青岛雅思培训 2012年中国考生雅思写作六大关注
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青岛雅思培训之如何有效备战雅思写作《青岛雅思培训文库》系列文章有青岛新航道学校教师原创,如有转载,请注明出处。
赵倩:青岛新航道雅思XX主讲,擅长XX对于很多的雅思烤鸭来说,写作是四个单项考试中最为令人头痛的一项。
由于雅思写作是典型的输出项,加之很多同学都对自己的词汇量及语法基本功并不自信,同时还有论述技巧较为贫乏的现象存在,写作也名副其实地成为如雅思官方所提醒大家的那样——雅思写作是听说读写中最难的一项,而其中的TASK 2则是所有雅思题型中最难得题型。
但是,很多同学并不知道,我们在雅思写作的备考过程中,依然存在不少误区和模糊之处,虽然英语写作能力是一种综合英语能力,考察同学们所掌握的语言知识,思维能力和知识面,但这并非说雅思写作高不可攀,技巧到位加灵活运用基本功,一样有王道可循。
要学好雅思写作,大家就必须要做到如下几点:(本文章来自于新航道《青岛雅思培训文库》最为重要的一点就是要做到多读多积累。
同学们平时应注意多进行一些好的文章或是雅思高分范文的精读。
雅思写作的整个过程就是我们所熟悉的语言的使用过程,或者说是脑中思想产生的过程,如果我们没有足够的知识储备,没有足够的语言输入,是难以维系的。
所以,建议同学们平时应该多读英文报刊杂志等。
另外一个比较直接的方式就是读一些雅思范文。
雅思书籍市面上有不少有关写作的书籍,其中大多都会附有范文,这些范文的特点是用词讲究,举行独特并且结构清晰,更有甚者会不时在文章中出现亮点,同学们可以对他们选择精读。
但是,所谓精读并不是背诵,对这些范文可不能生搬硬套。
为什么要精读呢?因为这些范文一般是作者精心挑选的,具有较大的参考价值。
对这些范文不能仅停留在理解上,而应该抱取"他人之石"的目的,把有用的表达方式,观点,框架和论证方式等为我所用。
不仅要把有用的"骨头"---常用的表达方式积累下来,还需把文章里面有用的"肉"-词汇按照写作的一些核心原则进行归类。
11月26日雅思全面预测本预测适用于亚太地区,包括中国大陆地区,港澳台地区,澳洲及日韩等。
纵观雅思考试在中国的这些年,我们会发现试题的些许变化。
如何能在雅思考试中取得比较理想的成绩?对于即将参加考试的同学,以下是无忧雅思网给广告烤鸭们一些备考建议。
雅思考试是考察英语综合实力的功能性语言测试。
对考生本身的水平要求很高。
英语水平高不见得能拿高分,要想拿高分必定要具备高的英语水平。
所以语言基础至关重要。
大家要通过平时的积累达到理想的水平,请大家一定要多多注意啦~~~11月26日考试展望听力:旧题出现的可能较大。
阅读:预测基本没用,但是也很大可能会有旧题出现,有时间也可以浏览一下往年阅读机经,了解相关的背景知识。
写作:预测可注意一下科技类、教育类、环境类以及社会类的相关话题。
口语:看预测及机经还是相当有用的。
有时间看一下雅思网站雅思口语类新闻。
口语Part 1NameWhat is your full name?How should I call you?Does your name have any special significance?Who gave your name?Study/workAre you a student or Do you work?What’s your subject?Why did you choose it as your major?Is your major difficult?Which part of your subject do you think is most interesting?What do you learn from your major?What job will you have in the future?What do you want to do after graduation?Is it easy to get a job with your major in your country?What’s your job?What are you responsible for?How was your first working day/ school day?Do you think the first day is important?Schedule/ daily routineHouse/apartment/flatDo you live in a house or an apartment?What’s special about your flat?What do you think is the most important thing in your room?Will you recommend others to live in your flat, and why?Do you want to change another house?How long have you lived there?Live alone or with others?Have you ever been living alone for some time?Surrounding?What kind of community are you living in?How is the traffic around your home?Do you like the place you currently live in?HometownWhere are you from?Where do you live?Would you say it’s a good place to grow up?Where will you recommend to your friends in your city?Transportations in your hometownWhere do you want to live, south or north of China?What’s special about your hometown?Do you like the city you current live in?What do you like most about your hometown?Do you like to live in a big city or a small town?Do you think your hometown has bright future?Do your family and you live here for a long time?Do you like to live with your parents?HappinessWhat is happiness to you?Do you think money is important for a person to be happy?BirdDo you like birds?What kinds of birds are there where you live?In your country, do different birds represent different things?In your country, do any birds have special significance?Are there any birds (in your country/where you live) that have become extinct?/thatare much less common today than they used to be?Do you think we should protect (wild) birds?ConcertsHave you ever been to a live concert?Are concerts ever held in your hometown?When was the last time you attended a concert?Would you like to go to a concert in the future?Would you prefer to watch a concert on TV or to attend a live concert?Which would you prefer, to attend a concert of your favourite artist or to buy a CD of this artist?ScienceDo you like science?What science have you studied?What science subjects do you like the most?Is there anything about science that you dislike?How do you study science?What's the most difficult part of studying science?How has the science that you have studied helped you?/ will help you?HandicraftHave you ever made anything by hand when you were a child?Do children in your country often make things by hand?Do you think it's very useful for children to make things by hand? AdvertisementsDo you like advertisement?Do you prefer advertisements on TV or in magazines?Do Ads influence your choice of what to buy?Do you think there are too many Ads?Painting and DrawingWhat kind of painting or drawing did you do as a child?Is it important for a child to draw or paint?What kinds of things do people draw or paint?PartiesDo you like to go to parties?Where are (these) parties usually held?Do you prefer family parties or parties with friends?GiftDo you like buying gifts to others?When was the last time you buy one for others?Do you prefer giving gifts or receiving one?Travelling by airDo you like to take airplane?How often do you travel by air?What do you think the advantages and disadvantages of travelling by air? (compare with other means of transport)What do you think the air travelling will be in the future?DancingCan you dance?Do you like dancing?Is dancing popular where you live?What kind of dance do Chinese people like?AnimalsDo you like animals?Do you have a pet?What kinds of animals do people keep as pets where you live?Are wild animals protected in your country?Do you often visit zoos or wildlife parks?Are animals important in farming in your country?FriendDo you usually meet new friends?How do you make new friends?Where do you usually hang out with your friends?Weather/seasonWhat type of weather do you like?What type of weather do Chinese people usually like?What do you often do in sunny days? Cold days?How does weather affect you?Does weather affect people’s work performance?Which is your favorite season?What is the most common weather in your country?Do you pay attention to the weather forecast?What do you think about weather report?Do you th ink people’s activities will change in different seasons?Sound and noiseYour favorite sound from nature and why?The noise you hate the most?the types of sounds that you consider as noiseDo you like quiet environment?What kinds of sounds remind you about your childhood?Time/watch//Time managementDo you often wear watch?How do you feel when you are late?Do you sometimes feel that time goes slowly?Do you think time management is important?Can you manage your time well?How do you manage your time well?Where did you learn about time management?CollectionDo you like collecting things?Why do you have such a collection?Did you like collecting things when you were a child?What will you collect when you’re rich in the future?What do Chinese people like to collect?What can people learn from their collections?NumberWhich number do you like?Do you have a lucky number?What numbers do Chinese people like?ColourWhat is your favourite colour? Why?What color do you dislike?What colour of clothes do you like?Do you prefer light colors or dark colors?What colour would you use to decorate your home?Is colour very important to you when you are buying sth?Which colour do Chinese people like?Food & Cooking&houseworkDo you like cooking?Do you cook/do houseworkat home?Did you learn cooking/houseworkin your childhood?Will you cook/do houseworkin the future?Who cooks/does houseworkin your family?Is it important for young people to know how to cook/do housework? Fruit/vegetable/ healthy eatingWhat kind of fruit/vegetables do you like? Why?Where do you buy fresh fruit and vegetable?Is it easy (convenient to) buy fruit and vegetables where you live? Do you like to eat fruit(s) and vegetables?How often do you eat fruit and vegetables?Did you like to vegetables when you were a child?What are the benefits of eating fresh fruit (or, fresh fruits andvegetables)?How much fruit and vegetables do you think a person needs to eat (everyday) to stay healthy?Fashion/shoppingDo you like fashion?Do you like shopping?How often do you go shopping?Do you prefer to go shopping with friends or alone?What makes you interested in shopping?Do you think shopping is a waste of time?What kind of clothes do you like?Who buy clothes for you?What’s the difference b etween big shop and small shop?When was the last time you went shopping?FlowersDo you like flowers?Why do people like flower?Do Chinese people grow flowers?When was the last time you bought flowers/ gave flowers to others?Why will Chinese people buy flowers? On what occasions do people give flowers to other people?Do Chinese people grow flowers in gardens?Do you like garden?Do the old like flowers?Are flowers popular in china?Sports/ swimmingWhat sport do you like?Do your friends like sport?Do you often do exercises at university?Is there any sports equipment near your home?How often do you do exercise?Do you think it is necessary for children to do exercise?Do you prefer to swim at sea or in the swimming pool?Travelling/seaHave you ever had a long journey/ been to sea?When was your last trip (to sea)?Do you like travelling/ being at sea?Where have you been?What is the furthest place/ sea you’ve been to?Do you prefer traveling alone or with friends?Among the places you have travelled to, which place/ sea you like most? What do people usually do at sea?Internet/ Letter or emailWhat do you think about the internet?What are the advantages of internet?Do you like email or letter?How often do you send email?Cell phone/ phoneDo you often use a mobile phone?What are the advantages and disadvantages of using cell phones?Book/reading/news& newspapers & magazinesDo you often read books?What kinds of books do you usually read?Did you read a lot when you were a child? If so, what were they?Why don't you keep reading now?Do you like reading?Where do you read books?How long do you read per day?Do you enjoy reading when you were a child? Now? Why?Where do you usually read news from? Newspaper, internet or TV? What are the advantages and disadvantages of using Internet? Watching TVDo you like watching TV?Did you like watching TV when you were a child?How often do you watch TV?Do you prefer watching TV alone or with others?FilmWhat kinds of film do you like?Are these types of film popular in your country?Do you prefer watch movies in cinema or at home?How often do you watch film?DrivingDo you have a driving license?When is the appropriate age for getting a driving license?Is driving skills important?Do you (know how to) drive a car?Do you think it’s important to get a driver’s license?LanguageWhat language do you speak?What other languages can you speak?Do you want to learn anther language?How do you learn it (esp. English)?Do you think learning English is difficult?How do you improve your English?Do you think learning languages is important?Something helps you to learn another language.MuseumDo you often go to museums?Why do people usually go to museums?Why are there museums in almost every city?---------------------------------------------------------------------------Part 2PeopleA person/friend with leadershipA person who leads a healthy lifeDescribe your personality and characteristicsAn adventurous personAn interesting person you want to travel withA character in a storyA person in a piece of newsAn artist/ a successful personA family (member/ but not yours)an old person(the oldest person)you admireA child/a friend in childhood you admireA person who you want tospend some time with/ you ever helpedA neighbourA visitor/ a person you want to visitObjects/ thingsA means of transport/ vehicle (老题重考)A giftsomething you made yourselfby using computera piece of clothes you bought/ other bought for youA thing you bought but seldom usedSomething you wanted and saved money for it/ something expensive you bought A piece of useful electronic/broken piece of equipment (except computer) in your homeA wild animalyour favorite seasonMediaA foreign film you watched recentlyA song reminds you of a particular time in your life/ in your childhoodan advertisementA piece of (interesting) news you read recentlyAn interesting magazine or newspaper you often readan exciting message (a special letter/an e-mail)A kind of bookA book (you enjoyed as a child)A photograph (of your family)A websiteA quiz show/an educational TV program you like to watchPlacesA work place(an office/ a shop/ a factory)A place where you would go in the free time off work or collegeleisure center in your areaA peaceful placeA placeof natural beauty/ near water/with a lot of noiseA historic site (describe a place you learned some history from)Your ideal or favourite home/ room (in your childhood) (旧题重考)An outdoor place for sportsA gardenYour favouritestreetof a city/ your hometownModern building (shopping center/supermarket)a librarya Hotela museum/ a place where you learn a lota (small) successful companya city/a small towna small shopa restaurant (a place you sometimes go for lunch)EventsA situation you were angry aboutA journey when you met a bad weatherAn unforgettable trip in your childhood/ that is longer than you expectedSomeone's wedding you have ever took part in of heard ofAn unusual thing you do recently or something you do in your free time.A musical event you attended or watched on TV/ A public event/ a celebrationA good period of time in your life (新题)A telephone conversation (旧题变体)Special MealSomething naughty you did when you were a childA (exciting/ healthy) physical activity/ sport /a lifestyle change to improve your healththe most useful practical skill(eg.cooking,driving) u've learned./ you learned from computerA job you think you’ll be good at/that can make the world betterA party for someone/a festivalA group/ outdoor activity you took part inA sport competition you took part in or watchedA way to protect the environmentA family eventAn admirable event that your friend did阅读摩尔密码好莱坞大片展览馆父母参与学校教育冰川融化对冷冻细菌影响图书馆记忆方法广告始祖写作的历史电子书英语全球化海底能源发电Information theory 桥梁诊断人类的各种感官运动和兴奋对穷国的交通协助空中交通堵塞与管制物种的可逆性water filter 连锁超市摩斯密码chronometer的发明公司的人才HR creative people sound of ocean 鳄鱼的进化和特殊本领telegraph的发明role of managers Search for E.T. Intelligence What can make us happy写作小作文重点:饼图,表格和流程图大作文1.Once children start school, the teacher have more influence in their intellectual and social development than parents. In what extent do you agree or disagree?2.Students at schools and universities learn far more from lessons with teachers than from other sources (such as the Internet and television). To what extent do you agree or disagree?3.In some countries some school leavers are choosing to work or travel for a period of time between finishing high school and attending university. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for school leavers' decision.Give your own opinion and e your experience of life to explain it.4.Some say that it is good for children to stay away from their families and go to boarding school. Others say that children had better live with their families and attenda day school. What do you think about it?5.Crime is a global problem,we can do nothing to prevent it. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?6.Some people believe that only the fittest and strongest individuals and teams can achieve success in sports. Others think that success in sports depends on mental attitudes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.7.crime is a problem all over the world and there is nothing that can be done to prevent it,to what extent do you agree or disagree.8.Some people think intelligent children should learn with others together, since it will benefit everyone, while other people think intelligent children should learn separately, and also should get special treatment. Discuss both points and give your own opinion.9.The food travels thousands of miles from farm to consumer. Some people think it would be better to our environment and economy if people only ate local produced food.What extend does the advantage outweigh disadvantage?10.Many young people today are too worried about the way they look and this causes them problems. Do you agree or disagree? What is the situation in your country?。
雅思写作高分经验请务必注意这6个细节在雅思写作中,一些在我们看来无足轻重的小细节都会给考官留下不好的印象,这也就是为什么中国学生的作文成绩普遍不高的原因,那么有哪些细节最容易被学生忽视呢?下面是小编为您收集整理的请务必注意这6个细节,供大家参考!雅思写作高分经验--请务必注意这6个细节一、标点问题按照英语书写规定,标点应紧挨着它的附着意群进行标注,与另一个意群要以一个字符的空格隔开。
但很多中国学生习惯把标点当作是一个单词来对待,换句话说,就是在标点前后都留下空格,如:First , energy and other natural resources have become more abundant , not less so , since the book ‘ The Limits to Growth ’ was published by a group of scientists.标点像单词一样横插在句子中会给人以一种喧宾夺主的感觉,因而也会扣分。
二、句首字母的大小写问题在通常情况下,很多中国考生感觉只要是个句子就都把句首单词首字母大写了,但是在实际写作中情况如何呢?看例句:Some corpora attempt to cover the language as a whole;others are extremely selective.分号的作用是对关系非常紧密的句子进行分隔,所以后一个句子只是前一个的附属,并不是一个独立的新句子,所以首字母仍然要小写的。
这个现象同样适用于冒号、破折号、括号。
三、书写太随意每个人都有自己的书写习惯,但雅思考试的阅卷老师毕竟是外国人,如果我们能在书写上迎合外国人的习惯,就一定会给人以亲切的卷面印象。
书写不要过于密集与随意,以免影响阅卷老师的理解。
四、写作格式混乱英语书写格式主要有齐头式与缩进式两种,通常齐头式因为顶头书写且段与段之间空出一行,所以会给人以整洁的感觉,也比较推荐大家使用这种格式。
青岛雅思培训之雅思作文应注意的4点问题《青岛雅思培训文库》系列文章有青岛新航道学校教师原创,如有转载,请注明出处。
1、避免中国式思维的观点中国考生在写作时应注意一些西方文化观念的差异。
雅思考官一般为西方人,我们在写作时应尽量用他们可以接受的观点。
因为如果用中式思维来辩论,可能会给考官造成困扰。
比如说,中国学生普遍认为,在中学阶段学生的首要任务就是学习文化知识,其他的生活技能包括实际能力或人际关系能力等到大学时才需要学习;而西方人却认为学生在各年龄段都在不断学习和锻炼各种技能,包括人际能力和学习能力,而高中毕业生也应该已经具备就业能力了。
所以备考的考生应该多研读范文,以及报刊、杂志等,这样才能在面对考题时有更准确的反应。
(本文章来自于新航道《青岛雅思培训文库》)以下的是一些常见的例子:中国式观点西方普遍观点汽车的使用经济地位和现代化的象征破坏环境和不健康生活方式快餐代表经济发达的西方食品不健康的生活方式、垃圾食品父母教育老师和学校的责任,父母起辅助作用父母培养孩子性格(尤其是上小学之前)、老师传授知识家庭背景有钱的孩子娇生惯养,家庭条件不好的孩子懂事、爱学习富有的家庭可以提供更好的教育环境和教育机会,孩子成功的可能更大学习方法学习基础知识,记忆公式口诀和定理锻炼孩子自主学习能力,不鼓励大量的背诵公式等课外活动大学前以学习为重,课外活动不重要课外活动对身体健康和性格发展都有好处全球化经济影响大环境、文化和经济都有影响大学教育上了大学就应该学习好找工作的专业,兴趣是次要的;不接受大学教育没有前途大学让学生发展兴趣并且有助于学生人格发展,但不上大学依旧可以工作大学设施去大学主要是要从老师那里学习知识、跟同学锻炼交际能力大学的学习中自主学习占很重要地位,学校为学生提供图书馆、实验室等设施;教师对学生进行指导动物保护动物应该为人力服务,保护动物等于保护资源动物有生存的权利,是生态系统的重要组成部分政府政府应管理人的生活方式、进行宏观调控、利用资源;私企以营利为目的、违背公众利益政府无效率、企业效率高,应推行私有化2、文章中不要出现抒情的比喻首先,作为正式问题的雅思写作中,是不适宜出现过于抒情的比喻的。
2012年1月7日雅思写作真题回忆小作文:柱状图,四个国家(中国、美国、俄罗斯、澳大利亚)在工业、农业、家庭消耗水的百分比情况 in 2001大作文 Task1 Bar Chart 比较中国俄罗斯美国和澳大利亚四国在2001年使用水资源的情况分别有工业农业和家庭用水 Task2 发展中国家应该邀请外国大公司来建厂做生意还是应该闭关锁国保护本土公司?2012年1月14日雅思写作真题回忆小作文是个table below 讲六个地方和全球60以后的人的比例in 2000和2050 大作文是说employers有social skill能在工作中成功呢还是有good quailification的employers 能成功2012年2月4日雅思写作真题回忆小作文柱图,制造两种不同质地的杯子所耗的material 比较;大作文:Some people think that young people should follow traditions of their society, and others think young people should be free to behave as individuals.2012年2月18日雅思写作真题回忆小作文:柱状图七个region的男女文学能力rates和世界平均水平对比大作文:是有人认为科技让生活变得complex,解决方式就是不使用科技从让生活变简单你的看法~2012年2月25日雅思写作真题回忆小作文:task1是柱状图对比一个国家男女一年内take trips的人数和原因大作文:Full-time university students need to spend a lot of time studying, but it is essential to involve other activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?2012年3月10日雅思写作真题回忆小作文:表格图,介绍六个国家里手机和电脑在每千人手中的拥有量。
2012雅思考试备考经验全攻略(献给速成的自学者)看别人的经验帖,站在前人的肩膀上,我们就能找着捷径,就可以摸索到事半功倍的方法,我总结了四个雅思考试相关经验的文档,推荐给大家!!!【巨实在】雅思考前冲刺10大建议1、如果参加了培训班,请尽量在培训结束后1-2个月内考试,这期间每天还需要复习大约6-8小时,听说读写同时并进,保证每天的各项刺激和输入量。
2、每天坚持背诵输入和默写输出100—200words的段落和句子(重要的大小作文范文,套句,阅读中的地道的写作好词句)保证足够的内存和拼写能力。
3、经常看听说读写最新资料和技巧,每次考试预测和考试回忆分析。
4、预测一般在考前一周出来,考前一周可参考预测复习。
5、阅读方面:阅读总的发展趋势是逐渐变难,要保证足够的量。
除了做剑桥4-8,有空可以上网浏览国际先驱导报,BBC等科技,经济,教育新闻,雅思考试阅读文章几乎都是这样的文章。
6、听力方面:精听剑桥4-8,在精听中复述模仿语音语调,利用大量的精听,听写和大声跟读朗读听力原文来迅速提高听力。
考前预测根据版本号看听力机经,泛听BBC。
7、写作方面:八股格式+有说服力的论证内容(正反,举例,假设,因果……)+丰富的语法和词汇(现在分词做状语,only倒装句,简单一重的定语从句,条件句,虚拟语气,同义词替换,如考前预测的作文TOPICS 要认真准备;社会,教育,文化艺术类的高频TOPICS准备。
每天100-200背诵输入和墨写(套句,阅读好词句段。
)选典型题目写至少10-15篇(剑桥作文题目或者今年考过的题目),形成自己的一套句式,写法。
每天背一篇重要的典型的小作文(G类是各种书信,A类是曲线,柱图,数据图,流程图等各类范文)和大作文,最好能复述或默写出来。
8、口语:勤奋练习最近半年考过的100-150topics。
每天找人讲练3-5TOPIS,看空间里的高频率TOPIC,考试回忆的TOPICS,预测的TOPICS,精听中复述。
阅读使人快乐,成长需要时间2012年6月16日雅思写作解析及30日预测Writing Task One【考察题目】【2012年6月16日】表格题(table)据考生回忆,此次考察的题目是五个国家在2006年二氧化碳(carbon dioxide)的排放量(emission)情况说明。
【写作小贴士】表格题(Table)曾经出现在剑桥系列丛书B5P98“Underground Railway Systems”---单表格、B6P30“Global water use by sector”+“Water consumption in Brazil and Congo in 2000”---线图+表格、B7P30“Percentage of national consumer expenditure by category---2002”以及B8P30“Causes of worldwide land degradation”+“Causes of land degradation by region”---饼图+表格,针对此类题目,需提醒大家注意的是:仔细观察表格横行和纵列各自代表的意义,另外在body paragraph(s)写作的过程中,第一纵列内所列内容一个不能缺,具体如下:第一、开头introduction释义题目,变换题目words, phrases and sentence structure;第二、在写作body paragraph(s)时,注意“相似数据”描述以及“大小数据”比较论述;第三、conclusion段写作时,注意对body paragraph(s)数据客观解析部分进行总体趋势概述。
【写作语汇推荐】1-figure/data/statistics2-represent3-with the exception of4-show/reveal5-general increase/decrease6-comparatively7-out of the total number of8-in the percentage of9-far more significant10-in the same period11-compared to12-fairly stable13-in comparison to14-on the other hand15-be scheduled to【写作句型推荐】1-The table shows that….2-The opposite appeared to be the case.3-The figures for both A and B were comparatively low.4-Out of the total number of those aged over 65 and older, A saw a general increase.5-C followed this trend.6-This represented an increase of more than 10 per cent compared to A’s 5 percent and B’s 3 per cent.7-A figure doubled in comparison to the percentage of….8-C, on the other hand, remained const ant with….9-C had a lower proportion of….10-Overall, it is clear that….许飞:6月14日雅思写作解析So far,Writing Task One无论是Bar Chart,Line Graph,Table,还是Pie Chart,拼图亦或是Map都有考察,Flow Chart/Diagram依旧未曾露面!常言道:More haste, less speed!还得继续make some cliché remark:革命尚未成功,同志仍需努力!只要“敌军”尚未露面,我们就不可放松警惕,要时刻做好迎敌的准备!只要用心练习好每一类题目,脚踏实地,一步一个脚印儿,并时刻铭记:Chance favors the prepared mind!考分必将如你所愿,因为我只相信一点一滴的量变industrious,终将成就你质变的辉煌illustrious!Writing Task Two【A类考试题目】【2012年6月16日】City dwellers seldom socialize with their neighbors today and the sense of community has been lost.Why has this happened and how to solve this problem?【题目翻译】住在城市中的人很少与邻居交流,这种群体意识已经消失。
在为雅思备考的烤鸭们,有很大一部分人认为雅思写作是最难搞定的,甚至不知道该如何进行雅思写作学习,天道小编为了帮助大家进行雅思写作学习,下面为大家分享一下雅思写作最容易忽视的关键,供大家参考。
下面就是天道留学小编为备考雅思的烤鸭们分享的雅思写作最易忽视的关键,希望对大家的雅思写作学习有所帮助。
1.重字数轻审题在一个小时的紧张时间限制下,很多学生害怕浪费时间而审题草草了事,而这对应对现如今出题越来越限制的雅思大作文显然是不合适。
举个例子,在最近的7月15日的考试中,大作文考题为有人认为成年人学习practical skills应该在学校学,有人认为应该在家自己学,讨论双方观点。
本身属于较为简单的一个教育类题,但是考后看学生和网上的回忆,很多同学,甚至于基础较好的学生都将它与另外一道题混淆。
Some people think that with the computer and Internet students can learn at home without going to school. But others believe students can learn more effectively with teachers at school. Discuss both views and give your own opinion。
(有些人认为学生可以用电脑和网络在家学,另一些人认为学生跟着老师在学校学更有效)那么在原题中,practical skills 就是题目的限定词,侃侃而谈广泛在家学和在学校学的同学就掉进了这个陷阱,审题不清而未自知。
2.过分迷信模板套用模板,本身并不是一个问题,甚至于在一定程度上,套用模板可以帮助基础较差的学生短期内完成雅思写作的任务。
但是当模板过于详细,或者不分题型共同套用同一个模板时,严重的错误就发生了。
第一个问题,模板过于详细。
很明显,在中国大陆的雅思考官对于写作模板都烂熟于心,简单的四段式和五段式已被认为有模板的痕迹而开始阻碍学生向高分冲刺,更不必说每段都详细写好只需套入话题那样的模板了,同学们在准备的过程中一定要避免这样的详细模板。
雅思写作需要特别注意的细节在经历了一段时间的雅思作文备考之后,考生要上战场了。
雅思小作文的几种类型与大作文的专题种类均已经熟练掌握,遣词造句也已然胸有成竹了,但是考场上挥毫泼墨之余的一些小问题都了解了吗?比如,答卷时注意的问题,如厕的时间等等,此种平日里练习时不会遇到的实战问题不可小觑。
下面是小编为您收集整理的雅思写作需要特别注意的细节,供大家参考!雅思写作需要特别注意的细节雅思写作部分的考试是雅思笔试部分的最后一环,在经历了前面的听力与阅读战斗之后,考生整体的英语思维达到了较好的状态,即使有些小疲倦也可以通过收答题卡和阅读卷子的空档调整一下情绪,这样在接下来的作文中应该会有个人良好的表现。
但是,大家还需要特别留意以下细节。
一、时间安排上要保证大作文的完结时间安排有两个层面,一是考场流程上,二是大小作文时间配置上。
首先,按照雅思考场的明文规定,发写作卷子之前是不允许去洗手间的,作文题目与作文纸全部发下来之后才可以去。
但是此时已经开始写作计时了,即考生去洗手间的时间是在占用自己的写作时间。
而且,作文考试结束5分钟之前不允许出教室去卫生间。
所以,考生早晨尽量少饮水,或进教室之前就解决好此类问题。
第二,拿到题目卷子之后,一定要遵照考官指示才可以打开试卷,否则会被记录考场违纪。
第三,关于大小作文时间分配,要先浏览题目后决定。
如果发觉小作文比较复杂难写,可以选择先写大作文;如果发觉大作文可能一时没有想法,可以先解决小作文。
但是,大作文在评分中占有的比例是高于小作文的,所以一定要保证大作文的完结。
大作文的写作时间至少在40分钟。
二、答卷细节——笔、纸、橡皮一样也不可忽视第一,雅思作文答题纸使用的一个核心原则就是保持卷面整洁与清晰。
雅思考试写有作文题目的那张卷子的空白处是可以做草稿纸用的,但是作文答题纸的空白处不可以随便写字、勾画,以防作弊。
雅思笔试的铅笔是可以置换笔芯的(俗称:下蛋笔),如果写作中途觉得笔芯太粗,想置换新一个的话,可以将新的笔芯在题目卷子上快速划一划,磨一磨,毕竟笔尖太细的话有点不好用。
2012年雅思写作机经(A类)■凉月出品■沪江留学倾力打造■2012年12月15日发布IELTS2012年,中国总共举行了47场雅思考试,A类T ask1一共涉及8种题型:1)柱图2)饼图3)线图数据图形类4)表格5)混合图6)地图7)流程图示意图形类8)功能图8种题型的具体占比如下图所示:具体题目不再一一收录,流程图、地图和功能图的真题将收入到《向雅思流程图说YES!》一书中。
2013年必然还是考以上8种题型,地图、流程图和功能图会出现6次以上。
A类写作Task 2的题目提问方式主要有以下几种:1) To what extent do you agree or disagree?2) Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.3) Do you think the advantages of … outweigh the disadvantages?4) Do you think this is a positive or negative development for …?5) What are the causes of this situation? How to solve the problem?6) What are the impacts? How to solve the problem?通常可将其归纳为Argumentation(讨论型)与Report(报告型)。
2013年Report(报告型)的写作题目会越来越多,考生应熟悉这类题目的写法。
以下是2012年雅思写作题目:14资深雅思专家,沪江特聘留学考试顾问。
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对雅思考试有独到研究,多次准确捕捉雅思考试题目及考试趋势,帮助数万考生圆梦欧美高等学府。
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现在我们以一道雅思真题为例来做具体分析。
3月6日雅思考试作文真题还原:Task 1 两个饼图 Pie chartThe charts give information about the time spent on different types of website by male students and female students。
(1st pie chart (boys): 40% entertainment, 20% shopping, 19% sports, 12% academic studies, 1% news, 8% others )(2nd pie chart (girls): 35% entertainment, 11% shopping, 8% sports, 20% academic studies, 8% news, 18% others )Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant。
Task 2 社会类 (人口老龄化问题)A survey shows that in many countries people are living longer. But increased life expectancy has many implications for the aging individuals and for society as a whole.What are the possible effects of longer living for individuals and society ?老隋点评:作文题目总的来说算是中规中矩,学生并没有无从下笔的感觉,基本上都是人人有话说,即使这样,中国考生的作文分数仍然偏低。
原因大概有以下几点:原因一:轻视小作文。
由于小作文占作文分数的三分之一,大作文占三分之二(part2 carries more weight than part one),很多学生都高度重视大作文,却忽视了小作文的重要性。
有些同学平时几乎很少练习小作文(即图表作文),在考场上20分钟内往往写不完,结果挤占了大作文的写作时间。
还有一些同学考试时先写大作文后写小作文,因为他们认为大作文更重要,并且在构思上面花费大量时间,所以大作文写超时了。
最后,这些同学其实是被小作文拖了后腿。
请看:方案A:小作文5分,大作文6分,写作成绩=5.5方案B: 小作文6分,大作文5分,写作成绩=5.5两个方案殊途同归,显然方案B比较容易实现。
对于那些写作分数目标是5.5的同学,应该重点提高小作文。
再看:方案C:小作文6.5分,大作文5.5分,写作成绩=6方案D: 小作文5.5分,大作文6分,写作成绩=6这两个是6分方案,也是殊途同归。
考生可以根据自己的实际情况来选择适合自己的方案,然后进行突破。
结论:小作文和大作文同样重要,小作文相当于一篇雅思阅读文章后面的13-14个题目的份量,请千万不要忽视了小作文。
原因二:过于依赖作文模板。
研究写作的老师会发现:照搬模板的同学写作分数基本上都在5-5.5分之间,从没上过6分。
也有一些学生分数上6的,他们的共同特点是没用模板,自己写,主要是用了各种从句。
那么,到底该不该使用作文模板呢?其实,如果目标只是5-5.5分的作文的话,用模板是可以轻松实现的。
但是,如果希望分数在6 分以上的话,最好远离模板,自己原创。
当然话又说回来,对于那些语法和词汇基础薄弱的同学来说,让他们自己写是很困难的。
如果想短期内(例如3周)达到作文5.5的话,还是建议使用模板。
模板的作用主要体现在两个方面:第一、有助于语义连贯。
这对于写作评分标准中的CC(Coherence and Cohesion)有立竿见影的作用。
然而,很多用了模板的学生普遍的问题是模板中需要自己填写的部分写得很一般,有大量的语病或各种各样的语法错误,以致于模板与原创之间形成强烈反差。
也就是我们常说的“金玉其外,败絮其中”。
第二、有助于凑字数。
250字的大作文光模板就可以达到100多字,这就是为什么很多作文感觉语言流畅但言之无物的原因,显得很空洞。
在作文答题卡下面有一个小项叫做memorised,指的是学生在考试中背诵默写将会被扣分。
如果全文默写范文,甚至有可能被记为0分。
结论:用模板分数基本上维持在5-5.5,如果想突破6分必须自己写。
套句不是不可以用,但最好不要超过总篇幅的20%。
其实,即使用模板,也应该提倡个性化的模板。
原因三:未写完或偏题。
一些学生由于考试的时候没有控制好时间,作文没有写完就交卷了。
这主要体现在两个方面:第一、字数明显不够。
第二、没有完整的结尾段。
还有一些学生写着写着,一不小心就偏题,甚至跑题。
一般来说,未写完或偏题,分数在4-4.5,跑题分数一般都在4分以下。
这是因为在评分标准中,TR(Task Response任务的完成情况)没有做好,即没有充分的回应题目。
另外,照搬模板或背诵范文容易导致跑题偏题。
结论:要想取得保底的5分,首先要确保按时写完,而且不能偏题或跑题。
原因四:思路窄,论证不够充分。
思路窄是很多学生写作时的常见问题。
由于现在雅思考生呈现出低龄化现象,这部分考生人生阅历浅,对各种社会问题缺乏认识。
在考试中,他们普遍面临对问题本身没有太多了解,甚至用中文都感觉无话可说。
另一方面,有些同学光有分论点,却没有能够对论点进行有效的论证。
这些都导致其作文分数不高。
下面我举两个例子:09.05.21 People think that a hundred years ago, the human race was steadily improving in every area of life. Nowadays, there is no certainty of this case. In which areas do you think we have made important progress nowadays? In which areas do you think we still need to make progress?09.07.23 Many people are optimistic about the 21st century and see it as an opportunity to make positive changes to the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with their optimism? What changes would you like to see in the new century?考生在应对这样的话题时,由于对客观世界所发生的真实事件的认知缺失,根本无法下手作文。
78%的学员在试后承认自己是“乱写的,自己也不知道在写什么”。
结论:同学们在备考雅思写作的时候,应该注意拓宽思路,多关注新闻和各类社会问题,多积累论点和论据。
原因五:语法错误和拼写错误太多。
5分作文和6分作文之间的差别很大程度上体现在语法错误上。
从官方的评分细则可以看出,5分作文是只会使用简单句型,语法错误较多。
6分作文句式有所变化,能够灵活使用各种从句,存在一些语法错误,但不影响整体的理解。
很难想像一篇到处都是语法错误和拼写错误的文章,其作者的语言能力能够高到哪去。
中国人学得最多的是语法,然而最差的依然是语法。
常见的语法错误包括:时态错误、主谓不一致、谓语缺失、从句使用错误、介词搭配不当等等。
一篇本来能拿5.5 的作文,可能因为语法错误太多而失分,最后只能拿个5分或4.5分。
雅思写作中常用到的语法:小作文:一般现在时、一般过去时、比较级和最高级、定语从句、被动语态等。
大作文:从句(其中6分作文必备定语从句、状语从句、宾语从句;7分作文除了这三种从句,还需具备主语从句、表语从句,甚至同位语从句)、非谓语动词(如动名词作主语、分词作后置定语、不定式作目的状语等)、插入语、同位语等等。
事实上,在考官范文中,几乎没有发现一例倒装句。
另外,在雅思作文中也很少用到虚拟语气。
考官范文没有一处引用名言和编造统计数据,这些都很值得我们老师反思目前我国的雅思写作教学。
结论:注意加强语法,在写作中多用从句和非谓语动词,注意句式的变化,积累各种句型和短语。
原因六:词汇匮乏或堆砌大词生词。
俗话说:“巧妇难为无米之炊。
”在写作中,很多学生词汇匮乏,缺乏同义替换的能力。
另一个极端是,有个别学生词汇量比较大,有意识的在文章中堆砌一些大词生词,有些词用词不当,甚至考官都很少用,属于生僻词汇。
这些也会最终导致作文分数不高。
在写作评分标准的四项中,有一项叫做LR(Lexical Resource词汇资源)。
它更侧重于词汇的accuracy和variety,而不是大词生词。
如果大家仔细看看剑桥雅思真题集,你会发现其实考官没有用很大的词或很生僻的词。
相反,他们用的词都是很常用,但是大部分都用得很准确。
词汇方面,我们提倡的是用词准确,并且适当注意同义替换,这点在雅思阅读和听力中都得到了充分的展示。
由此可见,雅思官方希望在我们的作文当中见到更多的同义替换,包括同义词近义词替换、词性转换、句式变换等等,而不是重复用同一个词。
结论:词汇贵精不贵多,学生应该分写作话题积累相关词汇和句型,力求做到用词准确,避免重复。
中国学生雅思写作分数一直偏低是有原因的,只有当我们克服了以上提到的六个方面的问题,我们的写作分数才有可能出现质的飞跃。
此外,据说7分或以上的作文是要被寄回英国当地审查的,也许这也是为什么雅思考官在批改作文时如此谨慎的原因之一吧。
我国雅思考生的作文分数呈正态分布,中间多,两头少。
主要集中在5-5.5分之间,7分作文可以说是凤毛麟角。
我觉得考生多研习剑桥4-7后面的考官范文,从中必定能够得到很多启示。
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