第三四五个月：托福185道写作思路分析 参考提纲 (1)

托福作文185 题思路1 、同意上大学好.(1)为未来工作进行准备 (2)交更多的朋友，学习他们的思维方式 (3)系统的学习知识2、同意父母是最好的老师（1）父母从小就和我们在一起，给我们很多的知识（2）父母和我们最为亲密，在任何时候，都会毫无保留地给我们知识（3）父母最了解我们，所以他们给我们的建议和意见都是最有针对性的3、（1）食品容易准备，节省了大量的时间，使人们可以做其他事情（2）食品容易准备，为人们提供了更多的花样。

（3）食品容易准备，为人们的健康带来了很多好处4、首先进行比较，然后说书是最重要的来源（1）读书能够节省很多时间（2）书是有系统性的，能够让人以很科学的方式迅速获得知识（3）读书相对比较便宜和容易，而在寻找经验则比较昂贵和困难5、先说明优势和劣势，让后说同意建一个工厂（1）工厂能够吸收附近很多人进行就业，对地方的经济有很大的贡献（2）建立工厂能够促使附近其他的商业发展，例如小商店，药店等等，这可以大大方便附近的居民（3）建造工厂，赢利后，就可以向当地政府贡献税收，政府可以利用这些钱改善社区的服务6、一个重要的改变就是改变环境，让它变的更好（1）环境好能改善人的身体健康，很多人因为环境而生病（2）环境好了，吸引更多的游客来旅游（3）环境好能够促进经济发展，吸引更多的商人来投资7、电影和电视影响人的行为（1）电影和电视能够让人们迅速了解整个国家和世界，丰富人的知识，让人们更加乐观（2）电影和电视让人变的懒惰，不愿意和人接触（3）电影和电视让人变的violent8、电影和电视没有破坏朋友和家人的交流（1）电影和电视的很多内容正是朋友和家人聊天的重要内容。

没有电影和电视，似乎聊天就缺了很多内容。

（2）我们在很多时候是和朋友和家人一起欣赏电影和电视的，这促进了交流（3）电影和电视现在的设计很多是让家人朋友一起参与，这实际上也促进了交流9、选择在大城市生活（1）大城市工作机会更多一些（2）大城市生活相对方便，有很好的商店，交通等等（3）大城市的娱乐也更多，如电影院，博物馆等等。

51、成功来自于仔细的计划（1）仔细的计划可以明确自己的目标（2）仔细的计划可以避免未来可能发生的错误（3）仔细的计划可以提高工作的效率52、改变环境污染，与前题重53、同意工作的最重要的部分是挣到的钱（1）一个人需要养家糊口，如果没有钱的话，不能生存（2）如果一份工作挣钱很少，在社会上的地位仍然很低（3）如果一份工作挣钱很少，无法做一些自己希望做的事情，比如说旅游等等54 同意不应当通过外表来衡量一个人（1）一个人无法决定自己的外表，以外表来衡量一个人是不公平的。

（2）以外表来衡量一个人经常会出现错误，比如说很多有钱人穿着很朴素（3）以外表来衡量一个人，和导致很多争端，对自己很不利55、不同意一个人不应当独自做决定这个观点（1）自己一个人做决定，节省很多时间（2）自己一个人做决定，最后的结果经常是正确的（3）自己一个人做决定，在很多场合下是必须的，所以必须要经常培养自己的这种技能。

如在医院当医生等等56、将钱投入在保护环境上（1）保护环境，有利于人民的健康（2）保护环境，能够更好地促进商业发展。

（3）公司将钱投入到环境上，能够提高自己的名声，更好的获得利益57、我喜欢看喜剧片（1）生活压力很大，所以我看喜剧片能够放松。

比如说MR BEAN（2）喜剧片让人发笑，而经常笑能够让人保持健康，乐观（3）喜剧片人人都喜欢，可以和朋友和家人共同欣赏，增进感情58、不同意商业应当做任何他们能够做的事情来获利（1）商业如果这样做对社会有害，空气污染等等（2）商业如果这样做会影响自身的形象。

比如说烟草公司的形象很差（3）商业如果这么做会使自己的生意破产。

卖假货的公司。

59、喜欢做事情的时候快一些（1）工作的要求。

如果不这样做的话，就会面临非常不好的后果，比如说解雇等等。

如果做的快，就会有奖赏（2）可以让自己有更多的闲暇时间来处理其他事情。

做完后，将宝贵的时间放在其他方面（3）心情更舒畅，有一种成就感，有利于自己的健康。

托福指导：[TOEFL]考试作文185题思路 7-托福指导[TOEFL]考试作文185题思路 7134、同意让儿童做家务（1）能够让儿童理解父母（2）能够让儿童发展一些家务技能。

有些人很早就会作饭，这很好。

（3）能够让儿童体会到成功和失败的乐趣。

作饭做坏了和做好了。

135、同意穿校服（1）保证学生的平等，对学生性格好（2）学生可以更加关注于学习（3）学校的形象很好。

136、不同意（1）玩游戏和朋友在一起，这本来就是快乐的（2）玩游戏能够体会到人生，这也是快乐了（3）玩游戏能够放松，这也很快乐137、不同意。

高中应当让学生学很多课程（1）学习很多课程是未来学习和工作的需要（2）学习很多课程能够让学生交更多的朋友（3）学习很多课程能够让学生体会到很多乐趣。

138 不同意，应当成为团队的领袖（1）当领袖有责任感，领袖总是要做最多的工作，这激励着自己能把事情作好。

（2）锻炼自己的团队合作能力。

（3）能够学到更多的知识。

139、认为LIVING ROOM最重要（1）在LIVING ROOM里面做作业。

（2）和家里人一起交流，听父母给予的经验。

（3）和朋友一起娱乐140 喜欢用机器做的东西（1）机器做的东西比较便宜（2）机器做的东西比较耐久（DURABLE，LASTING）。

（3）机器做的东西更加好看。

141、改变学校的计算机交流（1）提高效率（2）促进学生学习（3）更好的老师和学生的交流142、计算机（1）提高数学水平（2）能够找到更多的信息和交流（3）娱乐143、应当给学生几个短假期（1）给学生短假期，有助于学生休息。

（2）给学生短假期，学生们不至于忘掉以前的学习（3）给学生短假期，学生们可以避免在旅游中的风险144、选择现代公寓（1）工作很忙，不用每天打扫周围的环境（2）公寓的设施比较好，比如说游泳池，桑拿都有（3）住的人多，所以能够和很多人交朋友或者说房子（1）地方大（2）环境好（3）安静145、同意广告让我们买一些我们真正不需要的东西。

1．建造问题◎5. Factory1. Increase employment.2. Bring up the whole area3. Increase tax16. Resturant1. Convenient2. Places for relaxing and get together3. Increase employment25. Shopping center1. Convenient2. Bring up the whole area3. Increase employment30. High school/113. University1. Bring up the whole area2. Increase employment. eg. Cleaner. Cook3. More access to students79. Statue1. Huge contribution to the area. Build factory2. Education system3. Characteristics. Charming129. Business center1. Tax2. More people can learn how to do business3. Bring up the whole area2．品德问题15．Neighbors1. Considerate2. Amicable3. Tolerant18. Boss1. Amicable2. Open to new ideas3. Considerate46. Son or daughter1. Love parents2. Considerate3. Understanding and respect179. Good parents1. Love2. Considerate3. Respectable personality◎93. Roommates1. Considerate2. Amicable3. Tolerant22. Co-workers1. Considerate2. Amicable3. Tolerant3．假设问题6．52. Change in hometownEnvironment 1.health mood2. Tourists3. Business67. Lower salary inexperienced1. Save money2. New ideas3. Accumulate experience85. One day tourMuseum: 1. culture2. Make friends people in them museum3. Artifact86. Go back to hometown childhood1. Beautiful views2. Friends3. Play relax89. Meet famous person from the past1. Huge contribution to the area. Build factory2. Education system3. Characteristics. Charming90. Entertainer/athleteRafael Nadal: 1. Tennis skills2. Personality3. Charity work◎91. Famous person+ question1. Huge contribution to the area. Build factory2. Education system3. Characteristics. Charming98. One thing represents countryPing Pong: 1. National sport2. Exercise+ glory3. Make friends132. InventionMachine which play games with people：1．Exercise2．Relax3．Make friends141. Change in schoolIncrease sports exercise1. Exercise2. Relax3. Make friends156. Country you want to visitSpain: 1.Barcelona football club2. Culture3. Beautiful view176. Create a new holidayHonor person: 1. huge contribution to the area. Build factory2. Education system3. Characteristics. CharmingHow: do good things149. Build a university1. Get higher education2. Make friends3. Bring up the whole area◎69. Study a subjectSports training:1. relax2. exercise3. Make friends165. Do something to communityTeach tennis:1. relax2. exercise3. Make friends4．花钱问题个人花钱：◎56. Company support arts/ protect environmentProtect environment: 1. Health2. Attract tourist3. Business33. Concert/JewelryConcert: 1. Relax2. Meet the musician3. Make friends32. Save money/ Spend moneySave money: 1. For house, car2. Travel3. Get sick185. Business/ houseBusiness: 1. Help tax2. Be my own boss3. Increase employment177. Car/ VacationVacation: 1.Relax2. Make friends3. Learn culture政府花钱95. Outer space/ basic needsBasic needs: 1. Starvation2. Medical treatment3. War19. Roads/ transportationTransportation: 1. Environment2. Convenient3. Increase employment100. Computer technology/basic needsBasic needs: 1. Starvation2. Medical treatment3. War学校花钱11. Sports/ librarySports: 1. Relax2. Exercise3. Make friends147. Put to sports activities1. Relax2. Exercise3. Make friends167. Computers/booksComputers: 1. versatile2. Easy to keep doc3. Practice computer skills5. 原因问题1. Attend university1. Learn professional knowledge2. Prepare for job3. Make friends21. Live longer1. Health condition2. Medical treatment3. Psychological condition168. Study abroad1. Make friends2. Learn a new language3. Learn different ideas, get ready for job12. Visit museums1. Learn culture2. Time limits3. Precious artifacts43. Attracted to dangerous things1. Relax2. Find ourselves, try different things3. Enjoy the accomplishment48. Work1. Accomplishment2. Make friends3. Interest53. the most important aspects of the job is moneyDisagree: 1. Accomplishment2. Make friends3. Interest161. People remember special gifts1. Special meaning. E.g. friend sends card in birthday2. Useful. E.g. History book3. Make changes. E.g. apology cards163. The ability of reading and writing more important1. Find jobs E.g. high tech2. Make friends3. Get information169. Music important1. Relax2. Regulate moods. E.g. big games3. Make friends with same hobbies6. 交友问题62. Friends: intelligent/ humorous/reliableReliable: 1. Trust.2. Frank3. Help me110. Spend time alone/ spend time with friendsSpend time with friends: 1. Make friends. Get to know them2. Learn more things3. More fun111. One friend/ many friendsMany friends: 1. Make friends2. Learn more things3. Relax, More fun117. Friends same/differentSame friends: 1. Understand me. Help me.2. Same hobbies. Play together3. in harmony☆173. Borrow money harm friendshipAgree. 1. Not trust2. Feel pressure about money3. Unequal7. 学习教育问题4. Knowledge and experience1. Basic knowledge2. Cheaper3. Save time14. University class required/optionalRequired: 1. communicate with teachers and students .Make friends2. Ask question during classes3. Disciplines17. Learn by a teacher/ Learn by oneselfTeachers: 1. Ways to study2. Experience3. Communication. Ask question68. Daily homeworkNecessary: 1. Good for review2. Form good habit3. Communicate with friends72. Grades encourage students to learnYes. 1. Accomplishment2. Happy3. Help others75. Many subjects/ one subjectMany subject. 1. Wider choices for jobs2. Make friends3. Learn more things.☆77. Boy/girls attend separate schoolsNO. 1. Make more friends2. Learn from each other. Personality3. More different knowledge107. University available to all/ good studentAll. 1. Learn more professional knowledge2. Make more friends3. Team work sprite108. Learning listening to advice/PersonalAdvice: 1. Trust people2. Avoid repeat mistake3. Some mistake can’t be repeated116. Learning: Doing/Reading/ListeningReading: 1.Basic knowledge2. Aviod mistakes3. Cheap123. Read books real events/people/factsNO: 1. Relax2. Imagination3. Child. Learn124. More important history.literature/science.maths NO. 1. Learn culture2. Job3. Relax125. Study art and music1. Relax2. Find job3. Make friends137. Study the course that the student wants to study1. Learn more things2. Find jobs3. Make more friends157. IBT study/traditionalTraditional: 1. Make friends2. Ask question. Discussion3. Participate in activities175. T eacher lecture/student talkingStudent: 1. Discussion2. Spoken language3. Make friends184. Study alone/ in groupStudy in group: 1. Make friends2. Discussion3. Learn team work spirit8.父母对儿童教育影响2. Parents are the best teachers1. With us for a long time know us well2. Reliable. Trust3. Experience20. Grow up in countryside/Big city1. More opportunity for jobs2. Museum3. Make more friends.23. Have job while student1. Earn money2. Learn experience3. Make more friends61. Parents make decisions for older childrenYes. 1. No experience, make mistakes2. Always love children, make the best decision for them3. Know children66. Classmates are important influence than parents on kids1. with us for a long time2. Ask parents for advice. Experienced3. Reliable76. Learn foreign language1. Easy to learn when kids2. Make friends. Practice3. Learn culture112. Children study/playPlay: 1. Relax2. Character3. Learn4. Make friends133. Childhood years are most important years1. Character2. Learn things3. Make friends134. Help household1. Learn responsibility2. Help parents3. Skills130. Sports.1. Relax2. Exercise3. Make friends9. 个人成功问题10. success hard work, not luck1. Finding suitable job2. Time3. Someone truly understand40. Never give up.1. Study. Never stop trying2. Work3. Life. Setback51. Success taking risk/ careful planningCareful planning: 1. Efficient2. Think about all the factors3. Make sure the goals63. Difficult experience become valuable lessons1. Study, learn a lot of things2. Work. Never make the same mistake3. Life. Never give up115. Make plans/ no plans at allHave plans: 1. Make full use of time2. Cheap. Plan all the things. Travel3. Happy166. Events make children-adult1. Setbacks2. Start to take responsibilities3. Independent131. Only people who earn a lot of money are successful1. Develop the people’s living standard. Scientist2. Revolutionaries, break the traditional rules. Martin Luther King3. Help others. Charity. Mother Teresa.42. One skill in the world to be successfu lComputer skills: 1. Communication2. Efficiency3. Needed. Development in technology13. Eat outside/ eat at homeEat at home: 1. cheap2. Cook better food3. Cook with friends31. Staying in one place/ Moving in different placesMoving: 1. Learn more about culture2. Make friends3. Better development103. Most important character to successPerseverance: 1. face setbacks2. Stick to the end3. Work the hardest10. 生活习惯9. Live in big city/small townBig city. 1. More access to shopping malls2. Better education3. More friends44. Travel with companion/ Travel aloneCompanion. 1. Make friends, strengthen friendship2. Learn more3. Safer27. Do things they do not enjoyYes. 1. Make a living. Do what they can. Jobs2. Development. Work hard. Study3. White lies.50. Do things when ready/ Take risksTake risks. 1. Make friends2. Challenges. Learn more things3. Discover new fortes.45. Get up early/ Get up lateGet up early. 1. Good for health2. Exercise in the morning3. Work in the morning important59. Hurry/ slower pace in lifeSlower pace. 1. Relax2. Good for health3. Good for friendships and relationship64. Work for someone else or own a businessOwn a business. 1. Make friends2. Learn a lot of things. Experience3. Achievements. Challenges.71. Money, time with friendsLower money, more time with friends and family1. Relax2. Make more friends. Important3. Friends and family are the preconditions for a good job 92. Weather change/ sameSame. 1. Beautiful views2. Cheap, same clothes3. Go outdoors146. Outside/ Inside activitiesOutside. 1. Beautiful views2. Relax3. Make friends101. Work by hand/ Work by machinesMachines. 1. More efficient2. Save strength3. Bring convenience to others◎118. New experience/ Stay the sameNew experience. 1. Make new friends2. Learn more things3. More opportunity140. Items made by hands/ MachinesMachines. 1. Cheap2. Beautiful3. Durable144. Traditional house/ Modern apartmentModern house. 1. House big. Light. Comfortable2. Facilities. Swimming pool, exercise3. Make friends24. Like/dislike living in the townLike: 1. culture2. Food3. PeopleDislike: 1. environment97. Teachers should be paid according how much their students learn1. Can not measure accurately2. Some students do not learn, even if the teachers are really trying3. Give students too much pressure99. Assign roommate/ Choose roommateChoose roommate. 1. Hobbies2. Character3. Living customs102. Students evaluate teachers1. Know about the teacher. Direct, what is right, what is wrong?2. Improve teachers, supervise3. Good for competition105. Living on campus/ Living in communityLiving in campus. 1. Close to school, travel easy2. Safe3. Make friends139. Most important room.Living room. 1. Big. Comfortable2. Relax3. Meet friends172. School helps new students1. Advisor in courses2. Hot line for help3. Financial support96. Way to reduce stressPlaying sports. 1. Relax2. Exercise3. Make friends. Team work spirit47. Large company/ Small companyLarge company. 1. Make more friends2. More space for promotion3. More opportunity for studying, better jobs, higher status 160. Complain in person/ in writing1. Not to break relationship2. Make things clear, writing think it over3. Control temper.11. 环境，动物，植物，土地29. Human activity makes the earth a better place/damagedDamage: 1. environment2. War3. Resource41. Farmland, housing, industry more important than endangered animals NO. 1. Ecology2. Biology. Animal chain3. Environment181. More land natural condition/ develop for housing1. More people2. Economic3. Factory182. Close relationship with petsGood. 1. Be with us when we are lonely2. No trouble3. Quiet. Good listener151. Most important animalDogs. 1. Friend2. Door keeper3. Teach kids to love animals152. Disappearing resource1. Environment2. Animal habitat3. Money to change that situation153. A zoo has no useful purpose1. Save the endangered animals2. Teach kids sth about animals3. Teach people to protect animals154. No smoking1. Good for people’s health2. Passive smokers3. Avoid fire155. Plant important in your countryFood plant. 1. More people2. Not enough food3. Delicious12. 技术。

托福写作通过练习材料列提纲第一篇：托福写作通过练习材料列提纲官方网站：托福写作通过练习材料列提纲有了语言基础的双腿，还要有思路，例子来做躯干。

练习材料主要是TWE185题目和机经上的独立写作题。

对于写作基础不太好的“非牛”，建议可以练习传统的“开头段+2、3段中间段+结尾段”的方式。

基础较好了，也可以写的灵活些：对某个一两观点展得较开，对某一两个事例说得详细，行文上相对松散，但是和上下文保持连贯性，和中心思想保持一致性。

审题后，先决定总体思路，然后列出两三个具体的分论点，每个论点找出一些例子来说明。

这里要注意，例子的选择，尽可能生活化，生动化，形象化不要太死板。

背诵精彩的句子或段落这个背诵的对象，可以是精彩的句子，也可以是一个段落，甚至全文。

材料上，可以是上述的几本范文书的内容，也可以是其他优秀的英语文章。

不过总的来说，还是选择和托福作文接近，语言地道，漂亮的文章比较好。

托福写作范文以外的文章，可以背诵新概念3、4册的一些文章，具体篇目在上文已经推荐过。

新概念的文章，语言相对上述范文来说，更地道一些，而且其排篇布局，修辞手法，也可以借鉴参考。

对于英语基础不太扎实的“非牛”，尤其是语法掌握不佳的“非牛”，建议背诵的时候最好配以相关的参考书。

看真题范文书和指导性参考书如果写作的基础不理想，建议踏踏实实从看范文做起。

上面推荐的三份范文都是很好的材料。

看的时候，一看语言，具体如注意里面词汇，句式的运用，注意收集相关的词句，尤其是同义词;二看思路和结构，分析文章是如何进行阐述、论证的，注意范文结构上的布局，包括那些看似细小的连接词。

看范文的时候，还可以根据旧真题内容上的分类来集中看若干题材相近的文章，新版的两本范文书(胡敏和李笑来)或已经进行了分类编排，或提供了分类列表，看分类后的分文可以在一定程度上提高复习效率。

“挑战满分”等指导性参考书，则可以在复习初期就看起来，根据书中的建议，安排相应的复习。

当然，综合性指导教材，特别是OG上关于写作的建议，北极星教师用书上的范文，都是很好的学习内容。

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61. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents or other adult relatives should make important decisions for their older (15 to 18 year-old) teenage children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.同意：1）⽗母可以使他们避免犯⼤错。

2）⽗母还可以为他们做出更好的决定。

3）重⼤决定往往涉及到⽗母的⾦钱，所以也应该由⽗母做决定。

62. What do you want most in a friend — someone who is intelligent, or someone who has a sense of humor, or someone who is reliable? Which one of these characteristics is most important to you? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your choice.我最希望我的朋友可靠1）⼀个可靠的朋友能够在最困难的时候帮助你2）⼀个可靠的朋友不会欺骗你3）⼀个可靠的朋友不会浪费你的时间。

等朋友出去玩等等63. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future. Use reasons and specific examples to support our answer.同意1）学习⾟苦，却学到了知识，终⽣受⽤2）创业艰苦，却增长了才⼲，成就了事业3）举⽬⽆亲，却塑造了⾃⽴性格64. Some people prefer to work for themselves or own a business. Others prefer to work for an employer. Would you rather be self-employed, work for someone else, or own a business? Use specific reasons to explain your choice.选择拥有⽣意（理由同185）：1）可以更有创造性地⼯作2）可以实现个⼈价值，更有成就感3）可以为社会和⾃⼰创造更多财富65. Should a city try to preserve its old, historic buildings or destroy them and replace them with modern buildings? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.⼀个城市应当保留⽼的，历史性的建筑1）⽼的历史性的建筑是城市的象征，没有这些建筑，城市就失去了意义2）⽼的历史性建筑是历史教育的来源3）⽼的历史性建筑是吸引游客的好来源66. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child’s success in school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.同意：1）同学之间没有代沟，沟通更容易2）同学之间相处时间长过⽗母3）同学的评加267. If you were an employer, which kind of worker would you prefer to hire: an inexperienced worker at a lower salary or an experienced worker at a higher salary? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.我选择低⼯资的没有经验的员⼯1）成本低2）有热情3）有创新精神4）可塑性强68. Many teachers assign homework to students every day. Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.每天的作业是有⽤的1）做作业有助于帮助学⽣复习功课，巩固所学2）做作业可以使学⽣们课后的学习更有⽅向性3）做作业可以强制学⽣课后学习4）做作业可以让学⽣养成⾃学的好习惯69. If you could study a subject that you have never had the opportunity to study, what would you choose? Explain your choice, using specific reasons and details.。

写作题库分类1.建造问题：2) It has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer你家附近将要建一个大饭店。

你同意还是反对，详细阐述支持你看法的原因。

根据our community现在的情况，经济的需求大于其他，所以support。

1．工厂能够吸收附近很多人进行就业，对地方的经济有很大的贡献。

赢利后，就可以向当地政府贡献税收，政府可以利用这些钱改善社区的服务2．纳税，tax建立工厂能够促使附近其他的商业发展，例如小商店，药店等等，这可以大大方便附近的居民3．除了上述优点，也有缺点。

带来各种污染，比如，噪音noise、废气air、污水等等。

但是可以尽量改善。

4) It has recently been announced that a new movie theater may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.你家附近将要建一个电影院。

你同意还是反对，详细阐述支持你看法的原因。

尽管会有一些noise之类的disadvantage，还是support1．增加就业2．提供交流，学习，休闲，娱乐的场所。

方便。

增加税收，促进经济。

服务社区3 噪音5) The government has announced that it plans to build a new university. Some people think that your community would be a good place to locate the university. Compare the advantages and disadvantages of establishing a new university in your community. Use specific details in your discussion政府打算建一所新大学，有人认为你家附近是个合适的地方。

新托福(internet based TOEFL简称iBT TOEFL)自去年2005年9月在北美开考以来，很多考生谈此色变。

有的考生把新托福戏称为“我变态”(iBT亦是我变态的谐音)。

不少同学纷纷转考其他类型的考试，一试不爽，又转回iBT,这么几个回合下来时间就被浪费掉了。

纵观新托福考试的4大块，中国考生要在短期内（2-4个月）迅速取得新托福高分（100分以上），考生必须有相当的应考策略。

笔者对考生的新托福成绩作了大量统计和分析后发现考生考分相对高的2个部分是听力和写作。

考分相对低的是阅读和口语。

今天，作者着重和大家聊聊如何在极短的时间内（3天的时间）迅速取得作文27分以上，并给出作者参加新托福考试取得满分的作文部分模块，供各位考生参考。

作文考试作为新托福的第4部分，共有2篇作文。

一、Integrated writing(结合写作)第一篇作文叫做Integrated writing(结合写作)，给考生3分钟读一篇文章（大概200字左右），然后听一段关于对此文章的评论，结束后让考生写出150-225字的作文（只能打字），典型的问法是：Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on point made in the reading.听力结束后，阅读部分会再次出现并保留在电脑屏幕的左半部分，考生便可以开始写作。

此文的评分标准有2条: 1.要点分 2.语言分要写好此篇作文关键有以下几点：1. 考生必须从根本上掌握英语八股文的结构。

阅读时，考生必须按照八股文结构，记下这些points和support points的details.2. 听力时，考生要记下说话者是如何反对这些Points的。

注意的是说话者的反对顺序不一定按照阅读文章的演进顺序进行。

3. 如果points没有漏掉，接下来的关键就是考生如何表达说话者和阅读内容的关系了。

托福作文185题目64附写作思路托福作文185题目64附写作思路。

为了让同学们更好地备考托福写作考试，下面为大家整理了托福作文185题目的相关内容，包括了托福写作题材，及写作思路以及托福作文范文，供同学们进行参考练习。

下面为大家汇总整理了托福作文185题目的相关内容，主要关于64篇托福写作范文，不仅包括了托福作文写作思路，同时还给出了相应的托福写作范文，一起来看一下吧。

64. Be self-employed, work for someone else, or own a business?Some people prefer to work for themselves or own a business. Others prefer to work for an employer.Would you rather be self-employed, work for someone else, or own a business? Use specific reasons to explain your choice.『托福作文分析』不要急于选择。

先讨论两种情况各自的优缺点做老板，赚钱的，可是风险也大给别人打工，是稳定，但是工资少。

选择哪一种要看各人情况。

『托福作文范文』There are advantages to all three kinds of employment. Owning one's own business might very well be the fastest way to fortune. Working for an employer, on the other hand, is often less risky and usually there are fewer responsibilities. However, I would like to be self-employed. Being self-employed would cater to my strength of working independently, it would give me a maximum of professional and personal freedom, and I would not have to take responsibility for the continued financial security of any employees and their families.I am a perfectionist and enjoy working by myself. When I work in a team or together with a group of people, usually the others' quality standards are much lower than my own. Furthermore, I like to be involved in every step of the development process. For example, if I could become a journalist I would like to be self-employedbecause I would be responsible for researching, writing, and editing. At most major newspapers and magazines these are three different areas.Another great benefit of being self-employed is the ability to balance personal life and career. When working for a major company I would have to work on assignments that don't interest me very much. Also, it would be difficult for me to take vacation time whenever I needed. However, as a self-employed person I can decide which jobs I want to take and which jobs to reject. Nobody would order me around. Also, I could design my own work schedule and adjust or change it if it interfered with my personal life.Lastly, as a self-employed professional I would neither have to give orders nor take orders. After all, I don't work for anybody and nobody works for me. As I am not very fond of managing people and even less interested in being bossed around, the independent or self-employed work would suit me just fine.以上是小马网校为大家整理的托福作文范文185篇的相关内容，主要关于做老板与打工的不同相关的话题，供同学们进行参考练习。