是过去分词作短语作定语，因此，将calling 改为called。
2.根据上下文可知，parent应是复数，所以将parent改为parents。
3.此处my little sister和Ah Fu and along并列关系，所以将with改为and。
4.根据句意，此处应是过去进行时，所以将they加were。
5.此处的river首次出现泛指，所以将the改为a。
6.此句意思是“在他摘花时，意外掉入河中”应用be doing sth when句型，所以将
while改为when。
7.根据句意，此处“跳入河中”，所以将to改为into。
8.此处应是状语，应是副词，所以将immediate改为i mmediately。
9.此处是现在分词作宾补，所以将carried改为carrying
10.此处的warm是praised的状语，所以将warm改为warmly。
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May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement make.
The Student Union is going to hold a party in Saturday evening, August 15, to welcome my friends from the United States. The party will be hold in the roof garden of the Main Building. It will begin at 7:30 p.m. There will have music, dancing, singing, games and exchange of gift. Everybody may bring a small gift on this purpose. Remember to wrap it up, sign your name and write a few words of good wish.
Don’t forget: 7:30, Saturday evening, roof garden, Main Building. There is sure to be a lot of fun. Everybody is welcomed.
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May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement ^ make.
to
The Student Union is going to hold a party in Saturday evening, August 15, to
on
welcome my friends from the United States. The party will be hold in the roof garden our held
of the Main Building. It will begin at 7:30 p.m. There will have music, dancing, singing,
be
games and exchange of gift. Everybody may bring a small gift on this purpose.
exchanging gifts for
Remember to wrap it up, sign your name and write a few words of good wish.
wishes Don’t forget: 7:30, Saturday evening, roof garden, Main Building. There is sure to be a lot of fun. Everybody is welcomed.
welcome
【解析】
1、该句子用的是have sth to do而不是have sb do, 在make前加to 。
2、指某一天的上下午时用介词on而不用in。
3、此处的fiends应是讲话一方的朋友，是复数概念，将my改为our。
4、根据句意，此处是将来被动，应将hold改为held。
5、表示从在的有用there be不是there have, 应将have改为be。
6、此处的exchange与dancing, singing,是并列关系，应将exchange改为exchanging。
7、此处的gift是大家交换，是复数，应将gift改为gifts。
8、根据句意，此处是为了这一目的，应是for this purpose; 而on purpose“故意”。
9、此处的wish应是复数概念，所以将wish改为wishes。
10、Welcome一次即可作动词，又可作形容词，所以，应将welcomed改为welcome。
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Dear Peter,
We're so glad you're coming to join us on Sunday. Here is what you can find us. We'll have our picnics in the People's Park. You know where that is, isn't you? After you entered the park by the main gate, walk straightly on till you come to a stream. Cross the stream and turning right. After walking in a while you'll come to a hill. Walk around
to other side of the hill. There you'll see a lake. We'll have our picnic here in the small wood by the lake. I'm sure you'll have no trouble finding us. Do come!
Yours
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Dear Peter,
We're so glad you're coming to join us on Sunday. Here is what you can find us.
how
We'll have our picnics in the People's Park. You know where that is, isn't you? After you picnic don’t
entered the park by the main gate, walk straightly on till you come to a stream. Cross enter straight
the stream and turning right. After walking in a while you'll come to a hill. Walk around turn for
to ^other side of the hill. There you'll see a lake. We'll have our picnic here in the
the there
small wood by the lake. I'm sure you'll have no trouble finding us. Do come!
Woods Yours
【解析】
1、此处的从属连词在从句中作方式，故将what改为how。
2、此处是单数概念，应是picnic。
3、此处的反意疑问句应与主句的人称、数等保持一致，而不是与从句保持一致，所以将isn’t 改为don’t。
4、根据上下文设计概念可知此处一般现在时，所以将entered改为enter。
5、straight形容词和副词同形，此处应是straight。
6、turn和cross是并列谓语，将turning改为turn。
7、for a while是“一会儿”而in a while则是“过一会儿”根据句意，此处应是for a while.
8、此处的other应是特指，前面应有the.
9、此处是指那里，应用there。
10、wood在此处是“小树林”应用woods。
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A few days before my brother and I went to the cinema by bicycle. My brother was riding with me seating on the seat behind. As we came to the crossroad, a young man and a girl came up and stopped us. ‘We've found you long last,’ they said. And we don't know them. Point to a policeman not far away, the young man explained, ‘He stopped us ab out half hour ago and made us to catch the next offender. So come on, stand here. Hoping you don't have to wait as long as we did . Good luck.’May 3rd, Sunday fine
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A few days before my brother and I went to the cinema by bicycle. My brother
ago
was riding with me seating on the seat behind. As we came to the crossroad, a young seated/ sitting crossroads
man and a girl came up and stopped us. ‘We've found you ^ long last,’ they said. And
at But we don't know them. Point to a policeman not far away, the young man explained, didn’t Pointing
‘He stopped us about half^ hour ago and made us to catch the next offender. So
an 去掉to
come on, stand here. Hoping you don't have to wait as long as we did . Good luck.’
Hope May 3rd, Sunday fine 【解析】
1、根据句子时态和句意此处应是“几天前”，所以将before改为ago.
2、此次是现在分词作宾补，表示主动，所以将seating改为seated或sitting。
3、crossroad表示“十字路口’”时常用Crossroads。
4、根据文意，“最终找到”at long last是固定搭配。一次在long前加at。
5、前后两句语义转折，所以将and改为but。
6、根据上下文此处是一般过去时，所以将don’t改为didn’t。
7、根据句子结构，此处的Point应是分词作伴随状语，所以将point改为pointing。
8、此处half an hour是固定搭配，所以在half后加an。
9、此处是make sb do sth结构，所以去掉catch前的to。
10、此句是祈使句，应将hoping改为hope。
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Dear Mr Smith,
I was so please to hear from you and I'm writing to tell you something about my school. You are right, quite few changes have been taken place. On the one side of the road, there has a new classroom building. On the other side which a playground used to be now stand another new building, our library. In it there are all kind of books, newspapers or magazines. The playground is now in front of school. We've also plant a lot of trees in and around the school. I hope you come and see for yourself some days.
Best wishes!
Yours,
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Dear Mr Smith,
I was so please to hear from you and I'm writing to tell you something about my
Pleased
school. You are right, quite few changes have been taken place. On the one side of the
去掉been
road, there has a new classroom building. On the other side which a playground used is where
to be now stand another new building, our library. In it there are al l kinds o f books, stands kinds newspapers or magazines. The playground is now in front of^ school. We've also and the
plant a lot of trees in and around the school. I hope you come and see for yourself planted
some days.
day
Best wishes! Yours,
【解析】
1、此处please是动词应该用形容词pleased.
2、词句中的take place不用被动语态，所以去掉been。
3、表示存在的有用there be 所以将has改为is。
4、which a playground used to be定语从句，关系词在从句表示“处所、地点”应用
where。
5、此句是倒装句，其主语是another new building，所以将stand改为stands。
6、all kinds of是固定搭配，所以kind 应是复数。
7、newspapers 和magazines是比并列而不是选择关系，所以该or为and。
8、介词in front of后的school指具体的学校，前应加the。
9、此处现在完成时，应将plant改为过去分词。
10、根据句意可知应是“某一天”，而不是“几天”，所以将days改为day。
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Li Hua My name is Li Hua. I was born in Dalian, Liaoning province on February 1977.
I started school in 1984 while I was seven. I studied in Guangming Primary School 1984 to 1990. After that I went to No.6 Middle School of Dalian and graduate this summer. The main subjects I studied at school including Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemical and computer. I like English and computer best but I am very good at them. Last year I had won first prize in the school computer competition. In my spare
time I enjoy listening to popular music and collect stamps. My favourite sport are swimming in summer and skating in winter.
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Li Hua My name is Li Hua. I was born in Dalian, Liaoning province on February 1977.
in
I started school in 1984 while I was seven. I studied in Guangming Primary School ^
when from 1984 to 1990. After that I went to No.6 Middle School of Dalian and graduate this
graduated
summer. The main subjects I studied at school including Chinese, maths, English,
included
physics, chemical and computer. I like English and computer best but I am very good chemistry and
at them. Last year I had won first prize in the school computer competition. In my spare 去掉had
time I enjoy listening to popular music and collect stamps. My favourite sport are
collecting sports swimming in summer and skating in winter.
【解析】
1、在英语中表示某年某月用介词，而不用on。
2、此句意思是：我七岁时开始上学，所以应用when而不是while。
3、根据句意，此处应是从某时到某时，英文常用from…to…，所以在1984前加from。
4、根据句意和上下文，该句应该是过去时态，所以将graduate改为graduated。
5、该句中的include是谓语动词，应该用included.
6、该居中的学科名称是并列关系，应将chemical改为chemistry名词。
7、根据连词前后句意义，应该是顺承关系，而不是转折关系，所以将but改为and。
8、句中有last year时间状语，应是一般过去时，所以去掉had。
9、此句中的collect和listening是并列成分，作enjoy宾语，因此，将collect改为collecting。、
10、从动词are可知sport应是复数。
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Dear Dick,
How nice to hear from you again! You want to know what is going on in schools in china. In short, things have begun to improve since we called on school to reduce learning load. I don’t know about the others, but I used to have to do works even on weekends by doing endless homework and attending classes as well. Now, I have more free time. I can follow my own interests, such as reading books, visiting museums, and taking computer lessons. In the evenings, I can watch news on TV or read newspapers. What’s more, I can go to bed earlier. As far as I know, everyone is happy about the new arrangement of things.
Best wishes! yours,
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Dear Dick,
How nice to hear ^ you again! You want to know which is going on in schools in
from what
China. In a short, things have begun to improve since we call on school to reduce 去掉a called
learning load. I don’t know about the others, and I used to have to do works even on
but
weekends by doing endless homework and attend classes as well. Now, I have much
attending more free time. I can follow my own interests, such as reading books, visiting museums, or
and taking computer lessons. In the evening, I can watch news on TV or read newspapers.
evenings
What’s more, I can go to bed earlier. As far as I know, everyone is happy about the new
early
arrangement of things.
【解析】
1、此处是收到来信，应是hear from。
2、此句是宾语从句，根据句意应将which改为what。
3、in short是固定搭配，所以去掉冠词a。
4、根据上下文可知此处应是一般过去时，所以将call改为called。
5、根据上下文可知前后两句应该是转折关系，所以将and改为but。
6、从结构看attend和doing应是并列关系，所以将attend改为attending。
7、此处根据上下文，应该用比较级，所以将much改为more。
8、reading books, visiting museums, or taking computer lessons.这几个短语是并列关系而不是选择关系，所以将or改为and。
9、根据句意，此短语意思是“每天晚上”所以将evening改为eveings。
10、根据上下文，此句中没有比较之义，所以将earlier改为early。
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Dear Bill,
I was very glad receive your letter on July 13th. Thank you for your congragulation. I
was very excited when I heard that Beijing won the bid for the 2008 Olympic Games.
Immediate, I called Weiguo and Lihong to my house . After the brief discussion, we
decided to put up a wall’s newspaper for our class. When we hurried to our classroom and began to work. Weiguo wrote a poem, Lihong copied some news on the newspapers. I draw the Olympic flag. The next Monday, Our classmates were both surprised and overjoying when they saw the wall newspaper. I hoped you can come to China to watch the Olympic Games in 2008, then I'll be very happy to be your guide.
Sincerely yours
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Dear Bill,
I was very glad ^receive your letter on July 13th. Thank you for your
to
congragulation. I was very excited when I heard that Beijing won the bid for the 2008 congragulations
Olympic Games. Immediate, I called Weiguo and Lihong to my house. After the brief Immediately a discussion, we decided to put up a wall’s newspaper for our class. When we hurried to
wall when去掉
our classroom and began to work. Weiguo wrote a poem, Lihong copied some news
on the newspapers. I draw the Olympic flag. The next Monday, Our classmates were from drew
both surprised and overjoying when they saw the wall newspaper. I hoped you can
overjoyed hope
come to China to watch the Olympic Games in 2008, then I'll be very happy to be your guide.
Sincerely yours
【解析】
1、此处用句型be glad to do sth,因此在glad后加to。
2、congratulation表示祝贺常用复数形式，所以改为congragulations
3、次出应是副词做状语，因此永Immediately。
4、此处discussion是抽象名词具体化前应该是不定冠词a。
5、该处是表示性质、用途等名词作定义不用所有格。
6、该句是单句而非复合句，所以去掉when。
7、根据Lihong copied some news on the newspapers句意可知应该将on改为from。
8、根据上下文，该句时态应是一般过去时，所以将draw改为过去式。
9、overjoying 和surprised 是并列作表语，应该是过去分词》。
10、此处是说话人的希望，应是现在时态，所以将hoped改为hape
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Dear Bob,
I’m so glad to learn that you are com e in September. I found a place for you. It’s a small flat of 25 square metre, with a bedroom, a bathroom or a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and the chair. The rent is 500 yuans per month. The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street, it is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No. 11 can take you straightly to the school. In fact, it’s only one stop way. Do you think you’d like it? If so , I can try and find another place for you. Just let me know.
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Dear Bob,
I’m so glad to learn that you are come in September. I ^found a place for you. It’s
Coming have
a small flat of 25 square metre, with a bedroom, a bathroom or a kitchen. In the
matres and
bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and the chair. The rent is 500 yuans per month.
a yuan
The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street, it is not far from Jianxin Chinese School.
which
Bus No. 11 can take you straightly to the school. In fact, it’s only one stop way. Do you
Straight away
th ink you’d like it? If so I can try and find another place for you. Just let me know.
not
Yours .
【解析】
1、此句是进行时表将来，所以将come改为coming。
2、此句意思是“我已为你找到一个住处”应该是现在完成时，在learn前加have。
3、多少平方米的英文表达应是“xx square metres。
4、此处应是并列，不是选择，所以将or改为and。
5、此次故事观此错误，应该用a,和a bed, a sofa, a desk的用法一样。
6、yuan一词是中文译音，不用复数。
7、it is not far from Jianxin Chinese School是非限制性定语从句，所以改it为which 。
8、straight该词形容词副词同形，去掉straight的ly。
9、It is …away. 意思是“距……多远”，所以将way改为away。
10、根据上下文句意，该处应该是if not而不是if so。
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It is well-known that we exist in the dynamic world with various difficulties. When we are faced them, nothing is more important than hope and self-confidence. With confidence, we can find sometime the question is not as “huge”so we imagine.
Take most of our for example, the entrance exam to college seem to be a horrible monster. According, some people give up, some persist. In my eyes, with confidence, right assessment of the difficulties, as good as full preparation, try and exert your strength, but then we will overcome all problems and challenges. On the whole, I believe we youngster should face the difficulties in right manner. And nothing is impossible, brave it out and just do it!
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It is well-known that we exist in the dynamic world with various difficulties. When
a
we are faced^ them, nothing is more important than hope and self-confidence. With with
confidence, we can find sometime the question is not as “huge”so we imagine.
sometimes as
Take most of our for example, the entrance exam to college seem to be a horrible us seems
monster. According, some people give up, some persist. In my eyes, with confidence, Accordingly
right assessment of the difficulties, as good as full preparation, try and exert your
well
strength, but then we will overcome all problems and challenges. On the whole, I and
believe we youngster should face the difficulties in right manner. And nothing is youngsters
impossible, brave it out and just do it!
【解析】
1、此句中的world并非具体的世界，而是人们现实生活的一种环境，因此，用冠词a。
2、faced with “面对”是固定搭配。
3、根据句意，此处应是“有时候、时而”而不是“某时”，应该用sometimes。
4、此句用not as(so)… as句型，所以改so为as。
5、此处应该是most of us。
6、从主语entrance exam可知，谓语动词是单数。
7、根据句子结构，此处应是According副词作状语，而不是形容词。
8、根据句意，此处应该是“除……外，还有……”,而不是“和…….养好”,应该是as well as。
9、根据上下文，前后两句应该是顺承关系不是转折关系，所以改but为and。
10、youngstr是we的同位语。
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Almost all of us heard the story “Here Comes the Wolf” when we are little kids. What we can learn from the story is we must be honest. Therefore, there’re lots of phenomenon of dishonesty nowadays.
Being honest does great harm not only to other people and also to yourself. Take the case of fake milk powder for an example. After drinking this kind of milk, the baby had big heads while their legs and arms were still thin, what badly affected their health. To my great relief, the producers got accused and punished net all the serious consequences in the end.
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Almost a ll of us heard the story “Here Comes the Wolf” when we are little kids.
were
What we can learn from the story is^ we must be honest. Therefore,there’re lots of
That However
phenomenon of dishonesty nowadays.
phenomena
Being honest does great harm not only to other people and also to yourself.
dishonest but
Take the case of fake milk powder for an example. After drinking this kind of milk,
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the baby had big heads while their legs and arms were still thin, what badly affected babies which
their health. To my great relief, the producers got accused and punished net all the our
serious consequences in the end.
【解析】
1、根据主句动词heard的时态可知,将are改为were。
2、^ we must be honest是表语从句，其连词that不能省。
3、根据上下文可知，前后两句语义转折非因果，因而改Therefore为However。
4、phenomenon是可数名词，在lots of后应是复数形式。
5、根据句意可知，此处应是dishonst才合乎文意。
6、not only…but also 是固定搭配。
7、take…for example是固定搭配，不用冠词。
8、此处根据the baby had big heads的heads可知一部分是babies。
9、what badly affected their health是非限制性定语从句，因此，改what为which。
10、To one’s great relief“某人大为欣喜的是”根据上下文可知应是作者一方是复数，因此改my为our。
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It is known to us, a growing outbreak of H1N1 flu has been sparked in many countries. An increasing number of cases are reported every day.
It’s thought that H1N1 flu spread in the same way that regular seasonal influenza
viruses do, that is, spreading from person-to-person, mainly through the coughs and sneezes of people who are sick with virus.
Faced with this severe disease, here are some everyday measure we should take to stay healthy. First, cover your nose and mouth by a tissue when you cough or sneeze. Wash your hands often with soap and water, especial after you cough or sneeze. Avoid touch your eyes, nose or mouth. Germs spread that way. If you get sick, stay home from work and school and limit contact with others to keep from infecting them.
Final ly, H1N1 flu is not a terribly deadly disease, which is curable. So, don’t be nervous and just keep calm as usually.
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It is known to us, a growing outbreak of H1N1 flu has been sparked in many
As
countries. An increasing number of cases are ^reported every day.
being
It’s thought that H1N1 flu spread i n the same way that regular seasonal influenza
Spreads
viruses do, that is, spreading from person-to-person, mainly through the coughs and sneezes of people who are sick at the virus.
with
Faced with this severe disease, here are some everyday measure we should take
measures
to stay healthy. First, cover your nose and mouth by a tissue when you cough o rsneeze.
with
Wash your hands often with soap and water, especial after you cough or sneeze.
especially
Avoid touch your eyes, nose or mouth. Germs spread that way. If you get sick, stay touching
home from work and school and limit contact with others to keep from infecting them.
or
Finally, H1N1 flu is not a terribly deadly disease, which is curable. So, don’t be nervous a nd just keep calm as usually.
Usual
【解析】
1、It is known to us,是置于句首的非限制性定语从句，因此，改It为As。
2、根据句意，该句是现在进行时的被动语态，应在are后加being。
3、该动词在此处应该是单数第三人称，因此改spread为spreads。
4、be sick with “感染疾病”是固定搭配，所以改at为with。
5、从here are some…可知，measure应是复数。
6、cover…with….用……盖住……..是固定搭配。
7、此处是副词做状语，应该是especially。
8、avoid后劫匪谓语动词智接动名词.
9、此处应该是并列而不是选择，因此用and。
10、as usual是固定搭配，不能用副词。
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During the weekend I travelled by air the first time in my life. I generally travel by train and bus. It is both cheaper and safe. But this was a short journey. In the beginning I didn't feel very happily, but this feeling did not last longer. The journey was very exciting.
I was soon high up in the sky among the cloud. The views of mountains, fields and rivers were interested. I enjoyed my short and comfortably journey very much. This experience has shown that travelling in air is actually the safest way of make journeys
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During the weekend I travelled by air ^the first time in my life. I generally travel by
for
train and bus. It is both cheaper and safe. But this was a short journey. In the beginning or safer
I didn't feel very happily, but this feeling did not last longer. The journey was very
happy long
exciting. I was soon high up in the sky among the cloud. The views of mountains, fields
louds
and rivers were interested. I enjoyed my short and comfortably journey very much. This interesting comfortable
experience has shown that travelling in air is actually the safest way of make journeys.
through Making 【解析】
1、根据句意，应该是固定搭配for the first time.
2、此处表示选择，应该是or非and。
3、此句中应该是eaper and safer。
4、此句中的feel是系动词，所应该是happy。
5、此句中没有比较之意，所以用long而不是longer。
6、此句中的cloud指一片一片的云，应是复数形式。
7、此句是某物令人如何，应该是interesting。
8、此处是定语修饰journey，所以应该用形容词。
9、此处是指“穿过大气层”之意，所以用through。
10、短语中的make是介词of的宾语，应该用making。
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Dear Jim,
I'd like to tell you something more about our school sports meet. It was holding on Oct. 6th, it was a fine day. There were over 1,000 students and teachers attended it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the 100-meters race. He finished the race in 12.6 seconds and broke the school record. The sports meet was really success. That was because we were all trying to do my best. Although I was not one of the winner, I was proud of that we had done.
Looking forward to receive your letter.
Yours, Li Ping
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Dear Jim,
I'd like to tell you something more about our school sports meet. It was holding
去掉more held
on Oct. 6th, it was a fine day. There were over 1,000 students and teachers attended it.
Which attending Wang Lin, a student from my class won the 100-meters race. He finished the race in
100-meter
12.6 seconds and broke the school record. The sports meet was really^ success. That
a
was because we were all trying to do my best. Although I was not one of the winner, I
our winners was proud of that we had done.
what
Looking forward to receive your letter.
receiving
Yours, i Ping
【解析】
1、此句中没有“更多”之意，应去掉more。
2、根据句意应该是被动语态非进行时，所以改holding为held。
3、it was a fine day是非限制性定语从句，改it为which。
4、此处是分词短语作定语，和students and teachers是主动意义，应该是attending。
5、100-meter是和成形容词，其中的名词不能用复数。
6、此句中的success是抽象名词具体化的运用，意思是“一次成功；一件成功的事”，所以
success前应该加a。
7、从主语we可知try one’s best中的one’s应该是our。
8、从I was not one of the winner可知，我是赢者之一，所以应该是winners。
9、that we had done是介词of的宾语，从句中缺宾语，所以改that为what。
10、Looking forward to的to是介词，所以改receive为receiving。
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Dear Mr Ryan,
Recent I have learned from the newspaper that your company need a secretary. I'd like to get the position. I'm a girl of 25 ad I'm 1.65m-height.I graduated the English department of WuHan University but I have worked^ an English teacher for 3 years at the university after graduation. I'm good at computers as well as English. I'm special interested in writing and I've written more than twenty news reports in articles for some newspapers and magazine. I want to be a secretary, so I still practise and improve my
writing. I will appreciate if I am accepted and I will work hard to do my work good for the company. My telephone number is 027-********
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Recent I have learned from the newspaper that your company need a secretary.
Recently needs
I'd like to get the position. I'm a girl of 25 and I'm 1.65m-height.I graduated^ the
from English department of WuHan University but I have worked^ an English teacher for 3
and as
years at the university after graduation. I'm good at computers as well as English. I'm
since
special interested in writing and I've written more than twenty news reports in specially
articles for some newspapers and magazine. I want to be a secretary, so I still practise
magazines
and improve my writing. I will appreciate it. If I am accepted and I will work hard to do
去掉and
my work good for the company. My telephone number is 027-********
well
【解析】
1、Recent在句中是状语，应该是副词。
2、从主语company可知，need应该动词的单数第三人称。
3、根据句意“毕业于……”英文中应该用graduate from。
4、前后两句是顺承关系而不是转折关系，连词应该是and。
5、根据句意“我当一名英语老师”可知应该是worked as。
6、从I have worked as an English teacher for 3 years可知，应该是since graduation而不是
after graduation。
7、从special interested可知，应该是specially副词修饰interested。
8、从or some newspapers and magazine可知，magazine应该是复数。
9、If I am accepted是条件从句，其后的主句前不该有and。
10、此处应该是well作状语修饰do。