2008年6月份四级作文真题
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write A Letter of Apology according to the outline given below. Y ou should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese.
1.娱乐活动多种多样
2.娱乐活动可能使人们受益，也可能有危害性
3.作为大学生，我的看法。
范文一：恩波版
Recreational activities and study do not contradict each other, in fact, they complement each onter. As the saying goes, "All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy." A life burdened with study and work leads you nowhere, for you would get tired and bored with your daily routine work. On the other hand, proper recreation will relieve the tension and discomfort of our monotonous life because it offers you various ways to let out your pent-up emotion.
What I usually do to relax after scho ol is jogging and seeing movies. Uaually I don?t spare time for exercise ,but I value the physical education class at school. Jogging several rounds in field certainly relieves the days pressure. On weekends,. I?ll catch the morning movie for my visual enjoyment. I feel a vived and energetic for another week?s work-load.
To sum up, I strongly voice all the evidence justifies an unshakable view that our trans-century college students should choose recreational activities appropriately. Therefore, in a sense , only when we pay close attention to it can we see a meaningful extraordinary and harmonious future sooner or later.
范文二：昂立版
Recreational activity
In people?s daily life, there are various recreational activities apart from studying or working ranging from Karaoke or dancing to computer games or sports games.
Such activities are beneficial as well as harmful to us if undertaken inappropriately. On one hand, recreational activities can help us to not only build our body and mind but also improve our communication and understanding with friends because most of these activities are done with others. On the other hand, if we spend too much time on singing, dancing or other games, we might fail to concentrate on our duties such as studying our working, which in turn may lead to further consequences.
As far as I?m concerned, recreational activities should be done within a certain limit so that we can keep a proper balance between recreation and studying or working life.
范文三:江涛版
Recreational Activities
In the era of information and technology, there are all kinds of recreational activities. Some people think those recreational activities are great and necessary, because they can help people relax from the hard work and study. Some of the activities, such as
hiking, jogging, can help people relax physically; while some of them, such as surfing the Internet, can help people relax mentally.
However, some people think that so many kinds of recreational activities may have a bad effect on our lives. Some people may not resist some temptations from those activities, and indulge themselves in those activities. At last they are lured away from their study or their work.
In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the advantages of various recreational activities and make the most of them. Meanwhile, we should learn how to use those activities positively, and make them a helpful tool for our development.
范文四:交大外院版
Recreational Activities
21st century has brought with it an unprecedented variety of recreational activities ranging from traditional outdoor activities such as playing ball games to all kinds of online ones, the latter of which is a great appeal to the young generation. So I?d like to narrow my topic down to online recreational activities.
It goes without saying that various activities brought by modern technology have greatly broadened our horizon and brought much excitement to us. With access to the Internet, you can get to know people from any country in the world and you can talk with them, play games with them --- a temptation very hard to resist, and even see them via web cam. The disadvantage, however, is that anyone who lacks self-control would very easily get lost and become addicted to the online world, which in turn might seriously affect their life, work and interpersonal relationships.
As a college student, I think what really matters is to make better choice and exert more discip line. We?d better take advantage of good online recreational
activities to enrich our lives and broaden the scope of knowledge. When it comes to those addictive, time-consuming and less meaningful activities, I think to stay away from them is a wise decision.
Recreational Activities
With the development of living standard, people spend more time on various forms of recreational activities. People can do sports, singing karaoke, go dancing, go to the movies, play video games or online games, or surf the Internet.
Recreational activities are good to people?s health, both physically and mentally. Sports and dancing can keep people fit. Singing karaoke, playing video games or online games can satisfy people?s imagination. Surfing the Internet can bring peop le a lot of information and knowledge.
However, recreational activities might be harmful if people are addicted. Spending too much time on recreational activities will seriously influence people?s normal lives, especially work and study. Therefore, people will benefit from recreational activities only if they take part in them properly.
范文五: 新东方版
Among various recipes one enjoys in his or her college life, recreational activities can by no means be ignored. It is numerous activities, such as spoken English competitions, sports events, and clubs and societies of different interests, that help to make campus life colorful and diversified.
Facing so many interesting extracurricular activities, we college students have trouble to choose the proper ones. As freshmen, we are confused by all kinds of posters for students? clubs to recruit new members. There are two opposite views
about recreational activities. One says they exert positive influence on a student?s physical and mental development, for they can explore a student?s talent, develop a student's ability in communication, and teach them to be more independent. While, opposite voices can also be heard by asserting that recreational activities waste too much time, and therefore may hinder student from focusing on his or her study.
As for me, I hold a belief that recreational activities do more good than harm, because I have always been of the impression that as a college student, he or she, besides the academic information, should pick up more practical skills to be better prepared for the career development. Recreational activities do give us a good chance. And, so long as one can arrange the time by reason, activities besides study will definitely provide more benefit for us.
作文考试类型
在具体分析此次四级作文题目之前，笔者先对历年四级作文考题的类型做个共性的研究。从类型上讲，历年考题大致可以分成四大类：
1．正反对比论证
2．现象原因，问题解决
3．图表
4．应用文(书信、演讲、海报等)
在上述四类题型中，最后一类是最近几年才出现在四、六级考试中的文体，主要考查考生的英语表达基本功和写作实力，很难有固定模式可言。但是另外三类是四级考试的传统题型，出现频率非常高，可以把握的规律性很强。
这次四级作文题目明显属于第一类，是历次作文中比较简单的一次，即针对某种社会问题，提出两种对立观点，最后要求作者阐述自己的观点。这类题型最早是从美国的托福作文题型借鉴而来，后来被四、六级考试广泛借鉴。但是自2005年6月份之后，由于其自身的古老性和模板化，该题型曾一度让位于其他题型，而今它再次活跃于四级作文考试的舞台。
真题评析
2008年6月份四级作文的标题和提纲如下：
Recreational Activities
1．娱乐活动多种多样
2．娱乐活动可能使人们受益，也可能有危害性
3．作为大学生我的看法
从结构上看，此次四级考试作文提纲还是那种既经典又保守的“三段式”：第一段是一个非常典型的现象引入段，阐述背景，交代需要分析的一种现象；第二段列举两种对立观点，进行正反对比论证；第三段是传统的“我的看法”段，即表明作者自己的观点和态度。
就此次作文题目而言，我们可以在第一段中大致地介绍一下如今的信息社会。第一句可以用一个标准的现象引入句，第二句开始说明如今娱乐活动的多种多样。
在文章第二段，先阐释正面的观点，列举娱乐活动带来的好处。这其中考生们要注意自己的立场，同时要注意各个理由之间的逻辑关系，适当地运用表示层次关系的词语。正面观点阐述完毕后，对娱乐活动可能带来的危害性，可以用一两句话略写，同时附以一两条理由作为理论支持。
最后，在结尾段中，用简单明了的语言表明作者的态度即可。
对于正反对比论证结构的作文，笔者建议写的时候把握好以下三个要点(以本次四级考试作文题目为例)：
第一，在作为引言的第一段中，我们一般要通过各种方法为第二段的主体讨论作铺垫。这些方法主要包括：背景介绍法、大意总结法、引用名言法、场景描写法、设问法等。其中最通用也最好用的方法就是背景介绍法。切忌在文章一开始就进行深入分析，要先简单地引入介绍，然后循序渐进地转入分析。简言之，首句引出话题，如：娱乐活动在社会上引起了热烈讨论(The issue of recreational activities has triggered a heated discussion in the society)；第二句具体说明现状，如：
越来越多的人热衷于参加娱乐活动(Increasing numbers of people are fond of taking part in various recreational activities)。
常见问题：用词匮乏。如：more and more, join等。
基本对策：改词换词。如：an increasing number of, take part in等。
第二，在第二段进行正反两方面论述的时候，考生要注意保持客观的态度，把两方面的观点表达清楚。论述的侧重点可以落在多数群体的观点上。在展开论证的时候，提倡具体形象地论证说明，反对笼统抽象地论述观点，所以可以通过说原因或举例子的方式使文章显得生动。
常见问题：结构不清，缺乏层次感。
基本对策：利用“总—分”结构，分如下三个层次进行论证。
层次1：将中文提纲句“娱乐活动可能使人们受益，也可能有危害性”翻译成英文放在第二段段首作为总起句，做到开门见山：No one could fail to notice both the favorable and unfavorable influence that recreational activities bring to people.
层次2：接下来说明“娱乐活动的益处”，然后用一到两条理由去支持该观点：Recreational activities are good to people's health, both physically and mentally.这其中考生要注意自己所站的立场，以及各理由之间的逻辑关系，在必要的地方添加表示层次关系的连接词。
层次3：接着考生要大胆地推翻前面所述的一些人的观点，用转折性的词语引出另一些人的观点，即“娱乐活动的危害性”。在这个层次中我们同样遵循前文的标准，给出一到两条理由作为理论支持，如：Spending too much time on recreational activities will seriously affect people's normal lives, especially work and study.
第三，第三段要求考生表明个人看法，这里考生可以围绕“取其精华，去其糟粕”的论点，表明针对多样的娱乐活动，可以利用其好处，对不好的地方避而远之：We might as well learn how to avoid some negative effects of recreational activities, when making the most of them.
常见问题：用语过于直白或极端。如：We must...
基本对策：要站在中庸的立场上，客观地评价。如：From my perspective, we should pay more attention to the advantages of various recreational activities.
“Rome was not built in a day.”要写出好的英语作文不是一朝一夕能够做到的，需要循序渐进和长期的训练。相信只要各位考生扎实训练基本功，必能在四级写作考试中取得好成绩。最后，附上四级写作范文一篇，供大家参考。
范文
Recreational Activities
It is a striking fact that the issue of recreational activities has triggered a heated discussion. In the era of information and technology, increasing numbers of people are fond of taking part in various recreational activities (ranging from watching TV, playing cards to surfing the Internet and so on).
Yet, no one could fail to notice both the favorable and unfavorable influence that recreational activities bring to people, because even Achilles has his weakness. On the one hand, recreational activities are good to people's health, both physically and mentally. For instance, sports and dancing can keep people fit, and surfing the Internet can bring people a lot of information and knowledge. On the other hand, recreational activities might be harmful if people are addicted. Spending too much time on recreational activities will seriously affect people's normal lives, especially work and study.
From my perspective, we should pay more attention to the advantages of various recreational activities. Meanwhile, we might as well learn how to avoid some negative effects of recreational activities when making the most of them.
上海理工大学外语学院贾从永
转载自大学英语杂志
2008年6月21日的大学英语四级考试已落下帷幕。这次考试的作文题目又是密切联系生活的大众话题．相信同学们都有话可说。出题的形式又是最常用的汉语提纲式，暗示了文章的框架，只需按照提纲顺序写就可敷衍成文。
但如何安排文章内容，还需斟酌，印勿匆匆厂笔，离题万里。从这次作文的要求可看出第一点宜扩展成文章的引言段。最力便的写法是以描述现象开头，即
先用一、两句话简要叙述娱乐活动的多样性，然后顺势引出主题。
提纲第二点可扩展为主体段。虽然提纲中提到了“受益”和“危害”两个方面，但笔者以为：由于本文应阐明人们该如何娱乐或者参加怎样的娱乐活动，故不妨把较多笔墨花在阐述：…危害??上。因为将不当娱乐的危害讲清，文章的主旨就水到渠成：大学生应该选择有利于身心的娱乐活动。
主体段是文章的核心，最能展示考生的英语功底，既要内容详实，沦证有力，又要在结构上有层次感、连贯性。首先，要有内在逻辑性。比如，在分析原因时，可沿着由表及里、由浅人深、由远而近的顺序；在分析后果叫，可按照由小到大、由轻到重、由直接到间接的顺序。在英语写作中，要write in and in，不要write on and on.
此外，适当地使用过渡词语是加强文章的连贯性和层次感的外在手段。过渡词语就像粘合剂，起着承上启下、穿针引线的作用，可以使内容联系更为紧密，层次更为分明。比如，本文主体段的第三句中使用了转折副词however，就顺畅地从第一、二句的益处转到对危害的阐述。再如，本段从论述对身体的危害过渡到论述对思想的危害时用了worse，二者之间的层递关系便一目了然。
按照提纲的要求，第三点宜：扩展成文章的结尾段。结尾段要紧扣提纲，即从大学生自身的角度简要说明自己的看法和做法，注意人称要转为第一人称“我”。从文章引言段末尾的反问，经过主体段的分析论证，文章的主题已呼之欲山，结尾段用一句话点明主题即可。其次，结尾段还要注意与主体段内容的呼应，在结尾段中作者认为娱乐活动应该“既使人轻松又富有教益”，暗含主体段中的不当娱乐刘人身心的危害。总之，结尾段的写作要取豹尾之势，宜干脆利落，忌拖泥带水，一般不要超过二句话。
下面是笔者撰写的例文。
2008年6月21日大学英语四级考试作文试题：
1，娱乐活动各种各样。
2，娱乐活动可以使人们受益，也可能带来危害。
3．作为大学生，我认为-----
Recreational Activities
With booming economy and rising living standard of its people, China is now home to a vas array of recreational activities. Clamorous merrymakers flock to bars, internet cafes, dancing hall and nightclubs on weekend nights. Some claim that the Chinese are happier than ever before. But are they?
It is no doubt that recreational activities, if well chosen, play an indispensable part in our lives. They provide an outlet for our pent-up frustrations and energies, an occasion for networking and a showcase for our acting talent. However, recreations that are poorly chosen could bring harm to us, either physically or ideologically; or both. For example, over-night internet surfing or online chatting among some college students may cause difficulties for them to stay focused in class the next day. Worse are those who frequent nightclubs or bars that charge high fees for indecent performances such as kissing competition or even strip show.
As a college student, I believe that recreational activities should be both relaxing and enlightening. For me, a weekend dance on campus, a one-day excursion to the beach, or a trip to a painting exhibition will leave me fresh as a daisy.
2008年6月21日四级考试的写作部分考查的依旧是熟悉的老题型，而且是最古老的题型。从话题上看，今年的题目延续了往年的校园生活以及与考生们息息相关的娱乐活动话题，而并非众多考生押题时准备的社会时事话题，如奥运志愿者倡议书、汶川地震等。这一命题思路也提醒着广大考生，四、六级考试的写作题目还是和考研写作一样，关注的往往是社会的“次热点”话题。因此，在备考四、六级作文时，考生们不要把复习重点放在猜题、押题上，而应该扎扎实实地提高自己的语言水平、丰富自己的词汇量、积累经典句型，并把这些作为提升写作水平的根本途径。
其他类似结构的作文
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic The Internet. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 有人认为网络可以让学习、工作更有效率
2. 还有人认为网络让青少年沉迷，进而影响学习
3. 你对于网络的看法
The Internet
In the era of information and technology, the Internet has played an improtant role in our society. With the Internet, it's easy to get the information we need, improving the efficiency of our study and work. We can't deny that it is impossible for lots of people to achieve great success in the modern society without the Internet.
However, some people think that the Internet has a bad effect on the growth of the teenagers. The teenagers are too young to resist some temptations from the Internet. Some of them indulge themselves in the Internet and at last are lured away from the study.
In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the advantages of the Internet and make the most of it. Meanwhile, we should teach the teenagers how to use the Internet positively, and make the Internet a tool for their healthy development.
2008年12月四级作文真题
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Limiting The Use of Disposable Plastic Bags. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:
1.一次性塑料袋曾被广泛的使用
2.造成的问题
3.限制使用的意义
范文
Limiting The Use of Disposable Plastic Bags
Disposable plastic bags were once widely used in China. When we went shopping at supermarkets and departments stores, shopping assistants often provided free plastic bags for our convenience. For a while, life without them seemed unimaginable for most of us.
However, disposable plastic bags do bring severe damage to our environment. Costumers usually threw them away after use, and because they are thin and hard to decompose, these plastic products will exist for a long time. This is an immediate threat to our earth and water.
Nowadays, the government has passed relevant regulations for limiting the use of disposable plastic bags: they are not free any more. In some shopping places, in order to invoke the public awareness of environmental protection, plastic bags are offered in a much higher price. As a result, people are changing their behavior: paper and clothing bags that vanished for a long time come back to our daily life. It is true that by limiting its usage, everyone in this society contributes some effort to the improvement of the environment.
Total: 175 words
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新东方
这是一篇试题中给出汉语写作提纲的作文，对于提纲类作文，学生在写作时应包括提纲中的全部内容，并且应按提纲给出的顺序依次表达。根据提纲提炼出与之相吻合的段落主题句是写好提纲作文的关键一步。因此，首先要审清题，构思好了才下笔，方能事半功倍。
范文的第一段是一个典型的先扩张后收拢式语段。即，第一句点出主题，中间的句子采用举例子的形式对主题句进行扩展，最后一句给出结论。第一句话紧扣题目中的大纲要求，直接对全文即将阐释的问题进行引入，描述了“一次性塑料袋曾被广泛的使用”这一社会现象。表示事实、现状的模板句有很多，我们可根据不同文章的写作内容需要机动、灵活地套用，例如，We cannot ignore the fact that… /This is a phenomenon that many people…/It is common to us
that…/Nowadays, with the development of economy/society等。此外，最后一句中的“seemed”（似乎是，而实际上并非如此）一词形象地把人们已经习惯使用一次性塑料袋的现象表现出来，且有一定的用词宽度。
范文的第二段笔锋一转，谈到我们这种“似乎离开就无法想象”的生活习惯所造成的危害。第二段的主题句为“使用一次性塑料袋给环境带来了危害”。段首的过渡词“However”使用恰到好处，表示对照，具有转折的含义，类似的表对照的过渡词还有nevertheless / while / whereas / on the contrary / on the one hand, … on the other hand,…/ for one thing, … for another, …在这些过渡词中，however 和nevertheless不仅常用于表示句与句之间的转折关系，也常用与表示段与段之间的转折关系；while 和whereas 在图标作文的句子写作中非常有用，表示一个事物的数量或比例增加了，而另一个事物的数量或比例减少了；on the other hand 可以单独使用，不一定上文非要使用on the one hand 不可。此句中“do bring severe damage to our environment.”中的“do”表示强调以及确定。在肯定句中助动词+动词原形的用法表示强调，一般用于加强语气。第二句分析了一次性塑料袋给环境造成危害的原因。最后一句再次强调具体地对“earth and water”造成了直接危害。“an immediate threat to…”此短语表示对……的……(什么程度的)危害。
范文的第三段主要阐明“限制使用一次性塑料袋的意义”。其实限制使用的意义一两句话就可表明，但文章可能会稍显单调，本文第三段紧扣时事，把国家颁布的“禁塑”法令搬出来表明限制使用一次性塑料袋的必要性。同时，作为总结，表明自己的观点“通过限制使用，人们为保护环境贡献出了自己的力量”。尤其是“are changing their behavior”中进行时态的使用给人联想的空间，似乎看到了人们使用“paper and clothing bags”的壮举。“It is true that”是一种表示事实、现状的常用句式，类似的句式还有，We cannot ignore the fact that… / No one can deny the fact that…等。“contributes some effort to…”意为“为……做出自己的努力”。第三段同时从权威性以及个人两方面表明了“限制使用一次性塑料袋的意义”。
主题明确，结构清晰，文意连贯，而且有一些值得考生借鉴的四级写作常用句式及过渡词，用词宽度与巧妙也值得推敲，这是本篇范文的一大亮点。
For many years we have been using disposal plastic bags when we are shopping on the market, and most often these bags are offered by the shops for free. This, undoubtedly, has brought us great convenience in our daily life.
However, its disadvantages are also very apparent, and I?ll just venture to explore two aspects. For one thing, the plastic bags are mostly indecomposable in the natural state so that with the increasing use of these bags, it will not only seriously bring about the so-called “white pollution” to the environment, it can also cost us a lot to have them decompose completely so as to minimize their damage to the environment. For another, the production of plastic bags are often not strictly supervised, so a large proportion of the bags don?t meet the requirements for healthy products, which means the more we use them, the more likely we are to suffer in health.
The negative effects of the plastic bags a re far serious than what I?ve mentioned above, so it?s high time the government issued strict laws and measures to stop using
the bags. By so doing, we can save a lot of money from producing these bags as well as return a cleaner earth to ourselves and the later generations.
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就本文来说，按照题目的要求，第一段需要点明现象，写一下现在塑料袋的普遍使用，这里不需要过度描述，因为本文的重点主要在后面。第二段需要分析一下塑料袋使用带来的问题，一般提两点就可以，比如它会导致white pollution, 影响人们健康，harm people?s health，最后一段是限制塑料袋的意义。其实按照四六级现象型考题的特点，最后一段往往会要求写就这个问题我们该怎么办？但事实是我们国家已经于6月1日刚实行超市的"限塑令"，因此在这里我们可以谈两点意义，比如提高了群众的环保意识，当然需要用到我们在课堂上反复提及的"enhance people?s awareness for environmental protection"。此外最重要的是要尽量避免拼写和语法错误，比如这里很多同学可以需要用到convenient,来解释人们使用塑料袋的原因，或者是phenomenon现象来开题，尤其是题目中的关键词，一次性塑料袋，disposable plastic bags, 在英文标题中本有出现，应充分利用。
2003年1月CET作文题目
Directions:For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic It Pays to Be Honest. You should write at least 100 words according to the outline given below in Chinese.
1. 当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象
2. 诚实利人利已，做人应该诚实
［范文］
Although honesty is believed to be a virtue, there are still dishonest people in our society. For example, some businessmen sell fake product to their consumers; some students cheat in the exams.
Dishonest people are short-sighted. Those who sell fake products may make money at first, but consumers won?t buy their products any more. As a result, they will lose their fortune or even be sent to prison. By contrast, honest people gain a lot.
Those who always tell truth or keep to their promise not only let others trust
them but gain respect from other people as well. Such persons are sure to have a lot of good friends. Because they are trustable and respectable, everyone is eager to make friends with them, Besides, it is easier for a person with a good record to get a good job. Generally speaking, every employer wants his employees to be honest. So we can say that anyone who is honest will be paid back later.
In a word, honesty wins trust, respect and honor. So it is important that we should be honest.
2005年12月24日英语四级作文题目
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists? You should write at Least 120 words following the outline given below :
1．名校校园正成为旅游新热点
2．校园是否应对游客开放，人们看法不同
3．我认为……
范文：
In modern era, there are quantities of people having started to suggest that our famous campus should be opened to our tourists from different places while others suggest not. This problem has caused a heated discussion in our society.
People's attitude towards this phenomenon varies widely. Many people maintain that our campus has its regular arrangement for students? daily study and life. Therefore, we shouldn?t disturb to some extent. So they think that our campus can?t be opened to all. However, as every sword has two edges, others argue that opening campus to tourists is feasible. Every famed college has a long history with which every foreigner acquaint themselves.
All in all, my personal view is that, as the latter above, our campus should be opened widely. This will make more people know our culture and history. Therefore, if we start to manage it properly, our college will be led to a more harmonic and splendid environment in the near future.
Spring Festival Gala on CCTV (2006年12月四级真题） 1.许多人喜欢在除夕观看春节晚会. 2.有些人提出取消春节晚会. 3.我的看法. 范文一： As regards the Spring Festival Gala there has been a heated discussion among the general public in our society. People who believe in its necessity argue that the Spring Festival Gala performed on CCTV on New Year's Eve presenting grand sight and sound has already been considered as an indispensable custom by many Chinese people. By contrast, others hold that the 4-hour show is gradually losing its appeal and should be cancelled. The past two decades has witnessed a steady decrease in the number of people watching the Spring Festival Gale from 900 million to 700 million. With the roaring development of economy, various mass media come out like bamboo shoots after spring rain, making it increasingly difficult to cater to all tastes. As far as I am concerned, I prefer the program to stay. Served as an occasion for families to get together, the Spring Festival Gala is a tradition and treasure of the Chinese people. 范文二 Some people are in favor of the program. Those who like it have their reasons. First, they think that the gala is of tradition to us. What's more, some feel that they can find nothing to do except watching this on the eve of the Lunar New Year. Besides, it is said that this is a good chance for a family to have a rest happily. But others do not agree. People who dislike it have their reasons. Firstly, they say that they can find something else to do. Moreover, they argue that the spring festival gala on CCTV should not have been the most powerful program in this day. There is some truth in both arguments. But it is likely to do more harm than good, if you maintain that it is the only thing to do at that night. Some more meaningful things can be found easily, such as parties, sharing views with families, etc.. There is little doubt that further attention will be paid on this issue. 范文三： It has been a hot topic for a long time whether the CCTV Spring Festival Gala should be cancelled or not. Many people advocate that CCTV Spring Festival Gala offers a wonderful opportunity to celebrate this traditional festival, for the Chinese all over the world can share the same happiness and excitement brought by the TV program. In addition, many performances are very impressive, and some can even positively affect our life value. However, every coin has two sides. Some people hold that CCTV Spring Festival Gala should be cancelled. One of the most significant reasons may be that this form of celebration force people to spend the eve more passively. What’s more, a great proportion of the programs are not attractive enough. As to me, my favor goes to the former opinion, because spring CCTV Spring Festival Gala gives us another option to celebrate this important moment. But it is really essential to improve the quality of the programs. And I hope some better forms of celebration will be created in the near future.（175 words）
2016年高考满分作文议论文赏析 2016·课标Ⅱ卷 阅读下面的材料，根据要求写一篇不少于800字的文章。 语文学习关系到一个人的终身发展，社会整体的语文素养关系到国家的软实力和文化自信。对于我们中学生来说，语文素养的提升主要有三条途径：课堂有效教学、课外大量阅读、社会生活实践。 请根据材料，从自己语文学习的体会出发，比较上述三条途径，阐述你的看法和理由。 要求：选好角度，确定立意，明确文体，自拟标题，不要套作，不得抄袭，不得泄露个人信息。 【思路梳理】 【佳作欣赏】 语文素养来自生活（1108字） 语文，在有的人眼里是简单而又深奥的两个汉字，在有的人眼里是一本印满了晦涩难懂句子的课本，在有的人眼里只是一门需要划定分数的学科。【运用三个?在有的人眼里是……?的排比句，列举众人眼中的语文，紧接着提出自己的见解。】实际上，语文是生活，更是一种素养，是一种品质，潜移默化地塑造着我们的人格。从我们出生开始，语文就在我们的身边，涵养着我们的生活。【提出观点：语文是生活，更是一种素养和品质。】 从牙牙学语时的一声“爸爸妈妈”，到幼稚少年背诵文章的流利熟练，到坚毅青年洋洋洒洒的妙笔生花，再到成熟中老年时的满腹经纶……你所看到的每一个字，发出的每一个音节，写下的每一个笔画，都是语文素养积淀下来的结果。想要成为一个有气质而不低俗的人，首先就要学好语文，提高自身的语文素养。【从人的一生学习语文
的角度说明想要成为一个有气质而不低俗的人，首先就要学好语文。?洋洋洒洒??妙笔生花??满腹经纶?等成语的使用使文章文采斐然。】 有人认为，语文课上无需听老师枯燥无味的讲解，课下花点时间看看就行，“画画字词句，考考试不难”。但是认为只凭自己的“看看”就可以掌握课文内容，这是万万不可取的。老师在课上尽心尽力地讲解，是“听”的重要环节，课堂上回答问题，同学交流，更是自己“说”的有益练习。朗朗诵读，深深思考，与老师对话、互动，是学好语文的重要途径。【纠正了一些人认为?语文课上无需听老师……‘画画字词句，考考试不难’?的错误观点，论述了语文课堂对语文素养提高的重要作用。具有现实针对性。】积极参加社会实践活动，也可以提升语文素养。你有饱满的热情、充沛的精力融入社会，经历在学校中不曾经历的事情，并且在心中对这些事情做出评价。老人家过马路有学生搀扶，你会感到生活的无限美好，在写文章时，心中充满温暖。发现、思考、总结；观察能力、思维能力、组织能力、情感能力提升——这就是语文素养积累的过程。【论述社会实践可以提升语文素养。】【有一颗善于发现的心很重要。学会发掘生活中那些感人的话语、事件。】 然而，最重要的，莫过于阅读。有位作家讲过一个故事：秘鲁一座小城的警察脾气暴躁，市民意见很大，市长想了一个办法，让警察用三天假期读三部文学作品，果然，警察们的脾气有了改善，于是，市民们的怨气也减少了很多。【举例论证】可见，阅读不仅能丰富人的文学底蕴，更能提高人的总体素质。仔细想一下，你不曾渴望过在书的缥缈仙云中漫游吗？打开《诗经》，“杨柳依依，雨雪霏霏”的意境会让许多渐渐远去的日子回到眼前；翻开《史记》，领略那“通古今之变，成一家之言”的雄浑气魄，见证历史上一幕幕的波谲云诡；浏览《山海经》，在“山中奇谭，海外奇观”中漫步，随着古人丰富的想象力自由翱翔。“问君能有几多愁？恰似一江春水向东流”的惆怅，“长风破浪会有时，直挂云帆济沧海”的豪迈，“黑发不知勤学早，白首方悔读书迟”的警醒……字里行间透露出的都是人类绵长的情思和惊人的智慧，每每阅读这些美丽的文字，都能让我们汲取无限的存之不易的人类文明精华，从而让我们的语文素养得到升华。【列举大量中国文学作品里的名言警句论证美丽的文字，能让我们汲取无限的存之不易的人类文明精华，从而让我们的语文素养得到升华。】【大量名言、诗句的引用增加了文章的文学韵味，显示了作者文学功底的深厚。】 酒曲经过长时间的酿造才能制成美酒，同样，语文素养的提升也不在一朝一夕间，需要长年累月的努力和积累，才能完成量变到质变的飞跃。捧一本书，揣摩字句间的深意，体会从书页中流淌出的情感，配一盏清茶，言谈举止间流露出不同于常人的气息，岂不美哉？【设问结尾，深刻有力。】 【品评】本文作者运用了大量的论据来论证论点，旁征博引，洋洋洒洒，尤其是对中国古诗文和名言警句的大量引用，充分显示了作者的文学素养之深。行文思路清
Styles of Living Some people enjoy living together with their parents after the have grown up. They think that by living with parents they can take better care of their parents and vice versa. Meanwhile, they can turn to their parents for help if they get into trouble or have some difficulties. To them, life in a big family seems to be more enjoyable than that in a small one. Others, however, prefer living separately. They cherish the idea of being independent, and wish to have a place of their own. Besides, they don't want to be overprotected by their parents, but long for the opportunities to face the society by themselves. As for me, I like an independent life style. Different generations have different life styles and values. What one generation likes may not be another generation's fondness. In order to avoid conflicts, the best way is to live separately. In addition, by leading an independent life, I can develop my own ability to deal with the difficulties in my life. So I want to live by myself. To Be a Small Fish in a Big Pond or a Big Fish in a Small Pond? There are distinct differences between being a small fish in a big pond and a big fish in a small pond, so it is with working as a subordinate in a large enterprise and presiding in a small firm. With the former, you can derive a deep sense of satisfaction from being a member of a well-known organization such as General Motors, or the Bell. You have the opportunities of learning from experienced executives and knowing about the standard working process. With the latter, you have greater responsibilities and your decision may bring immediate effect. Normally you are exposed to various experiences and expected to do a great many things without much help or guidance, which will indeed improve your abilities. Personally I prefer to work in a small firm, where I have great prospect of promotion as long as I work hard. And I'm sure I'll become an important figure within my small pond. Talent Is More than a Certificate With the increase of students in China’s hi gher education institutions, there is a striking trend of more and more graduates flooding into the market to hunt for a job. Confronted with fierce and cold competition, they must use everything they have to take advantage of the rare opportunities they are given. Sometimes, whether or not they have a certain educational certificate is enough to leave them a success or failure. This practice is not particularly fair or justified. For one thing, the certificate is only a piece of paper that does not reveal one’s actual ability. Sometimes a person’s qualities and capabilities may be hidden inside his or her mind. For another, just as a Chinese saying puts it: “In every art, there is a good master.” It is generally recognized that one’s genuine ability and kno wledge are measurable through social
历年英语四级考试作文真题及范文（2014.12—2010.12） 2010年12月英语四级作文题目 Directions：For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent? You should write at least 120 words folllowing the outline given below. 1. 目前不少父母为孩子包办一切 2. 为了让孩子独立, 父母应该…… （1）2010年12月大学英语四级考试作文范文高分版 How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent? It is nothing unusual to find overprotective parents who help their children in all aspects of life. The question is, are they sure their heart loaded with love will bring good to their children? Let’s look at the real situation of the second-rich generation. Some of them, rather than becoming the second-strong generation, becomes the defeated generation which is notorious for their life focused on consumption rather than creation. Because of the changes of education in history, most Chinese parents, though successfully accumulate wealth, don’t know much about the right value
2006年12月23日英语四级作文真题及参考范文 【Direction】 １．许多人喜欢在除夕夜观看春节晚会 ２．但有些人提出取消春节晚会． ３．我的看法． 【参考范文】 The approach of the Chinese Lunar New Year poses a national issue concerning the necessity of holding the CCTV Spring Festival Gala. Its established status is being challenged by a growing number of people, especially by younger generations. It is increasingly difficult to cater for all tastes. Some individuals deem that it should be canceled or replaced by other programs. These young people focus their attention on other forms of celebration instead of immersing themselves in TV. Despite that, the majority of mid-aged people and senior citizens uphold the importance of the traditional performance. The most striking feature of this gala is its traditionally close link with ordinary people's lives. Most of people view this gala as an annual staple on the traditional Chinese Spring Festival Eve. They all have a restless night and glue their eyes on the television. I am not supportive of the view that the grand gala should be abandoned. Undoubtedly, it plays a vital role in the celebration of Chinese New Year. To increase its appeal and meet young adults' need, the upcoming performance should invite some big names including super stars from Hongkong and Taiwan. We are all eagerly anticipating this unforgettable evening show. 【点评】 本次四级考试作文总体上来说并不是很难。但表现出两个出人意料：一是体裁，二是题材。 对于体裁来说，本次四级作文属于正反对比论证类的文体。比较出人意料，又回到了老的考查模式。很多学生把考前死背的作文模板派上了用场。但是这只能得到最基本的分数。虽然
高考满分作文范文赏析800字 导读：本文高考满分作文范文赏析800字，仅供参考，如果觉得很不错，欢迎点评和分享。 【篇一：困难非吾畏】生于世界上，存于宇宙间，我没有叱咤风云的雄伟气魄，没有武帝扬鞭东指的九死不悔，更没有司马迁成一家之言的宏功伟业，但我渴望陶渊明的怡然自得，渴望能有自己的一片天。 或许，我就像那个摔了跤的小孩，此时正经历炉火的冶炼，家庭，学校，社会的期盼，让我手足失措。虽然摔了一跤，然而我能够再重新爬起，我从来没有怀疑过我的这种能力。 困难非吾畏。我愿自己走下去，摔到了又怎样，失败了又何妨。我只想有一双自由翱翔的翅膀。请让我自己爬起。因为我坚信，一花凋零荒芜不了整个春天；一星陨落，暗淡不了整个宇宙，一次失败，影响不了我对明天的渴望。 困难非吾畏。站在历史的门槛上，捡拾一枚枚成功的贝壳，上面写满了挫折，没有人的一生是一帆风顺的，本为夏阳子，少小越龙门，文采灿华星，铁笔铸英魂。腐刑焉能动，浩志岂自沦，不负男儿志，千秋太史君。成就了“史家之绝唱、无韵之离骚”的他在监狱里过着非人的生活，遭受了人甚耻之的宫刑，然而挫折压不倒他，他不是从挫折中爬起来了吗？ 仲尼厄而作《春秋》，孙子膑脚《兵法》修列；不韦迁蜀世传吕
览。这些伟人达士都是在历经磨难之后才获得成功的，在挫折之后，帝王将相能成盖世伟业；在困难之后，我要擎起明日之朝阳，以经为径，以陌为纬，寻找我向往的桃花源。 我并不畏惧困难，但我极易迷失方向。太多的关心，让我寝食难安，生怕再次走错的路，太多的爱也会使我娇生惯养。我不惧怕困难，我渴望战胜困难的勇气和信心。 在这竞争日益激烈，越来越纸醉金迷的世界里，没有自己爬起的能力就无法长久立足。我热切的希望获得这种能力。 不要用言语打击我的自信，我用激扬的热血再获重生，也不要用手助我一臂之力，我会勇敢的自己站起。不是所有的压力都会有好的收获，必要时，请给我自由的空间。我要感谢所有的关心和爱，但我更加地呼唤属于我的空间。给我自己爬起的机会吧！不是所有的完美都成就人，也并非所有的遗憾都一事无存。困难我不怕，请让我自己站起。 【篇二：跌倒了，渴望自己站起来】小草吐绿于狭窄的石缝，阳光温暖，雨露滋润。 大鹏翱翔于蔚蓝的天空，白云烘托，清风抚慰。 同样，在失败者勇敢站起，从何处跌倒从何处爬起的背后，也定有鲜花与掌声追随，不需要父母心疼地搀起，也无需老师一味地鼓励，更无需社会关切地问候，只需要自己勇敢地爬起。 正如画中跌倒的孩子，他需要的只是拍拍身上的泥土，微笑着站起。如李白“我辈岂是蓬蒿人”“天生我材必有用”的那份自信，如
预测作文20. Should Enterprises Hold an Annual Meeting? 1. 许多单位都喜欢在年底开年会 2. 有人却并不赞成这么做 3. 我的看法 【范文】 Should Enterprises Hold an Annual Meeting? Many companies tend to hold an annual meeting at the end of the year in recent years. The organizers believe both the company and the employees will benefit a lot from it. An annual meeting, if held successfully, can help create a harmonious working atmosphere in the company. Some people, however, are against this practice. They regard it a big waste of money to rent the meeting hall, to pay for the hostess, to eat in luxurious restaurants and so on. Besides, it would contribute to a considerable portion of the financial expenditure of the company. In consequence, it would inevitably lower the amount of money that goes to the employees. In my view, the advantages of holding the annual meeting outweigh its disadvantages. Firstly, the employees can be refreshed after a whole year?s hard working. Secondly, the conference gives colleagues valuable chances to get a further understanding of each other. Moreover, a good annual meeting can help create a sense of belonging in the heart of the staff. 预测作文21. Should Universities Lower Admission Requirements for Celebrities? 1. 近年来很多大学降低标准招收名人学生，有人对此反对 2. 也有人认为这很合理 3. 你的看法 【范文】 Should Universities Lower Admission Requirements for Celebrities? Nowadays, it is not rare to learn that some universities have lowered their admission requirements for celebrity students. Some people object strongly to this admission pattern, holding that it damages the basic rule of fairness in education. In addition, they argue that it would be an insult to college education if a person academically unqualified was admitted. For others, however, this practice is reasonable. For one thing, they say, since a celebrity has made significant contributions to the society, it is understandable that a university lowers its
英语考试作文 英语四级作文真题范文：卖电脑 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an advertisement on your campus website to sell a computer you used at college. Your advertisement may include its brand, specifications/features, condition and prices, and your contact information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. With the life in university becoming increasingly busier, a computer can play a critical and crucial role in the study and connection of college students. However, we, as college students without much money, may find entirely new computers difficult to afford. Therefore, my computer may be an available option for you to take into consideration. The features of my computer are as follows. To begin with, it is a Dell laptop which was bought three years ago at the price of 5500 RMB. Besides, its weight is less than one kilogram and therefore, it is convenient to bring it to
2019年高考满分作文范文赏析【三篇】 【篇一：美器不必满】 容纳其他物体，比如液体和固体的东西，被叫做什么？ 答案有很多。容纳水的是茶杯和脸盆，容纳酒的是酒瓶和高脚杯，容纳沙石的是斗车和土簸箕。 但这些容具，都无法配上一个隽永对称的汉字，那就是“器”。 器是什么？器是一种整齐端庄的存有，用充足完美的自己来盛容其他 一些东西。 国家博物馆的镇馆之宝后母戊鼎，能够被称作“器”。岁月刻下 的青铜锈痕，遮不住精雕细琢的千年遗风。静静望着这尊与人同高的 器具，就能想到彼时它满载贡物，金光辉煌地出现在祭祀典礼上的骄傲。 今年初成功试运行的中国核聚变反应堆“人造太阳”，能够被称 作“器”。这是国之重器，虽然它使用的时间，只有强磁约束激活时 的短短剧聚变一瞬，可即便是空置的机器，也从未褪去任何一分一毫 的价值。 容具和重器的区别，就在于能否在不同的环境下，保持自己的本 来意义。 一只简单的玻璃杯，装上茶水就成了茶杯，倒入白开水就成了水杯，盛满啤酒，就又成了觥筹交错的酒杯。它的用途和价值，跟随所 容纳的液体产生变化。 但重器是不一样的。例如两千年前，后母戊鼎内可能盛放的仅仅 牛羊肉而已，随之被埋入地下，黄土填纳其中；直至现代，清理整洁 的后母戊鼎，再也不会被放入任何东西，可它本身，已经成为了价值 和历史的代名词。
做器如此，做人亦如此。 人的社会，是一个复杂的结构，我们每个人都如同大海中的游鱼，被浸泡在纷扰的大千世界里。金钱、荣誉、地位，有太多的坐标系， 在规定着一个人是怎样的人。 绝大部分人追求一生，仅仅为了成为别人眼中的自己。拥有金钱者，在商业圈里呼风唤雨，得到他人的拥戴；向往荣誉者，在名利场 上前赴后继，只为他人的几句客气；觊觎地位者，甚至贪赃枉法，无 非想要他人的处处逢迎… 不过，当把这些“他人”去掉以后，我们还剩下什么？如果我们 也是一件容器，当把这些“液体”倒出以后，我们又是什么？ 美器不必满，而大才不必寄于他人。 我不否认在凡尘中追求价值的积极意义，但也希望我们都能够寻 求到一份自我世界的宁静。古往今来，多少诗人骚客，都是在生活的 逆境中，离世独处，羽化独立，最终留下了不朽的千古名篇。晋陶渊 明独爱菊，而后人独爱陶渊明，无非是爱他身上那一点儿自由气。 古人云，君子慎独。我想，每个人都需要一个放空自己的机会。 或许是在下班回家的深夜，或许是游赏公园时的小憩。我们理应倒出 体内的一腔滚滚浊世，思考自己究竟想要什么，又希望自己成为怎样 的人。 从来没有哪一件美器，是不经历阵痛和雕琢而生的。愿你成为更 好的自己，能够容纳天地而不满，俯察草木而不骄，栉风沐雨而不危，行路百里而不忘初心。 【篇二：我眼中的浙江精神】 如果你到过浙江，一定会记得闲柳拂水的娴静和美好：有长的堤，白 的沙，红的墙，和时而掠起的燕子。这是浙江江南春晓，秋月春风的 一面。
Should Class Attendance Be Required? Required class attendance is so common at colleges and universities that many teachers and even students themselves simply assume it is a good thing. In fact, required class attendance does more harm than good. There are several reasons that teachers should not require attendance. First, rigid attendance policies do not benefit students' studies. For example, a student may have to give up a lecture which he finds important to his studies simply because of rigid attendance policies. Second, the lectures of some teachers are not always constructive. A student should be allowed to decide for himself whether an in-class experience is worthwhile when his teacher merely repeats material from the textbook or wastes class time by telling irrelevant stories. Finally and most importantly, there is no proven correlation between attendance and performance in a course. A student may never miss a single attendance in a course, but it doesn 't mean that he has acquired the knowledge of this course. Required class attendance policies may secure one hundred percent attendance for a course, but it does not make much sense.
历年英语四级真题作文范文汇总 2014年6月英语四级作文题目： Suppose a foreign friend of yours is coming to visit your hometown, what is the most interesting place you would like to take him/her to see and why? 范文 The most interesting place Dear Pacival, I am thrilled to kno w that you are going to visit my hometown and I can’t wait see you again. I miss everything that happened when I was in your city, and your parents and you were so kind to me that I will try my best this time to make your stay an enjoyable and memerable one. My home town，Changsha, is the capital of Hunan province and best known as the star city for its well developed entertainment industry and tourism. There are numerous places and attractions worth recommending, and Yuelu Mountain is the first one that I’d like to introduce to you. Firstly, in the foot of Yuelu Mountain is the prominent Yuelu Academy. It has an exceedingly long history and its architecture is characteristic of Song Dynasty. Then, after a half hour, we will reach the Bird Forest. There are various rare birds there, and they can sing, perform, and interact with us. After about an hour, we will arrive at the peak, Baiyun Summit. The scenery there is spectacular and we can have a wonderful panorama of the whole city. I bet you must be very excited about all these activities, and the Yuelu Mountain is waiting for us to explore. All you need to do is pack up and go, and I assure you that this trip will be a great fun. Should you have any question and suggestion, please let me know. I am looking forward to your arrival. Yours sincerely, 2013年6月英语四级作文真题答案范文 子：Dad, I'm a bit worried about disposing of nuclear waste(处理核废料) 父：If you can empty the dustbin(垃圾筒) here, you can do anything Directions： For this part，you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views