2012届高考英语考前冲刺专题精选书面表达
一、题型特点与解题技巧
专题一书面表达的基本要求
一、把握评分标准
高考的评分原则以及评分标准是考生平常进行写作训练的指导原则，是考生在高考时进行写作的规范，也是高考阅卷老师评分给分的一个重要依据和标准。
评分原则：
1、本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。
2、评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。
3、词数少于130和多于170的，从总分中减去2分。
4、评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性。
5、拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
评分档次：
第五档（很好）
24-25 （上档）无大错误或小错1-2处
21-23 （下档） 1-2处大错或3-6处小错
第四档(好)
19-20（上档）遗漏1处次重点，3处大错
16-18（下档）遗漏2处次重点，4处大错
第三档（中）
14-15 （上档）遗漏3处次重点，5处大错
11-13 （下档）遗漏3处次重点，6处大错
第二档（较差）
9-10 遗漏4处次重点，7处大错
6-8 遗漏4处次重点，8处大错
第一档（差）
3-5 只写出与内容相关的句子片断
1-2 只写出与内容相关的个别词句
0 抄或用拼音
二、写作注意事项
1、审题
认真阅读书面表达的试题要求是做好该题的第一步。高考书面表达一般属控制性写作，同时留有一定的自由发挥的空间。因此务必细心审题，覆盖要点，进行合理的想象与扩展，审题时包括考虑应用第几人称、主要时态范畴、文章的结构等。
2、卷面整洁
英语书面表达毕竟是一项主观性试题，评分过程中就会难免有很多主观因素。漂亮而又老道的字体，干净整洁的卷面会使人赏心悦目，无疑会给考生的作文增色不少。因此，考生在写作时要注意书写规范，字母均匀大小适中，字体工整，保持卷面整洁，忌潦草凌乱，乱涂乱改。在阅卷中经常会碰到一些好文章，但是没有得到五档分数，也就是21-25分，原因就在于字迹潦草且书写不规范，多少影响了阅卷人员的判断。但如果遇到很优美的字体，即使文
章写得一般般，阅卷人员也往往会往同一档次的上档分数去打。
3、语言错误（词汇和结构）
考生在书面表达中如果出现太多的语言错误，则会直接影响表达的效果和成绩。在写作时，
考生应该尽可能地减少错误，避免出现汉字、拼音、空格等低级错误，尽量避开自己使用起
来没有把握的单词和句子。如果为了追求句式的变化而出现了一些本来可以避免的错误，就
得不偿失了。在保证准确的前提下，考生才可以考虑句式的变化，应用较多的语法结构。很
多考生因为犯了不该犯的语言错误而降低了书面表达的档次。
阅卷中常常会发现以下几种语言错误：
（1）直译所给材料。直译往往会造成词不达意，因为英语和汉语的表达在很大情况下并不是
一一对应的。（My purpose ….; My ways ….避免这种汉语式的句子最好的做法是：尽量运
用自己比较熟悉的句型、句式，不要直接翻译
（2）句子结构紊乱。很多学生按照汉语思维的习惯直接写,如：I study English is to go to college.
（3）基础语法错误多。写名词时要注意其单复数形式；写谓语时要注意时态，语态及与主语
在人称和数上的一致，等等。最基础的语法是阅卷老师最在乎的，较复杂的语法错误可以原谅，基础语法错误则被看成语言基础薄弱的表现，是大忌。
4、控制篇幅
高考作文评分原则已经明确指出，考生作文词数少于130词和多于170词的，从总分中
减去2分。由此看来，词数不够是要扣分的，而且也并不是词数写得越多就越好。因此，考
生在写作时一定要按照评分原则的要求来完成写作任务，严格控制好词数，严格控制好作文
的篇幅。
5、不留白板
有的考生缺乏自信，认为自己英语学得不好，写作能力差，干脆就放弃不写了，留下白
板一片。根据高考评分原则和标准，我们知道，只要能写出一些和试题要求相关的词和句子，就不至于得零分。考生可以从比较简单的相对有把握的词和句子入手，按照要求写一写，这
样就增加了得分的几率。考生切忌抄前面的完形填空或阅读理解，甚至生搬硬造，写汉语拼音，企图蒙混过关，这样做只会白费笔墨，拿不到分数。
6、开头
好的开篇是文章成功的一半。文章的开篇写作既要引人入胜,又要提供必要的背景知识;既要
点明和切中文章的主题,还要概括和总结全文的内容。所以,写开篇时,作者必须想好从何处说起,再向何处展开。看作文就如同与人打交道一样，第一印象尤为重要。如果第一句话就不规
范或错误很多，阅卷老师在心里很可能把该作文顶在一个很低的档次。即使后面有一两个较
好的句子，也很难改变这个印象，而且，后面的好句子很可能被忽略了，因为阅卷老师可能
太累或类似的试卷看的太多。
7、结尾
开头很好，也必然要有一个精彩的结尾，让读者眼前一亮，这样，你就可以拿高分了!结尾部
分是深化主题,对文章思想的升华,其内容应简洁有力,同时所给观点要有一定的层次感和一
定的深度，从而起到画龙点睛的作用。有的学生词汇贫乏，所用句式单调也无连接词。如： Our English teacher should smile often. She should speak English in class and after class.
8、要有亮点
高级词汇是评分标准中衡量最高档的书面表达的一项重要标准，如能够准确地使用复合句或
使用非谓语动词等会使文章简洁、明快，从而使文章增色不少。其实，要想得高分，必须做到：
1）卷面字体吸引老师
2）有亮点的句子和词汇而且又不落俗套。如：
with the intention of…..
Watching CCTV 9 is also a good way to learn English.
Great emphasis should be placed on the….
attach importance to….
create a good atmosphere
但在作文中使用较高级的语法结构并不是难事。平时多熟悉一种较难的语法结构，比如：主语从句、倒装句、非谓语动词做主语、语气、插入语等，只需在作文中使用上其中一种就可以为文章增添亮点。
9、标点符号要规范，单词拼写要正确
虽然评分标准中提到标点符号属小错，但对那些一“逗”到底的作文，没有哪个老师会有好感的，这自然也在不同程度上决定作文的档次。
错拼单词给阅卷老师留下基础太差的印象。用汉语拼音、汉字或空格代替不会写的单词也是致命伤，如果出现这种情况，再好的作文也要大打折扣。平时加强词汇和句式的背诵和运用。
10、仔细复查
在答题卷上写完书面表达之后，再仔细复查一下是写作中不可缺少的一个重要环节。通过复查，考生可以及时发现由于粗心大意而出现的一些完全可以避免的错误。例如单复数、拼写、搭配、时态、标点符号等方面的错误。这一类错误在复查时很容易发现，也容易改正，这样就进一步提高了书面表达的准确性。
专题二各种文体的书面表达
《考试大纲》要求考生根据所给情景用英语写一篇150个单词左右的短文。情景包括目的、对象、时间、地点、方位、关系、内容、数据等；提供情景的形式如图画、图表、提纲、信函等。
说明：看图作文的“图”不局限于某一类型的图，如漫画、广告，也包括其他图片、照片、图表等情景材料。考生们可根据情景图示的寓意、内容或情节线索，自己组织文字、进行描述、叙述、比较或表达思想观点。作文应覆盖提示的要点，但应避免仅根据提示文字作简单翻译。
二、实战训练
1、议论文
文章体裁是议论文时，考生应该注意它的基本格式：有论点，有论据。自己的观点必须明确，理由充分。时态应该以一般现在时为主，个人观点部分人称是第一人称。常见的开头句有：1.With the rapid development / advance of science and technology, a lot of social problems have come into being.
2. As we all know / As is well known ,…….the following ways are of great help to us.
4. As an old saying goes , “ Honesty is the best policy.”
5. It is said / thought / known /believed / …that reading increases our knowledge and broadens our mind.
【经典导引】（2008浙江）
人们完成工作的方式通常有两种：独立完成与合作完成。两种方式各有特点。
1.独立完成：自行安排、自己解决问题
2.合作完成：一起讨论、相互学习
3.我喜欢的方式及理由
注意：词数100-120，文章的题目和开头已给出（不计词数）
Working Individually or Working in a Team
There are basically two ways to get work done. One is work individually. In this way, people can decide for themselves when to start work and how to do it. What’
s more, they will be able to learn how to solve problems on their own.
People may also choose to work in a team, where they can learn from each other and help each other. Besides, they may work out better ways to get work done by discussion.
Personally, I prefer to work in a team, which offers me a chance to learn how to get along with others and to share my experiences with them. As the work can be divided among several people, it can be done efficiently. Teamwork is always important.
2、说明文
说明类短文用一般现在时完成。文章结构严谨，用词要到位。想要得高分，就应该注意特别句式的应用。
【经典导引】（2009江苏）
鼠标是计算机时代最佳的人机交互工具之一。它极大地方便了人们的计算机操作。但是，过分依赖鼠标的习惯也会带来一些不利影响。请你以鼠标为切入点，根据下表所提示的信息，用英语写一篇短文。
点击、移动、插入、拷贝、删除……
如果过分依赖鼠标…… （请考生结合自身感受，列举两到三点）
1．对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。
2．词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计人总词数。
3．作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer. For most people, it’s almost impossible to operate a computer without a mouse, let alone surf the Internet. A well-chosen mouse is really handy, flexible and convenient in controlling the screen. With the functions of inserting, deleting, moving and copying, it enables us to edit text, browse web pages and download what we want. It can also help us email people, shop online and find friends around the world. A simple click can even bring us a flood of music, movies and PC games. Just imagine, all this can be done with a cute mouse.
A convenient tool can certainly make our work easier, but it doesn’t always help in a positive way. Too much ready information on our fingertips leaves little room for knowledge pursuing. Too many ready answers make us less excited in finding truth. Relying too much on mouse clicking makes us lazier and less creative both mentally and physically.
3、应用文
应用文包括书信、电子邮件、日记、通知、发言稿等。尤其注意书信的书写：
格式和语言：书信常用的标准格式要正确，语言要简练地道。
人称方面：常用第一人称的形式
时态方面：根据文章提示，注意句子中的时态的灵活转换。
【经典导引】（2011全国）
假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心的帮助。根据学校规定，你需要书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信：
1.本人简介
2.求助内容
3.约定时间
4.你的联系方式（Email:Lihua@https://www.doczj.com/doc/7414039695.html,; Phone:12345678
注意：结束语已写好
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university. I’m writing to ask for help. I came here last month and found my courses interesting. But I have some difficulties with note-taking and I have no idea of how to use the library. I was told the Learning Center provides help for students and I’m anxious to get help from you. I have no class on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons. Please let me know which day is OK with you. You may email or phone me. Here are my email address and phone number: Lihua@https://www.doczj.com/doc/7414039695.html,; Phone:12345678
Look forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
4、记叙文
描述事件时要注意时间、地点、人物细节描写的添加，最好使用从句、分词等增添文采；时态、语态的转换；事件描写时注意使用时间状语和副词进行衔接。
【经典导引】（2010浙江）
最近，李越被评为你们班的“每周之星”。请你根据她的事迹（在上周六下午，不顾天气炎热，为班级选够歌咏比赛服装),用英语为班级板报写一篇短文。你的文章应包括下列要点：
1.李越的事迹及其对同学的影响；
2.你的评论
Star Student of the Week
Li Yue has been awarded the title of “Star Student of the Week” for what he did for our class. On the hot afternoon of last Saturday, Li Yue went downtown and walked from one store to another, looking for the costumes we would wear in the singing contest. While the rest of us were enjoying our leisure time in cool and comfortable rooms, she spent the whole afternoon searching and selecting. Finally, she found the right clothes. Deeply moved by her efforts, we tried our best and won the first prize in the contest.
Li Yue is always warm-hearted and cares a lot about the class. Besides, she often devotes her spare time to helping others. She has set a good example for us. Therefore, she deserves the honor and we should learn from her.
5、漫画
漫画作文常包括三个方面：描述漫画、分析现象的原因和后果等、个人观点。
画面描述要形象生动，少用短句，可适当使用分词、从句等复杂结构。开头句常用：
1. In the picture, ……..
2. From the picture, we can see…..
3.Nowadays(….). Let’s look at the picture above.
4.As is vividly shown in the picture, ……
第二段开头句常用：
1.It seems very ridiculous that…Howe ver, this kind of story is performed everywhere.
2.The picture shows that…It is the exact reflection of…
3.The picture indicates that we…Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that…
4.This is a satirical (讽刺的) cartoon which describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon among…
【经典导引】
For most of the parents, it’s no easy job to keep their children away from the PC monitor. Let’s look at the picture above. Two people are standing in front of a computer, whose monitor is wearing underwear. The woman is staring at the computer, thinking while the man is telling him that there are three ways to make the Internet safer for her children---hardware, software and underwear.
It may be ridiculous to cover the PC monitor with someone’s underwear, but it describes vividly parents’ distress and feelings of helplessness when they are faced with the problem. Concerned about their children’s security, some of them just cut off the access to the Internet at home -“the hardware solution”; some choose to use a certain software program to prevent their kids from getting on line –“the software solution”; others may make some rules to limit the time their children spend on the Internet -“the underwear solution”!
From my point of view, this phenomenon calls for the attention of the whole society. On one hand, the government should make laws to censor the Internet and block inappropriate sites, making it a safer place for all teenagers. On the other hand, it is better for parents to give their children a proper guide instead of just prevention. Teenagers need to be taught how to tell and resist bad information consciously. Only in this way can the Internet be made safer for the children. 6、图片
(1)叙事类
注意几个画面之间的联系。事件描写时注意使用时间状语和副词进行衔接。
【经典导引】（2011年北京）
假定你是红星中学高二（1）班的学生李华。下面四幅图描述了近期发生在你们班的一个真实故事，请根据图片的先后顺序，为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文。词数不少于60.
Last Monday, we were having our Chinese class when the teacher suddenly slipped and fell. We were all worried about her. One of the boys carried her on the back, with the help of some others, to the clinic immediately. It turned out that her right leg was broken and she had to stay in the hospital. The following day, we went to visit her with flowers and fruit. Seeing her lying in bed with her leg wrapped in bandages, we felt sorry for her and hoped that she would recover soon. This Thursday she returned to the class on a wheelchair to give us lessons. We were all deeply moved and proud of having such a responsible teacher.
（2）现象类
现象类的图片描述时态常用一般现在时。
【经典导引】（2011年北京）
下面这幅照片展现了女儿为回家妈妈拿包的情景。请根据你对这幅照片的理解用英语写一篇短文。
你的短文应包含以下内容：
1.描述照片内容，如情景、人物、动作，等等；
2.结合自身实际，谈谈你的感想；
3.举例说明你能为家长减负做些什么。
注意：
1.可参照图中文字及下面文章开头所给提示，作必要的发挥想象。
2.词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。
3.作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
The burden of students has been a hot topic for years, but the load of parents has received little attention, especially from their own children. The picture shows
us a touching moment when a little girl comes to greet her working mom. Realizing her mom must be very tired after a day’s work, the girl helps to remove the bag from her shoulder. In response, the mom kneels down to show how happy and thankful she feels.
All this reminds me of my mother who has been doing whatever she could to let me have the best. But, totally engaged in my own study, I seldom pay attention to what mother needs and feels, and always think studying well is the only thing I could do in return. No I know I can do my bit to help with the everyday washing, bedroom cleaning, or at least prepare breakfast myself, so as to share mother’s daily burden. The picture convinces me it is even more important to be a good daughter than a “good”student.
7、图表
图表作文（饼状图、条状图、平面图等）常见的开头有：
The table / chart shows / unfolds that....
As we can see from the table...
As can be seen from the table that...
It can be seen clearly that.....
注意：巧用数据，突出主题，表达时既要包含要点，又不能面面俱到。不可把图表中的内容一点一点地进行清单式的罗列。避免使用相同的句式，选择一些异曲同工的表达法。
常用词汇：rise, increase, decrease, fall, while, but, on the contrary, Compared to/ with, be similar to, be the same as , more than, less than, be different from 【经典导引】
（2006湖北）受某英文报的委托，你最近对高中生的英语阅读兴趣做了一次调查。
调查内容：在新闻、故事、科普、学习方法四种英文文章中，学生最喜欢哪一种
调查范围：湖北省的10所中学
调查对象：高中生
调查人数：1000
调查方式：访谈
调查结果：
Recently a survey has been done to find out the reading interests of senior middle school students. In this survey ,one thousand senior middle school students from ten schools in Hubei Province were interviewed.
They were asked which they liked reading most among the four categories of English articles: news, stories, popular science articles and articles about learning methods.
The survey shows that more than half of the students like to read news most. Twenty-six percent of the students say that English stories are their favorite .Only seven percent of the students are most interested in reading articles about learning methods. However, the member of students who enjoy reading popular science articles doubles that of those who prefer reading articles about learning methods.
【强化训练】
1.伴随着社会的发展，人的“个性”也越来越强。新时期的青少年都愿意追求个性，这种行为对他们的人生发展是利是弊？请结合下表中所给内容，写一篇英语短文，并谈谈你的看法。
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
2.最近，经常有新闻报道发生在青少年身上的交通事故，其场面令人触目惊心。因此，你们班同学对于青少年交通事故的原因及后果进行了一次讨论。请你根据以下内容提示，给某英语报社写一封信，描述讨论结果并针对如何减少该类型交通事故的发生提出你的建议。
注意：1.词数：130-170
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3.下图描绘的是中国当前教育中存在的问题。请你根据对下面这幅漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文，描述一下造成这种现象的原因并发表你的看法。
4.假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom上个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛，你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给Tom写一封电子邮件：
1.询问Tom的生活和学习情况；
2.谈谈你的困难并请Tom帮忙；
3.告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。
注意：1.词数：120-150
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
5. 以下是一本图书的基本信息及相关报道
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[写作内容]
根据以上信息写一篇图书介绍，内容包括：
1.图书的基本信息
2.图书的相关报道
[写作要求]
只能用5个句子表达全部内容
[评分标准]
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯
6. 为纪念汶川大地震三周年，某英文报发起关于灾区新貌的征文活动。请根据以下图片提示，以“Great Changes”为题，用英语写一篇短文应征。内容要点如下：
1.某中学灾后三年来的变化，如教学与活动场所，以及师生精神面貌等；
2.发生变化的原因；
3.你的感想。
注意：
1.短文标题与开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.可根据图片提示适当发挥
3.词数：120左右
Great Changes
I am deeply impressed by the great changes that have taken place in the school over the past three years.
7. 假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李华。你校将于6月26日接待来自于美国某中学的学生访问团。你受学校委托，负责安排在津的一日活动。请根据以下提示，用英语给该团的领队Smith 先生写一封电子邮件，介绍活动计划并简要说明理由，最后征求对方意见。
上午与我校学生座谈（话题如校园生活、文化差异等）；
中午与我校学生共同进餐（午餐包括饺子、面条等）；
下午与我校学生游览海河。
注意：
1. 次数不少于100；
2. 可是当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；
3. 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总次数。
参考词汇：
海河 the Haihe River
Dear Mr Smith
I am Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union, from Chenguang High School. ___________
8.下面图表是对我省某校高三学生选择高考志愿时所考虑因素的调查结果。请用英语写一篇简要的报告，并说说你自己的观点。
注意：（1）文章的开头已经写好。
（2）词数150左右。
（3）可以适当发挥。
参考译文：
1. With the development of society, there are more and more teenagers tending to show their own individuality.
There is no denying that it’s a natural trend for teenagers to develop their individuality in modern society. We should notice that education today pays more and more attention to the individuality development of the students. Also, developing individuality properly is good for teenagers to stand out in their work in the future. However, individuality doesn’t mean being completely free. There are still la ws and rules regulating our behavior, which warns us not to cross the limit. Therefore, individuality should be controlled to a proper extent.
In my opinion, teenage life is an important stage when we develop and improve ourselves. We should spend more time and energy in learning rather than pursuing individuality so that we can meet the challenges in the future. After all, it is not what you look like but what you really master that counts
2.Dear Editor,
I’m writing to tell you about a discussion our classmates had about the causes and effects of traffic accidents involving teenagers.
There is no doubt that both drivers and teenagers are to blame for such traffic accidents. On the one hand, drivers fail to concentrate on their driving or drive above the speed limit. Some drivers even drive after consuming alcohol. On the other hand, teenagers often disobey traffic rules, such as ignoring traffic lights. Also, many teenagers read books or listen to music while walking, which causes traffic accidents.
Some teenagers lose their lives and some are badly hurt and need treatment, which cost them plenty of study time due to traffic accidents. This causes parents to worry. Therefore, in order to reduce traffic accidents, I think the government should force drivers to be more responsible when driving. Furthermore, drivers who break traffic rules should be seriously published. At the same time, teenagers should learn more about road safety and always follow the traffic rules.
3. The two pictures look so similar at one glance, but they are totally different. In the first picture, a peasant boy, carrying a heavy bundle of rice straw hopes to
have a school to attend. In the second picture, a student is on his way home from school, a heavy bag of books on his back. He wishes he didn’t have to go to school any more.
The two pictures show some problems in the present education system in China. In the poor countryside, there are no buildings for classrooms, let alone good teachers. They are sometimes forced to leave school because their families cannot afford the necessary fees. However, although the children in the cities can have regular education, they have to face endless homework, which puts so much pressure on them that some students don’t want to continue their studies.
Therefore, measures should be taken to deal with this problem. For one thing, things must be done to ensure that children in the poor areas can receive education. For another , We should try to reduce the pressure on the students. In a word, the whole society should work together to make some contributions to our education.
4.Dear Tom,
How time flies! It has been a month since you came to Beijing. How is everything going on with your life and study now?
What excited me most is that I will go to Beijing to attend an English speech contest to be held in summer holiday in July for middle school students. But unfortunately, I’m encountering many difficulties in collecting materials needed and I also have problems in the application of the language. I wonder if you can help me with these difficulties. I really appreciate it if you could help me.
Here is good news for you. I’ve decided to go to see you after the English speech contest. I am looking forward to seeing you.
Best wishes to you and your parents!
Yours,
Li Hua
5. A book Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother, whose writer Amy Chua is a Chinese American and professor in Yale University, was published in 2010. In it, the writer described how she brought up her tow daughters in traditional Chinese ways. The publication of the book caused heated discussion about which educational method is better---the Chinese one or the American one. The Chinese version of the book began to be sold in China at the beginning of 2011. Although the majority of Chinese mothers disapproved of what the writer did, the latest news revealed that the 17-year-old elder daughter was already admitted to Harvard University and Yale University respectively.
6. Great Changes
I am deeply impressed by the great changes that have taken place in the school over the past three years.
On May 12, 2008, a severe earthquake destroyed almost everything in the school, leaving badly-damaged buildings. It is now, however, taking on a new look. Tall buildings have been put up, including classroom and laboratory buildings, and a library. There is also a newly-built standard playground. In the new environment, teachers and students are living happily and working hard. It is really amazing that the once-mined place has now been turned into a beautiful school, full of life.
Obviously, without the help of the whole society, there would be no new school today.
It is love and concern that have brought about the great changes. Many hands make light work. We can work wonders if we unite as a family, caring for each other and helping those in need. Union is strength.
7.Dear Mr. Smith,
I am Li Hua, chairman of the student Union, from Chenguang High School .We’re very glad to know you’ll come to our school on June 26th, and now it’s my pleasure to introduce our schedule to you. In the morning, you’ll have a talk with the students of our school. The topic includes school life, the difference between Chinese culture and American culture. Next, we’ll have lunch together at noon and you will eat typical Chinese food, such as jiaozi, noodles. After that, together with us students, you’ll have a trip to the Haihe River in the afternoon. That’s the plan for your visit. If you have any other question, please let me know.
Best wishes to you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
8. Some senior middle school graduates have different opinions on how to choose their majors and universities.
About 35% of the students insist that the choice should be based on their own interest. They say interest is the way leading to success. They think it is a miserable thing to be forced to study what they have no interest in.
The percentage of the students who consider it is the need of the society that matters a lot, is 45%.They say think it will help them find the job they like best. In addition, interest can be developed and changed.
Interestingly, there are about 20% of the students who find it so difficult to make a choice that they prefer to follow the advice offered by their parents or teachers.
In my opinion, interest is the most important of all. Without interest you can’t study the subject very well and may have more difficulty with your career.
高考英语书面表达背诵 范文25篇 -CAL-FENGHAI-(2020YEAR-YICAI)_JINGBIAN
高考英语书面表达背诵范文25篇 ---多背范文，表达加分！！ 书面表达(一) 假定你叫李华，今年六月份将从北京新华中学高三毕业，打算到美国哥伦比亚大学上学。现在请你根据下面表格的个人信息，用英语写一封 注意： 1. 信件必须包括以上内容，不能逐句翻译，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 2. 词数100左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：哥伦比亚大学the University of Columbia 范文 Dear Sir or Madam， I'm writing in the hope that I can obtain a chance to further my study in computer science in your university. First, please allow me to take a brief introduction of myself. I’m Li Hua, a girl born in June, 1993. I’m graduating from Beijing Xinhua High School this coming June with each course excellent. I have a keen interest in computers and the Internet. Besides, I’m good at English. I know th at the University of Columbia ranks among the most famous universities in the USA, and that’s the very reason why I’m now applying to further my university study in your Computer Science Department. I would appreciate it if you could take the trouble to provide me with some information and send me the necessary application materials. By the way, my email address is lihua93@https://www.doczj.com/doc/7414039695.html,. I’m looking forward to your reply. 2
全国各地高考英语书面表达汇总9套 新课标I卷 假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教MS Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。 注意： 1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。 示例1 Dear Ms Jenkins, I'm Li Hua from your English writing class last term. I'm writing to ask for your help. I'm applying for a part-time job at a foreign company in my city during the summer vacation, and I have just completed my application letter and resume. However, I am not quite sure of the language and the format I've used. I know you have a very busy schedule, but I'd be very grateful if you could take some time to go through them and make necessary changes. Please find my application letter and resume in the attachment. Thank you for your kindness! Yours, Li Hua 示例2 Dear Ms Jenkins, I am Li Hua, I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor. In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign
目录 突破2020-2022高考英语专题：书面表达 (1) 第一讲提升英语写作的“三板斧” (3) 第二讲熟练写作的10类体裁 (18) 《突破2020-2022高考英语专题：书面表达》 【高考命题规律】 1.语用目的——讲好中国故事，增强文化自信 高考书面表达的情境设置真实，任务要求符合考生能力水平，又自然融入了我国优秀传统文化的内容，能够引导考生在使用外语了解世界的同时，注重传承和发扬中华民族优秀文明成果，运用中国元素讲好中国故事，增强文化自信。 2.文体形式——以应用文为主，主要考查书信/电子邮件 从近几年高考全国卷来看，书面表达主要考查应用文，其中以电子邮件为主，邀请信、告知信、介绍类书信考查较多，只有2018年全国卷Ⅱ考查了书面通知。电子邮件是生活中最常用的应用文体，近几年来，当仁不让地成为了命题专家的最爱，而这也符合了高考“重考查深度更重考查广度”、“贴近生活”的趋势特点。 3.提示类型——以提纲作文为主，试题的开放性越来越强 近几年高考书面表达主要以提纲作文为主，但提示越来越简洁，试题的开放性逐渐增强。(半)开放性体现在试题既为考生提供了恰当的提示，又留有供其自由发挥的空间，既让低水平的考生有话可写，又让高水平考生有展现自己语言表达能力的机会，保证试卷的区分度。 【掌握备考策略】 ●普通作文VS高分作文——找出差距才能目标明确
●高考书面表达评分细则——各省可能根据情况稍有不同 1.本题满分为25分，按5个档次给分。如果是第四档(16-20分)，那么就给18分。好处是：阅卷教师们“没有风险”，怎么都说得过去。坏处是：低分下不去，高分上不来。 2.评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。 3.词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。 4.评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。 5.评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。 6.如书写较差以致影响交际，可将其分数降低一个档次。 ●书面表达评价表——自我评价与同伴互评 写作训练时，教师评价和修改虽重要，但自我评价和同伴互评效果更佳，可以借鉴下表进行自我评价和同伴互评。
高考英语书面表达经典范文大全（14个类型） Part One: 提纲式作文： 1. 假设你是一名新闻记者，请根据以下表格信息给英语报社写一篇新闻报道。 【参考范文】 The H1N1 flu broke out in Mexico in April this year and it has spread to many countries in the world. To our disappointment, by the afternoon on August 30, 80 confirmed cases of H1N1 flu had been reported in a school in Henan province, resulting in the fact that all the middle schools there had to delay the new term. Fortunately, it is estimated by the experts that the death rate of the H1N1 flu virus is lower than 1%, still lower when compared with that of SARS and bird flu. The best way they give the public to prevent it is to wash hands more often, drink more water and have enough sleep. With the help of our government, we believe that we are able to win the battle against the disease. 【好词好句】 1. To our disappointment, 80 confirmed cases of H1N1 flu had been reported... , resulting in the fact that .... 2. It is estimated by the experts that...when compared with... 2. 据报道中国每年都会发生几十万起交通事故, 许多人都因此而丧生.请针对这一社会问题按以下要点写一篇短文。 1. 描述此社会问题； 2. 造成此状况的主要原因(2至3个原因)； 3. 提出解决的办法（2个） 注意: 1.词数100左右 2.可适当发挥,以使行文连贯 【参考范文】 It is reported that many people lose their lives annually in China, owing to hundreds of thousands of traffic accidents. Several factors account for the serious problem. Firstly, the fast growing number of private cars contribute to heavy traffic jams, making it likely for car accidents to happen. Secondly, drunk driving may be a deadly killer. Thirdly, some drivers ignore the speed limit and drive too fast. Faced with this severe problem, the government should take firm action to decrease the accidents. In my view, it would be a good idea to develop public transportation. Meanwhile, we should appeal to people to follow traffic rules, and get tough with drunk drivers. Only in this way can we create a harmonious world and enjoy a happier life. 【好词好句】
祝贺网友在中国象棋网络赛中获奖 假如你是李华，你的美国网友John参加中国象棋网络挑战赛获得了一等奖。请根据以下提示写一封英文电子邮件向他表示祝贺。 1) 祝贺他获奖； 2) 肯定他付出的努力； 3) 询问何时方便，在网上切磋棋艺。 注意： 1)词数100左右； 2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3)开头和结尾已为你写好。 Dear John, I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations_________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Congratulations again. Yours, Li Hua 【思路点拨】 本文要求写一封信祝贺美国网友John参加中国象棋网络挑战赛获得了一等奖。写作的关键是认真审题和分析所给提纲。要灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的方式将要点完整的表达出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。同时应选用合适的连接词和过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。 【必背范文】 Dear John, I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you on your winning the first prize in the Chinese
●2018年全国卷I 假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件，内容包括： 1. 到达时间； 2. 合适的礼物； 3. 餐桌礼仪。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Terry, How are you doing? In your last letter, you asked me about being a guest to a Chinese friend’s home. Now, I am writ ing to inform you of some relevant details. To begin with, according to our tradition, you are supposed to arrive early, so that you can help the family prepare the dinner, which is meaningful and interesting. Besides, you’d better bring some gifts, like a book or a Chinese knot. What’s more, when you are enjoying the meal, you need to avoid making noises while chewing food. Hopefully, these suggestions would be helpful for you. I have the confidence that you will have a great time. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua ●2018年全国卷II 你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英文短片Growing Together，内容包括： 1. 短片内容：学校的发展； 2. 放映时间、地点； 3. 欢迎对短片提出意见。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Notice In order to have a better understanding of our school, an outstanding English short movie about our school will be shown in the library from 2:30 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th. It is organized by the Student Union. Here are some relevant details about it. To begin with, the name of the movie is Growing Together, which is about the development of our beloved school. As we all expect, it will be not only meaningful but also interesting. What’s more, every one of you will be welcome to take part (participate) in it, enjoying the movie, having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments. The Student Union June 8, 2018●2018年全国卷III 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你校学生体育运动情况。请给他回信，内容包括： 1. 学校的体育场馆； 2. 主要的运动项目； 3. 你喜欢的项目。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Peter,
一书面表达（共35分） 某中学生英文报近期开辟专栏,讨论学习习惯问题。请你结合自身学习实际,按以下提示,用英文为该专栏写一篇稿件。 1.说明学习习惯与学习效果之间的关系; 2.介绍一种好的学习习惯并提出养成该习惯的建议; 3.描述自己在学习习惯方面存在的某个问题并给出改进措施。 注意: 1.词数120左右,开头语已为你写好; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。 It's useful and necessary to discuss learning habits. 【范文赏读】 It's useful and necessary to discuss learning habits. In reality, different students have different learning habits, which I think influence their learning efficiency greatly. Good habits always lead to high efficiency, while bad ones bring the opposite. Some students are good at concentrating on what the teachers teach in class. They think only in this way can they understand and memorize the teaching materials better. If we find those materials interesting, we'll focus our attention on them for long. However, those dull lessons require our determination, self-controlling ability and confidence. My classmates always call me "Mr. forgetful", because I cannot memorize those I have learnt. I know that it is because I don't spend some time in memorizing them after class. My teachers advise me to repeat the materials several times and read them aloud, which they think will help improve my memory. 二书面表达(满分25分) 孩子的成长和教育是社会热议的话题,现今父母包揽一切、孩子过度依赖等现象十分严重。请阅读下面的漫画,按要求用英文写一篇短文。 内容要求: 1.描述漫画内容; 2.分析漫画所揭示的问题; 3.提出你的看法。 注意: 1.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数; 2.考生可适当发挥,使文章内容充实、连贯; 3.词数120左右; 4.文中不能出现考生的具体信息。 参考词汇：铺路pave the way From the picture we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet. 【范文赏读】 From the picture we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet. The son, well dressed, waves proudly in the middle while the father behind bends forward to hold the jacket and the mother in front rolls out the carpet, sweating.
一、假定你是李华,你所在学校要举办英语戏剧节(The English Drama Festival)。你们想邀请外教Peter参加。请你写一封信给Peter,要点如下: 1.英语戏剧节的活动内容; 2.邀请Peter一起表演一个节目; 3.期望Peter对本次活动给出建议。 注意:1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Dear Peter, The English Drama Festival of our school is to be held next week. Yours sincerely, Li Hua Dear Peter, The English Drama Festival of our school is to be held next week.Knowing that you are interested in English drama,I am writing to invite you to participate. A variety of activities will be included in the festival,such as singing,crosstalk and so on.You are expected to put on a performance with us.In my opinion,it will be a good combination of your culture and ours.Besides,since it is the first time that we have organized the English Drama Festival,we are at a loss about how to arrange it properly.Your advice will be of great value to us.Please inform us of your arrival in advance so that early arrangements can be made. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 二、假定你是武汉晨光中学的李华,你的澳大利亚笔友Mark最近给你发来邮件,说他准备参加武汉12月31日举办的冬季马拉松比赛(marathon race),希望你帮助他预订好旅馆,并带他游览市内著名景点(如黄鹤楼the Yellow Crane Tower,东湖East Lake)。请你给他写封回信,内容包括: 1.回复他的要求;
高三英语复习---书面表达高分技巧（20120307） By Zhang Shiqin Teaching aims: we are trying to teach sts how to write a good composition, or how to make a composition better so as to get a good mark in an examination especially in the National College Entrance Examination. Teaching Procedures: Step 1高考英语书面表达高分卷常识 一．高考英语书面表达题材特点、体裁特点及出题模式： 1. 题材特点：紧扣课标，教材和考试说明； 贴近现实生活和学生生活实际，易于表达； 突出考查学生实际运用语言的能力。 2.体裁特点：利用各种体裁，以应用文（致辞、发言稿、记叙文、议论文）为主。 3.出题模式：叙事+ 议论，写人+ 议论 二．近年高考英语写作高分卷的五大特点： 1.行文逻辑科学，条理性好； 2.巧用过渡词汇，逻辑性强； 3.巧用高级词汇和复杂句式，文章品味高； 4.妙用变通式表达，文章错落有致； 5.书写规范工整，整体效果好。 三．英语写作高分卷的七大原则、八项注意︰ 七大原则八项注意 主题句原则注意审题 一二三原则注意人称 分段原则注意时态 长短句结合原则注意巧用连接词 多实少虚原则禁用汉式英语 短语优先原则注意书写 词句多变原则注意用有把握的词句 注意检查 四．高分卷书面表达段落的核心要素︰ 1. General structure Topic sentence Supporting sentences Concluding sentence 2. Linking words 3. Advanced expressions Various structures Graceful words Step 2怎样写出高分作文 一．仔细审题Analyze the topic carefully
高考英语书面表达背诵文25篇 ---多背文，表达加分！！ 书面表达(一) 假定你叫华，今年六月份将从北京新华中学高三毕业，打算到美国哥伦比亚大学上学。现在请你根据下面表格的个人信息，用英语写一封信，申请 注意： 1. 信件必须包括以上容，不能逐句翻译，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 2. 词数100左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：哥伦比亚大学the University of Columbia 文 Dear Sir or Madam， I'm writing in the hope that I can obtain a chance to further my study in computer science in your university. First, please allow me to take a brief introduction of myself. I’m Li Hua, a girl born in June, 1993. I’m graduating from Beijing Xinhua High School this coming June with each course excellent. I have a keen interest in computers and the Internet. Besides, I’m good at English. I know that the University of Columbia ranks among the most famous universities in the USA, and that’s the very reason why I’m now applying to further my university study in your Computer Science Department. I would appreciate it if you could take the trouble to provide me with some information and send me the necessary application materials. By the way, my email address is lihua93@sina.. I’m looking forward to your reply.
高考英语书面表达必备6 1.【浙江省学军中学高三上学期第四次月考英语试题】 假如你是高三的学生，最近你就高三模拟考试该偏难还是该偏易这个问题进行了一次调查。请结合下表内容，用英语写一篇短文，介绍有关调查情况，并发表自己的看法。 注意：1．词数120左右，开头已为你写好（不计入总词数）； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Recently I have made an investigation on whether a model-test paper for Senior Three should be difficult or easy．Opinions are divided on this matter． 答案： Recently I have made an investigation on whether a model-test paper for Senior Three should be difficult or easy．Opinions are divided on this matter． Some students think that a difficult exam is just like a challenge．The harder, the better．It can help students find out where they are weak in studies and improve their learning approaches. Others，however，are against a difficult exam．In their opinion，if it is very difficult，they may become discouraged and feel terrible about the coming College Entrance Examination．Besides，with an easy exam，they can get high marks and gain confidence． I prefer it to be neither too difficult nor too easy, because if it is too easy, teachers will not know how we are actually getting on with our studies, and if it is too difficult, we will lose heart 2.【浙江省宁波效实中学高三上学期期中考试英语试题】 假如你是来自美国的Peter，在中国留学期间，经常在马路上看到一些人不遵守交通规则，于是向某报社写信反映此情况，内容如下： 1．部分行人过马路时慢慢悠悠或攀爬护栏； 2．某些骑自行车的人擅闯红灯；
2019高考英语写作专题（6）（感谢信）含参考范文 06感谢信 模板① Dear ________(对象), I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for________________________________(感谢的原 因). If it had not been for your assistance in________________________________(对方给你的具体 帮助), I fear that I would have been________________________________(没有对方帮助会产生的后果). Everyone agrees that it was you who ________________________________(给出细节). Again, I would like to express my sincere thanks to you. Please accept my sincere thanks. Yours Sincerely, Li Hua 模板② Dear ______, How about you r life/ study/ work? I’m writing to express my thanks for your _____(感谢 的原因). If it had not been your assistance in _____(对方给你的具体帮助), I fear that I would have been_____ (没有对方帮助时的后果). During the ______, you gave me generous help and continuous guidance by _____. First, you _____.What’s mo re, you ______. There is still one thing that I can’t forget. That is _______. (原因) Thanks a lot for your kindness again. (再次致谢) Give my best regards to ______. (祝愿) Yours sincerely _______ 感谢信是用于致谢他人的馈赠、款待、帮助、以及对慰问信和祝贺信的回复。信件不适宜过长，只 需写明感谢他人的理由，信文要感情真挚，措辞得体。 感谢信一般分为三个部分： 第一段：表达感谢之情并说明原因；
高考英语书面表达试题及范文 假设你是李华，申请到一家外资企业工作。对方要求你用英语写一篇短文，介绍自己的基本情况。 注意：1. 情况介绍必须采用短文形式； 2. 词数100个左右。 One possible version: My name is Li Hua. I was born in Dalian, Liaoning province in February 1977. I started school in 1984 when I was seven. I studied in Guangming Primary School from 1984 to 1990. After that I went to No.62 Middle School of Dalian and graduated this summer. The main subjects I studied at school included Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer. I like English and computer best and I am very good at them. Last year I won first prize in the school computer competition. In my spare time I enjoy listening to popular music and collecting stamps. My favourite sports are swimming in summer and skating in winter. 下列图画描述的是你的一段亲身经历，请据此为一家中学生英文报的故事专栏写一篇短文。 注意：1. 短文必须包括图画所表现的主要内容，可以适当增减细节，使其连贯、完整； 2. 叙述必须用第一人称； 3. 词数100左右。生词：违章者－－offender n. 十字路口－－crossroads n. One possible version: The other day my brother and I went to the cinema by bicycle. My brother was riding with me sitting on the seat behind. As we came to the crossroads a young man and a girl came up a nd stopped us. “We've found you at long last,” they said. But we didn't know them. Pointing to a policeman not far away, the young man explained, “He stopped us about half an hour ago and made us catch the next offender. So come on, stand here. Hope you don't have to wait as long as we did. Good luck.”
that_____________（给出原因）. I___________ , so I _____________（给出细节）.I would to request ___________（提出进一步的要求）. I am sorry for any inconvenience I caused. Thank you for your attention to these requests. If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me at __________（电话号码）. I look forward to a favorable reply. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 模板② Dear________, My name is _______________(自我介绍). I’m writing a letter to you to ask for some help. have met difficulty in _______________(求助内容). First, I find ___________(困难Besides, ________(困难2). What’s more, __________(困难3). Faced with so much difficulty, I have to ask you for some help. Would you like ____________(委婉提出请求)？In the meanwhile, I beg you to (请求内容) so that ___________(
标准文案 1.高中英语作文大全之高中英语书面表达常用连接词短语总结 大全． 标准文案1.如下1.as follows as follows.我的建议如下。My suggestions are 2. 2.赞成be for it for the idea. Sixty percent of my schoolmates are 我的同学中有百分之六十赞成这个主意。be in favor of 赞成，支持in favor of it Personally q32995085I am not 我个人并不赞成。 3.be against 3.反对against a difficult exam. Others, however, are 但是，其他人反对考试题难。don 和某人意见不一致't agree with sb. agreewith them.t quite 坦白地说，我不同意他们的看法。Frankly speaking, I don'4.on (the) hand, on the other hand 4.一方面……，另一方面……On the one hand, the government should enforce laws strictly. 一方面，政府应严格执法。另一方面大众也应该养成减On the other hand, the public also should develop the good 少污染的好习惯。habit of reducing pollution. 5.5.For one thing, …; for another…一方面因为……；另一方面因为……. For one m concerned, I prefer to work individually. As far as I就我而言，我喜欢一个人工作。一方面，我不喜欢受严'thing For t like following strict rules and regulations., I don'格
书面表达专题练习——祝贺信 袁道铁 一.文体概述: 祝贺信是指在日常生活中，得知同学或朋友竞赛获奖、考上大学、结婚、过新年或重大节日等，给对方祝贺的信件。书写时应做到真诚、自然、亲切动人。祝贺信通常包括以下内容：祝贺事由→所取得的成绩→被祝贺人过去的努力→被祝贺人的优点→表达自己的愿望。 二.具体写作步骤： 1. Use the word "congratulations" early in your letter.? 2. Mention the reason why you congratulate someone, such as graduation, promotion, honor, baby. 3. Tell how happy, pleased, proud or impressed you are and why. 4. If necessary, tell how you learned about the good news. If you read it the newspaper, enclose the clipping or photocopy of it. your letter with wishes for the person or expressions of your confidence: wish the person continued success and happiness; express your confidence in a bright future; assure the person of your love, affection, admiration, warmth, interest, delight, pleasure or continued business support. : cause；what and when；best wishes.