英语四级模拟作文
例一：
Part Ⅰ Writing
Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled Malting Friends Online. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 1．网上交友现象越来截止普遍。
2．这种做法有利有弊。
3．我的建议。
答案:[高分作文]
With a wide variety of virtual communication tools springing up like mushrooms, making friends online has become increasingly fashionable over the past decade.
This channel of communication enables people to get acquainted with cyber friends from anywhere without any limitations, enriching their life experiences and even extending their knowledge. What's more, it is not rare for some to find their bosom friends and even Mr. /Mrs. Right. But as a double-edged sword, making friends without physically meeting each other undoubtedly has evils--tragedies occur when cyber-friends finally decide to date. Not coming singly but in pairs, some spouses get divorced because one party falls in love with cyber-lovers.
The network renders people convenient and efficient means to get in touch with the rest of the world and we should make good use of it instead of falling victims to it.
[评析]
这是一篇以分析某现象的利弊为主的说明文。
第一段用一句话说明了随着各种各样的(a wide variety of)虚拟通信工具如雨后春笋般涌现(springing up like mushrooms)，网上交友在过去十年里(over the past decade)变得越来越(increasingly)流行。with引导的名词+doing结构是表示原因的经典用法。
第二段用What's more连接了两个好处。其中的亮点词汇有：enable people to get acquainted with“使人们结识……”；enriching experiences“丰富经验”和extending knowledge“拓宽知识面”两个短语用了现在分词作伴随状语；it is not rare表示“并不罕见”，比it is common更有力；bosom friends“知心朋友”；Mr．/Mrs. Right“另一半；心上人”。
第三段话锋一转，利用比喻“就像一把双刃剑(as a double-edged sword)”，引出了坏处。成语Not coming singly but in pairs“无独有偶”的前后讲了两个坏处，恰恰与前一段的两个好处形成对比。
最后一段简洁地发出呼吁：网络给我们提供了便利、高效的接触外界的手段，我们应该好好利用它，而不应该成为其受害者。亮点词汇有：render, convenient and efficient means, fall victim to。
例二：
Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled On Conserving Energy. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 1．能源短缺问题已经非常严重；
2．可以采取节能措解决能源短缺问题；
3．你的看法。
答案:[高分作文]
Nowadays there is growing concern on the serious problem of energy shortage. Many people worry that energy resources on the earth will be exhausted if we use them in an unchecked way. And they believe that the energy shortage will cause serious problems and even crisis.
Conserving energy is one of the measures which have been taken to solve the problem of energy shortage. For example, some countries have a daylight saving system to use less electricity for lighting. Also, some cities have enforced some facilities for saving water at public places such as rest rooms and bars. Still more, some have enforced serious penalties on overuse of electricity, water, and farming land. By these means, people hope the drain on energy resources could be slowed down. In a word, it is high time that serious consideration was given to conserving energy. Only through immediate and effective action, can we human beings survive and enjoy life as desired.
[评析]
节能是当前备受关注的一个话题，因此可说的内容很多，紧紧围绕提纲要求进行阐述是本文的鲜明特点。文章首段直截了当地提出能源短缺这样一个话题，中间段概括说明节能是解决能源短缺问题的重要措施之一，运用并列型扩展法介绍了几种节能措施。末尾段重申主题，再次强调问题的紧迫性和严重性。
本文词语和句型运用自如。如第二段的列举法虽然没有使用first，second 等词语，但使用了Also，still more，使整个段落看起来内容充实，条理清楚。结尾段使用了此类分析问题的作文的典型结尾句型“it is high time that…”。
例三：
Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled On English Learning. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 1．你认为在英语学习过程中存在的主要问题是什么？
2．导致这些问题的原因有哪些？
3．对于解决这些问题，你有何建议？
It is obvious that there are some problems in college English learning. In my opinion, something most discouraging is that many
students find difficulty in communicating with a native speaker although they have learned English for many years.
There are two reasons explaining this phenomenon. Firstly, most of the students, even many teachers of English pay little attention to the use of the language. To them, the most important thing of learning English is to memorize some grammatical rules and enlarge the vocabulary. Secondly, many students have not realized the real purpose of learning English. They hold that they study English to pass tests, not to master a useful tool for their own use.
To change this situation, my suggestion is that more emphasis be put on improving communicative abilities in English. For example, why not advocate that the listening and speaking should be included in the test of English at various levels?
[评析]
作文首先直接提出英语学习中存在的问题，即经过多年英语学习之后，学生依然不能用英语进行交流。第二段揭示并分析产生这种现象的两个原因。主题句为：There are two reasons explaining this phenomenon．扩展句的主要内容：一是对语言运用的学习不够重视；二是学习英语的目的只是为了通过考试。最后提出解决问题而且现实可行的建议，用问句结尾，引起阅卷老师对本文的注意。
本文的语言表达准确，三个段落的过渡自然。文章开头句子明确提出问题It is obvious that there are some problems in college English learning，第二段首句提出产生这种现象的原因有两个There are two reasons explaining this phenomenon，末段的首句用To change this situation来承接上文，最后用for example引出自己的建议。
例四：
Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled Cheating on Campus. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 1．在大学里存在着考试作弊的现象；
2．你是怎么看待这一现象的；
3．如何才能制止这种现象。
答案:[高分作文]
Cheating on exams is becoming a serious problem on campus. 23% of students have ever been found doing so on their exams. Some of them copy from each other, some take out their textbooks or reference books to copy, still some use the modern communication tools such as mobile phone as a way to get related information. It is obvious that cheating on exams has bad effect on students' academic performances as well as morality practice.
Many remarkable factors contribute to the cheating in exams. First,
some students just play time away and want to pass the exam without efforts. And some students are under great pressure from parents and they fear to fail the exams. Second, college or universities must bear the blame for their placing more emphasis on grades than learning. Rigid grading system promotes cheating.
How can such an unhealthy phenomenon be eliminated? In my opinion, there are two ways we can adopt. First of all, a severe punishment should be put into effect to prevent students from cheating. In addition, we shouldre form our examination system to make it a real effective tool to measure students' abilities.
[评析]
本文的第一段指出考试作弊在很多大学里是一个很严重的问题，通过数字说明问题的严重性，主题句的提出显得有理有据。接着列举了学生的各种作弊手段。第二段主题句“Many remarkable factors contribute to the cheating in exams.”显示本段的主要内容是分析考试作弊的原因，分别从学生和学校实行的制度两个方面进行分析。第三段提出根除作弊现象的措施。本文段落之间的衔接自然得体，如第三段开头用了一个问句“How can such an unhealthy ph enomenon be eliminated?”，很自然地将话题转到如何制止作弊上来了。各个段落内部扩展句之间的逻辑层次清晰，分析透彻。如结尾段在阐述采取何种措施根除作弊时，用first of all, in addition表现了两种措施逻辑与意义上的关系。
例五：
Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled On Internet-based Instruction. You should write at least 120 words following the outline below in Chinese.
1. 1．近年来网络化学习发展迅速；
2．网络教育蓬勃发展的原因；
3．我如何利用这种形式充电。
The past decade has witnessed a boom in Internet-based instruction both at home and abroad. Online education with or without record of formal schooling is readily available.
The attraction of the fenceless school for students is obvious. Learners can cast aside the restriction of age, profession or educational background and select freely according to their own need the studying contents. Additionally, with the instructors posting syllabi, reading assignments, and schedules on Websites, and students sending in their assignments online, time and space are no obstacles to anyone. Meanwhile, expenses and resources are accordingly saved for both students and schools. Obviously, webucation broadens the channel of knowledge
reception, realizes learner-centered auto-study and enhances the learners' ability of knowledge acquisition and knowledge updating.
As for me, to enhance integrated quality by selecting some popular web courses annually will be a long-term mission.
[评析]
这是一篇重点在于分析某现象的原因的文章。
第一段用两句话简单说明了过去十年里国内外网络化学习发展迅速这一现象。亮点词汇decade “十年”，比用ten years显得有水平；witnessed“见证”，以时间地点作主语，事件作宾语，表示在某个时间或者地点发生了某事，属于拟人化的用法；boom“蓬勃发展”；(at) home and abroad“国内外”。Internet-based, instruction和Online education是“网络教育”的两种不同表达，体现了用词的多样性。
第二段分析这一现象的原因。第一句是承上启下的过渡句。第二句详细说明了第一条原因：学习者可以不受年龄、职业、教育背景等的限制，自由选择课程。随后一句用Additionally引出了第二条原因：由于教学活动都在网上进行，师生都不受时空限制。紧接着用Meanwhile引出了第三条原因：费用和资源得到节省。最后用Obviously进行升华、小结：网络教育拓宽了接受教育的渠道、实现了以学生为中心的自主学习、提高了学习者获取知识和更新知识的能力。这一段中的the fenceless school 和webucation又是“网络教育”的另外两种表达。其他亮点词汇还有：cast aside, obstacles, accordingly, broadens the channel, learner-centered, enhances the ability, knowledge acquisition, knowledge updating等。
第三段简明扼要地说明自己的打算：每年选几门受欢迎的网络课程来提高自己的综合素质。亮点词汇有：enhance, integrated, annually, long-term mission。
例六：
Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled How to Live a Colorful Life on Campus. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 1．许多大学生希望自己的校园生活能够丰富多彩；
2．有许多方式可以丰富大学生活；
3．对此你有什么建议？
Nearly all students want to make their life on campus as colorful as possible. With a colorful life, a student can feel meaningful and confident. So it is necessary- for students to enrich their campus life. There are several ways to live a colorful life on campus. It is a good choice for students to join various clubs and groups. By doing so, students can make a lot of friends whose interests are similar to theirs. Besides
taking part in the activities on campus, students can also do some social practice, which is necessary for them to expand their horizon.
Taking myself as an example, I love to dance and join the dance club.
I enjoy dancing with my friends and learn a lot from them. Moreover, I take an active part in social practice. Both are helpful to make my life on campus more enjoyable.
[评析]
文章的第一段提出丰富多彩的校园生活可以让学生感到自信，生活得有意义，随之自然地引出学生有必要学着使自己的校园生活丰富多彩。第二段提出使校园生活丰富多彩的两种方法。一种是参加各种俱乐部、学生团体；另一种是参加社会实践。最后一段作者重申主题。以自己为例，让读者知道自己的建议是有据可依的。
短文的第二段在介绍两种方法时没有用first、second一类的词，而是用了besides；最后一段用了分词短语taking myself as an example开头，通过这种方式，可以让阅卷老师觉得语言运用不落俗套。
例七：
Part Ⅰ Writing
Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled College Students' sense of Responsibility. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 1．有的大学生有很强的责任意识，有的却连最基本的责任感都没有；
2．大学生肩负些哪责任；
3．大学阶段是大学生成长的重要阶段，呼吁大学生加强责任感。
Our times witness a striking difference between two groups of college students: those who bear a strong sense of responsibility and those without even a slightest one.
Perhaps some are still wondering--what obligations are undergraduates supposed to take?Obviously, all adult citizens should be responsible for themselves, their families, their societies and their nations. We university students are no exception. Besides, we are expected to be responsible for the institution where we are being educated.
Years at college are the most important period in a person's growth, when we acquire knowledge and find our roles in life, so we must enhance our obligation sense at this crucial moment in order to fulfill our duties well as individuals and members of our families, our schools, our society and our country.
[评析]
本文开头段只用了一句话就说明了提纲中的差距：有的大学生有很强的责任意识，有的却连最基本的责任感都没有。其中动词witness的拟人法使用、短语a striking difference(显著的不同)、strong与slightest形成的强烈对比以及responsibility和one实虚词结合，都是亮点表达。而两类人的定语分别使用了定语从句who bear a strong sense of responsibility和介词短语without even a slightest one，体现了句型的变化多样。
第二段虽然不长，但是段首过渡句Perhaps some are still wondering-what obligations are undergraduates supposed to take?的使用，承上启下，十分自然地引出段落主题：大学生肩负哪些责任。随后给出四个答案：成年公民都应该承担自我责任、家庭责任、社会责任、国家责任。大学生也不例外。而为了突出大学生和一般成年公民的区别，还用Besides补充了“学校责任”。
尾段强调了大学时期在人生中的重要性，并呼吁为了很好地履行我们作为个人以及家庭、学校、社会、国家的成员的职责，我们要加强责任感的培养，呼应第二段。全文以主人公的形象论述，有说服力。
例八：
Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of On Being Volunteers. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.
1. 1．现在很多大型活动都需要志愿者；
2．做志愿者的利弊；
3．如果我有机会做志愿者的话，我会……
答案:[高分作文]
On Being Volunteers
With China becoming increasingly prosperous by the day, large-scale events such as world expositions and sports games frequent this hot land, virtually all of which are thirsty for a large number of volunteers. Apart from gaining some working and social experiences, the realistic advantages to serving as a volunteer are also obvious. Volunteers for the World Expo in Shanghai, for instance, may visit any pavilion after work, which makes them the envy of billions of queuers; likewise, volunteers of Beijing Olympics got allowances, quality uniforms, free riding of bus and metro, etc. More beneficially, their experience may add luster to their resume in job-hunting. But as the saying goes, "A penny has two sides. " The disadvantages to being volunteers are also elephants in the room. Doing voluntary jobs is undoubtedly time-consuming, and to those students, the majority of volunteers, the sacrifice is not only time but
their school work. Besides, longtime exposure to various unexpected weather may do great harm to their health.
But anyway, if I have a chance to be a volunteer, I am sure to try my utmost, because during the course, I will learn how to carry out better team work and how to cope with emergencies, etc. , thus I will mature sooner than otherwise.
[评析]
这是一篇以分析某现象的利弊为主的说明文。
第一段用一句话说明了现在很多大型活动频频在中国举办(with引导的短语简要指出原因：中国日益繁荣)，它们都需要志愿者这一现象。其中语言亮点有increasingly修饰形容词prosperous，表示“越来越”；by the day表示“日益”；large-scale events表示“大规模的活动”；frequent作动词，表示“频频发生”；virtually修饰all，表示“几乎”；of which介词+关系代词，引导定语从句，使句型出现变化；be thirsty for使用了拟人的手法，表达“迫切需要”。
第二段分析了做志愿者的利弊。第一句以Apart from开头，引出了两个“利”——获得工作、社会经验以及一些现实性的好处，随后举了北京奥运会和上海世博会作为后者的例证(likewise自然地把两个例子衔接到了一起)，并用More beneficially说明前者对找工作更有帮助。在转折到“弊”时，用了谚语(But as the saying goes, "A penny, has two sides.")，而成语elephants in the room表示“明显的”，也是闪光用词。Besides连接了两个弊端——耗费时间、影响健康。
最后一段表明了自己的态度——如果有机会，将竭尽全力做好志愿者，同时简要说明了理由：学会合作和应急以便更快地成熟起来。开头的But anyway“但不管怎样(尽管有上述的弊端)”属于过渡词，把第二段和第三段自然衔接到了一起。
例九：
Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Should Foreign Abbreviations Be Banned on TV? You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below.
目前有些电视台禁止在节目中使用外来缩略语
1．对这种做法有人表示支持
2．有人并不赞成
3．我认为……
答案:[范文一]
Should Foreign Abbreviations Be Banned on TV?
(1) Recently, CCTV banned the use of borrowed English abbreviations such as NBA, WTO and CPI in all its programs. (2) Some people applaud the move, maintaining that it helps preserve the purity of the Chinese language. The media is deeply engaged in the ongoing Westernization of Chinese language. (3) If the phenomenon is not stopped, Chinese will be gradually reduced from an independent expression system to a mixture of languages.
(4) Others, however, shake their heads. It is not persuasive, they say, that the media shy away from foreign abbreviations to preserve the purity of the Chinese language and culture. (5) After all, languages' integration is a very complicated process and it's irrational to impose a simple ban on certain words. (5) Besides, the use of foreign abbreviations won't shake the status of Chinese as an embodiment of and the basis of the 5,000-year-old Chinese culture.
(6) As far as I am concerned, there is no need to ban the use of foreign abbreviations on TV. A language is great, not because of its purity, but because of its tolerance to other languages. Chinese is so rich and beautiful because it constantly absorbs words, abbreviations and phrases from other languages. (7) It's totally unnecessary to fear about the disappearance of Chinese if we allow English to mix with Chinese.
例十：
Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Should Schools Offer Handwriting Lessons?. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below.
1. 有人认为学校应该开设书法课
2. 有人则反对
3. 我的看法
答案: [范文一]
Should Schools Offer Handwriting Lessons?
(1) Nowadays, some primary schools and middle schools have offered handwriting lessons to their students, (2) which has lead to a heated debate among people from all works of life. (3) Some people believe that
it is the schools' obligation to cultivate all-rounded individuals. Therefore, handwriting lessons should be made a compulsory course.
(4) However, there are still some people who hold the belief that it is useless for the students to learn handwriting at all. With the development of the computer age, the chances that we use pens are becoming slimmer. Since almost all documents are typed, we only need to learn typing.
(5) As far as I'm concerned, learning handwriting is (7) of essential importance to youngsters in three aspects. (6) To begin with, being able to write Chinese characters is a basic ability as a Chinese, since the language is an (7) indispensable element of the Chinese culture. (6) Moreover, the practice of handwriting can help develop many capabilities, such as the capability of concentrating and learning. (6) Last but not least, as the Chinese characters have an aesthetic function, handwriting can be a (7) crucial way to show the differences of individuals.
[审题] 分析标题和提纲可知，应写一篇议论文。在结构上，根据提纲分三段行文。首段提出正方观点，第二段阐述反方观点；文章重点为第三段，提出自己的观点并给出理由。
[思路一] 第一段：指出有些中小学开设书法课这一现象，并指出正方的观点；
第二段：指出反方的观点，即开设书法课毫无用处：
第三段：分三点分析自己支持开设书法课的原因。
[点评]
(1) 引出文章主题
(2) 非限制性定语从句
(3) 引出正方观点
(4) 转折，引出反方观点
(5) 引出自己的观点
(6) 分三点阐述自己的观点，层次分明
(7) “重要”的不同表达法，词汇富于变化
[范文二]
Should Schools Offer Handwriting Lessons?
(1) In recent years, a number of primary schools and middle schools are offering handwriting lessons to their students. A heated debate arises over whether it is reasonable to make handwriting a compulsory lesson.
(2) Some people hold the opinion that the schools need handwriting classes in order to cultivate all-rounded talents.
(3) Other people, however, tend to believe that handwriting is of little use to the students nowadays．In this computer age, (4) all the students need to do is having a good knowledge of computer programs. Kids today needn't bother to learn the out-of-date handwriting.
(5) In my view, the schools should open up handwriting lesson as a selective course rather than a compulsory one. (6) On the one hand, the burdens that the kids are undertaking are nearly unbearable, thus we
shouldn't make things worse by adding hand-writing lessons into their curriculums. (6) On the other hand, some students who are interested in handwriting can choose to attend the course in their free time or during the holidays.
[思路二] 第一段：指出有些中小学开设书法课引发热议，并指出正方的观点；
第二段：指出反方的观点，即在电脑时代没有必要开设书法课；
第三段：指出自己的观点，即应设书法课作为选修课而不是必修课，并分两点给出理由。
[点评]
(1) 开门见山地提出现象
(2) 引出正方观点
(3) 转折，说明反方观点
(4) 定语从句
(5) 引出自己的观点
(6) 从两方面阐述理由
例十一：
Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Better Early than Late. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:
1. 大学里很多学生总是到考试之前才开始努力学习
2. 这种做法的危害
3. 提出自己的建议
答案:
Better Early than Late
(1) It is a common phenomenon that college students only study hard right before exams. (2) With the final exams' approaching, they become more diligent than ever and try to recite some important facts or rules. They stay up all night studying during the last few days of a semester. However, memorizing so much in such a short time is (3) incredibly difficult. (4) As a result, some students are not capable of getting higher scores. (4) Even worse, college students end up never learning the materials they are supposed to master.
In my opinion, it is (5) better to study early than late because it will give us a thorough digestion of the knowledge we have learned. (6) As an old saying goes, "The early bird gets the worm." Thus we shall make good use of our time and study as early as possible.
(1) 此句式常用来引出某一现象。
(2) with引导的状语从句，表示伴随。
(3) incredibly“难以置信地”，加强语气。
(4) as a result用来引出危害，even worse用来表示结果的严重性。
(5) 紧扣标题，提出自己的观点：Better early than late。
(6) 谚语：“早起的鸟儿有虫吃”，使语言生动活
例十二：
Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Ability or Diploma. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:
1. 很多人认为文凭能说明一切
2. 然而当今社会越来越看重能力
3. 你的看法
答案:
Ability OF Diploma
In the past, few people could receive higher education and acquire corresponding diplomas. So that people with diplomas (1) were regarded as talents (2) without any doubt. However, in today's society, diplomas can not stand for everything any more. Ability is becoming a new judge of talents.
(3) To begin with, college expansion allows more and more people to receive college education and get diplomas, which makes diplomas not so rare. Moreover, there are even people who buy fake diplomas. And that behavior further lowers the value of diplomas. (4) As a result, practical ability is receiving more attention than diplomas.
(5) As far as I am concerned, diploma is on the whole useful, because it is a kind of symbol of ability. We still need to study hard to get the necessary diplomas. And besides, we also need to improve our(6) all-round ability to adapt ourselves to the requirements of today's society. [解析]
(1) regard... as 将…看作…
(2) without any doubt 毫无疑问
(3) to begin with, moreover 使行文更加条理清晰
(4) as a result 用来引出结果
(5) 表述作者观点常用句
(6) all-around ability 全面的能力
Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Will E-mail Replace Hand- written Letter? You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:
1. 许多人认为电子邮件将会取代传统书信
2. 也有人对此持不同意见
3. 你的观点
答案:
Will E-mail Replace Hand-written Letter?
(1) Email is becoming more and more popular as the internet spreads into our everyday lives. With the wide use of internet, Email has(2) an easy access for all. What is more, it is great for speed and convenience so that it saves a lot of time, energy and money. Considering all the benefits of email, people suspect email will replace letter writing. (3) There are still other people who hold different views. They believe that a hand-written letter has a more lasting and significant effect. The time, love, and care that one puts into a hand-written 1etter make it more valued to the maintenance of a relationship. While an email might end up unread in a full inbox, (4) somehow vanished or just disregarded.
(5) Even though email is a great form of communication, I am certain that letter writing is irreplaceable. (6) In no way can a quick email convey and accomplish as much as a (7) deliberate, well-worded letter does. In my eyes, there seems to be no better choice than writing a letter to express deep, heartfelt and profound love.
[解析]
(1) 开篇点明电子邮件的好处以及人们支持使用的原因。
(2) access意为“使用权”。
(3) 反对电子邮件者的观点。
(4) 注意vanish及disregard的使用。
(5) 陈述作者观点。
(6) 注意in no way引导的倒装结构的使用。
作文范文之大学英语四级作文多少字
大学英语四级作文多少字 【篇一：四级考试作文要求及评分标准】 大学英语四级考试作文要求及评分 标准 《大学英语四、六级考试大纲》明确规定：大学英语四级考试写作部分考试时间为30分钟。要求应试者写出一篇不少于120个词的短文；写作命题源于日常生活和有关科技、社会文化等方面的一般常识，不涉及知识面过广、专业性太强的内容。其命题方式有：给出题目、或规定情景、或给出段首句续写、或给出关键词写短文、或看图作文。要求内容切题，文理通顺，表示正确，语篇连贯，无重大语言错误。 大学英语四级作文采用总体评 分(global scoring)方法，阅卷人员从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分表示思想，也要考虑所用语言（英语）是否能清楚而明确地表示思想。阅卷人员根据思想内容和语言表示的总体印象给出奖励分(reward scores)，而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。 现在的大学英语四级考试是710分制，作文部分占15%，满分标准分为106分。阅卷时，作文部分满分为15分，阅卷标准分为5等：2分、5分、8分、11分和14分。 具体评分标准如下： 2分――条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。
5分――基本切题，表示思想不够清楚，连贯性差，有较多的严重错误。8分――基本切题，有些地方表示思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯，语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。11分――切题，表示思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 14分――切题，表示思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯较好，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。 另有各档次标准样卷，阅卷人员参照样卷对考生的作文进行评分，首 先看考生的作文和哪个档次的样卷接近，然后上下浮动1分。字数不足应酌情扣分：110――119词：扣1分；100――109词：扣2分；90――99词：扣3分；80――89词：扣4分；70――79词：扣5分；60――69词：扣6分；50――59词：扣7分；50字以下，扣9分。 只写一段者：0-4分，只写两段者：0-9分（指规定三段的作文）。 白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表示思想的，判为0分。 孙子云：“知己知彼，百战不殆”。想在写作考试中获得成功，就必须首 先了解四级考试的要求和评分规则。下面以一篇题目为“do lucky numbers really bring good luck?”的作文为例来讲述几个最基本的道理。 【篇二：大学英语四级作文】 大学英语四级作文 1．why it is difficult ron college students to find jobs?(大学生求职为何难?)
2021年12月英语四级考试即将开始，下面是小编整理的2021年12月英语四级作文押题及范文，一起来看看吧！ 2020年12月英语四级作文押题及范文一： Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30minutes to write a composition on the topic OnlineGames. You should write at least 120 words, andbase your composition on the outline below: 1)现在有些大学生沉迷于网络游戏，家长和学校对此忧心忡忡， 2)但有人认为网络游戏并非一无是处， 3)你的看法。 【范文】 Online Games As a product of modern computer and theInternet, online games have become very popular among college students. A great manystudents have enjoyed great pleasure and satisfaction from these games. But as we see,some students lacking self-discipline are too much indulged in these games so that their healthand academic performances are affected. This phenomenon has caused much worry fromthe teachers and parents. However, some others argue that online games are not always harmful. They can train theability of youngsters to respond to things quickly. Moreover, they can stimulate theirimagination and their interest in computer science. More importantly, it does bring collegestudents much pleasure and release their pressure greatly. From my point of view, online games are a wonderful entertainment if you play them in areasonable way. When they interfere too much with your study, it is better for you to givethem up at once. Yet if you have enough self-control over them, you can certainly obtain realpleasure and benefit a lot from them. 2020年12月英语四级作文押题及范文二：
[大学英语四级作文十篇]大学英语四 级作文模版十篇 【--考试祝福语】 开头 Recently, the problem of ... has aroused people's concern. 最近,...问题已引起人们的关注. Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.
互联网已在我们的生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色.它给我们带来了许多好处,但也产生了一些严重的问题. Nowadays, (overpopulation) has become a problem we have to face. 如今,(人口过剩)已成为我们不得不面对的问题了. It is commonly believed that... / It is a common belief that... 人们一般认为... Many people insist that... 很多人坚持认为...
With the development of science and technology, more and more people believe that... 随着科技的发展,越来越多的人认为... A lot of people seem to think that... 很多人似乎认为... 引出不同观点: People's views on... vary from person to person. Some hold that... . However, others believe that....
考试时间主题或题目题材体裁命题形式写作类型 校园生活议论文图表作文观点论证型2015.6 Mobile phone and study internet 社会生活议论文图表作文现象解释、 问题解决型 社会热点议论文图表作文现象解释型Parents’role in children’s growth 校园生活夹叙夹议文字描述解释型2014.12 A classmate in college 校园生活夹叙夹议文字描述解释型 A course in college 校园生活夹叙夹议文字描述解释型 A campus activity in college 校园生活说明文文字现象解释型2014.6 Interesting place on campus 考试时间主题或题目题材体裁命题形式写作类型 社会生活议论文图表文字观点论证型2013.12 Internet and study Mobile phone 社会生活议论文图表文字问题解决型 社会生活议论文图表文字对比选择型2013.6 Comparison of doing small things and great things 2012.12 Education pays 校园生活议论文图表文字现象解释型 社会生活议论文提纲式文字问题解决型2012.6 On excessive packaging 校园生活议论文提纲式文字现象解释型2011.12 Nothing succeeds without a strong will 社会生活议论文提纲式文字现象解释型2011.6 Online shopping
2015.6 范文：Writing：家长角色 There are several possible reasons accountable for this phenomenon(中心句). To begin with, family in growing numbers has only one child; therefore, parents oftentimes focus all their attentions on that child and exert much pressure on him or her(原因一). Moreover, numerous parents intend to realize their unfulfilled dreams by letting their children learn what they failed to learn and apply for the college by which they failed to be accepted, because they have become richer and they believe that they have the power to make what they wanted and want come true now(原因二). For instance, my uncle used to be a poor man and his dream that one day he would become a violinist was broken because of lack of money. But he made a fortune by selling coals, and then forced his son, my younger brother to practice playing violin. My brother was a huge fan of sports, but now he has to play violin everyday unwillingly and ofter quarrels with their parents(举例：原来-然后-结局). To sum up, it is unreasonable for parents to control their children’s life(总结句). In order to help them grow happily and healthily, parents are supposed to communicate with their kids about what they are really interested in(建议一，目的句型). Meanwhile, it is about time that parents let their kids make their own choices(建议二，“是时候”句型). Only in these ways will children grow in a psychologically happy environment and realize their own dreams 2014.12 t he Most Impressive Campus Activity Every university offers numerous kinds of activities to enr ich students’ extracurricular life. As one of the young college students, I have benefited a lot from all of these well-organized activities, but the one impressing me most is the debate competition which I took part in last year.
1. The Advantages and Disadvantages of Private Tutoring Private tutoring is “in”. A recent investigation shows that about 80 percent of pupils have private tutors. While private tutoring has both advantages and disadvantages, I feel that we should give more thoughts to its negative effects. Such a popular practice clearly indicates that people are attaching greater importance to education. Many parents either missed the chance of obtaining a good education themselves or have been too busy with their own business. When their children meet with difficulties in study, they are helpless. Private tutoring seems to be the only solution. As private tutoring is usually given on the one-to-one basis, the teacher knows the strong points as well as the weak points of the pupil; and teaching is, in most cases, directly to the point. Private tutoring benefits a lot of pupils, indeed. While on the other hand, private tutoring has its own disadvantages. For one thing, it takes up so much of the pupil’s time that they can hardly find enough time for rest or entertainment, which is essential for kids’ physical and mental health. Besides, some teachers, busy “shuttling” from one family to another, tend to neglect their regular teaching duties. What is more, some teachers are eager to help pupils do well on the test, offering the so-called tips for test-taking instead of helping them acquire
大学英语四级作文万能模板 提纲式作文 1．对立观点式 A．有人认为X 是好事，赞成X，为什么？ B．有人认为X 是坏事，反对X，为什么？ C．我的看法。 Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X. They point out the fact that 支持X 的第一个原因。They also argue that 支持X 的另一个原因。 However, other people stand on a different ground. They consider it harmful to do X. They firmly point out that 反对X 的第一个理由。An example can give the details of this argument: 一个例子。 There is some truth in both arguments. But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages. In addition to the above-mentioned negative effects it might bring about, X also may X 的有一个坏处。 2．批驳观点式 A．一个错误观点。 B．我不同意。 Many people argue that 错误观点。By saying that, they mean 对这个观点的进一步解释。An example they have presented is that 一个例子。（According to a survey performed by X on a group of Y, almost 80% of them 赞成这个错误观点或者受到这个错误观点的影响）。 There might be some element of truth in these people’s belief. But if we consider it in depth, we will feel no reservation to conclude that 与错误观点相反的观点。There are a number of reasons behind my belief. (以下参照辩论文的议论文写法)。 3．社会问题（现象）式 A．一个社会问题或者现象。 B．产生的原因 C．对社会和我们生活的影响 D．如何杜绝。（如果是问题的话） E．前景的预测。 Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental problem. (X has increasingly become a common concern of the public). According to a survey, 调查内容说明这种现象的情况。（或者是一个例子）。 There are a couple of reasons booming this problem/phenomenon. 下面参照辩论式议论文的写法。 X has caused substantial impact on the society and our daily life, which has been articulated（表达）in the following aspects. 参照辩论式议论文的写法。 A dozen of measures are supposed to take to prevent X from bringing us more harm. 参照辩论式议论文的写法。 Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people will ……..
2006年12月23日英语四级作文真题及参考范文 【Direction】 １．许多人喜欢在除夕夜观看春节晚会 ２．但有些人提出取消春节晚会． ３．我的看法． 【参考范文】 The approach of the Chinese Lunar New Year poses a national issue concerning the necessity of holding the CCTV Spring Festival Gala. Its established status is being challenged by a growing number of people, especially by younger generations. It is increasingly difficult to cater for all tastes. Some individuals deem that it should be canceled or replaced by other programs. These young people focus their attention on other forms of celebration instead of immersing themselves in TV. Despite that, the majority of mid-aged people and senior citizens uphold the importance of the traditional performance. The most striking feature of this gala is its traditionally close link with ordinary people's lives. Most of people view this gala as an annual staple on the traditional Chinese Spring Festival Eve. They all have a restless night and glue their eyes on the television. I am not supportive of the view that the grand gala should be abandoned. Undoubtedly, it plays a vital role in the celebration of Chinese New Year. To increase its appeal and meet young adults' need, the upcoming performance should invite some big names including super stars from Hongkong and Taiwan. We are all eagerly anticipating this unforgettable evening show. 【点评】 本次四级考试作文总体上来说并不是很难。但表现出两个出人意料：一是体裁，二是题材。 对于体裁来说，本次四级作文属于正反对比论证类的文体。比较出人意料，又回到了老的考查模式。很多学生把考前死背的作文模板派上了用场。但是这只能得到最基本的分数。虽然
范例一 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Attend Your Classes Regularly。You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese. 1. 现在大学校园里，迟到、早退、旷课是常见的现象 2. 保证学生的出勤率对大学教育的重要性 3. 作为一个大学生应该怎样做 Attend Your Classes Regularly Nowadays it is a very common phenomenon that some university students are late for or even absent from classes. And still there are some students who slip out of the classroom before the class is over. Class attendance has become a thorny problem to both the students and teachers. In fact, it is very important for the students to attend their classes regularly. First, it will ensure you to catch up with the teachers in your learning. That is very helpful to you if you want to do a good job in your study. Second, attending classes regularly is a way of showing respect to your teachers ,too. Your teachers will feel bad if the students do not attend their classes, which, in turn, will affect their teaching and be no good for the students. Third, attending classes regularly will help to form a good habit of punctuality, which is of great importance for the students to do a good job in the future. Therefore, we university students should form the good habit of attending our classes regularly from now on. And some day we’ll benefit from it. 点评：2008年元月三日，中山大学博士发帖称遭导师虐待；2008年元月四日，中国政法大学爆“杨帆门”事件；近几年，中小学老师或打学生或猥亵学生、体罚学生等各类新闻不断曝光，进而引发了师生关系的大讨论。本范例题为四级考试传统的问题解决型的写作，与校园生活密切相关。 范例二 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Students’ Rating of Their Teachers。You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese. 1. 学生给老师打分已经普遍 2. 人们对其持不同态度 3. 我的看法 Students’ Rating of Their Teachers Nowadays, it has become as common in colleges and universities for students to grade teachers as for teachers to grade students. In some universities students’ rating has even become the only source of information on teaching effectiveness.. This, however, has caused great controversy. Some are in favor of the rating system, They hold that since students attend the teachers’ classes every day, they should have their opinion
1. 目前大学接受社会捐赠现象很普遍 2. 人们对这一现象看法不同 3. 我的看法 【参考范文一】 Universities Taking Donations It is common now for people to give and universities to take donations. Many universities, especially those elite ones, can receive millions from the individuals and companies every year. For example, Zhejiang University was reported to have accepted more than 520 million yuan in 2010 from its alumni. People have different views on universities’ taking donations. Some believe that more funds will contribute to a better development of the university, and donations can aid students who come from low-income families. Others, however, argue that colleges shouldn’t accept endowment, since the governmental funds allocated to universities are enough for their development. They also point out that many universities fail to make good use of the donations and most money don’t go to poor students. In my opinion, taking donations benefits not only the university but also its students. Even if most donations are not given to poor students directly, they help update teaching facilities and improve the school environment, which will benefit the students indirectly. Therefore, universities’ t aking donations should be advocated. 【参考范文二】 Universities Taking Donations Donations to universities have become commonplace with the rapid economic development and people’s emphasis on education. Some donations universities receive come from the individuals, most of who are their alumni, while some are made by large companies, domestic or international ones. People differ on universities’ taking donations. Supporters say receiving donation helps universities develop faster. It also provides chances to those willing to promote higher education. Critics, however, maintain that universities are sacrificing independence, since most large
大学英语四级考试万能作文模板 对比观点题型 （1）要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。 1．有一些人认为。。。 2．另一些人认为。。。 3．我的看法。。。 The topic of ①-----------------（主题）is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions of it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------（支持A的理由一）What is more, ③-------------理由二). Moreover, ④---------------(理由三). While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),⑥------------------（理由二）. Thirdly (finally),⑦------------------(理由三). From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------（我的观点）. The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice . （2）给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点 Some people believe that ①----------------（观点一）. For example, they think ②-----------------（举例说明）．And it will bring them ③-----------------(为他们带来的好处). In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing,④-------------(我不同意该看法的理由一). For another thing, ⑤-----------------(反对的理由之二)． Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥------------------(我对文章所讨论主题的看法)． 阐述主题题型 要求从一句话或一个主题出发，按照提纲的要求进行论述。 １．阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义。 ２．分析并举例使其更充实。 The good old proverb ----------------（名言或谚语）reminds us that ----------------(释义). Indeed, we can learn many things form it. First of all,-----------------(理由一). For example, -------------------(举例说明). Secondly,----------------(理由二). Another case is that ---------------(举例说明). Furthermore , ------------------(理由三)． In my opinion, ----------------(我的观点). In short, whatever you do, please remember the say------A. If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you”ll necessarily benefit a lot from it. From Joozone.. 解决法题型 要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径 １．问题现状 ２．怎样解决(解决案的优缺点) In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ------------(说明Ａ的现状)．Second, ---------------(举例进一步说明现状) Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, ---------------(解决法一). For another -------------(解决法二). Finally, --------------(解决法三).
2020年英语四级作文题目范文：废除四六级 作文题目： Should CET-4(6) Be Abandoned 1. 有人认为应该废除大学英语四(六)级考试; 2. 其他人认为应该保留四(六)级考试; 3. 我的看法。 参考范文： There has been a heated discussion about whether to keep the College English Test Band 4(6) in the universities. Some people argue that the test has become an obstacle to the teaching of English on campuses, while others maintain that the advantages of the test outweigh its disadvantages. As far as the first group of people are concerned, they give the following arguments. For one thing, many students spend most of their time preparing for the test, therefore their focus is not on learning English better but on getting a high mark. For another, many teachers don't concentrate on how to improve the students' abilities. They only care how many of their students can pass the test. However, there are many people who believe the test should stay. To begin with, the test is the most effective way to measure how well the students have learned English. What's more, we can come up with some ways to lessen the negative effect. As far as I am concerned, each side is right in a certain way. We have to keep the test so students will have better motivation to learn English. However, we can't attach too much importance to the scores of the test.
四级写作范文必背经典 大学英语四级范文背诵(01) COLLEGE STUDENTS SHOULD ATTEND PHYSICAL EXERCISE Physical exercise is a necessary part of college life. However, still some college students do not like to attend sports activities, they think those activities waste their time and influence their study. Indeed, it is very unwise for college students to keep distance from physical exercise because physical exercise is not harmful but good to them. College students can benefit a lot from physical exercise. First of all, attending physical sports can help students build a strong body, and keep abounding energy. Moreover, physical exercise is an effective way to relief pressure and keep a pleasant move. Besides, by attending physical activities, students can have chances to contact and communicate with others which can help them improve their social skills. Nowadays, all colleges and universities have provided many sports facilities for students to do physical exercises, students can chose freely according to their interests and needs. As for me, I am keen on all kinds of ball games, especially football and basketball. From these games, I have gained a lot, and enjoined great pleasure. To conclude, physical exercise is beneficial to every college students, and therefore do not hesitate to attend sports activities. 大学英语四级范文背诵(02) Online games As a product of modern computer and the Internet, online games have become very popular among college students. Many students have enjoyed great pleasure and satisfaction from these games. But as we see, some students lacking self discipline on too much indulge in these games. So that their health and academic performances are affected. This phenomenon has caused much worry from the teachers and parents. However, some others argue that online games are not always harmful. They can train their ability of youngsters to respond to things quickly. Moreover, they can stimulate their imagination and their interest in computer science. More importantly, it does bring college students much pleasure and release their pressure greatly. Form my point of view, online games are wonderful entertainment if you play them in a clever way. When they interfere too much with your study, it is better for you to give them up at once, but if you have enough self control over them, you can certainly obtain real pleasure and benefit a lot from them. 大学英语四级范文背诵(03) Certificates Craze on Campus In recent years, to get a certificate has become a new craze among college students. Just randomly, ask a student on campus what he or she is busy doing, quite possibly, you may get the answer that he or she is preparing for a certificate of some kind. Why does this craze appear? There are two mainly reasons behind this phenomenon. First, it is the employments pressure that forces college students to get more certificates. With the admission expansion of