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介绍一线城市深圳的英语作文

深圳,别称鹏城,广东省辖市,地处广东省南部,珠江三角洲东岸,与香港一水之隔,东临大亚湾和大鹏湾,西濒珠江口和伶仃洋,南隔深圳河与香港相连,北部与东莞、惠州接壤。介绍一线城市深圳的英语作文,我们来看看。

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Shenzhen City, Guangdong Province, China and South Africa is located in coastal areas, north east of the Pearl River estuary.The People's Republic of China is located in Shenzhen City, Guangdong Province, China and South Africa along the coast, land area location of longitude 113 ° 46 'to 114 ° 37', latitude 22 ° 27 'to 22 °

52'. 81.4 kilometers from east to west, north-south width (the shortest Department) is 10.8 km, east of Mirs Bay, West Lianzhu estuary, south of Hong Kong and Kowloon Peninsula, bordering the New Territories of Hong Kong acroa river, known as the "Hong Kong's Back Garden . "Shenzhen this emerging clean and beautiful city, Four Seasons vegetation Cong Long, the local government according to local conditions to develop a number of tourist attractions, natural scenery and unique combination of man-made structures. Shenzhen has a long history, culture developed, is also very rich in tourism resources, save on the ground, the ground is very rich in cultural relics

80 years, Shenzhen Museum, archaeologists conducted a survey on cultural relics and found a large number of valuable ancient buildings, ancient ruins, ancient tombs, ancient temples, ancient sites and scenic spots and so on. Shenzhen Municipal People's Government in 1983 and has published two groups of key cultural

relics protection units, and monuments were restored, reproduction of the original style, in order for visitors to view.

Shenzhen is a sub-provincial city of Guangdong province in southern China, located at the border with the Hong Kong Special Administrative Region. Shenzhen is a centre of foreign investment and since the late 1970s has been one of the fastest growing cities in

the world. It is also the busiest port in China. In the past two decades, outsiders have invested more than $30 billion in Shenzhen

for building factories and forming joint ventures.

The one-time fishing village of Shenzhen, singled out by late Chinese paramount leader Deng Xiaoping, was the first of the Special Economic Zones (SEZ) in China. It was originally established in 1979 due to its proximity to Hong Kong, then a prosperous British colony. The SEZ was created to be an experimental ground of capitalism in "socialism with Chinese characteristics."

The location was chosen to attract industrial investments from Hong Kong since the two places share the same language, dialect and culture. The concept proved to be a great success, propelling the further opening up of China and continuous economic reform. Shenzhen eventually became one of the largest cities in the Pearl River Delta region, which has become one of the economic powerhouses of China as well as the largest manufacturing base in the world.

Shenzhen, formerly known as 'Bao'an County', was promoted to prefecture level, directly governed by Guangdong province, in November 1979. In May 1980, Shenzhen was formally nominated as a

'special economic zone', the first one of its kind in China. It was given the right of provincial-level economic administration in November 1988.

Shenzhen is the earliest of the five special economic zones in China. Deng Xiaoping is usually credited with the opening up of economic revival in China, often epitomized with the city of Shenzhen, which profited the most from the first legacies of Deng.

The boomtown of Shenzhen is located in the Pearl River Delta. The municipality covers an area of 2,020 km (780 sq. miles) including urban and rural areas, with a population of thirteen million. Shenzhen is a sub-tropical maritime region, with frequent tropical cyclones in summer and early autumn, with an average temperature of 22.4°C year-round (72°F) although daytime temperatures can exceed 35°C.

Shenzhen is located on the border with the Hong Kong SAR acrothe Sham Chun River and Sha Tau Kok River, 160 km south of the provincial capital of Guangzhou, and 70 km south of the industrial city of Dongguan. To the west, the resort city of Zhuhai is a 60 km away.

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