2009年高考英语作文专项训练：任务型写作（13）
1. 阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Every child has his own dream. Every child hopes to be an adult. All of them think it is a good thing to grow up, However, is it truly like what they imagine? As a boy who lives in modern times, I still clearly remember the happiness of my childhood. What a good time we had! We didn’t need to study all the time and our task was to play. We had no worries. Unluckily, we had to face the reality following time’s passing. We began to gradually feel this invisible pressure coming upon us. We had less spare time for playing and had to give more of our time for homework. Our stress was coming! We get up before sunrise and return after sunset. We work and study like an adult, even harder. What we do is in order to get an excellent mark. Oh, growing up is extremely boring. Perhaps each child will have or has had the stress of growing up; the most important thing for us to solve our worries. We must try to find happiness while growing up so that we can get a balance.
[写作内容]
1）以约30个词概括短文的要点；
1．然后以约120个词就“成长是快乐的还是烦恼的” 这个主题发表你的看法，至少包含以下内容要点，该部分词数约120词。
a)简述你在成长过程中的快乐或烦恼；
b)你对成长的快乐或烦恼的看法。
[写作要求]
a)可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
b)标题自定
[评分标准]
概括准确、语言规范、内容合适，篇章连贯。
参考范文
The writer of the passage tells us that we had enough time to play in our childhood. While we are growing up, worries come upon us and our spare time is less but homework more. So we felt
growing up boring.
As far as I am concerned, growing up is really boring. As a teenager, I have to deal with a lot of worries while growing up. I have to go to school very early in the morning and get home very late in the evening. And I have to take all kinds of exams every year. I am also worried about being misunderstood by friends and losing them. Although we face worries, we should seek support from our friends, parents and teacher to solve them and try to find pleasure in growing up. In fact, the path of adolescence is full of sunshine. Why not enjoy the pleasure of growing up and its delicious taste?
2. 阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求，写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
China news, Shanghai, October 8--- According to a random survey covering 3,800 elementary and secondary school students in Shanghai, the two groups of students have very different career outlooks. Most pupils dream of starting their own business after graduation, while high school students long for freelancing.
“It’s so cool to be your own boss, and you can decide when to start a day’s work,” said Jay (not his real name), a fifth grade pupil. The hottest topic between him and his classmates is usually about their future careers, and many of them have already had a thorough plan for the future. Jay says that he will start his business with his friends in a few years after graduating from college, when he will have already accumulated some money.
High school students’ choices tend to be more reasonable. Some of them say they will take an ordinary full-time job, while many of them also appreciate the freedom of freelancing: however, most of them will think twice before starting their own businesses, as it is extremely difficult to start a career from scratch.
[写作内容]
上面这篇文章来自中国新闻网，请你读后以一名学生的身份在中国新闻网发表意见栏上写一篇文章，至少包含以下的内容要点：
1. 以大约30词概括短文的内容要点；
2. 以大约120词谈谈你个人的就业意向：
1) 你打算以后干什么？说出你选择的理由；
2) 为了将来的事业，你现在应该怎么做。
A possible version:
According to a survey, some elementary and secondary school students in Shanghai hope to start their own business in the future while some others, especially high school students, prefer to take an ordinary job.
I dream of being an excellent doctor after I graduate from university. First, I am told that to be a doctor, I can have a very good income. We have to admit that money is important. With it, I can live more comfortably and provide my child with a better environment. If I have enough money, I can also help the poor. Wouldn’t it be wonderful? More importantly, doctors are angels to the patients, who can help the sick get rid of pain and suffering or even give a second life to the dying. I can’t imagine how great I will feel when seeing a patient recover from the illness and live happily again because of my help.
Now what I should do is to study hard to make sure I can enter a famous medicine university, where I can get the required knowledge and skills to be a good doctor.
3．阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
I started thinking about this issue at my brother-in-law's 60th birthday party last Saturday. Before we ate the main meal we sat around a table that was loaded with large bowls of snack items - chocolate-covered peanuts, cherries(樱桃), and a few other things. The eater had to reach into the bowl and grab a handful of snacks and then convey them to the mouth with the other hand.
A lot of people were strangers to me and I observed a cat being carried around, a dog being petted, and a number of noses being blown, between eating handfuls of snacks. Ugh!
I started thinking about Chinese table manners. My wife and I will share things from the same plate or cup but we always put serving spoons out with the dishes on the table. We don't frequently use them, though. In my family we use our personal chopsticks to take food from the serving dishes. But we are careful and only touch the food we will eat ourselves.
I have heard of some people who use two sets of chopsticks, one for eating, and one for serving. I have also seen some people who invert their chopsticks, that is, to serve other people with the other ends that haven't touched their lips.
【写作内容】
1．概括短文的内容要点，该部分的词数大约为30；
2．然后以大约120词，就“Table Manners and Hygiene(卫生)”的主题发表你的看法，并包括以下的内容要点：
a) 以自己或周围的人为例，简述自己或周围人的就餐习惯；.
b) 你如何看待自己或周围人的有关就餐习惯；
c) 出于卫生考虑，你觉得是否有必要使用公筷(serving chopsticks)，请说明理由。
【写作要求】
可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的观点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不要抄袭阅读材料中的句子；
【评分标准】
概括的准确性，语言的规范性，内容的合适性以及篇章的连贯性。
参考范文
Table Manners and Hygiene
This passage describes the author’s experience of witnessing people’s unhealthy table manners at a birthday party, which gave rise to his opinion on the promotion of health and hygiene at dinner.
In terms of table manners and hygiene, people’s habits vary from person to person. Some of them have the preference of stirring the food, hunting for what seems to be their favourite bits, with the aid of their own chopsticks. To show hospitality, some hosts or hostesses frequently feed food into the guest’s dish, ignoring the serving ch opsticks or spoons. Worse of all, some diners never hesitate to dig or blow their nose at table, making disgusting noise.
Personally, I am not quite in favour of the above manners, which is very likely to transfer / spread diseases. I absolutely agree with the author that communal or serving chopsticks and spoons are recommended to avoid the transference of any diseases while dining. There is no denying that dining together is the time for intimateness or close relationship between the relevant members or friends. However, the consideration of health and hygiene is significant as well To conclude, priority should be given to healthy and hygienic manners at table so as to create a pleasant and harmonious dining atmosphere
高考英语作文写作技巧 从每年的考试情况来看，很多同学能完整地按照要求把文章写出来，但得分却较低。实际上，高考英语书面表达是一个分值颇高且易得分的题型，只是很多同学没有掌握得分技巧。下面我们一起看看怎样才能让高考作文“拽”起来。 2.书面表达整篇背诵绝无必要，可以以看读为主，关键是从中汲取一些常用的词汇和表达，并能得体熟练地运用。考场上应变能力很重要! 3.英文写作模仿很重要。有时也很有效。但不能过于牵强，尤其是对一些长难句的刻意模仿使用。 5.“见微知著，一叶知秋”，几个亮点足矣：有道是：浓妆淡抹总相宜，作文写得简洁到位要比长篇大论更显功力。 6.心不为形役。不要身陷逐字逐句“英汉对号”式的字面翻译，要把表达的主动权始终握在自己手里。 历届高考，书面表达考得最多是提示作文，即提供一定的情景内容，要求考生完成100词左右的短文。 从命题方式看，有短文提示、要点提示、图画提示、情景提示以及图表提示等；体裁以应用文为主，记叙文为辅：题材为广大中学生所熟悉的日常生活。从提供要点的情景方面看，历届高考书面表达题均属供料小作文，采用文字供料或文字说明加图画(图表)的方式供料。 备考时，同学们要利用有限的时间把以前背的范文整理一下，从中选出不同体裁、不同题材的范文各一篇(范文以高考真题的高分作文为佳)，把它们重新记忆，一定记牢。这样，高考时不管什么样的文章都可套用背诵好的格式。避免考场上因紧张而无章可循。 最后阶段，还要总结一下写作时常用且能出彩的固定句型、句式，比如强调句型、定语从句、名诃性从句等，牢记英语的五个基本句式，背诵平时老师总结的万能句。以不变应万变。 考场答题前，应仔细审题，研究所提供的文字和图画(图表)材料和作文要求。分析、提炼要点，理顺要点，确立基本的写作思路，不要忽略任何一个词。关键的词更不能遗漏，构思好写几个方面，缺一不可。
高考英语任务型阅读解题技巧(一) 一．任务型阅读题型特点： 江苏高考英语任务型阅读题目要求:根据所读，用恰当的词语补全全文提纲，概括关键内容。一般而言，任务型阅读提供了两种示例：表格式和树状式。 二．任务型阅读的解题技巧： 1.在阅读文章之前，快速浏览并了解题型，明白阅读任务，以便能快速查找到有用信息，提高解题速度及准确性。 2.通读，复读文章，把握短文的主题思想，弄清文章大意，获取关键信息。 3.根据题目要求，对信息进行梳理加工，并用正确的形式表达出来。 三．任务型阅读解题策略： 1. 注意词形转换，反义词，同义词，语态问题 2．注意句子结构的转换 3. 选用其他词来释义 4.学会归纳概括词汇 概括性词汇： 因果: cause(s) ; reason(s) ; analysis ; effect（s）; result(s); consequence(s) 态度：attitude(s) ；opinion(s)；manner
比较：comparison(s) 异同: difference(s) ; similarity(similarities) 优劣：benefit与disadvantage ；weakness与strength；advantage 与disadvantage；（shortcome; drawback）缺点 目的：purpose；aim；goal；target 建议：advice；suggestion；proposal ；tip；recommendation 问题：problem；trouble；matter；question；issue 方式：means(of); method(s)(of); way(s)(of); approach(es)(to); solution(s)(to); how to do 总结：summary；conclusion 特点：feature(s); characteristic(s) 重要性：significance; importance; meaning 定义：definition 来源：source；origin 用途: use ；usage；function 种类：kind；type；category 步骤：steps；procedures; process 评论：comment；remark；assessment 反应：response；reaction 词形转换： 1.grow----growth
2009年高考英语作文专项训练：任务型写作（11） 1. 阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。 Doctors say anger can be an extremely harmful emotion, unless you learn how to deal with it. They warn that angry feelings can lead to heart disease, stomach problems, headaches, emotional problems and possibly cancer. Anger is a normal emotion that we all feel from time to time. Some people express anger openly in a calm, reasonable way. Others burst with anger, losing control of themselves. But still other people control their anger. They cannot or will not express it. Recently some doctors have found that people who express anger too often and violently become, in fact, more and not less angry. This can cause medical problems. Some doctors say that both controlling and expressing anger can be dangerous. They believe that those who express anger strongly may be more likely to develop heart disease, and they believe that those who deep their anger inside may face a greater danger of high blood pressure. Doctors say the solution is learning how to deal with anger. They say the first step is to admit that you are angry and to recognize the real cause of the anger, then decide if the cause is serious enough to get angry about. If it is, they say, “Do not express your anger while angry. Wait until your anger has cooled down and you are able to express yourself calmly and reasonably. ” [写作内容] 1）概括短文的内容要点，该部分的字数大约30词左右； 2）就“要不要生气”这个主题发表你的看法，至少包含以下的内容要点，该部分字数大约120词左右； a)发脾气不但不利于健康，而且对人际关系有影响； b)避免因误解而造成的生气； c)理性的对待别人的错误。 [写作要求] 你可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不要抄袭阅读材料中的句子。
初中语文作文专题训练案例 朱市二中凌云 初中语文作文专题训练教案之四—选材 教学目的 1.了解中考作文在“选材”方面的具体要求。 2.引导学生分析作文“选材失误”的原因。 3.掌握作文“选材”的方法和技巧，并运用于写作之中。 4.提高学生的选材能力。 教学重点 1.分析作文“选材失误”的原因，提高学生的选材能力。 2. 掌握作文“选材”的方法和技巧，并运用于写作之中。 教学难点 分析作文“选材失误”的原因，指导学生选材，提高学生的选材能力。 教学时间 二课时 教学过程 一、引入新课 前段时间，我们训练了以“窗外”为话题的作文，有一个同学的拟题、立意和内容表达都很好，但却让人一眼就看出是虚构的材料：一个老大娘在雨中摸针，能让人相信这是真的吗？这就涉及到我们今天训练的专题——选材。 二、学生结合自己选材的实际，分析选材失误的原因，然后同桌交流，最后请学生小结。 选材失误主要有以下三个方面：一是司空见惯的“大路货”。表现在材料陈旧，无法吸引读者。二是毫无新意的“陈旧货”。有的材料用的人多了，也失去了原有的光彩。三是简单模仿的“舶来货”。一味的模仿，进入抄袭的误区。 三、引导学生掌握中考作文评分标准对“选材”的具体要求，让学生对选材引起高度重视。 俗话说：“巧妇难为无米之炊”。一篇文章，如果没有材料去体现，也是镜中月，水中花，是虚的。课标指出：写作时要能“多角度地观察生活，发现生活的丰富多彩，捕捉事物的特征”，“需要占有真实、丰富的材料”。这是课标对选材提出的要求，我们一定要认真对待。 2005年各地的中考作文评分标准，在材料方面要求很高。如重庆“选材新颖，最高可多加5分”；湖北黄岗“选材新颖，有个性可多加1—3分”。材料之与作文评分，显性比重通常占到10%，但其隐性分值远远不止于此。希望大家引起高度重视。 四、对照优秀例文，掌握选材的方法和技巧。 1、小组学习，对照例文，分析选材的方法和技巧。 考题回放（2005年湖南益阳市中考作文题） 请以“走进-------”为题，写一篇文章，先将题目补充完整，然后作文。 要求：⑴有真情实感；⑵文体不限；⑶不得出现真实的人名、地名和校名。 走进那张“牛皮癣”
高考英语作文写作常用短语 英语作文试题一般要求字数在120字左右，段落一般为三段，因而有“三段论”一说。以下是，我们一起来了解下: 1、情感与欲望 be pleased with …; be delighted in doing…; take a pleasure in doing; be worried about; feel surprised at … be sorry for …; be angry with sb for sth; be angry about …为某事生气; look forward to doing…; wish to do; expect to do; long for long to do; be sick for one’s home; have a strong desire to do …; 2、健康状况及治疗 be in good shape; be in good poor health; feel weak well, terrible, sick; have got a high slight fever; have a slight bad cold; take one’s temperature; have got a pain in …; be good bad for one’s healtheyes; It’s nothing serious. stay in bed until…; save one’s life 3、其它 It takesb. some time to do…; It is said that …; be fit for; be short of; be well dressed; miss the lecture train; change…into…; waste time doing; spend time doing; be busy doing; have no choice but to do; I can’t help it. be in need of…;
精编中学语文作文专项训练及优秀范文 1 扩写情景，为下面的语句加入环境和人物的细节描写，完成写作。不少于100字。 “奶奶在为我翻阅食谱，准备饭菜的情景。” _________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________【答案】梦里，你依旧是坐在那间朝阳的房子里，背对着阳光，带着老花镜，倚在躺椅上，花白的头发在阳光的照耀下闪出晶莹的色泽。一本普通的食谱，你每天总是翻上一遍，嘴里喃喃自语：“小丫头正在长身体，得给她弄点好吃又有营养的。”老式的收音机在红木的床头柜上沙哑地唱着锡剧，那幅画面，定格在我的梦里…… 【解析】扩写情景，可以加入一定的环境烘托，渲染出温馨的气氛。同时加入对奶奶的外貌、神态、语言的描写，体现出奶奶对我的关爱。 2 根据情景，完成写作。不少于100字。 “枯藤老树昏鸦，小桥流水人家，古道西风瘦马。夕阳西下，断肠人在天涯”，马致远用寥寥28个字，将“枯藤”“老树”“小桥”“流水”等若干景物巧妙地组合成一幅秋郊夕照图，流露出作者深沉的思乡之情。请你学习这种情景交融的写法，以冬天为描写对象，选取几个景物构成一幅画面，写一段表达自己某种情感的文字。 _________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _______________
高考英语写作……话题写作练习 一. 教学内容： 话题写作练习 A 人物介绍 参考篇目：Unit 1. Hawking. Einstein 注意：1. 表格变为段落 2．按时间顺序 3．根据逻辑关系加上连接词 常用短语和词汇： be born when he/she was ……years old /at the age of later begin to graduate from spend time doing discover 评价：be considered to be / be regarded as be rewarded…… contribute devoted oneself to sth. 根据以下素材写一篇介绍爱因斯坦的短文 Date of birth: March 14th, 1879 Place of birth: Germany Childhood: curious, slowing in learning Education background: 1886 : study in Munich, mathematics, religion 1896 : graduated from high school 1900 : become a maths teacher 1905 : receive a doctor’s degree Achievement: develop the Theory of Relativity by 1915 prove light is bent when passing the sun won the Nobel Prize for Physics in 1922 Evaluation: one of the greatest scientists in the 20th century Albert Einstein Albert Einstein was born on March 14th,1879 in Germany. When he was a child,he was curious about everything, but he was considered to be slow at learning. In 1886, he began to study in Munich. He studied mathematics as well as religion. In 1896,Einstein graduated from high school at the age of 17. Four years later, Einstein became a maths teacher. In 1905, he received a doctor’s degree. By the year 1915, he had developed the famous Theory of Relativity and became famous in the world. He proved that light is bent as it passes the sun. Because of his great achievement, he won the Nobel Prize for Physics in 1922. Einstein was one of the greatest scientists in the 20th century. Some people say that he was a genius. But I think the main reason why he was so successful was his hard work . B. 说明文
高考英语作文技巧 1.开头万能公式一:名人名言 有人问了,“我没有记住名言,怎么办?尤其是英语名言?”,很好办:编! 原理:我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的,包括我们欣赏的文章也是,所以尽管编,但是一定要听起来很有道理呦!而且没准将来我们就是名人呢!对吧? 经典句型: A proberb says, “ You are only young once.” (适用于已记住的名言 It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. (适用于自编名言 更多经典句型: As everyone knows, No one can deny that… 2.开头万能公式二:数字统计 原理:要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明。 原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的,可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一,但编无妨,只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型: According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation. 看起来这个数字文邹邹的,其实都是编造出来的,下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造: Honesty 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。Travel by Bike 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。 Youth 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,在某个大学,学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。 Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work? 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。 更多句型: A recent statistics shows that … 写作绝招 结尾万能公式: 1.结尾万能公式一:如此结论 说完了,毕竟要归纳一番,相信各位都有这样的经历,领导长篇大论,到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话,我们马上停止开小差,等待领导说结束语。也就是说,开头很好,也必然要有一个精彩的结尾,让读者眼前一亮,这样,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子: Obviously(此为过渡短语, we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others. 如果读者很难“显而见之”,但说无妨,就当读者的眼光太浅罢了! 更多过渡短语:
2016高考英语任务型阅读答题技巧 任务型阅读是高考英语试题中第二卷中的一种题型，分值为10分。本题型在测试考生阅读理解能力的基础上，侧重考查考生的单词拼写、词性转换、句式转换、段落归纳等综合能力。高考任务型阅读近三年文章体裁以议论文和说明文为主，词数在400~550之间。高考成绩的统计数据表明在这一项上，考生普遍失分较多。高考英语任务型阅读是英语阅读理解和完形填空的结合体，在掌握篇章表层含义的基础之上，还要求对文章结构框架的把握。考生不但要具备基本的英语词汇知识，而且要能够依据上下文的内容，运用逻辑判断，正确填出任务型阅读中的空白处。因而，任务型阅读对考生的英语阅读和对英语学科的感悟能力要求较高。也就是说，任务型阅读不仅检查考生的词、句、篇的掌握，而且涉及考生综合运用英语语法的能力。所以说，这种题型是比较全面的考查。学生在平时的学习过程中，要关注词汇的使用，领悟篇章的内部结构，同时还要注意词的搭配和语用知识。 一、任务型阅读题型的考查角度 1、单词的大小写（信息筛选题） 考生往往从文中便可直接找到答案，无需进行词性和词形的转化。但是如果没有根据英文首字母要大写的要求，或在特殊的上下文中。忽略字母的大小写，便无法得到本应该拿到的分数。 2、词性的变化（整合转换题） 要依据特定的语境结合文中涉及的词语，灵活地转变词性。比如：动词转变为形容词，形容词转变为名词，等等。 3、词形的转化（整合转换题） 主要依据任务型阅读提供的特殊框架，来敲定词语的各种形式。例如：文中过去式需要在题目中使用现在时，同时还要注意人称和数的变化。 4、近义词与反义词的转化（整合转换题） 根据任务型阅读题型中提供的已有信息，尽管文中也能发现相关的词语，却没能依据特定的语境进行必要的词语的转换，比如将肯定的语气转化为否定的形式等。 5、实现词句的转换（整合转换题） 尽管文章无法一下子找到任务型阅读题型中出现的答案，但是依据文章的上下文以及文中句子的解释，则可以联系掌握的英语基础知识，得出相应的答案。 6、综合概括文章框架的词语使用（综合概括题） 注意文章的整体布局，理清句与句之间，段与段之间的内在逻辑关系，反复阅读文章，认真思考，然后找出能代表篇章结构的词汇。这类题目要求考生对全文或段落进行总体语篇把握，通过观察表格的设置特点，从而归纳和概括出所考查的单词。此类设题一般位于表格的第一行或第一列。为了更快捷地掌握概括能力，总结和熟记一些概括性词汇及其固定搭配也是很有必要的。 7、书写工整无误 最后，卷面是否清洁也会影响到考生最终的得分。答案书写要工整清晰，避免由于字迹潦草或拼写错误导致失分。完成题目后，一定要仔细的将答案带入题中，结合文中提供的信息，认真核对，反复思考，确保绝不因为自己的粗心大意而失分。 二、任务型阅读题型的解题思路 1、先认真读题，通过题目来了解文章的大致框架。做到在阅读文章前，心中有数，不会因为文章的长度或文中出现的生词影响到自己对文章结构的整体把握。 2、利用快速阅读策略做出判断。自己理解的文章主旨是否与题目中的要求一致。在这一过程中，可以尽可能填出与文章大意相关的词汇。
2009年高考英语作文专项训练：任务型写作（15） 1. 阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。 Students should think now about what extracurricular (课外的) activities they'd like to participate in. Participating in extracurricular activities may help you deepen your physical, creative, social, political, and career interests by bringing you into communication with other like-minded people you didn’t previously know. You can join groups as a way to get support from other students. A club or group can also be a great way to meet people who are different from you. Lots of youth programs bring people together with those who are different as a way to break down the barriers between people. Participating in extracurricular activities helps you in other ways, too. It looks good on college and job applications and shows admissions officers and employers you're well-rounded and responsible. Specific activities help with specific goals. The most basic reason for joining a club or team is that it gives you something better to do than staring at the wall, wandering the hall, or sleeping all afternoon. People who are participating are less likely to pick up bad habits, like smoking or drinking. [写作内容] 1．概括短文的内容要点，该部分的字数大约30词左右； 2．就“学生是否应该参与课外活动”这个主题发表你的看法，至少包含以下的内容要点，该部分的字数大约120词左右： a) 简述你们学校有哪些课外活动； b) 你认为课外活动能给你的学习生活带来什么； c) 你认为学生应如何处理好学习和课外活动之间的关系。 [写作要求] 你可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的观点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不要抄袭阅读材料中的句子。 参考范文
作文专项训练 训练一休息 【提示】暂停学习，暂停工作，我们都会选择去休息。休息是恢复体力和精神的必由之路，休息是调剂心情的重要方式，休息也是多彩生活的基本内容。无论是选择睡觉，还是听音乐；无论是选择聊天，还是看电视；无论是选择逛街，还是做游戏；无论是选择运动，还是去旅游，我们都只为休息好！请以“休息”为题，自拟题目，自选内容，写一篇作文。注意：或者结合你的经历、体验，或者写出你的认识、思考。 【训练框架】 一．开头：突出矛盾，渲染气氛 示例：“你这书记趁早别当了，半点用也没有！”从学校风尘仆仆赶来的我，离家门还有百来米远，就闻到了一股浓浓的火药味，听到了妈妈对爸爸的呵斥声，一种“黑云压城”的感觉猛烈袭上我的心头。妈妈也是多事，爸爸干什么她都要干预一通，搞不好就暴跳如雷。好在爸爸宰相肚里能撑船，每次都是任凭妈妈一阵暴风骤雨过后，才用几句绵里藏针的话收拾残局。今天不知又为了什么。——选自中考满分文《“民主墙”的风波》）技巧点拨：记叙文的写作要善于制造矛盾，在矛盾中展开故事情节才能吸引人。这篇文章在一开头就抖出一个矛盾冲突。目的是要迅速抓住阅卷老师的心，引发阅卷老师的阅读兴趣。 二．正文：以“休息”为题，应该引入时代性很强的做法和观点。比如关于上网聊天，这其中会发生什么样的故事？比如城里学生到农村参加“农家游”，你是否感受到新奇？写出身心得以放松时的感触，文章就容易传达出真情实感。应该找出具有鲜明时代特征的热门话题，保证写作材料的生活气息。如果你对该话题有着新颖、独到的认识，就能给人以新的启示。根据这一主题需要，你必须详写与表现主题有关的那部分。 三．结尾：引用佳句，多姿多彩 示例：佐拉说：“人生——只有两分半种的时间，一分种微笑、一分种叹息、半分种的爱……”在我看来，在我陶醉于欣赏母亲的梳妆中，那一分钟的微笑不是勉强，那一分钟的叹息之后不再是叹息，而是爱的传递，母亲将她对生命的爱，对生活的爱，对亲人的爱融于平日的点滴中，我忘情天其中了……——选自吉林省中考满分文《陶醉》技巧点拨：古今中外，名言佳句很多，作文结尾之时，若能巧妙引用，定能使文章增色许多。引用的范围可大些，如俗语、谚语、流行歌词等均可引用。 训练二烦恼 【训练框架】 一．开头：描写环境，烘托背景。放学后，独步街头，无心欣赏橱窗里五颜六色的陈列品，心头沉闷，烦恼无处述说。 示例：晚风吹过河面上最后一波涟漪，夕阳收起它最后一首余晖，秋霜目送去最后一只归雁。我们默默地站着，目光游离在那若即若离的记忆之门上。当许许多多都已凋尽，我们起码还可以对自己说：“别伤心，我已体验过那种感觉，虽然只是曾经拥有。” ——选自安徽省中考满分文《曾经拥有》技巧点拨：一切景语皆情语，在记叙文、散文的写作中，环境描写是不可少的。环境描写可以渲染气氛，可以衬托人物、可以推动故事情节的发展。如果在文章的开头先进行一段简洁的环境描写，既可以为文章提供一个特定的背景，又能使文章形成一种特殊的氛围。 二．正文：叙述事情的经过。自己平时学习成绩不好，而这次物理测试却考了八十五
高考英语作文写作模板 投诉信 【篇首句】介绍自己，说明写作目的：投诉。 1. I’m Li Hua. I feel bad to trouble you but I’m afraid that I have to make a complaint about your restaurant. 我是李华。很不想给你添麻烦。但是，恐怕我不得不对你们餐馆进行投诉。 2. I’m writing to you to complain about... 我写信是投诉...... 3. I want to express my dissatisfaction about the woolen scarf I bought from your company. 我想要表达我对从你们公司买的羊毛围巾的不满。 【篇中句】说明投诉问题、后果，并提出合理建议。 1. In the first place, the food is too salty and the water isnt served in time. In addition, the music you broadcast is too noisy. Under these circumstances, I find it hard to sit here having dinner quietly. 首先，食物太咸，水没有及时端上来。而且，你们播放的音乐太吵了。
在这样的环境下，我很难安静的坐在这里吃饭。 2. While I was on holiday in Hong Kong about a week ago, I bought a green shirt for 300 HK dollars in your shop, but there seems to be something wrong with it. When its washed, it fades in colour. Now I cant wear it. 大概一周前我在香港度假的时候，我在你们店里花300港元买了一件绿色衬衫，但是看上去似乎有一些状况。当被洗的时候，它会掉色。现在，我不能穿了。 3. It arrived on time the day before yesterday. But when I checked it, I found a hole in the middle. I was astonished because the hole was obvious and I didnt think you should neglect this deficiency(缺陷). 它是前天按时到的。但是当我检查时，我发现中间有个洞。我很震惊，因为这个洞和明显，我认为你们不应该忽略这个缺陷。 4. I have dialed your service number for several times but it was always busy. 我多次拨打你们的服务电话，但它总是占线。 5. Now this problem keeps worrying me. 现在这个问题一直在困扰我。
高考英语作文写作实用技巧 导读：本文高考英语作文写作实用技巧，仅供参考，如果觉得很不错，欢迎点评和分享。 (一)掌握技巧： (1)注意篇章结构，合理布局 开始部分(opening paragraph)——说出文中的要点、核心问题。 正文部分(Body paragraphs)——围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。 结尾部分(concluding paragraphs)——对全文的总结和概括。 要做到全文中心突出、段落之间必须是有机地联系，内容完整、连贯。前后呼应，祛除与主题无关的内容. (2)确定主题句 主题句是对全文的概括，是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到“画龙点睛”的作用。通常主题句出现在一篇文章的开头，而后，全文对主题句所提出的内容进行解释，扩展。 写主题句应注意以下几点： ①归纳出你要写的文章的几个要点 ②提炼出一句具有概括性的话 ③主题句应具有可读性，抓住、吸引读者。 (二)巧用连接词 要想使文章有整体性、连贯性，就要学会正确使用连接词 表示罗列增加
First, second, third, First, then / next, after that / next, finally For one thing … for another…, On (the) one hand…on the other hand, Besides / what’s more / in addition / furthermore / moreover / another / also, Especially / In particular, 表示时间顺序 now, at present, recently, after, afterwards, after that, after a while, in a few days, at first, in the beginning, to begin with, later, next, finally, immediately, soon, suddenly, all of a sudden, at that moment, as soon as, the moment form now on, from then on, at the same time, meanwhile, till, not…until, before, after, when, while, as during, 表示解释说明 now, in addition, for example, for instance, in this case, moreover furthermore, in fact, actually 表示转折关系
一、高中英语任务型阅读 1．请认真阅读下列短文，并根据所读内容在文章后表格中的空格里填入一个最恰当的单词。 Decoding the young brain There was a funny experiment to see how a young child would answer a specific question compared to an adult. After the adult had spent some time speaking with the child, he asked the child, “What do you think about me？” The child answered, “You talk too much.” When the adult performed the same experiment with another adult, the reply to the same question was, “I think you're a very interesting person.” Even if the adult f elt the same way as the child, his brain allowed him to take a moment，consider the question, and come up with an answer. He could have been annoyed, but his answer didn't reflect it because he was being polite. The secret lies in the science of the developing brain. The child's honest answer was reflected in the fact that his brain wasn't equipped to filter(过滤) information before answering the question. As a result, he was honest, but he said something that may have been hurtful. However, the child did not intentionally hurt the adult; it's just the way his brain works. As a child grows into adolescence and then into adulthood, that changes. The human brain is made up of billions of neurons(神经元). In order for our body to execute a command, like getting up from a chair and walking to the other room, the neurons in the brain have to communicate with each other. They also help us employ our senses like taste and touch and help us remember things. When the neurons send messages, perhaps one sensation(感觉) the person feels is excitement about eating a cookie because it is so delicious. Later, if that person smells a cookie or hears someone talking about a cookie, it can spark the electrical signals that call up the memory of eating the delicious cookie. In an adult, he or she may remember that eating too many cookies can have consequences, like weight gain. But because the younger brain is more impulsive(冲动的), the desire to feel the pleasure of the sweet treat outweighs the consequences. That is becau se when a child is young, his brain is “wired” in such a way that he seeks pleasure and is more willing to take risks than an adult. This affects his decision-making process and it is why younger people tend to be more impulsive. Sometimes parents have to tell their children over and over again before the child remembers that something is dangerous or risky. How many times have we heard a parent say, “I tell her this all the time, but she never listens！” To conclude, what we know about the young brain is that children are more likely than adults to be impulsive. It isn't always necessarily because they are being naughty; it may very well be because of their brains. So the next time you ask a child what he really thinks of you, be prepared for any kind of answer.