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满分高考作文素材(精选6篇)满分高考作文素材（精选篇1）1、如果一个人不知道他要驶向何方，那么任何风都不是顺风。
——塞涅卡2、真正的闲暇并不是说什么事也不做，而是能够自由地做自己感兴趣的事。
——萧伯纳3、每一个人降生到这个世界上来，一定有一个对于他最合宜的位置。
——周国平4、人的生命就是不断地适应再适应。
——哈代5、人本过客来无处，休说故里在何方，随遇而安无不可，人间到处有花香。
——林语堂满分高考作文素材（精选篇2）一个人在荒原上行走，遇到了老虎，在逃亡的过程中，又失足掉进了悬崖。
幸运的是在坠崖的过程中，他抓住了一根救命的枯藤。
但崖上的老虎迟迟不肯离开，愤怒地张开血盆大口冲他吼叫，崖底一望无际，更为糟糕的是，此时不知从何而来的老鼠正一口一口地啃噬枯藤……就在这时，他惊奇地发现枯藤旁边有一只鲜艳的草莓，于是他一手抓藤，一手摘下草莓，美滋滋地吃了起来……假如你现在也正处在困境之中，整日的郁郁寡欢，你一定要调整自己的心态，你一样会找到那只快乐的草莓。
有人说人一生下来就哭，说明人来到世上是要受苦受难的。
此言不无道理，但未免有些悲观。
尽管人生苦多，但我们仍应苦中作乐，寻找乐趣。
请记住任何时候都不能跟自己过不去，给自己找别扭。
要善于调适自己的心情，要想到“阳光总在风雨后，乌云过后是晴空”，遭受挫折、遇到困难时，要相信“不经历风雨，怎么见彩虹”!满分高考作文素材（精选篇3）布洛克原是家族大公司的总经理，在他执掌公司几年后，意识到失去了太多与家人相处的时间，于是他决定放弃年薪60万美元的职位，回到亲人中间。
他说：“我不想等将来回首往事的时候，发现自己除了钱什么也没有。
”他在一个中学谋得了一个年薪只有2万美元的数学教师职位。
在一年结束之际，他收到了来自学生的贺卡，贺卡上写着一句令他骄傲的赞美：“给天下最棒的老师。
”布洛克认为他终于拥有了梦想的财富。
布洛克的选择是明智的，他认识到了金钱不是万能的，人世间还有金钱买不到的东西，那就是亲情。
高考语文作文优秀素材十份1.成功的人生才是完美的人生。
成功的人生是努力的人生，是无任何遗憾的人生，是目标明确并为之奋斗的人生，是会把握机遇的人生。
哈佛大学对于人生成功曾有个经典的结论，“成功=目标，其他都是这句话的注解”。
做功不同，人生也体现出了不同的意义。
2.过于追求完美也是“金无足赤，人无完人”一样，世界就是因为有不完美的事物才让我们去想方设法追求完美。
3.面对挫折，我们不应该有畏惧的心理，而应该心不烦，意不乱地去解开过去，面对现实，创造未来。
4.我们不是为自己而生，我们的国家赋予我们重任，把我们培养成人才，我们应胸怀祖国去创造更加美好的明天。
5.有人认为美只存在于花枝草叶之中，每个人在经历千辛万苦的劳作之后都希望获得成果，那才是他们认为的最美的事物。
6.虽然你现在还只是一株稚嫩的幼苗。
然而只要坚韧不拔，终会生根发芽；虽然你现在只是涓涓细流，然而只要锲而不舍，终会拥抱大海；虽然你现在只是一只雏鹰，然而只要心存高远，跌几个跟头之后，终会占有蓝天。
7.冰心说：“成功的花儿，人们只惊羡它现时的美丽。
当初它的芽儿浸透了奋斗的泪水，洒遍了牺牲的细雨。
”如果遭遇挫折，仍能以奋斗的英姿与之对抗，那么这样的人生是辉煌的。
8.当苏武被流放到北海时，北海的羊群咩咩地叫着，似在欢迎这位坚贞不屈的大汉臣子。
这十几年的痛苦如果可以当作是一次挫折，那么这次挫折无疑是痛苦的，可是这位放羊老人从未曾放弃过自己的信念，于是十几年后，大汉的丹青上书写下了民族不屈的坚贞气节。
9.昭君出走大漠，丝绸之路上又多了一串驼铃的丁冬声，“千载琵琶作胡语”分明昭君心中的悲怨。
可是正是昭君自己选择了出塞和亲，“单于上马带胡钩，预饮烟光不见人”，不失为一种选择。
选择了和亲却换来了大汉近半个世纪的平和；选择了大国的利益却选择了香消玉殒。
10.“老当益壮宁移白首之心；穷且益坚不坠青云之志。
”初唐四杰之一的王勃，可谓：“时运不济命途多舛”，然而直面挫折他却能达人知命安然若素。
高考必备作文素材(精选6篇)高考必备作文素材【篇1】善良是发自心底的纯朴，像从石缝里汩汨流出的山泉，清澈，纯净，不带一点杂质，甚至没有一丝味道。
它不存任何企图，自然而然地产生着蔓延着，濡润着身边的一切，并不顾及在它要去的前方是浩瀚的大海还是清幽的深潭。
善良无私，在给予善良的时候不会想到回报和好处;善良无价，没有东西可以评估善良当值几许;善良不能彩排，自然流露，没有理由，刻意做出的只能是为满足私欲的表演;善良不分时间地点，该来就来，如果善良能够因时因地发生和停止，那善良已经被理性穿上了伪装的外衣。
有这样一段话：“凡是一个人在自己内心感到紧紧握住了最珍贵的东西，凡是一个人情愿为之受苦甚至牺牲生命的东西，就是一个人的信仰。
它也许不是宗教，但没有它，别的就更不值得”。
善良不是宗教，但是，善良应该比宗教更本源、更自然、更博大。
善良的心有时看起来过于柔软，但是，如果哪一天人心不再柔软，不再温暖，不再富有纯洁，那与河滩里的卵石又有什么分别?高考必备作文素材【篇2】管仲评价鲍叔牙春秋时，齐国的大臣鲍叔牙结识了管仲，两人成了好朋友。
之后，鲍叔牙将管仲推荐给了齐桓公，使管仲做了齐国的宰相。
有一次，管仲得了重病，齐桓公去看他，握着他的手问：“你的病越来越严重了，万一你一病不起，谁能够替我管理国家呢?”管仲叹了口气说：“可惜宁戚早死了。
”齐桓公说：“我想任用鲍叔牙，你看怎么样?”鲍叔牙是元老重臣，又是管仲的朋友、大恩人，不料管仲说：“鲍叔牙虽说是个道德高尚的人，但是您不能让他做宰相，管理国政。
因为他对别人的过错老是记在心理。
这谁受得了?做相的人，度量不大一些怎么行呢?”事后，有奸诈小人到鲍叔牙面前去挑拨。
鲍叔牙听了哈哈大笑，竖起大拇指说：“管仲忠于国家，不讲私人交情，这正是我推荐他的缘故啊!”高考必备作文素材【篇3】人类历史发展到近现代，经济飞跃发展，社会空前进步人类发展史上的又一次飞跃。
这要归功于四次工业革命：第一，二次主要是以蒸汽机、纺织、冶炼技术的工业进步;第三次工业革命是在20世纪初，主要是化学、电力和内燃机技术的发展;当代依靠电子、信息等新兴技术发明兴起，信息产业推动了第四次工业进步。
高考语文高分作文素材高考语文高分作文素材一、现代诗文01、让我怎样感谢你/当我走向你的时候/我原想收获一缕春风/你却给了我整个春天(《感谢》汪国真)02、愿所有的幸福都追随着你/仰首是春，俯首是秋/愿所有的快乐都陪伴着你/月圆是画，月缺是诗(《旅行》汪国真)03、我不去想是否能够成功/既然选择了远方/便只顾风雨兼程//我不去想身后会不会袭来寒风冷雨/既然目标是地平线/留给世界的只能是背影《热爱生命》汪国真)04、没有比脚更长的路/没有比人更高的山(《山高路远》汪国真)05、如果你是鱼/不要迷恋天空/如果你是鸟/不要痴情海洋(《选择》汪国真)06、如果你因失去了太阳而流泪，那么你也将失去群星了(《飞鸟集》泰戈尔)07、鸟儿愿为一朵云/云儿愿为一只鸟(《飞鸟集》泰戈尔)08、不要因为你自己没有胃口而去责备你的食物(《飞鸟集》泰戈尔)09、小草呀，你的足步虽小，但是你拥有你足下的土地(《飞鸟集》泰戈尔)10、使生如夏花之绚烂，死如秋叶之静美(《飞鸟集》泰戈尔)11、不是槌的打击，乃是水的载歌载舞，使鹅卵石臻于完美(《飞鸟集》泰戈尔)12、老是把自己当作珍珠/就时时有被埋没的痛苦/把自己当作泥土吧/让众人把你踩成一条道路(鲁藜《泥土》)13、卑鄙是卑鄙者的通行证，高尚是高尚者的墓志铭(北岛《回答》)14、成功的花/人们只惊慕她现时的明艳/然而当初她的芽儿/浸透了奋斗的泪泉/洒遍了牺牲的血雨(同上)15、附着在大地上/你是土壤/沉浮在空间里/你是尘埃。
(林希《土》)16、黑夜给了我黑色的眼睛/我却用它寻找光明(顾城《一代人》)高考语文高分作文素材二、古代哲理名句集01、古之成大事业者，不惟有超世之才，亦有坚韧不拔之志!(苏轼)02、古今来许多世家，无非积德;天地间第一人品，还是读书。
03、宠辱不惊，闲看庭前花开花落;去留无意，漫随天外云卷云舒。
(《菜根谭》)04、水至清则无鱼，人至清则无徒。
(韩非子)05、古今之成大事业、大学问者，必经过三种之境界：“昨夜西风凋碧树。
中高考满分万能作文素材{建议收藏} 一、杨绛01“我和谁都不争，和谁争我都不屑。
”这是杨绛先生翻译的英国诗人蓝德的一句话，也是她一生的人生哲学。
也正是有着“不争哲学”，她才能把不平常的岁月当成平常的日子，始终以宁静的心情对待这忙碌甚至庸俗的世界。
理解了这一点，我们也就能理解，为什么杨绛会留下这么多文字，会有这么多虔诚的读者，会被人由衷地称为先生。
素材运用角度：名利、品质、个性02一百年，能守住自己的小天地，守住平静的生活并不容易，但是，杨绛先生做到了。
在百岁的时候，她说：“我没有‘登泰山而小天下’之感，只在自己的小天地里过着平静的生活。
”我们终能明白，杨绛先生为何爱读东坡“万人如海一身藏”之句，也终能明白，为何杨绛先生始终能有自己的一方天地，永远是那么的从容不迫。
素材运用角度：独处、个性、平静、雅致二、钱学森01钱学森是个有杰出贡献的人，也是个有性格的人。
他一生做人都坚持四条原则：第一，不题词；第二，不为人写序；第三，不出席应景活动；第四，不接受媒体采访。
钱学森不给任何人题词，不留美名，更不留骂名，平平淡淡，活得坦然。
不为人写序，看似有些不近人情，但钱学森知道，这样的“借名”者，多是拉大旗作虎皮，不想在学术研究上坐“冷板凳”，只急着要一举成名。
钱学森成就卓著，却从不接受各种媒体的采访，他淡泊名利是出了名的。
素材运用角度：淡泊名利、物质与精神、品质、个性02在上海交通大学读书时，一次考水力学，6道题全答对了，老师给了他100分。
但钱学森找到老师说：“有一个字母，不应该简写，我简写了，必须扣掉4分。
”最后，老师给他改为96分。
在国防部五院时，钱学森最初是担任院长。
不久他给聂帅写信，要求改“正”为“副”，以便专心致力于科学研究和技术攻关。
就这样，当了一时院长的钱学森，又改当副院长。
20 世纪90年代初，深圳有一位老板，要为钱学森立功德碑和塑半身像。
钱学森听说后，坚决反对：“一个还活着的人，怎能定其功德？又怎能塑像？”素材运用角度：诚实、真挚、淡泊名利三、海明威01海明威每天早晨6点半，便聚精会神地站着写作，一直写到中午12点半，通常一次写作不超过6小时，偶尔延长两小时。
高分“名人名言”写作素材，备战2023高考语文作文！【一、高分名言素材运用】01 读书与实践紧密结合。
“纸上得来终觉浅，绝知此事要躬行。
”学以致用，知行合一，读书的价值才能得到真正体现。
（学行结合）02孔子在《论语·卫灵公》中说：“工欲善其事，必先利其器。
”读书也如此。
苦读是基础，善读是关键。
要读出成效，也需利其“器”。
这里说的“器”，就是读书的方法。
从中国古代先贤的读书观中，我们可以学习善读书的智慧，找到善读书的方法，取得善读书的成效。
（学习方法）03 古人论及读书，多强调学与行相结合。
西汉哲学家扬雄提出，“读而能行为之上”。
他在《法言》中谈道：“学，行之，上也；言之，次也；教之，又其次也；咸无焉，为众人。
”扬雄认为，读书学习之后的成效，大致可分为四等：上等是在读书学习之后，能见诸行动，其次是著述立言，再其次是传道授业。
如果前面的情况都没有，那就是第四等，即普通人。
扬雄告诉我们，读书学习最重要的是见诸行动，将所学到的知识和理论，用以指导自己的实践，做到知与行的统一。
（学行结合）04《庄子·逍遥游》中说：“适千里者，三月聚粮。
”千里之行尚需3个月来聚集粮草，人生之路何止千里，自然需要更丰厚的积淀。
（积累）05在科学探索的世界，何积丰从不满足。
2007年，“可信软件基础研究”重大研究计划正式立项。
何积丰作为首席科学家投身其中，一干就是9年。
如今，项目成果逐渐应用到航空、轨道交通、电子商务等行业。
“不积跬步，无以至千里，更无以走向丰硕的人生。
”这是何积丰的人生信条。
在科学和人生的道路上，他不断进取，激励并温暖着后继者。
（积累）06中国传统中有句话叫“台上三分钟，台下十年功”，以及“板凳需坐十年冷”，都是强调积淀的重要性，任何的伟大都源自开始的默默付出。
今天华为能扛住各种打压，任正非能有底气高调接受媒体采访，都是因为过去十多年里的勤勤恳恳付出、脚踏实地做事。
（脚踏实地）07在交友这个问题上，古人说：“小人之交甘如醴。
高分作文素材摘抄好的作文离不开丰富而精彩的素材，积累素材是写作的重要环节。
以下是为大家精心整理的一些高分作文素材，希望能为大家的写作提供帮助。
一、人物素材1、钟南山钟南山，一位在医学领域奋斗了多年的勇士。
在 2003 年非典肆虐时，他挺身而出，带领团队抗击疫情。
2020 年，当新冠肺炎疫情席卷全球，84 岁高龄的他再次挂帅出征，奔赴抗疫一线。
他那句“把重症患者都送到我这里来”，展现了他的担当与勇气。
他的身影，成为了人们心中的定海神针，给予了无数人战胜疫情的信心和力量。
2、张桂梅张桂梅，一位扎根云南贫困山区 40 多年的女教师。
她创办了全国第一所全免费女子高中，帮助 1800 多名贫困山区女孩圆梦大学。
她身患多种疾病，却始终坚守在教育一线，用自己的工资、奖金资助贫困学生。
她用自己的行动诠释了“春蚕到死丝方尽，蜡炬成灰泪始干”的奉献精神。
3、袁隆平袁隆平，被誉为“杂交水稻之父”。
他一生致力于杂交水稻的研究和推广，为解决全球粮食问题做出了巨大贡献。
他不畏艰难，勇于创新，在田间地头辛勤耕耘，经过多年的努力，成功培育出高产的杂交水稻品种，让无数人免受饥饿之苦。
他的科研精神和对人类的贡献将永远被铭记。
二、名言警句1、“天行健，君子以自强不息。
”——《周易》这句话激励着人们要像天体运行一样，不断进取，奋发图强。
无论面对何种困难和挫折，都要有坚定的信念和不屈的精神，勇往直前，追求自己的目标。
2、“业精于勤，荒于嬉；行成于思，毁于随。
”——韩愈它提醒我们，学业要精湛必须勤奋努力，若贪图玩乐则会荒废；做事要成功必须深思熟虑，若随随便便则会失败。
在学习和工作中，我们要时刻保持勤奋和专注。
3、“先天下之忧而忧，后天下之乐而乐。
”——范仲淹这句名言表达了一种胸怀天下、忧国忧民的高尚情怀。
它教导我们要有大局意识，关心国家和人民的命运，把个人的利益置于国家和人民之后。
三、历史故事1、卧薪尝胆春秋时期，越王勾践被吴国打败后，忍辱负重，卧薪尝胆，立志报仇。
【高分素材】8组高频主题的作文开头＋结尾＋分论点1.标题：用才华照亮前程【开头段】韩寒曾说，照亮你前程的，是你的才华。
曾经的他，通过写作彰显了自己的才华，并红遍大江南北。
在我看来，我们也应该如此，用才华去照亮前程。
【分论段】（1）用才华照亮前程，需要我们注重内在，不为外在所扰。
（2）用才华照亮前程，需要我们相信自己，不为人生设限。
（3）用才华照亮前程，需要我们经受挫折，不为岁月所动。
【结尾段】“红灯永远不能照亮你的前程。
照亮你前程的，是你的才华。
”只有立足于内在的修炼，直面人生的困境和岁月的洗礼，我们才能用才华照亮前程，无限接近人生的梦想。
2.标题：勇担使命，不负青春【开头段】青年是祖国的未来，民族的希望，是最有活力的一代。
李大钊曾说：“吾愿青年，生于青年，死于青年，为民族谋复兴，为人类进文明。
”这才是真正的青年，勇担使命，不负青春。
【分论段】（1）勇担使命，不负青春，需要我们迎难而上，毅然奔赴，搏取光明。
（2）勇担使命，不负青春，需要我们保持年轻，超越自我，追求不凡。
（3）勇担使命，不负青春，需要我们面向未来，昂首挺立在时代潮头。
【结尾段】鲁迅曾说：“愿青年，能做事的做事，能发声的发声，有一份光，发一份热，如荧光一般，如果竟没有火炬，我就是唯一的光。
”我亦愿同学们都能勇于担当使命，不负自己独一无二的青春。
3.标题：破层峦叠嶂，迎人生黎明【开头段】“梦会开出花来的/梦会开出娇妍的花来的/去求无价的珍宝吧”戴望舒的这首诗在今天具有最切实的意义。
我们每个人都是寻梦者，即使实现梦想的路上充满着艰辛，我们也会攻破层峦叠嶂，迎接人生黎明，嗅到梦想之花绽放的芳香。
【分论段】（1）因为选择精彩，人生才能出彩。
（2）因为超越自我，才能跑得更远。
（3）因为风雨过后，自见绚丽彩虹。
【结尾段】人生如同无边无际的瀚海，即使每个人身为小小浪花，也要掀起时代的巨浪，在人生的海平面上留下永不磨灭的价值。
生命不息，奋斗不止，永远向着梦想曙光进发。
高考满分作文素材(汇编6篇)高考满分作文素材篇1曾有作家言人生不可或缺三本书：有字之书，无字之书与心灵之书，窃以为他所言极是。
人唯有在书页蹁跹于指尖，双足扎根于生活，同时不断翻阅，省察，增删，直面截然不同于外界的内心，方能成器。
杨绛曾说"现在的年轻人，读得愈少，想得愈多，造成了许多无谓的烦恼。
"可见"有字之书"是奠定个人思想的基础。
古人精挑细选出《古文观止》为蒙学教材，正是因为白纸黑字间的前人经验，智慧能为阅历尚浅的少年素绢般人生底色上绘上万紫千红。
"有字之书"贯通了个体与群体，当代与未来，让人的双脚还不够坚实时，眼光便能深邃至整个世界。
这些字中所传达的思想，描绘的历史，奔涌的情愫为我们在信息化洪流裹挟下的灵魂提供了一丝以文学对抗"存在的荒芜"的可能。
然而纸上得来总觉浅，皓首穷经迸发不出莫言对高密乡的热情，也无法让陈忠实笔下的白鹿原拥有如此悲壮的关怀。
从有字之书中得到的箴言，体悟，终究要在无字之书中得到验证与升华。
那是独一无二的社会阅历，人生轨迹所淘洗出的精粹与沉淀。
于生活的无字之书中，沉潜于书页上的人生百态被淋漓演绎，比起做一个旁观者，置身其中的感受更加鲜活也更加残酷，它让人们避免陷入"群体无意识代替个体无意识"思维吞并，让农村妇女范雨素质朴的文字也能直击人心。
无字之书鞭挞虚幻，让阅读他的人们时刻保持着清醒与冷静，同时又保有温热的关怀和悲悯：站在时代制高点上的关怀与感同身受的悲悯，这或许正是曹文轩所呼吁的儿童文学中缺乏的"无字之书"!无论有字无字，眼见耳闻，终归是要落实于心。
再多的有字之书，倘若不内化于心，不过是附庸风雅地卖弄墨水，再多的无字之书，倘若不内化于心，也只落得"海归"变"海龟"般尴尬境地。
黑塞的一句话如同黄钟大吕，"世界上让人恐惧的恰恰是通往自己的道路"。
高考考场作文高分语段汇编！（八字、十字短句）八字短句1.当为秋霜，无为槛羊。
——范晔《后汉书·广陵思王荆传》适用主题：独立自主、有主见等示例：屈原“鸷鸟不群兮”，举世皆浊而独清，不做乱世洪荒的柳絮；鲁迅“猛兽独行”，以清醒之光照亮蒙昧国人。
正如《后汉书》所言，“当为秋霜，无为槛羊”，即使个人命运被时代洪流所裹挟，也要有勇于冲破枷锁，行走自己的人生之路。
2.鸢飞戾天，鱼跃于渊。
——《诗•大雅•旱麓》适用主题：各司其职、发挥才能等示例：大风泱泱，大潮滂滂，纵观古今，无数名人雅士“鸢飞戾天，鱼跃于渊”，救巍巍中华于水深火热，扬浩然之风以民族复兴，他们身上所闪耀的英雄之光，正映照在我们每一个人身上，点亮着中华民族伟大复兴之路。
3.铅华洗尽，珠玑不御。
——陆游《秋波媚·曾散天花蕊珠宫》适用主题：返璞归真、坚守本心等示例：人生海海，不过尔尔，沧海一粟之间，陶渊明退隐官场，享“采菊东篱下”的田园之乐；嵇康退隐于竹林，远离尘世纷扰。
铅华洗尽，珠玑不御，他们以自己的方式，坚守本心，快活恣意一生。
4.直而不肆，光而不耀。
——老子《道德经》适用主题：顺其自然、淡然处之等示例：尘世光影，浮现百态，袁隆平以“种地人”自称，不艳羡功名利禄，只求“禾下乘凉梦”；北魏臣子崔浩纵然立下不世之功，却因恃才傲物、目中无人，而株连九族。
正如《道德经》所言，“直而不肆，光而不耀”，即使身披荣光，也不要过度炫耀自己，以平常心行于世间。
5.午梦千山，窗阴一箭。
——吴文英《踏莎行·润玉笼绡》适用主题：光阴易逝、珍惜时间等示例：岁月不居，时节如流，浑浑噩噩则是一瞬，脚踏实地才叫人生。
巴尔扎克“十二小时工作法”，成就文学巨匠；董遇“三余读书”，实现自我价值。
“午梦千山，窗阴一箭”，我们应在有限的时间里，实现无限的价值，创造非凡人生。
6.坠欢莫拾，酒痕在衣。
——李叔同《西湖夜游记》适用主题：活在当下等示例：苏轼一生三起三落，却坦然接受命运洗牌，在生命中的每一片不毛之地，积极盛开自己的灿烂之花。
雅思G类写作考官范文雅思G类写作考官范文是考生备考雅思G类写作考试的必备素材之一。
通过精读、细思、深悟考官范文，考生能够了解雅思G类写作考试的评分标准和策略，从而更好地应对考试。
雅思G类写作考官范文主要分为两种类型：一种是高分作文优秀范例，另一种是低分作文不足之处分析。
这两类考官范文互相补充、互相印证，能够让考生对雅思G类写作考试的评分标准和策略有更深刻的认识。
下面，本文将针对雅思G类写作考官范文作出详细解析。
一、高分作文优秀范例1. 题目：Some people say that advertising encourages usto buy things that we really don’t need. Others believe that advertisements tell us about new products that may improveour lives. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.作文结构：Part 1：引言（背景介绍和论述题目）Part 2：论点1（广告诱导消费的负面影响）Part 3：论点2（广告推广有益产品的积极作用）Part 4：个人观点和总结评分点：1. 话题覆盖全面：该作文介绍了广告带来的正面和负面影响，同时从两种角度进行了探讨，涵盖了题目所要求的全部内容。
2. 逻辑性强：该作文在一开始阐述了题目的背景和论述对象，引出了正文，随后从两个方面出发，进行了全面的分析和讨论，层次分明，逻辑性强。
3. 语言表达准确：该作文的语言表达准确流畅，尤其是在使用论据和实例说明时，能够灵活使用各种句式和语言技巧，能够让读者受到启发和感染。
4. 个人体验与思考：该作文总结了个人的观点，并指出了自己对于广告的思考和认识，充分展现了作者的思辨能力和个性特点。
2. 题目：In many countries, the tradition of eating meals together is disappearing. Why is this happening? What kind ofproblems can this trend lead to? What solutions can you suggest?作文结构：Part 1：引言（背景介绍和论述题目）Part 2：论点1（消失的二人世界）Part 3：论点2（社交媒体的挤占）Part 4：个人观点和总结评分点：1. 话题覆盖全面：该作文从人际交往、社交媒体和机会平等三个角度，深度剖析了“一起吃饭”的传统消逝所带来的后果，讨论并提出了可行的解决方案。
Simon雅思写作高分范例在雅思写作备考的时候，我们一定要多多参考别人的优秀范文，学习人家的观点，思路和表达。
下面小编给大家整理了Simon雅思写作高分范例，希望大家喜欢。
雅思Simon考官大作文范文：孩子教育方法题目：Some parentsbuy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children to do whatever they want. Is this a good way to raise children? What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older?范文：It is true that some parents are overly permissive and tend to spoil their children. In my opinion, this is not a good parenting style, and it can have a range of negative long-term consequences.If parents want to raise respectful and well-behaved children, I believe that a certain amount of discipline is necessary. Having worked with children myself, I have learnt that clear expectations and boundaries are necessary, and it is important to be able to say ‘no’to children when they misbehave or try to push against these boundaries. This is the only way to help young people to regulate their desires and develop self-control. In my view, parents who do the opposite and constantly give in to their children’s demands, are actually doing more harm than good. They are failing their children rather than being kind to them.The children of indulgent or lenient parents are likely to grow up with several negative personality traits. The first and most obvious danger is that these children will become self-centred adults who show little consideration for the feelings or needs ofothers. One consequence of such an attitude could be that these adults are unable to work successfully in teams with other colleagues. A second negative trait in such people could be impulsiveness. A person who has never lived with any boundaries is likely to lack the patience to carefully consider options before making decisions. This may lead, for example, to compulsive shopping, unwise financial decisions, or even criminal activity.In conclusion, parents should help their children to develop self-control and respect for others, and I do not believe that the permissive parenting style supports this objective.雅思Simon考官大作文范文：罪犯用亲身经历告诉青少年不要犯罪题目：Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later, and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime.To what extent do you agree or disagree?有些人进了号子之后放出来就变乖了，一些人觉得他们这伙人是最适合去给懵懂少年现身说法的。
优秀段落1、适用主题：无私奉献、青年作为、时代发展我落笔写下青春年华，记录着李白放声高歌天地四海，“大鹏一日同风超，扶摇直上九万里”；不念皇权富贵，只求快意人间，“安能摧眉折腰事权贵，使我不得开心颜”；书尽骆宾王侠骨赤丹，“宝剑思存楚,金椎许报韩”；身处官场却自有处事原则，“无人信高洁，谁为表予心”。
无数个鲜活热烈的他们，在历史的褶皱里，闪光发亮、熠熠生辉于千秋万代。
2、适用主题：逆境、希望于逆风探前路，于长夜寻光明。
尼采曾言：“内心必须混沌一片，才能诞生跳舞的星”王洛宾历经坎坷,身陷囹圖，却将压力化为动力，谱写西部民歌;巴尔扎克困于陋居，负债累累仍不懈伏案写作，留下经典巨著。
血肉之躯亦可承钢铁意志，狂风暴兩也能翩然起舞，苦难不过是强者的晋升之阶，能人的无价之宝。
3、适用主题：团结合作、积累沉淀泰山不让土壤，故能成其大；河海不择细流，故能就其深。
回望历史，中华民族就是一幅由团结合作所绘就的万里长卷:秦始皇积聚全国之力修筑万里长城,成決泱华夏一大宏伟工程；亿万中华儿女同仇敌忾、众志成城，保卫祖国大好河山…….山积而高，泽积而长，只有团结心，才能迎来更加光明美好的末来！4、适用主题：追求理想郭建梅曾是律师杂志的记者，因年轻时立下为妇女维权的志愿，辞职后成为中国第一位专职公益律师。
二十多年间，郭建梅替无数在因境中挣扎的女性找回了希望。
为弱势群体发声的道路布满荆棘，经济的危机，公众的质疑，取证的困难，对手的威胁.….这些阻碍一度让她丧气。
曾经的她，做着很野的梦，扑过很多次空。
但，时过境迁，她依然赤着脚，昂着头,为广大无助的女性奔走在烈风中，带着遭受不公的她们冲破黑暗。
5、适用主题：顺其自然、人生态度、积极乐观智者若水，与其担忧未来的事，还不如顺其自然。
苏子说“人有悲欢离合，月有阴晴圆缺”，欧阳修话“四时之景不同，而乐亦无穷也”正所谓“草木枯荣归万象，人生皆在转轮中”不必执着于一隅方寸，阔步行于人生之路，前方总会有更美的风景。
作文高分万能素材1. 亲情这个素材那可真是太万能啦！想想看，当你在外面受了委屈，回到家是不是爸爸妈妈给你温暖的怀抱，就像冬天里的暖炉！比如写《我的妈妈》，通过描述妈妈在生活中对你无微不至的照顾，那绝对能打动读者的心呐！这不就是亲情的力量嘛！2. 努力奋斗绝对是高分的保障呀！就像运动员为了夺冠，拼命训练，那汗水可不是白流的哟！写一篇《为梦想而努力》，讲讲你为了实现自己的目标，是如何一步步克服困难前进的，多么励志呀！让人看了也会充满力量呢！3. 友情是我们生活中不可或缺的一部分呀！和好朋友一起玩耍、互相支持的时光多美好呀，就如同阳光普照大地一样温暖呢！比如写《我的最佳拍档》，把和好朋友之间那些难忘的故事写出来，难道不会让人感动吗？这就是友情的魅力所在啊！4. 挫折能让我们成长，这可不是假话哦！你瞧那些成功的人，哪个不是经历了无数挫折才站起来的呀，简直就是破茧成蝶嘛！写一篇《挫折伴我成长》，讲讲你经历过的困难和你是如何战胜它的，多有意义呀！5. 梦想这个素材那是相当厉害呀！它就像夜空中最亮的星，指引着我们前进呀！比如说写《我的梦想之旅》，描述你为了追求梦想而付出的努力和坚持，是不是非常吸引人？这就是梦想的魔力哟！6. 善良的心就像金子一样闪闪发光呢！看到别人有困难去帮助他们，那感觉多棒呀！写一篇《善良的力量》，把那些你做的善良之事都写出来，肯定能触动人心呐，这不就是善良的伟大之处嘛！7. 大自然多神奇呀！那山川河流、花草树木，不比什么都美呀！写一写《我眼中的大自然》，描写一下你看到的美丽景色，多让人陶醉呀！这就是大自然的魅力呀！8. 坚持就是胜利这句话太对啦！就像爬山，坚持爬到山顶才能看到最美的风景呀！写一篇《坚持的力量》，讲讲你在某件事上是如何坚持不懈的，绝对能引起共鸣哦！这就是坚持的魔力嘛！我觉得这些素材真的很万能呀，只要运用好了，作文拿高分不是梦！。
作文高分万能素材
1. 咱就说人物事例那可是超级好用的素材呀！比如说写钟南山爷爷，在疫情期间那可是不顾自身安危，勇敢冲在抗疫一线，这多能体现担当精神呀！这不比空洞的论述强多了嘛！
2. 历史故事也很棒啊！像勾践卧薪尝胆，那是多么坚韧不拔啊，把这个用在作文里，不就能让文章更有深度了嘛！
3. 自然景观的描写有时也能加分不少呢！黄山的奇松怪石，那景色简直绝了，描写一下，文章马上变得生动起来呀，难道不是吗？
4. 科幻题材的素材也能很出彩哟！像电影《流浪地球》里人类带着地球去流浪，这想象力多丰富，绝对能让作文焕然一新！
5. 身边人的故事也别忽视呀！比如你的好朋友为了实现梦想努力奋斗，把这个真实的故事写进去，多亲切多感人呀！
6. 文学作品里的情节也是可以借鉴的嘛！《西游记》里师徒四人历经磨难取得真经，这不正好能说明坚持的意义嘛！
7. 体育明星的事迹也很有力量呀！比如谷爱凌在冬奥会上的精彩表现，那拼搏精神多值得写呀！
8. 传统文化的元素加进去也很妙啊！像京剧的扮相和唱腔，多有特色呀，能让作文充满文化底蕴呢！
9. 社会热点事件用好了也能让作文有现实意义呀！比如保护环境的话题，多呼吁一下，让文章更有社会价值呢！
我的观点就是：掌握这些万能素材，作文高分不是梦！。
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对照中文尝试自己翻译成英文，再对比核心素材找出自己的表达与素材的差距。
第二步：默写核心素材。
对照中文提示默写英文素材原文。
第三步：灵活运用。
任意选择一篇雅思真题，用已经掌握的核心素材完成该篇作文，如此练习10篇左右真题。
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1.Many branded products are manufactured by transnational companies, which usually havea higher budget to hire stars and celebrities to advertise their products. Many consumerschoose famous brands because they admire these public figures. These fans would feel closer to their idols when they use these products.2. Another important reason is perhaps the consumers’ sense of vanity, which is considered ashuman nature. Using fashionable and trendy products is a symbol of taste and social status. Some people spend a lot of money on branded clothes, shoes, cosmetics, etc. Even those who cannot really afford to buy these products also follow the trend.3.Materialism had brought about the competition of attaining material things making morecommon people scrimp on their daily lives only to afford quality products. This, however, results in extravagant expenditure in unnecessary products hence disregarding other immaterial but more significant matters. What is worse is that people may compete over material things, which may lead to waste of goods and wrong conception about consumption. People tend to pursue better material life and take everything for granted.4.To effectively help decrease the number of road accidents due to reckless drivers, therequirements before passing driving schools should be elevated. This could ensure that their students become qualified drivers when they graduate. As many accidents are caused by inexperienced drivers, this measure is expected to reduce the number of road accidents effectively.5. A lot of products are not always what they seem in advertisements since numerousadvertisements overstate the features of the product just to increase their sales. Because of this, consumers are fed misleading information that would cause them economic loss.6.Since food shortage due to the increasing population in many nations are a great threat toone’s survival and health, different fertilizers and machines are introduced that can effectively elevate the production of grains that would decrease the number of people suffering from hunger.7. However, the negative effects of fertilizers and machinery should also be noted. The firstproblem is the harm done to people’s health. Fertilizers can enhance the growth of grains, but they contain chemicals that may threaten people’s health. The high incidence of some diseases is believed to be relevant to chemicals in people’s diet. Moreover, because of the popularization of agricultural machines, many workers in the farm lose their jobs. People’s livelihood and social stability are greatly affected by the high unemployment rate that is observed in a lot of countries due to the population of agricultural machines that costs the jobs of many farm workers.8.Human beings being superior to animals would be at a higher risk when they are treateddirectly with new medicines. That is why although it seems cruel for these friendly creatures, newly developed and discovered medicines are tested on them to know if these are safe for humans to use.9. Family has a crucial role in the development of one’s characteristics. It is widely acceptedthat children see their parents as their role models and would follow what their parents do. It is also believed that parents are children’s first teachers that will teach them what is right from wrong. Also, according to researches, the traits of a person are cultivated at an early age when he stays with his parents.10.Watching the news enables people to participate in social affairs and become responsiblecitizens. For example, after watching the news, the general public can fully understand national policies and superintend the government’s performances. This would urge them to increase their efficiency and prevent corruption. When natural calamities happen, immediate broadcast of the event would encourage donations of all kinds to the victims.11.News media tend to aggrandize facts in order to attract people’s attention, notwithstandingmisleading the general public with inaccurate information. Many people discover that the facts are different from the news reports. Sometimes it is because the journalists add their personal opinions or manipulate their reports. In some cases, the news media face the pressure from the government hence the exploitation of events.12. The government’s investment in scientific research may lead to an economic burden ontaxpayers. In most countries, the government’s funds are limited. People anticipate that the government’s resources must be spent on education, medical service, transportation, etc. If the government has to pay for all research programs, it may cause great financial pressure.However, if private companies are involved in scientific research programs, this problem could be solved.13.It is justified for the government to invest in artistic projects because people need arts intheir lives to relieve people’s stress. In the modern society, many people are fatigued with the fast pace of life and want to find some time to relax. On the weekend, they may go to the concert hall or theatre, where they can amuse themselves and put behind their ordinary lives in a while. Without arts, life would be dull and boring and many people may have mental illnesses due to the high stress.14.As the director of the society, the government has the obligation to regulate people’sbehavior. If people’s behavior affects others or has a negative social impact, the government is vindicated to arbitrate. This is in accordance to the interests of the general public.15.Living in dorm schools enable students to concentrate on their study as this will providethem an excellent academic environment. There are abundant resources accessible in thelibrary, where students can consult reference books conveniently. When they have problems in their study, their teachers can help and guide them any time. They do not have to travel between home and school every day, which saves them a great deal of time and energy.16.People are free to choose their own lifestyles and activities. Adults have the ability to judgewhether the behavior is right or wrong. If the government interferes in people’s lives, they would retaliate and rebel. Although every human being has the ability to differentiate between right and wrong due to their freedom, they can protest and not follow what the government tells them to if the latter interferes with people’s lives.17.There is no denying that practical subjects are crucial for students’ future careers. Practicalskills can be applied to real jobs immediately, meeting the demand of employers. Because of the fierce competition in the job market, university students are keen on learning practical subjects. If they do not master some useful skills, they may end up having no jobs after graduation.18.Theoretical subjects provide students with basic knowledge and principles, which help themto lay the foundation for the study of practical subjects. For instance, mathematics is the compulsory course in the department of computer science.19.In addition, theoretical subjects are beneficial for the comprehensive development ofstudents. Nowadays, most students live under stress and they tend to be materialistic in their lives. Reading philosophy references enables them to reflect on their life and develop a positive outlook towards the world.20.It is widely recognized that the goal of higher education is to nurture useful members for thesociety. Well-educated people should use their knowledge and skills to serve the society and they are expected to behave well and honorably.21.For instance, university students can participate in some charities in the community. Byhelping other people, they would discover their potentials to further themselves as well as the society.22.However, in today’s society, many children are pampered by their parents at home thusmaking them self-centered. These people would not benefit the society after their graduation.Therefore, moral education should be emphasized in the university.23.If children obey the rules set by their parents and the school, they are likely to succeed intheir study.24.Due to the inability to recognize right from wrong, children needed to be properly guided todifferentiate appropriate from inappropriate behavior.25.If parents set too many rules and regulations, children would complain that their lives arecontrolled and their freedom is limited thereby promoting the rebellious tendencies, which creates communication gaps between them.26.Permanent jobs can bring a career security, which is the first factor that we should considerbecause of the stiff competition. Frequent job-hopping cannot ensure satisfactory job stability and in many cases it may lead to unemployment. Moreover, being loyal to one’s company is the best way to accumulate experience and get promotions. By contrast, those who change jobs frequently may not be trusted by employer.27.The Internet has amplified our circle of friends with the influx of social networkingwebsites. In the past, we could only socialize with people around us, but now we can easily make friends without geographical restrictions.28.On the Internet, many tools for communication are free and convenient, including micro-blog, WeChat, emails, etc. These have made communication possible in an instant and without the hassle of traveling to and from the post office.29.People rarely see their friends and relatives in real life and they only talk on the Internet. TheInternet appears to have dominated their social lives resulting in alienation. What is worse is that more teenagers prefer to socialize virtually, which affects the development of their social skills. These children may become isolated and antisocial in real life.30.Most people use nicknames to interact on the web so that they will not be responsible for thethings that they do. This results in financial fraud, association with criminals or other possible criminal acts.31.In many cities, air pollution and smoggy weather have become serious but commonproblems. They are mainly caused by using petrol for cars and burning of coal for heating.The waste gas pollutes the air and threatens people’s health. If people reduce the use of fossil fuel, air quality in cities would be improved significantly.32.The consumption of coal, oil and gas is the major source of carbon emissions resulting inglobal warming. If this trend continues, the sea level would rise, leading to disastrous consequences. To solve this problem, the mankind needs to abate the use of fossil fuels and thus reduce carbon emissions.33.Because of the fast pace of life, many people do not have time to cook and they choose to eatfast food. The fast food contains a high amount of oil and salt, and excessive consumption may lead to obesity and other diseases.34.Due to the wide use of computers in life and work, more and more people spend a lot of timesitting in front of the screen. This sedentary lifestyle, as well as lack of physical exercise, may cause many health problems, such as shortsightedness, overweight, backache, etc.35.In modern society, it is common for people to work under high stress because they want toearn more to afford the high living cost. They often work extra hours and burn the midnight oil. This lifestyle is very harmful to their health.36.As the structure of the family changes, the bond of family members seems to becomeweaker and many problems may arise. Old people need care and attention, but their adult children are too busy with their own businesses. Young couples have to confront all problems without help from their parents. For example, young couples have to take care of their babies after work and this may cause high stress in their lives.37.In the modern society, people are more aware of the importance of independence. Forexample, many young people are reluctant to live with their parents. Instead, they set up their small families and some people even choose to remain single.38.Moreover, many people get addicted to socializing on the Internet. However, in reality, theybecome isolated and do not want to communicate with other people. In a sense, the advent of Internet has contributed to their independent lifestyles.39.With the declining number of languages, the communication between nations has becomeeasier promoting the development of tourism, trade, education, etc. Language barriers have hindered international interaction, causing a lot of inconveniences and low efficiency. If people from different countries use a universal language, they do not need to worry about communication problems when travelling, studying and doing business in another country.Another advantage of fewer languages is to save the cost of translation work. Every year the expenses on translation are enormous. If fewer languages are used, the cost in this aspect would be significantly reduced.40.The obsolescence of languages has caused the decline of cultural diversity. As language isthe carrier of culture, its disappearance often means the loss of culture. For example, in some minority ethnic groups in China, people do not want to learn their local languages so they know little about the history and customs of their communities. If this trend continues, the local culture would disappear and it is a loss of humanity.41.In the construction of residential buildings, people tend to pay more attention to the safety,space and lighting of a house. By focusing on the practicality of buildings, we can reduce the construction cost and make the best use of materials and land resources. In many cities house shortage is a serious problem. People demand more practical and affordable houses and how the building looks is not very important.42.As buildings are part of the landscape of a city, their appearance should also be considered.The styles of the buildings represent the city’s image and cultural identity. Also, for those commercial buildings, the unique design and good appearance would attract morecustomers and generate more profit.43.This pattern would promote gender equality in the workplace. In some companies, theemployers are more willing to hire male employees because people believe that females tend to have more housework to do, which may affect their career development. However, it is unfair to reject females in the job market. Therefore, hiring equal number of male and female employees seems to be unnecessary, but it would help to eliminate gender discrimination in the workplace.44.It is unnecessary to employ equal number of male and female staff in all workplaces. Menand women are unique in terms of their abilities and strengths. For example, as the job of police involves a great deal of fighting and violence, men are more suitable for this job.Similarly, the job of nurse needs patience and gentleness, so there are more female nurses than male ones.45.Harsh penalties would result in the decline of road accidents because this measure wouldhave a deterrent effect on drivers. Those reckless drivers would consider the consequences of their behaviors if they know they would be punished severely. Those violators could learna lesson from the punishment and avoid making the same mistake the next time.46.However, some people argue that the outcomes of punishment are inadequate and othermeasures should also be taken. To begin with, the government should produce more public service advertisements, which can raise people’s awareness of road safety. By watching these commercials, people would realize how important it is to obey traffic laws.。
