1.经常运动会提高人的自信
正确句子：Regular exercise can increase one’s self-confidence.
我的句子：Excise动词原形不可以做主语要用名词性质的词exercising regularly can improve people's self-confidences ,,, confidence不可数
increase: 及物动词/不及物动词
及物动词：increase one’s confidence（宾语）
不及物动词：the figure increases 数据的增加增长多出现在小作文里exercise：做动词时v. exercising regularly 此句型本局中做主语
做名词时n. 既可以为可数/也可以为不可数（本句为不可数）
主语：regular exercise doing exercise regularly
增强自信心：boost
increase confidence
build
improve
Exercise在表示健康运动时不可数所以这里应该是doing exercise
副词usually修饰动词放在动词的后面表示通常表示频率通常表达为I usually do.. 改：Doing exercise regularly can improve people’s self-confidence.
人们的信心：people’s self-confidence
2.教学质量对学生成绩有很大影响
正确句子:The quality of teaching can make a huge difference to students’ academic performance. 我的句子：The quality of teaching has a serious修饰不当influence of在...方面的影响用on students’academic performance.
quality：品质, 可数N：例如leadership
限定教学质量：the quality of teaching; teaching quality; standard of education
注意:quantity 表示数量
influence
在...方面有影响：have an impact on
effect
或者huge
make a big difference to...
major
学术成绩：academic performance; achievements; levels of attainment
grade/ scores 指分数
只有一种搭配have an influence/impact/effect on应该是academic achievements
补充：对...有负面的/相反/好的的影响
negative
have a damaging effect on ...
opposite
have a beneficial effect on ...
have a negative effect on
be beneficial to
3.家长和老师应该努力去减少小孩看电视的时间
正确句子：Parents and teachers should make an effort to limit children’s screen time.
我的句子：Patients and teachers should try to建议用词伙reduce the time of students’ watching TV中式表达不要直接翻译中文
努力做…：make an effort to do 其中effort既可以为可数也可以为不可数
也可以说make efforts
make every effort
make an effort to do sth
限制看电视的时间：reduce one’s screen time
limit one’s screen time
直译看电视的时间错误记住词或表达screen time
Try one’s best这种四六级的表达建议不要再写在雅思作文里
定从错误应该是which children spend in watching TV，不过这样表达就很啰嗦
4.经济的下滑导致失业率的上升
正确句子：（The）Economic slowdown has led to a climbing unemployment rate. 我的句子：Economic slowdown lead to the increase of unemployment rate. slowdown 是可数名词前面建议加the
此句用完成时：has led to 完成时其中lead to的to是介词后面加名词
现在完成时形式:have/has + done（截止到现在回头往前看这件事完成的结果如何
用法:过去的之前，例句：When he got there, she had left. She was not there.
现在全部完成：He has left.
现成部分完成：We have studied English for ten years
climbing ：形容词修饰名词词组unemployment rate 也可以用increasing；rising 上升：climbing ，increasing ，raising
raise：使…上升
举手：raise your hand
抚养长大：you raise me up
increase 做名词时: increase in表示在...方面的增长
increase of 表示所属关系... 的增长
unemployment 为不可数N
find/seek employment 找工作
Rate 可数名词不要裸奔——unemployment rate
Leads （lead-led-led）后面应该是unemployment rate
5.经济的发展需要更年轻的劳动者
正确句子：A country’s economic development relies on a supply of young workers. 我的句子：the development of economy need如果想用need 主谓也不一致new年轻的用new 我有点怕workers.
经济增长：economic development ——不可数
economic growth ——不可数
劳动力的表达方式
技术工人：skilled labour
labour force 劳动力年轻的劳动者labour 在表示劳动力时为不可数N work force ：为特定的行业工作=staff
worker：可数名词
需要年青的劳动者：不要直译need rely on:依靠；信赖；需要
a large number of 大量的——后面加可数名词复数
a large amount of+不可数名词——of 表示所属关系前后都是名词
a supply of：一批——a supply of young workers.
主谓不一致经济增长有词伙economic development/growth
6. 工作很多的人没有时间去休息
正确句子：People with a heavy workload do not have adequate times to rest and recharge batteries.
