托福北美 09919 独立写作范文
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模板It rarely surprises us anymore that a great many people have been immersed into the trend of … Hordes of people, more often than not, tend to believe…, for the simple reason that… Perhaps there is an element of truth in their argument, yet I, without hesitation, still advocate that…Indeed, …does boast certain advantages. First, …, because… Second, if…, …, thereby... However, those advantages are likely to be over-exaggerate. Questionnaires from all over the world show, surprisingly, that there are countless people who, ever since their childhood, have associated… with… To their dismay, nevertheless, what they have in fact found is that… will benefit us in more ways than one.First and foremost…(一个概括性的大的理由,接下来说三个包含在大理由中小的理由).To start with,…For example,… Besides,…For instance… In addition,… Thus, it is widely acknowledge that … will definitely prove to be a wise choice.…never fails to fascinate us. …(进一步解释一句). A typical case concerns my cousin, Tom, who… after… Tom, initially, used to be …, making him feel sad and disappointed all the time. Later on, he…by…, an event which radically changed his life. At last, Tom successfully… and even…, therefore achieving a real sense of happiness and self-satisfaction. Consequently, it is fairly clear that … is essential to our life.In conclusion, …of course, can be set aside, with a pang of regret, perhaps, but with no sense of permanent loss.模板结构分析及例子开头段It rarely surprises us anymore that a g reat many people have been immersed into the trend of … Hordes of people, more often than not, tend to believe that…, for the simple reason that… Perhaps there is an element of truth in their argument, yet I, without hesitation, still advocate that…让步段In deed,… does boast certain advantages (there are some advantages if…). First, …, because… Second, if…, …, thereby doing. (eg. Admittedly, living in the country dose boast a few merits. First, we can reduce the chance of unhealthy life environment-wise, because there are relatively less sources of pollution, such as factories or large transportations. Second, if we choose to live in rural areas, we are bound to relieve our pressure and enjoy ease and comfort, thereby maintaining mental health in some sense.) However, there advantages tend to be over-exaggerated. Questionnaires form around the world show, surprisingly, that there are countless people who, ever since their early years, have associated … with … To their dismay, nevertheless, what they have in fac t found is that… will benefit us in more ways than one.列举段Eg1. First and foremost, building a factory is likely to generate pollution of various sorts. To start with, a factory tends to bring air pollution. For example, factories will exhaust fumes and toxic gases into the air, which contributes a great deal to lung diseases, such as pneumonia and even lung cancer. Besides, factories are inclined to cause the pollution of water. For instance, the factory will dump wastes into nearby rivers, which serve as main source of drinking water for the residents. Last but not least. Constructing a factory will, to a great extent, give rise to disgusting noise, which turns out to be extraordinarily annoying to local people and to surrounding communities alike. Thus, it is widely acknowledges that building a factory near our community may not prove to be a wise choice.Eg2. To start with, living in the city tends to bring convenience of transport, which proves to be extremely useful to city dwellers. For example, cities boast will-improved traffic system and various transportations, such as trains, trams, and buses. Besides, life in the city is inclined to offer us a convenient shopping tour, For instance, in the urban areas are located a large number of shopping center, such as department stores, shopping malls, and plazas, which can, without doubt, satisfy our material pursuits for basic daily needs. Last but not least, residing in the city will, to a great extent, lead to convenience joyful entertainment leisure hours, which turns out to be extraordinarily necessary for people to relieve their pressures and pain. Thus, it is widely acknowledged that living in the city will definitely prove to be a wise choice.一般段Eg. Acquiring knowledge from the university never fails to fascinate us. We, the ambitious young people, go to university, especially those with suitably qualified professors and sophisticated facilities, to acquire knowledge, such as advanced mathematics, applied physics, and biochemistry. Eg. Atypical case concerns my cousin, Linda, who was accepted into Yale University after conquering English. John, initially, used to be extremely poor at English, making him feel sad and depressed all the time. Later on, he tried to improve his English by talking classed taught by Prof. John, an event which radically changed his life. At last, John successfully mastered English and even got admitted into Yale University to further his study, therefore achieving a real sense of happiness and self-satisfaction. Consequently, it is fairly clear that English is essential to our life.结尾段In conclusion, …, of course, can be set aside, with a pang of regret, perhaps, but with no sense of permanent loss.样文(我练习的时候自己写的,估计得分可能27+)1. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teaching is harder than it was in the past.It never surprises us anymore that a great many people have been immersed into the trend of worrying about the difficult of teaching recently. Hordes of people, more often than not, are likely to believe that teaching is harder than it was in the past, for a simple reason that academic subjects, such as applied physics and biochemistry, are harder to understand than they were. Perhaps there is an element of truth in their argument, yet I, without hesitation, still advocate that teaching is easier than it was in the past.Indeed, there are certain possibilities that make teaching harder. First, students now usually lack self-control, because they are often addicted to computer games, thereby making teachers feel more difficult to teach them. Second, it is difficult for teachers to build relationship with students, because modern students, in some sense, have their own ideas, which sometimes conflict with teachers’. However, those possibilities tend to be over-exaggerated. Questionnaires from around the world show, surprisingly, that there are countless people who, ever since their childhood, have associated modern teaching with disappointment. To their dismay, what they have in fact found is that teaching is easier nowadays.First and foremost, a variety of advanced teaching equipment allows teaching to become easy for teachers and students. To start with, teachers could use new software to demonstrate sophisticated math problems for students. For example, math models and functions could be illustrate by simple graphs in the software, which make it easier to understand difficult problems. Besides, there is a lot of useful biology experiment equipment in school laboratory, which past schools could not afford to buy. For instance, teachers could use agar plates to show microorganisms to students, making teaching become vivid. Furthermore, modern schools always have a great many computer labs, which allowed students to use computer free to finish their academic projects with less efforts. Thus, it is quite clear that teaching is easier than it was in the past.Intelligent professor in the modern school never fails to fascinate us. Professor nowadays tend to have more useful expertise than they did in the past.A typical case concern my cousin, Tom, who successfully mastered applied physics after he learned from a professor. Tom, initially, used to be bad at physics, which makes him feel sad and depress. Later on, he try to study applied physics by attending lectures taught by a famous professor, an event radically changed his life. Finally, he mastered applied physics and even more, he is going to become a researcher in this field, achieving a real sense of happiness. Consequently, it is widely acknowledge that it is easier for teaching recently.To sum up, teaching is becoming more and more easy recently. The perspective of hard teaching, of course, can be set aside, with a pang of regret, but with no sense of permanent loss.2. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to take a secure job with a low pay than to take a job with high pay but is easy to loss.It never surprises us anymore that a great many people have been immersed into the trend of wanting to have a secure job. Hordes of people, more often than not, are likely to believe that a secure job with a low pay is far more better than a high pay job but easy to lose, for a simple reason that no one want to be under employment pressure. Perhaps, there is an element of truth in their argument, yet I, without hesitation, still advocate that it is better to take a job with high pay than to take a secure job with a low pay.Indeed, having a secure job does boast certain benefits. First, we have a regular income and a peaceful life, because we do not need to worry about losing job. Second, although the salary is not high, we could save money and at last it will become a great bill of money. However those advantages tend to be over-exaggerated. Questionnaires from around the world show, surprisingly, that there are countless people who, ever since their childhood, have associated secure jobs with bright career. To their dismay, what they have in fact found is that a job with high pay will benefit us in more ways than one.First and foremost, a job with high pay allows us to having a high quality life. To start with, we could use the money we earned to buy whatever we like, such as fashion clothes, delicious food and interesting toys. For example, we could go to the biggest shopping center with friends and spend a lovely afternoon there. Besides, high paid job ensure us have money to pay huge tuition fee for our children, since tuition fee for college has becoming more and more expensive. For instance, we could send our children to the best school without concern about financial problem. Furthermore, if I had a high paid job, I could travel around the world and have an international view, thereby opening my eyes and getting awareness of international affairs. Thus, it is fairly clear that having a job with high pay is better than having a job with low pay.Working efficiency motivated by high-paid job never fails to fascinate us. If we have a high-paid job, we would feel having a huge responsibility and never be lazy with our work. A typical case concern my cousin, Tom, who worked efficiently after getting a high-paid job. Tom, initially, used to have a secure but low-paid job, making him sad and lazy. Later on, he find a job with high paid by applying for an international company, an event radically changed his life. Finally,he successfully does well in his job and even became a manager, therefore achieving a real sense of happiness and self-satisfaction. Consequently, it is widely acknowledge that taking a job with high pay is a wise choice.To sum up, a job with high paid may be easy to lose, but it never disappoint us. A secure job, of course, can be set aside, with a pang of regret, but with no sense of permanent loss.3. Agree or disagree: Visiting the museum is the best way to learn about a country.It never surprises us anymore that a great many people have immersed into the trend of arguing that museum could do nothing about getting acknowledged about a country. Hordes of people, more often than not, tend to insist that learning about a country from a museum is not comprehensive, for a simple reason that the things displayed in museum always lack of updating and do not reflect the recent news of a country. Perhaps, there is an element of truth in their argument, yet I, without hesitation, still advocate that visiting the museum is the best way to learn about a country.Indeed, other ways do boast certain advantages. First, we can learn about a country by talking with native people, because most native people, especially some senior citizens, have a good understanding of their country. Second, if we want to learn about a country, we can surf the Internet, which contains a lot of news and information. However, those advantages tend to be over-exaggerated. Questionnaires from around the world show, surprisingly, that there are countless people, ever since their childhood, have associated museum with boring things. To their dismay, what they have in fact found is that learning a country by visiting museum can benefit us in more ways than one.First and foremost, we could learn a variety of information about a country in its national museum. To start with, we could learn t he country’s advanced science in the science part of the museum. For example, the science part of the national museum in my country have a plenty of sophisticated facilities, such as spacecraft and robots, which, to a great extent, show the development of science in our country. Besides, we could learn history of a country in the history part of a museum, therefor having a good understanding of the country’s history. For instance, the history of a country is always displayed in a vivid way in the museum. We could learn history by watching 3D movies, reading electronic book and listen demonstrator’s explanations, which could help us understand the country’s history without feeling boring. Furthermore, we could learn culture of the country in the museum, thereby understanding the society and the tradition ofthe country. Thus, it is widely acknowledged that learning about a country by visiting museum is a wise choice.Learning a country by visiting museum never fails to fascinate us. A typical case concern my foreign friend, Tom, who had a better understanding of my country after having tens of times visiting museum. Tom, initially, used to have little understand of my country, making him feel sad. Later on, followed my suggestion, he tried to understand my country by visiting museum every day, an event radically changed his life. Finally, he understand the history, culture and science of my country and even have no problem with communication with native people, thereby achieving a real sense of happiness. Consequently, it is clear that visiting the museum is a good way to learn a country.To sum up, visiting museum is self-proved to be the best way of learning a country. Other ways, of course, can be set aside, with a pang of regret, but with no sense of permanent loss.写作理由:TM streec $即想理由可以从以下几个方面Team and trustMind and skillsSocialization and competitionTenacity(毅力) and pressureRights and responsibilityEnvironment and healthEmployment and efficiencyCulture and traditionMoney and enjoyment。
托福Independent Writing范文5篇(中英双语)第一篇:以下是一篇关于环保主题的托福Independent Writing范文。
题目(Topic):Some people believe that the best way to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. Others think that there are better ways to achieve this goal. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.范文(Essay):英文版(English Version):In my opinion, increasing the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles is an effective way to address environmental problems. Higher fuel prices can encourage people to use public transportation, carpool, or even consider alternative methods of commuting, which can significantly reduce carbon emissions and alleviate environmental damage.Firstly, raising the cost of fuel makes public transportation a more appealing option. When fuel prices are high, people are more likely to choose buses, trains, or subways for their daily commute. This increased usage of public transportation not only reduces traffic congestion but also decreases the overall carbon footprint of a community.Secondly, higher fuel prices can promote carpooling among commuters. Carpooling allows multiple individuals to share a ride in onevehicle, thereby reducing the number of cars on the road. Fewer cars mean less pollution and reduced consumption of fossil fuels, leading to a healthier environment.Additionally, expensive fuel can drive innovation and adoption of eco-friendly vehicles, such as electric cars and hybrids. As fuel prices rise, the demand for fuel-efficient and electric vehicles increases, prompting automobile manufacturers to invest more in environmentally friendly technologies. This shift towards cleaner transportation options is crucialin combating environmental problems caused by traditionalgasoline-powered vehicles.中文版(Chinese Version):在我看来,提高汽车燃料和其他交通工具的成本是解决环境问题的有效途径。
2019年9月10日11日托福独立写作小范围预测 2016年9月10日/11日托福独立写作预测(共18套)1. It is better to relax by watching TV or reading a book than by doing physical exercises.I disagreel Physical exercise contributes to people’s health.(运动不但能够使得精神放松,还能够锻炼肌肉,使身体更增强壮,增强免疫力,抵御各种疾病,这是一举两得的事情)l Physical exercise helps people develop the spirit of cooperation. (很多体育运动如篮球、足球都是需要团队合作)l Doing physical exercise offers opportunity to make more friends. (运动场上能够遇到更多的人,和他们一起分享欢乐)2. We should state our honest opinions even though people may disagree with us.I agreel In family life, honest opinions can help family members avoid misunderstandings and conflicts. (表达真实的观点能够让家人知道自己真正的想法和诉求)l At work, honest opinions can help workers improve their work efficiency. (不同的意见反而有助于发现问题,即时解决问题;个人的观点总是有局限性的)3. When making major purchase (for example, car or laptop), our decisions can be influenced by different sources of information. Explain how each of the following sources of information can influence your decision.l Recommendations from friends or colleaguesl Information from media (for example, TV, magazines, newspapers)l Recommendations from sales person in the storel The least useful of these three sources is recommendations from salespeople.(他们往往为了推销自己的产品而不说实话,往往会夸大产品的性能,并且给消费者带来一些误导;一些推销员自己都不是非常了解这些产品,所以消费者很难得到非常有效的信息)l Information from media can help people have a good understanding of what they are going to buy.(媒体广告信息是官方发布的一些信息,虽然可能会有一些夸大,但毕竟会受到法律的约束,基本还是能够提供绝大部分重要的信息,通过这些信息,消费者能够了解产品的参数以及一些相关的性能)l Recommendations from friends or colleagues are more accurate and reliable.(这些建议是使用者的真实反馈,能够作为自己购买的重要参考;而且自己身边人通过自己的使用而给出的评价更贴合实际,也更加可靠)4. In the past, people were more interested in improving their neighborhoods than they are today.l More people have access to higher education and thus are aware of the importance of improving their neighborhoods. (人们接受高等教育后素质得到很大的提升,能够理解自己是社区的一份子,应该为社区做出一份贡献)l The Internet provides adequate useful information for people to know how to improve their neighborhoods. (网上会有很多世界各地人们改善社区的例子,会给现在的人们带来灵感和动力)5. In the past young people depended on their parents for making decisions. Today young people are better able to make decisions on their own.l Parents now attach more importance to cultivating children's ability to think independently. (因为现代社会竞争激烈,为了培养孩子们未来生活的水平,家长意识到从小就应该培养孩子独立思考和做决策的水平)l More people get higher education and they have the ability to make their own decisions.(与过去的年轻人相比,现在的年轻人接受了更多的优质教育,他们的知识储备能够协助他们根据具体的情况去做出相关的决定,而且这比不了解他们的父母所做出的决定更有效)l Rapid development of Internet makes it easier for young people to gather information to make decisions.(年轻人能够在互联网上找到相关的资料和信息,结合自己的情况做出相关的决定)6. Teaching is harder than it was in the past.I disagreel The development of multimedia technology makes teaching easier nowadays.(教师能够利用各种多媒体教学工具实行辅助教学,各种视频和音频不但能够使课堂变得更加生动有趣,而且能够协助学生更好地理解相关的知识)l More parents attach much importance to education and become cooperative.(随着社会竞争的持续激烈,更多的家长想通过优质教育使得自己的孩子在未来的工作中有一定的竞争力,所以家长会更重视孩子的教育培养,并且积极配合教师的相关教学工作)l People have more sense of studying well nowadays.(在现代社会中,知识决定着人们的社会地位,为了更好地生活,各个年龄。
托福独立写作开头模板(必备5篇)1.托福独立写作开头模板第1篇稳妥写法:先复述原题再引出观点题目:"We shape our buildings and afterwards our buildings shape ”模板:I believe this statement should be interpreted broadly—to mean that we are influenced by the exterior shape of buildings, as well as by the arrangement of multiple buildings and by a building’s various architectural and aesthetic While I doubt that buildings determine our character or basic personality traits, I agree that they can greatly influence our attitudes, moods, and even life点评:这种写法比起直接开门见山亮观点的写法来说可能更加稳妥一些,毕竟先简单复述题目再表达自己观点是托福官方指南OG中比较推荐的开头写法。
而且无论考生对题目观点是否赞同,对题目复述之后进行适当的让步再亮出观点也是一种比较委婉的表述方式。
当然这种写法需要注意不能引用太多原题,而且不能照搬需要用自己的话来适当改动一下。
这其中的度大家需要把握好,否则反而会引起一些不必要的扣分。
2.托福独立写作开头模板第2篇11、Recently, ______________ has become the focus of the society, and in this People swarm to12、______________ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day It has brought us a lot of benefits but created some serious problems as13、Man is now facing a big problem-______________, which is becoming more and more First, ______________ second,14、Nowadays more and more people are beginning to be aware of the seriousness of15、It is only during the last years that man has become generally aware that3.托福独立写作开头模板第3篇6、Everything has two sides and ______________ is not an exception, it has both advantages and7、For years ______________ had been viewed as But people are taking a fresh look at it8、It has stipulated by the government that To this stipulation, many people respond actively because9、______________ is a common occurrence in our daily Whatever we do,______________ can't be10、______________ has become a hot topic among people, especially among the young, and heated debates are right on their4.托福独立写作开头模板第4篇近三年的机经表明,托福写作的出题模式已趋向于单一且固定,即Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: 面对这样的题目,你可以有三种选择,同意,不同意,不置可否。
09年1月写作1月10日1. 综合部分:Reading说是Jane Austin的全身像因为:1)她family这样声称,2)跟她妹妹画的amateurish画像很像,3)时代是对的;Lecture 反驳:1)她family也没有见到过活的Jane,2)她家很多姊妹,全身像跟她一个外甥女marry很像,3)画上的canvas标的商人在那个时候还没做canvas生意呢。
2. 独立部分:说公共交通该不该收费,我说的不应该。
理由一是免费了,大家就能多用公共交通,可以减少交通堵塞,二是改善环境,三是社会和谐,人们更开心更健康。
People should not pay for the public transportation. Do you agree or disagree?1月18日1.综合写作:easter island的居民是从南美过去的。
三个理由:A 南美居民当年完全可以乘坐raft,借助风力和技巧到达该岛。
B 岛上发现的一个stone wall 和南美wall结构一样,肯定是南美人的技术。
C 一些植物是南美的品种,必为人带来听力一一驳斥:A 没有直接证据 B 岛上的wall中空,其实结构很简单 C 那些植物可以自己随sea water漂过来。
3 F6 I r1 g" r2. 独立写作:agree or disagree: It is important for families to regularly eat their meals together.1月23日北美section 1侏罗纪时代的生物灭绝了,文章说可能是因为彗星撞地球,依据就是一些发现的古老的生物还是什么的碎片,然后它们可以dating back to XXX年以前,并且在中国,日本还有某个国家都有发现,然后发现某个沟壑还是海峡有可能就是那个坑speech说第一那些碎片的化学物质没有因为地壳运动受热而改变,所以时间应该很短,应该没有250-million-old这么老第二碎片只在那三个国家被发现过,如果冲击力那么强的话,那碎片应该是散落在全世界的,第三,类似那个坑的坑到处都是,火山运动也会是造成沟壑的原因,该是地球内部地质活动形成的section2 Do you think that young people should take several different kinds of job before they take a career in a long term?[独立作文另一版本:young people should try different job before they decide which job or career they will do in the long term ]2009年2月之写作2月14日1.综合写作:一种现象叫做colony collapse disorder(CCD),就是bee忽然死掉很多,然后找不到尸体。
托福独立范文In today's globalized world, learning a foreign language has become increasingly important. Among the various language proficiency tests, the Test of English as a Foreign Language (TOEFL) is widely recognized and accepted by universities and institutions around the world. In this essay, we will discuss the significance of the TOEFL test and how it can benefit individuals in their academic and professional pursuits.First and foremost, the TOEFL test plays a crucial role in assessing an individual's English language proficiency. This test evaluates the test taker's ability to understand and use English in an academic setting, which is essential for success in university courses conducted in English. By taking the TOEFL test, individuals can demonstrate their language skills to universities and employers, thereby increasing their opportunities for academic and career advancement.Moreover, the TOEFL test provides a standardized measure of English language proficiency, allowing universities and institutions to compare the language abilities of applicants from different cultural and linguistic backgrounds. This helps ensure fairness and equity inthe admissions process, as all applicants are evaluated based on the same criteria. Additionally, the TOEFL test enables institutions to identify candidates who possess the language skills necessary to thrive in an English-speaking academic environment, thus contributing to the overall quality of education and research in these institutions.Furthermore, the TOEFL test can benefit individuals by improving their English language skills. The test preparation process involves developing reading, listening, speaking, and writing abilities, which are essential for effective communication and academic success. As individuals prepare for the TOEFL test, they engage in language practice and skill-building activities that can enhance their overall language proficiency. These improved language skills can have a positive impact on their academic performance, as well as their professional communication and career prospects.In conclusion, the TOEFL test holds great significance for individuals seeking to pursue academic and professional opportunities in English-speaking environments. By assessing language proficiency, providing a standardized measure of ability, and promoting language skill development, the TOEFL test plays a vital role infacilitating international education and communication. As such, individuals can greatly benefit from taking the TOEFL test, as it opens doors to academic and career success in an interconnected world.。
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篇一Which one do you prefer, to solve problems on your own experience and knowledge, or to ask others for advice?As knowledge and experience serve as twim towers in problem-solving, one is often presented with two major paths that pave the way for final fulfillment, eitther to wrack his brain, just like what happened to Neuton, siiting for many years under an apple tree and eventually figuring out ond of the greatest universal rules that govern the whole globe, or to seek for others’ widsom through their advice, just as in the case of Benjinin Franklin, gathering great minds under one roof and then establishing a most world-renown libray. Both ways work. When a practical goal is involved, however, Benjimin Franklin may best be regareded as a role model in this respect and asking people for advice often turn out to be the prime alternative.Experience and knowledge borrowed or learned f rom others’ advice contribute greatly to effectiveness and effeciency for a goal-accomplishment. Not all experience and knowledge related to problem-solving can be obtained by personal effort alone due to limitations of mind and capabilities of each individual. A single thought in someone’s mind is, more often than not, far less shining compared with group’s wisdom. That explains the famous old saying that one sees further when standing upon the shoulders’ of past great giants; that explains why a great lea der is always with greater minds; that also explains why teamwork in corperation is highly emphasized in the 21st century. Brainstormand exchange of ideas between different thoughts never fail to enhance capabilities of each individula involved, a team, a company, an institution, a country, or even the entire global village.Asking others’ advice instead of getting everything done on one’s own promotes democracy and communication too. In terms of democracy, it is necessary to give others rights and chances to speak since the problem may concern them in different ways, and their saying in turn reflects our respect toward freedom of speech as well as their wisdom. In terms of communication, idea exchange sometimes focuses more than solutions, and hereby better mutual understanding about perspectives, principles, praticalities and personalities of each other.Admittely turning to others for help and suggestion by no means refers to absolute and irresponsible dependence. Consideration upon different thoughts and ideas broadens our mind, enlarges our vision, furthers understanding, enhances more effective and efficient brainstorm, and stresses mutual respect in groups and communities, which undoubtedly gives rise to better, if not the best solutions. As is paraphrased from John F Kenedy, brainstormed, there is little we cannot do while divided, there is little we can do.篇二Case of Benjinin Franklin, gathering great minds under one roof and then establishing a most world-renown libray. Both ways work. When a practical goal is involved, however, Benjimin Franklin may best be regareded as a role model in this respect and asking people for advice often turn out to be the prime alternative.Experience and knowledge borrowed or learned from others' advice contribute greatly to effectiveness and effeciency for a goal-accomplishment. Not all experience and knowledge related to problem-solving can be obtained by personal effort alone due to limitations of mind and capabilities of each individual. A single thought in someone's mind is, more often than not, far less shining compared with group's wisdom. That explains the famous old saying that one sees further when standing upon the shoulders' of past great giants; that explains why a great leader is always with greater minds; that also explains why teamwork in corperation is highly emphasized in the 21st century. Brainstorm and exchange of ideas between different thoughts never fail to enhance capabilities of each individula involved, a team, a company, an institution, a country, or even the entire global village.Asking others' advice instead of getting everything done on one's own promotes democracy and communication too. In terms of democracy, it is necessary to give others rights and chances to speak since the problem may concern them in different ways, and their saying in turn reflects our respect toward freedom of speech as well as their wisdom. In terms of communication, idea exchange sometimes focuses more than solutions, and hereby better mutual understanding about perspectives, principles, praticalities and personalities of each other.Admittely turning to others for help and suggestion by no means refers to absolute and irresponsible dependence. Consideration upon different thoughts and ideas broadens our mind, enlarges our vision, furthers understanding, enhances more effective and efficient brainstorm, and stresses mutualrespect in groups and communities, which undoubtedly gives rise to better, if not the best solutions. As is paraphrased from John F Kenedy, brainstormed, there is little we cannot do while divided, there is little we can do.篇三After they complete their university studies, some students live in their hometowns. Others live in different towns and cities. Which do you think is beterr? Give reasons for your answer.After they complete their univerrsity studies, some students preferr to live in their hometowns while others choose to live in different towns or cities. Everybody has his own reasons for his preference. After my graduation, I will go back and live in my home city. I have made this decision because of the following reasons.Firstly, my home city is a big city that can offer a lot. There are plenty of opportunities for work, many big libraries for studies, several differrent musiums for visit, and numerous cinemas, theaters and centers for entertainment. When I go back there, I will have no difficulty in finding a job suitable for me and I can make use of all the facilities available there.Secondly, if I go back to my home city, I can look after my parents. I take this into consideration because I am their only child and they are now weak and getting on in age. If I live in the same city with them, I can visit them very often and help them whenever it is necessary.Thirdly, if I live in my home city, I will have a lot of friends, schoolmates and relatives to visit and to turn to for help when I need. Of course, I could get acquainted with many people and make many friends if I were to go to live in a strange place, but that takes time. If I go back to my home city, everybody will bewaiting for me and I will be able to settle down comfortably without any trouble and waste of time.In short, my choise is based on a careful consideration of my home city and my family. I think it is a better or sensible choice; in a certain sense, it is a must.Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Use specific details and examples in your answer.篇四If you have a good neighbor, you are a lucky person. You have someone who cares about your needs and your property, who is helpful in the little day-to-day situations that come up, and who is supportive in times of crisis.A good neighbor is someone who, for instance, understands that your children may occasionally run across his lawn,- even though you tell them not to. He'll realize that children can be careless about things like that, and he won't make a big fuss about it unless it becomes a regular thing. In the same vein, he knows that you'll understand if some of the trash from his trash cans blows across into your yard. In other words, he is sensitive to the unintentional things that can happen. He doesn't make a big deal about them.A good neighbor is also respectful of your property. For example, she asks your permission before doing anything that interferes with what's yours. This means she wouldn't plant a huge tree in between your houses without asking how you felt about it. If she wanted to put up a fence, she would let you know first. She might work with you to decide where it should be placed. Maybe the two of you would even split the cost.A good neighbor would lend you some milk if you ran out.She'd give you a ride to work if your car was broken, and let your children stay at her house in the evening if you got stuck working overtime. You would do the same for her. Both of you would help make the other's life easier.When something really awful happens to you, like a death in the family, a good neighbor will volunteer to help in any way he can. This could mean something small, like making some casseroles to put in your freezer to feed visiting relatives. Or it could mean something big, like helping you get through the sadness of the funeral. I think only someone who has experienced a bad neighbor can really appreciate a good one! A good neighbor can be a good friend. He or she can make all the difference in the world to your life.篇五Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and esamples to support your answer.Some people like to eat out at food stands and restaurants, while others like to prepare food at home. Often it depends on the kind of lifestyle people have. Those with very busy jobs ou tside the house don’t always have time to cook. They like the convenience of eating out. Overall, though, it is cheaper and healthier to eat at home.While eating in restaurants is fast, the money you spend can add up. When I have dinner at a restaurant with a friend, the bill is usually over twenty dollars. I can buy a lot of groceries with that much money. Even lunch at a fast-food stand usually costs five or six dollars for one person. That’s enough to feed the whole family at home. Eating at home is better for you, too. Mealsat restaurants are often high in fat and calories, and they serve big plates of food-much more food-than you need to eat at one meal. If you cook food at home, you have more control over the ingredients. You can use margarine instead of butter on your potatoes, or not put so much cheese on top of your pizza. At home, you can control your portion size. You can serve yourself as little as you want. In a restaurant, you may eat a full plate of food "because you paid for it."It’s true that eating out is convenient. You don’t have to shop, or cook, or clean up. But real home cooking doesn’t have to take up a lot of time. There are lots of simple meals that don’t take long to make. In fact, they’re faster than eating out, especially if you think of the time you spend driving to a restaurant, parking, waiting for a table,, waiting for service, and driving home.Both eating at restaurants and cooking at home can be satisfying. Both can taste good and be enjoyed with family and friends. I prefer cooking at home because of the money and health issues, but people will make the choice that fits their lifestyle best.。
I strongly disagree that it is more important for the government to spend money to build art museums and music performance center than do build recreational facilities. I think such recreational facilities as swimming pool, playground, are crucial to people as mass consumption. Therefore they are more important than art museums and music performance.Although art museums and music performance provide us one opportunity to escape the daily pressure and enter an aesthetic world of sensual pleasure, and also purify people’s spirits by striking their heart, art museums and music performance generally need certain appreciative ability to enjoy. For example, when you see the celebrated painting, Mona Lisa, you probably just consider the woman as a beauty rather than knowing how she is beautiful and why the painting is quite well-known. In contrast, everyone can enjoy in playground and most people can go to swimming pool. Hence, the government should gratify most people’s wish.I think recreational facilities are also fine means of relaxation and decompression despite your age, educational background and so on. They are more closely linked to our daily life. For example, when I feel depressed, I usually like to walk on the playground instead of appreciating masterpieces in an art museum; when I want to do entertainment, I probably prefer seeing a movie rather than watching a music performance. So the mass consumption for relaxation and decompression is recreational facilities. Art museums and music performance center are less important.In addition, we have the opportunity to play sports by a recreational facility, further helping us keep healthy. For instance, Swimming pools are essential in summer. People usually do not prefer playing sports such as running, playing basketball in a hot day. Therefore, they generally like to stay at home and open air-conditions. If things go on like this, they will inevitably get sick. But a swimming pool offers us a good facility to take exercise. Also, most swimming pools now are built indoor, so people could enjoy this sport all year around and keep healthy. On the other hand, swimming is so basic a skill that all people should master it in case. Hence the government should spend money on such a recreational facility first.As far as I am concerned, although there is no denying that art museums and art performance are beneficial to people to some extent, I think spending money on recreational facilities is more important.。
托福考试独立写作预测及范文(成功类)托福考试独立写作预测及范文(成功类)独立写作考察学生对陈述进展评估、形成观点并说服读者承受的能力。
科学地对陈述进展分类,寻找共性,发现规律,是备考的一个重要环节。
下面为大家带来关于考试独立写作预测及范文(成功类),供大家参考学习,预祝考生考试顺利!(成功类). For any business to be suessful, one must spend a lot of money on advertising.绝对词,不同意解释:在现在网络广泛普及的年代,产品的质量变的日益不可取代,一个公司只要能够生产出消费者喜爱的产品,那么是否有广告就变的不是那么的重要。
相反,质量不能够到达标准,那么广告往往会起到相反的作用。
例子:无数的例子在日常生活中可以看到。
当人们选择手机的时候,现在越来越多的人都会选择苹果手机,这并不是因为苹果手机的广告,拿我自己举例,我从来没有关注过or留意过苹果产品的广告,真正吸引我以及广阔消费者的是苹果产品卓越的性能。
众所周知,苹果手机独特的设计被很多国内品牌在模仿,但是苹果卓越的操作系统以及强大的App却不是其他品牌能够模仿的。
当苹果公司推出新的产品的时候,立即就会有无数的消费者设法去购置他们的产品,而他们根本都不会有时间去关注苹果产品的广告。
结论: 因此,想要取得成功就要关注产品的质量。
解释:当公司产品出现质量问题,如何去保障消费者的权益对于一个企业来说至关重要,因为它决定了消费v者以后是否还依然信赖该企业的产品。
引出:生活中也出现了不少这样的例子。
例子:在汽车产业,总会有一些汽车因为某些汽车零件质量的问题而不得不选择召回已经销售出去的汽车,而这时候如何和客户沟通变得极其的.重要。
公司的效劳人员需要维持好客户的关系,需要给予客户一定的赔偿,并且解决客户因为车辆被召回后产生的出行不便的问题,并且也要保障被召回的车辆在今后不会再出现同样的问题。
090919naThe government bears the obligation to support the public culture development, as well as public facility construction. So, there is a general discussion about the issue that whether it is more important for the governmentto spend money on art museums and concert halls than on recreational facilitiessuch as swimming pools and playgrounds. Different people have different views.As far as I amconcerned, it is more important for the government tospendmoneyon art museums and concert halls than on recreational facilities.First and foremost, art museums and concert halls are important for the society since people need them to release their art feelings. Artists and audiences also need them to enjoy the catharsis of life and feeling. If you are unhappy, youcan go to the museums and concert halls to relaxes yourself. That is why government,as the servant of public service,should guarantee the existence and welling of necessary art facilities.Another point worth mention, art museum and concert halls are vital places. And because it can improve people ’s art knowledge. It is a direct and thrilling to learn experienced in a museum where they can go the concert or go to the art museumon weekends. It is a very convenient way tolearn art knowledge. Museumcan make otherwise distant and mundane educational experiences.However,the recreational facilities only can provide people todoexercise in their free time. With the development of science and technology,more and more people do not have much leisure time as before. Sothe art museums andconcert halls are more usefulnowadays. On the other hand, if you travel to a new place, the art museums and the concert halls are the first choose to visit. They are stand for where the history and culture of places.Of course,admittedly,recreation facilities provide people the public place to enjoy the fun in sports. Family may gather together to swim; the children need playgroundtopractice; andcitizens needrecreation facilities torelax andhave fun.That is why the recreation facilities also needed by the citizens and governmentshould pay for it. Although it has numerous advantages by spending money onrecreation facilities, all in all, I think building art and museums should take a greater potion in the financial expenditure of government for the importance ofthem.In my opinion, although both part are the basic and fundamental hardware if the community is it thrive, and both part call for the investment from the government. I think it is more important for the government to spend money on art museums and concert halls.。
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综合写作Reading给了去local store buy food 的理由:1 tasty and nutritious2 环保3 促进发展当地经济。
Lecture反对:1.储存方式和科技的发展,工业食品味道也不差,营养差不多(a little difference)2.农民不需要种很多的蔬菜和水果,可以减少农业用地,其实large food chain保护了环境3.当地商业无法提供足够的岗位,但是连锁可以,人们可以用自己挣的钱支持community和civic organization独立写作(重复2013年12月20日/2012年9月8日/2011年3月11日真题)政府投钱来发一块空地,你觉得是建公园用来为所有人娱乐好,还是给没有运动场的高中建运动场好?The town government has got some money to develop a ground, which is better, the ground should be developed to a garden that everyone in the town can enjoy, or a sports field,for the students in the high school who don’t have one.思路拓展:选 high schools: 1. the benefit of students’ participation in sports ——> physical:reduce the risk of contracting some chronic diseases; improve the immune systems, have energyand time to engage in the concentrating study and much easier to meet the schooling demands productively; spark the interest in some particular sports activities.mental: the engagement in some ball games provides an opportunity to gain the sense of teamwork; a good method to ease the pressureinvolvement of sports activities without professional facilities,safety issue:running campaign on the streets which is conducted by schools, may encounter some traffic accidents,the bad road condition may lead to the injuries more frequently;playing sports games along the narrow passages in the building would make students crush into each other, and would account for some avoidable accidents.选garden:can promote the living standard by growing more trees in the garden; if larger, can even provide a good natural habit for some wild birds to live in;Facilities:include some playing facilities for children,a good place for children and parents to conduct their social activities with their neighborsPavilions: old people can find some friends who share the same interest in the activities like playing chess;Vast grassland: best place for camping or picnic in holidays.。
Question: Do you agree or disagree with the statement: People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign coutries.All of us can see that the world now is becoming a whole unity with the rapid development , and at the s ame time people’s living standard is aslo rampedup.Travelling is no longer a luxury imagination in people’s mind , but a new question emeges that how could people get the most benefits from travelling ? If it is up to me to decide with , I will choose the travelling to foreign countries.The diversity of the culture would be of great benefit to us .Our vision would be expanded by the communication with exotic people, who live in quiet different surroundings from ours and have various ideas maybe we never get. Last year I travelled to Thailand and I was attracted and astonished by its amazing and unique culture. Different countries have their own various civilization.In this case , a more direct and vivid impression of the whole world will appear in our own world .What the real world we live in looks like on earth?How different the perspectives of the people from another country from ours?Travelling provides us with an good opportunity to get closer to these questions.I even make friends with some of the local boys. And from that , we have more possibilities to regard the world in a wider and more sophisticated way.From another perspective to say, the good aspect of travelling abroad can be sensed in business.As the world is filled with chances and challenges,businessmen could find more ways to go when they are put in a cosmopolitan marketing system.Only by facing the whole world , will a businessman have the occation to be introduced to a world economic market.And as we all know,it is essential for a merchant to keep pace with the whole word as well as to get a clear picture of the current international condition.All these factors lead to people’s travelling to foreign countries.Take my experience as an example .The company I work in usually assigns us to another continent such as America or Canada to do marketing investigation.Such field work could provide more convincing ideas of what customers really desires for.Traders of a shaper mind,a more inspring insight, could get more access to the consumers’ needs a nd fit the current financial society.However, we still can’t disavow the advantages of travelling in our owncountry.Knowing more about our homeland and listening to native clients’ voices are still vital projects . But in my point of view, in order to achieve a new reality, why not us give ourselves a more spacious stage? Out of our homeland is another fantastic and alluring world that is beyond our imagination.iBT新托福30分满分作文赏析很多新托福考试的考友总是在感叹,这个世界上能拿到的好作文实在是太少了,其实很多时候不是这些作文少,而是很多考友没有努力去发掘这些作文。
托福备考之独立写作观点分析及范文托福备考之独立写作观点分析及范文Should young children spend most of their time on school studies orplaying?Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age and shouldspend most of their time on school studies. Others believe that young children should spend most oftheir time playing. Compare these two views. Which view do you agree with? Why?『分析』两种观点都有些极端。
先比较两种观点,然后选择一个折衷的立场。
早上学的好处和坏处:好处是很多提前上学的孩子显得聪明,对付学习显得游刃有余(be more than equalto a task; accomplish a task with ease)。
完成formal education的时候比别人年轻,有更多的选择余地。
坏处是,经常挨欺负(be bullied; be treated rough)。
早熟(precocious),可能会有副作用(negativeeffects)。
晚上学的好处和坏处:实际上并不吃亏;学习好坏不见得一定跟上学早晚有必然的联系(positiveconnection)。
坏处是,家长如果引导不好,不利于智力发育(development of child's intelligence)。
立场:不见得一定要尽早上学;孩子确实应该多花一些时间去玩。
但是应该正确引导,因为玩也分为好多种,玩棋牌游戏显然比玩泥巴(play with mud)要有益得多。
生命是永恒不断的创造,因为在它内部蕴含着过剩的精力,它不断流溢,越出时间和空间的界限,它不停地追求,以形形色色的自我表现的形式表现出来。
--泰戈尔第一篇2009.09.19Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for the government to spend money on art museums and concert halls than on recreational facilities such as swimming pools and playgroundsI strongly disagree that it is more important for the government to spend money to build art museums and music performance center than do build recreational facilities. I think such recreational facilities as swimming pool, playground, are crucial to people as mass consumption. Therefore they are more important than art museums and music performance.Although art museums and music performance provide us one opportunity to escape the daily pressure, art museums and music performance generally need certain appreciative ability to enjoy. For example, when you see the painting, Mona Lisa, you probably just consider the woman as a beauty rather than knowing how she is beautiful and why the painting is quite well-known. In contrast, everyone can enjoy in playground and most people can go to swimming pool. Hence, the government should satis fy most people’s wish.I think recreational facilities are also fine means of relaxation and decompression. They are more closely linked to our daily life. For example, when I feel depressed, I usually like to walk on the playground instead of appreciating masterpieces; when I want to do entertainment, I probably prefer seeing a movie rather than watching a music performance. So the mass consumption for relaxation and decompression is recreational facilities. Art museums and music performance center are less important.In addition, we have the opportunity to play sports by a recreational facility, further helping us keep healthy. For instance, Swimming pools are essential in summer. People usually do not prefer playing sports such as running, playing basketball in a hot day. Therefore, they generally like to stay at home and open air-conditions. If things go on like this, they will inevitably get sick. But a swimming pool offers us a good facility to take exercise. Hence the government should spend money on such a recreational facility first.As far as I am concerned, although there is no denying that art museums and art performance are beneficial to people to some extent, I think spending money on recreational facilities is more important. 第二篇Only movies that can teach us something about real life are worth watching?Many people nowadays are crazy about cartoon films and fantasy movies while some people are only fond of movies that can teach us something about real life. In my opinion, although movies teaching something in reality are worth watching, it is unfair to say that they are the only meaningful movies. Cartoon films and fantasy movies are another two kinds of movies that worth watching.Admittedly, people really benefit from movies that teach us something about real life. For instance, a boy overwhelmed by a sense of despair may turn to be positive about his life after watching the movie Forrest Gump, since he may be deeply moved by the plot that no matter how hard the life is, Gump just keeps running forward. However, it is inappropriate to assert that those movies are the only ones worth watching.Cartoon films are worth watching, for they give us a good way to relax. For one thing, the appearances of cartoon images are always quite funny. For example, a bunny may have two extremely long ears and its teeth are often amazingly big; a bird may be soaring with two tiny wings and a huge mouth. These animated images can easily make people laugh. For another, the fancy frames in animation are also enjoyable. Commonly, children are attracted and cheered by an exquisite 3-dimensional wedding room or a palace in animated movies. So, I am convinced that people really relax by watching cartoon films.Fantasy movies are also worth watching, for they allow us to think of new ideas. Take the famous fantasy movie Alice's Adventures in Wonderland for example. In this movie, cats can fly in the air and the suddenly disappear; a girl can become a giant in a second after drinking a special potion; poker cards can become trained soldiers with wizard's spells. Fantasy movies help progress our thinking and inspire people to solve problems with new method in daily life, so they are also worthy of watching.As far as I am concerned, it is absurd to believe that it is only worthwatching movies that can teach us something about real life. As another two important art forms, cartoons and fantasy movies are equally important to our lives and should be given adequate respect.第三篇People should buy things made in their own country, even if the price is higher than same things made somewhere elseAlong with the thriving boost in technology , every country has been developing their native economic in a ever-increasing speed. Living within this situation, what should we do? To buy things made in own country or to buy products somewhere else. To my personal preference, I decide my choice based on the quality of this product I buy.Some people may contend that buying commodity made in one’s own country could be more likely to promote economic boost. Especially in developing countries, with such amount of financial income from both purchasing products from indigenous people and exporting goods to foreign countries, they must have a flying development . We can not deny the fact that some products made in other countries are of higher quality than native manufacture, so we should make wise decision to make our choice not merely concerned with whether this behavior is patriotic.On the other hand, we must predict the result of what if we bought a poor quality product. Supposing that if the commodity we bought just for few days is broken, how will we feel? Even though it is produced in one’s own country, who encountered this situation will definitely avoid buying the outputs from the same manufacturer. Hence what happened in the end is that people will buy the commodity with higher quality.Based on the analysis above, we should take into more factors into consideration when we select commodity, ranging from its price to quality. Rather than just sightless to buy native products out of patriotism regardless of its price.第四篇People would be happier if they had fewer possessionsI really want to say, this topic is little confuse to me and after seeing few samples, I feel no direction, so please help me correct and offer some advices! Thanks!Nowadays, people might think that if they had fewer properties, they would be more happier, it probably right in such a material, greed and complex world. However, Personally speaking, I do not agree with the over-statement, there are several necessary things we can not lose, which including the relationship with family and friends, our life companion as well as money, we can not feel happy if these matters get fewer. I will concrete my view as following.The first plain truth is that the relationship with family members and friends is necessary for each of us. The most valueble emotion we have since borned is the love in family, they always suportive and giving without asking pay back, their careness anytime and anywhere. Our best friends, those who would share joy and sorrow with us, encouraging us when we fall. Their exsistence give us the biggest happiness in the world, I can not say what I can be with fewer relation with them. For instance, during the time Spring Festival, our family would reunion and having meal togerther, the happy atmosphere would make us excited, we are all appreciate the time being together. Another evidence I would explain is the one who company us for life, we can not happy if we lost him or her. He or she is the most close person besides our family, no matter what misery happens, our lovers is always keep stiking with us together. There is a couple of youngs, Lee and Caro, they came from different countries, but they love each other. One day, the unfortunate accident happened on Caro, she disabled since then, and life difficult and pain fill with her life. However, Lee is there, fully taking care of Caro since the accident, although Lee has to earn for live and caring of Caro, he is still happy with doing so. In this inspire case, I can not say what Caro would be if she without Lee.Moreover, money is still important to everyone of us. Under such a sociaty polarized towards gaining money, we can not do anything without or having little money, which reminds me during my childhood,I can spent only 0.05$ for an ice cream, but it costs 0.5$ today, almost10 times more than before!The speedy increase on general price force us to make more money to pay for living, education, and rent of house. Thus, money is the fundamantal need.In conclusion, the statement of people would happier if they had fewer possession is obviously wrong. I still need relationship with family and friends, the companion in our life, and certainly amount of money, only we possess these things, can we enjoy our life and getmore happier.第五篇Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:To achieve successful development of a country, a government should focus its budgets more on young children’s education rather than on universities.Throughout the history of human civilization, education have played, and will continue to play, an indispensible role in society. However, a seemingly plausible standpoint that the authorities should give higher priority to young children's education than to universities - is by no means absolutely right. As a matter of fact, colleges or universities acts as a far more significant role in the success of countries. Probably the most important reason is that universities can create cutting-edge technology. Currently, technology is one of effective, if not the most effective, guarantee for the comprehensive development of countries. If our government provides adequate funds to universities, sophisticated innovations, like HEV or solar cell, could be created. Rather, these innovations could immediately bring about numerous economic prosperity for countries, when they are traded as commodities. In sharp contrast, it is hard to imagine that children could conceive any realistic and feasible equipment, no matter how many budget you give. In view of the promotion to technology, the authorities should focus its budgets on universities primarily. Another supporting rationale is that investing universities is more economical. Granted, superb children's education will pay off eventually, but university education can work immediately and efficiently. Survey results have consistently shown that even though a child can gain desirous education, we have to wait for more than ten years till he/she could practically benefit the society who have cultivated him/she. Besides, we have to take the risk that some children would spoil our society when they are grown up, rather than doing what we anticipate before. In contrast, undergraduates can reward the country just after their graduation, and the risk is relatively low.Yet another reason why our government should invest more on universities comes from employment. It is well accepted that the good university education tend to help graduates hunt their desirous job readily, which not only can benefit individuals and countries, but can substantially enhance the solidarity and harmony of society as well. However, you may fail to find a lesson directly concerning employableskills in young children's classes.Therefore, the promotion for technology, the immediate rewards, and the assistance for employment are all compelling reason to explain why our government should focus its budgets more on universities, rather than on young children's education.第六篇Topic: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and televisions should always show audience good people are being rewarded and bad people are being punished.The topic of people’s view on whether movies and televisions should always show audience good people are being rewarded and bad guys are being punished can be approached from several different angles due to its complexity. Some people assert that it’s boring to see movies which have similar plot, while others have negative attitudes toward this idea. Despite many diversified opinions aired by different people based on their own favorite, there can be no doubt that movies and televisions which have a conventional plot isn’t my first choice. The first reason that I want to put forward is that many people watch movies and TV programs just for fun and relaxation. Therefore, they don’t like movies with happy endings and predictable stories all the time. Taking my own experience as an example, I like to see movies with my friends every month and we always have a lot of fun when we discuss the interesting plots together. During that period of time, I felt relaxed and forgot all the stresses and strains of my job. As you can see, seeing entertaining movies is really a valuable way for me to release stresses. That’s why I am greatly convinced that movies and televisions sho uldn’t always show audience that good people would have reward and bad people would be punished in the end.In the second place, movies and TV programs can have an invisible influence on viewing children’s thinking. Therefore, if movies and televisions always show children that good people would have reward, they will believe that no matter how small a good thing they have done should have equal return. Otherwise, they will not have a motive to do some public service. On the contrary, children not take existing movies and TV programs too seriously today just because they have seen a variety of movies. Thus, they have learned how to distinguish between unrealistic stories and realistic world.Admittedly, movies and TV programs which always show that being a good people would gain more benefits than being a bad guy may teach moral values to the public. In this way, we can live in a peacefulsociety and people would be more friendly. However, I insist that movies and TV program should show different topics to the audience due to the numerous advantages it would bring about.Taking all the aspects into account, I believe that all sorts of programs are worth watching and people can benefit from various topics. That’s not to say, of course, others points of view are without merit. However, I hold that the reasons I have provided in favor of my standpoints are stronger.第七篇Dear all, please correct my essay. many thanks in advance.It is often not a good thing to move to a new city or a new country because of the loss of old friends.With the rapid development and progress of society and technology, there are increasing numbers of people who concern about whether it’s good to move to a new country but lose contact with old friends. Some people assert that people can gain many benefits when they move to a new environment, while others have negative attitude toward this idea. Despite many diversified opinions aired by different people based on their own experience, there can be no doubt that moving to a new country can bring many advantages and people can still maintain friendship with old friends.The first thing I want to put forward is that people nowadays have many chances to move to a new city for various reasons. However, people wouldn’t lose touch with their friends due to the convenient public transportation and the ubiquitous internet. Take my own experience as an example, I moved to a big city in order to find more well-paid jobs. During this period of time, I can chat or have a video call with my intimate friends on the internet. What’s more, it’s an easy task for me to take a high-speed rail to visit my old friends on the weekend. That’s why I am greatly convinced that people wouldn’t lose their friendship while they move to a new city.The other thing worth mentioning is that many aspects of our life will benefit from moving to a new place. Moving can help individual to explore a suitable place for him and interact with diverse people around the world. What’s more, learning distinctive cultures and interesting histories from different countries not only broaden our globe horizons, it also provide opportunities for us to make new friends. There is no gainsaying that moving to a new environment can bring more advantages to us than living in the same place.Admittedly, sometimes it’s good to live in the same place where people may have many close friends and they can have many chances to chat face to face. Since people familiar with surrounding area, they can have a stable life than others who moving out of their hometown. However, I insist that people who moving to a new place wouldn’t regret later due to the numerous benefits it would bring about. Taking all aspects into account, I believe that people would gain many advantages after moving to a new city. That’s not to say, of course, others points of view are without merit. However, I hold that the reasons I have provided in favor of my standpoints are stronger.第八篇 A lower-paying job with shorter hours that would give you more vacation time is better than a high-paying job with long hours that would give you less vacation timePerhaps no issue in this world is as significant to people as jobs, because they affect everybody in their daily lives. They have caused wide concern all over the world. There are various responses people have on this issue. Some people hold the opinion that a job with more vacation time is better than a job with high salary but less vacation time. However, other people disagree with this statement. From my point of view, I tend to think that we should pay more attention to the vacation time, but not concentrate ourselves on the salaries too much.In other words, a low-paying job with more vacation time is better than a high-paying job with less spare time. There are various reasons why I maintain this viewpoint, and among those reasons are two important ones.The first and foremost reason is that people can have more time to pursue their own interests. With the development of science and technology ,an increasing number of people, especially young people, have come to realize that life is colorful and they should use the finit time to pursue the infinite interests. It must be admitted that, on no account can we ignore the value of the vacation time, which can give us a good opportunity to do whatever we want to do. That is to say, it can benefit ourselves and our family members, even the society as a whole. For example, we can enjoy moives with our friends. Or we can travel abroad to appreciate the beautiful sceneries. In this way, people can relax and relieve pressure from work and study. As a result, they will work more efficently and effectively. In contrast, if a job occupies too much of our spare time, although it may offers us high salaries, we can not have opprtunites to enjoy our colorful lives.Another essential reason is that the salary is not the only thing we should pay attention to. On the one hand, there are many other things which we should take into consideration. For example, the work condition, the chances of promotion. On the other hand, according to a recent survey, 89% of people are beginning to realize that though the salary plays a great role in choosing jobs, we should also put emphasis on the vacation time, which is of particular significance to people in recent years. It can be given a concrete example. My friend John, used his vacation time to acuqire knowledge as much as possible, such as the computer skills and the marketing strateges. Because of his outstanding abilities, he became the manager of his company.Of course, as the proverb says, ’every coin has two sides’. We should give a comprehensive consideration to this issue. Then we may find that the job with high-paying and less vacation time also has advantages to some extent. For instance, people can possess enough money which can be used to buy many things. What’s more, they can be attracted to work harder.To sum up, if all those factors are contemplated, we may find that the advantages of the job with low-paying and more vacation time carry more weight than the one with high-paying and less vacation time. So, from what we have discussed above, we can safely draw the conclusion that it is advisable to choose a job with more vacation time, though it may offer lower salary.第九篇Young people should try several different jobs before they take their careers in a long termPerhaps no issue in this world is as significant to people as jobs, because they affect everybody in their daily lifes. They have caused wide concern all over the world. There are various responses people have on this issue. Some people hold the opinion that young people should try several different jobs before they take careers in the long term. However, other people oppose to this statement. From my point of view, I think it is better for young people to try different jobs before they choose their careers, because I think it has many advantages. There are various reasons why I maintain this viewpoint. And among those reasons are two important ones.The first and foremost reason is that by trying several different jobs, people can get a lot of experience which is of particular importance topeople , especilly to young people. According to a recent survey, 89% of people are beginning to realize that, with the development of science and technology, they should grasp many skills which can help them succeed in the future. For example, the computer skills, the communication skills, and the most important of all , the interpersonal skills. It must be admitted that, on no account can we ignore the value of all those experience and skills. As long as people get the experience and grasp those skills, believe it or not, they can find good jobs in the long term, which can benefit themselves, their family members, even the society as a whole.Another reason is that from those different jobs, young people can have a better understanding about themselves, such as their interests, their advantages and disadvantages. People from all walks of life, especially those who just graduate from universities, tend to think that it is of significant important to know themselves. If people realize their advantages, they can choose careers which can help them develop their merits. In contrast, if people do not try several defferent jobs before they choose their careers, they may find it hard to realize themselves deeply. As a result, they may choose career at random which can have bad effects on their development. It can be given a concrete example. My brother had tried several jobs before. Then he choosed a job which he was very interested in. And now he is a successful businessman. However,my friend Lucy, did not try some different jobs before, and she is facing several problems during her work.Of course, as the proverb says,’every coin has two sides’. We should give a comprehensive consideration to this issue. Then we may find that trying different jobs also has kinds of disadvantages to some extent. For instance, people may waste a lot of time to change their jobs. However, if they do some particular jobs, they may pay more attention to their job s. What’s more, people may not concentrate themselves on jobs. In other words, they may not be responsible for their jobs.To sum up, if all those factors are contemplated, we may find that the advantages of trying defferent jobs may carry more weight than its disadvantages. So, from what we have discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that it is advisible for young people to try several different jobs before they choose their careers.第十篇The best way to improve the quality of education in a country is to increase teacher’ssalariesWhen it comes the controversial issues that increase teacher’s treatment is the best to improve the quality of education in a country, owning to distinctive background and personal experience, divergent viewpoint will emerge. Some people think it is not sustainable ways to improve the quality of education. In my point of view, I strongly agree the statement that increases teacher’s salaries is the best way to elevate education quality.To begin with, the background of teacher is essential part when they teach students in the school. This is a denying the fact that teachers have to improve themselves in daily life, because they need to study new knowledge and skills. They should pay much money for books and tuition fee. For example, a computer programmer, they have to buy some books when they try to understand a new technology in this filed. To read books that it is a convenient way to assist them to learn it successfully.Moreover, there are need more and more teachers in the school by every year, and it is an effective way to improve the teacher salaries in order to attract many people to participate in the education career. For example, improving the teachers’ salaries to simulate them to work in the poor village or country, and teacher can make a better future if they will teach in a poor village. People cannot neglect that money can elevate the education quality.In contrast, there are some shortcomings that increase the teachers’ salaries in order to improve the education quality such as some teachers are not well-trained and high skilled, and it does not necessary to improve their salaries. They also do not have the capability to improve the education quality.To sum up, I agree with the statement that to raise salaries is the best way to improve education. It is of vital importance because it will motivate current professionals, encourage more potential talents to decide being teachers and show the sincerity of government to improve education.。
2019年托福独立写作满分必备模板A or B托福独立写作开头模板An increasing number of people begin to realize/complain/ question that...OR: The majority of people tend to have a favorable/ an unfavorable attitude towards somethingOR: XXX has now caused wide public concernOR: When it comes to... people often consider...The thing is, which XXX, A or B, (is a more efficient mean of learning/ what do we mean by)? People may givevarious answers to this question.OR:Ask people… and they may give a diverse of answers based on their individual value systemsSome believe that… while others/ some claim… On balance, my favor goes to A.托福独立写作正文模板To begin with, I concede that B serves as an independent factor in (a successful education)/ is of great value/ B is superior to A sinceAfter all,However compelling these cases may sound, B is notwithout its problems.OR: However compelling these cases may sound, they cannot overshadow the significant role thatA plays in XX. For example,In this sense,Therefore, too much emphasis on B is actually dangerous/ harmful and may go contrary to our primary purpose ofOn the other hand, A can address/ respond to some people’s needs that B cannotFor one thing, For another,托福独立写作结尾模板In the final analysis, it is true that both A and B are part and parcel of X. However, considering the potential problems resulted from B and the great benefits of A, I believe it is sensible to (choose A)。
2009年新托福写作北美机经2009.1.10Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:Improving schools is the most important factor in the successful development of a country.(Education)2009 .1.17Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:Advertising is the most important cause of unhealthy eating habits. (Media)2009.2.14Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:In order to become well-informed, one has to get information from different news resources.(Media)2009.2.21Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:Newspapers and magazines are the best ways to learn about a foreign country. (Media)2009.2.27Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:A job with more vacation time but a low salary is better than a job with a high salary but less vacation time.(Work)2009.3.7Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:It is better to use one’s own knowledge and experience to solve problems than to get advice from others.(Success)2009.3.14Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:It is better to spend money on traveling and vacation than to save money for the future.(Money)2009.3.21Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:To remain happy and optimistic when you fail is more important than achieving success.(Success)2009.3.29Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:Twenty years from now on, students will not use printed books anymore . (Education)2009.4.3Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:The best way to improve education is to raise teachers’ salaries. (Money)2009.5.9Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:To become financially responsible individuals, people should be taught how to manage money at a young age. (Money)2009.5.15Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:Professional athletes who receive high salaries, such as football or basketball players, deserve what they get.(Work)2009.5.30Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:Younger school children (aged five to ten) should be required to study art and music in addition to math, language, science and history. (Education)2009 .6.5Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:Solving environmental problems is the best way for the government to improve public health.(Government)2009.6.12Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:University students should take part-time jobs.(Education & Work)2009.6.20Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:Successful leaders should make others part of the decision-making process.(Success)2009.7.25Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:Movies and TV programs made in one’s own country is always more interesting than those made in other countries.(Media)2009.8.7Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:Parents should allow children to make their own choices rather than determine their children’s future for them.(Family)2009.9.19Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:It is more important for the government to spend money on art museums and concert halls than on recreational facilities such as swimming pools and playgrounds. (Government & Money)2009.9.25Do you prefer to take a low-paid but secure job or a job with a high salary but easy to lose?(Work)2009.10.17Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Movies and televisions should always show audience that good people are rewarded and bad people are punished.(Media)2009.10.24Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:Parents should help their children prepare for future life through encouraging them to take part-time jobs.(Family)2009.10.31Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:It is not good to move to a new city or a new country because you will lose old friends.(Friends)2009.11.7Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:To achieve successful development of a country, a government should focus its bud gets more on young children’s education rather than on universities.(Government & Education)2009.11.20Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:Parents should give money to their children for their high marks at school. (Education)2009.12.4Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:People should buy things that are made in their own country, even if the price of these products is higher than that of the products made in other countries.(Money)2009.12.11Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:Parents do not understand their children as well as the parents did 50 years ago.(Family)2009.12.19Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:People would be happier with fewer possessions.(Money)2008年新托福写作北美机经2008.1.12Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:The government should focus more on environmental problems and less on economic development.(Government)2008.1.18Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:People are happier when they finish a challenging or difficult job thanwhen they complete an easy task.(Work)2008.1.27Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:Successful people accept new things and take risks rather than hold on to the things that they have done well.(Success)2008.2.1Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:Being creative is more important in finding the best solution to a problem than planning carefully.(Work)2008.2.8Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Advertisements targeting children aged between 2 and 5 should be banned. (Media)2008.2.15Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:It is important for families to have meals together regularly. (Family)08.2.23Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:Technology makes people's lives simpler rather than makes people's lives more complicated.(Technology)2008.3.1Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:To solve the present and future problems, it is necessary to understandthe past.(Success)2008.3.7Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:People today spend too much time on enjoyment. We only do what we like to do rather than what we should do.(Leisure)2008.3.14Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:The environmental issue is too complex to be solved by the individuals. (Environment)2008.3.29Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:It is more important to have rules about the types of clothing that people wear at work and at school.(Work & Education)2008.4.26Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:The government should give priority to improving healthcare than to solving environmental problems.(Environment)2008.5.3Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:Technology has made children less creative than children were in the past. (Technology)2008.5.9Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:The government should spend more money on improving access to the Internetthan on the public transportation.(Government)2008.5.16Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:Telephone has greater influence on people's lives than TV.(Media)2008.5.30Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:People today are not as friendly as people were in the past. (Friends)2008.6.6Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:Playing computer games is a waste of time for children. (Technology)2008.6.21Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:Good looks and clothing are more important for success than good ideas. (Success)2008.6.28Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:People should live in a city or a country all their lives instead of moving to another place.(Work & Leisure)2008.7.11Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:Today, parents do not understand their children as well as the parents did 50 years ago.(Family)Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:It was easier to achieve success in the past than it is today.2008.8.8Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:All university students should take basic science courses, regardless of their field of concentration.(Education)2008.8.16Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:Most businesspeople are motivated only by the desire for more money. (Money)2008.8.23Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:A serious and strict teacher is more effective than a teacher who is humorous and easygoing.(Education)2008.9.5Which source is more dependable for news, TV or newspapers?(Media)2008.9.21Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:Children should play and study rather than learn how to do household chores.(Education & Family)2008.9.27Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:Printed books have greater effects on society than TV does.2008.10.12Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:In order to succeed, we should be more like others than be different from others.(Success)2008.10.17Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:People benefit more from travelling in their own country than travelling in a foreign country.(Leisure)2008.10.25Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:Students who can keep their own rooms organized are more likely to succeed. (Education)2008.10.31Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:It is more fun to see a movie in the cinema with other people than see a movie at home.(Media)2008.11.8Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:Scientists should be responsible for the negative impact that is brought by their discoveries or inventions.2008.11.14Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:Children should only play sports for fun rather than play sports in competitions or contests.(Education)2008.11.22Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:Students are more influenced by teachers than by their friends. (Education & Friends)2008.12.5Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:Sports teaches us lessons about life.2008.12.7Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:Spending time alone is the best way to relieve stress.(Leisure)2008.12.10Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:People who have interest in different things cannot be friends. (Friends)2008.12.12Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:Sports and exercises are more important to elderly people than to young people.(Old vs. Young)。
独立写作Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?People will be happier if they had fewer possessions.Nowadays, it is generally accepted that the more money one possesses, the better life he will have. However, some people argue that people will be happier if they had fewer possessions. I disagree. I believe that if one has more possessions, he would surely have a satisfied life condition, and would be happier.First, people who have plenty of possessions are able to help the poor, and in that way, they would acquire pleasure not only physically but also mentally. For example, Bill Gates, one of the richest men in the world, cooperates with his friend, another people with great fortune, Warren Buffett to build a fund to help those who have diseases and children who cannot afford to receive education. By doing this, Bill and Warren have already helped thousands of people with only a small percentage of their wealth and at the same time, they get psychological satisfaction. A great litterateur once said: It is always happier to give than to receive. It is the people owning more possessions but not those who are poor that can attain this kind of happiness.In addition, the rich can realize their dreams and even save their lives with the support of their fortune. Travelling around the world, satisfying whatever our parents and kids needed, or even flying to other planets when the doomsday comes will not be impossible for the one having money to burn. Take the movie “2012”as an example, when the doomsday comes, people wealthy enough can get on the Noah’s Ark to survive through all the earthquakes, tsunamis and volcanic eruptions while the others have to accept their destiny to die, let alone happiness.Admittedly, having more possessions does have a downside. For instance, people have to spend more energy and time managing and maintaining their possessions, and asthe time goes, unconsciously, the amplification of people’s ambition on money and physical conditions brings high stress to them. Meanwhile, they will be tired and probably have little time with their family members. However, as long as controlling their desires not being too greedy, the problem will be solved. They can hire someone trustworthy to manage most of their work and by doing that, they will not feel tired and will have more time to hang out with their friends and families.In conclusion, I disagree with that people will be happier if they had fewer possessions. Generally speaking, the more money one possesses, the happier he will be.综合写作The reading and listening passages have a conflict opinion about whether R is the hunter of dinosaurs or it is a scavenger. The reading material believes that R is not the hunter of dinosaurs; maybe it is a scavenger, providing 3 reasons, which are contradicted by the following lecture.Firstly, the reading material claims that R is not the hunter of dinosaurs. It is because R, as small as a cat, could not eat dinosaurs. However, the speaker contradicts the reading’s claim. The reason is that R could eat baby dinosaurs.Secondly, the reading material points out that R could not catch up with dinosaurs because they had short legs. However, according to the speaker, the reading’s claim does not hold water, because another animal named C is an active predator with short legs.Thirdly, the reading material argues that 恐龙的残骸上没有牙印。
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The government bears the obligation to support the public culture development, as well as public facility construction. So, there is a general discussion about the issue that whether it is more important for the government to spend money on art museums and concert halls than on recreational facilities such as swimming pools and playgrounds. Different people have different views. As far as I am concerned, it is more important for the government to spend money on art museums and concert halls than on recreational facilities.
First and foremost, art museums and concert halls are important for the society since people need them to release their art feelings. Artists and audiences also need them to enjoy the catharsis of life and feeling. If you are unhappy, you can go to the museums and concert halls to relaxes yourself. That is why government, as the servant of public service, should guarantee the existence and welling of necessary art facilities.
Another point worth mention, art museum and concert halls are vital places. And because it can improve people’s art knowledge. It is a direct and thrilling to learn experienced in a museum where they can go the concert or go to the art museum on weekends. It is a very convenient way to learn art knowledge. Museum can make otherwise distant and
mundane educational experiences. However, the recreational facilities only can provide people to do exercise in their free time. With the development of science and technology, more and more people do not have much leisure time as before. So the art museums and concert halls are more useful nowadays. On the other hand, if you travel to a new place, the art museums and the concert halls are the first choose to visit. They are stand for where the history and culture of places.
Of course, admittedly, recreation facilities provide people the public place to enjoy the fun in sports. Family may gather together to swim; the children need playground to practice; and citizens need recreation facilities to relax and have fun. That is why the recreation facilities also needed by the citizens and government should pay for it. Although it has numerous advantages by spending money on recreation facilities, all in all, I think building art and museums should take a greater potion in the financial expenditure of government for the importance of them.
In my opinion, although both part are the basic and fundamental hardware if the community is it thrive, and both part call for the investment from the government. I think it is more important for the government to spend money on art museums and concert halls.。