短文改错(共l0小题；每小题l分，满分l0分)
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It was a chance of a lifetime to win the first prize on the Story Writing Show. All I had to do was to write a story or present it. My teachers have been telling me how great my writing was. So if they had said was true, I would have a chance of winning the prize. What were better, I had useful help. There was Uncle Chen, gentleman living near my house, who was a very much famous writer. He agreed to reading my story and give me some advices on how to write like a real writer.
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Christie was one of my best friend at high school. At that time, we often spend time together. Thank to her help, I made great Progress i n my study. Last year. she decided to study abroad. In other words, we would be separated long time. Before her leaving off, I prepared a gift to show my best wishes to him. She said it was the beat Gift she has ever had. From then on, we’ ve kept touch with each other through e-mails. I look forward to see her again in the near future.
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Christine was just a girl in one of my class. I never knew much about
Her except for that she was strang . she didn’t talk many .her hair was black
and purple, and she worn black sports shoes and a black sweater ,although in the summer .she was ,infact, rather attractively, and she never seemed care what
the rest if us thought about her .like the rest of my classmate , I didn’t really
want to get closest to her . it was only when we did their chemistry projiect
together that I begin to uanderstand why christine dressed the way she did .
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Here is my idea about how a friend is like. Firstly, a friend is someone you can share your secrets. If you tell him a secret, never will he talks about it with anybody else. Besides, a friend is always good listener when you need one. After hear your sad stories, he will say some words that is nice and warm. Still, your happiness makeshim happily too. What’s mo re, a good friend is willing to offer the help to which you need, or can at least give you some advices. In a word, friends are those you like and trust,
and you will enjoy every minute that you spent with them.
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An English lady was finally decided that she really should learn to drive, And after many attempts, she past her driving test and told her husband that，to release，he was going to drive him over to France for a holiday，But then a week after the trip, she suddenly announced that they wouldn’t take the holiday. “How did you change your mind?” he asked her by surprise.“Well，it is all because of the business of drivin g on right.” She said, “I have been practicing for three weeks now，but I still couldn’t get used to it-in fact, I’ve nearly killed three peoples。”
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My sister saw a lovely cup when we are shopping the other day. She liked it at once. Then she bent down and picked up to look at a price on it. As she did this, lots of tea splashed on his T-shirt! I had to try hardly not to laugh at her shocked face! My sister wanted get out of the shop as fast as she could when a shop assistant came over to us. It w\as turned out to be her own cup, th at she’d left on the shelf by mistake. The assistant was clearly as embarrassing as my sister, for I just thought it was funny!
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When I was in high school,most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan. I asded my father the money. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleased if I showed him the money a month after. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine how much happy I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle.
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After five years away in my hometown, I find that the neighborhood which I used to living in has changed a lot. The Sichuan Restaurant and the older fish shop
across the street from our middle school were gone. There exist now a park that has a small river running through. The factory at the corner of Friendship Street and Zhongshan Road has been moved out of the city, and sports center has been built in their place. The market at the corner of Friendship Street and Xinhua Road has been given way to a supermarket. Besides the bookstore next to our middle school is still there.
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Hi Susan.
I’m sorry that I wasn’t able to retur n to your bike on time yesterday. I mean to give it back to you before four in the afternoon，and I was hold up on my way back. Just before I turned corner of park street. happened to see an accident. A little girl was hurt and her mother needed help. So I helped them going to the nearest hospital. I stayed here for one and a half hour and made sure that the girl was allhope you understand.
Thank you!
Li Ling
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My classmate, Joseph, is at present in hospital With a breaking leg. He was walking to school the other day when he let a bicycle ran right into him. He never watches where he is going, so he often gets into the trouble. But he is having a nice time there. He has a comfortable room, patiently nurses, and a great deal of time to read. Some friends of his go to see him everyday, /they take him lots of good book and fresh fruit.. He is not losing any time from school because he is busy study what he has missed in class. The doctor says he is recovering fast than expected and will be out of hospital a few weeks.
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Three men were fishing when the angel appeared in the boat with them. The
firstman got over his shock and politely said to t he angel, “I’ve suffered by back pain for years. Can you help me?” The angel touched his back, and he had recovered.The second man pointed to his glass and asked if the angel could cure her poor eyesight. The angel touched his eyes, but he could see everything clearly.The angel then turned to the third man, threw up his hands in fear. “Don’t touch me!” he cries. “I’m on disability pay!I don’t want to be a normally person!”
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Dear Jerry,
I’m glad to know that you had an interest in Chinese food. Here I’d like to tell you something about them. Chinese food is famous with its wide variety. The food in one area can be easy told from that in another. For example, Shanghai food, a little bit sweet, differ from Sichuan food that is rather hot. However, every kind of the Chinese food is worth trying, because each has a delicious taste and good for health. Since the restaurant in China usually serves special dish of different areas, you can enjoy various Chinese foods whenever you are. I’m looking forward to meet you here so that I can tell you more about Chinese food at table.
Best wishes.
Jin
新短文改错练习题8篇 1 When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father the money. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleased if I showed him the money a month after. He gives me the other when fifty. You can imagine how much happy I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle. 2 Today is the happy day in this holiday. Although I was very tired, but I found myself in these busy days. I am afraid of taken a bus usually, the awful smell of the bus drive I mad, make me feel carsick. But today I did feel carsick. I can defeat carsickness finally. At night I went out with an old friend who I ever like him, but all of us were busy in the examination at the high school that we hadn't been together. I was such surprised as I received his calling. At first, I thought we would never meet before we graduated. Thank him gave me a happy day! 3 Dancing is my hobby and otherwise, when I heard there would be a get-together to celebrate the 60th National Day in the evening of October 1st, I signed up for the performance. Luckily, I become a member of the dance group. During the summer vacation, I practiced hard with others regardless of the cold weather. After the new school term began, when I carried on with the practice while I was working hard at my studies. And finally, the great day came. In the evening, thousands people gathered in the splendid Tiananmen Square. By the bright lights shining around, we were dancing to the pleasant music happily and joyful. Beautiful fireworks in the clear night sky added to my excited. It was realty an unforgettable experience. 4 Most families in China hoped their single children will have a happy future, so they are very strict in their children. So do teachers in school! Many children are given so much homework that they have hardly any spare time have sports. The children are forbidden to do anything but to study. No wonder such many children are tired of lessons. Some even attack or kill his parents and teachers! I believe many people already read this kind of news in newspapers or magazines. Shouldn’t we draw lesson from the accidents? Now our government is making out a plan to solve the education problems. 5 When Jack bowed to someone, he always did it much too quickly. You needn’t wait any longer after he finished nod his head. So he was blamed for no manner. But some warmhearted men taught him, "When you bow to somebody next time, you can count 'January, February, March, until December. Then you could lift your body up. Thus,
Last week my parents and I took a two-days trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan. As every one knows, it’s famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. The weather was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain. The three of them were very excited. As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories. On the way up I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly. Evening came down. We spent the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain. The food was expensive and the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow. （二） Many teachers worry about the effects of television with young people. According to studies, many children spend more time watching television than they spend in school. Because so much viewing, children may not be develop the habit of read and the ability to enjoy themselves. No one worries much about the radio program young people listen to, although radios can be very noise. Teachers also wonder about the effects of television commercials. On one year the average child will see 25,000 television commercials, all planned and written by grown-ups to make children to want things that they don't real need. （三） I’m the captain o f our school team so with my fellow players we’ve won sever al games. There will an important game next month. But one of the best player in our team told me just then that he wouldn’t play basketball once more. His parents asked him to spend in more time preparing for the college entrance examination. I feel sorry to him. But his parents think go to college is more important than playing sports and college was the only place for a smart boy like his son. So my friend had no choice. He wanted to make their parents happy. (四) When I first learned to write English, I ran into many difficulties . The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English. My teacher advised me to keep my diary. I followed her advice and should put down 100 words or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English .One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher .She liked it very much and reads it to the class .All said the story was a good one. Their word were a great encouragement to me. （五） Dear Ralph, I’m a newcomer here of a small town. I would describe myself as shy and quietly. Before my classmates, it seems always difficult for me to do things as well them. I'm sure they will laugh to me and see me as a fool. So I feel happy every day. Besides, I have few friends. I don't know that they don't like to talk with me. Sometimes, we talked to each other very well in class, but after class we become stranger at once. I am trying to improve the situation since it doesn’t seem to work. Can you tell me about what I should do? Yours, Xiao Wei
2012——2016年短文改错 C o r r e c t i o n1［2016·乙卷(全国Ⅰ)］ M y u n c l e i s t h e o w n e r o f ar e s t a u r a n t c l o s e t ot h a t I l i v e.T h o u g hn o t v e r y b i g,b u t t h e r e s t a u r a n t i s p o p u l a r i n o u r a r e a.I t i s a l w a y s c r o w d e d w i t h c u s t o me r s a t m e a l t i me s.S o m e p e o p l ee v e nh a dt ow a i t o u t s i d e.M y u n c l et e l l smet h a t t h ek e y t oh i ss u c c e s si sh o n e s t. E v e r y d a y h e ma k e s s u r e t h a t f r e s h v e g e t a b l e s o r h i g h q u a l i t y o i l a r e u s i n gf o r c o o k i n g.M y u n c l e s a y s t h a t h e n e v e r d r e a ms b e c o mi n g r i c h i n t h e s h o r t p e r i o d o f t i m e.I n s t e a d,h e h o p e s t h a t o u r b u s i n e s s w i l l g r o ws t e a d y. C o r r e c t i o n2［2016·甲卷（全国Ⅱ）］ T h e s u m me r h o l i d a y i s c o mi n g.M y c l a s s ma t e s a n d I a r e t a l k i n g a b o u t h o wt o d o d u r i n g t h e h o l i d a y.We c a n c h o s e b e t w e e n s t a y i n g a t h o me a n d t a k e a t r i p.I f w e s t a y a t h o m e,i t i s c o mf o r t a b l e b u t t h e r e i s n o n e e d t o s p e n d mo n e y.B u t i n t h a t c a s e,w e w i l l l e a r n l i t t l e a b o u t w o r l d.I f w e g o o n a t r i p a b r o a d,w e c a n b r o a d e n y o u r v i e wa n d g a i n k n o w l e d g e s w e c a n n o t g e t f r o m b o o k s.S o m e c l a s s ma t e s s u g g e s t w e c a n g o t o p l a c e s o f i n t e r e s t n e a r b y.I t h o u g h t t h a t i t i s a g o o d i d e a.I t d o e s n o t c o s t ma n y,y e t w e c a n s t i l l l e a r n a l o t. C o r r e c t i o n3［2016·丙卷（全国Ⅲ）］ T h e t e e n a g e y e a r f r o m13t o19w e r e t h e mo s t d i f f i c u l t t i m e f o r m e.T h e y w e r e a l s o t h e b e s t a n dw o r s ey e a r si nmy l i f e.A t t h ef i r s t,I t h o u g h t I k n e w e v e r y t h i n ga n dc o u l dm a k e d e c i s i o n s b y y o u r s e l f.H o w e v e r,my p a r e n t s d i d n't s e e m t ot h i n k s u c h.T h e y a l w a y s t e l l m e w h a t t o d o a n d h o wt o d o i t.A t o n e t i m e,I e v e n f e l t m y p a r e n t s c o u l d n't u n d e r s t a n d m e s o I h o p e dI c o u l db ef r e e l yf r o m t h e m.I s h o w e dt h e m I w a si n d e p e n d e n t b yw e a r s t r a n g e c l o t h e s.N o wI a m l e a v i n gh o me t oc o l l e g e.A t l a s t,I w i l l b e o n m y o w n,b u t I s t i l l w a n t t o h a v e my p a r e n t s t o t u r n t o w h e n e v e r n e e d h e l p. C o r r e c t i o n4［2016·四川］ I t i s M o t h e r's D a y t o d a y.T h o u g h i t's a w e s t e r n f e s t i v a l,i t's p o p u l a r i n C h i n a n o w. M o m h a saf u l l-t i mej o b,s os h eh a st od omo s t o f t h eh o u s e w o r k s.S h ei sag r e a t m o t h e r.B o t hD a do r I p l a n n e dt od os o me t h i n go nM o t h e r'sD a y.Weg e t u pe a r l yi nt h e m o r n i n g.D a d c l e a n e d t h e h o u s e,a n d t h e n w e n t o n s h o p p i n g.Wh e n h e c a m e b a c k,I f o u n d a b u n c h o f f l o w e r s i n h e r h a n d.I a s k e d M o m t o s t a y i n t h e s i t t i n g r o o m a n d I c o o k e d i n k i t c h e n. T h e d i s h e s w h a t I c o o k e d w e r e M o m's f a v o r i t e s t.A t d i n n e r,w e s a i d t o h e r,"H a p p y M o t h e r's D a y!"M o m w a s g r a t e f u l a n d mo v i n g. C o r r e c t i o n5［2016·浙江］ Wh e n I w a s a v e r y y o u n g c h i l d r e n,m y f a t h e r c r e a t e d a r e g u l a r p r a c t i c e I r e m e mb e r w e l l y e a r s l a t e.E v e r y t i me h e a r r i v e d h o me a t e n d o f t h e d a y,w e'd g r e e t h e r a t t h e d o o r.H e w o u l d a s k w h ow e w a s a n d p r e t e n d n o t t ok n o w i n g u s.T h e n h e a n d m y m o t h e r w o u l d h a v e h a d a d r i n k w h i l e s h e p r e p a r e d d i n n e r a n d t h e y w o u l d t a l k a b o u t h i s d a y a n d h e r s.Wh i l e t h e y c h a t, m y f a t h e r w o u l dl i f t my s i s t e r a n dme u pt os i t i nt h e t o po f t h e f r i d g e.I t w a s b o t he x c i t e d a n d f r i g h t e n i n g t o b e u p t h e r e!M y s i s t e r a n d I t h o u g h t h e w a s s o c o o l f o r p u t t i n g u s t h e r e. C o r r e c t i o n6[2015·新课标全国卷Ⅰ] Wh e nI w a s ac h i l d,I h o p e dt ol i v ei nt h ec i t y.I t h i n k I w o u l db eh a p p y t h e r e.N o wI a m l i v i n g i n a c i t y,b u t I mi s s my h o me i n c o u n t r y s i d e.T h e r e t h e a i r i s c l e a n o r t h e mo u n t a i n s a r e g r e e n.U n f o r t u n a t e l y,o nt h ed e v e l o p me n t o fi n d u s t r i a l i z a t i o n,t h ee n v i r o n m e n t h a sb e e n p o l l u t e d.L o t so f s t u d i e sh a v eb e e ns h o w nt h a t g l o b a l w a r m i n gh a sa l r e a d y b e c o m eav e r y s e r i o u s l y p r o b l e m.T h e a i r s w e b r e a t h e i n i s g e t t i n gd i r t i e r a n dd i r t i e r.M u c h r a r e a n i m a l s a r e 1
高考复习必看短文改错专项训练15篇（附答案） 1 Dear Jack， Next Saturday will my birthday.I’m going to hold a birthday party at home on the evening.It will start at 7：30.Some classmates as good as some foreign friends have been invited.The activities include singing，dancing and sharing interesting experiences.Surely，we’ll have a good time.I would feel honoring if you could come.I live at 656 Minzu Street.You can take Bus No.11 or No.15 and got off at the stop of Guang Ming High School.Justly on the opposite side is my house，what is red with a white door.I’m sure of you can’t miss it.I do hope they will come. Best wish. Yours， Li Hua 2 (2017·昆明市高三复习教学质量检测) I’m one of the students in our class who has ever been to https://www.doczj.com/doc/593222608.html,st summer I was lucky enough to be sent there to study.As soon as I arrived on England by plane.I was picked up by the Smiths，which I would live with for the next two weeks.We felt like a fish out of water when I got there.The Smiths did what they could make me feel at home.I study at an international school，where I met friend from all over the world.I seized the opportunity to practise my speak English.Soon I made such a rapid progress that I received highly praise from all the people around. 答案 I’m one of the students in our class who has have ever been to https://www.doczj.com/doc/593222608.html,st summer I was lucky enough to be sent there to study.As soon as I arrived on in England by plane.I was picked up by the Smiths，which whom I would live with for the next two
高三英语短文改错专项训练(每日一篇） (1) Last Sunday I saw the worst storm in years. It came sudden and went on for over three hours. After lunch, I went into my room to have a rest. The air was hotter, and all is quiet. Then a strong wind started to blow into my room. Pieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air and some flew out the open window. As I ran out to catch them, big drop of rain began to fall. When I came back into house, it was raining harder and harder. I tried very hard to close the window. Then I heard a loudly crashing(碰撞的)sound from the back of the house. When I ran out to find that a big tree had fallen down and broke the top of the back room. (2) I have been planning to join in our college basketball team next year, so now I am spending as more time as I can with other people who likes to play. They are teaching me the most important rules and technologies of the game, and I am getting the better all the time. We have a neighborhood team that play against other teams in the area. One of my neighbors is helping rest of us improved our skills. Tonight we are playing against one of the best teams in the city, and I think we can beat them if we won't make any mistakes. (3) Fang Tong is 34 years old, an actor, director and teacher of Beijing Opera Theater. Most of his students are from other part of China and have come to Beijing at a very young age of sixteen or seventeen. He hopes create an environment for his students that it is much more relaxing than the one he used to study in. He thought that an actor should relax himself when performing. Yet his students deep respect him and he never needs to raise his voice in order to be hearing. For his opinion, actors should go on even when they feel they have made a mistake in their performances because the moment is already gone but people can never be back to it. . . So art is always changing and
1．； 2．短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分） 3．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌系的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 4．增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。 5．删除：把多余的词用斜线（ / ）划掉。 6．修改：在错的词下划一横线（____），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 7．注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词； 8．2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分. 9．My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up. 10．At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, “I might have to retire again next year get some more of these biscuits.” 11．My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter! 12．2．短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分） 13．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．14．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。 15．删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。 16．修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 17．注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。 18．2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 19．In order to promote participation in outdoor exercise, our school had organized an activity to climb the West Mountain on April 10. The moment we arrived at the foot of a mountain, we set out for the top in high spirit. We supported each other to pass the rocky areas on the course of the climb. Laughing and cheering, we eventually reached the summit, there we were greeted by the bright sunshine and fresh air. Viewing from the top, the city was extremely beautiful This event was very benefit, for not only we take a break from our heavy school workload, but we also learned what to cooperate. Therefore, we strongly suggest that similar events are held every year! 3．短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
高考短文改错专项练习 1 College students have a little ways to pay their college fees. Many students have their parents to pay the fees. Some students may apply to a bank loan and others will try to find part-time jobs in and out of the campus. Apart from this, many good student can win a scholarship. By this way they can pay at least part of the fees. As to me, I will let my parents pay half of their fees because they are rich enough. Beside my study, I will take up a part-time job by teach some high school students math, physics, chemistry and English, as I’m very good at these important subjects. Of course I will also work very hard at my lessons in order to I can easily win a scholarship. 2 I am angry about the act of dishonesty in the exams. I’m not saying that I’m a good student and that I’ve never cheated. I once write the answer on my hand for a history test but, unluckily, caught by my teacher. Because she was one of my most favorites, there were no words to describe how sorry I felt at once. I thought cheat would help me keep my straight A’s. Little I know that I was hurting not only herself but also my teachers. From this lesson I know teachers want students to succeed by learning with their own and do the best they can, not by cheating.
新短文改错练习题8篇 1 When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father the money. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleased if I showed him the money a month after. He gives me the other when fifty. You can imagine how much happy I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle. 2 Today is the happy day in this holiday. Although I was very tired, but I found myself in these busy days. I am afraid of taken a bus usually, the awful smell of the bus drive I mad, make me feel carsick. But today I did feel carsick. I can defeat carsickness finally. At night I went out with an old friend who I ever like him, but all of us were busy in the examination at the high school that we hadn't been together. I was such surprised as I received his calling. At first, I thought we would never meet before we graduated. Thank him gave me a happy day! 3 Dancing is my hobby and otherwise, when I heard there would be a get-together to celebrate the 60th National Day in the evening of October 1st, I signed up for the performance. Luckily, I become a member of the dance group. During the summer vacation, I practiced hard with others regardless of the cold weather. After the new school term began, when I carried on with the practice while I was working hard at my studies. And finally, the great day came. In the evening, thousands people gathered in the splendid Tiananmen Square. By the bright lights shining around, we were dancing to the pleasant music happily and joyful. Beautiful fireworks in the clear night sky added to my excited. It was realty an unforgettable experience. 4 Most families in China hoped their single children will have a happy future, so they are very strict in their children. So do teachers in school! Many children are given so much homework that they have hardly any spare time have sports. The children are forbidden to do anything but to study. No wonder such many children are tired of lessons. Some even attack or kill his parents and teachers! I believe many people already read this kind of news in newspapers or magazines. Shouldn’t we draw lesson from the accidents? Now our government is making out a plan to solve the education problems. 5 r When Jack bowed to someone, he always did it much too quickly. You needn’t wait any longe after he finished nod his head. So he was blamed for no manner. But some warmhearted men taught him, "When you bow to somebody next time, you can count 'January, February, March, until December. Then you could lift your body up. Thus, the ceremony will b e very perfect.” The next day, he met his uncle. He did as the men told. The bow was too long that it made his uncle escape away soon with a surprising look . When Jack looked down, he found his uncle gone . So he asked the passer, "In what month did he go away?" 6 Our government is trying hard to build an energy-saving society. It is somebody’s duty to work hard and reach this goal. However, not everybody has realized the important of it. Take our school for example. Sometime we can see that lights and computers are still on after class. Some students