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专业四级考试写作题型和写作技能讲解专业四级考试写作题型的具体要求如下：1. 作文：根据所给的题目和列出的写作提纲或图表、数字统计表等（也附有写作提纲）写一篇150词的短文，能做到内容切题、完整，条理清楚，文章结构严谨，语法正确，语言通顺恰当。
作文的类别有说明文、议论文或记叙文。
考试时间为35分钟。
2. 便条：根据提示写大约50～60词的便条、通知、请帖等。
要求做到格式正确，语言得体。
考试时间为10分钟。
对于以上写作题型，可以从以下几个方面提高写作技能：1. 丰富词汇：尝试使用不同的词汇来描述同一种事物或情感，增加文章的可读性和深度。
2. 强化语法：熟练掌握并运用基本的语法规则，避免常见的语法错误。
3. 组织结构：在写作前，花些时间构思文章的结构，明确主题和论点，有助于更好地展开论述。
4. 多读多写：阅读各种类型的文章，了解不同文体的特点；勤于写作，不断练习，提升自己的表达能力。
5. 修改和反馈：写完文章后，应反复修改，找出并改正错误和不足之处；同时，寻求他人的反馈也是提高写作能力的有效途径。
6. 了解题型要求：熟悉每种题型的具体要求，明确写作的目的和要求，避免跑题或不符合要求的情况。
7. 时间管理：在考试中，合理分配时间，确保在规定时间内完成作文。
在平时的练习中，也应设定时间限制，提高自己的写作速度。
8. 关注细节：注意文章中的标点、拼写和格式等细节问题，这些都会影响文章的整体质量。
9. 培养批判性思维：在写作中尝试从不同角度思考问题，培养自己的批判性思维能力。
10. 关注时事和热点话题：了解当前的社会热点和时事新闻，有助于在写作中引入新鲜观点和论据。
以上建议仅供参考，建议咨询英语专业教师或查看英语专业四级考试大纲获取更准确的信息。
2023年英语专业四级作文范文(12篇)Video Gamesgames have become mroe and more popular among the students.so i'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had about whether students could play the video of the students think the video games can have a bad influence on younger video games are violent or about killing other players and they aer even worse than the violent films.if students play the video games,some of them will be addicted to the video games,so they will pay less attention to their studies or have no time to commuicate with others.on the other hand, 3% believe that playing video games will help us to take a good knowledge of computer,then we will become more and more creative and quickly 's more,video games makes students'brains relaxed so they can study effective.in my opinion, playing the video games is as middle school students, we should put all our into our studies.creative [kri'eitiv] adj. 创造性的popular ['pɔpjulə] adj. 流行的，大众的，通俗的，受欢迎的effective [i'fektiv] adj. 有效的，有影响的violent ['vaiələnt] adj. 暴力的，猛烈的，极端的relaxed [ri'lækst] adj. 放松的，松懈的，随意的relax的过去式2023年英语专业四级作文范文第5篇2023专四改G已尘埃落定，专四作文取消了原有的小作文(便条)，大作文以材料作文为主题，约200词。
英语专业四级⾼分范⽂100篇详解...◆⼯作就业41. 在⼤城市⼯作还是⼩城市⼯作Working in Big Cities or Small CitiesMany people are constantly confused by whether to go to big cities to work which are abound with opportunities but are stressful or go to small cities to work which are relatively more relaxed but have fewer opportunities.Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:Working in Big Cities or Small CitiesYou are to write in three parts.In the first part, state clearly the reasons why generation gap is existent.In the second part, support your view with appropriate details.In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.【审题构思】就业时，如何选择适合⾃⼰的城市，是⼤城市还是⼩城市？⼤多数学⽣希望留在⼤城市⼯作，但房价、⽣活⽔平等压⼒⼜是⼀个棘⼿的问题。
2023年英语专业四级作文范文2023年英语专业四级作文范文part 1专四范文：The Importance of Adult EducationMany people in the workforce are unhappy withtheir current salaries or career and consider a change or a betterment of their lives through discovering new avenues of industry. Adult education is on the rise. I personally hold that adult education is highly advisable and pletely achievable3 and therefore is highly important.Firstly, adults starting a new or returning to school most often have found within themselves a strengthened desire to succeed. Studies have shownthat 80% of adult students graduate as pared to a 50% average graduation rate among traditional students. Furthermore, adults have a bank of knowledge from life or work experience that can contribute to what theywill learn in school. This is a fantastic advantage over their younger peers. Adults also view their professors as peers and are less intimidated by them, Last but not least, higher education for the adult is a life-changing experience. Most often, adults go to school to further their education in hopes of salary increases, chances for promotion, or they go to school for change, hoping to enter into a better field or pursue a field that they have a deep-rooted passion for.In conclusion, the importance of having adult education overshadows the difficulties in pursuing your degree later in life. Given that most colleges and universities have tailored their programs to fit adult student's needs and schedules, going back to school for adult education is feasible and highly advisable. (238 words)专四作文精彩句子：假如人们愿意停顿工作以后花时间和金钱获取新的经历，假如我们能劝说他们早一点停顿工作，这对于整个经济来说是一笔宏大的财富。
大学英语四级写作技巧盘点通过了三级B考试的同学们,就要开始考虑四级考试了。
相信大家在高中甚至初中阶段就已经听说过英语四级的“恐怖传说”了。
下面是小编整理的大学英语四级写作技巧盘点，欢迎大家阅读分享借鉴。
英语四级写作技巧看清题目，明确写作范围、内容。
和我们考试一样，有许多的学生看一半题，就感觉已经很是理解题目的意思了。
这是兵家之大忌，写到最后才发现自己写的已经跑题了，为时已晚。
一般来说最少分三段，第一段说明情况、阐明自己的基本观点，反对还是赞同。
第二段可以分段论述自己的观点，可以摆明自己的证据、例子、看法。
最后一点对自己的论述观点要进行总结归纳。
阐述部分最重要。
在论述自己的观点的时候要有层次，有条理。
在每句开头还可以用First,Secondly,Finally等开头词来分别诉说自己的观点。
可以用一些大家熟知的例子来论证你的观点。
平时要多积累一些词汇、句式等。
比如表示举例、转折、连接等的词汇证明你的词汇积累是很大的，这样才可以让判卷老师在短时间范围内给你高的分数。
在考试进考场的时候，你可以多看看自己以前的积累本。
遇到不同的要求要理解题目的意思。
遇到表格类的写作，就要分析卷子是让你论证什么观点，你需要在脑海中建立什么观点。
遇到漫画写作，要看清漫画想要告诉你的寓意是什么。
注意的小知识点。
考试写作文中题目大小写，作文开头字母的大小写，以及文中的标点符号，段落层次表达的意思。
还有就是文章的人称、时态。
时态，是文章的精髓，一个时态应用不正英语四级写作方法文意切题：切题是决定一篇作文是否合格的根本。
即使结构清晰、语言华丽，但主题与指令要求不符，那一切都是枉然。
所以，写作时，文章主题一定要紧扣命题点或图画寓意来写，段落布局也要切合主题，从而确保内容准确。
结构清晰：英语作文讲求逻辑严密，要求文章结构合理有序。
一般而言，四级作文可依三段式展开，第一段提出问题、点明主题或描述图画;第二段分析问题、论述主题或揭示图画寓意;第三段解决问题、给出评论或发出吁请。
专四辅导之便条写作（一）便条的写作便条是一种简单的书信形式。
要求考生仔细阅读和分析所给的情景，确定便条所涉及的内容，如写便条者与便条接收者的身份、两者之间的关系及情景的正式程度等。
便条的特点在于内容简短，大多是临时性的询问、留言、通知、要求等。
与正规书信相比，便条的语言更为口语化，比如要通知某事只需这样开头：Just a line to tell you that ...而无须像正规书信那样This is to inform you that ...开头。
有急事需要告诉别人而又不能面谈时，就可以写便条，如请假条、留言条等。
一般不写地址，与普通书信基本相同。
结尾时也无需要结尾礼词，只需要写上便条者姓名。
便条的日期通常写在右上角，一般只要写上星期几，也可以写明上午、下午的具体时间；日常应用中，写上几月几日的也很普遍。
但一般不写年份，因为便条的内容多半是当日或近日内要办的事情。
便条具有用途广泛、形式简单、文字要求不十分严格的特点。
基本写作格式便条内容和类型不尽相同，可以灵活变通。
但必须包括以下四个基本要素；1）Date：便条日期2）Salutation：称呼3）Body：正文4）Signature：署名注意事项1.词句简洁，尽量避免应酬语和敬词2.切忌内容空洞、言不达意。
分类举例1）请假（Asking for Leave）例1 Directions: You are about to write a Business Leave Note of about 100 words. Please describe the information clearly. 1) the reason you ask for the leave 2) the time and how long you will leaveAug. 22ndSecretary Li,I’m sorry to apply for ten days’ leave from the Aug. 23rd to sept. 3rd instant. As I have to leave with the time is urgent. My father now in the hospital is badly ill. I have to go to see him and take care of him for a few days. You know I’m the only child in my family. Of course I will show you the telegram about my father’s illness which is received from my mother to support my application. As concern as the missed lessons during my absence, I promise I will do my best to catch them on after I come back to the campus. Wish for your allowance.Yours respectfully,×××本文是一封请假条，一般我们要向上级或老师请假，通常用的是ask for leave这个短语，请三天假可写作：ask for three days’ leave;因病请假则是ask for sick leave. leave在这里是名词用法，文中用的短语是apply for意为“申请”，含有更加郑重的意味，常用于下级对上级或晚辈对长辈的书面语中，“Only child”意为“独生子女”相应的，“独生女”译作“only daughter”而“独生子”译作“only son”. As concern as后面跟名词性结构，意为“涉及到，至于”与Concerning同义，两者可以互换。
新四级强化辅导写作新版摘要：一、引言1.介绍新四级强化辅导写作新版的目的2.强调写作在英语考试中的重要性二、新四级强化辅导写作新版的特点1.紧密结合新四级考试大纲2.注重培养学生的实际写作能力3.丰富的实例分析与练习4.及时反馈与指导三、新四级强化辅导写作新版的内容1.写作技巧的讲解与训练2.各类题型的写作方法3.写作策略与得分技巧4.模拟试题与真题解析四、新四级强化辅导写作新版的优势1.提高学生的写作水平2.帮助学生掌握应试技巧3.增强学生的自信心4.有助于提高新四级考试成绩五、结论1.总结新四级强化辅导写作新版的特点与优势2.鼓励学生积极利用该辅导教材提高写作能力正文：随着英语学习的需求不断增长，新四级强化辅导写作新版应运而生，旨在帮助广大考生提高写作水平，顺利通过新四级考试。
在这篇文章中，我们将详细介绍新四级强化辅导写作新版的各个方面，以帮助大家更好地了解和使用这一辅导教材。
一、引言新四级强化辅导写作新版针对当前英语学习者在新四级考试中面临的写作难题，结合最新的考试大纲，为学生提供了一套全面、实用的写作辅导教材。
英语写作在英语考试中占据重要地位，因此，提高写作能力已成为众多学生的迫切需求。
二、新四级强化辅导写作新版的特点新四级强化辅导写作新版紧密结合新四级考试大纲，注重培养学生的实际写作能力。
首先，该教材以新四级考试大纲为依据，为学生提供符合考试要求的写作技巧与训练。
其次，教材通过丰富的实例分析与练习，让学生在学习过程中不断积累经验，提高写作水平。
最后，新四级强化辅导写作新版提供了及时反馈与指导，帮助学生了解自己的优缺点，为提高写作能力提供有力支持。
三、新四级强化辅导写作新版的内容新四级强化辅导写作新版涵盖了写作技巧的讲解与训练、各类题型的写作方法、写作策略与得分技巧以及模拟试题与真题解析等内容。
这些丰富的内容为学生提供了全面的写作指导，让学生能够系统地学习写作知识，并在实际应用中不断提高自己的写作能力。
大学英语四级考试写作辅导2012年6月大学英语四级考试写作辅导(1)记叙文的思路与练习记叙文是以叙述人物的记忆和事物的进展变化过程为要紧表现形式的一种文体。
记叙文既能够以写人为主，又能够以写事为主。
写记叙文要注意记叙文的“六大要素”即：时刻(When)——何时发生，有没有具体时刻?地方(Where)——何地发生，有没有地方变化?人物(Who)——何人参与，谁是主角?事件(What)——发生了啥，有何特点?缘故(Why)——事件的起因?结果(How)——事件的通过及结局?普通讲来，在一篇记叙文中这六大要素是缺一别可的。
记叙文的思路就环绕这六大要素充分展开。
【例】四级考试中，只浮现过一次特意的记叙文体裁的写作，即“An Early Morning Walk”(1988.6.)，2003年6月浮现过包含记叙文的作文，即“An Eye-Witness Account of a Traffic Accident”。
关于“An Early Morning Walk”，懂命题要求后，我们就要开始构思了。
When：题目已规定了是“清晨”，在那个时候，“我”去散步。
Where：到哪儿散步?去公园?在校园里?在街上(街上空气不行，依然别去!)。
Who：在公园里看到晨练的人：中老年人、年轻人、孩子子;在校园里看到读书背单词的学生。
What：人们热火朝乾坤做操，随音乐跳舞，打球，等等。
Why：清晨空气清新，适合锻炼;一日之际在于晨，背背书，读读单词。
固然，由那个题目能够令人想到非常多东西，因篇幅所限，我们做了删减。
参考范文An Early Morning WalkOne morning I got up very early， and everything around was very quiet.The sun had just risen， shining brilliantly and everything seemed to be covered with a layer of golden silk. There were only some birds singing occasionally in the tall trees. I strolled along the street toward the park， breathing the fresh air and feeling extremely happy.When I arrived at the park， I found， to my surprise， that there were so many people there. Men and women， boys and girls， all were enjoying themselves in their various activities. Some were doing morning exercises， some were playing badminton and some old people were having their tea while talking to each other cheerfully.I wandered around the park. To my delight， I found a few middle-school students talking to each other in English in one corner of the park. I went up and spoke to them in English. We soon became friends. I was very glad to find another opportunity to practice my spoken English. On the way home， I realized that an early morning walk really was good and healthful. Taking early morning walks makes one healthy and wise.【点评】文章按照时刻顺序(in chronological order)，第一句话点明时刻(One morning)、人物(第一人称“I”)，并简要描述了凌晨的特点(What was the setting)，继续第二段第一句话交代地方(in the park)，然后介绍公园里人们及作者的活动(What was happening)，最终在文章结尾点题，即，归纳中心思想——Taking early morning walks makes one healthy and wise. 仅仅189个单词既满脚了记叙文的“六大要素”，又有明确的中心思想和生动的细节，行文方式符合要求。
英语专业四级写作技巧一、审题、构思、草拟提纲1. 审题与构思审题构思是写好作文的第一步。
一般来说，审题不但要读懂题目的字面意思，而且要深刻理解作文题目中内含的意思和要求，了解和掌握写作的主旨大意，最后紧紧围绕这个中心来进行写作。
以“A Major Problem Resulted From Urbanization”为例，考生必须在第一部分（通常是第一段）提出城市化的一个主要问题，也就是提出自己的观点，然后在第二部分（通常是文章的第二、三段）紧紧围绕这一个问题展开论述，不可再牵扯到城市化带来的其他问题，然后在最后一部分（通常是文章的最后一段）得出结论。
审题之后马上就要构思，也就是说先要经过总体构思，然后具体策划出文章该如何展开，哪些地方要略写，哪些地方要详写，哪些内容先写，哪些内容后写，需要哪些例子来论证等。
这些都应该有一个总的安排、设计。
只有经过这样的构思，写出来的作文才会条理清楚、逻辑性强、切题达意。
成功的构思是写好文章的前提。
认真构思是考生写作前不可忽视的重要环节，如果没有构思，想到哪儿，写到哪儿，就会造成思路混乱，从而导致文章逻辑性差，条理不清。
2. 草拟提纲草拟提纲是写好作文的第二步。
在理解作文题目及构思出文章大致轮廓的基础上，就应该着手写提纲了。
提纲包括文章应分成几段来写，每一段围绕什么样的主题展开，各段需要扩展哪些内容，先写什么，后写什么，怎样写才能有说服力并能把主题句阐述清楚，怎样写才能切题、连贯、清晰、正确。
文章的素材会有很多，必须经过筛选，决定取舍，分清主次，要选择既有代表性和典型性又极有说服力的素材去论证或阐述文章的主题及各段主题句中的观点。
有了明细提纲，文章的基本框架结构就固定下来了，只要再添加一些具体的细节、事实、内容，文章差不多就写出来了。
可以说草拟好了一个提纲，几乎就完成了文章的一半。
以A Major Advantage/Disadvantage of Advertising on Television为例，经过审题和构思之后，就可以列出这样一个提纲：Introduction：Thesis：TV is the most effective medium for advertising.Body：A. TV is the most popular medium that reaches almost every family.a. Computers：expensive，not needed by every family.b. Newspapers and magazines：not subscribed by every family.B. TV commercials are best remembered with sound，pictures and actions.a. Newspapers and magazines：words but no sound and actions.b. Radios：sound but no pictures and actions.C. TV commercials are rarely missed.a. Arranged between hot shows.b. Appearing at best time of day．c. Seen at random.Conclusion：To achieve the best effect of advertisements，business organizations should pro mote their products and services on TV.当然在考场上不可能也没有必要真正写出这么详细的提纲来。
四级写作补充讲义__⽯雷鹏第⼀章总论审题注意三事项：1.体裁+话题2.内容要求：汉语提纲/英⽂提⽰3. 字数：四级140-160/六级170-190写作时间安排：1.审题：识别功能段落2.以关键词形式打草稿3.段落写作：现象、原因、危害、建议、意义、观点4.检查修正第⼆章写作基础⼀、写作⽤词两⽅⾯：1. ⼴度：using a rich variety of words →⽅法：1). 同义反义词；2). 同根词（词性转化）；3). 范畴词：上义词、下义词、相关词（如：题⽬online shopping 的相关词可以是：Internet, shopping websites, customers, online stores, goods）4). 代词替换：某群体those with/ people who如：拥有博⼠学位的⼈群→ those with doctoral degrees/ people who have doctoral degrees2. ⼴度：弃⽤第⼀反映词。
⼆、句⼦写作2.1造句原则：1) 切忌逐字翻译；2）汉语意思—》英⽂结构2.2造句基础：1）简单句：主谓、主谓宾、主系表、主谓双宾、主谓宾补2）并列句：and/ or/ while/ but3）复合句：名词从句、定语从句、状语从句备注：三种基本句式变体为：陈述句、疑问句、感叹句、祈使句等2.3 如何写正确？三个事项：1）词性；2）单复数；3）动词（时态、语态、语⽓）2.4 写作翻译常⽤句式：For CET-41）被动2）名词从句：主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句、同位语从句3）定语从句：写作步骤：1）先写出正确简单句，确定被修饰成分（中⼼名词）2）在中⼼名词后加⼊定从，关系词who, whose, whom, where, which, when4）含同位语句式：1）⼈—》⾝份；Eg. I am convinced that …→ As a college student, I am convinced that 2）物—》性质: A strong will brings us power …→ As a vital quality, a strong will brings us5）it 句式：形式主语1）it is +被动/形容词/名词+that从句/to do …形式宾语2）sb find/ notice it difficult to do …6）there be:7）强调句：1）强调谓语：I love you. -→ I do love you. / I did love you.2) 强调句式：It is +被强调成分+that/who+句⼦其他成分8）（半）倒装：1）表否定的副词、短语或状语位于主语之前或句⾸，主句半倒装(⼀般疑问句语序)；Eg. I will never agree. → Never will I agree.2）Only +状语位于句⾸，主句半倒装When my beloved is beside myself, I can feel the true happiness.→ Only when my beloved is beside myself, can I feel the true happiness.3) As/though倒装形式Although ZYK is a girl, she is called brother Zeng. → Girl as ZYK is, she is called brother Zeng.4）平衡结构性倒装：如图表作⽂⾸句：Given is a chart which clearly illustrates the striking contrast/ relation between _____ and ______.9）双重否定：⽤于强调: no ____ is / are more _____ than ________.The importance of _____ can not be too emphasized. 10）Ving/ Ved状语：I climbed the stairs. I took a suitcase.→ I climbed the stairs, taking a suitcase.→ Climbing the stairs, I took a suitcase.11）with 结构：with+n/pron+adj /ed /ving/ prepa．前⾯有逗号，与整个句⼦隔开：充当整个句⼦状语成分b．前⾯⽆逗号，直接⽤在名词后：充当前⾯名词定语成分12) 插⼊语：三、六种功能段落（篇章层⾯为六种功能段落的排列组合）四、篇章写作思路：现象、危害、原因、建议、观点（利弊）、意义段写作逻辑：4.1现象描述段：______（引出问题+具体描述+总结问题）=主题句+具体现象1）引出问题：☆⾸句1. On many campuses/ In contemporary society/Nowadays, it has become a (prevalent) trend/tendency for _______to ______.☆⾸句2. Living in an era of knowledge/competition, ______have more access to ______.☆⾸句3. In recent years, (it can be noticed that) __________________________than (ever) before. (⽐较级引出问题)☆⾸句4：In China, _________ has/ have gained great/wide popularity among _______. 或：In China, ______ has been enjoying growing popularity and it is of great importance.⾸句5：The past years /decades have seen the huge/speedy advancement/ development of _____________.2）具体描述：⼆句1：（事实描述）Meanwhile, an increasing number of individuals/people find it difficult/ hard/ troublesome to__________________.An increasing number of:find--> deem/ regard负⾯：difficult 正⾯：⼆句2：（举例描述1）A case in point is /A typical example is/This phenomenon can be best illustrated by the fact that .☆（举例描述2）Turning/Taking a look around/at_______, we can notice/find a great many/plenty of/a good deal of examples like this: 两个例⼦.⼆句3：(举例描述3)：Our daily life has been filled with a variety of examples, (but the following will suffice:)______________.⼆句4：（调查法描述：）(According to a recent survey,) a majority/72.34% of people/ students /individuals /citizens/residents admit/reckon /acknowledge that _______. 3）总结问题：承上+启下三句1：（承上）Thus/Therefore/Hence, （启下）how to _______________ effectively has become a matter of concern.☆三句2：（承上）As a result/ Consequently/ Accordingly，（启下）_____ requires/ necessitates/ calls for close attention of the whole society.☆三句3: (承上) So, （启下1）due attention should be paid to _____/ （或）we should keep a close eye on ____.4.2分析危害段：（弊）=主题句+危害1+危害2+总结主题句1：If we keep turning a blind eye, this trend is bound to generate/ result in/lead to serious effects.☆主题句2: Apparently enough, there are some negative impacts which we should not ignore/neglect.☆主题句3：Quite obviously, it is of great necessity to figure out the negative influences (behind it).主题句4：To tackle this problem, it is of great/vital significance to analyze the potential negative impacts of this matter.具体危害写法☆危害1：To begin with, _____ may damage/ hurt/ injure/ harm/ impair/ undermine the over-all development of ______, (because____________).☆危害2：Moreover, (强调句式) it is _____ that does not enable ______to build up / expand /enjoy__________.危害3：This trend is particularly worth concern for the background that ____ focus too much eyesight on ____, totally turning a blind eye to the significance of _____.☆危害4：Besides, (it can be argued that) _____ means/equals a grave amount of time/energy/natural resources; (however, the result/ quality /reality of _____is not always as satisfactory as expected).☆危害5：As a matter of fact, ______in mounting/ large numbers have ignored the significance /necessity of _____☆万能危害总结1：And if we let this situation continue as it is, we will not know where ____ will be in the forthcoming future.危害总结2：To conclude, it is undeniable that the bad impacts of _____ can never be turned a blind eye to.4.3分析原因段：=主题句+原因1+原因2+总结☆主题句1：Generally speaking, several reasons can account for this phenomenon. (中性话题)主题句2：In general, there are several factors contributing to this phenomenon(, but the following may be the most critical).（中性话题）☆主题句3：It is evident that the causes of this phenomenon are diverse.主题句4：To solve/deal with this worrying/disturbing issue, it is of vital significance to explore / investigate the possible reasons.☆原因1：In the first place, ___________ is the root cause. A good case in point is that_____________________/(According to a survey), a majority of ______ admit that _____. (原因+例⼦/或调查法描述)☆原因2：In the second place, _____ constitutes another major cause. Specifically/To be specific,_______________________________. (原因+具体说明:即现象描述). ☆原因3：（强调句式）Then, it is _____ that makes /attracts/ enables ____ to ___. ☆万能原因4：As a matter of fact, ______in mounting/ large numbers have (not) come to realize the significance /necessity of _____(for ____)☆原因5: Besides, social prejudice/ignorance plays a critical role in this issue/matter. ☆原因总结1：As a consequence,_______ pay relatively less(more) attention to _______.原因总结2：Consequently, ____ has (not) been emphasized.4.4 建议措施段：=总结句+建议1+建议2+展望☆总结句1: In view of the seriousness of the situation, effective measures should be taken (before things get worse).总结句2：Therefore/Thus/Hence/Accordingly, it is high time that we took feasible steps (to stop/ limit/ restrain this trend).总结句3：In fact, people?s/our ways to ___________ do vary/differ.（☆替换：1. As a ____, I am convinced that there are various ways in which _____________________. 或 2. It is apparent that ways to ___________ are various.）Some _____; some ______; some others _____.☆建议1：First, it is essential that regulations should be worked out and enforced to ___________.建议2：Second, it is suggested that public should enhance/ promote/ cultivate/ strengthen their awareness of __________.建议3：Then, it is advisable/significant for ________ to ________建议4：In addition, _______ are highly hoped/ expected/ well-advised to __________.☆万能建议5：Lastly, ________should educate, advocate and encourage ____________________________ (not) to______________.展望未来1：Only by doing so/ Only through these measures, can we __________________________.（慎⽤）☆展望未来2：If we try our utmost to do so, the future of ____ will be promising/ hopeful/ rosy.展望未来：Do bear in mind: no __________, no ______________.4.5观点段（⽀持⽅观点=利；反⽅观点=弊；我的观点）⽀持⽅观点（利）⽀持⽅主题句1：Compared with ______, ______ is superior in several ways.☆⽀持⽅主题句2：A number of individuals favor /prefer_____ because of its/their benefits.⽀持⽅主题句3：Those who are in favor of ____ claim that _____is characterized by a lot advantages.☆⽀持⽅观点(利)1：In their eyes, without ________, it is impossible for them to ___________.☆⽀持⽅观点(利)2: In addition, they deem that it ______ enables _____ to expand/ strengthen / enjoy / enrich / attract_____________.☆⽀持⽅观点(利)3: As a _____, _______ brings us _____, arouses our enthusiasm for _______, and helps us to____________. .⽀持⽅观点(利)4：In their opinion, _____ will definitely promote the development/efficiency of _____, which otherwise would be impossible.⽀持⽅观点(利)5：Another evident advantage/ merit/ strength/ benefit is that ____ may offer /provide/bring entertainment/ pleasure/ an enjoyable life.反⽅观点（弊）(三句=主题句+反⽅观点1+反⽅观点2)☆主题句1：Even so, others hold a different view that ____ carries some risks/doubts. 主题句2：Others, however, regard it differently.主题句3：Advantageous/beneficial/rewarding/good/popular as it is, others have an opposite perspective.主题句4：In spite of all these claims, others maintain that it is unnecessary to ____ 反对本质：危害分析。
新四级强化辅导写作新版摘要：1.新四级强化辅导的重要性2.新版写作的要求与特点3.如何提高新四级写作成绩4.结论正文：随着社会的发展，英语作为国际通用语言，在我国的地位日益重要。
大学生英语四级考试（CET-4）作为评估大学生英语水平的重要手段，其成绩在求职、升学等方面具有很高的参考价值。
新四级强化辅导写作新版应运而生，为广大考生提供了备考写作的有效方法。
新版写作的要求与特点新版四级写作要求考生在规定时间内，根据题目要求进行创意写作。
文章应包括引言、正文和结尾三个部分，其中正文部分为议论文。
新版写作的特点在于强调考生的思维能力和表达能力，要求考生能够准确、简洁地表达观点，并具有一定的逻辑性和创新性。
如何提高新四级写作成绩要提高新四级写作成绩，首先要进行大量的阅读，积累写作素材。
考生可以通过阅读英文报刊杂志、英文小说等形式，了解各种观点和论证方法，丰富自己的知识储备。
其次，要进行系统的写作训练。
考生可以参加培训班，或自行组织学习小组，定期进行写作练习。
在写作过程中，要注意文章结构的完整性、观点的明确性、论证的逻辑性以及语言的准确性。
此外，了解写作技巧和方法也是提高写作成绩的关键。
考生可以学习一些写作教程，了解议论文的基本结构和写作方法。
在实际写作中，要注意运用恰当的过渡词和连接词，使文章在逻辑上更加严密。
同时，要灵活运用各种句式和修辞手法，使文章更具表现力。
结论新四级强化辅导写作新版为广大考生提供了备考写作的有效方法。
要想取得理想的写作成绩，考生需要在平时进行大量的阅读和写作练习，不断提高自己的思维能力和表达能力。
同时，学习写作技巧和方法，了解议论文的基本结构和写作规律，也是提高写作成绩的关键。
Analysis of Sample Essays for TEM-4Over the YearsIn the realm of English language proficiency testing, the Test for English Majors Band 4 (TEM-4) stands as a benchmark for assessing the writing skills of undergraduate English majors. Over the years, the TEM-4 writing section has evolved, presenting candidates with diverse topics and challenging them to demonstrate their critical thinking, analytical abilities, and linguistic proficiency. Analyzing the sample essays from past years offers valuable insights into the standards expected, common pitfalls to avoid, and effective strategies to adopt.Firstly, a notable trend in TEM-4 writing prompts is the focus on contemporary social issues and cultural phenomena. Candidates are often required to discuss topics such as the impact of technology on society, the role of education in shaping individuals, or the challenges faced by young people in today's world. This emphasis on current affairs encourages candidates to stay informed and formulate informed opinions. The best essays typicallydemonstrate a clear understanding of the topic, backed by relevant examples and evidence.Secondly, the TEM-4 writing section places a strong emphasis on logical organization and coherence. Effective essays typically have a clear introduction that establishes the topic and the writer's position, a well-structured body that develops the argument through analysis and examples, and a concise conclusion that summarizes the main pointsand leaves a lasting impression. Candidates are advised to plan their essays carefully, outlining their main pointsand ensuring a smooth flow of ideas.Thirdly, linguistic proficiency is a crucial aspect of TEM-4 writing. Candidates are expected to demonstrate ahigh level of grammar, vocabulary, and sentence structure. The use of complex sentence structures and a diverse vocabulary can enhance the essay's overall quality. However, it is essential to strike a balance between sophistication and clarity, ensuring that the language used is appropriate for the topic and audience.Finally, a common mistake made by candidates is the tendency to over-generalize or provide vague arguments.Effective essays often include specific examples and anecdotes that illustrate the writer's points, making their arguments more convincing and engaging. Candidates should aim to provide concrete evidence to support their claims, rather than resorting to vague statements or unsupported opinions.In conclusion, analyzing sample essays for TEM-4 provides valuable insights into the standards expected and strategies to adopt. Candidates should focus on staying informed about current affairs, planning and organizing their essays effectively, demonstrating linguistic proficiency, and providing specific examples to support their arguments. By following these guidelines, candidates can enhance their chances of achieving a high score in the TEM-4 writing section.**历年英语专四作文真题范文解析**在英语专业水平测试中，英语专业四级考试（TEM-4）的写作部分被视为衡量英语专业本科生写作能力的重要标准。
课后辅导的英语作文专四专四作文：课后补习是否对孩子好案例：Nowadays, we can find kids keep studying all the time, they work harder than before. One of the reasons is that their parents want their kids have advantages over others, so they hire tutors to help the kids with their homework, after school, kids start make up the lesson. As the kids study all the day at school, it is not good to continue study at home, they should have time to have fun.现在，我们可以发现孩子总是在学习，他们比以前更努力学习。
其中一个理由是他们的父母想要他们的孩子比其他人有优势，所以他们请家教，以此来帮助孩子做作业，课后，孩子开始补习功课。
由于孩子整天在学校学习，在家继续学习是不好的，他们应该有时间去玩。
As a student, they have much pressure, the parents put all their hopes on them, so the parents want their kids be a excellent student. So after school, students still have to study, they need to make up their homework with the help of the tutor. Parents would do everything to improve their kids’ study. So on the weekends, wesee students no more go out for fun, they scarify their childhood on study. As a child, they should go out for fun and play with friends, homework is never being finished. Kids deserve to have rest, parents should not put too much pressure on their kids. Taking the lesson after school is good way to improve study, but kids need some rest, parents need to balance it.作为一名学生，他们有很多的压力，父母把希望都放在他们身上，所以父母想要他们的孩子成为优秀的学生。
（专业四级）作文辅导2009年TEM试卷Part VI WRITING [45 MIN] Section A COMPOSITION [35 MIN]Tourism is a booming business in China. However, some people worry that too much tourists may bring harm to the environment, while others don’t think so. What is your opinion?Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment?You are to write in three parts.In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your opinion. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instruction may result in a loss of marks.专四作文要求：根据所给作文题目、提纲、数据等，在35分钟内写200单词的左右的作文，分值15分，要求：切题、完整、条理清楚、结构严谨、语法正确、语言通顺、表达得体。
体裁为议论文、说明文（记叙文、描写文基本不考,但不能排除）。
一、分析往届真题，判断作文命题方式从以上分析可以看出专业四级命题的特点：1．题材常常涉及到学生生活，如学习、文化、课外活动、文化艺术节等，大众生活如身体健康的方法、心情愉快的重要性和旅游的作用等，一些社会热点问题和现象（如网络、环境以及科技的负面影响等话题。
）2．体裁以说明文和议论文为主，有时会有二者的配合使用。
如“保持好心情的重要性”，首先要阐述出几个重要性，属于说明文；然后在分析为什么要那样做，属于议论文。
因此有的作文以说明文为主，有的以议论文为主。
3．题型1）比较选择类作文1995，1996，1999，2）意义、重要性、危害性说明类作文2000，2001，2003，2006，2008,3）观点论证类作文1997，2002，2004，2007，2009，4）提出建议、解决问题类作文1998，2005。
二、评分标准1．专业四级写作阅卷采用整体评分方法：即：阅卷人员根据作文的内容和语言方面的表现给出归档分，然后适当给奖励或扣分。
2．从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。
内容和语言是一个统一体，作文应表达题目所规定的内容，而内容要通过语言表达。
要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分表达思想，也要考虑是否用英语清楚而确切地表达思想，即考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍。
3．分数要正确反映学生的实际写作水平，避免分数趋中现象。
最好的给满分，最差的记0分。
4.评分时考虑的四个方面：1) content:作文是否体现主题思想。
即要求文章切题（不跑题），又要达到全文的统一（围绕一个主题）。
2) organization:组织是否合理。
合理的结构主要体现在全文条理清楚，组织连贯和谐，善于使用衔接手段使行文连贯，有逻辑性。
3) grammar:语法文字是否有重大错误。
语句合乎英语语法习惯，文字通顺、语法正确。
避免句子片段、主谓不一、词性不对等（作文的硬伤）。
如Lack, like的用法。
4)appropriateness:得体上的要求：兼顾论题、情景和读者的因素，使用正式、非正式、亲昵或文学性的词汇、句式、时态、语态、指示方法等。
5)tidiness卷面布局整洁；字体端正清晰、规范大小写、词间空格、段前缩进、正确使用标点，避免拼写错误、减少涂改。
(注意：字体可以不漂亮，但必须认真清楚；大小错误都扣分；规范要求书写和标点，避免涂改。
严格按照字数要求，不要超出和不足。
照抄指令中原句不记入所写作文字数，因此可以解释或改写。
）5. 作文的五个分数档次：15， 14—12， 11-9， 8-6， 5-3，（2-0）三、写作步骤：1.审清指令理解指令是写作考试至关重要的环节,因为指令包括了对作文主题、发展方式等方面的要求。
2.确立文章的中心思想（文章的要点），必须明确。
中心思想由主题思想句（Thesis statement）来表现。
拟订全文的主题思想句，确保不跑题。
可以将考试指令中的关键词，甚至标题加以灵活应用，扩充为主题思想句。
3.列出写作提纲将主题思想具体化、条理化。
提纲（outline）是文章的框架，可以显现主题发展的脉络。
列提纲有助于作者理清思路，使文章有章可循，有理可依。
提纲可以详细可以简略，可以用短语也可以用句子--（scratch outline, topicoutline, sentence outline）。
4.确定体裁英语作文有四种不同的体裁，各种体裁的写法不同。
从以往的作文可以发现议论文和说明文是考核的重点。
但二者并不泾渭分明，也不排斥。
有的以议论为主，有的则以说明为主。
如： Will Phone Kill Letter Writing? 就是议论文—即对没有定论的观点、现象提出明确的论点，并用论据论证论点的正确性。
如The Importance of ExtracurricularActivities是对已经明确的观点进行阐述。
而One Way toSolve the Pollution就要求提出建议。
5.确定主题句：主题句(topic sentence)是确保段落不跑题的前提。
写主题句最保险的方法就是将考试提示中的关键句，甚至标题加以灵活应用；也可以直接把它扩充为主题句。
6.安排结构指令对文章的结构有规定：第一段明确观点（简单导入和主题思想句）；第二段提供理由和事例（主题句和有说服力的细节和事件---一定是具体的例子和事件，不要空虚的套话）；第三段归纳总结（使用表总结的词汇或词组，不要引出新观点）。
7.草稿写作按照拟订的提纲进行充实，补充必要的细节。
在打草稿的过程中可以不局限于提纲，任意发挥。
以提纲为指导，对主题思想整体布局，通盘考虑。
可以对提纲进行调整和修改。
8.适当修改“修改出成绩”，确保主题思想明确，文章不偏题；确保细节与主题密切相关；确保句子和段落间的衔接；确保文章无标点、拼写、大小写和语法方面的错误。
四、段落的写法按照专业四级作文的要求，在35分钟写一篇200左右的短文，因此全文只能有13-14个句子，其中引言段3，4，3句，正文段8，7，7句，结语段3，3，4句即可。
1．段落的一致性（单一性）段落的一致性要求整个段落只有一个主题，即坚持一个中心思想，不要介入不相关的内容，不要转移话题，其中的每句话都要与主题有关，而不能只与上句有关。
前后的观点要一致；内容要求开展充分完整。
2．段落的发展性要求的主题要有具体的内容支撑，可以是事理的论证、事实、细节或例子。
避免主题中的关键词发展不充分；观点后没有中间环节，只有例子；车轱辘话，不向前发展。
3．段落的层次性要求段内之间各句的作用不同，主题句统领全段；支撑句起着发展主题的作用，有的进行事理论证而有的是细节辅助；总结句概括、归纳全段。
（不一定所有的段落都有总结句。
）4．段落的连贯性是指论点发展过程中的逻辑性或连续性，是文章可读性的重要衡量手段。
如记叙文按照时间顺序展开；描写文按照空间顺序展开；说明议论文则要求按照事理顺序展开或按照人的一般思维方式，先有问题再有回答；先有一般现象再有现象剖析；先有正面论据再有反面论据，或者按照事理的重要程度，先重要后次要等。
保持连贯的方法：反复提及主题但不重复，使用正确的连接手段---启、承、转、合的词汇（因为英语是“形合”语言）。
如As the sayinggoes…, However, As far as …is considered, Evidently, Inconclusion, To sum up…等；英语有多种表示不同关系的连接词汇，如:1）时间（to begin with, moreover, finally; first of all, next, then, eventually; first, second, third）2）因果(owing to, due to, in this way, as a result, for this reason, consequently, accordingly )3）比较、对比(unlike, in contrast, on the contrary, similarly, in the same way, in like manner, just as, whereas, in spite of ) 4）附加 (besides, not only…but also, apart from, furthermore ) 5）递进(furthermore, moreover, equally important, last but not least, additionally, likewise, as well as, besides)6）举例a case in point, to illustrate, take …for example, as follows, as an illustration, just as)7）让步(in spite of, regardless of, even though, whereas)8）转折(on the other side, on the contrary, nevertheless)9）解释、同位( roughly means, in other words, as…suggests, as regards, as for, in terms of, that is to say…, with regard to ) 10）选择(or rather, rather than, not …but, whether…or, alternately, neither…nor, either.. or)11）总结(all in all, in short, as has been mentioned, to conclude, in conclusion, in summary, on the whole)We can draw the conclusion from what we have talked about…Personally, I… For these reasons…According to the above analysis, we can arrive at the conclusion that…等连词，如能在专四考试过程中恰当的运用上面所列的连接词汇，就会增加句子之间的连贯性，使句子地道、流畅，也就必然能够获得较高的分数。
