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高考英语作文指导
高考英语作文指导

【英语】高考英语高分作文必背:开头,正文,结尾句型

(一)段首句

1. 关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……

There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some people suggest that ____.

2. 俗话说(常言道)……,它是我们前辈的经历,但是,即使在今天,它在许多场合仍然适用。

There is an old saying______. It’s the experience of our forefathers,however,it is correct in many cases even today.

3. 现在,……,它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先,……;其次,……。更为糟糕的是……。

Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harm in our daily life. First, ____ Second,____. What makes things worse is that______.

4. 现在,……很普遍,许多人喜欢……,因为……,另外(而且)……。

Nowadays,it is common to ______. Many people like ______ ,because ______. Besides,______.

5. 任何事物都是有两面性,……也不例外。它既有有利的一面,也有不利的一面。

Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception,it has both advantages and disadvantages.

6. 关于……人们的观点各不相同,一些人认为(说)……,在他们看来,……

People's opinions about ______ vary from person to person. Some people say that ______.To them,_____.

7. 人类正面临着一个严重的问题……,这个问题变得越来越严重。

Man is now facing a big problem ______ which is becoming more and more serious.

8. ……已成为人的关注的热门话题,特别是在年青人当中,将引发激烈的辩论。

______ has become a hot topic among people,especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.

9. ……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用,它给我们带来了许多好处,但同时也引发一些严重的问题。

______ has been playing an increasingly important role in our daily life. it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.

(二)中间段落句

1. 相反,有一些人赞成……,同时,他们认为……。

On the contrary,there are some people in favor of ___,At the same time,they say____.

2. 但是,我认为这不是解决……的好方法,比如……。最糟糕的是……。

But I don’t think it is a very good way to solve ____.For example,____.Worst of all,___.

3. ……对我们国家的发展和建设是必不可少的,(也是)非常重要的。首先,……。而且……,最重要的是……

______is necessary and important to our country’s development and construction. First,______.What’s more, _____.Most important of all,______.

4. 有几个可供我们采纳的方法。首先,我们可以……。

There are several measures for us to adopt. First, we can______

5. 面临……,我们应该采取一系列行之有效的方法来……。一方面……,另一方面,

Confronted with______,we should take a series of effective measures to______. For one thing,______For another,______

6. 早就应该拿出行动了。比如说……,另外……。所有这些方法肯定会……。

It is high time that something was done about it. For example. _____.In addition. _____.All these measures will certainly______.

7. 为什么……?第一个原因是……;第二个原因是……;第三个原因是……。总的来说,……的主要原因是由于……

Why______? The first reason is that ______.The second reason is ______.The third is ______.For all this, the main cause of ______due to ______.

8. 尽管如此,我相信……更有利。

Nonetheless, I believe that ______is more advantageous.

9. 完全同意……这种观点(陈述),主要理由如下:

I fully agree with the statement that ______ because______.

(三)结尾句

1. 至于我,在某种程度上我同意后面的观点,我认为……

As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion to some extent. I think that ____.

2. 总而言之,整个社会应该密切关注……这个问题。只有这样,我们才能在将来……。

In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ______.Only in this way can we ____in the future.

3. 但是,……和……都有它们各自的优势(好处)。例如,……,而……。然而,把这两者相比较,我更倾向于(喜欢)……

But ______and ______have their own advantages. For example, _____, while_____. Comparing this with that, however, I prefer to______.

4. 就我个人而言,我相信……,因此,我坚信美好的未来正等着我们。因为……

Personally, I believe that_____. Consequently, I'm confident that a bright future is awaiting us because______.

5. 随着社会的发展,……。因此,迫切需要……。如果每个人都愿为社会贡献自已的一份力量,这个社会将要变得越来越好。

With the development of society, ______.So it’s urgent and necessary to ____.If every member is willing to contribute himself to the society, it will be better and better.

6. 至于我(对我来说,就我而言),我认为……更合理。只有这样,我们才能……

For my part, I think it is reasonable to_____. Only in this way can we _____.

7. 综上所述,我们可以清楚地得出结论……

From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that____.

8. 如果我们不采取有效的方法,就可能控制不了这种趋势,就会出现一些意想不到的不良后果,所以,我们应该做的是……

If we can not take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly, so what we should do is_____.

以下是短文写作中使用率最高、覆盖面最广的基本句式,每组句式的功能相同或相似,考生可根据自己的情况选择其中的1-2个,做到能够熟练正确地仿写或套用。

1.表示原因

1)There are three reasons for this.

2)The reasons for this are as follows.

3)The reason for this is obvious.

4)The reason for this is not far to seek.

5)The reason for this is that...

6)We have good reason to believe that...

例如:

There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our lif e.Firstly,people’s living standard has been greatly improved.Secondly,most people are well paid,and they can afford what they need or lik e.Last but not least,more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life.注:如考生写第一个句子没有把握,可将其改写成两个句子。如:Great chang es have taken place in our life.There are three reasons for this.这样写可以避免套用中的表达失误。

2.表示好处

1)It has the following advantages.

2)It does us a lot of good.

3)It benefits us quite a lot.

4)It is beneficial to us.

5)It is of great benefit to us.

例如:

Books are like friends.They can help us know the world better,and the y can open our minds and widen our horizons.Therefore,reading exten sively is of great benefit to us.

3.表示坏处

1)It has more disadvantages than advantages.

2)It does us much harm.

3)It is harmful to us.

例如:

However,everything divides into two.Television can also be harmful to us.It can do harm to our health and make us lazy if we spend too muc h time watching television.

4.表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能

1)It is important(necessary,difficult,convenient,possible)for sb.to do sth.

2)We think it necessary to do sth.

3)It plays an important role in our life.

例如:

Computers are now being used everywhere,whether in the government,in schools or in business.Soon,computers will be found in every home,too.We have good reason to say that computers are playing an increasi ngly important role in our life and we have stepped into the Computer A ge.

5.表示措施

1)We should take some effective measures.

2)We should try our best to overcome(conquer)the difficulties.

3)We should do our utmost to do sth.

4)We should solve the problems that we are confronted(faced)with.例如:

The housing problem that we are confronted with is becoming more and more serious.Therefore,we must take some effective measures to sol ve it.

6.表示变化

1)Some changes have taken place in the past five years.

2)A great change will certainly be produced in the world’s communicatio ns.

3)The computer has brought about many changes in education.

例如:

Some changes have taken place in peo ple’s diet in the past five year s.The major reasons for these changes are not difficult to seek.Nowad ays,more and more people are switching from grain to meat for protein,and from fruit and vegetable to milk for vitamins.

7.表示事实、现状

1)We cannot ignore the fact that...

2)No one can deny the fact that...

3)There is no denying the fact that...

4)This is a phenomenon that many people are interested in.

5)However,that’s not the case.

例如:

We cannot ignore the fact that industrialization brings with it the problem s of pollution.To solve these problems,we can start by educating the public about the hazards of pollution.The government should also design stricter laws to promote a cleaner environment.

8.表示比较

1)Compared with A,B...

2)I prefer to read rather than watch TV.

3)There is a striking contrast between them.

例如:

Compared with cars,bicycles have several advantages besides being aff ordable.Firstly,they do not consume natural resources of petroleum.Se condly,they do not cause the pollution problem.Last but not least,they contribute to people’s health by giving them due(适当的)physical exer cise.

9.表示数量

1)It has increased(decreased)from...to...

2)The population in this city has now increased (decreased)to 800,0 00.

3)The output of July in this factory increased by 15%compared with th at of January.

例如:

With the improvement of the living standard,the proportion of people’s i ncome spent on food has decreased while that spent on education has i ncreased.

再如:

From the graph listed above,it can be seen that student use of comput ers has increased from an average of less than two hours per week in 1990 to 20 hours in 2000.

10.表示看法

1)People have(take,adopt,assume)different attitudes towards sth.2)People have different opinions on this problem.

3)People take different views of(on)the question.

4)Some people believe that...Others argue that...

例如:

People have different attitudes towards failure.Some believe that failure l eads to success.

Every failure they experience translates into a greater chance of success at their renewed endeavor.However,others are easily discouraged by failures and put themselves into the category of losers.

再如:

Do lucky numbers really bring good luck?Different people have different views on it.

注:一个段落有时很适宜以问句开始,考生应掌握这一写作方法。

11.表示结论

1)In short,it can be said that ...

2)It may be briefly summed up as follows.

3)From what has been mentioned above,we can come to the conclusi on that ...

例如:

From what has been mentioned above,we can come to the conclusion t hat examination is necessary,however,its method should be improved.注:例句1可用作任何一个段落的结论句,例句3则多用作文章结论段的第一句。

12.套语

1)It’s well known to us that ...

2)As is known to us,...

3)This is a topic that is being widely talked about.

4)From the graph(table,chart)listed above,it can be seen that ...5)As a proverb says,“Where there is a will,there is a way.“

例如:

As is well known to us,it is important for the students to know the worl d outside campus.

The reason for this is obvious.Nowadays,the society is changing and d eveloping rapidly,and the campus is no longer an “ivory tower“.As coll ege students,we must get in touch with the world outside the campus.O nly in this way can we adapt ourselves to the society quickly after we g raduate.

再如:

Does it pay to be honest?This is a topic that is being widely talked ab out and different people have different opinions on it.

【英语】高考英语必备经典句型

1. as soon as…一……就……= directly / immediately / instantly…

= the second / the minute / the moment / the instant…

如:He came around to see me as soon as / the moment/ immediately he ch

ecked in the hotel.

他刚一入住宾馆就来看我.

They informed us the news immediately / directly they got it.

他们一得到消息就通知了我们.

The policeman came to the spot the moment / the instant / the minute s

he heard of the accident.一听说事故,这位警察就到了现场.

2. …before…

(1) 没来得及……就……

The roof fell before he had time to dash into the room to save his baby.

他还没有来得及冲进房间把孩子就出来,房顶就塌了.

He ran off before I could stop him.

To my great disappointment , my favorite singer left the concert before I could have a word with him.

(2) 过了多久才怎么样, 动作进行到什么程度才怎样

They walked about thirty miles to the west before they saw a village.

They worked day and night about three days before everything returned to normal.

Three years passed before I knew it.

3. It was + 时间段+ before… 过了多久才……

It was not long before…不久就…

It will ( not ) be + 时间段+ before …要过多久( 不久)……才……

如:It was not long before he sensed the danger of the position.

It was three years before he came back.

It will be half a year before you graduate from this school.

4. no sooner …than…= hardly…when…一……就……, 刚刚……就……

no sooner / hardly + 过去完成时, than / when + 一般过去时

如果no sooner, hardly 位于句首, 主句要倒装.

He had hardly sat down to have a rest when the door bell rang and in cam e Allan.

No sooner had he got off the train than his daughter ran towards him. Hardly had we arrived when she started crying to go home.

5. once 一旦……, 表示时间和条件

Once you understand this rule, you will have no further difficulty.

Once you have decided to do something, you should do it well.

Once you enter the chemistry lab, you should follow the teacher’s instructio ns.

6. since … 自从……以来

since 引导的从句不论是延续性或非延续性动词, 都表示的是动作或状态的完成或结束.

注意一下句子翻译:

Since he lived in Nanjing, I have not heard from him. (= since he left Nanj ing…)

自从他离开南京以来,我没有收到过他的信.

Since she was in Yangzhou, she has kept in touch with her former friends. ( since she left Yangzhou…)

她离开扬州以来,一直同过去的朋友保持着联系.

对比:

1). I have never seen him since he was ill.

他病好后,我就再也没有见到他.

2). I have never seen him since he fell ill.

他生病以后我就再也没有见过他.

It is / ( has been ) + 时间段+ since + 过去式

It is / has been two years since his father died.

= his father has been dead for two years. = his father died two years ago.

他的父亲去世两年了.

It has been 8 years since I graduated from university.

= I graduated from university 8 years ago.

It is 3 years since he smoked. 他三年不吸烟了.(即,从句动词延续性的,译成否定意义;从句动词非延续性的,译成肯定意义.)

It is 3 years since he left school.-----他毕业三年了.

7….until…直到……时候; not…until…直到……才……

You are to stay here until / till your mother comes back.

The meeting was put off until ten o’clock.

Not until we watched the Earth Day program on TV did we know much ab out global warning.

= We did not know much about global warning until we watched the Earth Day program.

= It was not until we watched the Earth Day program on TV that we knew much about global warming.

Not until he failed in the exam did he realize that he had wasted much tim

e playing computer games.

8. …when…引导并列分句, “当时,突然”, 强调另一动作的突然发生.

One day Chuck was on a flight across the Pacific Ocean when suddenly his plane crashed. Chuck survived the crash and landed on a deserted island.

I was walking along the river when I heard a drowning boy crying for hel

p.

I was about to leave when it began to rain.

对比: A: I was walking along the street when I caught sight of a tailor’s sh op.

B: I was walking along the streets. Just at that moment I caught sight of a tailor’s shop.

9. while = although尽管

While I admit that the problem is difficult, I don’t think that it can’t be sol ved.

While I admit his good points, I can see his shortcomings.

While I was angry with her, I didn’t lose my temper.

10. where 地点状语

You should put the book where it was.

Persistent people begin their success where others end in failure.

Where there is a will, there is a way.

Where men are greedy, there is never peace.

Go where you should, keep on studying.

11. as 引导的行为方式状语从句

Please do exactly as your doctor says.

You must do the exercises just as I show you

As it is = as things are照现在的情形看

He promised to study hard, but as it is , he does no better than before. Leave the house as it is. I’d like to buy it as it is.

12. as if ( as though ) 好像

He looked at me as if I were mad.

He was in great trouble, but he acted if / though nothing had happened. Although they just met for the first time, they talked as if they had been frien ds for many years.

There many black clouds in the sky. It looks as if it is going to rain.

13. though, although, as “虽然”, 引导让步状语从句

Although位于句首; though 位于句首或句中;as位于句中= though = that, 它的词序是把句中强调的形容词,副词,动词或名词放在连词前,注意观察下列句式变化:

Although / Though I’m young, I already know what career I want to follo w.

= Young as / though / that I am, I already know what career I want to foll ow.

Although I respect him very much, I can not agree with his idea.

= Much as / that / though I respect him, I can not agree with his idea. Although / though he is a child, he knows a lot of Chinese characters.

= Child as / though / that he is , he knows a lot of Chinese characters.

Although he tried, he couldn’t solve the problem.

= Try as he might, he couldn’t solve the problem.

Although it is raining, I am going out for a walk.

= Raining as it is, I am going out for a walk.

14. even if = even though 即使……也……; 即便……也……

Even if / though I have to sell my house, I’ll keep my business going. She won’t attend such parties even though/ if she is invited.

You are not stupid. Even though/ if you were slow in study, you shouldn’t gi ve up studies.

The boy was badly injured and died at last. Even if he had been attended without delay,

he couldn’t have been saved.

15. whether… or…不管……还是……

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