2013山东各市中考书面表达及2013-2008淄博书面表达
整理2014.4 【2013山东青岛】书面表达（共15分）
同学们，三年的初中生活就要结朿了，在我们的成长过段中，既有快乐，也有烦恼。请用英文写一篇短文，内容包括：
1. 你在学校或家里曾经遇到的最大问题或烦恼；
2. 你解决问题或烦恼的过程；
3. 你的感想。
要求：1.字数：80—100字。开头已给出，不计入总字数。
2.文中不得出现真实的校名与人名。
My middle school life is coming to an end. During the three years, not only did I have happy tim e, but I had kinds of problems. My biggest problem was 【答案】My middle school life is coming to an end. During the three years, not only did I have happy tim e, but I had
kinds of problems. My biggest problem was that I used to be shy. Sometimes I really
didn?t know whom I should ask for help when I was in trouble.
First, I learned how to communicate with others and make as many friends as possible. Then whe n I was in
trouble, I asked my classmates or friends for help because we were the same age and we could u nderstand each other easily. Besides, I also told my teachers or parents about my trouble and ask ed for their help. They were
full of love and had rich experience.
Now, I am more outgoing than before. I can get along well with people around me
【2013山东菏泽】书面表达（满分20分）
亲爱的同学.你的初中学习生活马上就要结束了了.请你以"My English study为题谈一下三年来学习英语的心得体会。
1、要点包括:你在英语学习中所遇到的困难、解决的办法以及学习感悟。 2,字数要求: 不少于80字。
My English Study
___________________________________________________________________ __________ ________________________________________________________ _____________________【答案】参考范文:
My English Study
How time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back. I have many memories of my English study.
When I entered the middle school, I had so many difficulties with my English. I was not able to u nderstand the teacher in class, and I couldn't master the words and phrases. For a time I wanted t o give it up. Later, with the help of the teacher and my classmates, I listened to the teacher carefu lly in class, kept on reading English every day and spoke English as much as possible. Step by st ep I made great progress in English.
In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it well.
【评分说明】
1、本题为开放性试题，所提供范文仅供参考;在符合题目要求的前提下.允许考生自
由发挥。
2、本题共20分.评分可分为四个档次:
第一档: 符合本题写作要求.短文通顺完整.书本没有语法、拼写错误。书写工整.得17-20分; 第二档: 符合本题写作要求，短文基本通顺完整.有少量语法、拼写错误，书写较工整，得13-16分;
第三档: 基本符合本题写作要求.但短文不够通顺完整，语法、拼写错误较多，书写不
够工整。得10-12分;
第四档: 通篇语句不通.表达不清.且书写非常潦草，得10分以下
【2013山东枣庄】书面表达（共1题，满分10分）
Describe your favorite teacher in no more than 120 words according to the following points. Hi s or her looks (hair, height, build) His or her likes or dislikes
His or her personal character
His or her way of teaching (at least one example)
__________________________________________________________________________ __ ________________________________________________________________________ ____ ______________________________________________________________________ ______ ____________________________________________________________________
参照范文：
My favorite teacher is Zhang Shishun. He has short hair. He's of medium build.
He likes reading all kinds of books， writing notes and keeping doing exercises every day. He di slikes
smoking，drinking wine and talking idly.
He's outgoing and energetic. He can make a speech for four hours.
He's very patient and is never angry with his students. He has a positive way of looking at his stu dents who have difficulties learning. He said，“I'm happy to have such students. It's these students that give，chance to show my ability to educate them.”I'm not good at learning at the beginning. By and by ，I make great progress because he keeps encouraging me and never say something bad to me. 【解析】：此题是介绍人物的命题作文。1、审题立意：记叙文、描写人物、用第三人称、一般现在时。2、构思列纲：点名主题“英语老师是我最喜欢的老师”；根据题意内容对英语老师进行进一步的描写；
【2013山东泰安】第三节写作（共1题，满分20分）
微笑是一种态度。请你以“Learn to Smile”为题，为你校《英语园地》写一篇稿件。内容要点包括： 1.学会对自己微笑； 2.学会对他人微笑； 3.微笑是一种语言。注意：
1.紧扣主题，表述全面、准确、流畅；
2.词数：80－100；
3.文章中不要出现真实姓名和校名。
参考词汇：态度attitude;自信心confidence Learn to Smile
范文：
Smile is an attitude for life. We should face everything with smile.
In our life, there may be something unpleasant. For example, you fail in an exam; or you are
misunderstood by your friends. These things may make you feel bad. Then what will you do? Why not learn to smile? Smile to yourself can bring back your confidence and beat the unhappy feelings. Sometimes, the greatest enemy is yourself. Most important of all, smiling benefits your health.
We should also learn to smile to others, and it will help us to get closer to other people. Therefore , smile is the most widely understood language.
Let’s learn to smile, I believe our world will be more wonderful and our life will be happier and happier
【2013山东聊城】书面表达（共A 和B 两题，A 题 10 分，B 题15分，满分25分）
在父亲节（6月16日）来临之际，请你根据下表提供的信息，写一篇以“My father”为题的英语作文，介绍其大体情况，并谈谈你对“父亲”的评价。年龄 40岁
外貌又高又胖，短头发，大眼睛
职业（数学）教师（工作努力，上课活泼生动，深受学生喜爱）性格诚实，善良爱好打乒乓球
注意：
1.字数：80左右。
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 My father
_____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ __________
One possible version: My father
My father is a 40-year-old math teacher. He is tall and fat with short hair and big eyes. He always works
hard. His classes are lively and interesting and deeply loved by his students. My father is an honest and
kind man. He often helps other children and me with our maths. My father?s hobby is playing table tennis. We often play table tennis together at the weekends.
My father is not only a good father but also a good friend. I have learned a lot from him. I love my father very much.
写作（2013山东潍坊）
当前我国政府正致力于建设“节约型”社会，倡导节约，抵制浪费。作为学生我们也能做些力所能及的事情，如步行或骑自行车上学;随手关水、断电;减少物品的使用和废旧物品的回收、再利用等。请根据要求和提示完成主题为How to Save的海报，号召更多的人，加人到“节约”的行动中来。开头、结尾已给出，不什人总词数。要求:1.50词左右2.文中不要出现作者本人的真实信息。
提示:tap(水龙头), uneaten food/leftovers(剩余饭菜)
How to Save
Our government is aiming to build an “economiz ed society”. I think it is every citizen's duty to work hard to achieve this goal.
One possible version:
Our government is aiming to build an “economized society” . I think it is every citizen’s duty to work hard to achieve the goal. As students, we still can do something to help.
First, don’t waste things. We’d better go to school on food or ride a bike instead of taking a car or a bus. Turn off the lights as soon as we leave the classroom. Remember to turn off the tap at once after washing our hands. When we go out to eat in an restaurant, ask for smaller dishes an d take leftover home. Before we buy something new, think whether it is necessary.
Next, use things as long as possible. When we buy things, make sure they last a long time. Don’t use a paper cup or a paper bag. It’s better to use a china cup or a lunch box. Because you can use them again.
Finally, collect what can be recycled in your classroom or in your neighbourhood and sell
them. You should also buy things from recycled material.
In a word, I think , one thing we should keep in mind no matter what a small effort we can
make, it do make a difference.
【2013山东滨州】书面表达（共1题，计15分）
请你根据下表中所提供的信息以“Learn to express thanks”为题，用英语写一篇演讲稿。
背景
1.认为上中学时吃好穿好是应该的；
2.走向社会后没有感恩意识。
学会感恩
1.感谢社会提供良好的教育机会；
2.感谢父母供养自己上学；
3.感谢老师传授知识；
4.感谢朋友的支持与鼓励。
参考词汇：enter society 进入社会， sense of thanks 感恩意识， behavior 行为要求：1.短文应包括所提供的所有内容，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译；
2.演讲稿中不得出现真实的人名、地名及能够透露你个人身份的信息；
3.词数：80词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Good morning, boys and girls!
The topic of my speech today is “Learn to express thanks”.__________________________ _
____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _
In the future, we should never forget our society, parents, teachers and so on. At present, we should study harder in order to make our world more beautiful. Thank you for your listening! 【答案】
Good morning, boys and girls!
The topic of my speech today is “Learn to express thanks”. We find some students want to eat well and wear fashionable clothes at school. When they leave school and enter society, they don’t show any sense of thanks.
I think this behavior is not correct. As students, we should learn to express thanks. The society offers us a chance to receive good education. And our parents also support us to go to school.
Our teachers teach us much knowledge, so we should thank them. We should also thank our friends because they give us courage and support.
In the future, we should never forget our society, parents, teachers and so on. At present, we should study harder in order to make our world more beautiful.
Thank you for your listening!
【2013山东烟台】八、书面表达（15分）
当前，全市各校正开展“好书伴我成长”活动。请你根据活动主题并结合表格中所给的信息，以“Growing up with good books”为题，用英语写一篇100-120词的倡议书，向学校同学发出倡议。读书的益处获取知识，增长见识，使人快乐。
存在的现象听音乐，看电视，上网，占用了大部分业余时间。发出倡议
多读书，读经典好书。向世界传播中国传统文化。让读书成为我们生活的一部分。
要求：
1.倡议书应包括所有要点；
2.倡议书的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Growing up with good books My dear friends,
Reading is very important.
【写作思路】（一）审题
本篇文章需要考生根据表格所提供的信息，写一篇有关读书的倡议书。人称为第一人称。时态以一般现在时态为主。体裁为应用文，可稍加议论。（二）列举写作要点
1. 读书的益处：读书能获得知识，增长见识，使人快乐；
2. 学生存在的现象：听音乐，看电视，上网，占用了大部分的业余时间；
3. 针对存在的现象发出倡议：多读书，读经典好书，向全世界传播中国传统文化；让读书成为生活的一部分。
（三）列举重点短语和句型
get knowledge 得到知识；not only…but also…不但……而且……；open our minds 增长见识；make us clever and
happier使我们更聪明、更快乐；listen to music听音乐；watch TV看电视；go on to the line 上网；play games玩游戏；read more books 多读书；spread culture传递文化； a part of life 生活的一部分。【范文】
One possible version: Growing up with good books My dear friends,
Reading is very important. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds, but also make us cleverer and happier. Our study can be improved if we read more and good books. The more we read, the more we will learn, and the brighter our future will become. However, some students spend much time in listening to music, watching TV or going on line to play games. It takes much of their spare time. So I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books, especially read classics so that we can spread our Chinese traditional culture to the world.
Let’s start reading now. And let it become a part of our life!
【2013山东济宁】七、书面表达（共1小题，计15分）
假设你是第九中学学生会主席（chair of the Students’ Union)李华。你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛（English Speech Contest),想邀请你校附近某国际学校的外籍教师 Smith女士来做评委（judge)。请参照以下比赛通知，用英语给她写一封100词左右的邀请函（invitation)。开头和结束语已给出，不计人总词数。
English Speech Contest
Topic : Man and Nature Time ：3:00—5:00 pm. June 16 Place : Room 502
Number of Contestants (选手) ：20 students Tel. ：4487665
Welcome!
要求：需包含以下要点： 1. 个人简介(姓名、职务等）； 2. 比赛通知中的所有信息； 3. 对被邀请人提出希望。 Dear Ms. Smith,
____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _______I am looking forward to your reply.
With best wishes, Li Hua 【范文】 Dear Ms. Smith,
I’m Lihua- chair of the Students’ Union at No. 9 Middle School. Our school is going to hold a n English Speech Contest in Room 502 at 3:00~5:00 pm. on June 16. You know we can’t live
without the nature. So the topic of the English Speech Contest is Man and Nature. At that time , 20 students will take part in the English Speech Contest and give us the most wonderful performance. In order to make it more successful, we are eager to see you on that day as the judge of the English Speech Contest. I think you will enjoy it. Do say you’ll come!
I am looking forward to your reply. With best wishes,
Li Hua
【2013山东德州】写作（共1题，计15分）
下面是大明写给他的朋友Tom的信，信中描述了他的烦恼。请你以他的朋友Tom的身份，给他写一封80词左右的回信，在信中指出他的问题并给他提出建议。信的开头已给
出，不计入总词数。 Dear Tom,
My classmate, Lucy, bought a new pen. I liked it very much, so I used it without her
permission. Unluckily, I broke it. Then I put it back secretly. Now she finds out the truth and is very angry with me. I don’t know what to do. Can you help me?
Yours, Daming Dear Daming,
I know your problem._________________________________________________________ _ _____________________________________________________________________________ _ ____________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Tom
【答案】（一）One possible version: Dear Daming,
I know your problem. You’ve made two mistakes. First, you used your classmate’s pen without her permission. Second, when you broke the pen, you didn’t tell her the truth. Yes, you must tell her immediately. If you tell her the truth, perhaps she’ll be angry with you, but at least you’ll prove you are honest.
Then I think you should offer to pay. You can use your pocket money to buy a new pen for her. She will realize that you’re truly sorry.
I hope the advice can help you. I’m sure you will make up with her soon. Yours, Tom.
【2013山东威海】八、书面表达（共1小题，计15分）
81.美国朋友Smith先生五年前参观过你的学校，他最近来信希望了解你校的现况。假设你是李华，请参照下面图表所提供的信息，给他写一封回信，介绍你校的变化。
注意：回信必须包括图表的主要内容，可以适当发挥，使内容连贯；词数100左右。信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入词数。请将答案填写在答题卡指定的位置。总体面貌校园变化很大，新建多座大楼，呈现新貌。
具体陈述
图书馆和和实验楼并排，位于教学楼后面；图书馆藏书丰富，实验设备齐全 2010年建成扩建操场，是原来的两倍大去年建成拟建餐厅，在南面，操场对面
明年建校貌校园内外种满鲜花、树木具体描述
参考范文： Dear Mr. Smith,
I was very happy to receive your letter informing me that you want to know some changes about our school. And I’m glad to tell you. When you visited our school five years ago, its facilities were quite simple and crude. But now it has changes a lot. In general, there are lots of trees planted around our school. The library and the lab building were built in 2010. They both lie the behind of the teaching building. There are many books in the library and the lab
facilities are all in readiness（齐全的）. Last year, a new playground was built, it is two times as large as the original. Next year, we will build a dinning hall, it will lie in the south of our school, across from the playground. The students are satisfied with the new changes. We hope that you can visit us again if possible. Best wishes.
Yours, Li Hua
【2013山东临沂】九、书面表达（计15分）
为落实临沂市教育局关于加强英语听说教学的工作要求，你校开办了English Club，俱乐部正在招募会员。假如你是李林，请结合海报内容和所给提示，写一封英文信。申请加入该俱乐部。要求：1.信须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。
2.信中不要涉及真实的人名和校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。
3.词数：不少于60词，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
English Club
Are you good at English listening and speaking?
Now your chance!
Activities: Watch English movies; Learn English songs;
Hold English talent shows
Time: Every Tuesday, Thursday 6:30-8:00 pm
Come on and join us!
Please writer to Miss Gao!
提示：1. Why do you want to join the English Chub?
2. Which activity do you like best in the club?
3. What else do you want to do in the club? Dear Miss Gao,
I’m Li Lin, I’m glad to see the poster in our school.
I’m looking forward to your answer soon.
【答案】
Dear Miss Gao,
I’m Li Lin, I’m glad to see the poster in our school. I want to join the English Club because I li ke English very much. But I am not good at listening and speaking. I hope to have more chances to improve them.
There are many helpful actives in the club, but watching English movies is my favorite. It can not only make me relaxed, but also improve my listening skills.
Although there are many actives here, I still want more. Can you provide us with some Englis h books？Can you give us an opportunity to talk to the foreigners?
I’m looking forward to your answer soon.
【2013山东莱芜】
假如你叫李华，你的美国网友Peter打篮球时意外受伤，请你用英文给他发一封电子邮件。主要内容包括：1. 询问病情；2. 介绍一下你近期学校活动及学习情况；3. 表达祝愿。注意:
1. 字数控制在80-100词左右；
2. 不能出现真实的校名和姓名；
3. 开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Peter,
How’s it going? I’m sorry to hear that. ___________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Peter,
How's it going? I'm sorry to hear that you got injured while playing basketball. You should have a good rest at home. And you'd better take care of yourself when you do sports. Everything goes well here! I enjoy great changes in my school. On the one hand, the teachers make their teaching styles colorful. In my science class, my teacher always encourages us to think,
and cultivates our ability to study independently. On the other hand, we have plenty of time
to try what we want to do. We had our School Day last week. There arc different kinds of activities, such as speech contest, talent show, volunteering.... I took part in the English speech contest, and I won the first prize. I will send you some photos about my School Day if you like. Hope you'll get better , and be back to your school as soon as possible. Best wishes!
Yours, Li Hua
2013 日照书面表达（共1题，计10分）
假如你是Tom，上周日下午和朋友在小区(neighborhood)空地踢球，请根据图片提示写一篇90词左右的日记。
要求：1. 根据前三幅图片所描述的情景，发挥想象，写出事情的结局；
2. 内容合乎情理，故事完整；
3. 文中不要出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
4. 文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Wednesday, June 12, Sunny
Last Sunday afternoon，some of my best friends and I went to play football in the open ground inside our neighborhood. We really had a good time! Suddenly I kicked the ball so hard that it flew at a window. It was broken! An angry woman looked out of a window, shouting at us. We were all too frightened! She asked who did that. I went up and said sorry to her. The woman told us not to play football around next time. A bad day!
Wednesday, June 12, Sunny
【2013山东济南】XI. 书面表达（10分）
根据所给图画，用英语写一篇约80词的短文。要求完整叙述图画内容。参考词汇：blind adj. 盲的，瞎的 stick n. 拐杖
【答案】
Last weekend Xiaoming went to the park with his mother and sister. It was sunny and there were some people and traffics in it. They played very happily. When they wanted to have taken
photos, Xiaoming saw an old blind man far from them, he was walking with a sick alone. He
thought it was very dangers for the old man. So Xiaoming ran quickly to the man and help
the man walk on by catching the stick. When the blind man’s daughter found him, she thanke d Xiaoming and praised him. At this moment, the photographer took the precious photo.
2013东营八、书面表达（共１题，计20分）
某英文报以An Unforgettable Day (《难忘的一天》) 为题，面向中学生开展征文活动，请你写一篇短文参加此次活动。
内容包括：
1、哪一天让你感到难忘；
2、什么事（开心的、伤心的或是有特别意义的，……）让你感到那天难忘；
3、那一天你经历了什么；
4、那天的经历对你有什么影响或者你有什么感受。要求： 1、80-100 词；
2、文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。
八、书面表达 A possible version:
An Unforgettable Day
I’ll never forget June 11th, 2012.
It was a sunny day. On the way to school, my friend did something rude to me. It made me sad. What’s worse, I got a “C” in my favorite subject.
After school, I went home unhappily. It was dark in the room. Suddenly the lights were on,
and I heard the song “Happy birthday”. I was surprised to see many people and a big cake. “Oh,it’s my birthday.” I was so excited and happy. It was my first time to have a birthday
party. I’ll never forget that day.
(二) 评分说明：
要求考生用适当的时态、语态、句式和词语，完整准确地表述所提示的内容，书写工整。本题共20分，分四档评分：
１、短文通顺完整，表达清楚, 语言基本无误，17－20分；
２、短文较通顺完整，表达基本清楚，语言有少量错误，12－16分；
３、能写明基本要点，短文不够通顺完整，语言有较多错误，但尚能达意，6－11分；４、仅能写明部分要点，短文不完整，语言错误多，影响意思表达，0－5分。
【2013山东淄博】十、书面表达(满分15分) 请务必将短文写在答题卡的相应位置!
某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为How to keep good relationship with parents的征文活动。
请你根据以下要点，写一篇100词左右的英语短文参加此次活动:
1.父母规矩太多、过于强调学习成绩、不理解自己等问题;
2. 你对这些问题的看法;
3. 你与父母保待良好关系的做法。
【答案】How to keep good relationship with parents
In my opinion, I have two many rules at home. My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at nights. They don't allow me to choose my own clothes, either. And they pay too much attention to my exam results. I think my parents don't quite understand me. However, I try my best to understand them. Although they don't allow me to make my own decisions and give me too much pressure I know that it is because they really love me and
want me to have a bright future.
In order to keep good relationship with my parents, I study hard, listen to them, talk to them as friends, tell them my troubles, and help them do more housework.
2012淄博中考书面表达（共1题，计15分）
请务必将短文写在答题卡的相应位置！
下面是同学们对李明英语学习情况的评价。请根据列表所示，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文，评价李明的英语学习。
书面表达（共1题，计15分）
根据内容要点、语言表达和卷面书写情况分档次评分：
1、优秀12—15分内容要点齐全，语言准确，行文连贯，表达清楚。句式富于变化，
词句优美。卷面整洁，字迹清楚、规范。
2、较好8—11分内容要点基本齐全，语言基本准确，行文基本连贯，表达基本清
楚，
词汇、语法错误不多。卷面较整洁，字迹清楚。
3、一般4—7分写出部分要点，语言表达错误较多，但尚能达意。卷面较潦草凌
乱，
字迹欠规范。
4、较差0—3分内容要点严重不足，语言表达错误很多，语句支离破碎，很难看
出要
求表达的意思。卷面脏乱，字迹难以辨认。
参考答案：
This term, Li Ming is more interested in English. In class, he listens to the teacher carefully, speaks bravely, and asks more questions. In group work, he takes
an active part in discussions and often changes ideas with us.
To improve English, he practices a lot in listening, speaking and reading. He also learns English by watching English movies, listening to English songs, and surfing
the Internet.
Because of his hard work，Li Ming is now very good at both listening and speaking. He has made great progress in writing too, but he is still weak in grammar
and often makes spelling mistakes.
(2011年淄博)十、书面表达（共1小题，计15分）
保持健康的体魄，拥有健康的生活方式对于我们每个人来说都是重要的。
请以How to keep fit为题，从健康饮食、体育锻炼和养成良好的生活习惯等方面，写一篇100词左右的短文。要求内容全面，表达正确、流畅。
How to keep fit
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书面表达范文：
As we know, it is important for us to keep healthy and have a healthy life.How to keep fit? First, we should healthy food, such as apples,vegetables and so on.We mustn’t eat junk food, which is bad for our health. Second, to do sports is necessary for us. We can run and play ball games. Last, it is useful for us to have a good living habbit. We should go to bed early and get up early. We must wash our hands before meals. What’s more, we should brush our teeth twice a day.
2010淄博书面表达(共1小题,计15分)
We are all middle school students. Most of us have been learning English for about seven year s. How can we learn and improve our English ？
Please write a passage (about 100 -words) and tell us your ideas.
How to improve our English
2010年山东省淄博市中考英语试题参考答案书面表达
How to improve our English
English is an important language and it is widely used in the world. So we should learn
English hard. But how can we learn English well? Here are my ideas.
We should listen to English more often. It can help us with our listening. It's helpful to watch English programs on TV. Try to speak English as much as possible. Read English aloud every
morning and talk with our classmates in English. That can improve our spoken English. We
should read more English books and newspapers. We should keep a diary in English. Both reading and writing are good ways to improve our English.
淄博市2009年中等学校招生考试
十、书面表达（共1题，计15分）
中考体育测试刚刚结束，你考的怎样？
写一篇100 词左右的日记，记述你参加体育测试的经历与感受。
要求：1. 内容充实，语言准确，流畅。
2. 文章中不得涉及真实姓名及学校名称。
May 29，2009 Friday Fine
书面表达
根据内容要点、语言表达和卷面书写情况分档次评分：
1、优秀12—15分。内容要点齐全，语言准确，行文连贯，表达清楚。句式富于变化，词句优美。卷面整洁，字迹清楚、规范。
2、较好8—11分。内容要点基本齐全，语言基本准确，行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚。词汇、语法错误不多。卷面较整洁，字迹清楚。
3、一般4—7分。写出部分要点，语言表达错误较多，但尚能达意。卷面较潦草凌乱，字迹欠规范。
4、较差0—3分。内容要点严重不足，语言表达错误很多，语句支离破碎，很难看出要求表达的意思。卷面脏乱，字迹难以辨认
参考答案
Today I finished my PE test. As a boy I had two parts. One is the long jump, and the other is the 1000m race. I did better in the 1000m race. It took me 5 minutes and 20 seconds. But I didn’t do well in the long jump. I only jumped 4.5 meters. I love sports. I often play football and basketball in my out-of-class activities. So I think I am pretty fit. This time the PE test is part of the Senior High School entrance test. Most of us are serious about it.
2008淄博十、书面表达（共1题，计15分）
阅读下列新闻：
中央电视台播报：在成都崇州怀远镇中心学校有一位英语老师，他叫吴忠红。12号下午发生地震时，正在上课的吴忠红立刻指挥楼里12个班的700多名学生快速撤离。当听说有两名学生掉队，他又义无反顾地从三楼返回四楼，就在这个时候教学楼整体垮塌，掩埋了吴忠红和两名学生。四层教学楼一片废墟，16岁的高中生吴楠还在守望着废墟里的父亲……
听了这则报道之后，你一定会深受感动。请给吴忠红的家人写一封信，表述一下你的心情。信的内容不要涉及你的学校和姓名。词数：80—100。
书面表达（共1题，计15分）参考答案：
Dear Wu Nan:
I am deeply sorry to hear the sad news that your dear father has gone in the earthquake. At
that time the building was going to collapse, he didn’t care about himself and returned upstairs trying to rescue his students. How selfless and fearless he is!
There can be no words to comfort you. But at least we tell you that you are in our hearts.
Hold up your head high, throw out your chest and wipe your eyes! We’ll never give up!
Please let me know what I can do for you.
Sincerely yours
Daming