2020高中英语新高考-英语作文：读后续写进阶指导(含原创模拟作文训练3篇)

山东省新高考模拟英语作文读后续写写作指导与解读（含范文）2020届山东省新高考模拟英语作文读后续写写作指导一、续写原题阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一个完整的故事短文。

续写的词数为150左右。

Though it is one of the faded memories of my life today, there are times when I remember his face clearly, especially his eyes. As he had yellow spots on his eyes we called him Spotty. He would have been a stray(流浪) dog, until he came to me.I was seven years old. My dad had just got a new job in Nasik. We had moved into a rented house. It was raining very heavily on the day we moved.It was a cold dark night. We had our meal and went to sleep. Somehow in the midnight I heard some strange sounds outside the main door. I gathered courage and looked out through the window and I was really amused with what I saw outside.There was a small puppy lying on an old doormat which my mother had put outside the door. It was wet and trembling. At first it was difficult to see the little one. It was the yellow spots on its eyes that made me realize its presence.It was trying to get under the doormat to avoid the cold air outside and it had managed to get in as I could see only its head outside the doormat. Was it sick or injured?I felt pity for the poor soul. I went in and came out with an old towel. I went near the innocent one and held it in my hand and wiped the puppy till he had become dry. I took him into my room and made a bed for him with a woolen blanket and a smallpillow. He seemed very healthy and comfortable in his new bed as he went to sleep immediately.The next morning, everyone in the family came to know about the unusual guest. "Shall we keep him with us?" I questioned my mom.Like any other parents would, my parents first totally refused my idea but my sister and I convinced them to keep Spotty.Slowly Spotty got on with everyone and became one of the family members.Paragraph 1:One day, Spotty returned from his daily walk with a broken leg. ____Paragraph 2:Almost a year later, one midnight we heard Spotty barking breathlessly ____二、下水续写总体思路第一段第一句：Spotty有一天回家，断了一条腿。

2020年全国三卷高考作文英语读后续写Title: A Continuation of the 2020 National College Entrance Examination EssayAs I sat down at my desk to continue my English exam, the words of the prompt echoed in my mind: "In the face of challenges, it is easy to feel overwhelmed and discouraged. However, it is during these moments that we truly discover our strength and resilience. Write a continuation of this story, exploring how the character overcomes their challenges and grows stronger as a result."Taking a deep breath, I began to envision the character's journey ahead. With determination in their heart and a fire in their eyes, they faced the obstacles before them with unwavering courage.The character, named Sarah, found herself at a crossroads in her life. Having just lost her job and facing financial difficulties, she felt lost and defeated. However, she refused to give up. With the support of her friends and family, she decided to pursue her passion for writing and started a blog to share her experiences with the world.As Sarah poured her heart and soul into her writing, she discovered a newfound sense of purpose and drive. The positive feedback she received from her readers encouraged her to keep going, even when times were tough. Through her writing, she was able to inspire others who were facing similar challenges and show them that they were not alone.As the months went by, Sarah's blog gained popularity and she was offered a book deal to publish her memoir. Despite her initial doubts, she embraced the opportunity with open arms and poured her heart into creating a book that would inspire and uplift others.Through her writing journey, Sarah not only overcame her challenges but also grew stronger and more resilient than ever before. She learned that true strength comes from within and that it is during the darkest moments that we find our brightest light.As the clock ticked on, I finished my continuation of the story with a sense of pride and accomplishment. Just like Sarah, I had faced my own challenges and emerged stronger on the other side. And as I submitted my essay, I knew that no matter what obstacles lie ahead, I would face them head-on with courage anddetermination. For it is in overcoming challenges that we discover our true strength and resilience.。

2020新高考i卷英语读后续写范文全文共6篇示例，供读者参考篇1The New KidI was really excited when I found out there was going to be a new student joining my class. Having a new kid show up is always fun - I get to make a new friend and there's a bit of a buzz around school for a little while. Everybody wants to get to know the new student and hear all about where they came from.His name was Marcus and he had just moved to our town from another city pretty far away. On his first day, the teacher asked him to stand up and introduce himself to the class. Marcus seemed really shy and nervous. His face went all red and he spoke in just a tiny little voice when he said his name and that he liked soccer. I felt kind of bad for him.At recess, a bunch of us tried to get Marcus to come play with us, but he didn't want to. He just stood off by himself in the corner of the playground. I went over to try and get him to join in, but he didn't say much. I could tell he was feeling really uncomfortable being the new kid. I remembered how awkwardand scary it felt when I was the new student a couple years ago after we moved to this town. It can be really hard!Over the next few days, Marcus still wasn't really talking to anyone. He would quietly sit by himself at lunch, reading or playing littlehand-held video games. A couple mean kids started picking on him a bit for being so quiet and alone all the time. That made me mad - I hated seeing the new kid get bullied like that when he was just being shy. I told those bullies to cut it out and leave Marcus alone.One day after school, I saw Marcus was the last one left besides me. His head was hanging down looking at the ground as he slowly gathered his stuff to leave. I walked over to him and said "Hi Marcus! You want to walk home together?" He looked up at me with a surprised look. Then he gave a little nod and a tiny smile.As we walked, I started chatting with him to try and make him feel more comfortable. I asked him questions about what his old city was like and what he liked to do for fun. Slowly, Marcus started opening up. He told me about the huge park near his old house that had a soccer field, basketball courts, and a cute little stream running through it. He said he really missed that park.I told Marcus all about the awesome hiking trails and woods near my neighborhood that we could explore together sometime. His eyes lit up at that - he said he loved the outdoors and going on adventures. Marcus started talking more and more about all his interests like gaming, art, and especially bugs. He went on forever about all the cool insects he's seen and studied. I had no idea he was such an insect expert!We became really good friends after that walk. Now Marcus was eager to hang out, and I introduced him to all my other friends. They all liked Marcus once they got to know him - he was actually a really funny, cool dude once he opened up. We started eating lunch together every day, playing soccer at recess, going on bug collecting expeditions in the woods, and just having a blast being kids.The teachers were so happy to see Marcus finally coming out of his shell and making friends. He was excelling in class once he felt more comfortable and confident at school. I was really proud of myself for being the one to first get through to the shy new kid. I remembered how much it helped when some other kids made an effort with me when I was the new student. Now I had paid that kindness forward by being a friend to Marcus.I'm so glad Marcus joined our class. He's my best buddy now!I honestly can't picture my life at school without him. This whole experience taught me that it's important to make an effort with new people, even if they seem shy or different at first. You never know what an amazing friend you might make if you take the time to get to know someone. Now our little crew is so tight - like real life buddies going on little kid adventures every day after school. I'm having such an awesome year thanks to Marcus!篇2The Curious Case of the Missing MarblesHi there! My name is Tommy and I'm in the 4th grade. I love reading, especially mystery stories. The reading passage we had in our English exam was super interesting. It was about a boy named Jack who lost his marbles. At first, I thought it was just a silly story about a kid who misplaced his toy marbles. But as I read on, I realized it was a real mystery!Jack's marble collection was very special to him. He had been collecting marbles since he was little and had all sorts of cool ones – cat's eyes, shooters, and even a rare jade marble. One day, Jack noticed that some of his precious marbles were missing from the jar he kept them in. How strange!Jack started looking everywhere for the missing marbles. He checked under his bed, in the closet, and even in the kitchen. No marbles anywhere! Jack was really upset. Those marbles meant a lot to him. Some of them were gifts from his grandpa.The story didn't say what happened next, but my mind started racing with ideas. I decided to write my own continuation to solve the curious case of the missing marbles. Here's what I think could have happened:Jack told his mom about the missing marbles and she suggested he re-trace his steps from the last few days. Maybe he'd taken them out to play somewhere and forgot to put them back properly.Jack tried his best to remember. Then it hit him – he had been playing marbles in the backyard with his best friend Emma a couple of days ago! He raced outside and sure enough, there were a few stray marbles lying in the grass. Phew, mystery solved!Or was it? As Jack picked up the marbles, he realized several were still missing, including his prized jade one. This was getting really strange. Jack's dog Buster then came bounding over, drooling all over the place. Jack gasped – Buster's mouth was full of marbles!"Buster, you naughty pup! Did you eat my marbles?" Jack scolded. Buster just wagged his tail happily. It seemed the family pet was the real culprit behind the missing marble caper!Jack checked Buster's fur and found more marbles stuck in there. He started gathering them all up, feeling relieved to have solved the mystery. That is, until he saw the jade marble lying a few feet away...broken into two pieces! Jack's heart sank. His favorite marble was ruined.Just then, Emma came running over. "Jack, there you are! I have something to tell you about your marbles." She looked guilty.Emma explained that a few days earlier when they were playing, her little brother Tom had taken some of Jack's marbles and hidden them around the backyard as a prank. That sneaky Tom!With Emma's help, Jack was able to recover the last few missing marbles from the hiding spots. Although his jade one was broken, he felt much better knowing the marbles hadn't been lost forever, just temporarily misplaced by a pesky younger brother and an even peskier dog.From that day on, Jack made sure to keep his marble collection safely locked away when he wasn't playing with it. No more losing his precious marbles to dogs, siblings, or anyone else! Mysteries are fun, but not when they involve your favorite toys going missing.Well, that's my take on what could have happened after that reading passage. Writing mysteries is hard work, but using my imagination to continue Jack's story was a lot of fun. I can't wait to read more mystery books and maybe even write my own novel one day! A kid can dream, right? Thanks for reading my take on the curious case of Jack's missing marbles. Until next time!篇3The Reading Passage Was All About the EnvironmentWow, that reading passage was really interesting! It talked all about how we need to take better care of the environment. There were a lot of big words that I didn't quite understand, but I got the main idea.The passage said that humans are hurting the planet by polluting too much and using up too many natural resources. It mentioned things like factories letting out yucky smoke, carsputting bad gases into the air, and people throwing away too much trash that doesn't biodegrade. It sounds like we're really messing things up for the Earth!I don't want the planet to be all dirty and yucky when I grow up. I love playing outside, breathing the fresh air, and seeing all the pretty flowers, trees and animals. I would be so sad if all of that went away because we weren't being careful enough.That's why I think it's really important that we all do our part to be more environmentally friendly. Even kids like me can help out! At school, I always make sure to recycle my plastic bottles, cans, and paper instead of just throwing them in the regular trash. My teacher says that recycling helps save natural resources and cuts down on waste.At home, my mom is really good about turning off lights when we leave a room so we don't waste electricity. She also takes reusable bags with her to the grocery store instead of using plastic ones. Those plastic bags are really bad for the environment because they take so long to break down.I try to conserve water too by not letting the sink run forever when I'm brushing my teeth. My dad told me that clean drinking water is becoming scarce in some parts of the world, so weshouldn't waste it. Little things like that can make a big difference if everyone does them.Sometimes I get frustrated though because it seems like grown-ups aren't doing enough to help the environment. Why are there still so many big factories polluting the air and water? Why do people keep littering everywhere instead of putting trash in the proper bins? It makes me worried about what the world will look like when I'm older.That's why I think we need stronger laws to force companies and people to be more environmentally responsible. If they don't follow the rules, they should have to pay really big fines. Maybe that will finally make them realize how important it is to go green and clean up their acts!I also think we should have more education about the environment starting from when kids are really little. If we can teach good habits and values from the beginning, it will be easier to create a generation of people who truly care about protecting the planet. I've been learning about recycling, conserving energy/water, and not littering since I was in preschool, and now it just feels normal and natural to me.In school now, we have eco-clubs where we do fun activities like picking up litter in parks, planting trees, and making arts &crafts projects out of recycled materials. We even took a field trip last year to a renewable energy plant that runs on solar power and wind turbines - that was really cool to see! The more interactive learning experiences we can give kids, the more engaged and enthusiastic they'll be about environmental protection.My biggest dream is that by the time I'm a grown-up, we'll finally have clean air to breathe, safe drinking water everywhere, and unspoiled natural habitats for plants and animals to thrive. I imagine cities with buildings made from eco-friendly materials, solar panels on every rooftop, awesome public transportation systems so we don't need as many cars, and beautiful green spaces like parks and community gardens.I know that might sound too optimistic and idealistic. After all, the reading passage made it seem like environmental problems are just getting worse and worse as time goes on. But I have to篇4My Trip to the ZooHey there! My name is Lily and I'm 8 years old. I just took a really cool field trip to the zoo with my class and I wanted to tell you all about it!We took a big yellow school bus to get to the zoo. It was kind of a long ride, about an hour, but it was fun because we got to sing songs and play games on the bus. When we finally got there, I was so excited! I love animals so much.The first animals we saw were the mon篇5My Visit to the Science MuseumOne sunny Saturday, my mom and dad took me to the big Science Museum in the city. I was really excited because I love learning about science and seeing cool experiments!When we got there, the first thing I saw was a huge dinosaur skeleton in the lobby. "Woah, look at that T-Rex!" I shouted, running up to get a closer look. The sign said it was65 million years old. I couldn't even imagine being alive that long ago when dinosaurs roamed the earth.Next, we went into the physics section. There were all kinds of hands-on displays letting you play with forces like gravity,inertia, and magnetism. My favorite was the vacuum tube that you could put things into and watch them defy gravity. I made a beach ball float in mid-air and twirl around - it was awesome!The biology area had models of cells and organs that you could walk through. Everything was giant-sized so you could see all the details up close. I climbed through a gigantic eyeball and saw the lens and retina. In the brain model, I could see where memories are stored and where decisions are made. It was mind-blowing!After that, we visited the chemistry labs. There were lots of test tubes and beakers filled with bubbling, colorful liquids. We got to make our own slime by mixing a couple clear solutions together. The slime turned bright green and was so gooey and stretchy! Taking it home was the best souvenir.Around lunchtime, we went to the museum cafe for some food. There were actually dishes themed around the molecular structure of different meals. My sandwich had pieces of bread made to look like atoms! Even the drinks had dry ice smoke billowing out of them. It was a full multi-sensory science experience.With renewed energy, we explored the space and aviation galleries next. I saw real rockets and spacesuits that astronautshave worn on missions. There was a flight simulator ride that made me feel like I was truly blasting off into orbit. The G-forces pushed me deep into my seat as we accelerated through the atmosphere. I wished I could go on a real rocket ship someday!Finally, we made our way to the computer science wing to learn about coding and cybersecurity. We got to program little robot buggies to follow a maze and pick up small objects. There were also some cool 3D printers making weird plasticky sculptures. The computers were linked into a massive video game where everyone could team up and battle viruses trying to break into the network. Our team won by building the strongest cybersecurity firewall!By the time we left, my brain was bursting with new knowledge. I had no idea science could be that much fun and so interactive. We saw physics in motion, walked through giant biological models, made chemistry slime, experienced a space launch, and defeated a network attack all in one day. I can't wait to go back to the Science Museum again soon!篇6The Big Mud Puddle AdventureHi! My name is Lily and I'm 8 years old. I love going on adventures and using my imagination. One sunny Saturday morning, I woke up feeling really excited because my best friend Emma was coming over to play. We had big plans to build a fort in my backyard and pretend we were brave explorers discovering a new land.After eating my pancakes, I ran outside to get everything ready. I grabbed some old blankets, pillows, and my collection of stuffed animals to make our fort cozy. I also found a couple of big sticks we could use as explorers' walking sticks. Just as I finished setting up, I heard the gate open and Emma came running over."Hi Lily! I'm ready for our big adventure today!" Emma said with a big smile."Me too! Our explorer fort is all set up over here," I replied, leading her to the backyard. "Whoa, this looks awesome!" she exclaimed when she saw the fort. We got right to work fluffing up the pillows and arranging the stuffed animals just how we wanted.After admiring our handiwork, I said "Okay Emma, time to gear up for our journey into the wild!" We grabbed our walkingsticks and put on our explorer hats and backpacks. Emma even tied a bandana around her head to look extra rugged."Where should we explore first, Lily?" Emma asked, swinging her walking stick with enthusiasm."Hmm..." I thought for a moment, scanning the backyard. That's when my eyes landed on the biggest, muddiest puddle I'd ever seen! The rain from a few nights ago must have caused it."There!" I pointed towards the puddle. "That will be our first destination. Can you imagine all the cool creatures and plants we might discover there?"Emma gasped. "You're right, Lily! A puddle that size must be teeming with exotic life. It will be very dangerous though... are you sure we're prepared for such a perilous journey?"I puffed out my chest with confidence. "Don't you worry, I'm the bravest explorer around. We can handle anything that puddle throws our way!"And with that, we began making our way across the yard towards the gigantic puddle. We had to step very carefully to avoid any "deep muddy pits" that could swallow us whole. Every few steps we stopped to look around with our hands on our foreheads, scanning for any sign of danger.Finally, after what felt like an eternity of cautious trekking, we made it to the puddle's edge. Emma and I stood there in awe, mouths hanging open."I can't believe we actually made it..." Emma said quietly."Me neither," I replied. "Should we...go in?"Emma gulped. "The risks could be extreme. But we can't let our fear stop us from making an astronomical puddle discovery!""You're right. Okay, get ready and follow me in..." I said, lifting one foot up and taking a tiny step forward into the muddy water.Within seconds, the puddle began gurgling and bubbling like a swamp! Emma and I stumbled backwards, gripping our walking sticks tightly."What's happening?!" Emma cried out."I...I don't know! Maybe we've angered the puddle spirits!" I shouted back.Just then, a gigantic mud monster rose up from the middle of the puddle, snarling and gurgling nonsense words! It had two big googly eyes made of rocks, a mouth full of twigs and leaves for teeth, and six slimy tentacles writhing around.Emma and I screamed at the top of our lungs and turned to run away as fast as we could. But the mud monster gave a mighty roar that seemed to shake the whole backyard. We froze in our tracks, shaking with fear.Slowly, the mud monster opened its mouth and spoke in a deep, gravelly voice. "CHILDREN...YOU HAVE ENTERED...MY MUDDY DOMAIN..."My lips trembled as I stammered "W-We're very s-sorry Mr. Mud Monster! We d-didn't mean to intrude! We're j-just explorers!"The monster narrowed its googly eyes at us. "EXPLORERS YOU SAY? THEN EXPLORE YOU SHALL!"Before we could react, two of the monster's slimy tentacles stretched out and wrapped around our legs! Emma and I screamed again as the tentacles lifted us up into the air. With one powerful swing, the monster flung us across the backyard......right into the middle of the giant puddle!We came up sputtering and coughing, covered from head to toe in thick brown mud. The monster bellowed with laughter that sounded like rumbling thunder."Th-That was horrible!" Emma cried, frantically trying to wipe mud out of her eyes."And awesome!" I shouted back, slinging some mud her way playfully.Emma gasped, then started laughing too. "Oh you're gonna get it!" She picked up a big handful of mud and flung it at me.We spent the next hour having the most epic mud battle ever, laughing and splashing around gleefully. Every time we thought the fight was over, one of us would sneak in one more mud attack from behind.Eventually, we were so exhausted that we just collapsed in the puddle, letting the mud ooze over us. We stared up at the clouds, feeling totally content."That...was...the...BEST adventure ever!" Emma panted."You got that right," I said. "Thanks for being an awesome explorer buddy."Emma smiled at me. "No, thank YOU Lily. I can't wait for what we get to discover next time!"We fist bumped, sending a shower of mud droplets up into the air and all over our already filthy bodies. Then we bothstarted laughing all over again. I felt so happy and grateful to have such an amazing friend to go on adventures with.As we were catching our breath, we heard my mom call out from the backdoor. "Lily? Emma? What on earth are you girls up to- OH MY GOODNESS"She rushed outside and gasped when she saw the aftermath of our battle. Emma and I exchanged a mischievous look before shouting "MUD MONSTER ATTACK" and tackling my poor mom into the puddle with us.The three of us rolled around, laughing hysterically and coating my mom in just as much mud as we were covered in. I don't think I've ever seen her laugh so hard!By the time we finally dragged ourselves inside to get cleaned up, we were all completely exhausted. As I was eating a snack and sipping some hot chocolate, I overheard my mom telling my dad about our "explorer adventure gone wild."Dad just chuckled and said "Well, you know how kids are with their imaginations. Although I must admit, getting ambushed by a mud monster does sound pretty intense!"I smiled into my mug, feeling like the luckiest kid in the world. Emma and I had been on the most amazingly silly, messy,unforgettable adventure together today. And who knows what other imaginary quests and creatures awaited us next time?。

读后续写高分作文的写作方法指导（以衡水中学四月联考英语作文为例）2020江苏省丰县中学上课讲义正文指导版本一：But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. The ceiling of thick branches shut out the sky and covered the path in darkness. Jane looked around blankly, a shiver of alarm going through her. Soon the full moon rose, large, round and clear, shining in the deep blue. “Why not pick stones from the stream and make them in the form of SOS?” cried Jane excitedly, determined to save herself independently. Having finished it, she felt so exhausted and slept beside the stones. Tomorrow will be another day.It was daybreak when Jane woke up. Birds were chirping, the branches swaying to the rhythm of the wind, and the leaves fluttering like graceful butterflies. A ray of hope rose naturally in her heart. Suddenly, the buzzing of the helicopter came overhead again. It did saw her waving yellow blouse and most important the SOS. Upon its landing, so thrilled was she that she threw herself at Tom and hugged him tightly, tears of joy welling up in their eyes.“I miss you so much. Have you found the spot?”“Yes, in our heart.”版本二：But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. The trees cracked and groaned in the dark. A thrill of alarm came through Jane. Eventually, she determined on spotting an open area, awaiting another helicopter. She stumbled her way through the horrible forests and climbed to a high place. No time to waste. After she flagged her yellow blouse, Jane sank to the ground, anguished and defeated. Gazing at the sky, Jane recalled Tom and tears blurred her eyes. Terrified as she was, she fell fast asleep in the wild.It was daybreak when Jane woke up. And, as luck would have it, a helicopter just came by! Jane yelled and skipped, waving her yellow blouse. To her great joy, the helicopter noticed her and landed. What astounded her most was that it was Tom who sat in the helicopter! Out rushed Tom. A huge smile spread across Jane's face and the couple hugged tightly for a long time. It was the narrow escape that made Jane perceive that love was priceless. Over the next years, a change came over the couple. Reasoned discussion replaced fierce arguments and politeness replaced contrariness. They treasured the life and love more.结论是：1.首先要找到conflict在哪里，然后最多五句话说清楚solution。

2020高中英语新高考原创模拟作文练习一My Mom Only Had One Eye1 M y mom only had one eye. I hated her. She was such an embarrassment.2She ran a small shop at a flea market and collected old clothes and some other things to sell for the money we needed. Once during elementary school, it was field day, and my mom came. I was so embarrassed and wondered how could she do this to me? I threw her a hateful look and ran out. The ne xt day at school, my schoolmates asked me, “Your mom only has one eye?!” and taunted me.3 I was so angry with my mom and wished that she would just disappear from this world. So I said to my mom, “Why don’t you have the other eye?!If you’re only gonna ma ke me a laughingstock!” My mom did not respond, I guess I felt a little bad, but at the same time, I felt so good to have had said what I wanted to say. Maybe it was because my mom hadn’t punished me, I didn’t think that I had hurt her feelings very badly.4 For the words I had said to her earlier, there was something pinching at me in the corner of my heart. Even so, I hated my one-eyed mom and our desperate poverty. I told myself that I would become successful in the near future, so I studied very hard. Later I got accepted by the Seoul University, I left my mother and came to Seoul to study. Then I got married there.5 I bought a house of my own. Then I had kids, too. Now I am living happily as a successful man. I enjoy the life in Seoul because it’s a place that doesn’t remind me of my mom and my past. This kind of happiness was getting bigger and bigger, until one day someone knocked at my door. It was my mom! And still with her one eye! It felt as if the whole sky was falling apart on me. My little girl ran away, scared of my mom’s eye.6 I screamed at her, “Who are you? I don’t know you! How dare you come to my house and scare my daughter!” To this, my mom quietly answered, “Oh, I’m so sorry. I may have gotten the wrong address,” and she disappeared out of sight.Notes:1 embarrassment 难堪，窘迫。

2020高中英语新高考读后续写的升华：删繁就简三秋树，领异标新二月花引言我在近日提出读后续写的两个概念。

读后续写的内容可以分为：Be a story; Beyond a story.所谓Be a story,就是把故事说完整即可，不一定要突出一定的道理，类似于情景剧《老友记》，娱乐一下；而Beyond a story是基于一定的主旨（theme)去挖掘人物的内心情感，所有情节的拓展都是服务于主旨。

从浙江的历年读后续写材料和提供的范文看，文章并没有突出一定的主旨，纯粹的Be a story。

譬如2016年的妻子赌气和丈夫旅游中分开，然后迷路。

续写也是最后两人又和好。

包括今年的儿子上学，父母给家里的狗又添了一个伙伴，然后儿子回家。

这里面的故事就是单纯地围绕人物线展开，把故事讲完了，就结束了。

我认为无论是be a story还是beyond a story，只要把人物形象刻画出来了，并且续写部分的想象合情合理，都是达到了高考的写作要求。

但有人说，beyond a story对学生来说，太难了。

其实这就误解了我的意思。

就具体写而言，要想写好，都不容易。

甚至be a story对学生的遣词造句要求更高。

因为你完全靠情节胜出，就要在用词上卯足劲，否则这篇文章就干巴巴的。

不仅仅没有思想，而且语言平庸，味同嚼蜡。

而beyond a story，你虽然语言平庸一点，但是你的思想非常动人，这就弥补了语言表达的匮乏。

以浙江作文题为例材料大致是：丈夫和妻子去旅游，来到森林里，二人意见不合，妻子赌气跑开了。

然后突然发现迷路了。

此时看到头上的飞机，估计是找她，但无法让它看到。

续写部分的范文是：天黑了，妻子找了写果实吃了后睡去；天亮，又和丈夫重逢。

我的想法：这几年的续写材料说实话，不知道是不是命题人觉得学生水平有限，选材都没有一定的思想深度，即使和完形填空比都差一截。

作为考生，如果要从思想上拔高，就要如此考虑，由于文章主要写妻子的活动，人物此时就一个：妻子。

2020届高考英语写作训练---读后续写（含答案）1.阅读下面短文,根捤所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。

When I was eleven years old, I had a big accident. I get scared even now when I think about that time. I went skating near my house, There were many people, and I saw them falling on the ice.It was my first time to go ice skating, so I was nervous. I was wondering how to skate. I went with a friend who was very skillful. He spent some time teaching me how to skate, but I didn't learn much. He left me and skated all around. As soon as he left, I fell down. I envied the other people because they could skate very well.I was bored because I kept falling so I took off my skates and just walked around on the ice in my shoes. It was cold and my hands were frozen.Suddenly, I stepped on something that was not hard. What was it? It was a weak place in the ice. When I stepped there, I sank under the ice. I thought that I was going to die, but I did my best to grab something to get out from under the ice. I tried to grab the edge of the ice. But it was very difficult for an eleven-year-old child.It seemed like a very long time, like a year. Then,fortunately, someone helped me. He grabbed my arms and pulled me up. So, I lived and I'm still alive today.I thanked him. At that time, my friend came back. I was annoyed at him because he was supposed to take care of me, but he didn't. He was embarrassed. When I took a taxi home, the taxi driver was surprised and asked what happened. I didn't want to say anything because I was tried and scared. Even now, whenever I think about that time, I feel uncomfortable. I don't want to go skating again even now.注意:1所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的幵头语已为你写好;4. 续写芫成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

2020年新高考一卷英语读后续写范文一、起因此次2020年新高考一卷英语阅读材料中，提到了一个有关环保的话题。

文章中描述了在一个小山村里，由于环境破坏，导致村庄的水源污染，农田荒芜。

文章结尾处，提到了“from then on, people inthe village started to realize the importance of protecting the environment”这样的话句。

这个句子很明显的暗示了一个续写的可能。

二、续写from then on，人们开始重视保护环境，村庄的环境逐渐得到改善。

为了实现环保的目标，村民们开始行动起来了。

他们建立了一个环保团体，来监督村子周边环境的改善工作。

这个团体由村里的年轻人和老年人共同组成，他们分工合作，一边组织村民们清理垃圾，一边开展环保宣传教育活动。

通过这些活动，村民们对环保的概念有了更深刻的了解，逐渐改变了对环境的态度。

随后，村里还出台了一系列的环保政策。

政府加大了对环境违法行为的惩罚力度，制定了一些激励措施，鼓励村民们积极参与环境保护。

政府还投入大量资金，修复了水源，让山间的溪水变得清澈见底，农田也重新焕发出生机。

通过政策的引导和扶持，环保工作得到了更好的开展，也为村民们创造了更好的生活条件。

另外，为了进一步提高环保意识，村里开展了一些环保活动。

比如举办环保知识讲座、组织环保义工队，还成立了一支环保音乐队，通过歌曲的形式宣传环保理念。

这些活动不仅让村民参与其中，感受到环保带来的乐趣，还能达到宣传和教育的目的。

村里还与周边村庄合作，共同开展环保行动。

他们建立了环保合作组织，共同开展环境整治和维护工作。

这种合作不仅让环保工作得到了更好的开展，还让村民之间的感情更加融洽。

三、反思这个故事告诉我们环保工作是一个需要全社会共同努力的事业。

只有每一个人都能够立足于自身的岗位，从点滴之处做起，才能够最终达到环保事业蓬勃发展的目标。

不仅如此，我们还要明白环保是一项长期的工作，不是一蹴而就的，需要每个人都能够持之以恒地坚持下去。

2020年高考英语作文读后续写全文共3篇示例，供读者参考篇1Title: Continued Writing of 2020 National College Entrance Examination English CompositionIntroduction:The 2020 National College Entrance Examination English Composition topic asks students to write about their understanding and views on the famous saying, "The greatest glory in living lies not in never falling, but in rising every time we fall." This writing will further explore and expand on this topic, discussing the importance of resilience and perseverance in facing challenges and setbacks in life.Body:In today's fast-paced and competitive society, it is inevitable that we will face obstacles and failures along the way. Whether it is academic difficulties, career setbacks, or personal challenges, the ability to pick ourselves up after every fall is crucial for success and personal growth.Resilience is the key to overcoming adversity and bouncing back stronger than before. When we encounter failures or disappointments, it is easy to feel disheartened and discouraged. However, it is important to remember that setbacks are a natural part of life and can serve as valuable learning experiences. By facing our mistakes head-on, analyzing what went wrong, and making necessary adjustments, we can turn our failures into stepping stones towards success.Moreover, resilience is not just about bouncing back from failure; it is also about staying strong and persevering in the face of challenges. Life is full of ups and downs, and it is our ability to weather the storms and keep moving forward that ultimately determines our success. When we encounter obstacles or setbacks, it can be tempting to give up or lose hope. However, it is during these difficult times that our resilience and determination are truly put to the test. By staying positive, focused, and persistent, we can overcome even the toughest challenges and emerge stronger on the other side.Conclusion:In conclusion, the saying "The greatest glory in living lies not in never falling, but in rising every time we fall" underscores the importance of resilience and perseverance in the face ofadversity. Life is full of challenges and setbacks, but it is our ability to pick ourselves up, dust ourselves off, and keep moving forward that ultimately defines our success. By embracing failures as opportunities for growth, staying strong in the face of challenges, and never losing sight of our goals, we can achieve greatness and live a life filled with purpose and meaning. So let us remember that it is not about how many times we fall, but how many times we rise again.篇2Title: A Story of Hope and DeterminationIt was the day of the national college entrance examination, commonly known as the Gaokao in China. The sun was just rising over the horizon as students across the country prepared themselves for the most important test of their lives. Among them was Li Na, a young girl from a rural village in Sichuan province.Li Na had worked tirelessly for the past three years, studying late into the night and sacrificing her social life in pursuit of her dream to attend a top university. Her family, who were farmers, had saved every penny they could to support her education, and Li Na was determined not to let them down.As she sat down at her desk and opened the test booklet, a wave of nerves flooded through her. The questions looked challenging, but Li Na took a deep breath and reminded herself of all the hard work she had put in. She began to tackle each question methodically, drawing on the knowledge and skills she had honed over the years.Hours passed, and finally, the exam was over. Li Na felt a mixture of relief and anxiety as she handed in her paper. She knew that her performance on this test would determine her future, and the thought was both daunting and exhilarating.Weeks went by as Li Na waited for the results to be announced. Finally, the day arrived when the scores were posted online. With trembling hands, she logged in to check her results.To her disbelief and joy, Li Na had scored among the top in the province. Tears of happiness streamed down her face as she embraced her family, who were overjoyed at her success.Li Na's story was one of hope and determination, a testament to the power of hard work and perseverance. She had defied the odds and overcome the challenges of her humble background to achieve her dreams.As she prepared to embark on the next chapter of her life at a prestigious university, Li Na knew that her journey was just beginning. With the same grit and resolve that had brought her this far, she was ready to face whatever challenges lay ahead.The Gaokao was just the beginning for Li Na. It was a stepping stone towards a future filled with endless possibilities and opportunities. And as she looked towards the horizon, she knew that the best was yet to come.篇3Title: A Continuation of 2020 National College Entrance Examination English WritingAfter the completion of the 2020 National College Entrance Examination, the students feel a mix of relief and anxiety as they await their results. The exam, held under unprecedented circumstances due to the global pandemic, presented unique challenges to the candidates. Despite these challenges, the students persevered and gave their best efforts in the exam.As the days pass, the students find themselves reflecting on their performance in the exam. Some students feel confident in their answers, while others are filled with uncertainty. They constantly check their phones and computers, hoping for anynews on their results. The wait seems endless as the days turn into weeks.Finally, the day arrives when the results are announced. The students rush to find their names on the list, hearts pounding with anticipation. For some, the news is joyous as they see their hard work pay off with high scores. For others, the results bring disappointment and tears as they realize they did not perform as well as they had hoped.In the days that follow, the students grapple with their emotions and contemplate their next steps. Some students celebrate their success with their families and friends, while others seek comfort in the support of their loved ones. Despite the challenges they faced, the students find strength in each other and in their shared experiences.As the dust settles on the 2020 National College Entrance Examination, the students look towards the future with hope and determination. They know that this exam is just one stepping stone in their journey towards their goals and dreams. With hard work and perseverance, they are confident that they will overcome any obstacles that come their way.In conclusion, the 2020 National College Entrance Examination was a test of resilience and perseverance for thestudents who took part. Despite the challenges they faced, the students showed determination and courage in the face of adversity. As they move forward in their academic and personal lives, they will always carry with them the lessons they learned from this experience.。

2020届高考英语书面表达“读后续写”高三模拟练习（三）写作指导与解读一、续写原题阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

I stood under the mistletoe(榭寄生). The green, leafy clusters(团，簇)spotted with waxy-white berries hung from the branches of every apple tree. That's the same stuff they sell in the stores for Christmas decorations, I said to myself. Why can't I sell mistletoe too? It would be a perfect way to earn money tobuy a Christmas gift for my brother, Derek.I took a few steps back, ran, leaped, and reached as high as I could. But the lowest mistletoe cluster was too high. Frustrated, I had started for home, when something strange caught my eye. At the edge of the apple orchard(果园), one tree stood bare. All the mistletoe had fallen off the branches. Delighted, I carefully picked out the best clusters and put them in my lunch box. When it was full, I rushed across the cornfield to go home.I entered the side door, listening. Yes, a guitar was playing.I pounded on the door. The guitar stopped. A moment later the door was open. My brother stood there wearing his brown leather jacket. "Where are you going?" I asked. "None of your business," hemuttered, sailing past me. It wasn't easy sharing that small bedroom with my older brother.With Derek out of the room, I emptied the contents of my lunch box onto my bed. As I looked for something to put the mistletoe in, I saw Derek's guitar on his bed, wrapped in an old towel. That guitar was the only beautiful thing Derek owned, and I knew what to buy with the mistletoe money: a case for that guitar. Even if Derek was bad-tempered sometimes, he was still my brother, and I loved him.Obviously I needed more mistletoe. The next day, I cut through the apple orchard again. A surprise awaited me—two more trees were bare, and more mistletoe! I came across the orchard owner who said he paid a guy to cut all that mistletoe out of his apple trees. He was happy I collected the mistletoe. As I raced for home, I saw Derek, in his leather jacket, was crossing the cornfield. But he ignored me.That night I picked more mistletoe. With all mistletoe sold out,I hurried over to the music store. In the front display window laya row of wooden recorders. I had learned to play a plastic one at school, and I wanted one of those wooden ones. Each year that was at the top of my Christmas list. But each year there wasn'tenough money.Paragraph 1: I was calculating how much more money I'd need to buy a recorder when I saw the towers of guitar cases in the back of the store.Paragraph 2: I reached the orchard again, overhearing a familiar voice talking with the orchard owner.二、下水续写“7+7”模式Paragraph 1: I was calculating how much more money I'd need to buy a recorder when I saw the towers of guitar cases in the back of the store.↓1. I was torn between a recorder for myself and a guitar case for my older brother, Derek.↓2. However, eagerness to own a wooden recorder built inside me.↓3. I couldn't help but rush into the store.↓4. To my joy, the money is just enough for me to buy a recorder, and I paid for it without a second thought.↓5. The instant I raced out with the recorder, I realized what I had done.↓6. I stood there, deeply ashamed of my selfish choice.↓7. Having wandered aimlessly in the street for a long time, I thought to myself, "I have to return to the orchard to earn enough money."↓Paragraph 2: I reached the orchard again, overhearing a familiar voice talking with the orchard owner.↓1. Sure enough, it was my brother.↓2. "How can you let another guy cut the mistletoe from the branches?" he exclaimed angrily. "I need money to buy a gift for my younger brother!"↓3. But the orchard owner turned around and left, refusing to respond to any complaint.↓4. It was not until then that I figured out how much my brother loved me.↓5. Hiding behind an apple tree, I didn't dare to tell him what had happened.↓6. Over the next few days, I secretly went to the apple orchard and finally my hard work paid off.↓7. A few days before Christmas, when I gave money to my brother and told him everything, he hugged me tightly.Paragraph 1: I was calculating how much more money I'd need to buy a recorder when I saw the towers of guitar cases in the back of the store. I was torn between a recorder for myself and a guitar case for my older brother, Derek. However, eagerness to own a wooden recorder built inside me. I couldn't help but rush into the store. To my joy, the money is just enough for me to buy a recorder, and I paid for it without a second thought. The instant I raced out with the recorder, I realized what I had done. I stoodthere, deeply ashamed of my selfish choice. Having wandered aimlessly in the street for a long time, I thought to myself, "I have to return to the orchard to earn enough money."Paragraph 2: I reached the orchard again, overhearing a familiar voice talking with the orchard owner.Sure enough, it was my brother. "How can you let another guy cut the mistletoe from the branches?" he exclaimed angrily. "I need money to buy a gift for my younger brother!" But the orchard owner turned around and left, refusing to respond to any complaint. It was not until then that I figured out how much my brother loved me. Hiding behind an apple tree, I didn't dare to tell him what had happened. Over the next few days, I secretly went to the apple orchard and finally my hard work paid off. A few days before Christmas, when I gave money to my brother and told him everything, he hugged me tightly.。