独立5-现象证明P21 2010.10.31NA Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People are now easier to become educated than in the past.
Education is the foundation of a country. People today have a stronger concept（搭配不当，改为sense）of being educated than in the past. I agree with the statement that people gain an easier access to all kinds of educations at current times.
Firstly, there are much more schools available today than in the past. No matter where you live, in big cities or in the countryside, the local government spends a large amount of money on the constructions of various types of schools, such as primary schools, middle schools, high schools and even schools for adults. More and more universities and colleges have been built to ensure higher education for top students. If you want to study in schools, you will always find a proper one to attend.
Secondly, the teaching approach diversifies（there are diversified teaching approaches）. Except for（In addition to包括在内）blackboard and chalks, many advanced teaching devices are being used today in most schools, including computers, multi-media and some other instruments. Moreover, labs and libraries have also come into use for students to study deeper and
wider (who want to make a deeper and wider study on the fields they are interested in).What is more, the teachers' teaching levels are greatly improved by communicating with other educators from all over the world. The technology becomes more developed than in the past, so it is easier now to study.
Thirdly, people have equal rights to receive education. As we all know, people in the past were in terrible discrimination because of their sex and race(many people such as women and the black people were denied the right to education because they were discriminated against in the society because of their sex and race. 两句合起来)For example, women and black people were used to be considered as people in lower classes or even slaves and weren't allowed to go to school.However, they have equal rights to study in schools nowadays. （要回到主题，和更容易接受教育要直接联系起来，所以再加一句）Obviously, these people surly have easier access to education.
To sum up, almost everyone today has equal rights to go to all kinds of schools with diversified teaching approaches. So people do have an easier way to receive education now than in past times. The reasons above firmly support my opinion(最后一句话不够有力，可以将三点简明扼要的用一句话概括).(Word Count: 294)
独立8-包含因果关系P15 2010.3.20NA Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People today can solve many important problems so they do not need help from the government.
With the development of the society, people can do more things by themselves nowadays （于什么时候比较？）than in the past.But I disagree with the statement that people can solve many important problems, therefore the government does not need to help them（therefore they need not depend on the government for any support）. There (are) three reasons as follows:
Firstly, People today still cannot solve many important problems by themselves in fact in terms of education, unemployment, war, starvation, poverty and so on. These are international problems all over the world, so a single person or even a group of people may not have the abilities to solve (be capable of solving) them. For example, if a man wants to stop a war between two countries, even he is powerful or wealthy, he (he, however wealthy and powerful,) cannot prevent them from fighting with each other without the help of others.
Secondly, people today need more help from the government. As the life standards are getting higher, people have more requirements than before.
They ask for all kinds of utilities for entertainment or exercise in public places. They need various insurance to make their lives more comfortable. They also require more schools and hospitals to take care of the young people and patients (the sick).
Thirdly, whether people today can solve many problems or not has nothing to do with whether they need the government's help. It is the responsibility of the government to help people. The government must give people help no matter how powerful they are.
In a word, the statement that people today do not need help from the government because they can solve many important problems is wrong. The reasons above can firmly support my idea. (260w)
独立1-包含should, important, necessary的简单话题
P75 2009.5.30 Y ounger school children (aged between five and ten) should be required to study art and music in addition to math, science, history and language.
In order to broaden the horizon of younger school children, it is suggested that they should study art and music as well as other common courses. I agree with it because of the following reasons.
First of all, art and music can help students to relax. Campus life is stressful even for younger children who aged between five and ten, with all kinds of homework and assignments. However, by having music and art classes, students can get a much-needed escape from the heavy work. It can help them to relax their mind and study more efficiently in other classes.
Second, music and art classes help improve students' interpersonal relationships. Students will meet together to talk about a same topic if they have common interests. For example, students attending art classes can talk about the masterpiece or life story of a famous painter. Students having music classes will enjoy the beautiful melody or sing songs together. By communicating with each other, they will build a strong friendship and learn how to behave in various situations.
Third, music and art classes provide students with plenty of information about great artists and their works. By learning knowledge in artistic fields students can acquire different cultures from different countries. The artists and musicians describe what they see or hear in their works, showing feelings meanwhile, which bring the students the atmosphere at that time.
To sum up, art and music classes should be taken by younger school students to broaden their horizon. (248w)
独立2-包含比较(better, prefer)的简单话题
P24 2010.10.9NA Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People can take care of their family members better when they live in big cities than in the countryside.
No matter where people live, in big cities or in the countryside, they must take care of their family members. Basically I prefer the former one. Living in big cities has more advantages than living in the countryside.
Firstly, for old people, living in big cities can be convenient. There are a large number of hospitals which are available to all kinds of diseases. When the old people catch a cold, have a fever or even heart attack, they could be taken to the best hospital nearby and received treat in time and recover as soon as possible. But in the countryside, situations in hospitals are obviously terrible.
Secondly, children should receive good education, so living in big cities
is a wise choice. Schools in big cities which get finance support from (the)
government provide sufficient teaching facilities for the students in order that the students can study more easily and do more experiments. Moreover, the teaching levels of the teachers in big cities are higher on average than that of the teachers in the countryside.
Admittedly, Living in big cities may have a few downsides. For example, the air may be not as fresh as it in the countryside and the noise may make people crazy sometimes. However, (the) government is taking measures to prevent the pollutions and people are also becoming aware of the importance of environmental protection.
It is sure that the problems can be solved in the future.
In a word, people can take care of their family members much better when they live in big cities than in the countryside, because advanced society welfares are everywhere in big cities.（Word Count: 272）
独立7-包含绝对词（never, always, only ,no longer,最高级等）.
P92 2007.8.4 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Printed books will no longer exist.
With the development of technology, digital books are increasingly coming into use while printed book are less used in our lives. It has been
argued that printed books will no longer exist in the future. I disagree (with this opinion) although the statement has a grain of truth.
First of all, admittedly, digital books have some advantages over printed books. First, it is cheaper to download a digital version from the internet than to buy a hardcover printed book. You may download Harry Potter for only half the price of the paper version. Second, the digital book is very convenient for us to carry because it is much lighter than the printed book. We can download thousands of articles into our mp4 or electronic books to read them everywhere instead of carrying several heavy books.
However, to say that printed books will disappear from our lives in the future is unacceptable. First, hardcover printed books are worth collecting. They are usually very valuable with their beautiful covers and plentiful contents. Second, the printed books made by (of) papers are good for people's eyes. If we stare at a digital book all the time, our eyes will be tired or even hurt. Reading for a long period may do enormous harms to people's health, especially to children. Third, printed books are of great importance in some special ceremonies. They are usually the symbols of holy things. It is ridiculous for a minister to read with a digital book in a church.
To sum up, although the digital books are more and more useful, it is sure that printed books will exist forever. (267)
托福独立写作主体段写法技巧——双观点篇 托福独立写作对于很多托福考生来说是取得高分难以逾越的一道鸿沟, 这不仅需要大量的练习, 还需掌握其中的诀窍。今天, 教育优选为各位考生带来托福独立写作主题段双观点的写法点拨,希望对各位考生有所帮助。 通常对于独立写作我们都会选择五段式的结构,这个结构包括三个主体段, 按照题型我们可以将写作类型分为三个:支持反对类 (单观点、对比比较类 (双观点、自主定义类。今天,闫玲娟老师跟各位考生分析一下有关双观点类题目的写作技巧,下面是一道典型的题目: Topic 2008.11.9 Movies and TV have more positive effects than negative effects on young people’ s behavior. 电影电视对于青少年行为的影响利大于弊。 题目中明显要求就电视的优点以及缺点进行比较,我们暂且用 A 、 B 表示两个不同观点 1.A+A+B 双关的写作的第一种写法是运用两个正向的论点去支撑 A , 再用一个论点去支持 B ,因为 A 的优势更大一些,所以最终得出 A 更合适的结果。 Topic 2008.11.9 Movies and TV have more positive effects than negative effects on young people’ s behavior. 电影电视对于青少年行为的影响利大于弊。 Agree :
The positive influence outweighs their negative effects. Large quantities of motion pictures (movies about encouragement strengthen young generation’ s willpower to chase dreams with determination. Influenced by a number of interesting TV programs, young people begin to learn things that they used to feel boring. Admittedly , we should not ignore that there are some violent plots which tend to result in teenage crimes.However, this kind of movie makes up only a small section of products in film industry and is under the strict control of government. Therefore, its influence is quite limited. 我们可以看到, 在这种写法中, 我们所支持的观点为电影电视是利大于弊的。 前两个理由我们先正向抛出两个论点说明为什么它们对青年人的影响利大于弊, 最后一个分论点我们写让步段, 先承认它们的确有可能对青年人行为产生错误的引导, 但是其后又对这些错误影响做一些弥补, 因为有负面影响的节目只是整个电影市场的一小部分,不能够以偏概全,断章取义。 2.A+A-B 我们介绍的第二种写法是, 先用两个正向的论点支持 A , 再用一个论点去反对B ,最终得出 A 更适合的结果。 Topic :Some people argue that the government should not spend money on public services and facilities, but on arts. 有一部分人认为政府应该花更多的钱在公共服务和基础设施上,而非艺术上。 Public facilities, widely accepted as the main foundation to a city’ s development, should be one of the highest priorities. In addition to social benefits, ther e are a great number of economic merits that …
As the economy and technology develop at an incredible speed in today’s society, there are an increasing number of people believing that the most important problems affecting our society today could be solved within our lifetime. In my view, however, this is out of the question and the three most significant problems affecting the society, namely war, environmental destruction and disease, will still influence us and may not be entirely resolved forever. War is a problem afflicting humans since they took into being in the first place. Wars take place when different countries have conflicting benefits, which is unlikely to be eliminated as long as the boundaries between countries still exist. For instance, in the Middle East where water is extremely scarce, many countries are in conflict in contention for water resources. Since every country acts for the sake of its own benefit, it seems that people in the region are incapable of living together in harmony. Eternal world peace, therefore, is unlikely to be achieved in our lifetime. Environmental destruction emerged not long before but it is becoming increasingly severe and can not be ignored. With the large-scale utilization of fossil fuels and rapid development of industry, huge amounts of pollutants are being produced, contaminating the environment to a large degree. The disposal of these pollutants being a tough task, it is hardly possible that we can completely get rid of them within a short period of time. Furthermore, even if we can come up with optimal methods for dealing with these substances, there remains the problem that these methods may cost too much and obstruct the development of economy. Last but not least, the well-being of people around the world is threatened by a variety of diseases, ranging from AIDS to cancer, the cures for which have not been discovered yet. Diseases set off panics among humans, affect their normal life and leave people badly off with the high medical expenses. There are thousands of scientists devoting themselves to finding cure for diseases, but new types of diseases keep emerging and there is no eliminating all of them. In summary, the problems with the most significance today are going to be passed on to our offspring. To eliminate these problems thoroughly, there is still a long way to go.
托福综合写作7范文托福作文的综合写作应该写托福作文写作应该分为三个层次，也就是我们确定中心思想后应该找三个理由来支持。托福写作还有一个五段论，第一段为中心思想，二三四为支持段落，第五段总结观点。这个就是所谓的八股文。但是形式不能太明显，在表达中多加入自己的思想，八股文的形式会隐晦一些。一般这种写作可以助你在托福作文中取得高分。 构建综合写作整体，你可以从以下这几个方面入手：第一，将听力及阅读中的核心观点提炼出来，并指明对应的两个观点是支持还是对立；第二，分为几个段落，分别从不同角度总结出两个观点的论据。最后，重申主要论证观点并注意切忌掺加个人观点。听力结束后，考生还会有时间回看阅读文章，所以不用完整记忆阅读文章的论点和论据，记下核心即可。 有问题，可以再问我。 我觉得 ___老师讲的不太对，我自己本身也在 ___培训过，感觉他们讲的方法都是很过时的方法，不太适用于新托福的考试。下面是我自己考了四次托福的感想： 2、其实考试的时候，观点找错的情况似乎不太会发生。。。因为阅读里面都有提示了啊。。。一般不会弄错的，所以不用担心，
重点是细节不要搞错，要挺清楚细节说了那几点，尽量不要落下那个点，细节齐全 3、写得时候模板适当用用，但是表全部都用，那样文章就有点僵硬了，你自己读着通顺就好啊。 4、文章内部用词要有多样性，要适当地用一些高级的词汇，如重要的这个意思，你不要只用important, 这样显得你不认识多少单词，可以用significant, vital, essential, of great importance, core, 这种意思相近的单词或者是意群来表达，这样他们就认为你词汇量大了。 5、写综合写作最能体现你的词汇量和句型的多边性，所以不要直接照抄听力或者是阅读的内容，这样就表现不出你自己了，多看看新概念4里面的表达方法，哪些句型神马的都很好，对考试很有用！！！ 6、模板没有对错之分，你自己需要好一个模板，然后自己用自己弄出来的，这样比较好，不过这种东西都差不多，重点还是看个人的表达神马的，还有词汇量什么的。
托福独立写作技巧之因果法 托福独立写作有技巧吗？经常有学生抱怨说，托福独立写作很少能找到比较好的范文，去看美国本土的杂志又觉得文体和词句相对托福来说太难了，也不知道美国本土学生遇到托福这样的essay会如何写。其实聪明的学生往往会发现，真正美国人要求的300字以上的独立写作文章往往可以参考综合写作的阅读和听力文章的结构及论证方法，而不用舍近求远。以下，托福老师将给大家分析一下如何从综合作文中提取老外要求的思维逻辑。在这里为托福考生带来一种论证方法——因果法。 因果法用于topic sentence和中间的supporting details都可以，首先我们来看一看综合作文中是如何运用的。 一、对于topic sentence 1.TPO 第一篇topic sentence: The shortened workweek would increase company profits because employees would feel more rested and alert, and as a result, they would make fewer costly errors in their work. （缩短的周工作日可以提高公司的利润，因为员工可以感觉到更多的休整并且机警了，结果就是他们工作上犯错率减少了。） For the country as a whole, one of the primary benefits of offering this option to employees is that it would reduce unemployment rates. （对于整个国家来说，因为可以减少失业率，所以缩短周工作日是个好事。） 分析： 这是一篇TPO中的两个分topic sentence, 不难看出都用了一个因果逻辑，那为什么写topic sentence要用因果法呢？ 我们再来回顾一下topic sentence的要求：每个分topic sentence都是要求能够论证总
托福独立精选作文 Ｄo you agree or disagree with the following statement： students should be encouraged to take courses like science, technology, engineering and math that are likely to lead to job opportunities rather than subjects they might be interested in. Ｔhe question of “ what is the most important subject or skill the schools should teach? ” has never failed to attract attention from educators, school administrators and even politicians especially when it comes to subjects like technology, engineering and math. Ｓome argue that students should be encouraged to take such classes rather than the ones they are interested in since they give them a better shot to find jobs. Ｈowever, personally, Ｉ am not in favor of this position based on the following reasons. Ａdmittedly, it is true that courses like technology, engineering and math are very technical, most of which can be applied in solving real world issues. Ｈowever, the exposure that students have to apply these theories are very limited in class. Ｔaking technical oriented classes will not give students a competitive
2015 13 1.25 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? When working on a project, it’s better for classmates or colleagues to communicate face to face than sending emails. 2.1 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and televisions have more negative influences than positive influences on young people's behavior. 3.7 2 Some people think that it is an important part of a child’s education to go on field trips (for example, museums), other people think a child’s time is better spent learning in a classroom at school. What is your opinion? 3.28 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It's better to complete a project and then start another one than to do several things at the same time. 4.12 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The government should spend money helping more people access the Internet instead of improving public transportation. 6.13 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It's better to spend money enjoying life like going on vacation than to save money for the future. 6.29 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: it's better to make friends with intelligent people than with people who have a sense of humor? 9.5 In order to attract more tourists, the government could either improve safety by hiring more police or improve its appearance by repairing old buildings and streets. Which way do you think is more effective? 9.12 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to achieve success, we must be more similar to others than be different from others. 10.10 Which is better for children's education: 9-month study and 3-month break or 3-month study and 1-month break? 10.11 Instead of spending money on exploration of outer space, government should 10.25
托福独立写作主体段写法技巧—单观点篇Topic 2007.11.3 People who do not work because they have enough money are rarely happy. 这道题就是一道典型的单观点题目，“那些因为有充足的钱而不去工作的人，他们鲜少开心。” 针对单观点话题主体段的展开有两种方式，举例我们支持是A观点，先来看第一种写法。 1. A+A+A 这种写法代表着我们需要用三个理由支持自己的选择。 Topic：It is desirable to know about events from all over the world even if it is unlikely to have any effect on your daily life. 了解世界各地发生的事情是好的，纵使这些事不会对我们的日常生活产生任何影响。 1. To begin with, being aware of these cultural events means having more topics for communication. 2. In addition, learning news about science is necessary for us to form correct world views in today’s fast-changing society. 3. In the end, understanding political incidents serves as an excellent method to broaden our horizons. 在这种写法里考生可举出了三个论点正向支持自己的态度，认为了解这些事情是必要的。但是这种写法并不适用于每个考生，因为对
托福写作辅导：托福考试满分作文欣赏（１） Which one do you prefer, to solve problems on your own experience and knowledge, or to ask others for advice? As knowledge and experience serve as twim towers in problem-solving, one is often presented with two major paths that pave the way for final fulfillment, eitther to wrack his brain, just like what happened to Neuton, siiting for many years under an apple tree and eventually figuring out ond of the greatest universal rules that govern the whole globe, or to seek for others ’ widsom through their advice, just as in the case of Benjinin Franklin, gathering great minds under one roof and then establishing a most world-renown libray. Both ways work. When a practical goal is involved, however, Benjimin Franklin may best be regareded as a role model in this respect and asking people for advice often turn out to be the prime alternative. Experience and knowledge borrowed or learned from others’ advice contribute greatly to effectiveness and effeciency for a goal-accomplishment. Not all experience and knowledge related to problem-solving can be obtained by personal effort alone due to limitations of mind and capabilities of each individual. A single thought in someone’s mind is, more often than not, far less shining compared with group ’s wisdom. That explains the famous old saying that one sees further when standing upon the shoulders’ of past great giants; that explains why a great leader is always with greater minds; that also explains why teamwork in corperation is highly emphasized in the 21st century. Brainstorm and exchange of ideas between different thoughts never fail to enhance capabilities of each individula involved, a team, a company, an institution, a country, or even the entire global village. Asking others’ advice instead of getting everything done on one’s own promotes democracy and communication too. In terms of democracy, it is necessary to give others rights and chances to speak since the problem may concern them in different ways, and their saying in turn reflects our respect toward freedom of speech as well as their wisdom. In terms of communication, idea exchange sometimes focuses more than solutions, and hereby better mutual understanding about perspectives, principles, praticalities and personalities of each other. Admittely turning to others for help and suggestion by no means refers to absolute and irresponsible dependence. Consideration upon different thoughts and ideas broadens our mind, enlarges our vision, furthers understanding, enhances more effective and efficient brainstorm, and stresses mutual respect in groups and communities, which undoubtedly gives rise to better, if not the best solutions. As is paraphrasedfrom John F Kenedy, brainstormed, there is little we cannot do while divided, there is little we can do. 托福写作辅导：托福考试满分作文欣赏(2) Case of Benjinin Franklin, gathering great minds under one roof and then establishing a most world-renown libray. Both ways work. When a practical goal is involved, however, Benjimin Franklin may best be regareded as a role model in this respect and asking people for advice often turn out to be the prime alternative. Experience and knowledge borrowed or learned from others' advice contribute greatly
TPO40-48全部分托福独立写作文本题目汇总 对于托福考试，相信大家对于TPO托福模考软件都不陌生，现在市面上可以下载到免费的TPO模考软件。虽然TPO模考软件里的题目是不会出现在考试中，但是考生可能通过它了解托福考试的题型以、考试模式及题目的难易度掌握，所以TPO托福模考软件对考生十分的重要。 最近TPO托福模考软件更新了40-48套题，这也是ETS为了考生适应未来考试而放出的题目，所以练习这几套题十分重要。这里小编为大家整理了TPO40-48全部托福独立写作文本题目，希望对大家托福写作备考有帮助，快来看看吧。 TPO40独立写作题目文本 Independent Writing Directions Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. Question: Essay Topic Some parents offer their school-age children money for each high grade (mark) they get in school. Do you think this is a good idea? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. TPO41独立写作题目文本 Independent Writing Directions Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. Question: Essay Topic Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teacher were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
托福独立写作主体段写法技巧—双观点篇Topic 2008.11.9 Movies and TV have more positive effects than negative effects on young people’s behavior. 电影电视对于青少年行为的影响利大于弊。 题目中明显要求就电视的优点以及缺点实行比较，我们暂且用A、B表示两个不同观点 1.A+A+B 双关的写作的第一种写法是使用两个正向的论点去支撑A，再用一个论点去支持B，因为A的优势更大一些，所以最终得出A更合适的结果。 Topic 2008.11.9 Movies and TV have more positive effects than negative effects on young people’s behavior. 电影电视对于青少年行为的影响利大于弊。 Agree： The positive influence outweighs their negative effects. Large quantities of motion pictures (movies) about encouragement strengthen young generation’s willpower to chase dreams with determination. Influenced by a number of interesting TV programs, young people begin to learn things that they used to feel boring.
2012年大陆托福已考独立作文汇总（更新至11.18） 2012.1.8 Agree or disagree the food we ate in the past is health 2012.1.14 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All school teachers should take course every five years to update their knowledge. 2012.2.05 人是应该坚持自己的远大但不容易实现理想还是应该着眼于现实目标 2012.2.11 Talented people’s leadership is born by natural and can't be learned by people, agree or disagree. 2012.2.17 Some prefer buy new technological devices; others having them when they are well-adopted. Which do you prefer? 2012.2.24 同意是否：团队合作中，不能接受批评的人不会成功的。 2012.2.25 Can two people be good friends if one person has more money than the other? 2012.3.04 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Employees who are good at following the instructions of their managers are more valuable to their companies than employees who always try to find new ways or better ways? 2012.3.10 当你和朋友谈论一些upsetting或者controversy的事的时候，你用e-mail\text messaging还是用phone\ voice messaging？ 2012.3.18 People care more about public recognition than about money. Even if no more money is given, public recognition can still make people work harder 人们工作是为了赚钱还是为了社会地位. 2012.3.24 To make children do well in school, parents should limit the hours that children spend on watching TV or movies.
新托福独立写作21类题目 1.体育类： 2008.11.14—Children should only play sports for fun rather than play sports in competitions or contests. (Education) 孩子们应该为了乐趣而去参加体育活动而不是为了竞争或者比赛。 体育在现代生活的重要性有： 1.体育可以在身体得到锻炼，使身体素质得到提高； 2.体育活动让朋友和家人聚集一起参加锻炼，有社会意义，是一种积极的休闲和团体活动； 3.体育可以调节生活，让人们获得心理上的健康和快乐，更好的缓解压力； 4.体育可以提高人的意志和韧性； 5.体育是一个大的产业，给国家带来收入； 6.体育体现了人类社会的精神，可以促进世界和平。 体育运动的优点： 1.增加体质(increase physical strength)，有益于身心健康； 2.加快脂肪燃烧(accelaerate fat burning)，有助于减肥(lose weight)； 3.有助于保持体形(stay in shape)，提高自我的形象(improve self image)； 4.有助于缓解压力(relieve stress)，调节心情(improve mood)，减少失落的情绪(reduce the chance of depression)； 5.有助于保持旺盛的精力(keep energetic)，从而提高工作效率(increase productivity)。 孩子参加体育项目是为了获得快乐：因为体育活动可以让他们得到精神上的放松，可以是他们和朋友交流的一种方式； 而获得乐趣并不是体育活动的唯一目的，参加比赛也是一种目的，因为比赛获胜可以让他们获得一种成就感，输了可以学会逆境成长的精神。 2008.12.5—Sports teaches us lessons about life. 运动教会我们一些生活道理 运动教会我们要养成健康的生活方式和积极的人生态度； 体育比赛告诉我们竞争是生活的一部分，但友谊同样重要； 团队运动教给人们要合作，在生活中和工作中也要学会合作，这样做事情才会能有效率，比如，在足球篮球比赛中，你不能时时都争着进球，要注意合作才能获得更高的分数，一个全都是优秀球员的球队并不一定能给打败一个球员很平庸但是合作的很好的球队，在生活上也是如此，我们不必事事争第一，和别人合作往往能达到共赢的目的。 棋类运动教给我们许多生活道理，比如我们下棋的时候必须瞻前顾后，考虑很多步，生活上也是，凡事三思而后行 2.专业知识类： 2006.11.19—It is more important to choose a subject of your interest than to choose subjects which prepare you for a job or a career.(Education) 选自己感兴趣的学科比选有前途的学科更重要（支持该观点） 中间段写作思路： （一）Reason 1: 因果链接：资源有限—竞争激烈—压力大—就业压力—就业竞争中脱颖而出—有前途的专业（举例） 首先：学习对于未来的职业有用的学科之后才能更容易找到工作。当代社会每个人都渴望取得成功，但是资源是有限的，所以竞争激烈，每个人承受的压力都很大，其中大学生面临的最现实的问题就是就业问题。
2017年托福写作真题 2017.1.7 You are helping to select a leader for a student organization or a group. Do you think a person's honest is the most important characteristic for being a leader? for a student organization or a group限定作用 2017.1.14 As a student of university that has a long break between university semesters, the university requires all students to do one of the following for one month during the break: 1.Students must take a course on the subject that has no direct connection to their majors of study (For example, a student majoring in engineering may take course in fine arts or social science.) 2.Students must volunteer to work in the university’ s city or their hometowns to improve some aspects of life of the city or their own town. (For example, students may help local primary school children with their homework.) Which one do you think is more beneficial for students in their university? Why? Given detailed examples and reasons. Use your OWN words, do NOT use memorized examples. that has a long break between university semesters 限定作用 2017.2.8 Sometimes we are assigned to work in a group on a project. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The group will be helped more by person who will be willing to do what other group members want than by person who often strongly insists that things should be done in a way that is different from what the group wants to do. 二选一 2017.2.25 Do you agree or disagree: The way people dresses are a good indication of his or her personality or character? Agree: 1.最直观的品质（1）风格是个社会银还是潮男他的喜好 （2）对一些的东西的喜欢颜色冷热 2.生活的态度（1）能好好打理自己积极面对生活 （2）对穿衣服很考究对其他事也很严格 Disagree:1.衣服并不能看出来（1）太忙了并不想浪费时间在穿衣上 （2）父母朋友随便送的 （3）职业限定 （4）不能通过一件事分析不同的人不同见解 2.喜欢的事情更能看出来（1）书是一个深奥坚持 （2）学科teacher—喜欢小孩外向程序员—内向… 通过接触可以发现（1）紧急想法 二选一 2017.2.26 Rather than help children with their schoolwork, parents should encourage their children do their work independently. 1.应该1对学习好（1）会自己找到错误（2）自己找的错误印象深刻更能理解 2培养能力（1）自己去完成独立思考的能力未来。 （2）去找人合作沟通的能力 责任感自己的事情负责对父母好（1）忙（2）教材创新 不应该1对学习好（1）孩子太小不能独立克服困难家长的帮助更高效 （2）家长更有知识讲一些延伸 2对小孩好（1）体验家庭的关爱增强关系家庭和睦 （2）防止他们抄袭 二选一