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青岛雅思培训 2012年中国考生雅思写作六大关注

青岛雅思培训 2012年中国考生雅思写作六大关注
青岛雅思培训 2012年中国考生雅思写作六大关注

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青岛雅思培训 2012年中国考生雅思写作六大关注青岛雅思

即便我们平时写的作文非常好,为什么一到雅思考场就写不好了呢?这其中有很多原因,比如,考场压力,审题不清以及写作基本功等。现在我们以一道雅思真题为例来做具体分析。

3月6日雅思考试作文真题还原:

Task 1 两个饼图 Pie chart

The charts give information about the time spent on different types of website by male students and female students。

(1st pie chart (boys): 40% entertainment, 20% shopping, 19% sports, 12% academic studies, 1% news, 8% others )

(2nd pie chart (girls): 35% entertainment, 11% shopping, 8% sports, 20% academic studies, 8% news, 18% others )

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant。

Task 2 社会类 (人口老龄化问题)

A survey shows that in many countries people are living longer. But increased life expectancy has many implications for the aging individuals and for society as a whole.What are the possible effects of longer living for individuals and society ?

老隋点评:作文题目总的来说算是中规中矩,学生并没有无从下笔的感觉,基本上都是人人有话说,即使这样,中国考生的作文分数仍然偏低。原因大概有以下几点:

原因一:轻视小作文。

由于小作文占作文分数的三分之一,大作文占三分之二(part2 carries more weight than part one),很多学生都高度重视大作文,却忽视了小作文的重要性。有些同学平时几乎很少练习小作文(即图表作文),在考场上20分钟内往往写不完,结果挤占了大作文的写作时间。还有一些同学考试时先写大作文后写小作文,因为他们认为大作文更重要,并且在构思上面花费大量时间,所以大作文写超时了。最后,这些同学其实是被小作文拖了后腿。请看:

方案A:小作文5分,大作文6分,写作成绩=5.5

方案B: 小作文6分,大作文5分,写作成绩=5.5

两个方案殊途同归,显然方案B比较容易实现。对于那些写作分数目标是5.5的同学,应该重点提高小作文。

再看:

方案C:小作文6.5分,大作文5.5分,写作成绩=6

方案D: 小作文5.5分,大作文6分,写作成绩=6

这两个是6分方案,也是殊途同归。考生可以根据自己的实际情况来选择适合自己的方案,然后进行突破。

结论:小作文和大作文同样重要,小作文相当于一篇雅思阅读文章后面的13-14个题目的份量,请千万不要忽视了小作文。

原因二:过于依赖作文模板。

研究写作的老师会发现:照搬模板的同学写作分数基本上都在5-5.5分之间,从没上过6分。也有一些学生分数上6的,他们的共同特点是没用模板,自己写,主要是用了各种从句。那么,到底该不该使用作文模板呢?其实,如果目标只是5-5.5分的作文的话,用模板是可以轻松实现的。但是,如果希望分数在6 分以上的话,最好远离模板,自己原创。

当然话又说回来,对于那些语法和词汇基础薄弱的同学来说,让他们自己写是很困难的。如果想短期内(例如3周)达到作文5.5的话,还是建议使用模板。模板的作用主要体现在两个方面:

第一、有助于语义连贯。这对于写作评分标准中的CC(Coherence and Cohesion)有立竿见影的作用。然而,很多用了模板的学生普遍的问题是模板中需要自己填写的部分写得很一般,有大量的语病或各种各样的语法错误,以致于模板与原创之间形成强烈反差。也就是我们常说的“金玉其外,败絮其中”。

第二、有助于凑字数。250字的大作文光模板就可以达到100多字,这就是为什么很多作文感觉语言流畅但言之无物的原因,显得很空洞。

在作文答题卡下面有一个小项叫做memorised,指的是学生在考试中背诵默写将会被扣分。如果全文默写范文,甚至有可能被记为0分。

结论:用模板分数基本上维持在5-5.5,如果想突破6分必须自己写。套句不是不可以用,但最好不要超过总篇幅的20%。其实,即使用模板,也应该提倡个性化的模板。

原因三:未写完或偏题。

一些学生由于考试的时候没有控制好时间,作文没有写完就交卷了。这主要体现在两个方面:

第一、字数明显不够。

第二、没有完整的结尾段。

还有一些学生写着写着,一不小心就偏题,甚至跑题。一般来说,未写完或偏题,分数在4-4.5,跑题分数一般都在4分以下。这是因为在评分标准中,

TR(Task Response任务的完成情况)没有做好,即没有充分的回应题目。另外,照搬模板或背诵范文容易导致跑题偏题。

结论:要想取得保底的5分,首先要确保按时写完,而且不能偏题或跑题。原因四:思路窄,论证不够充分。

思路窄是很多学生写作时的常见问题。由于现在雅思考生呈现出低龄化现象,这部分考生人生阅历浅,对各种社会问题缺乏认识。在考试中,他们普遍面临对问题本身没有太多了解,甚至用中文都感觉无话可说。另一方面,有些同学光有分论点,却没有能够对论点进行有效的论证。这些都导致其作文分数不高。

下面我举两个例子:

09.05.21 People think that a hundred years ago, the human race was steadily improving in every area of life. Nowadays, there is no certainty of this case. In which areas do you think we have made important progress nowadays? In which areas do you think we still need to make progress?

09.07.23 Many people are optimistic about the 21st century and see it as an opportunity to make positive changes to the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with their optimism? What changes would you like to see in the new century?

考生在应对这样的话题时,由于对客观世界所发生的真实事件的认知缺失,根本无法下手作文。78%的学员在试后承认自己是“乱写的,自己也不知道在写什么”。

结论:同学们在备考雅思写作的时候,应该注意拓宽思路,多关注新闻和各类社会问题,多积累论点和论据。

原因五:语法错误和拼写错误太多。

5分作文和6分作文之间的差别很大程度上体现在语法错误上。从官方的评分细则可以看出,5分作文是只会使用简单句型,语法错误较多。6分作文句式有所变化,能够灵活使用各种从句,存在一些语法错误,但不影响整体的理解。很难想像一篇到处都是语法错误和拼写错误的文章,其作者的语言能力能够高到哪去。中国人学得最多的是语法,然而最差的依然是语法。常见的语法错误包括:时态错误、主谓不一致、谓语缺失、从句使用错误、介词搭配不当等等。一篇本来能拿5.5 的作文,可能因为语法错误太多而失分,最后只能拿个5分或4.5分。

雅思写作中常用到的语法:

小作文:一般现在时、一般过去时、比较级和最高级、定语从句、被动语态等。

大作文:从句(其中6分作文必备定语从句、状语从句、宾语从句;7分作文除了这三种从句,还需具备主语从句、表语从句,甚至同位语从句)、非谓语动词(如动名词作主语、分词作后置定语、不定式作目的状语等)、插入语、同位语等等。

事实上,在考官范文中,几乎没有发现一例倒装句。另外,在雅思作文中也很少用到虚拟语气。考官范文没有一处引用名言和编造统计数据,这些都很值得我们老师反思目前我国的雅思写作教学。

结论:注意加强语法,在写作中多用从句和非谓语动词,注意句式的变化,积累各种句型和短语。

原因六:词汇匮乏或堆砌大词生词。

俗话说:“巧妇难为无米之炊。”在写作中,很多学生词汇匮乏,缺乏同义替换的能力。另一个极端是,有个别学生词汇量比较大,有意识的在文章中堆砌一些大词生词,有些词用词不当,甚至考官都很少用,属于生僻词汇。这些也会最终导致作文分数不高。

在写作评分标准的四项中,有一项叫做LR(Lexical Resource词汇资源)。它更侧重于词汇的accuracy和variety,而不是大词生词。如果大家仔细看看剑桥雅思真题集,你会发现其实考官没有用很大的词或很生僻的词。相反,他们用的词都是很常用,但是大部分都用得很准确。词汇方面,我们提倡的是用词准确,并且适当注意同义替换,这点在雅思阅读和听力中都得到了充分的展示。由此可见,雅思官方希望在我们的作文当中见到更多的同义替换,包括同义词近义词替换、词性转换、句式变换等等,而不是重复用同一个词。

结论:词汇贵精不贵多,学生应该分写作话题积累相关词汇和句型,力求做到用词准确,避免重复。

中国学生雅思写作分数一直偏低是有原因的,只有当我们克服了以上提到的六个方面的问题,我们的写作分数才有可能出现质的飞跃。此外,据说7分或以上的作文是要被寄回英国当地审查的,也许这也是为什么雅思考官在批改作文时如此谨慎的原因之一吧。我国雅思考生的作文分数呈正态分布,中间多,两头少。主要集中在5-5.5分之间,7分作文可以说是凤毛麟角。我觉得考生多研习剑桥4-7后面的考官范文,从中必定能够得到很多启示。

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雅思大作文范文三十篇

Topic 1: When international media (including movies, fashion shows, advertisements and other TV programs) convey the same messages to the global audience, people argue that the expansion of international media has negative impacts on cultural diversity. What is your opinion? 媒体信息一致的缺点: ?国际媒体(global media)—般掌握在少数几个有实力的机构手中(in the hands of a few, large, powerful organizations);有了媒体的宣传(propaganda)后,西方文化成了主流(domineering force),大规模的、有吸引力的广告(mass seductive advertising )唤起了落后地区人们对物质新的向往(create fresh desires),经济联系增强(strong economic ties),西方产品取代了本地产品,使人们更加向往西方的文化; ?文化开始融合在一起(mingle),人们被新的价值观所围绕(bombarded with new values),对自己的文化失去信心和自豪感(confidence and pride),拒绝接受自己的文化传统(rejection of their cultural heritage)转而接受西方的文化习惯(adoption of Western cultural practices);西方媒体削弱了民族的特征(ethnic identity)和社会的凝聚力(social cohesion);因为担心失去观众(a loss of viewers),当地的电视台也开始播放西方的电视节目(television shows), ?国际媒体的普遍会降低世界文化的品质和多样性(degrade the quality and diversity of world culture);文化被商业化(commercialized), —些文化产品(cultural goods),如音乐、服装,都变成了商品(commodities in the marketplace)。因此,即便一些文化在世界其他地方传播,它原来的性质(authenticity)已经丧失。 媒体信息一致的优点: ?国家之间的频繁交往会促进文化之间的交流。因此,相互了解和相互认同的可能性(likelihood of mutual understanding and mutual acceptance )就会增加,这是顺应全球化的趋势; ?未必一定放弃传统观念(not necessarily lead to the abolition of traditional values),事实上媒体可以起到宣传和稳固传统文化的作用; ?主流媒体一般都会反应文化多元性(The dominant media reflect cultural diversity.); —些外国节目其实促进了文化多元性(Most foreign programming is promoting cultural diversity.),适应了当地的条件(adapt to local conditions),注意到了当地文化的敏感性(aware of cultural sensitivity).自我调节来适应市场(exercise self-censorship to suit the market :)。 As international media companies expand across the world, the growing popularity and uniformity of some media programs (such as TV shows, movies, fashion shows) is causing worldwide concern. Many people have strong views toward this trend. In my opinion, international media is closely linked to cultural globalization and cultural homogeneity. The dominance of international media is a sign of Western cultural imperialism and has the potential to thwart cultural diversity. It is not a secret that international media is owned and operated by a handful of giant corporations, such as Time Warner. They control large sectors of the media market and place national media companies at risk. The contraction in the number of media owners will cause a proportional reduction, in the variety of programs broadcasted. For example, painting, music and movies accessible in the media have a small number of genres, imposing restraints on one's knowledge of artworks of different cultural backgrounds. In addition to seizing control over those creative industries, global entertainment companies affect cultural diversity by reshaping the perceptions, beliefs and norms of ordinary citizens in different countries. Most of the cultural values and ideals promoted by the leading mainstream media are of American origin. American culture values individuality, maximization of one's benefits and material wealth, rather than communal life and family solidarity, the values and norms previously treasured in" many Asian countries. Unfortunately, many Asian people now imitate American people, causing the alteration of their perceptions of family. This radical change can be attributed to those movies and TV programs that portray the success of American individuals or corporations.

雅思大作文环境保护

环境保护类 一.环境问题 1.气候变化、全球变暖:climate change global warming 2.空气污染、垃圾增多:air pollution increase of rubbish / garbage 3.能源危机、缺水、森林砍伐:energy crisis water shortage deforestation 4.自然灾害、酸雨、沙尘暴、干旱、水灾: natural disasters acid rain stand storm drought flood 二.原因(根本) 人口增长工业发展人类活动 Population growth industrial development long-term human activities 三.方法 1.世界方面: 全球合作达成共识制定环境保护国际准Global cooperation reach agreement set international standard s for 2.政府方面: 环保政策鼓励低碳经济发展 Work out / make / enact environmental policy encourage low carbon economy 3.企业方面: 推出环保产品引领大众绿色 消费习惯 Promote environmental products / production lead green consuming habits Environmental-friendly 4.个人: 提升环保意识倡导低碳生活方式 Improve public’s green awareness encourage / advocate low carbon life style Raise Arouse Increase 5.科技: 开发可再生清洁能源投资开发节能科技 Exploit renewable clean energy invest in energy-saving technologies 你认为环保一定是政府或企业的责任吗? 范文 第一段:(背景句)environmental protection is one of the most important challenges almost every countries is facing . (复合句) 六种:宾从、定从..... however ,whether only government and big firms have resources and powers to preserve our environment is a controversial issue .

雅思培训心得体会

雅思培训心得体会 参加雅思培训,我们从老师那学到了一套学习英文的方法,实践证明我们只需一步一脚印得踏踏实实的沿着老师指点的道 路走下去,取得6分是没有问题的,当然,取得高分离不开自己的努力。下面是小编为大家收集整理的雅思培训心得体会,欢迎大家阅读。 雅思培训心得体会篇1 已经过去半年了,成绩还算可以。有些自己的心得整理出来,乱了点,大家凑合看吧。 听力: 很多人可能花了时间,但是提高不多。重要的是实力,以及学习方法。虽然俺在大学过的4,6级,但是底子本来就有限,加上已经毕业4,5年了。所以分数并不算高。不过鸭子总算没烤糊。个人认为下面的方法不错。推荐用书:北语的黑眼睛和北航的听力特快(一定不要买教师用书,除非你是教雅思的)。开始时不要作题,要恢复实力。仔细听每一题,在纸上写下关键词(不是听懂什麽写什麽,而是什麽重要,觉得可能会问到,如时间,

地点,方式,任务,等)。反复3次,应该记下主要的考点了(250字的*大约记50字)。再听2遍(作题)。一般5遍再不会才可以翻书看答案。然后总结出错误原因(比看答案重要)。 口语: 自己大声朗读,加上与朋友瞎掰,神吹,用英语与人抬杠,并在半分钟内编出3条理由支持自己(这点对写作也很重要)。方法不算高明,个人意见。“英语中级口语”很好,有很多好的TOPIC。 阅读: 平时多看,多作题,加上一些常用的原则(如3点匹配等)。建议装E文操作系统,去E文网站,经常看E文软件手册,药品说明,科学,自然,经济人,纽约人这些名刊,最好能熟练阅读。反正多多益善。烤前有针对性的作题,看*。 写作: 一定要坚持常写。不过写之前要先背一些*。有输入才有输出。杜撰,也要肚子里有点东西才行。task1无论A或G类都可以归纳成6-7类,这样只要背6-7篇*就解决问题(反正所占比例不大)。task2是用1本上海的高分捷径。好处是给出很多论点,然后仔细看人家怎样应用,怎样连接的。再将网上的考题至少各写1遍。个人经验,要考6分,应该至少背10篇*,看熟20篇,记下20-30个经典句型,并使用纯熟。

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