英语专八考试作文评分标准（中英双语版）
英语专八作文满分20分，分为五个等级，20-18分，17-15分，14-12分，11-9分和8-6分。
BAND-8 SCORE DESCRIPTION
20-18 EFFECTIVE COMMUNICATION WITH ACCURACIES
The writing effectively addresses the writing task. It demonstrates a well developed logical organizational structure with clearly stated main ideas and sufficeient supporting details. It has almost no errors of vocabulary, spelling, punctuation or syntax, and it displays an adequate ability to use the language with appropriacy. No difficulty is experienced by the reader.
17-15 GOOD COMMUNICATION WITH FEW INACCURACIES
The writing adequately addresses almost all of the writing task, though it deals with some parts more effectively than others. It demonstrates a generally well developed logical organizational structure with main ideas and supporting details. It has relatively few significant errors of vocabulary, spelling, punctuation or syntax, and it displays an ability to use the language with appropriacy. Very little difficulty is experienced by the reader.
14-12 PASSABLE COMMUNICATION WITH SOME INACCURACIES
The writing adequately addresses most of the writing task. On the whole, it demonstrates an adequately developed organizational structure, though there may occasionally be a lack of relevance, clarity, consistency or support. It has occasional errors of vocabulary, spelling, punctuation or syntax, which may, from time to time, obscure meaning, and for the most part it displays some ability to use the language with appropriacy. Occasional difficulty is experienced by the reader.
11-9 PROBLEMATIC COMMUNICATION WITH FREQUENT INACCURACIES
The writing only addresses some of the writing task. It demonstrates an inadequate organizational structure, and there may quite often be a lack of relevance, clarity, consistency or support. It has frequent errors of vocabulary, spelling, punctuation or syntax, and it displays a limited ability to use the language with appropriacy. Some difficulty is experienced by the reader.
8-6 ALMOST NO COMMUNICATION
评价一篇专八作文的得分，大致可以参照以下四个标准来确定：内容(content)、组织(organization)、语法(grammar)和得体性(appropriacy)。这四个标准中，前两个标准是关于内容结构的，属于谋篇布局部分，后两个是关于语言的，属于表达部分。
在英语专八考试的作文评阅中，一般将作文分为五个等级：
第五级：优秀作文(effective communication with accuracies) 这样的作丈观点清楚，结构合理，内容充实，语言运用得体，基本没有语言错误。得分在18-20分。
第四级：良好作文(good communication with few inaccuracies) 这样的作文观点明确，结构合理，内容充实，语言运用较得体，稍有语言错误。得分在15-17分。
第三级：尚可作文(passable communication with some inaccuracies) 这样的作文观点明确，结构完整，内容尚可，语言运用的得体性一般，语言错误不少，影响到作文的理解。得分在14-12分。
第二级：问题作文(problematic communication with frequent inaccuracies) 这样的作文观点不甚明确，结构不完整，内容匮乏，语言得体性较差，语言错误较多，影响到作文的理解。得分在11-9分。
第一级：失败作文(almost no communication)这样的作文基本没有达到写作要求，几乎无结构和内容可言，通篇充斥语言错误，无语言得体性可言，作文难以理解。得分在8-6分或以下。
1. 越来越多的人使用手机进行联络； 2. 过度依赖手机会对心理健康产生危害； 3. 谈谈你的看法。 参考作文 More and more people contact each other using cell phones. The overuse of or over-reliance on cell phones may cause problems to people’s emotional health. To begin with, the overuse of mobile phones will invade people’s private time that should have been spent on relaxation. For instance, the use of mobile phones enables your boss to find you whenever and wherever you are, even when you are enjoying a dinner at home. Secondly, the frequent sending and receiving of short messages may keep a person continually alert to any sound similar to that of a cell phone. According to psychologists, being constantly sensitive to some sounds will make people feel under pressure. Do you want to stay away from the harm of overusing mobile phones? Just turn it off after a day’s work. (133 words) 九 1. 有些人认为家长应该为孩子谋划未来的职业； 2. 孩子认为应该由自己决定将来的工作； 3. 谈谈你的看法。 参考作文 Parents generally believe should they plan their children’s careers, claiming they know their children well enough to decide what kind of job suits them. Many even tend to force their ideas of jobs on their children. However, many children believe they should be left free to choose their own careers. Firstly, parents and children may not share the same interests. Secondly, children grow up in an age different from their parents’. Therefore they should be allowed to choose for themselves. In my opinion, mutual understanding is important. On one hand, parents’ view reflects their concern for children. On the other, it is the children who will be doing the job. Therefore, it is wise for parents to give them this freedom while children should consult their parents when necessary. (129 words) 十 1. 有些人觉得中国人全民学英语没必要； 2. 有人认为掌握一门外语就多了一项技能； 3. 谈谈你的看法。 参考作文 Nowadays it is a trend for Chinese to learn English. Without certain certificates showing their English ability, it may be hard even to find a job, even though most jobs have nothing to do with English. For some, it is a waste of time and resources for so many people to learn English. On the other hand, it is believed that grasping a foreign language means obtaining a useful skill, which could make a person be able to fulfill more jobs and demands in the society. To me, the most time-consuming task for students in China is learning English. They have to spend a lot of precious time reading, memorizing words, and doing exercises. To them, the only meaning in English learning is to deal with tests. Therefore, it is not necessary for all the people to learn English. (139 words)
【第一篇：求职】 Directions:For this part, you are supposed to write a composition of about 100 -120 wordsbased on the following situation. Remember to write it clearly. 假设你是Matt Hand，在报上看到一则招聘广告，正符合你的情况，于是写信求职。广告要点： (1)招聘对象：有计算机工程(engineeing学历的工程师; (2)条件：有两年以上计算机工程工作经验;年龄在22～30岁之间;身体健康。注意：地址和招聘单位名称可自编。 2017年成人高考专升本英语考试作文范文：求职 1073，Green Street Atchison，Kansas，66002 March l0，2012 P.O.Box 2035 Clare Corporation，Ltd. Dear Sirs， I read your advertisement in yesterday’S paper.I think I am the best person fit for the position. I'm 23 years old.I graduated from Boston University two years ago.My major at university was computer engi—neering.After graduation l worked as a computer engineer in a big company for two years.Now I have enough expe-fience in this field.And I'm very interested in it. I like sports and I am in good health.I like hard work.I’m sure I can do your iob well if I can become a member of your company. I'm looking forward to your reply. Very sincerely yours， Matt Han 【第二篇：广播通知】 Directions: For this part, you are supposed to write a composition of about 100 - 120 wordsbased on the following situation. Remember to write it dearly. 你校学生会将为来访的美国朋友举办一个晚会，要在学校广
英语四级作文万能模板 英语四级作文万能模板：解决方法题型 1．问题现状； 2．怎样解决（解决方案的优缺点）。 In recent days, we have to face I problem—A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, …（说明A的现状）. Second, …（举例进一步说明现状）. Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, …（解决方法一）. For another, …（解决方法二）. Finally, …（解决方法三）. Personally, I believe that …（我的解决方法）. Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because …（带来的好处）. 英语四级作文万能模板：对比选择型 When it comes to …, different people hold different views. Some contend that …. For one thing, …. For another, …. In spite of all these claims, others maintain that …, They point out that …. Another instance often cited is that …. It’s no easy task to find a satisfactory answer to the issue. As for me, there’s some truth to both arguments. It’s advisable to …. 英语四级作文万能模板：说明利弊题型 说明利弊这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度（利或弊）出发，最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度（或对事物前景提出预测）。 1．说明事物现状； 2．事物本身的优缺点（或一方面）； 3．你对现状（或前景）的看法。 Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First, …（A的优点之一）. Besides, …（A的优点之二）. But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that …（A的第一个缺点）. To make matters worse, …（A的第二个缺点）. Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to …（我的看法）. 〖From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only by this way, …（对前景的预测）〗 英语四级作文万能模板：现象解释型 Recently, …. What amazes us most is …. It is true that …. There are many reasons explaining …. The main reason is …, What is more, …, Thirdly, …. As a result, …. Considering all these, …. For one thing, …. For another, …. In conclusion, ….
写作过渡妙词整理 一、过渡词或句： 递进：1. Furthermore 2. besides 3. moreover 4. what’s more 5. in addition 转折：1. however 2. but 3. although 4. on the other hand 5.nonetheless 6. nevertheless 7. yet 8. by contrast 9. after all 其他：no doubt, in fact, as a matter of fact, no wonder, to be true, as a result, frankly speaking, to tell the truth 二、举例说法： 1. for example, for instance, 2. can be given a concrete example that, 3. history presented many examples of AAA., 4. perhaps the most important example of AAA. is that, 5. a good example of this is that, 6. in order to see this point clearly, let us see an example., 7. an example can give the details of this argument, 8. to illustrate this, there is an example that is very persuasive, 三、引出自己观点的说法： 1，In my point of view, 2，As far as I am concerned, 3，According to my personality and fondness, I would prefer A rather than B, 4，In my opinion, 5，On a personal level, 6，For me, 7，Which one I prefer depends on my own experience, life style and educational background. 四、结尾句： 1，From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ---, 2，In a word, Generally speaking, In a short, As a result, 3，So from what has been discussed, one can reach only this conclusion that ---, 4，Therefore from what we have discussed, we may safely come to the conclusion that---, 5，In conclusion ,everybody want to choose the one that fits hi, 6，So, it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to choose A, 7，Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that---, 8，Nevertheless I must admit that people can do well without A, but no one can ignore the additional convenience and satisfaction offered by A. Such experience will definitely be helpful in one’s later life. 五、引出论据的过渡句： 1，My argument for this view goes as follows, 2，There are numerous reasons and I shall here explore a few primary ones, 3，Here I would explain a few of the most important reasons for choosing A, 4，My arguments for this point are listed as follows. 六、各论据段首句： 1、第一个原因Above all, First of all, In the first place, To begin with, The main reason for my propensity for AAA is that, the most obvious reason is that, 2、第二个原因Another reason is that, Another positive role of AAA lies in, The further reason why I advocate AAA is that, 3、其他Before rendering my opinion, I think it is important to take a glance at the arguments on both sides, All the above evidence supports the undeniable importance of AAA. Maybe there are some other reasons to show that AAA, but it is generally believed that the reasons mentioned above are commonly acceptable.
附录五：专升本英语作文技巧和模板 （一）称呼： 1、写给机构：Dear Sir or Madam, （06、07） 2、写给个人：（05）Dear Mr. Wang, （08）Dear Bob, （09）Dear Editors, （二）正文：3段，7句左右，100-130词，3-5个关联词（适可而止），3-5个从句（多多益善） 1、第一段：2句左右 1）自我介绍（私人书信除外）： （1）工作人员： I am a staff member from your company/corporation. I am a staff member from Motorola（China）Electronics Ltd. （2）学生：I am a freshman/sophomore/junior/senior/undergraduate/graduate from the Department of Chinese Language and Literature of Beijing University. 2）写作目的：书信的中心思想，改写提纲一 I am writing the letter for purpose of resigning from my current post/position. I am writing to inform you that I wish to request if you could help me find a potential beneficiary of Project Hope. 2、第二段：3句左右，改写提纲二 1）主题句：1句 2）分论点一：1句 3）分论点二：1句 3、第三段：2句左右，改写提纲三 1）表示感谢（私人建议信除外）： （1）My appreciation to you for your generous help is beyond words. （2）Words fail me when I wish to express my sincere gratitude to you. （3）I take this opportunity to show my heartfelt appreciation for the kind assistance you render me. 2）期待回信： （1）I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. （2）I look forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience. （3）Your prompt attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated. （三）落款： 1）结尾客套：Yours sincerely, yours, sincerely 2）签名：Li Ming
Luxurious Buildings On Campus 1.近年来，一些大学建起豪华楼舍来提升形象； 2.有人赞同，有人反对； 3.谈谈你的观点。 【范文】 With a view to improving their image and comprehensive strength, many universities are rushing to build luxurious constructions. Some people are in favor of this trend, because the considerably more comfortable environment could let students apply themselves to academic studies. The others who hold the opposite opinion think it not only wastes money but also disturbs the normal teaching activities. Generally speaking, newly-built blocks help to meet the increasingly demanding requirements of the modern students. But with the breakdown of heaps of age-old buildings, their original historic significances would disappear. Most importantly, the trend towards luxury shows the commercialization of college education, which gives negative influence on students. Therefore, I strongly hope universities could attach more attention to the construction of specialties and improvement of their cultural connotation, attracting students by their excellent teaching qualities and research achievements. 【点评】 首段直接点题，说明现象；第二段分述人们对此现象各持己见；第三段陈述自己的观点，并提出建议。 范文首段提出大学楼舍“豪华风”这一普遍现象；第二段指出赞同者认为舒适的环境能让学生更好地投入学业中，反对者认为这不仅浪费钱，而且扰乱了正常教学活动；第三段给出自己的观点---旧楼的拆除破坏了校园原有的历史意义；奢华的趋势使得大学教育商业化，给大学生带来负面影响。最后提出建议，希望大学能注重提高自身的文化内涵，加强学科建设。 第一段中With a view to意为“为了”，后面接v.-ing；第二段中apply themselves to academic studies意为“全身心投入学业”；第三段中construction of specialties 意为“专业队伍的建设”，improvement of their cultural connotation意为“提高自身文化内涵”。
英语作文写作万能模板 一原因陈述类 此类作文要求考生对社会现象或社会问题进行解释。出题者以某一社会现象、问题或趋势为议论对象，要求考生就其形成的原因进行充分、客观的解释，并从考生自身的视角出发对这一现象（或问题）的前景、后果或影响做出结论性分析或预测。 模板1 Nowadays, we often hear that . This phenomenon is not accidental, and there are social and individual backgrounds. Why cannot . For one thing, . For another, . As an example, . From that we . As far as I am concerned, I agree that .I think that . 模板2 In the past 30 years China has experienced a surprising increase in : It rose from 8 percent in 1978 to 25 percent in 2008. The statistics look quite disturbing and cause people to ask why. The factors for a great rise in X are complex. Some people attribute it to which . And other people place the reason to which . Whatever the causes are, only particular external circumstances have been examined. The factors, actually, are psychological as well as social. Most people . They also . For all these reasons, it comes no surprise that . 模板3 Have you ever _________________________? Have you ever _________________________? Have you ever _________________________? If you have no experience like these, your life is an inadequate one. In my point of view, I like X1 much more than X2. Every person can see the first reason that _________________________. The second reason for my propensity for A is that ________________________. X1 is somewhat challenging as well. Such as ________________________. However, I still prefer X1, for X1 teaches me how to ___________________. 二比较分析类 此类作文一种是用比较的手段阐述自己的观点，在比较所讨论的两个事物的优缺点时，要有自己的看法。具体写作时，对赞成的事物优点要详写，缺点少些或略过。对反对的事物，优点要少写或略写，缺点则要详写。 另一种是所比较的两个事物都有明显的优点和缺点时，则既不完全肯定某一事物，也不能彻底否定另一事物。
专升本考试英语是比较重要的科目，分分必争，那么如何在短时间内让自己的英语作文水平提高呢？如何才能提高自己的专升本英语作文分数呢？下面为同学们整理了专升本英语作文模板，希望对同学们有帮助。 万能句型 (1)Some people support it while others do not. 有些人支持，然而有些人反对。 (2)My favorite proverb is...(谚语), which means... 我最喜欢的谚语是…… 它的意义是…… (3)Generally, I am in favour of the conclusion. 总的说来，我赞成这个结论。 (4)There is a famous saying that... which shows the importance of... 有句……的名言，表明了……的重要性。 (5)The message conveyed here is very clear... 这儿所传达出的信息十分明确…… (6)It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that... 它展示了当今一个普遍现象……
(7)Parents arrange everything for their children and spare no effort to do... 父母为孩子安排一切，不遗余力地做…… (8)Measures should be taken to stop... 应该采取措施阻止…… (9)Everyone has his dream. However, it is not so easy for people to realize their dreams. 每个人都有梦想。然而，对人们来说，实现他们的梦想并不是那么容易的。 (10)It is a good idea to do... 做……是一个不错的主意。 (11)We have had a survey on... 我们对……开展了一次调查。 (12)Different people hold different opinions. 不同的人持不同的意见。 (13)Opinions are divided. 有不同意见。 (14)Others have different opinions. 其他人有不同看法。 (15)The difference between A and B is/lies in/exists in... A和B的不同之处在于…… (16)There are several reasons for... but in general, they come down to three major ones. 导致……的原因有多种，但整体上，它们可以归纳为3个主要方面。 (17)Many ways can contribute to solving this problem，but the following ones may be the most effective. 许多方法可以解决这一问题，但是接下来的几个方法可能是最有效的。 (18)It's hardly too much to say that... 毫不夸张地说…… (19)But it's a pity that... 但是可惜的是…… 黄金模块
英语作文Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 miniutes to write a composition on the title:make our city greener,your composition should be based on the following outline: 1：城市绿色的状况2：绿化的好处（如：清洁空气，美化城市，改善气候......）3：怎样才能实现绿化范文：Recent efforts toward the greening of our cities have achieved much, although the results are still far from satisfactory. In recent years many trees have been planted in the cities and much care has been taken of the planted trees. In spite of all this, the greening process is relatively slow compared with cities in many other countries. For example, the green space available on average to each Shanghai citizen is only 0.4 Mu while every Londoner has more than 20 Mu. We can benefit much from making our cities greener by planting trees. First, trees absorb carbon dioxide to produce oxygen which is essential to the health of human beings. Second, trees and other greenery make our cities more beautiful. Third, trees can also improve the climate of the cities. Since we can get so much from making our cities greener, we should spare no effort to do that. We should plant more trees and take better care of them. We also should not cut down the trees. In a word, we should do everything to add to the greening of our cities. Directions: For this part, you are allowed30 minutes to write a composition based on, the following two questions: 1．你在英语学习中有哪些困难? 2．你是如何克服这些困难的? Y our composition should be no less than 100 words. Write this composition on the Answer Sheet. Remember to write it clearly. 范文：To a Chinese, the task of learning English well is not easy. So I, like many other English learners, have met with difficulties in learning English during the past seven years. But I managed to overcome them and made much progress. The spelling and meaning of words can be said to be the first difficulty I met as a beginner. But I found our my own way to deal with them. As to spelling, I never copied a new work again and again to remember it, but tried to find its relevance to the sound. In fact, as long as I can read the word out, I can write it out. As to the meaning, I rarely recite its Chinese translation but often put the word into the sentence to learn its meaning. Moreover, if you use a word quite often, its spelling and meaning will be no problem. After all, we are learning English in order to use it. Grammar and idioms may be another difficulty. But I have also got over it. I have not read lots of grammar books. But I spent much time reading the articles written by native speakers or specialists in English. By doing so, I came to gain “a sense of English language”. I began to gain a feel for which sentences are “good English” and which are not. Finally, I want to say that overcoming all these difficulties requires perseverance. In the past seven years I spent at least an hour on English each day. I believe this is an important reason why I am able to make progress in learning English. Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Positive and Negative Aspects of Sport. Y ou should write no less than 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1. 运动的积极因素；2. 运动的消极因素； 3. 你的体会范文：Sports benefit us in many respects. When taking part in sports, we get the chance to train almost all parts of our body. There is no doubt that properly balanced physical activities keep us physically fit. Furthermore, sports can enrich our life and maintain our psychological health. Through participation, everyone can learn that on the playing field he not only competes for himself but also for his team. Sports teach us about consideration, cooperation
2019成考专升本英语作文范文：鼓励信 假定你是Jack，给在无锡新区工作的笔友王强写信，要点如下：， 1. 非常高兴得知王强在准备高考，並鼓励他一定能克服各种困难取得好成绩。 2. 告诉他你将去无锡旅游，你将乘火车于5月1日早晨6点到达，请他接站，并请他帮你安排1至4日的住宿(旅馆靠近市中心，房间能够小一些，但不要太贵)。 3. 此外，你还要他帮你订5日返回上海的火车票。 Dear Wang Qiang， I'm glad to learn that you are busy preparing for college entrance exams. Where there is a strong will， there is a success. I am sure that you will overcome all kinds of difficulties in your study I'm planning to go to Wuxi and look around in the city for a few days. I'll take the train and arrive at 6 o'clock a.m. on May 1st. Will you please come and meet me at the station? I'm going to stay in Wuxi till May 4th. Please help me book a hotel room. I hope to stay in a hotel around the downtown area but the price shouldn't be very high. I don't mind if the room is small. Another thing. Can you book a ticket for me back to Shanghai on 4th? All the best， Jack