四级作文专题讲解（二）图表类作文
一、图表作文的篇章结构
写图表作文时，常采用三段式。
第一段：图表内容：描述图表+概述图表（特点）+数据支持（常取极端值）
第二段：分析产生的原因
第三段：展望未来，提出方法或建议
二、图表作文常用表达法
概述图表
1. 正如图表中显示的
As is indicated/ revealed/ showed in the (above) graph, ......
Eg: 正如图表中显示的，中国人的饮食结构已经发生了明显的变化。
As is indicated in the above graph, dramatic changes have taken place in the diet of Chinese.
2. 根据表格中给出的数据
According to the figures given in the table, ......
根据表格中给出的数据，网上购物正变得越来越流行。
According to the figures given in the table, online shopping is gaining more popularity/ is increasingly popular.
3. 从统计数据我们可以看出
It can be seen from the statistics that...
从统计数据我们可以看出，世界人口正在持续稳定的大幅度增长。
It can be seen from the statistics that the world's population is growing steadily at a tremondous rate.
具体描述图表数据
1. From xx to xx, there is a rapid/dramatic/abrupt rise/ increase in ......
从1997年到2002年，在计算机的使用方面有了快速/巨大/急剧的增加。
From 1997 to 2002, there is a rapid/dramatic/abrupt rise/increase in the use of the computers.
2. During xx, xx has declined/ decreased/ fell/ dropped markedly.
在过去的10年里，计算机的价格明显下降了。
During the past decade, the price of computers has declined/ decreased/ fell/ dropped markedly.
3. By comparison with/ Compared withxx, this figure has increased from xx to xx. 与2年前相比，这一数字已经从不到150万增加到了将近340万。
By comparison with 2 years ago, this figure has increased from less than 1.5 million to nearly 3.4 million.
表示数据
上升：increase, rise, ascend, soar, climb up to xx
下降: decrease, fall, drop, descend, decline, reduce
波动: fluctuate, rise and fall
占: occupy， take up， account for
而: while, whereas , on the other hand
相比: by contrast, on the contrary, compared with
最高点: the highest, the top, the summit, the peak
最低点: the bottom
趋势: tendency, trend, inclination
达到顶峰: mount to
表示变化程度的词
rapid/rapidly 迅速的，飞快的，险峻的
dramatic/dramatically 戏剧性的，生动的
significant/significantly 有意义的，重大的，重要的
sharp/sharply 明显的，急剧的
steady/steadily 稳固的，坚定不移的
gradual/gradually 渐进的，逐渐的
slight/slightly 轻微的、略微地
stable/stably 稳定的
三、图表作文训练
练习一：
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Car Accidents Declining in Walton City. You should write at least 150 words following the ourline given below in Chinese:
1. 描述图表中反映的车祸发生率的变化。
2. 分析该市车祸发生率下降的原因。
3. 你对该市今年车祸发生率走势的预测。
As is indicated in the above graph, the rate of car accidents in Walton City rises and falls with the change of months.
From January to March, the number of car accidents rises from 22 to 32, and then drops to 26 in the next three months. After that, it climbs up again to 39, increasing by 50%. However, from then on, the curve descends all the way to the lowest point, 16 to be exact.
练习二：
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic How People Spend Their Holidays. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the table and the outline given below:
1、根据上表，简要描述1990年、1995年、2000年某城市人们度假方式的情况及其变化；
2、请说明发生这些变化的原因；
3、得出结论。
As is clearly shown in the table that there was a dramatic change in the way people spent their holidays between 1990 and 2000. Especially, in 1990, 63% of people spent their holidays at home, while the figure decreased considerably to 24% in 2000.
图表类写作模版
(1)模版1
According to the chart / graph / diagram / table, we clearly learn that _________. As early as _________,___________. Then,_________. Last,__________. In contrast, by _________,__________.
There are many reasons accounting for _________. Firstly,
_________.Secondly,__________. Finally,_________. As a result,_________.
As far as I am concerned,_________. For one thing,__________. For
another,________. In brief, I hold that__________.
(2)模版2
What is shown in the chart / graph / diagram / table above indicates that in recent years, more and more people pay attention to _________. The number of those who _________ has increased ________, and furthermore,____________.
There are two factors responsible for the changes. In the first place,_________. Moreover,__________. Yet, it is noticeable that __________.
From the analysis, we can safely draw the conclusion that__________. It is possible that in the future, the tendency will__________.
(3)模版3
As is shown in the chart / graph / diagram / table above, __________ has charged drastically in the past _________. While ___________,now the percentage
of__________ is __________. Meanwhile, the number of _________ has soared up to ________.
There are mainly two possible reasons contributing to the rapid changes. The first is that _________. Secondly,__________.
In my point of view, the changes have a great influence on _________. At the same time,_______. To sum up ,_________.
2014年统考真题写作参考范文
(描述图表）Shown in the bar chart is the unemployment rate in 2010 concerning different education levels. （概述图表）As indicated in the chart, the higher degree one gets,the less likely he loses his job, (数据描述）Only 1.9% doctors lost their jobs in 2010 while in sharp contrast, people with less than a high school diploma saw the highest unemployment rate, which mounted to as high as 14.9%.（取极点数据进行对比）
（原因解释）The chart reveals explicitly how important and valuable education is. With evolution of our society, the significance of physical labor reduces as machines and even robots are increasingly applied in production. Thus, those who have less intellectual abilities to contribute are out of favor. By contrast, those who possess the knowledge of science, technology as well as management, etc. are less likely to be laid off because their work cannot be easily replaced at present.
Though education is becoming more costly, think about the job market, and you will reach the conclusion that the high expenses of education is absolutely worth it.（点题）
大学英语四级考试图表作文 1、图形种类及概述法： 饼图：pie chart 直方图或柱形图：bar chart / histogram 表格图：table 趋势曲线图：line chart / curve diagram 泛指一份数据图表：a data graph/chart/diagram/illustration/table 2、图表中的数据（Data ）具体表达法 数据（Data ）在某一个时间段固定不变：fixed in time 在一系列的时间段中转变：changes over time 3. 持续变化的data 在不同情况下： 增加：increase / raise / rise / go up 减少：shrink/decrease / drop / fall … 波动：fluctuate / undulate / wave 稳定：remain stable / stabilize / level off 4. 最常用的两种表达法： 动词+副词形式（Verb+Adverb form）形容词+名词形式（Adjective+Noun form ） 5. 图表常用动词：show 、describe 、illustrate 、can be seen from、clear 、apparent 、reveal 、represent 、demonstrate 6. 图表常用名词：figure 、statistic 、number 、percentage 、proportion 7、表示数据变化的单词或者词组 rapid/rapidly 迅速的，飞快的， dramatic/dramatically 戏剧
2020年大学英语四级图表作文范文话题：可持续发展Directions： How can we meet the needs of today without diminishing the capacity of future generations to meet theirs? Sustainable development implies a broad view of human welfare, a long term perspective about social development. Write an essay which should cover： 1) describing the set of drawings below, 2) stating its main idea, and 3) giving your comment. 范文1： The images above are both meaningful and instructive： this man's hard work is not only for his own benefit, but also for the benefit of future generations. The pictures serve to remind us that the existence of our current happiness and valuable national heritage is due to the struggles of our predecessors. We, in turn, should also work hard in order to guarantee the comfort and safety of generations to come. Sustainable development has become a topic of heated debate in recent years. While it is justifiable to satisfy current demands, we cannot neglect the needs of our descendants in the process. Our children also depend on Earth's natural resources and we should not deprive them of such necessities.
作文范文之大学英语四级作文多少字
大学英语四级作文多少字 【篇一：四级考试作文要求及评分标准】 大学英语四级考试作文要求及评分 标准 《大学英语四、六级考试大纲》明确规定：大学英语四级考试写作部分考试时间为30分钟。要求应试者写出一篇不少于120个词的短文；写作命题源于日常生活和有关科技、社会文化等方面的一般常识，不涉及知识面过广、专业性太强的内容。其命题方式有：给出题目、或规定情景、或给出段首句续写、或给出关键词写短文、或看图作文。要求内容切题，文理通顺，表示正确，语篇连贯，无重大语言错误。 大学英语四级作文采用总体评 分(global scoring)方法，阅卷人员从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分表示思想，也要考虑所用语言（英语）是否能清楚而明确地表示思想。阅卷人员根据思想内容和语言表示的总体印象给出奖励分(reward scores)，而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。 现在的大学英语四级考试是710分制，作文部分占15%，满分标准分为106分。阅卷时，作文部分满分为15分，阅卷标准分为5等：2分、5分、8分、11分和14分。 具体评分标准如下： 2分――条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。
5分――基本切题，表示思想不够清楚，连贯性差，有较多的严重错误。8分――基本切题，有些地方表示思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯，语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。11分――切题，表示思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 14分――切题，表示思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯较好，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。 另有各档次标准样卷，阅卷人员参照样卷对考生的作文进行评分，首 先看考生的作文和哪个档次的样卷接近，然后上下浮动1分。字数不足应酌情扣分：110――119词：扣1分；100――109词：扣2分；90――99词：扣3分；80――89词：扣4分；70――79词：扣5分；60――69词：扣6分；50――59词：扣7分；50字以下，扣9分。 只写一段者：0-4分，只写两段者：0-9分（指规定三段的作文）。 白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表示思想的，判为0分。 孙子云：“知己知彼，百战不殆”。想在写作考试中获得成功，就必须首 先了解四级考试的要求和评分规则。下面以一篇题目为“do lucky numbers really bring good luck?”的作文为例来讲述几个最基本的道理。 【篇二：大学英语四级作文】 大学英语四级作文 1．why it is difficult ron college students to find jobs?(大学生求职为何难?)
英语四级写作万能：图表型作文精编版 MQS system office room 【MQS16H-TTMS2A-MQSS8Q8-MQSH16898】
英语四级写作万能模板：图表型作文 图表型作文 此类作文要求考生从提示性文字或图表、图画入手，解释提示性文字、图表、图画反映出的问题，提出问题的危害性或解决这一问题的紧迫性;然后对问题展开分析，提出解决问题的方案或应对措施;最后一段要求考生表明自己的态度、做法等。 a.影响分析型关键句式 The chart / graph/ table/ picture describes that the figure declines/ falls smoothly/ markedly. It indicates that…图表显示数字下降平缓，这表明…. There may be a combination of factors which contribute to / are responsible for …可能是好几个因素造成的结果。 There may be several possible reasons to this phenomenon, which will be demonstrated as follows. 可能有几个原因导致了我们下面所要阐述的现象。 The significant effects of this phenomenon are undeniable, which can be concluded as the following aspects.这一现象的重大影响是不可忽略的，可大致归结为以下几个方面 On one hand, …; On the other hand,…一方面，…;另一方面，… 现象阐释类作文框架 As is shown in the graph above, we can see clearly that great changes have taken place in … from…to… The first … years saw… The last … years witnessed … What are the reasons for the? On my standpoint, there are several as follows. First of all, (______). What is more, (______).Last but not the least,(______). The significant effects of this phenomenon are undeniable, which can be concluded as the following aspects. On one hand, …; On the other hand,… 76 words b.问题解决型关键句式 It is important that effective actions should be taken to prevent the situation. 采取有效措施防止这种情况的发生很重要。
2020年大学英语四级写作模板：图表作文框架 图表作文的框架 as is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in the table(graph/picture/pie/chart), ___作文题目的议题_____ has been on rise/ decrease (goesup/increases/drops/decreases),significantly/dramatically /steadily rising/decreasing from______ in _______ to ______ in _____. From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that ________. There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______. On the one hand, ________. On the other hand, _______ is due to the fact that ________. In addition, ________ is responsible for _______. Maybe there are some other reasons to show ________. But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing. As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______. I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.
2014年6月英语四级图表作文范文：文明风尚 Directions： Understanding is a drop of golden sun, is wellspring of life, and is a bridge between man and the soul of man. Understanding is tolerance, is a kind of se lf restraint. The world needs understanding. Write an essay which should cover: 1) describing the drawing below, 2) stating its main idea, and 3) giving your comment 范文1： The human being differs from the wild beast in that the latter is liable to have a hostile view of others and interact in an unreasonable and aggressive manner. Primitive humans might have acted in such fashion, but civilized humans should cultivate more appropriate behaviors. In the drawing above, a man carrying a large load accidentally steps on a woman's foot. Given that he gracefully apologizes, the woman both accepts his apology and assures him not to worry. The man and woman depicted interact with each other in a courteous and compassionate manner. The woman understands the man did not intentionally step on her foot, and therefore whether or not she is in pain, she does not attack or blame him. Because she is able to view the situation from his perspective, conflict is diverted. Mutual understanding such as this is a fundamental aspect of civilized society. Some people tend to think the worst of others and become angry over even the smallest of matters, regardless of how their own actions are disturbing in turn. Such intolerance only leads to more conflict. Disrespecting or mistreating people not only inflicts pain upon others, but can also harm one's own conscience and attitude. Having compassion for others is an important facet of social intercourse. Once one strives to understand the experience and perspective of another, one can avoid much trouble and conflict, thus making life more peaceful and just for all. 译文： 人类和野兽的区别就在于后者倾向于相互仇视，交往时不讲道理且好斗。原始人也许会如此行事，但文明人应该养成更得体的举止。 上图中，一个手里捧着很多东西的先生无意中踩了旁边女士的脚。在他有礼貌地道歉后，这位女士不仅接受了他的道歉，还让他不必在意。 上图中的先生和女士诠释了在与人交往时应有的礼貌和富有同情心的态度。这位女士知道他并不是有意要踩她的脚，所以无论疼不疼，她都不会攻击或是埋怨这位先生。因为她能设身处地地看待这件事情，一场冲突就避免了。像这样的相互理解是构成文明社会的基本方面。 一些人往往把别人想得特别坏，为点鸡毛蒜皮的事就大发雷霆，而全然不顾他们自己的行为是多么让别人讨厌。这种偏狭只会导致更多的冲突，对人无礼或粗暴不仅会给别人带来不愉快，而且会损害自己的道德水准和仪态。宽厚是社交中重要的一面，一旦一个人努力去理解别人的做法和看法，他就会避免许多麻烦和冲突，而这会让所有人的生活都变得更美好。
1.看图英语作文万能模板 第一段：描述图画 1、As is vividly shown in the picture( 如果两个的话用pictures，也可以用drawing，同样的如果两个的话用drawings，如果是图表则用table,两个图表则用tables) above, 图画的内容。The picture( 如果两个的话用pictures，也可以用drawing，同样的如果两个的话用drawings，如果是图表则用table,两个图表则用tables) tells ( 注意，如果是前面的图画是复数，则用 tell) us that 这个图片的大致反映的意思。 2、Recent years people in 地名(比如中国、北京、美国等等)have witnessed the fact that 描述 图片里的现象，And it is very common/usual to see that in recent years. 第二段：解释，说明和分析图片 1、The implied meaning of the picture(注意，同上进行单复数的处理) should be taken into account seriously. First/To begin with, 揭示涵义/原因/结果1，Second/What’s more, 揭示涵义/原因/结果2。Last but not least/Finally, 揭示涵义/愿意/结果3（如果有的话）。And the social problem(如果是现象的话可以用phenomenon) has arisen the great concern/care of our whole society/world/all the people. 2、There may/might be three(也可以是两个) factors which contribute to/are responsible for/explain/can make clear the 图片解释的现象。First of all, 原因1。And then the second reason is that 原因2。The last reason，I think, is that原因3。 第三段：给出自己的看法和想法以及解决问题的办法。 1、In my view/point of view (或者说as for me),We should take some measures as follows to deal with the problems followed in the picture. First, we should 具体的措施1.And then we have to /must具体的措施2.Only in these ways,can we solve the problem of 具体的问题。 2、It is true that these unique/social points can/could together remind us that we should take some measures to solve it.采取的措施1和2. Only in this way can we实现的目标！ 开始段：介绍现象的具体状况和普遍程度。 中间段：解释产生这种现象的原因或意义，并做出一定分析。 结尾段：提出建议或总结观点或表明态度。 As is vividly shown in the drawing above, 画图内容. The drawing does mirror a co mmon social phenomenon and is really thought-provoking.
图表类英语四级作文常用句型 开篇句式 1）According to the figures given in the table,+ 主题句（the world population is increasing rapidly. 2)The table(pie chart, line graph, bar graph) shows( indicates, illustrates, makes it clear) that +主题句（One’s income is closely linked to one’s age and education） 3) It can be seen from (It is clear from, It is evident from, It is illustrated from the table that + 主题句（the better one is educated , the higher his income is） 4) As the bar chart shows, the number of people below poverty line decreased dramatically during the years of 1978 to 1998. 图表式作文模板 写作模板——图表式作文 It is obvious in the graphic/table that the rate/number/amount of Y has undergone dramatic changes. It has gone up/grown/fallen/dropped considerably in recent years (as X varies). At the point of X1, Y reaches its peak value of …(多少). What is the reason for this change? Mainly there are … (多少)reasons behind the situation reflected in the graphic/table. First of all, …(第一个原因). More importantly, …(第二个原因). Most important of all, …(第三个原因). From the above discussions, we have enough reason to predict what will happen in the near future. The trend described in the graphic/table will continue for quite a long time (if necessary measures are not taken括号里的使用于那些不太好的变化趋势). 1.the table sho ws the changes in the number of……over the period from……to…… 该表格描述了在……年之……年间……数量的变化。 2.the bar chart illustrates that…… 该柱状图展示了…… 3.the graph provides some interesting data regarding…… 该图为我们提供了有关……有趣数据。 4.the diagram shows (that)…… 该图向我们展示了…… 5.the pie graph depicts (that)…… 该圆形图揭示了…… 6.this is a cure graph which describes the trend of……
英语四级图表作文讲解及参考范文 图表作文也是四(六)级考试中常见，而且被认为是一种较难的作文形式。图表作文就是把非文字信息(通常为各种图表表示的数字信息等)转换成文字信息的一种作文。它要求我们用文字来描述非文字性的图表或对图表显示的关系作解释说明。 第一节图表作文的出题形式和写作要领 一、图表作文常见出题形式 图表作文一般在题目中给出作文的标题和一个或几个统计表格、圆形图、曲线图或条形图，有时还用英文或中文提纲的形式给出提示，要求我们： 1)用文字描述图表，客观解释图表中所传递的信息，并找出某种规律或趋势; 2)就图表中所反映的某种趋势或问题分析其原因或后果。 图表作文着重说明事实，常常是通过对图表中所反映的具体数据的说明、分析、比较，对某种事物或现象的事实或变化情况等加以说明，并提出结论或看法。因此，图表作文常常采用议论文体的写作方法。 写好图表作文，关键在于能否读懂图表中所提供的信息，把握各信息间的联系，用准确流畅的语言把这一信息表达出来，并就这一信息发表自己的看法。 二、图表作文的写作步骤 写图表作文时，要注意遵循以下步骤： 1)认真分析图表的含义，弄清图表中所含的信息及不同信息间的关系; 2)确定文章的主题思想，构思出文章的基本框架，筛选出能说明图表主题思想的典型数据; 3)编列文章的提纲; 4)根据文章的提纲，将各段的提纲内容扩展成段落，然后将各个段落组成文章，注意段与段之间的衔接与过渡; 5)检查与修改。
三、图表作文的篇章结构 写图表作文时，常采用三段式的陈述方式。文章的第一段往往分析图表中的数据变化反映什么问题或趋势，概述图表所揭示的信息。第二段分析造成这一问题或趋势的原因。第三段则展望未来的情况或提出解决问题的办法或建议。这一结构可以简单地表述为： 第一段：概述图表反映的主题思想（总趋势+极端值+特点，时态） 第二段：分析产生的原因 第三段：展望未来或提出方法或建议 模板一 ①总的趋势②图表具体描述③剖析图表所揭示的含义 ④理由一⑤理由二⑥理由三⑦理由四⑧总结⑨前景预测 As can be seen from the table, the past decade has witnessed dramatic changes in①______. While ②_______. It is obvious from the table that③_________. What contributed to these changes? I think the reasons are as follows. To start with, ④______. Secondly, ⑤______ . What’s more, ⑥ _______. Last but not lease, ⑦________. In conclusion, ⑧_________. Moreover, ⑨ ________. 模板二 ①描述图表②分三方面解释原因③下结论 1) During the period from _______to _______, ________rose from ________to _______, while _______ decreased from _______ to _______. 2) We believe that three reasons can account for this phenomenon. First,____. Second, ____. Third, _____. 3) ___.We are happy to see that things are becoming better and better nowadays. We can imagine that ___. 模板三 ①描述图表②解释图表③补充解释 1) During the period between _______ and ________, ________ declined abruptly from _______ to ________, while ________ increased sharply from ________ to _______. 2) Several reasons can account for this phenomenon. Compared with _________ is much cheaper and more convenient__________ . Apart from that, _________. 3) However, there are still a number of people who _________, generally for two reasons. On the
2020年大学英语四级考试作文万能模板：图表类 （1）模版1 According to the chart / graph / diagram / table, we clearly learn that _________. As early as _________,___________. Then,_________. Last,__________. In contrast, by _________,__________. There are many reasons accounting for _________. Firstly, _________.Secondly,__________. Finally,_________. As a result,_________. As far as I am concerned,_________. For one thing,__________. For another,________. In brief, I hold that__________. （2）模版2 What is shown in the chart / graph / diagram / table above indicates that in recent years, more and more people pay attention to _________. The number of those who _________ has increased ________, and furthermore,____________. There are two factors responsible for the changes. In the first place,_________. Moreover,__________. Yet, it is noticeable that __________. From the analysis, we can safely draw the conclusion that__________. It is possible that in the future, the tendency will__________. （3）模版3
英语四级图表作文范文 yuebanming10 2009年06月19日14:34 来源：四六级考试网点击3825次 图表作文要求考生用文字材料把图表中所提供的信息准确、完整地表达出来。在写作图表作文时，首先要仔细观察并分析图表，以及题中所给出的有关信息，比如，作文标题，英文提纲、英文提示、英语关键词等。在分析图表时，要抓住与主题有关的信息，要发现数据呈现的规律，要充分利用图表中的图形、数据等来说明主题。但是注意不要过多地引用数据，以免造成滥用数据的后果。另外，在写作图表作文时可以套用一些常用词汇或表达方式，这将有助于你写出较为地道的图表作文。例如： ①As can be seen from the table (graph, form)... ②From the above table it can be seen (concluded) that... ③A careful study of the table shows that... ④The number (percentage) is 3 times as much as that in 2000. ⑤It has decreased (fell, dropped) about twice, compared with (as compared with, as against) that of 2000. ⑥In 2001, it increased (went up, rose) from 5 to 15 percent of the total (to 15 percent, by 15 percent). ［例］Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition of no less than 100 words on Income Sources between Chinese and American Students. Study the following table carefully and your composition must be based on the information given in the table. Write three paragraphs to: 1. Describe the differences of the income sources between Chinese and American students. 2. Analyze possible reasons for these differences. 3. Predicate future tendency.
2020年英语四级作文题目模板：图表图画型范文（四）四级作文题目：Student Use of Computer Students tend to use computers more and more frequently nowadays. Reading this chart, we can find that the average number of hours a student spends on the computer per week has increased sharply. In 1990, it was less than 2 hours; and in 1995, it increased to almost 4 hours, and in 2000, the number soared to 20 hours. Obviously computers are becoming increasingly popular. There are several reasons for this change. First, computers facilitate us in more aspects of life. Also, the fast development of the Internet enlarges our demands for using computers. We can easily contact with friends in remote places through the Internet. Besides, the prices of computers are getting lower and lower, which enables more students to purchase them. However, there still exist some problems, such as poor quality, out-of-date designs and so on. And how to balance the time between using computers and studying is also a serious problem. Anyhow, we will benefit a lot from computers as long as we use them properly.
2020年大学英语四级图表作文范文：表面的美丽 Directions：Study the following set of cartoons carefully and write an essay in which you should 1) describe the cartoons, 2) interpret its meaning, and 3) point out its implications in our life. 范文1： In the above cartoons, a young woman happily eats bananas and casually discards the peels on the street, unaware of the fact that such actions not only pollute the environment but also pose a danger to others. In the next illustration adisabled man struggles to properly dispose of the trash she has left behind. Despite the girl's youth and beauty, it is the disabled man who is truly beautiful. True beauty comes from one's actions rather than one's appearance. While most of us enjoy pretty appearances, it is more important to cultivate a clean and beautiful soul. Only such souls can create a genuinely beautiful society. Chinese traditionally uphold the virtues of modesty, generosity, broad mindedness, and politeness. Confucian teachings such as：“do no t do to others as you would not want done to you” and “one should be delighted to hear criticism,” are wise and worthwhile. If people embody these teachings our society can only improve and progress. The thoughts of great minds like Confucius are also worth studying. His writings set fine and noble examples for us to
英语四级作文模板整理，很详细~ 小编发现，关于作文模板的消息大家非常关注。今天带来的是不同需求下的几类模板，以便大家应对不同的情况和需要，背过立马就能用！为大家的复习在最短的时间里实现最大的提高! 一、用于作文开头的万能模板： 1、Many people insist that... 很多人(坚持)认为…… 这句话乍看没亮点，但将众人皆知的"think"换为"insist"有没有觉得高大上了许多？ 2、With the development of science and technology, more and more people believe that... 随着科技的发展,越来越多的人认为…… 这个可是小编当年的"杀手锏"啊，虽谈不上洋气，但正确率百分百啊，还超好记！ 3、A lot of people seem to think that... 很多人似乎认为…… "think"终于闪亮登场，但"seem to"为整个句子增添了点婉转之感，这种客观的方式貌似较受老外（尤其腐国人）喜爱。 二、引出不同观点的万能模板： 1、People's views on... vary from person to person. Some hold that... . However, others believe that.... 人们对……的观点因人而异。有些人认为.....然而其他人却认为…… 看这个长度就已然鹤立鸡群。其实，也是一个蛮简单也好记的模板。 2、Attitudes towards (drugs) vary from person to person. 人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异。
大学英语四级写作资料 一、大学英语四级考试大纲（2006 修订版）对写作的要求 写作选用考生所熟悉的题材。考生根据规定的题目和所提供的提纲、情景、图片或图表等，写出一篇不少于120词的短文。写作要求是思想表达准确、意义连贯、无严重语法错误。考试时间30分钟。 写作部分要求考生用英语进行短文写作，思想表达准确、意义连贯、无重大语法错误。写作部分考核的技能是： A.思想表达 1.表达中心思想 2.表达重要或特定信息 3.表达观点、态度等 B.篇章组织 4.围绕所给的题目叙述、议论或描述，突出重点 5.连贯地组句成段，组段成篇 C.语言运用 6.运用恰当的词汇 7.运用正确的语法 8.运用合适的句子结构 9.使用正确的标点符号 10.运用衔接手段表达句间关系（如对比、原因、结果、程度、目的等） D.写作格式 11.运用正确的符合英语表达习惯的写作格式 大学英语四级考试写作部分要求考生达到《教学要求》中的一般要求，即“能完成一般性写作任务，能描述个人经历、观感、情感和发生的事件等，能写常见的应用文，能就一般性话题或提纲在半小时内写出至少120词的短文，内容基本完整，用词恰当，语意连贯。能掌握基本的写作技能。” 二、四级考试写作评分标准 （1）本题满分为15分。 （2）阅卷标准共分四等：2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。各有标准样卷1-2份。 （3）阅卷人根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若认为与某一分数（如8分）相似，即定为该分数（即8分）； 若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数，则可以加一分（即9分）或减一分（即7分）。但不得加或减半分。（4）评分标准 ?2分：条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或绝大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。 ?5分：基本切题。思想表达不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语法错误。 ?8分：基本切题。思想表达清楚，文章尚连贯，但语法错误较多，其中有一些是严重错误。 ?11分：切题。思想表达清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语法错误。 ?14分：切题。思想表达清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本上无语法错误。仅有个别小错误。 ?注：白卷、所写内容与题目毫不相关或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，则给0分。 （5）字数不足应酌情扣分。 题目中给出主题句、起始句和结束句，均不得记入所写字数。 只写一段者：0-4分；只写两段者，0-9分（指规定三段的作文） （6）各档作文相当于百分制的得分，列表如下，称为得分率。其中9分的得分率为60分（相当于百分制的60分）。