中考作文集锦
1. 作文写作思路
中考常考问题及形式：
1. 中考作文常见文体：夹叙夹议
2. 中考作文常见形式：写回信；中英提示写作，话题类作文。
写作原则：1231原则（1句问候，2句概括来信中的问题，3条建议及建议原因，1句祝福）
3. 写作能力之外的得分因素：字迹、分段
4. 写作注意以下几点：避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。注意
长短句交错，几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板长短句交错使用（注意：应突出主题句；长句子并非越长越好）。
【阅卷关注】
阅卷关注哪几点——
一、要点：全部图片或问题（要点决定分/语言准确）；
二、单词：提示词语全用上+单词拼写（字数达标/标点符号和大小写/ fourteen等数字）；
三、语法：高级（多用句型/适当加点谚语）+语法出错（三单、时态、避免Chinglish ）；
四、卷面：书写规范（过渡词可使上下文连贯）+不要求漂亮但要求工整。
作文分类击破
【一、写人记事类】
（感恩/感谢朋友老师父母、难忘经历、微笑、鼓励、毕业感想、暑期计划等）
【01参考范文----适用于感恩/感谢、难忘经历、最喜欢的老师/朋友等：】
My life in middle school will come to the end soon. During the past three years, my English teacher gave me so much help that I will never forget her.
I was not good at English, I tried my best to learn it but I couldn?t get good
grades, so I decided to give it up. My English teacher knew that, she not only
encouraged me to go on learning but also helped me with my English after class.
With her help, I made great progress.
I was moved by her and I was really thankful to her. Now I feel more
confident than before. I?m sure I can le a rn English very well in the future.
【02参考范文----适用于难忘的学校活动, 、鼓励、合作、坚持不懈的精神等：
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During the three years, our school has held various activities, among which the activity of climbing Xiangshan leaves me the deepest memory.
Last term, my classmates and I had a school trip to Xiangshan Park. There, we were divided into groups and the first group that topped the mountain would win
a big prize. Our group tried our best to clim
b as quickly as possible. But soon I
felt dizzy and was out of breath. Noticing this, my teammates came to me
immediately. Some of them gave me candies so that I could get more energy.
Others carried the bag for me so that I could climb the mountain easily…“Y everyone encouraged me. At that moment, I felt deeply moved and can do it!”
really powerful. At last, we were the first to top the mountain.
This activity not only gave us a chance to keep our body fit and enjoy the beautiful scenery, but also let me feel the power of teamwork. A united group can
bring us warmth and strength and can lead us to success.
【03参考范文----感恩父母：】
There?s no doubt that parents have given me a lot since I was born. With their
care, I grow up happily. So I think it is necessary to do something special for them to
show my gratitude.
Both of my parents love music. So it would be a great idea to buy a wonderful CD for them. Last Sunday, I went to a bookstore and chose one among the top 10. While we were having dinner together, I played the CD. It was beautiful. With great joy, they gave me a warm hug and a big smile. I felt very sweet.
I was really proud that I did something for my parents. Their smiles were the best encouragement for me. I made up my mind to do things like this more often.
【04参考范文----帮助他人、志愿活动：】
I think helping others is important and necessary. Taking part in volunteer work
is one of the greatest ways to give a hand to those who need help. And I like it very much.
I remember I helped the old people in the old people?s home last Saturday. First,
I cleaned the room and the windows for them because it was not convienient for them to do such thins. What?s more, I told them some interesting stories, sang some English songs for them and they moved to tears. When it was time to say goodbye, I hugged them and promised to see them again.
Everyone may have trouble in life and our little kind act can make a big difference
in their life. In fact, helping others is helping ourselves. I will do the same in the future because it can bring me and other people happiness.
【05 参考范文----喜欢的hobby、活动：】
It is good to learn about your school activities. Now I?ll tell you about mine.
At my school we have many fun activities to take part in. We have swimming, basketball, badminton, and ping pong. My favorite activity is basketball. I play with
my friends every day after school. Basketball is a team sport where team-mates pass the ball to each other to throw it into a hoop for points. The team with the most points
at the end of the game wins. In basketball it is good to be tall because it is easier to score points.
I like to play basketball because it is a team sport and it is also a good way to get exercise. Basketball is also a good game to learn how to work well with others.
【06参考范文----Hobby、读书类：】
I have great interest in reading magazines because I like reading many kinds of articles in them, such stories, news, science, jokes and so on. The stories give me life lessons, the jokes make me laugh and the news keep me knowing what hapens around me. I can get lots of information as well as enjoy a lot of beautiful pictures in the magazines.
I enjoy reading magazines because they can not only help me study better and
but also make me relaxed and happy every day.
【二、给予建议类】
建议类作文写作思路（1231）
（一句问候、两句问题）
第一段：很高兴收到来信
针对问题回答或体谅别人的感受
主动提出给别人建议
第二段：3条具体建议及原因
第三段：提出希望和祝愿
开头句：表达同情理解+主动提建议
I understand your feelings because I once had the similar problem as you do now. It?s very common for students to do sth. and many students have the same problem like you.
Let me offer you some useful advice.
Here?s my advice.
My suggestions are as follows.
建议类句型：
?You are supposed to do....
?You'd better do ....
?Why not/ don't you do....
?It's a good idea to do....
?If I were you, I would do...
结尾句：
?I hope what I said can be of some help to you.
?Just h ave a try. I?m looking forward to hearing good news from you!
?Try your best, and you'll make great progress!
【07学习类----参考范文：】
Dear Lucy,
I?m very happy to hear from you. Don?t worry too much. It?s very common for students to dislike memorizing and many students have the same problem like you. Here?s my advice.
First of all, you had better preview the new lessons and write down the difficult points before lessons, which can make you become interested in what the teachers say in class. What?s more (Besi des), you should listen carefully and try to take part in the class activities. You?ll find that English and history are not as boring as you think. Last but not least, you also need to review the lessons regularly after class. In this way, you can understand better and memorize more quickly. If you still feel unhappy, why not have a talk with your teacher and ask for help?
I really hope my advice can help you make great progress with your study.
Yours,
Zhang Fang
【08解决与父母矛盾----参考范文：】
Dear Alice,
As a teenager, I met the same problem as you. But now I can get on/ along better with my mother. Here are some ideas for you.
First of all, when facing this kind of situation, it's very important for you to keep calm instead of arguing with your parents, which can only make things worse. What's more, to solve the problems, you'd better make a schedule, set up a goal for each day and show them to your parents. Besides, we are supposed to try to have a heart-to-heart communication with our parents in order to get their understanding and support. Last but not least, why not ask your teacher for help instead of arguing with your parents? Your teacher may have some good ideas.
I hope what I say here can help you a lot.
【09运动/健康类----参考范文：】
All of us want to be healthy. But some of the students/people often have a cold.
We sometimes have a fever and feel tired. In order to have a healthy body, we can do
many things.
First of all, we should pay attention to our diet or meals. We should eat more fruit and vegetable to keep ourselves healthy and strong. What?s more, we should often wash our hands and open the windows to keep the air in the room fresh. Then, we need enough sleep or rest. Staying up too late is bad for our health. Last but not least, it's also a good habit for us to do more sports, such as playing ball games, running, swimming and so on. Because it can not only help us keep fit but also improve our health against illness.
In a word, if we all do these things, I believe we will have a strong body. So why not find some friends to do exercise and have fun together? I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life.
【三、环保类】
【10治理空气污染----参考范文：】
The air pollution is worse and worse today. Not only does it affect the place we live, it also has a great influen ce on our health. Therefore, it?s time for us to pay more attention to it.
The first thing we can do is to take buses or ride bikes instead of driving private cars. It helps to reduce the dirty gas produced by the cars. What?s more, we can plant more trees and flowers because they can provide us with more fresh air. Last but not least, our government can also take actions to prevent factories from producing too much smoke.
In fact, even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment. I believe as long as we try our best to protect the environment, we can make the world a better place to live in.
【11低碳生活----参考范文：】
Nowadays, a new lifestyle called low carbon life is spreading every corner of our country which means there is low energy and no waste.
Low-carbon life is good for everyone. To help with the environment, I have some ideas. First, we had better walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a car. Second, we had better not use plastic bags any more. No one can stand the "white pollution". So, it is wise to use bags which can be reused again and again. Third, we should try to use things that can be recycled and we should reuse books as long as possible. What's more, we should never forget to turn off the lights when we leave the room and turn off the tap in time.
I think it?s our duty to live a low-carbon life. And even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment. All in all, if everyone does something for the environment, I believe the earth will be a better place. Let,s do it now.
【四、介绍北京类】
【12介绍北京旅游----参考范文：】
I?m glad to hear from you. The best time to come to Beijing is during the spring. The weather is not too hot or too cold, so it is the perfect time of the year to be outside. During the spring in Beijing everything seems fresh and new.
I advise you to visit the Summer Palace, the Great Wall, and the Temple of Heaven. The Great Wall is one of the wonders of the world and it is an amazing place to visit. The summer Palace and The Temple of Heaven are beautiful too. There are royal buildings, fantastic artwork, and scenic views for people to enjoy.
Before you come to Beijing, you should know that Beijing is a very crowded and big city. So it is necessary for you to travel with a map and you must be patient about waiting in line or large crowds.
I hope you will have a nice trip.
【13介绍北京----参考范文：】
Our country has a long history, and Beijing, the capital of China, is one of the largest cities in the world. There are many places of interests, such as the Summer Palace, the Forbidden City and the Great Wall. All of them are beautiful and well-known to the world.
Now, people pay more attention to the environment. More trees and flowers have been planted. For the traffic, it is very convenient for people to travel around Beijing, because several new subway lines have been built. If you come to Beijing, you will find people here are very friendly and helpful/warm-hearted. Besides, a lot of people can speak English. What's more, there are a lot of fun you can do. Beijing opera is famous in the world, not only Chinese but also foreigners like it. Beijing duck and dumplings are popular in China, and many foreigners like them too. Beijing is really an attractive city with a long history. I am proud of being a Chinese.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
【五、暑期计划类】