大学英语四级作文的重点：
1正文
1）三段。
2）三到五个关联词，三到五个从句。
第一段（三句话）：
第一句（主题句）：改写提纲句。
第二句话：写介绍。
第三句话：写作目的。
第二段（四句话）：
第一句话：改写提纲二。
第二部分：写两点原因，或者两点情况。
第三句话或第二段的第三部分：写一个小结。
第三段（三句话）：
第一句话：改写提纲三。
第二句话：
语言第一
结构第二
内容第三
2、做到7个避免：
1）～低级的语法错误。
2）～拼写错误。
3）～用词不当。（没有把握时要勤查词典）
4）～写大话、空话。要有具体内容，即实质性的东西。
5）～多次重复使用相同的词汇或句式。
6）～用写好的中文作文硬译成英语。
7）～随意使用逗号。
2、作文要有闪光点，具体表现在：
1）文章通顺，意思连贯，思维清晰。前一句为后一句作好铺垫。
连接词使用恰到好处。
2）尽量使用书面语，如：分词结构、复合句（宾、定、状、同位语、主语、表语从句等）、虚拟语气、倒装结构、被动语态、
It is 句式等。
3）句子结构尽可能多变，不能死板、单调。
4）尽可能多地使用词组、习惯用语或表达法、俗语和谚语。
5）段落之间要有机地联系起来，各段落既能自成体系，又能与其它段落相互关联，相得益彰。好的作文一般都能前后呼应，
主题明确。
第一节文章开头
1．开门见山法
(1) 现在许多人谈论最多的问题…。他们抱怨说…。
(One of the most popular topics many people talk about now is …)
(2) 目前，我们面临的严重问题之一是…
(One of the serious problems facing us at present is …)
(3) 最近，…问题已引起公众的广泛注意。
（Recently the problem of …has been brought to public attention.
(4) 当被问及当今社会最大的问题是什么时，许多人认为…
(When asked about the biggest problem today, many people say…)
(5) 现在许多人讨论的热门话题之一是…
(One of the hottest topics many people talk about now is …)
(6) 最近，下岗工人成为人们议论的焦点。
(Recently the problem of the laid-off workers has been
brought into focus/brought to public attention.)
2．引用不同或错误观点法
(1) 人们普遍认为…。他们觉得…。但我认为…。
(It is commonly believed that…. They argue that… . But I doubt that…)
(2) 当论及…时，一些人认为…, 另一些人却认为…
(When it comes to …, some people believe that …Others argue that …)
(3) 对…人们的态度各不同。
(Different people hold different attitudes toward …)
(4) 人们对…的观点因人而异。有些人认为…。然而其他人却认为…
(People’s views on … vary from person to person. Some hold that … However,
others believe that …)
(5) 人们普遍存在一种误解，认为…
(There is a common misconception among people that …)
(6) 或许，是该重新审视…态度的时候了。
(Perhaps it is time to reexamine the attitude that …)
3.引用被普遍接受的观点或事实法
(1) 随着人们生活水平的提高，…变得越了来越普及了。
(With the development of people’s living standard, … is
becoming more and more popular.)
(2) 随着科学技术的发展，越来越多的人认为…。
(With the development of science and technology, more and more people believe
that …)
(3) 任何事情都有两方面，…也不例外。它既有好的一面，也有不好的一面。
(Everything has two sides and … is not an exception. It has both advantages and
disadvantages.)
(4) 虽然普遍的观点是…，但最近的一项研究显示…
(Although the popular idea is that …a recent study shows that …)
(5) 最近一项调查表明…。所以有些人认为…，另一些人却不这样认为。
(A recent survey indicates that …So some people take the view that … Others,
however, don’t think so.)
第二节文章主体
一、段落的组成
1. 目前社会上有不少假冒伪劣商品(fake commodities)。为什么
会有这种现象?
2. 举例说明假冒伪劣商品对消费者个人、社会等的危害。
Harmfulness of Fake Commodities
①Fake commodities do harm to individual consumers as well as our society in many ways. ②They can bring about great loss in both properties and lives. ③A case in point is that if a consumer buys some fake medicines, the medicine won’t cure him of his illness but probably kill him instead. ④What’s more, the production of fake commodities is a great danger to our society. ⑤Every one of us has the duty to fight against fake commodities for our society and for ourselves.
二、从主题句到推展句
第三节
图表作文
一、图表写作的模式
图表作文要求考生首先看懂图表展示的内容，然后准确地、条理清晰地进行描述、概括以及最后得出合乎情理的结论，通常模式为：1.图表描述 2.图表分析概括 3.得出结论
二、注意事项
1.图表中所给出的数据一般较多，考生不能在文中一一罗列，而要
去繁就简，抓住重要信息加以描述。凡是印在考卷上的都可以使用。
2.对图表描述后的分析概括或议论要注意符合图表本意，不可泛泛
而谈，要言之有理。
3.文章最后得出的结论要合乎情理。这一结论可以是归纳，也可以
是对未来的一种预测。
Example:
Family Bank Deposits RMB (yuan) Year Average Family Deposits Total Family Deposits 1984 1338 130.5 billion
1990 7869 757.3 billion
1998 32000 2533.2 billion
对图表描述：
The period 1984-1998 saw a great increase in family bank deposits in China’s cities and towns. In 1984, the average family deposits were 1338 yuan while in 1998 it rose to 32000 yuan. Compared with the total bank deposits in 1984, the amount in 1998 was 19.4 times as much as that year.
对图表分析：
Several factors may contribute to this change. First, with the development of reform and open up, the family income has greatly increased and people have more spare money to put in the bank. Second, people are no longer content to buy small items and they save money to purchase more expensive things such as cars and houses. Third, it seems that to put money in banks is still a main investment for most families. Families are willing to deposit money in banks to gain interests as well as to contribute to the construction of our country.
得出结论：
From above analysis, we can see clearly as long as we adhere to reform and open-up policy, the family income will continue to increase and meanwhile the family will have more spare money to put in the bank.
图表作文常用句型
1. The table/diagram/bar chart/pie graph/tree diagram/curve graph /column chart shows/illustrates/reveals/describes/depicts/reflects that/how….
2. The graph provides some interesting data regarding….
3. The data/statistics/figures / number can be interpreted as follows:
4. The data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that….
5. As is shown/demonstrated/exhibited in the
diagram/graph/chart/table, ….
6. It is clear/apparent from the table/chart/diagram/figures that….
7. The vertical/horizontal axis stands for….
8. There was
rapid/noticeable/great/sharp/steep/remarkable/slow/little/slight/grad ual rise/increase/decrease/fall/decline/drop/change in development
in ….
9. The percentage remained steady/stable at….
10. The figures stayed the same….
11. The figures bottomed out/peaked at….
12. The figures reached the bottom/a peak/a plateau during….
信函写作
一、信函格式Heading
(address, Date) Salutation,
Body
Complimentary Close
Signature
二、各部分写作方法
Heading: 信头部分，每行末尾无标点，行内用逗号隔开，位置靠右，先地址（可省）后日期，地址从小到大。
Salutation: 称呼，Dear…, Dear Sir/Madam,
Body: 正文部分，要求语言简练、明确、有礼貌。Complimentary Close: 结束礼语，信函右下方，根据写信人与收信人的关系不同，需选择不同的礼语，如: Yours faithfully, Yours truly, Yours sincerely, Yours respectfully, Yours ever, Yours ever son, Yours等
Signature: 签名，通常签全名。
议论文常用句型
1. It is a fact that….
2. It is well-known that….
3. There is no doubt that….
4. I think that….
5. Contrary to the popular thought, I prefer….
6. Some people say/believe/claim that….
7. It is generally believed that….
8. It is widely accepted that….
9. It is argued/held that….
10. While it is commonly believed that…, I believe….
11. It can be concluded that….
12. People’s views vary from person to person.
第二部分常用于正文段的句型的4类表达方式
一、A、B型作文段落常用句型和表达方式
1. A is completely / totally / entirely different from B.
2. A and B are different in some/every way / respect / aspect.
3. A and B differ in….
4. A differs from B in….
5. The difference between A and B is/lies in/exists in….
6. Compared with/In contrast to/Unlike A, B….
7. A…, on the other hand,/in contrast,/while/whereas B….
8. While it is generally believed that A …, I believe B….
9. Despite their similarities, A and B are also different.
10. Both A and B …. However, A…; on the other hand, B….
11. The most striking difference is that A…, while B….
二、原因分析性段落常用的句型和表达方式
1．There are several reasons for…, but in general, they come down to three major ones.
2．There are many factors that may account for…, but the following are the most typical ones.
3．Many ways can contribute to solving this problem, but the following ones may be most effective.
4．Generally, the advantages can be listed as follows.
5．The reasons are as follows.
三、因果推理性段落常用句型和表达方式
1. Because/Since we read the book, we have learned a lot.
2. If we read the book, we would learn a lot.
3. We read the book; as a result / therefore / thus / hence / consequently / for this reason / because of this, we’ve learned a lot.
4. As a result of /Because of/Due to/Owing to reading the book, we’ve learned a lot.
5. The cause of/reason for/overweight is eating too much.
6. Overweight is caused by/due to/because of eating too much.
7. The effect/consequence/result of eating too much is overweight.
8. Eating too much causes/results in/leads to overweight.
四、举例型段落常用句型和表达方式
1. Here is one more example.
2. Take … for example.
3. The same is true of….
4. This offers a typical instance of….
5. We may quote a common example of….
6. Just think of….
第三部分常用于结尾段的句型的3类表达方式
一、对全文进行归纳总结的句型
1．From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that….
2．Taking into account all the factors, we may safely come to the conclusion that….
3．Judging from all the evidence offered, we may safely arrive
at/reach the conclusion that….
4．All the evidence supports a sound conclusion that…
5．From what is mentioned above, we may come to the conclusion that…
6．To sum up/draw a conclusion, we find that….
7．In short/brief/a word/conclusion/sum/, it is….
8. Therefore/Thus/Then, it can be inferred/concluded/deduced that….
9. From/Through/According to what has been discussed above, we can come to/reach/arrive at/draw the conclusion that….
10. It is believed that….
第四节文章结尾
1. 得出结论性结尾句
(1) 上面讨论的情况看，我们可以有把握地得出……的结论。
(From what has been discussed above, we may safely arrive
at/come to the conclusion that…)
(2) 所有证据都支持一个毫无疑问的结论…
(All the evidence supports an unmistakable conclusion that …)
(3) 把所有这些因素加以考虑，我们自然会得出结论…
(Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally
come to the conclusion that …)
2. 号召性结尾句
(1) 有必要采取有效行动来结束这种局面。
(It is necessary that effective actions should be taken to end the situation.)
(2) 是我们结束…的时候了。
(It is time that we put/urged an immediate end to …/ It is high time for us to end…)
(3) 很有必要采取适当措施来纠正这一倾向，即…
(It is necessary that proper steps should be taken to correct the tendency that…)
3.建议性结尾句
(1) 总而言之，我们应该/必须…。我们应该…。
(In short, we should/must…; we should/ought to….)
(2) 当我们寻求做某事的方法时，我们必须意识到…
(As we look for ways to do something, we must realize that…)
(3) 毫无疑问，需要对…问题加以特殊关注。
(There is no doubt that special attention must be paid to the problem of …)
(4) 意识到这一问题只是在解决这一问题上向前迈出的第一步。我们还应该…)
(Realizing the problem is the first step toward the solution to the problem, we should
also….)
(5) 无论在什么时候，什么情况下，我们都应该…
(At no time and in no circumstance should we….)
大学英语四级写作技巧简介 大学英语四级写作技巧简介 之一——文章结构 英文写作一直是学生们的弱项，四级考试将近，大家都很担心写作问题，在此我先简单介绍一下文章的结构问题，以后再谈其他方面。 四级写作一般以三段式展开，题目要求中通常包含三个要点，每个要点为一段（记住，一定要分段），第一段提出问题，第二段分析问题，第三段解决问题。以历年的真题为例，2006年12月的题目为spring festival gala on cctv，要求：1。许多人喜欢看春节晚会；2。但有些人提出取消春节晚会；3。我的看法。“喜欢看春节晚会”是正常现象，应该作为问题的开端进行简短介绍，“有些人提出取消春节晚会”才是重点，必须给出相应的篇幅做详细阐述。最后表明我的观点，其实就是问作者的态度及解决这个矛盾的方法。又如2006年6月的题目：an announcement for a voluntary program, 要求：1。校学生会组织一次暑假志愿活动现招募志愿者；2。本次志愿活动的目的、内容及安排；3。报名条件和联系方式。这仍是三段式的结构，第一段提出问题——告之大家会举办一次暑假志愿活动，第二段描述问题——介绍志愿活动的相关信息，第三段解决问题
——怎样加入志愿活动（报名信息）。往年还考过写简历，写演讲稿，论述社会现象等题目，总是跳不出三段式，因此学生们必须掌握如何写三段式作文。 总的来说有三点要注意：1。开篇就得点题。文章字数有限，必须采取开门见山的方法，但开篇点题并不是说第一段第一句话就得提出问题，在这之前可以有所修饰，有导入的成分，但不要太长，一般第三句就得清楚、突出地把问题点出来。2。中间段阐述必须清楚。中间段是全文的核心部分，要做到阐述清楚，论证充分，要有一致性、连贯性和条理性。一般由主题句和扩展句组成，主题句是观点的高度浓缩，应该言简意赅；扩展句是对主题句的详细阐述，应该做到理由充分，内容一致。3。结尾段进行总结，并提出解决问题的方法。最后的总结在观点上可以重申但不可以重复，另外结尾一定要有所升华，不能仍停留在对问题的描述上，既然存在问题，就必须想办法解决。 至于如何开端、如何论述、如何结尾的问题，大家敬请期待下一回吧！当然我不会让大家久等的:) 写作能力无法一口气提高，大家必须在平时勤修苦练。 之二——突出主题 well begun is a half done，如何开头是值得注意的问题，它能确定
英语四级优秀作文范文（3篇） 【篇一】It’s Time to Stop Software Piracy 1. 盗版软件比比皆是 2. 盗版软件猖獗的原因 3. 如何打击盗版软件 ●审题概述● 这是一篇主要论述盗版软件猖獗原因和打击盗版软件的措施的文章。第一段，概述中国盗版软件泛滥的情况。第二段，重点分析盗版软件猖獗的主要原因。第三段，侧重阐述打击盗版软件的措施。 【范文】 It’s Time to Stop Software Piracy China has often been criticized for the rampant practice of software piracy. Take a look around. We operate on pirated Windows systems, defend PC security with pirated Kaspersky anti-virus programmes, process files with pirated Microsoft Office, draft 3D designs with pirated AutoCAD, refine pictures with pirated Adobe Photoshop, and study English with pirated Kingsoft’s electronic dictionaries and translators. It’s no exaggeration that pirated software is everywhere. The logic behind the phenomenon is simple and clear: if a pirated copy is available for just a tiny fraction of the normal price, not to speak of many of the free downloads online, who would pay for an authentic copy? Cheaper prices aside, easy access is another important factor. With such a large gathering of pirated upgrades around, who would bother to spend time and money searching the stores for an authorized yet outdated version? Despite these apparent benefits, the practice of software piracy should be banned, because it represents unfair competition and by nature it’s a no-win situation. But how? Two approaches are to be taken at the same time: Technically, software developers should enhance their antipiracy engineering, so that cracking the software should be virtually impossible. And legally, the government should also tighten its antipiracy laws and toughen up the penalties, so that violations should be costly. ◇第一段思路点评：概述中国盗版软件泛滥的现状。 ◇语言点提示： the rampant practice of software piracy猖獗的盗版软件 ◇第二段思路点评：论述盗版软件猖獗的原因。 ◇语言点提示： （1）downloads online 在线下载 （2）authentic copy正版 ◇第三段思路点评：阐述打击盗版软件的具体做法，包括软件商和政府采取的应对措施。 ◇语言点提示： tighten its antipiracy laws and toughen up the penalties加强反盗版立法和盗版惩罚
01:解决问题的多种途径 In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ------------(说明Ａ的现状)．Second, ---------------(举例进一步说明现状) another -------------(解决方法二). Finally, --------------(解决方法三). Personally, I believe that -------------(我的解决方法). Consequently(因 此 --------------(带来的好处). 02：对比选择型 When it comes to ＿＿＿＿ ,different people hold different views . Some contend(主张) that＿＿＿＿. For one thing,＿＿＿＿ .For another, ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿，They point out[指出] that＿＿＿＿ .Another instance[情况] often cited[引用] is that＿＿＿＿ . ＿＿＿＿＿. 03：说明利弊题型 二）. ----------------(Ａ的第一个缺点)．To make matters worse,------------------(A 的第二个缺点)．
Through the above[上文的] analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh[比..更重] the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to ---------------(我的看法)． (From the comparison[比较] between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably[合理的] and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only by this way, ---------------(对前景的预测)．) 04：议论文框架 (1) 不同观点列举型（选择型） There is a widespread[广泛的] concern over the issue that __作文题目_____. But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people think that _ 观点一________. In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____. So it goes without saying that ___观点一_____. People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter. Some people hold the idea that ___观点二_______. In their point of view, on the one hand， ___原因一_______. On the other hand, ____原因二_____. Therefore, there is no doubt that ___观点二______. As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __ 观点一或二______. It is not only because ________, but also because _________. ( 3 ) 答题性议论文 Currently, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)__作文题目_______ .It is really an important concern to every one of us. As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem. As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem. First of all, __途径一______. In addition, another way contributing to success of the solving problem is ___途径二_____.
最牛英语口语培训模式：躺在家里练口语，全程外教一对一，三个月畅谈无阻！ 洛基英语，免费体验全部在线一对一课程：https://www.doczj.com/doc/5914614277.html,/ielts/xd.html（报名网址） [范文9] importance of education the prosperity of a nation depends on the development of education. throughout the world whatever advance has been made in science and technology is due to education, which brings forth by scientists and inventors. it is never overdone no matter how one emphasizes the importance of education. there is no doubt that countries with undeveloped education will remain poor. education is as vital to the development of an individual as it is to that of a nation. of all the elements of success in our careers none is more vital than education. it is not the genius that makes the difference between success and failure. education is the driving power. in fact, most of the famous people in our times spent many years in studies. can you name any great men you admire who are not educated persons? yet some people are still ignorant of its importance. some parents, especially in the countryside, think that it is unnecessary to send their children to school. some other parents are so selfish that they have their children work for money. in consideration of the situation, compulsory education must be enforced to ensure that there will be enough educated young people for the future of our country. [范文10] the importance of self education self education brings success. though we students have teachers to help us, still we should pay more attention to self study. here are some suggestions. first, read outside our class. every new book one reads will benefit him in one way or another. the more we read, the more we are benefited. as life is short and knowledge is infinite, we should try to read as many books as we can. second, improve our memory and reasoning powers. if we read more and more, we can make our memory and reasoning powers improve to some degree. moreover, we shall be able to write more clearly and correctly. third, develop our character. when we have formed the habit of reading, we can put into practice what they have taught and build up a good character. in a word, if we want to educate ourselves, the most important thing for us to do is to read not only our textbooks, but also any other books that are within our reach. 五、图表、信函及其他 [范文1] should women have equal job opportunities with men? this table shows the different opinions about whether women should have equal job opportunities in the following three countries, china, the u.s.a. and japan. as can be seen in the table, the people who agree with this point exceed those who disagree, especially in china. however, there are still some people in the three countries, especially in japan who are against women’s equal job opportunities with men.
大学英语四级考试万能作文模板 对比观点题型 （1）要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。 1．有一些人认为。。。 2．另一些人认为。。。 3．我的看法。。。 The topic of ①-----------------（主题）is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions of it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------（支持A的理由一）What is more, ③-------------理由二). Moreover, ④---------------(理由三). While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),⑥------------------（理由二）. Thirdly (finally),⑦------------------(理由三). From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------（我的观点）. The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice . （2）给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点 Some people believe that ①----------------（观点一）. For example, they think ②-----------------（举例说明）．And it will bring them ③-----------------(为他们带来的好处). In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing,④-------------(我不同意该看法的理由一). For another thing, ⑤-----------------(反对的理由之二)． Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥------------------(我对文章所讨论主题的看法)． 阐述主题题型 要求从一句话或一个主题出发，按照提纲的要求进行论述。 １．阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义。 ２．分析并举例使其更充实。 The good old proverb ----------------（名言或谚语）reminds us that ----------------(释义). Indeed, we can learn many things form it. First of all,-----------------(理由一). For example, -------------------(举例说明). Secondly,----------------(理由二). Another case is that ---------------(举例说明). Furthermore , ------------------(理由三)． In my opinion, ----------------(我的观点). In short, whatever you do, please remember the say------A. If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you”ll necessarily benefit a lot from it. From Joozone.. 解决法题型 要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径 １．问题现状 ２．怎样解决(解决案的优缺点) In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ------------(说明Ａ的现状)．Second, ---------------(举例进一步说明现状) Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, ---------------(解决法一). For another -------------(解决法二). Finally, --------------(解决法三).
四级英语作文模板(精选多篇) 第一篇：四级英语作文模板 四级模板(一般均为议论文) 正文模板: recently,**has become a hot topic of general public in our soceity，especially for those who are faced with this situation. some people take it for granted that......。however ,other people reckon that...... those people who hold the former opinion believe that ……however ,there are still other people who advocate the latter opinion because…… as for me , my favor goes to the former/latter opinion .first of all ,……..what’s more ,……what we must do is to make sure that the positive ones are encouraged and the negative ones are minimized as much as possible. reasons(原因) why should this phenomenon take place ? there are generally many factors , accounting for it . to start with ,svo. moreover , svo. there are some other reasons for it , but i think the factors mentioned above are sound and reasonable . example(举例) while generalization are dangerous , it is quite safe to present solid
1995年1月 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Can Money Buy Happiness? You should write no less than 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1.有人认为金钱是幸福之本(source of happiness) 2.也有人认为金钱是万恶之源(root of all evil) 3.我的看法 [范文]Can Money Buy Happiness? Can money buy happiness? Various people have various answers. Some people think that money is the source of happiness. With money, one can buy whatever he enjoys. With money, one can do whatever he likes. So, in their minds, money can bring comfort, security, and so on. Money, as they think, is the source of happiness. But there are still a lot of others who think that money is the root of all evil. Money drives people to steal, to rob, and to break the law. A lot of people became criminals just because they were in search of money. And in the Western countries, there is nothing that can’t be bought by money. Many people lose their own lives when hunting it. I think that money is essential to life and we cannot do without money. But even though money is necessary to life, it can’t buy happiness. Happiness is not something that can be measured by money. It is a state of mind. One can have plenty of money, with which he can buy whatever he wants, and at the same time he is not happy because he is never satisfied or he is troubled by various kinds of problems. Therefore, although money is necessary for a happy life, it can’t buy happiness. 1996年1月作文题目及范文 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic The Two-day Weekend. You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1. 双休日给大学生带来的好处。 2. 双休日可能给大学生带来的问题。 3. 我应当怎样过好双休日。 [参考范文]The Two-day Weekend The two-day weekend has brought a lot of benefits to college students. It not only offers us more time to get rid of tiredness and have a good rest, but also gives us more chances to take up some hobbies, such as fishing, reading, or gardening. From these activities we can learn many things outside the classroom, which will add to our knowledge. Despite the convenience it brings us, the two-day weekend has also given rise to quite a few problems. The most serious one is that the weekdays are filled with more lesson, sometimes too many. Because our classes are limited to Monday through Friday, we have to take more lessons each day than in the past. This leaves us little time to catch our breath during the weekdays. In order to benefit most from the two-day weekend, I have decided to make a good plan for the two-day weekend. Of course I should take this chance to relax. But during
Brainstormig 1.认真看题，确认所给题目为提纲式（with given outline) 还是开放式(without outline). 2. 根据确定的题目类型，从大脑的资料库中选出适合的模板。 3.对于开放型的题目，要认真的理解（interpretation / comprehension), 抓住讨论的 核心，不要仅停留在现象表面。 开放型的题目的文章设计： 1.阐释从现象挖掘到的问题核心（或通过现象向我们传达的道理） ↓古今论证 2.举例论证：↗中外论证 ↘正反论证※ 3.归纳总结（或对自身的启迪） 提纲式作文题目的文章设计： 1. 指出现象或话题（表述题目）,+ 举例说明（或产生的意义，影响） ↓ 2. 分析原因：主题句+“ 你”“我”“它” + 总结 ↓ 3. 我的观点+ 建议或另一个原因 对立观点式 1．A．点明文章主题 2．B．有人认为X 是好事，赞成X，为什么？有人认为X 是坏事，反对X，为什么？ 3．C．我的看法。 Nobody could deny the fact /phenomenon that … Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X. They point out the fact that 支持X 的第一个原因。They also argue that 支持X 的另一个原因。 However, other people stand on a different ground. They consider it harmful to do X. They firmly point out that 反对X 的第一个理由。An example can give the details of this argument: 一个例子。 There is some truth in both arguments. But I think the advantages of X outweigh the disadvantages. In addition to the above-mentioned positive effects it might bring about, X also may 一个好处。 社会问题式 Nobody could have failed to notice the fact that ________(问题的对象)have
四级写作网络课堂十大必背范文 1、网络游戏 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Online Games. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline below: 1)现在有些大学生沉迷于网络游戏，家长和学校对此忧心忡忡， 2)但有人认为网络游戏并非一无是处， 3)你的看法。 Online Games As a product of modern computer and the Internet, online games have become very popular among college students. A great many students have enjoyed great pleasure and satisfaction from these games. But as we see, some students lacking self-discipline are too much indulged in these games so that their health and academic performances are affected. This phenomenon has caused much worry from the teachers and parents. However, some others argue that online games are not always harmful. They can train the ability of youngsters to respond to things quickly. Moreover, they can stimulate their imagination and their interest in computer science. More importantly, it does bring college students much pleasure and release their pressure greatly. From my point of view, online games are a wonderful entertainment if you play them in a reasonable way. When they interfere too much with your study, it is better for you to give them up at once. Yet if you have enough self-control over them, you can certainly obtain real pleasure and benefit a lot from them. 2、考证热 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Certificate Craze on Campus. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline below: 1)近几年大学校园内出现“考证热”， 2)产生这一现象的原因， 3)你的看法。 Certificate Craze on Campus In recent years, to get a certificate has become a new craze among college students. Just randomly ask a student on campus what he or she is busy doing, quite possibly, you may get the answer that he is preparing for a certificate of some kind. Why does this craze appear? There are mainly two reasons behind this phenomenon. To begin with, it is the employment pressure that forces college students to get more certificates. With the admission expansion of colleges, a lot more graduates have to face the fierce competition in the job market. How can one make himself more competitive?More certificates at hand, maybe. Furthermore, diploma and certificates a re still vital standards by which a good many employers measure a person’s ability. In order to increase the qualifications for a job, the students compel themselves to run from one exam to another. From my point of view, we should be more rational when it comes to certificates, since certificates do not necessarily pro ve one’s ability. Being crazy in getting certificates blindly is
作文1 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Online Games. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1)现在有一些大学生沉迷于网络游戏，家长和学校对此忧心忡忡 2)但有人认为网络游戏并不是一无是处 3)你对此的看法是…… 【思路点拨】 本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出对于某问题的一种反面看法，提纲第2点指出对于该问题的正面看法，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”对该问题的看法，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。 根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出大学生沉迷于网络游戏的问题，阐述家长和老师对该问题的否定态度和他们的担忧；指出一些人对待网络游戏的肯定态度，并阐述网络游戏的好处；表明“我”对网络游戏的看法。 【参考范文】 Online Games As a product of modern computer and the Internet, online games have become very popular among college students. Many students have enjoyed great pleasure and satisfaction from these games. But as we see, some students lacking self-discipline are too much indulged in these games so that their health and academic performances are affected. This phenomenon has caused much worry from the teachers and parents。 However, some others argue that online games are not always harmful. They can train the ability of youngsters to respond to things quickly. Moreover, they can stimulate their imagination and their interest in computer science. More importantly, it does bring college students much pleasure and release their pressure greatly。 From my point of view, online games are a wonderful entertainment if you play them in a clever way. When they interfere too much with your study, it is better for you to give them up at once. But if you have enough self-control over them, you can certainly obtain real pleasure and benefit a lot from them。 作文2 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Machine Translation and Human Translation. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1)现在诸多的电子辞典及相关翻译软件被开发出来，人们不再需要翻阅厚重的字典 2)有人认为以后机器翻译会完全取代人工翻译 3)你是否同意这种观点，为什么？ 【思路点拨】 本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种新兴事物，提纲第2点针对该事物提出一种有争议的观点，提纲第3点要求表明“我”是否同意这种观点，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。 根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述电子辞典和翻译软件的使用现状，引出机器翻译会代替人工翻译的观点；表明“我”对这一观点的态度并说明理由；总结“我”的观点，提出建议。