考研英语高分作文剖析
考研高分作文剖析
2011年考研英语二小作文真题： suppose your cousin LI MING has just been admited to a university write him/her a letter to: (1)Congratulate him/her,and (2)give him/her suggestions on how to get prepared for university life you should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. DO not sign your own name at the end of the letter,Use "zhangwe 2011年考研英语二小作文范文： Dear friend, I am writing to congratulate you on your being successfully admitted to Harvard University, which enjoys an international reputation for its academic excellence and give you some suggestions as to how to make preparation for the coming college life. In order for you to adapt yourself to the university life, you are advised to get prepared physically and intellectually. First and foremost, you need to build a strong body for the future academic pursuit, so you can take some exercises during the breaks. Secondly, since the study in university is more demanding than in your secondary school, you are highly suggested to find some introductory books from the library so as to have a good idea of the specialty you are going to take in your college life. Given your sound ability, you are sure to have a successful college life. Congratulate you again and wish you a fruitful college life. Sincerely yours, Zhang Wei
考研英语写作三段论：第一段---描述图画或图表 第二段---解释寓意 第三段---给出评论 第一段： 第一句 1、As is shown above , 描述图画（倒装）.There has been a heated discussion about a picture in the newspaper.报纸上有一张图画引起人们广泛的关注。 描述图画注意： 第一步：寻找图画的中心事物，并确定中心事物的位置。 第二部：描述中心事物，可以从动作和状态两个方面来描述。 第三部; 寻找中心事物周围相关的事物，并进行简单的描述。 模式：在图画中央有------(倒装)，它-------（主谓一致、现在分词、非限定性定语从句），周围有-----（独立主格作状语） 第二句----总结 ①The picture , at the fist glimpse , seems to be simple , but only a penetrating sight can pierce through its superficial meaning.这幅画初看好像很简单，但是只有具有洞察力的人才能看 穿其肤浅的含义。 ②The author’s real purpose is not the fact itself , but to lead us to find what hides behind the ice burg.作者的真实
目的不是图画本身，而是要引导我们去探求在图画背后究竟隐藏着 什么。 第二段 第一句----观点的提出 (1) The picture tells us that nothing can be compared with the 重要主题 . In no country , other than china ,it has been said , is this phenomenon more obvious . (2) The picture does revel certain disturbing social phenomenon , that is , people tend to overlook the fact that 有害主题 . ( 或 The picture does reveal that 有害主题 is not only harmful , but also damaging .) The past decade has witnessed a huge development in economy owing to the reform and opening-up policy carried out , bringing some problems at the same time , with the above one being the foremost .在过去的 十年间，由于改革开放政策的执行，我国的经济有了巨大的发展，但 同时带来了一些问题，上面的问题是最严重的。（或In no country other than china , it has been said m is this problem more serous . ） 万能观点： ①图画主题的重要性 Nothing can be compared with··· ···is not only necessary , but also indispensable ··· ···remains to be an integral part in···
大作文我就是根据这个模板，然后自己修改了点，感觉这模板”万能”。之前一直觉得两百单词怎么拼也拼不出，看完这个后我是觉得两百很容易写了，优势还超过二三十多个单词。 其次就是多背点英语阅读中的比较好的句型，到时写作用到上面。 17句搞定考研英语作文所谓万能这个概念，如果大家都去这么用的话，就等于没有用了。PartB部分是有的，但是partA没有，PartB可以基本上把这个文章全写完的一个模板方式。万能模板，你这么想，大家告诉我，只要一个题目能够转变成一社会现象之后，最好准备两到三套大的万能无敌模式。关于万能模式的几个问题： 一、我们选用的句子的灵活性强，经过了精心的选择 二、句型都是五星级,并在开头和长短句子方面有设计,并注意语法的丰富,每句话语法都不同. 三、我们选的句子与市面的任何资料都不同 四、很多同学说写的一样是否是雷同，不大可能，因为很难分到一个考场批判危害性的框架 1.总共写十七个句子. 第一段四个句子,第一句宏观描述图画,并谈图画看似可笑但发人深思.第二句写出图画最强烈的视觉效果,第三句是主题句,谈用二十个单词的爆发力句型谈该现象对个人的发展和进步有破坏性,并引发思考,第四句是用贬义词批判这个现象是强烈的指责。 (1)As is vividly depicted in the picture, ，which seems to be humorous and ridiculous but thought-provoking on second thoughts.(2)The most striking feature that impresses me deeply is that unbelievably, ，(3)Recent few years has witnessed a phenomenon of 主题which seems to be disastrous to individual survival and prosperity. (4)This phenomenon of 主题should be condemned severely or made illegal. (5)There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration. 中间段落从两方面论证问题的危害，并举例论证，预测危害的趋势 第二段七个句子,首先第一句从宏观上谈这种现象的总的有两到三个点危害或者原因,第二句谈这个现象的第一个危害,用“not only, but also”的五星级句子,通常是谈对个人身心健康的危害性, 第三个句子谈第二个危害,通常是用一个豪华级的比较级的句子,让老师耳目一新,通常是谈这个现象对社会的危害.第四个句子谈对家庭或学校的危害.第五个句子谈一个代替“for example”的十五个单词的好句子,意思是说没有更好的例子来证明正如下文.第六个句子是例子群体的出现,谈根据一项调查表明,80%以上的人只要从事经历过这个消极的现象一定会对个人在精神和生活上有危害.最后一句话是预测趋势的二十五个单词的钻石级的句子,谈以下预测趋势,表明这种现象再这样下去,就会导致恶劣的结果出现,甚至是毁灭性的后果。 (1) To account for the above-mentioned phenomenon, several serious effects have been put forward. (2)To begin with,主题not only results does harm to our physical and mental health but also results in a frustrating and humiliating life. (3)In addition, nothing is more harmful than主题to contradict with a harmonious society. (4)Last but not the least, no issue is as harmful as 主题to increase family burdens, which is a threatening situation we are unwilling to see. (5)No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below . (6)According to a survey made by China Daily, 63.93% of young people who have ever experienced主题will live a dull life or even feel loss of hope about the future. (7)If we cannot take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly, we will see the
考研英语二作文模板 一、小作文部分： 考生首先要掌握小作文的审题步骤。首先依据letter，email，notice等判断应用文类型是书信还是通知。 如果是书信的话，需要依据关键词进一步判断其为哪种书信(如看到inquire，ask for advice about等关键词可以初步判断出其为咨询信)，如果是通知的话就简单了。而后是确认收信人信息(对方为具体的某个人还是机构、部门)，选用不同的称谓表达。之后是写作内容，最后是署名部分。书信类署名一般为“Li Ming”，而通知署名一般为一个单位，如2010年英语一小作文考查的是一则通知，其署名为“Postgraduates’ Association”(“研究生会”)。 因为小作文属于“麻雀虽小，五脏俱全”，每句话都有其对应的要点，可以理解为没有废话。实际考试中，有相当一部分考生在小作文写作时看似写了很多，最终得分却不理想，根本原因就是写作时没有要点意识，想到哪儿写到哪儿，遗漏了很多得分点。因此，完成审题步骤后，考生需要掌握每一类应用文的写作思路及每段的信息要点。前述小作文的信息要点均有所不同，需要考生分类整理、记忆及运用。如，2017年考研英语一小作文考查的是推荐信，向新来的James Cook教授推荐你所在城市的一些旅游景点，并给出推荐理由。较好的写作思路是：分为三段，第一段表明写信目的，交代自己和要介绍的景点有关联，第二段写这些景点值得推荐的具体资格，并附上相关理由，第三段表示期待，期待自己的推荐对对方有所帮助。也就是说，这篇小作文有5个信息要点，缺少其中任一个要点均会被扣掉相应分数，因此，考生需注意每一类应用文的信息要点。 此外，小作文还注重格式问题，如果格式上不符合要求，则基本拿不到及格分(6分)以上的成绩。如，书信类在格式上可以选用缩进式或者齐头式，而通知类只能用缩进式;书信类结尾处一定有Sincerely yours等礼貌用语，而通知则无礼貌用语;书信类无标题，而通知要求考生必须自拟标题。 二、大作文部分： 相比于小作文，大作文考查形式要简单的多，英语一考查图画作文，而英语二为图表作文。但简单并不代表容易，考生在备考练习大作文时要注意的地方依然很多。比如，在大作文写作方面，《大纲》提出了明确的要求，中公考研老师将其总结为如下这16个字：语言准确，内容完整，组织连贯，语言多样。语言准确包括词汇、语法、标点三个方面，考生一般都清楚词汇、语法方面需要注意的细节，而往往忽略标点符号的问题，从而出现了在英语作文中使用书名号(“《》”)等问题。这是考生一定要警惕的问题。此外，相比于小作文，大作文还注重对考生语言表达方面的考查，即同样的汉语意思，用词多样、句式多变的英语版本就能拿到较高分数，而用词平淡、句式单一的话只能是较低分数。 此外，图画作文和图表作文的备考重点也有所不同。图画作文首先需要判断是一幅图还是两幅图，如果是两幅图的话，还要分析其内容是相反还是相似，然后采用不同的描图流程。而图表作文则首先需判断题目中所附图标为动态图还是静态图，动态图主要分析其变化，而静态图则侧重阐释其差异之处。而图表作文一般反映某种社会现象，因此其第二段一般可从原因角度或者影响角度对前述的变化或差异进行分析，并据此得出第三段的结论。
考研英语作文备考万能句 ·专家谈xx考研英语写作冲刺 ·xx考研英语词汇五大记忆策略 ·xx考研英语备考常见问题 ·考研英语词汇五大记忆的方法 积极理由 1、For the majority of people， *** has bee the focus of their lives and the source of their happiness and contentment 对于很多人来说，***占据了他们的生活和充实了他们的生活。【适用很多积极类的话题，句式复杂多变，推荐】 2、*** offers extensive opportunities for every country in the world. 3、The majority of students believe that *** will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills ，which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets.大部分学生相信***会使他们有更多机会发展人际交往能力，而这对他们未来找工作是非常有好处的。【这句话也是五星级的，***可以是part-time job、网络，文化交流等等，思路要开阔】 4、Judging from the social prehensive factors， we can safely conclude that the Inter will change the lives of an untold number of people forever .根据社会等综合因素，我们可以有把握地得出这样的结论：网络将永远改变无数人的生活。【科学统计法的
. 蒋军虎英文写作讲义 蒋军虎英文写作讲义 (1) 一、英文考试做题顺序 (3) 二、英文小作文通用要求和注意事项 (3) 三、小作文种类 (3) 1，作文通用要求3 2，十种书信3 2.1 书信通用要求 :标准格式， 142阵形3 2.2 求职信、申请信application letter/cover letter & Applying letter4 2.3 推荐信 recommendation letter5 2.4 辞职信 resignation letter5 2.5 建议信 suggestion letter/advice letter6 2.6 感谢信 thanks letter[2010年真题，今年不太可能再考]7 2.7 祝贺信 congratulation letter7 2.8 道歉信 apology letter8 2.9 投诉信 complaint letter8 2.10 邀请信 invitation letter8 2.11 介绍信 introduction letter9 2.12 请求信 introduction letter9 3，通知notice10
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大作文 一、审题 （1）审图、画、表格picture? Photo? graph? 如果是画可以用的词是drawing/cartoon/picture/image/illstrution 如果是拍的可以用词是photo/photograph/picture/image/illstrution （2）看图的数量 （3）找图中的对立点 （4）审题的文字说明—direction部分 二、构思 （1）写几段？一般是3-4段。 （2）写多少字？比规定多20个字，大约200个字。 （3）字体要清晰，特别注意换行时 （4）书写 三、作文书写 （一）第一段：句型新、多变化、可以是主语从句、倒装句、感叹句、对立对比句、使用as句型、no matter how句式等 1、名词性从句 ①what is vividly depicted in the drawing above is that + 从句 ②what can be seen from the image is + 名词（词组），who/which + 定语从句。 2、倒装句 ①illustrated in the above picture is/are + 名词，who/which+定语从句。 ②presented in this cartoon is that+从句。 例子：09年为例what is subtly featured in the above image is a significant number of people ,who are sitting in front of their computer, surfing the internet. 08年为例Featured in this drawing is that two handicapped men are running quickly together ,supporting each other. Surprisingly, each of them have only one leg. It is cooperation that makes it possible for them to go anywhere they want. What an interesting and enlightening picture it is! /How illuminating and enlightening the above cartoon is! 第一段已经点出主题，第二段只要在简单的描述主题后举例子就可以，第三段给出套话总结。 （二）第二段，解释图画的含义，评论画里的现象（现象的普遍性，举例子，也可以在写现象的严重性、重要意义、行动举措） 1、在说明普遍性时说明图画的含义，再举例子。 However simple it may be seen at first glance, its intended meaning goes undoubtedly far deeper. It is a vivid reflection of a prevalent social phenomenon :+ 此案现象的内容。（It is indicative of a widespread social phenomenon :+现象内容。） 2、举例子 ★Upsetting parallels are now available in nearly all walks of life , and a case in point goes to one of my acquaintances ,who + 定从。 ★Similar happenings are now available in nearly all walks of life and one of my acquaintances may serve as a convincing example . + 你朋友的情况（自己写）。 ★It should be observed , of course , that such an (upsetting) phenomenon is not entirely a
2016考研英语（二）大作文真题解析及参考范文 考研英语已经落下帷幕，以下是跨考教育英语教研室刘老师为考生解析英语（二）大作文。 （一）大作文真题： Section IV Writing 48.Directions: Write an essay based on the following chart. you should 1） interpret the chart and 2） give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.(15 points). 某高校学生旅游目的调查 （二）作文解析 今年英语二作文的题目比较好写，因为标题和图示非常清晰明白。图表显示了某高校学生旅游目的调查, 考生分析原因的话也会很简单。下面分三段简要地说一下这三段应该怎么写。 第一段主要是描述图表。图表一目了然，数量词百分比也是大家熟悉的词汇，表述数据时，图中有四五组数据，由于字数的限制以及为了写作的便利可以突出较大比例的“欣赏风景”和“缓解压力”，注意引入百分比的表达方式。 第二段给出你的评论，主要写这种情况的原因。主要要结合图表描述的内容从两个方面写起。一方面为什么为了欣赏风景而旅行的目的占37%，另一方面为什么缓解压力会占到33%比例。 最后结尾段落可简要得出结论，这种现象并不奇怪，还将继续下去。 （三）参考例文： As is clearly reflected in the above pie chart, the purpose of students
travelling abroad demonstrates obvious differences in one college of China. According to the data given, the purpose of enjoying the beautiful landscape takes a comparatively large share, accounting for 37%, while that of relieving pressure also takes away 20% of the whole proportion. What triggers this phenomenon? It is not difficult to put forward several factors responsible for this phenomenon. To start with, with the rapid economic development of economy, people, including college students, are becoming increasingly wealthy, which enables them to afford the once-deemed- expensive oversea traveling. In order to enjoy the charming landscape all around the world, a large proportion of students choose to travel abroad. What’s more, along with the ever-accelerating improvement of economy and society is also the ever-increasing work and life pressure. Consequently, the purpose of relieving pressure ranks the second among all the purposes for folks to travel around the world. In view of the arguments above, we can conclude that the current phenomenon is of no surprise. And therefore, it can be predicted that admiring the scenery and alleviating pressure will still be the main purpose for people to arrange a traveling to other countries. 总有一天你会渐渐明白，对自己笑的人不一定是真爱，对方表面的伪善是为博取信赖，暗里他可能会伺机将你伤害。 总有一天你会渐渐明白，不是所有人都对你心门敞开，即使你用善良和真心对待，有的人依然会悄悄将你出卖。 总有一天你会渐渐明白，哪怕你拿到了幸福的号码牌，命运之神也不一定对你温柔相待，你的余生仍有可能会被忧伤覆盖。
写作 一、写作三大原则 1.V：vary原则 2.I：input原则 3.P：practice原则 ①所有不会写的单词都写成自己会的词汇，务必保证正确； ②所有不会写的长难句都写成简单句，务必保证正确。 二、小作文 一）公务书信——关于投诉 1、称呼：①文中已给出，直接用即可；②文中未给出； 2、第一段：自我介绍+写作目的 3、第二段：按照写作要求来写 4、第三段：表示感谢+期待回信 5、落款 二）公务书信——关于感谢 Dear my friend, I'm so delighted to hear that you decide to take part in the examination of postgraduates. now, I just give you some suggestions about the major. For my part, English may be your
favorable choice. First, you love English and I think interest is the best teacher. then, if you learned English as your main course, you would become an English teacher who can help so many Chinese to realize their dreams。at last, possibly, you could go abroad to teach foreigners how to study Chinese, as is a fantastic idea. So you could consider my suggestion carefully, and make a prudent determination to have a bright future. yours truly Li Ming 三）公务书信模板 Dear sir or madam, 第一段 I am senior who majors in physical education in the/a university. The reason why I am writing the letter, to be honest, is in order to +文中已给出的目的，直接抄。 ①自我介绍可以自己写，写作目的直接摘录题目中已给出的内容。 第二段 To begin with, it is my belief that+简单句+and/but/so/because/although+简单句. Then
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2010考研英语一大作文真题解析及范文 Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and then 3) give your comments。 You should write neatly on ANSHWER SHEET 2. (20 points) (图略)文化“火锅”：既美味又营养 文字说明：佛、解构、人本、功夫、毕昇、儒、礼、后现代、老舍、莎士比亚、爱因斯坦、道、仁、天鹅湖、启蒙、京剧等 真题解析 2010年考研英语(一)大作文再次考察图画作文，这已是考研写作第十二次考查图画作文这种题型，广大考生应该不会陌生。图中的火锅里，五味杂陈着诸多多元文化元素，大致可分为三类：一是古今名人，包括中国古代的印刷术发明者毕昇，现代作家老舍，16世纪英国作家莎士比亚，现代物理学泰斗爱因斯坦；二是哲学概念，涵盖中国古代的儒、佛、道、仁、礼，西方的启蒙、人本、后现代与解构；以及京剧、功夫、天鹅湖等中外表演艺术。文字说明显示：文化“火锅”，既美味又营养。显而易见，本文的主题是多元文化融合这一正面观点。 2002年考研写作题目即“文化——民族与世界”，八年之后，考研写作再次考查文化交流这一话题。如果大家参加过新东方的培训，我们的写作培训教材34页和35页分别提供了2002年教育部公布的当年写作状元与榜眼：20分和18分的高分作文，其中诸多表达均可用于2010年写作。我的强化班和基础班写作讲义也提供了一篇2002年范文，第二、第三两段今年完全可以使用。拙著《2010考研英语高分写作》一书166至170页详细讲解了2002年真题，并详尽分析了三篇经典范文，考生均可使用。只要平时认真准备，将范文背诵得滚瓜烂熟、脱口而出、多多益善，考场上应有喜出望外之感。 本文提纲与2008、2009年提纲完全一致，第一段为图画描述，应将图画描述一至二句，最好能够写出图中的一些术语，多多益善，展示自己的词汇基本功，末句可点出图画文字说明。第二段为意义阐释段，最好首句点出图画的象征寓意：多元文化融合，其次使用因果、举例、正反或联系现实等多种手段进行充分论证。第三段为归纳结论，可以提出自己的观点，并给出结论或建议。只要考生语言精彩(正确+变化)、结构严谨、论证充分，即可取得理想成绩。 参考范文 As is symbolically illustrated in the portrayal, there is a boiling hotpot containing various ingredients of multi-cultures. These pluralistic cultures can be categorized as celebrities home and abroad as Bi Sheng, Lao She, Shakespeare and Einstein, philosophical concepts as Buddhism, Taoism, Confucianism, benevolence, rite, humanism, enlightenment, post-modernism and deconstruction, as well as performing arts as Peking Opera, Kong fu and Swan Lake. We are informed that the
suppose your cousin LI MING has just been admited to a university write him/her a letter to：（1）Congratulate him/her，and（2）give him/her suggestions on how to get prepared for university life you should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. DO not sign your own name at the end of the letter，Use "zhangwe 考研教育网考研英语二小作文范文： Dear friend， I am writing to congratulate you on your being successfully admitted to Harvard University，which enjoys an international reputation for its academic excellence and give you some suggestions as to how to make preparation for the coming college life. In order for you to adapt yourself to the university life，you are advised to get prepared physically and intellectually. First and foremost，you need to build a strong body for the future academic pursuit，so you can take some exercises during the breaks. Secondly，since the study in university is more demanding than in your secondary school，you are highly suggested to find some introductory books from the library so as to have a good idea of the specialty you are going to take in your college life. Given your sound ability，you are sure to have a successful college life. Congratulate you again and wish you a fruitful college life. Sincerely yours， Zhang Wei