如何写好“读写任务”第二部分写作（学案）
I. 如何写出吸引改卷老师眼球的好句？
1. I followed your advice. I went to the supermarket. There I found four chairs. They were in good shape. They were reasonably priced.
使用分词和定语从句合并上述句子：______________ your advice, I went to the supermarket ________________________________________________________________________.
2. The cat walked slowly through the grass. The cat was watching the mouse the whole time.
使用现在分词合并：__________________________________________, the cat walked slowly through the grass.
3. The gold was hidden under the ground. It was safe for many years.
使用过去分词合并：________________________, the gold was safe for many years.
练习：1.Tom was waiting in the queue for half an hour. He suddenly realized that he had left his wallet at home.
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2.The two students were lost in the mountains for a week. They were finally saved by the local police.
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4. 使用定语从句或形容词修饰名词或代词。
1）The house has been turned into an apartment. I was born in the house.
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2）You will have a room in my house. The room is very comfortable. In this room, you will find many things. The things are quite necessary for daily life.
方法一(使用2个定语从句)：You will have a room in my house,
__________________________and ___________ you can find many things that are necessary for daily life.
方法二：（用形容词代替其中一个定语从句，让句子简练）
You will have a ___________________ room in my house, ____________you can find all the necessary things for daily life.
5. 使用介词短语合并（with +O; with+O+OC）
The fire is burning, so I feel warm._________________________, I feel warm.
I lost my bike, so I had to walk home. ______________________________, I had to walk home.
II. 如何写漂亮读写任务第二部分写作？
1. 平时训练要求
1)书写卷面训练：
卷面书写给评卷老师的第一印象非常重要，也是作文能拿到高分的第一道门槛，所谓“印象分”。在高考作文备考过程中，要特别注意书写训练,切忌书写不清、涂涂抹抹。具体要求如下：（1）用纯黑色或颜色均匀的签字笔或钢笔；（2）贴底线书写，保持字母大小基本一致，字母主体部分占行线约一半大小为宜；（3）保持单词间距基本一致，一般为两个字母的位置；（4）错词只用一条横线或斜线划掉，尽量不重复涂写同一字母或单词；（5）每段前空格约4个字母的位置。（3个或5个字母）
2）避开抄袭陷阱：高水平的“抄袭”其实不是抄袭而是改写，是利用原文的信息内容、词汇和句子结构，通过词汇替换和句型转换等手段进行改写。这也正是“读写任务”这种题型所要考查考生是否掌握的写作技能。
3）整篇作文是一个整体，内容要合理安排，语义要连贯，各段之间过渡、衔接要自然，避免对内容要点一问一答式的写作。
2.各段之间过渡、衔接常用句型：
What a touching story, which reminds me of…多么感人的故事呀，该故事使我想起……
例如：Sam’s experience reminds me of my similar experience happening four years ago when I was admitted to senior high school. Sam的经历让我想起了四年前我上高中时发生的类似经历。
I was deeply touched when I read your letter. It’s the first time that I have realized your deepest love for me. 读完您的信后，我很感动，我第一次感受到你对我深深的爱。
But in the meantime, I am looking forward to my new life in the college.但同时，我又期盼着大学生活。
However, life is like a box of chocolate and you’ll never know what’s inside until you open it. 然而人生就像一盒巧克力，直到你打开时，才知道里面是什么口味。
I will be absolutely able to adjust the differences in a short time. 我绝对能够很快适应两者的不同。
解题指导：
近6年的读写任务第二部分写作都是三个内容要点，三个要点内在的逻辑顺序已经安排好，无须考生重新组织。而且，写作内容要点明确，有时候相当于三个问答题，把三个问题回答好就完成任务了。每一段写一个内容要点，这样让评卷老师清清楚楚地知道你已经完成
3.主题句的6种常用写法:
假如你处在那些动物的处境,你会有什么反应？（2009广东高考读写任务要点2）
If I were an animal in the wildlife park, I could feel annoyed when people keep photographing me.
练习：你理想中的大学生活是什么样的？（2008年广东高考读写任务要点2）
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常用词语：In my opinion /in my eyes / as for me / as far as I am concerned/ It is my personal belief that…
明确表示对某观点支持、赞同或反对。
你认为是否应该禁止游客和动物拍照。(2009年广东高考读写任务要点3)
I believe that taking photos with animals should be banned.
练习：你对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的看法。(2010年广东高考读写任务要点1)
_______________________________________________________________________________ 表示支持或赞同的常用句型：
I agree with the statement that …；I am in favor of … ；I appreciate that….; I approve of the idea that…; I believe that …; I agree with what the writer said/says.
表示反对或不赞同的句型：
I disagree with the idea that…; I am opposed to the idea that … ; I disapprove of the idea that…; In some way, I agree with… but…; What the writer said sounds reasonable, but I …
重述要点。不直接回答写作要点，而是翻译要点作为段落主题句。
中学生活和大学生活的差别，以及你打算如何适应。.（2008年广东高考读写任务要点3）
As we all know, college is widely different from middle school.
想家给学习和生活带来的影响。（2011年广东高考读写任务要点2）
Owing to feeling homesick too much, I couldn’t get accustomed to the school life and couldn’t pay attention to my study.
练习：在生活中谅解他人有何重要意义。
_______________________________________________________________________________ 常用词语：play an important role/part in…在……中扮演重要角色;
do harm to = be harmful to 对……有害；
It’s beneficial / vital/ necessary for sb. to do sth. 对某人来说做某事很有帮助/重要/必要
have a bad/good influence/effect = affect… negatively/positively 影响不好/好;
have a close relation /connection with….= be associated with …closely= be connected with…closely和……有密切联系
set a wonderful example to sb. 给某人树立一个好榜样
cultivated my interest in…培养我对……的兴趣；show more and more enthusiasm in…对……表现出越来越多的兴趣= show a keen interest in…
你支持青少年的秘密应该与父母分享的理由是什么？
I insist that teenagers’ secrets should be shared with their parents for reasons as follows.
练习：使我们生活发生变化有哪些原因？
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常用句型：
There are several reasons that contribute to……的原因有多种= Reasons for this are varied.
The reasons for this are obvious……的原因显而易见
… for reasons as follows…的原因如下
The reason why…is that…
study for their family and their motherland rather than giving them money.
练习：说说人们对环境保护所采取的措施。
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We are supposed to take some effective measures.
We should try our best to overcome/conquer the difficulties.
常用句型：It reminds me of the time when…
It reminds me of an accident which happened several days ago.
After reading the story above, I recall the experience of my friend who…
The story above reminds me of one of my experiences…
What a touching story, which reminds me of…
Sam’s experience reminds me of my similar experience happening four years ago when I was admitted to senior high school.
4.拓展句的四种常用写法：
1）列举：1~2点
如：列举学校里的浪费现象
We could see such kind of small things around us every day. (主题句)
要点：教室时……；吃饭时……；吃完时……
For example, when we leave the classroom, we just ignore the lights and computers and leave them on; when we have dinners, we often use the throwaway chopsticks and plastic bags; when we finish some drinks and food, we throw the leftover very casually. (拓展句)
如：作为中学生，我们应该如何配合老师批改作业？（8校联考卷）
What’s more, teachers check over our assignments every day, which is a good bridge for us to communicate with each other.（主题句）
2). 递进：not only...but also...moreover
如：就“互联网给人们生活带来的影响”发表自己的观点
Surfing the Internet brings people more benefits. (主题句)
要点：提供最新信息；改变交流方式；网上购物，方便快捷。
The Internet not only provides people with amounts of latest information, but also changes the way people communicate with each other. Besides, the Internet enables people to go
shopping at home easily and conveniently. (拓展句)
3). 对比：for one thing正面原因；for another反面原因
如：你是否支持该校长暂停表现不好的学生上学。
I believe the headmaster is right to suspend those misbehaving students’ class. (主题句)
要点：一方面，他们待在教室会……；另一方面，不待在教室会……
For one thing, if these misbehaving students are allowed to stay in class, they will negatively
others can learn in peace, but they also can have time to learn their lessons and then behave better when they return.(拓展句)
如：简述老师用红笔批改学生作业的利与弊；（八校联考卷）
Generally speaking, most teachers mark corrections or grade students’ papers in red pens. （主题句）
要点：有人认为用红笔会……；但是，也有人认为用红笔可以……
下面有三篇均以海伦.凯勒故事为中心的例子，如果你要写一篇论点为“Efforts are the most important thing to help you achieve success.”的文章，你会选择哪个例子呢？为什么？
1）The example of Helen Keller best supports the view. Helen Keller was born deaf and blind before she learned to speak. She had little real understanding of the world around her. Fortunately, she had a good teacher and her teacher helped her speak. At last, she could speak normally and gave her help to people who liked her.
2）The example of Helen Keller best supports the view. Helen Keller was born deaf and blind before she learned to speak. She had little real understanding of the world around her. Nevertheless, she made every effort to learn to speak and write. With a great deal of persistence, she finally became a writer and lecturer, who also became an inspiration to all.
3) The example of Helen Keller best supports the view. Helen Keller was born deaf and blind before she learned to speak. She had little real understanding of the world around her, certainly nothing to give her self-confidence. Nevertheless, she believed she could conquer all the difficulties. With this faith, she finally became a writer and lecturer, also an inspiration to all.
小试牛刀：2013年广东省高考英语读写任务
第二节读写任务（共1小题；满分25分）
阅读下面短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文
To many people even the word “work” sounds unpleasant ,not n ecessarily because they are lazy. The same man, who dislikes his job in the factory or even in the office, may work hard at the weekend, painting the house or digging the garden.
What is the reason ,then？In most cases, it is because these people simply do not enjoy the job they are doing. It does not give them any real satisfaction. It may be quite easy, like making up wooden boxes, but it is very boring. Very often they are doing a job which is just a small part of a
much larger one, such as attaching a door handle to a car. But the part they play in actually making the car is so small that they can never say: I have made something!
Yet in modern society somebody has to do ordinary jobs such as cleaning streets because this is the way society is organized, no matter how ordinary a job is, it plays a part in society and therefore deserves our due respect. Society cannot function a single day without the “dull and boring” jobs.
[写作内容]
1.以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。
2.以约120个词谈谈你对平凡工作的想法，内容包括：
（1）描述清洁工工作的艰辛；
（2）假如没有清洁工，环境会变得如何？
（3）你对平凡工作者的看法。
[写作要求]
1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
[评分标准] 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。
解题步骤：
1.看清文章结构：________________________________________________
2.在原文中划出每段的主题句：
定摘要的时态、人称、技巧：删细节、删例子、避免重复；使用概括性名词、短语、
短小简单的句子来压缩长句甚至段落。
3.写出摘要要点（3个，一段一个要点）
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4.用的模版写出30词的摘要。
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拓展句：列举：1~2点: 清洁工起早摸黑，要在严寒酷暑中工作，但是收入不高。
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主题句：_____________________________________________________________________
拓展句：列举：1~2点: 工作环境也会随之变差，导致人们无法高效工作。如果没有清洁工，环境会变得糟糕。街道将会到处是垃圾，臭气冲天，污水横流。在这种环境里，人们的人们的工作环境也会随之变差，导致人们无法高效工作。
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主题句：____________________________________________________________________
拓展句：列举：1~2点: 社会需要各种职业，离不开普通劳动者。我们应该尊重他们的平凡
工作，提高他们的待遇。
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