public_writing_band_descriptors雅思写作评分标准(公开版)
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雅思写作评分标准对照表雅思写作的评分标准根据四个不同维度进行评估:任务响应(Task Response)、连贯与衔接(Coherence and Cohesion)、词汇运用(Lexical Resource)以及语法使用(Grammar)。
任务响应(Task Response)是评估考生是否对题目进行了正确的回答,是否有效地表达了自己的观点和主张。
评分时会考虑到考生的观点是否明确,是否能清楚地论述观点并给出相关的例子,支持材料是否充足。
此外,逻辑的组织结构以及对于各个论点之间的衔接也会被评估。
连贯与衔接(Coherence and Cohesion)评估的是考生的文档结构和条理性。
评分时会考虑到段落之间是否有恰当的连接词,是否有明确的中心思想以及表达的清晰度。
此外,考生应注意使用恰当的语法和词汇,以便用更流畅的方式表达自己的观点。
词汇运用(Lexical Resource)评估的是考生对于词汇的掌握程度。
考生应尽量使用准确、多样化的词汇,展示自己的词汇储备。
评分时会考虑到使用词汇的恰当性、准确性和多样性,以及语法和文化上下文的运用。
语法使用(Grammar)评估的是考生对于语法结构的运用。
考生应尽量避免语法错误和拼写错误,并展示自己对于语法的正确理解和运用。
评分时会考虑到语法结构的正确性、多样性和复杂性。
以下是一些参考内容,帮助考生更好地理解雅思写作的评分标准:1. 任务响应(Task Response):- 理解并回答题目中提出的问题,明确表达自己的观点和主张;- 提供恰当的例子来支持观点,并展示自己的论述能力;- 逻辑结构清晰,段落之间有明确的衔接关系。
2. 连贯与衔接(Coherence and Cohesion):- 文章有明确的中心思想,并对相关观点进行适当的展开;- 使用恰当的连词(如:however, therefore, in addition)来连接不同的观点和段落;- 使用恰当的句子结构和过渡词,使文章的表达更加流畅。
IELTS Task 1 Writing band descriptors (public version)Band Task Achievement Coherence and Cohesion Lexical Resource Grammatical Range and Accuracy9 fully satisfies all the requirements ofthe taskclearly presents a fully developedresponse uses cohesion in such away that it attracts noattentionskilfully managesparagraphinguses a wide range of vocabulary withvery natural and sophisticated control oflexical features; rare minor errors occuronly as ‘slips’uses a wide range of structures with fullflexibility and accuracy; rare minor errorsoccur only as ‘slips’8 covers all requirements of the tasksufficientlypresents, highlights and illustrates keyfeatures / bullet points clearly andappropriately sequences information andideas logicallymanages all aspects ofcohesion welluses paragraphingsufficiently andappropriatelyuses a wide range of vocabulary fluentlyand flexibly to convey precise meaningsskilfully uses uncommon lexical items butthere may be occasional inaccuracies inword choice and collocationproduces rare errors in spelling and/orword formationuses a wide range of structuresthe majority of sentences are error-freemakes only very occasional errors orinappropriacies7 covers the requirements of the task(Academic) presents a clear overviewof main trends, differences or stages(General Training) presents a clearpurpose, with the tone consistent andappropriateclearly presents and highlights keyfeatures / bullet points but could bemore fully extended logically organisesinformation and ideas; thereis clear progressionthroughoutuses a range of cohesivedevices appropriatelyalthough there may besome under-/over-useuses a sufficient range of vocabulary toallow some flexibility and precisionuses less common lexical items withsome awareness of style and collocationmay produce occasional errors in wordchoice, spelling and/or word formationuses a variety of complex structuresproduces frequent error-free sentenceshas good control of grammar andpunctuation but may make a few errors6 addresses the requirements of the task(Academic) presents an overview withinformation appropriately selected(General Training) presents a purposethat is generally clear; there may beinconsistencies in tonepresents and adequately highlights keyfeatures / bullet points but details maybe irrelevant, inappropriate orinaccurate arranges information andideas coherently and thereis a clear overallprogressionuses cohesive deviceseffectively, but cohesionwithin and/or betweensentences may be faulty ormechanicalmay not always usereferencing clearly orappropriatelyuses an adequate range of vocabularyfor the taskattempts to use less common vocabularybut with some inaccuracymakes some errors in spelling and/orword formation, but they do not impedecommunicationuses a mix of simple and complex sentenceformsmakes some errors in grammar andpunctuation but they rarely reducecommunication5 generally addresses the task; theformat may be inappropriate in places(Academic) recounts detailmechanically with no clear overview;there may be no data to support thedescription(General Training) may present apurpose for the letter that is unclear attimes; the tone may be variable andsometimes inappropriatepresents, but inadequately covers, keyfeatures / bullet points; there may be atendency to focus on details presents information withsome organisation but theremay be a lack of overallprogressionmakes inadequate,inaccurate or over-use ofcohesive devicesmay be repetitive becauseof lack of referencing andsubstitutionuses a limited range of vocabulary, butthis is minimally adequate for the taskmay make noticeable errors in spellingand/or word formation that may causesome difficulty for the readeruses only a limited range of structuresattempts complex sentences but these tendto be less accurate than simple sentencesmay make frequent grammatical errors andpunctuation may be faulty; errors cancause some difficulty for the reader4 attempts to address the task but doesnot cover all key features / bulletpoints; the format may be inappropriate(General Training) fails to clearlyexplain the purpose of the letter; thetone may be inappropriatemay confuse key features / bulletpoints with detail; parts may beunclear, irrelevant, repetitive orinaccurate presents information andideas but these are notarranged coherently andthere is no clearprogression in the responseuses some basic cohesivedevices but these may beinaccurate or repetitiveuses only basic vocabulary which may beused repetitively or which may beinappropriate for the taskhas limited control of word formationand/or spelling;errors may cause strain for thereaderuses only a very limited range of structureswith only rare use of subordinate clausessome structures are accurate but errorspredominate, and punctuation is oftenfaulty3 fails to address the task, which mayhave been completely misunderstoodpresents limited ideas which may belargely irrelevant/repetitive does not organise ideaslogicallymay use a very limitedrange of cohesive devices,and those used may notindicate a logicalrelationship between ideasuses only a very limited range of wordsand expressions with very limited controlof word formation and/or spellingerrors may severely distort the messageattempts sentence forms but errors ingrammar and punctuation predominate anddistort the meaning2 answer is barely related to the task has very little control oforganisational features uses an extremely limited range ofvocabulary; essentially no control of wordformation and/or spellingcannot use sentence forms except inmemorised phrases1 answer is completely unrelated to thetask fails to communicate anymessagecan only use a few isolated words cannot use sentence forms at all0 does not attenddoes not attempt the task in any waywrites a totally memorised response。
WRITING TASK 2: Band Descriptors (public version)BandTask responseCoherence and cohesionLexical resourceGrammatical range and accuracy9•fully addresses all parts of the task•presents a fully developed position in answer to the question with relevant, fully extended and well supported ideas•uses cohesion in such a way that it attracts no attention •skilfully manages paragraphing•uses a wide range of vocabulary with very natural and sophisticated control of lexical features; rare minor errors occur only as ‘slips’•uses a wide range of structures with full flexibility and accuracy; rare minor errors occur only as ‘slips’8•sufficiently addresses all parts of the task•presents a well-developed response to the question with relevant, extended and supported ideas•sequences information and ideas logically •manages all aspects of cohesion well•uses paragraphing sufficiently and appropriately•uses a wide range of vocabulary fluently and flexibly to convey precise meanings•skilfully uses uncommon lexical items but there may be occasional inaccuracies in word choice and collocation •produces rare errors in spelling and/or word formation •uses a wide range of structures•the majority of sentences are error-free•makes only very occasional errors or inappropriacies 7•addresses all parts of the task •presents a clear position throughout the response•presents, extends and supports main ideas, but there maybe a tendency to over-generalise and/or supporting ideasmay lack focus •logically organises information and ideas; there is clearprogression throughout •uses a range of cohesive devices appropriately although there may be some under-/over-use •presents a clear central topic within each paragraph •uses a sufficient range of vocabulary to allow some flexibility and precision•uses less common lexical items with some awareness of style and collocation•may produce occasional errors in word choice, spelling and/or word formation•uses a variety of complex structures •produces frequent error-free sentences•has good control of grammar and punctuation but may make a few errors6•addresses all parts of the task although some parts may be more fully covered than others•presents a relevant position although the conclusions may become unclear or repetitive•presents relevant main ideas but some may be inadequately developed/unclear•arranges information and ideas coherently and there is a clear overall progression•uses cohesive devices effectively, but cohesion within and/or between sentences may be faulty or mechanical •may not always use referencing clearly or appropriately •uses paragraphing, but not always logically•uses an adequate range of vocabulary for the task •attempts to use less common vocabulary but with some inaccuracy•makes some errors in spelling and/or word formation, but they do not impede communication•uses a mix of simple and complex sentence forms•makes some errors in grammar and punctuation but they rarely reduce communication5•addresses the task only partially; the format may be inappropriate in places •expresses a position but the development is not always clear and there may be no conclusions drawn •presents some main ideas but these are limited and not sufficiently developed; there may be irrelevant detail •presents information with some organisation but there may be a lack of overall progression •makes inadequate, inaccurate or over-use of cohesive devices •may be repetitive because of lack of referencing and substitution•may not write in paragraphs, or paragraphing may be inadequate•uses a limited range of vocabulary, but this is minimally adequate for the task•may make noticeable errors in spelling and/or word formation that may cause some difficulty for the reader•uses only a limited range of structures•attempts complex sentences but these tend to be less accurate than simple sentences•may make frequent grammatical errors and punctuation may be faulty; errors can cause some difficulty for the reader4•responds to the task only in a minimal way or the answer is tangential; the format may be inappropriate •presents a position but this is unclear•presents some main ideas but these are difficult to identify and may be repetitive, irrelevant or not well supported•presents information and ideas but these are not arranged coherently and there is no clear progression in theresponse •uses some basic cohesive devices but these may beinaccurate or repetitive •may not write in paragraphs or their use may be confusing•uses only basic vocabulary which may be used repetitively or which may be inappropriate for the task •has limited control of word formation and/or spelling; errors may cause strain for the reader •uses only a very limited range of structures with only rare use of subordinate clauses•some structures are accurate but errors predominate, and punctuation is often faulty3•does not adequately address any part of the task •does not express a clear position •presents few ideas, which are largely undeveloped orirrelevant•does not organise ideas logically •may use a very limited range of cohesive devices, andthose used may not indicate a logical relationship between ideas •uses only a very limited range of words and expressions with very limited control of word formation and/or spelling •errors may severely distort the message•attempts sentence forms but errors in grammar and punctuation predominate and distort the meaning2•barely responds to the task •does not express a position•may attempt to present one or two ideas but there is no development•has very little control of organisational features •uses an extremely limited range of vocabulary; essentially no control of word formation and/or spelling•cannot use sentence forms except in memorised phrases1•answer is completely unrelated to the task •fails to communicate any message •can only use a few isolated words •cannot use sentence forms at all•does not attend•does not attempt the task in any way •writes a totally memorised responseIELTS is jointly owned by the British Council, IDP: IELTS Australia and the University of Cambridge ESOL Examinations (Cambridge ESOL).Page 1 of 1。
雅思写作的评分标准揭秘雅思的写作成绩是考生们都比较关心的,下面小编就来分享一下雅思的写作评分规则是什么样的。
雅思写作的评分标准雅思写作是由考官按任务完成情况(Task 1)/任务回答情况(Task 2)、连贯与衔接、词汇变换、句式多样性和语法准确性这四项标准来分别评等级分。
写作任务完成情况/任务回应情况:雅思写作Task1,考生都需要按照要求完成写作任务,要求是根据作文的要求找出所有关键信息,进行解释说明,必要时需要提供细节内容,如出现重要数据,要确保其准确性。
雅思写作Task2,要求考生回答题目中的要求,表达自己的观点,并用相关论据解释自己的观点。
连贯与衔接:关于连贯性和衔接,主要考察的是考生的文章主旨能力和信息观点的连接能力。
连贯性具体指的是文章的流畅度、文章观点的逻辑是否清晰,段落结构是否恰当。
衔接性指的是考生对于连接词的使用是否能够帮助考生整合观点,将段落、句子和句子成分之间的关系阐明清楚。
词汇变换:首先多注意积累同义词,减少重复用词;注意描述和表达方式的多样化,在转述题目时,尽量使用同义词或其他表达方式,避免重复题目中的原词;注意词汇搭配和词组的使用,不太需要所谓的高级词汇。
另外,关于词汇准确性,考生要注意词汇的使用语境、词汇的拼写。
很多考生喜欢用一些生僻词汇,却做不到多样和准确,考官对于词汇的要求只是准确,多样,所以尽管考生备考很努力,但分数依然不高的原因就是搞错了写作评分标准中对词汇的要求。
句式多样性和语法准确性:雅思写作对于句式多样性的要求主要是在作文中,注意时态、比较级、动词、复杂句等使用。
而准确性则是建立在使用的场景正确。
雅思写作评分细则:雅思写作评分标准详解雅思写作评分细则:任务完成情况 Task Response此项评分标准检测的是考生是否恰当回答了写作要求的程度(degree to which the exam question has been answered properly).任务完成情况主要包括三个方面:内容(content)是否切题,立场(position)是否鲜明并得到有效阐释,结构(structure)是否有逻辑性。
雅思写作是怎么评分的?总结雅思写作评分标准雅思写作评分是考生朋友比较关心的一个点,知道评分标准也能让我再复习过程中更为有所重点,下面就来看看为大家收集整理的雅思写作评分细则,分享给大家,希望对大家有所帮助。
雅思写作是怎么评分的?总结雅思写作评分标准雅思写作通常有Task1和Task2两个部分,考官给以下四项分别评等级分:任务完成情况(Task1)、任务反应情况(Task2)、连贯与衔接、词汇和句式丰富性及语法准确性。
以Task1为例,一名在IELTS学术类考试中写作获得6分的考生,达到这一等级对应的写作水准是:(A)在任务完成方面,达到写作任务各项要求、能确切选择有用信息进行全面评述、呈现并强调主要特点或要点,但细节可能与要点无关、不恰当或不准确。
(B)连贯及衔接方面,信息和分论点安排连贯,论证过程清楚,有效使用衔接手段,但句内或句间衔接有错误或显机械呆板,有时指代不清晰或不恰当。
(C)词汇量方面,相对写作任务而言,所运用的词汇量充足,尝试运用非常见词汇但有时出现错误,拼写和构词出现一些错误,但不影响交流。
(D)句式多样性及语法准确性方面,混合使用简单和复合句,语法和标点出现一些错误但基本不影响交流。
雅思写作:控制小孩的犯罪天性有些人认为犯罪是人的天性,而有些人认为我们可以在小孩小的时候停止他们的这种倾向,你有什么看法?Crimes undermine human society. Reasons for committing a crime are varied and complex, so we could not say that violation of law is just human nature and that people’s tendency to break the law could be stopped when they are young.We are still not sure what causes people to commit a crime.The reason seems to be clear in cases in which a thief steals money to make a living or buy things normally unaffordable. Many thieves, when caught and interviewed, reveal that they come from poor families and have very little education. Therefore we could establish a relation between less privileged family background and low level of education. Many people used to believe that parents could teach their children the harms of wrongdoing by showing them the consequences of such action and the obligation of complying with social norms. Such method works for most children who are aware of what they are doing and what would happen from their action. But we also learn from news or other sources that many high-level officials take bribes or abuse power for their own benefit. Such people with high income and good education clearly know what they are doing and the possible consequences. Such crimes would not have happened if tendency to commit crimes could be stopped when people were young.Moreover, we know that people tend to act for their own benefit, but we do not know if this is due to human nature or other causes such as ideas learned later in life. If it is human nature, people live in faraway places without much education would commit crimes at a higher rate than people with schooling in cities. By contrast, people in remote places are more honest and kind, and the crime rate is significantly lower than that in city. From such evidence, we could not conclude that the above assertion is true.While we continue to explore what causes crime and how to prevent it, we need to bear in mind that it is far more complex than we normally think. Accordingly, measures for crime prevention should also be multidimensional.To sum up, the conclusion that it is human nature to commit crime and that people’s tendency to break the law could be stopped when they are young is not well supported. People become criminals for many reasons and we should adopt more effective methods for crime prevention.雅思写作参考:比较不同观点的优劣具体表述如下:TOPIC: Some people believe that A while others consider B more appropriate. Give advantages and disadvantages of the two positions and explain which position you support.MODEL (1)A andB are two totally different ideas that have caused heated debate over a long period of time. Anyway, I agree with the idea of A. However, it is unfair to say which is better than the other if we don’t see both sides of the story in the following paragraphs.Some people believe B because①. These people point out the fact that②. They also argue that ③.However, other people stand on a very different ground. They believe that④. They firmly point out that⑤. An example can give the details of this argument: ⑥. In addition, ⑦.In a word, A is too tempting not to be chosen. A, as shown above, has ⑧. ⑨.①人们支持B的第一个原因②进一步阐述支持B的第一个原因③支持B的第二个原因④支持A的第一个原因⑤进一步阐述支持A的第一个原因⑥举例说明支持A的第一个原因⑦支持A的第二个原因⑧选择A的第一个好处⑨选择A的第二个好处MODEL (2)Some people believe that①. Other people take the view that②. While both methods may have their advantages and disadvantages, they can be applied under different circumstances. Afterwards, I will explain my opinion about it.For A, ③But this also demonstrates that④Moreover, ⑤B, on the other hand, ⑥. For example, ⑦.In my opinion, the advantages of B are more than those of A because B fits me better in two ways; First⑧. Second, ⑨.①人们的第一种观点②人们的第二种观点③A的一个优势④A所隐含的劣势⑤A的一个大缺点⑥B的一个明显优势⑦举例说明B的优势⑧对我来讲,B的第一个优势⑨对我来讲,B的第二个优势雅思写作高分范文:我们为什么要上大学People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.People attend colleges or universities for a lot of different reasons. I believe that the three most common reasons are toprepare for a career, to have new experiences, and to increase their knowledge of themselves and the world around them.Career preparation is becoming more and more important to young people. For many, this is the primary reason to go to college, They know that the job market is competitive. At college, they can learn new skill for careers with a lot of opportunities. This means careers, such as information technology, that are expected to need a large workforce in the coming years.Also, students go to colleges and universities to have new experiences. This often means having the opportunity to meet people different from those in their hometowns. For most students, going to college is the first time they’ve been away from home by themselves. In additions, this is the first time they’ve had to m ake decisions on their own. Making these decisions increases their knowledge of themselves.Besides looking for self-knowledge, people also attend a university or college to expand their knowledge in subjects they find interesting. For many, this will be their last chance for a long time to learn about something that doesn’t relate to their career.I would recommend that people not be so focused on a career. They should go to college to have new experiences and learn about themselves and the world they live in.。
雅思写作评分标准细则及标准雅思写作是最能够反应出考生真实英语水平的,很多第一次考雅思的同学,对于雅思写作的评分不了解,下面就由来为大家介绍一下相关的信息吧!1. 对写作任务的反应:是否切题目。
2.连贯性和结构层次:观点是否连贯且有逻辑性地呈现。
3. 词汇资源:用词能否准确表达自己的思想。
4. 句法多样性及准确性:句子能否准确表达思想。
从官方的评分标准中我们不难看出,雅思写作的主要标准是你写的文章能否让人读懂,这要求你的作文文字清晰,观点明确。
只要你能用英语清晰地表达出你的思想,你的雅思作文就成功了一大步。
控制写作时间雅思写作1个小时的考试时间,要求完成一大一小两篇作文,时间还是挺紧迫的,大家要合理安排时间。
对于写作时间的把握,可以在备考时养成计时的习惯。
关于写作顺序,建议大家先做task1,将task1尽量控制在20分钟内完成,然后再写task2,先易后难。
注意写作格式及卷面整洁雅思写作的大小文章不需要写题目。
写作格式有两种:一、空行不空格,即文章每段开头顶格写,段与段之间空一行;二、空格不空行,即除首段顶格外,文章每段开头空五个字符,段与段之间不空行。
另外,潦草的字迹和不整洁的卷面会对考官理解文章内容有一定的影响,从而影响得分。
因此大家在写作过程中,注意保持卷面整洁。
注意语法时态在小作文中,会经常出现图表类的作文,而图表作文通常会给出特定的时间,同学们要根据这个特定的时间决定文章的时态。
常用的有以下三种时态:过去时间用一般过去式,现在时间或没给出时间用一般现在式,预测用一般将来式。
而大作文中议论文需要根据内容确定时态。
雅思写作高分不是一蹴而就的,写作水平的提高离不开大量的练习和修改。
不管是背诵范文之后的转化,套模板的训练,总之实践才是最重要的,一定要下笔动手写。
1、状语前置小站分析:状语前置就是把一个修饰动词的状语结构,如介词短语,分词形式或动词不定式引导的短语放到句首。
雅思写作中状语前置是很拿分的句式,不过很多考生都没意识到这一点。
雅思写作5分评分标准很多学生会选择去学习雅思,那么雅思写作5分的评分标准有哪些呢?和一起来看看,下面是小编整理的雅思写作5分评分标准的资讯,欢迎阅读。
雅思写作5分评分标准:对于任务的回应只是部分回应题目要求,格式在有的地方不得体有立场,但论证并不总是清晰,可能没写结论提出了一些主要观点,但这些观点有限,论证不够充分;可能有无关细节连贯与衔接信息的呈现有些组织,但缺少整体延续性只能使用有限的句型试图使用复杂句,但准确度不如简单句语法和标点经常错误,这些错误导致阅读部分困难延展阅读雅思写作0分评分标准:缺席考试;交白卷;完全抄袭背诵好的范文雅思写作1分评分标准:完成任务情况:回答完全和任务要求无关连贯与衔接:无法交流任何信息词汇资源:只能使用一些零散单词语法结构的范围和准确性:完全无法使用句子雅思写作2分评分标准:完成任务情况:回答几乎和任务要求无关连贯与衔接:对组织结构的掌握极少词汇资源:词汇使用极其有限;基本没有掌握构词法和拼写语法结构的范围和准确性:除了背诵的短语以外无法使用句子雅思写作3分评分标准:完成任务情况:没有能够回应题目,可能完全误解题目; 连贯与衔接:观点有限,可能大部分都是不相关或是重复; 没有逻辑性地组织观点; 衔接手段的使用非常有限,不能表明观点之间的逻辑关系; 词汇资源:只使用非常有限的单词和表达,对于构词法和拼写的掌握很有限; 错误严重干扰信息的传递; 语法结构的范围和准确性:试图写出句子但语法和标点错误非常多,扭曲了意思雅思写作4分评分标准:完成任务情况:试图回应题目要求,但没有涵盖所有主要信息;格式不得体; (普通培训类)没有能够清晰解释写信目的;语气不得体; 连贯与衔接:混淆核心信息和细节;有的部分不清晰,不相关,重复或不准确; 提供信息和观点,但安排不连贯,也没有清晰的连续性; 使用一些基本的衔接手段,但可能不准确或重复词汇资源:只使用基本词汇,可能重复,可能使用不得体; 构词法和拼写掌握有限; 错误导致读者理解困难; 语法结构的范围和准确性:只使用有限的句子结构,从句很少见;有的结构准确但错误较多,标点经常错误;雅思写作5分评分标准:完成任务情况:基本上回应题目要求;格式可能有时不准确; 学术类:机械描述细节,缺少清晰概括;可能缺少数据支持; 培训类:提出写信目的,有时不清晰;语气可能多变,有时不得体; 呈现核心信息,但涵盖不完整;可能有过于注重细节的倾向; 信息有一定组织但缺少总体延续性; 连贯与衔接:衔接手段不充分,不准确,或过度使用; 缺少指代和替换,显得重复过多; 词汇资源:使用有限词汇量,但只是在最低层面上满足题目; 语法结构的范围和准确性:拼写和构词法上可能出现明显错误,造成读者的某些阅读困难; 只能使用基本句子结构;试图使用复杂句,但复杂句的使用准确性不如简单句; 语法错误较多,标点有误用;错误造成读者的某些阅读困难雅思写作6分评分标准:完成任务情况:根据写作任务要求作文; 学术类:进行了概括,信息选择合理; 普通培训类:写信目的基本清晰,语气可能有不够一贯之处;呈现并说明核心信息,但细节可能不够相关,不适合或不准确连贯与衔接:信息和观点组织连贯;文章有延续性;衔接手段使用有效,但是句子内部和句子之间的衔接可能有误或过于机械; 指代关系可能不能总是清晰、合理地使用词汇资源:使用适当范围的词汇;试图使用较不常见词汇,但有一些不准确;语法结构的范围和准确性:在拼写和构词法上有错误,但这些错误不至于影响交际;能使用简单和复杂句子结构;语法和标点出现一些错误,尽管这些错误很少导致交流障碍。
2023雅思写作评分标准对照表1.概述作为国际英语语言测试系统(IELTS)的一部分,雅思写作部分是考生们在申请留学或移民过程中必须面对的重要考试之一。
雅思写作考试是评估考生在书面交流能力方面的一个重要指标,了解雅思写作评分标准对于备考考生来说至关重要。
本文将介绍2023年最新的雅思写作评分标准对照表,分析各个评分维度的具体要求和标准,帮助考生更好地准备和应对雅思写作考试。
2. 任务响应(Task Response)任务响应是雅思写作评分的第一个维度,它着重于考生对于题目所要求的内容是否进行了详尽和准确的回答。
在2023年的雅思写作评分标准对照表中,任务响应的要求更加具体和明确。
考生需要在文章中清晰地表达对于题目要求的理解,确保在回答问题的过程中足够详细和全面。
考生还需注意提供具体的例子和论据来支撑自己的观点,确保文章的逻辑性和连贯性。
3. 语言(Lexical Resource)语言是雅思写作评分的另一个关键维度,它主要评价考生的词汇和表达能力。
在2023年的雅思写作评分标准中,语言的要求更加注重考生对于词汇的准确和丰富使用,以及表达能力的灵活和多样性。
考生需要在文章中运用恰当的词汇和短语来表达自己的想法,避免重复和简单的表达方式。
考生还需注意使用恰当的句式和语法结构,确保文章的流畅和连贯。
4. 语法和句子结构(Grammar and Sentence Structure)语法和句子结构是雅思写作评分的另一个重要维度,它主要评价考生对于语法和句子结构的掌握程度。
在2023年的雅思写作评分标准中,语法和句子结构的要求更加强调考生对于句子的准确性和多样性。
考生需要在文章中避免简单和重复的句式,尝试运用各种复杂的句子结构来表达自己的观点。
考生还需注意使用恰当的时态和语态,确保文章的表达准确和清晰。
5. 一致性和连贯性(Coherence and Cohesion)一致性和连贯性是雅思写作评分的最后一个维度,它主要评价考生在文章结构和段落间的连接上是否达到了一定的水平。
雅思写作的评分标准即对应题目要求。
简单来说就是不能偏题,要答复题目要求你答复的内容。
连贯性和逻辑。
逻辑性就是要求因果之间有较为直接的联系,不要跳跃性的思维。
这点是很多中国考生所忽略的,一定要是直接的原因或者结果才能紧跟其后。
而连贯性的要求就要使用恰当适合的连词,使得文章的联系更为紧密。
一定需要积累一定量的词汇,进行同义替换,使得文章看起来用词比拟多样性,尽管这些词表示的都是同一个意思。
而且用词也要注意其准确性,根本不会出现错误的用词。
在语法结构局部,使用类型的要求优先于准确的要求,但是两者都到达是最好的。
必须出现两种以上的语法结构,构成复杂句的情况。
有的宝宝就会问了,道理我都明白呀,那到底应该怎么操作呢?写作任务1要求能否有效地找到信息中关键的内容并对之进行描述和写作,考的是描述能力。
在有限的时间内,想要把图表内的每个信息都进行描述是不可能、也是不必要的,关键的是要把这些信息分组,然后挑出最重要的信息突出表述,最后进行归纳总结、简述趋势。
写作任务2主要考察论点是否切中题目的要求、论证过程是否完整、论点是否得到了论据的支持;观点是否清晰和有效,考的是论述能力。
其实,任何考试作文题考的都是写作能力,而不是考你的观点有多么正确。
但中国烤鸭往往落入费尽心思挖论点的误区,而忽略了使用论据来证明自己的论点。
此外,要把观点表述得清晰有效也很考功夫。
英文写作中注重言简意赅,特别是在篇幅有限的考试写作的环境下,更需要大家将自己的观点提纲挈领地表述出来,并通过使用主题句(每段的开头或结尾)或者是连接词等清晰明了地指示出自己的观点。
在两项任务的时间分配上,建议大家用20分钟完成小作文,40分钟完成大作文。
大多数烤鸭们确实会选择先做小作文,但许多人似乎都陷入了泥沼也就是说,他们花了过多的时间用在小作文上,无论是细节和篇幅都超过了必要程度。
当然,你必须了解图表的主要特征并反映出来,但与此同时,你还须将字制好,注意不要比150字的最短篇幅超出太多字数。
雅思写作评分标准对照表雅思写作评分标准是考官用来评估考生写作能力的参考依据,同时也是考生备考时需要了解掌握的内容。
本文将介绍雅思写作评分标准对照表的相关内容,以供参考。
1. 任务完成度(Task Response)任务完成度指的是考生是否能够全面、准确地回答所提出的问题或就所给素材进行恰当的阐述。
具体的评分标准如下:Task response | 描述---|---9 | 完全满足任务要求,对所有问题都给出了详尽的、准确的答案或对素材进行了完整的阐述,有意义且具有连贯性。
8 | 基本满足任务要求,对问题或素材进行了详尽的回答或阐述,信息准确,只有轻微的遗漏或不准确的情况。
7 | 大多数堆问得到了回答或素材进行了较为完整的阐述,但可能有些细节或重要信息没有涉及或阐述不够准确。
6 | 回答或阐述基本准确,但只覆盖了部分问题或素材,没有完全阐述或未涉及的内容可能对整个文章的连贯性造成一定影响。
5 | 对问题或素材进行了一定涉及,但没有正面回答问题或进行有意义的阐述,也没有明显的错漏,但也缺乏亮点和深度。
4 | 文章没有明显偏离主题,但内容缺乏深度和亮点,回答或阐述不够准确或详尽,甚至可能出现信息错误或混乱。
3 | 文章与所要求的主题或素材明显不符,缺乏准确回答或充分阐述,错漏较多,表达混乱不连贯。
2 | 文章明显偏离主题或素材,对问题或素材缺乏回答或阐述,信息严重不准确或混乱,缺乏逻辑和语言表达能力。
1 | 文章与题目无法联系,对问题或素材没给出有效回答或阐述,表达几乎无法理解或存在严重语言错误。
2. 组织结构(Coherence and Cohesion)组织结构是指文章结构是否清晰,段落之间是否衔接自然、是否有充分的过渡。
具体评分标准如下:Coherence and Cohesion | 描述---|---9 | 文章结构清晰、合理,所有段落有充分发挥和合理布局,使用过渡自然,可让读者顺畅跟进。
8 | 文章结构合理,大部分段落有充分发挥和合理布局,过渡自然,只有个别段落可能存在过渡不够自然的情况。
IELTS Writing Band Descriptors: Task 1 (Public Version)Band Task achievement Coherence and cohesion Lexical resource Grammatical range and accuracy9 • fully satisfies all the requirements of the task• clearly presents a fully developed response • uses cohesion in such a way that it attracts noattention• skilfully manages paragraphing• uses a wide range of vocabulary with very naturaland sophisticated control of lexical features; rareminor errors occur only as ‘slips’• uses a wide range of structures with full flexibility andaccuracy; rare minor errors occur only as ‘slips’8 • covers all requirements of the task sufficiently• presents, highlights and illustrates key features/bullet points clearly and appropriately • sequences information and ideas logically• manages all aspects of cohesion well• uses paragraphing sufficiently and appropriately• uses a wide range of vocabulary fluently and flexiblyto convey precise meanings• skilfully uses uncommon lexical items but there maybe occasional inaccuracies in word choice andcollocation• produces rare errors in spelling and/or wordformation• uses a wide range of structures• the majority of sentences are error-free• makes only very occasional errors or inappropriacies7 • covers the requirements of the task• (Academic) presents a clear overview of maintrends, differences or stages• (General Training) presents a clear purpose, with thetone consistent and appropriate• clearly presents and highlights key features/bulletpoints but could be more fully extended • logically organises information and ideas; there isclear progression throughout• uses a range of cohesive devices appropriatelyalthough there may be some under-/over-use• uses a sufficient range of vocabulary to allow someflexibility and precision• uses less common lexical items with someawareness of style and collocation• may produce occasional errors in word choice,spelling and/or word formation• uses a variety of complex structures• produces frequent error-free sentences• has good control of grammar and punctuation butmay make a few errors6 • addresses the requirements of the task• (Academic) presents an overview with informationappropriately selected• (General Training) presents a purpose that isgenerally clear; there may be inconsistencies in tone• presents and adequately highlights key features/bullet points but details may be irrelevant,inappropriate or inaccurate • arranges information and ideas coherently and thereis a clear overall progression• uses cohesive devices effectively, but cohesionwithin and/or between sentences may be faulty ormechanical• may not always use referencing clearly orappropriately• uses an adequate range of vocabulary for the task• attempts to use less common vocabulary but withsome inaccuracy• makes some errors in spelling and/or word formation,but they do not impede communication• uses a mix of simple and complex sentence forms• makes some errors in grammar and punctuation butthey rarely reduce communication5 • generally addresses the task; the format may beinappropriate in places• (Academic) recounts detail mechanically with noclear overview; there may be no data to support thedescription• (General Training) may present a purpose for theletter that is unclear at times; the tone may bevariable and sometimes inappropriate• presents, but inadequately covers, key features/bullet points; there may be a tendency to focus ondetails • presents information with some organisation butthere may be a lack of overall progression• makes inadequate, inaccurate or over-use ofcohesive devices• may be repetitive because of lack of referencing andsubstitution• uses a limited range of vocabulary, but this isminimally adequate for the task• may make noticeable errors in spelling and/or wordformation that may cause some difficulty for thereader• uses only a limited range of structures• attempts complex sentences but these tend to beless accurate than simple sentences• may make frequent grammatical errors andpunctuation may be faulty; errors can cause somedifficulty for the reader4 • attempts to address the task but does not cover allkey features/bullet points; the format may beinappropriate• (General Training) fails to clearly explain the purposeof the letter; the tone may be inappropriate• may confuse key features/bullet points with detail;parts may be unclear, irrelevant, repetitive orinaccurate • presents information and ideas but these are notarranged coherently and there is no clearprogression in the response• uses some basic cohesive devices but these may beinaccurate or repetitive• uses only basic vocabulary which may be usedrepetitively or which may be inappropriate for the task• has limited control of word formation and/or spelling;errors may cause strain for the reader• uses only a very limited range of structures with onlyrare use of subordinate clauses• some structures are accurate but errors predominate,and punctuation is often faulty3 • fails to address the task, which may have beencompletely misunderstood• presents limited ideas which may be largelyirrelevant/repetitive • does not organise ideas logically• may use a very limited range of cohesive devices,and those used may not indicate a logicalrelationship between ideas• uses only a very limited range of words andexpressions with very limited control of wordformation and/or spelling• errors may severely distort the message• attempts sentence forms but errors in grammar andpunctuation predominate and distort the meaning2 • answer is barely related to the task • has very little control of organisational features • uses an extremely limited range of vocabulary;essentially no control of word formation and/orspelling • cannot use sentence forms except in memorised phrases1 • answer is completely unrelated to the task • fails to communicate any message • can only use a few isolated words • cannot use sentence forms at all 0 • does not attend• does not attempt the task in any way• writes a totally memorised response©UCLES 2005IELTS Writing Band Descriptors: Task 2 (Public Version)Band Task response Coherence and cohesion Lexical resource Grammatical range and accuracy9 • fully addresses all parts of the task• presents a fully developed position in answer to thequestion with relevant, fully extended and wellsupported ideas • uses cohesion in such a way that it attracts no attention• skilfully manages paragraphing• uses a wide range of vocabulary with very naturaland sophisticated control of lexical features; rareminor errors occur only as ‘slips’• uses a wide range of structures with full flexibilityand accuracy; rare minor errors occur only as ‘slips’8 • sufficiently addresses all parts of the task• presents a well-developed response to the questionwith relevant, extended and supported ideas • sequences information and ideas logically• manages all aspects of cohesion well• uses paragraphing sufficiently and appropriately• uses a wide range of vocabulary fluently and flexiblyto convey precise meanings• skilfully uses uncommon lexical items but there maybe occasional inaccuracies in word choice andcollocation• produces rare errors in spelling and/or wordformation• uses a wide range of structures• the majority of sentences are error-free• makes only very occasional errors or inappropriacies7 • addresses all parts of the task• presents a clear position throughout the response• presents, extends and supports main ideas, butthere may be a tendency to over-generalise and/orsupporting ideas may lack focus • logically organises information and ideas; there is clearprogression throughout• uses a range of cohesive devices appropriatelyalthough there may be some under-/over-use• presents a clear central topic within each paragraph• uses a sufficient range of vocabulary to allow someflexibility and precision• uses less common lexical items with someawareness of style and collocation• may produce occasional errors in word choice,spelling and/or word formation• uses a variety of complex structures• produces frequent error-free sentences• has good control of grammar and punctuation butmay make a few errors6 • addresses all parts of the task although some partsmay be more fully covered than others• presents a relevant position although theconclusions may become unclear or repetitive• presents relevant main ideas but some may beinadequately developed/unclear • arranges information and ideas coherently and there isa clear overall progression• uses cohesive devices effectively, but cohesion withinand/or between sentences may be faulty or mechanical• may not always use referencing clearly or appropriately• uses paragraphing, but not always logically• uses an adequate range of vocabulary for the task• attempts to use less common vocabulary but withsome inaccuracy• makes some errors in spelling and/or wordformation, but they do not impede communication• uses a mix of simple and complex sentence forms• makes some errors in grammar and punctuation butthey rarely reduce communication5 • addresses the task only partially; the format may beinappropriate in places• expresses a position but the development is notalways clear and there may be no conclusionsdrawn• presents some main ideas but these are limited andnot sufficiently developed; there may be irrelevantdetail • presents information with some organisation but theremay be a lack of overall progression• makes inadequate, inaccurate or over-use of cohesivedevices• may be repetitive because of lack of referencing andsubstitution• may not write in paragraphs, or paragraphing may beinadequate• uses a limited range of vocabulary, but this isminimally adequate for the task• may make noticeable errors in spelling and/or wordformation that may cause some difficulty for thereader• uses only a limited range of structures• attempts complex sentences but these tend to beless accurate than simple sentences• may make frequent grammatical errors andpunctuation may be faulty; errors can cause somedifficulty for the reader4 • responds to the task only in a minimal way or theanswer is tangential; the format may beinappropriate• presents a position but this is unclear• presents some main ideas but these are difficult toidentify and may be repetitive, irrelevant or not wellsupported • presents information and ideas but these are notarranged coherently and there is no clear progressionin the response• uses some basic cohesive devices but these may beinaccurate or repetitive• may not write in paragraphs or their use may beconfusing• uses only basic vocabulary which may be usedrepetitively or which may be inappropriate for thetask• has limited control of word formation and/or spelling;errors may cause strain for the reader• uses only a very limited range of structures with onlyrare use of subordinate clauses• some structures are accurate but errorspredominate, and punctuation is often faulty3 • does not adequately address any part of the task• does not express a clear position• presents few ideas, which are largely undevelopedor irrelevant • does not organise ideas logically• may use a very limited range of cohesive devices, andthose used may not indicate a logical relationshipbetween ideas• uses only a very limited range of words andexpressions with very limited control of wordformation and/or spelling• errors may severely distort the message• attempts sentence forms but errors in grammar andpunctuation predominate and distort the meaning2 • barely responds to the task• does not express a position• may attempt to present one or two ideas but there isno development • has very little control of organisational features • uses an extremely limited range of vocabulary;essentially no control of word formation and/orspelling• cannot use sentence forms except in memorisedphrases1 • answer is completely unrelated to the task • fails to communicate any message • can only use a few isolated words • cannot use sentence forms at all0 • does not attend• does not attempt the task in any way• writes a totally memorised response©UCLES 2005。