高考作文练习（1）应用文：投诉信
作文：假设你是李华，五一期间你在淘宝网上购买了一条裤子，作为顾客，你发现好几处不满意的地方。请你根据下面几点自己不满意的服务投诉商家。
1.发货迟，迟收15天。
2.裤子颜色本该黑色，收到的却是灰色。
3.所选尺码为27号，错发29号。
4.提出理赔要求。
注意：
1.字数：100左右。
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir,
___________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________、_______________________________________________________________________________、
Yours,
Li Hua
实用词句：
1.Order /Purchase 购买refund 退款replace 换货return 退回postage 运费
2.I am writing to complain about ...
3.When I checked..., I noticed...
4.Take full responsibility for it
5.Be satisfied with
范文：
Dear Sir,
I’m writing to you to make some complaints about the trousers I bought in your store the other day.
To begin with, the color of the trousers I ordered was black, but what I received was grey. In addition, what fits me is size 27 while the size of the trousers I received was size 29, which is far larger for me. Worse still, the trousers should have been sent on May 1st. however, the date I got it was May 15th.
I think you should take full responsibility for it and pay for the postage. I insist that you give me a satisfactory reply. I do want you to change a new pair of trousers or give me my money back as soon as possible.
Yours,
英文投诉信 【写法指要】 投诉信（letters of complaint）通常是写给厂家、商店、消费者协会、报界或厂家、商店的上级主管部门，揭发产品质量的低劣、服务态度的糟糕，抱怨不应出现的情况或问题等，以求得解决的信件。写投诉信要实事求是地把问题讲清楚，态度要冷静，做到有礼貌，不能恶言伤人。 这封信的作者用的是对比法，先写学校的地理位置和原先学校的优美环境，后写化工厂建起后对学校造成的污染，最后提请报界呼吁保护环境的问题。写得有理有据，令人信服。英文投诉信怎么写 投诉信结构公式 右上角：日期 左上角：称呼 正文： 第一段：表明自己的身份，说明写信目的，因何事投诉何人或机构。 第二段：具体阐述投诉的内容和投诉的理由。 第三段：提出解决建议并期望尽快解决，表示感谢。 右下角：署名 下面是一封日常投诉信的范例，请大家体会一下。 Dear Sir/Madam, Please send us a correction on part of our order WP-11. All the items we ordered arrived in excellent condition except for one model. It you refer to our original order (see the copy attached), you will note that we requested your fluorescent desk-lamps, Model 606. However, Model 608 reached us instead. For details, please see the inspection certificate issued by the Tianjin Commodity Inspection Bureau. Will you kindly take back those you sent out and substitute them with an equal quantity (120 items) of Model 606? We would appreciate your attention to this matter promptly. Yours faithfully 英文投诉信模板 Dear_______, I am ______ (自我介绍) .I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about_____. The reason for my dissatisfaction is _______(总体介绍). In the first place,_______(抱怨的第一个方面). In addition, ___________(抱怨的第二个方面). Under these circumstances, I find it ________ (感觉)_______(抱怨的方面给你带来的后果). I appreciate it very much if you could _______(提出建议和请求), preferably ______(进一步的要求),and I would like to have this matter settled by ____(设定解决事情最后期限). Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely Li Ming 英文投诉信格式
2017高考英语书面表达投诉信写作 A letter of complaint Passage structure: 提出问题---说明具体情况---提出解决问题的办法 投诉信通常包括以下几个方面的内容：说明投诉的原因并表示遗憾；实事求是地阐述问题发生的经过，切记不要夸大其词；指出问题引起的后果；提出批评及处理的意见或敦促对方采取措施，或者提出所希望的赔偿以及补救方式。组织提纲时要遵循“三步走”的写作规律： 第一段：表明来信所要投诉的问题，尽可能做到客观礼貌，给读信人留下好印象。应该记住读信人不一定就是错误的责任人，他的合作对事情的最终圆满解决有着非常重要的作用。 第二段：写明投诉的原因、问题的经过及产生的后果。可以说具体的理由，也可以说问题的具体体现方式。 第三段：提出解决方案，不需展开。这段应体现书信的礼貌原则，可以用类似“如果你能……，我将十分感激”这样的表达方式。还要注意做到公平、公正。 Useful sentence patterns 1.I am writing to complain about…\ I am writing to make a complaint about…\ I am w riting to express my dissatisfaction about… 2.There is something wrong with… I bought. For one thing, ..…; for another thing … 3.I can hardly bear \tolerate …any more. 4.I hope you can consider my suggestions and improve the situation 5.I trust you will take this matter seriously and make an effort to prevent the recurrence of this kind. 6.I would like to have a refund(退款) or a replacement（更换）as soon as possible. 段尾常用语： (1)It would be highly appreciated if you could… (2)I believe you will take my complaints seriously and… (3)I hope you will give due attention to this matter. (4)I would like to get this matter settled by the end of this month. (5)I could not be more satisfied if you can kindly… (6)I would appreciate it very much if you could… 第一篇Samples 假设你是李华，你新买的某外国品牌MP3出了故障，现你写信到其公司反映问题：购买日期：上个月故障：一周前屏幕坏了，看不见屏幕内容已跟当地销售商家投诉，但
英语投诉信范文 Directions: You found something wrong with the telephone bill you have received from the local post office. You made a call to inquire about this; however the person who answered the call was very rude. Write a letter of complaint to the manager of the post office, explaining the situation and giving your suggestions for improvement. Your letter should be no less than 100 words. You do not need to write the address. Don’t sign your own name at the end of the letter, use Donna instead. 英文投诉信模板 Dear ______, ①I am ______（自我介绍）. ②I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about. ③The reason for my dissatisfaction is ______（总体介绍）. ④In the first place, ______（抱怨的第一个方面）. ⑤In addition, ______（抱怨的第二个方面）. ⑥Under these circumstances, I find it ______（感觉）to______（抱怨的方面给你带来的后果）. ⑦I appreciate it very much if you could ______（提出建议和请求）, preferably ______（进一步的要求）, and I would like to have this matter settled by ______（设定解决事情最后期限）. ⑧Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 范文 Dear Sir I am writing to let you know the deplorable attitude of one of your staff member. I received my telephone bill for the previous month from you and thought there were some errors in calculation: I had been overcharged for two overseas calls. However, when I called your Complaints Department, the girl who answered my phone was very rude. For one thing she interrupted me continually, for another she even said that the fault was my own. Needless to say, such a way of dealing with customers is unacceptable. I would like to suggest that the girl in question should be disciplined, and instructed on the proper way to deal with clients. And I hope she can make formal apology to me. An early response will be appreciated. Sincerely yours,
高考英语书面表达投诉信写作高分必背（黄金模版经典范例） A letter of complaint Passage structure: 提出问题---说明具体情况---提出解决问题的办法 投诉信通常包括以下几个方面的内容：说明投诉的原因并表示遗憾；实事求是地阐述问题发生的经过，切记不要夸大其词；指出问题引起的后果；提出批评及处理的意见或敦促对方采取措施，或者提出所希望的赔偿以及补救方式。组织提纲时要遵循“三步走”的写作规律： 第一段：表明来信所要投诉的问题，尽可能做到客观礼貌，给读信人留下好印象。应该记住读信人不一定就是错误的责任人，他的合作对事情的最终圆满解决有着非常重要的作用。 第二段：写明投诉的原因、问题的经过及产生的后果。可以说具体的理由，也可以说问题的具体体现方式。 第三段：提出解决方案，不需展开。这段应体现书信的礼貌原则，可以用类似“如果你能……，我将十分感激”这样的表达方式。还要注意做到公平、公正。Useful sentence patterns 1. I am writing to complain about…\ I am writing to make a complaint about…\ I am writing to express my dissatisfaction about… 2. There is something wrong with… I bought. For one thing, ..…; for another thing … 3. I can hardly bear \tolerate …any more. 4. I hope you can consider my suggestions and improve the situation 5. I trust you will take this matter seriously and make an effort to prevent the recurrence of this kind. 6. I would like to have a refund(退款) or a replacement（更换）as soon as possible. 段尾常用语： (1)It would be highly appreciated if you could… (2)I believe you will take my complaints seriously and… (3)I hope you will give due attention to this matter.
08投诉信 Dear ______, ①I am ______（自我介绍）. ②I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about ______. ③The reason for my dissatisfaction is ______（总体介绍）. ④In the first place, ______（抱怨的第一个方面）. ⑤In addition, ______（抱怨的第二个方面）. ⑥Under these circumstances, I find it ______（感觉）to______（抱怨的方面给你带来的后果）. ⑦I appreciate it very much if you could ______（提出建议和请求）, preferably ______（进一步的要求）, and I would like to have this matter settled by ______（设定解决事情最后期限）. ⑧Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply. 1. 写作方法 ①首段：注意客观、礼貌 a. 自我介绍； b. 引出投诉内容； c. 表明目的要求。 ②主体：展开说明投诉原因、具体理由或后果，注意内容充实，符合交际习惯。 a. 详细说明情况，中肯地提出问题； b. 提出改进建议，表明希望如何解决； c. 拓展题目内容，尤其要强调问题不解决所带来的后果。 ③尾段：提出解决方案，不用展开，注意中肯、礼貌原则。 a. 表达强烈愿望，希望上述问题得到迅速、恰当的解决； b. 有时可就问题的解决限定时间； c. 对有关人员的努力表示感谢； d. 希望尽快得到满意答复。 2. 写作流程图
高考英语作文:投诉信 投诉信：汤姆在一家商店购得劣质商品，遂与营业员交涉。但该营业员对他态度粗暴，不予受理，汤姆为此向经理写一封投诉信。 January 3,2003 Dear Manager, Now I am writing to tell you that I bought a TV set from your shop several days ago. But when I brought it home and turned it on, I found it didnt work properly. So I took it back to the shop and told the assistant what had happened. To my surprise, your assistant didnt help me to solve the problem. On the contrary, he shouted at me rudely and refused to examine it. I know that your shop enjoys a high reputation of good service, so I bought the TV set in your shop. But today, I am sorry to find that such service should have happened in your shop and your assistant didnt seriously think of the interests of customers.
投诉信英语作文100字 complaintJuly 30,2013 Dear manager: As a part-time employee，I feel sorry to trouble you .But I am afraid that I have to talk with you about my salary. I think there is a mistake about my pay for the work on summer holiday . It had promised that I would receive ,2000 a month for this job. However ,I just got ,1800 after a month hard work . I don’t know what happened. I always try my best to do the best one among those employees and never violate the company’s rules since I come here. Therefore I hope you can give me a reasonable explanation , otherwise you have to return me another ,200 .It would be appreciated that if you can deal with this within 3 days . Yours sincerely Li Ming 篇二:英语作文投诉信 Sep.9, 2013 Dear Sir/Madam, 1 I am writing to complain about a Microcomputer I purchased from your company.
英文投诉信模板以及范文 一、英文投诉信模板 Dear ______, ①I am ____（自我介绍）. ②I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about____. ③The reas on for my dissatisfaction is __（总体介绍）. ④In the first place, ___（抱怨的第一个方面）. ⑤In addition, ___（抱怨的第二个方面）. ⑥Under these circumstances, I find it ______（感觉）to______（抱怨的方面给你带来的后果）. ⑦I appreciate it very much if you could ______（提出建议和请求）,
preferably ______（进一步的要求）, and I would like to have this matter settled by ______（设定解决事情最后期限）. ⑧Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Ming ^
二、英文投诉信范文 (Letters of Complaint) 【例一】 ; Dear Sir: With reference to our order No. W 98, the 120 computer sets supplies to the above order were delivered the day before yesterday, but
英语投诉信范文_投诉信英语范文写作 外贸员对于英语投诉信想必处理的比其它人还要多，毕竟接触的比较多。下面是小编给大家整理的投诉信英语范文，供大家参阅! 投诉信英语范文1 Dear Mr。Chang: On September 10，our order for 280 women s cotton sweaters was duly received，but we regret to say that 40 cotton sweaters in white color were seriously soiled。 We had the case investigated immediately，and the result shows the damage was due to improper packing，for which the suppliers are definitely responsible。 Needless to say，we have suffered a great loss from this，as we cannot sell the sweaters in this condition to our customers。We ask you to conduct investigation at your end and reply to us。 Sincerely yours， Sunny Lee 投诉信英语范文2 Dear Sir: With reference to our order No。W 98，the 120 puter sets supplies to the above order were delivered the day before yesterday，but we regret that 20 sets were badly damaged。 The packages containing the puter sets appeared to be in good condition and we accepted and signed for them without question。We unpacked the puter sets with care and can only assume that
.. 高考英语作文投诉信范文 投诉信：汤姆在一家商店购得劣质商品，遂与营业员交涉。但该营业员对他态度粗暴，不予受理，汤姆为此向经理写一封投诉信。 January 3,2003 Dear Manager, Now I am writing to tell you that I bought a TV set from your shop several days ago. But when I brought it home and turned it on, I found it didn’t work properly. So I took it back to the shop and told the assistant what had happened. To my surprise, your assistant didn’t help me to solve the problem. On the contrary, he shouted at me rudely and refused to examine it. I know that your shop enjoys a high reputation of good service, so I bought the TV set in your shop. But today, I am sorry to find that such service should have happened in your shop and your assistant didn’t seriously think of the interests of customers. I hope you will look into the matter and give me a reasonable explanation. I am waiting to know how you will deal with it. Thank you for your consideration and I am expecting an early reply. Sincerely yours, Tom ;.
高中英语书面表达应用文写作指导：投诉信 【投诉信写作思路】 1.第一段： 介绍自己，说明写作目的：投诉。 2.第二段： 说明投诉问题、后果，并提出合理建议。 3.第三段： 希望给予考虑，并期待对方尽快回复。 【范例】 假定你是李华，十天前你从网上订购了一套HarryPotter，昨天才到货，且包装破损，数量不足，请就此向网店客服写邮件投诉。 要点如下： 1.介绍购物情况； 2.反映存在问题； 3.提出解决方案。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 DearSir, I amLi Hua,one of your customers,whoordereda set of Harry Potter on your websiteten daysago,I’m writing to complain about this online shopping. Some details are as follows. First of all,I didn’t receive them until yesterday.Besides，much to my disappointment,the books were so poorly packed up that the cover of one book was torn.To make matters worse, it is not a complete set, as I found one book missing. In a nutshell, I am disappointedto have received such poor service, andI believe I have right to ask you to deal with this problem.I hope that you eitherreturn my moneyordeliver a new set of books to me.Meanwhile, I’d like to be informed of the process of your dealing with my complaint.Looking forward to your reply.
投诉信写作 写信投诉抱怨的题型很常见，怎样才能合理的表述不满，又能显得理由充分？下面介绍下这类书信的常用词汇和句型 Complaint Letter 词汇： complain against sb. about sth.投诉...... dissatisfaction with不满于...... put up with / bear / tolerate忍受 awful 糟糕的 poor service糟糕的服务 inconceivable不可思议的 out of one’s expectation令某人大失所望 look into / go into / investigate调查 incident / matter 事件 sanitary situation卫生条件 bad manners 不礼貌 disturbance干扰 nuisance 麻烦事 remedy 补救 solve解决 recurrence再次发生 句型： 1) I am writing to you to complain about ... 2) I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with... 3) There are some problems with the flat that I wish to bring to attention. For one thing, there is…For another,... 4) I can hardly bear /tolerate /put up with it any more. 5) I hope that the authorities concerned will consider my suggestions and improve the situation as best as they can. 6)I sincerely hope that it will review its management system, with the view to providing, better service to the public. 7) We trust that you will now consider this matter seriously and make an effort to prevent the recurrence of this kind. 8) We will appreciate your willingness to make up for the loss. 考研英语小作文模板：投诉信 投诉信1 结构要点投诉信是对产品或服务表示不满的信件，一般分三个部分： 1. 提出投诉内容；
《英语投诉信范文》 英语投诉信范文（一）： Dear ______， ①I am ______(自我介绍)。②I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a plaint about。 ③The reason for my dissatisfaction is ______(总体介绍)。④In the first place， ______(抱怨的第一个方面)。⑤In addition， ______(抱怨的第二个方面)。 ⑥Under these circumstances， I find it ______(感觉)to______(抱怨的方面给你带来的后果)。 ⑦I appreciate it very much if you could ______(提出推荐和请求)， preferably ______(进一步的要求)， and I would like to have this matter settled by ______(设定解决事情最后期限)。⑧Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply。 Yours sincerely， Li Ming 英语投诉信范文（二）： Dear Sir: With reference to our order No。 W98， the 120 puter sets supplies to the above order were delivered the day before yesterday， but we regret that 20 sets were badly damaged。 The packages containing the puter sets appeared to be in good condition and we accepted and signed for them without question。 We unpacked the puter sets with
应用文投诉信 一、题型特点与写作思路 1、题型特点 投诉信是写信人对产品或服务表示不满的信件。常用于消费者的利益受损、正常生活和工作受到干扰等令人伤脑筋的事情。写投诉信时，要注意写明投诉原委，用词要恰当。 2、写作思路 第一步：表明投诉原因 第二步：列举抱怨的具体问题，并说明问题带来的后果。 第三步：提出合理的建议 二、投诉信常用词汇与套用句型 一定要背下来的词汇 Complain v. 投诉
Disappointment n.失望 Ashamed adj.惭愧的 Dissatisfaction n.不满 Investigate v.调查 Explanation n.解释 一定要背下来的套用句型 1、I am writing to you to complain about ... 我写信向你投诉。。。 2、I wish to express my dissatisfaction/disappointment about... 我想表达我对___的不满/失望 3、I believe you will take my complaints seriously and ... 我相信你会认真对待我的投诉，并且。。。 4、I hope you will give due attention to this matter . 希望你能对此事给予足够的重视。
5、I hope you will kindly investigate ... 我希望你对____进行调查。 6、To remedy the matter, i suggest making the following changes. 为了补救这个问题，我建议做出以下改变 三、模板 Dear___, I am writing to complain about ’m writing this letter to notify you about a problem i am having with____. The reason for my dissatisfaction is of all,In addition,____.(Third,____.)What’s most unacceptable is that____. Frankly speaking,this is the worst experience i have ever had,and i would like to have this matter settled by____. Thank you for your consideration./I
大学英语六级作文模板：投诉信 英语六级作文模板：投诉信 Directions: Write a letter of complaint according to the following situation: You bought an air conditioner in Sun Appliance and had it installed the other day, but you found that the fan made too much noise when the machine operated. You demand the store to send a representative to check it up. Write your letter in no less than 150 words. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter; use Li Ming instead. You do not need to write the address. June 23, 2007 Dear Sir or Madam, I’m writing to lodge the complaint about the poor quality of an air conditioner that I purchased from Sun Appliance Company. Frankly speaking, Sun Appliance has always been my favorite. On April 4, 2007, I bought the air conditioner (serial number 12345) from one of your chain store located in Lang Fang. The machine operated well at first, but ten days later, there was a fault that bothered me, that is, the fan made so much noise that I could not sleep well at night. Worse still, the cooling system didn’t
高考英语作文：一封投诉信 假设你是李华,你在5月2日去一家商店买衣服。当你请一个王姓服务员帮你找适合你的型号的衣服时,她以忙为借口让你自己找,你说你找不到才来让她帮忙,她说你找不到就说明没有。你对这位服务员的服务态度十分不满,并写信向该商店的销售经理投诉该服务员。 注意：1、词数120左右;2、信的开头和结尾已为你写好,但不计入总词数;3、可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 范文： May 5, 2006 Dear Sales Manager, This letter is a complaint concerning the actions of one of your salespersons. On Tuesday, May 5, 2012, around 2 P.m.., I went to your store to look for a T-shirt. When I asked a salesperson, Ms. Wang for help in finding my size, she informed me that she was busy and I would have to find one myself. I explained that the reason why I came to her was that I couldn’t find one. She then said in a rude tone that if I couldn’t find one, it meant
that the store didn’t have it, and that I needed to look somewhere else. I felt that Ms Wang was rude. I hope that you will look into the matter: I shop frequently at your store and I look forward to a more pleasurable shopping experience next time.
Appropriate Complaint in English Speaking Countries Exercises Exercise1.Rewrite the compliant letter in a proper way. Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to make a complaint against your bad delivery service. I’m afraid that the e nclosed CD player doe sn’t work.It is the third one I’ve got to return this month.Other than the three I’ve had to return recently, I’ve always found your products to be excellent.I would be grateful if you could send a replacement and refund my postage. I look forward to your reply and proper resolution of my problem,and will until the end of this week before seeking help from a consumer protection agency or the Better Business Bureau.Please contact me by the address on the envelope or by phone at 6668888. Li Hua Exercise2. Translate the expressions in a proper way. 1. 抱怨________________________ 2. 表达不满________________________ 3. 忍受________________________ 4. 对……满意________________________