高考英语读后续写素材积累
（常用动作词汇+动作句式+情绪心理句式+主题升华句+环境描写等）一、动作词汇
看（10个）
1.look at sb/sth
with/ in great surprise/ amazement / sorrow / sadness/joy/delight
without saying /uttering a word(介词短语修饰）
excitedly/carefully/happily/sadly（副词修饰）
2.see sb/sth doing see a wolf standing here
3.stare at sb/sth (with his eyes wide open ) wide adv完全的
4.glance at sb/sth glance around 匆匆环视四周
5.glimpse 一瞥give a glimpse of sb/sth
6.glare at sb 怒目而视with annoyed expression
7.notice sb/sth doing
8.observe观察carefully/ with attention
9.spot发现sb/sth was spotted.
10.catch sight of 看见/lose sight of看不见
sth came into sight.看见
sth is out of sight/in sight.看不见
说（28个）
1.tell sb sth=tell sth to sb immediately/instantly/at once
in a soft /gentle/mild voice/tone
2.talk with /to sb about sth 与某人谈论某事
3.say 说She sat on the sofa, saying nothing.
4.whisper sth to sb in a low voice 低声说
https://www.doczj.com/doc/4d17914867.html,rm sb of sth 通知某人某事
6.persuade 劝说sb to do
7.repeat 重复说
8.explain解释9.warn警告sb not to do
10.remind提醒，使想起sb of sth ,remind sb that
11.discuss/debate/argue 讨论/争论
12.declare声称；断言
13.announce宣布通知
14.claim声称宣称
15.acknowledge承认；答谢
16.introduce介绍
https://www.doczj.com/doc/4d17914867.html,plain抱怨of/about sb/sth
18.add补充说
19.murmur嘟哝，咕哝，低声说
20.stammer结巴地说出
21.apologize to sb 向某人道歉
22.utter 说=say ，utter a word
23.sigh 叹气叹息She sighed with relief.
24.voice v发出，voice his opinion/idea
25.continue接着说
26.criticize批评
https://www.doczj.com/doc/4d17914867.html,fort 安慰
28.gasp气喘吁吁地说
叫喊（5个）
1.cry out loudly 大声喊叫
2.shout 大声说；喊叫
3.scream 大声喊let out a scream 发出一声尖叫
4.moan 呻吟
5.yell 喊叫
行走（14个）
1.walk 走
2.run quickly /swiftly 快跑
3.jump with joy/delight/excitement 高兴地/兴奋地跳起来
4.enter/step into 进入/走进
5.stamp 跺脚
6.tiptoe to the room 踮着脚走
7.slip slip into /out of the room 悄悄溜进，溜出
8.dash to猛冲
9.rush to 冲向
10.wander漫步闲逛
11.flee/escape逃离
12.head for前往+地点
13.make one’s way to+地点make his way home 回家
14.stumble跌跌撞撞地走
哭：（9个）
1.cry 哭she cried sadly/bitterly, with tears blurring her vision./with tears rolling down her cheeks /streaming down
2.weep tears (of joy/happiness/regret/sadness) 喜极而泣/遗憾地哭泣/伤心地哭泣
3.try my best to fight back tears 抑制住泪水,but in vain.
4.sob 呜咽、抽泣she began to sob, burying her face in her hands.
5.burst into tears ，burst out crying 突然哭起来
6.break down in tears 因情绪失控而崩溃
7.have a lump 肿块in one's throat（因感动悲伤)哽咽喉咙哽住
8.sb be in tears. Tears were filled with eyes. My eyes are full of tears.
9.choke out哽咽说出
笑：（6个）
1.smile to sb kindly/gently 或者介词短语with satisfaction
2.wear a broad/happy smile
3.force a smile 强颜欢笑
4.beam 笑容满面；眉开眼笑Her angelic face beamed. 她天使般的脸上露出笑容。
5.burst into laughter ,burst out laughing 突然笑起来
https://www.doczj.com/doc/4d17914867.html,ugh at sb . / tease sb 嘲笑某人
问答：（4个）1.ask sb in a curious/puzzled/confused voice / with confusion
2.question v. 质问
3.inquire v. 询问
4.answer/reply sb without hesitation毫不犹豫；
二、动作描写句子
关于头部的动作
1.老师满意地点了点头，朝他竖起了大拇指The teacher nodded with satisfaction and thumbed up at him
2. 他们赞同地点了点头。They nodded their heads in agreement.
3. 她不相信地摇头。She shook her head in disbelief.
4.他挠着头，一个字都不理解。He scratched his head, not understanding a word.
5. 他羞愧地低下了头。He lowered his head in shame.
关于手部的动作
1.她用轻微颤抖的手打开了礼物She opened the gift with her hands shaking slightly
2.别无选择，我只能举起课本，希望把自己隐藏起来
Having no choice, I slowly raised the book ,hoping to hide myself.
3.母亲拥抱着我，低声安慰我My mother hugged me , whispering to comfort me.
4. 她颤抖着，紧张地搓着双手。She trembled, rubbing her hands together nervously.
5. 她交叉双臂凝视着他。She folded/crossed her arms and stared at him.
6.他伸出一只手抓住她的胳膊。He reached out a hand and grabbed/took her arm.
7.哽咽着说不出话来，我更大声地拍手，下定决心决不再以貌取人。Feeling a lump in the throat, I clapped my hands even more loudly, determined never to judge a book by its cover.
8.他走到她面前，帮她擦去脸上的泪水He stepped forward to her and helped her wipe the tears off her cheeks
9.父亲拍着我的肩膀，鼓励我永远不要放弃自己的梦想My father patted me on the shoulder , encouraging me never to give up my dreams
或Patting on my shoulder,my father encouraged me never to give up my dreams
关于脚部动作
1.他从床上滑了下来，踮着脚尖走向浴室。He slipped out of the bed and tiptoed to the bathroom.
2. 她不耐烦地跺脚。She was tapping/stamping her feet impatiently.
3. 她拖着脚跟着父母走。She dragged her feet as she followed her parents.
4. 突然她的膝盖软了下来，摔倒在地上。Suddenly her knees weakened and she fell to the floor.
5. 他跪下请求原谅。He got down on his knees and begged for forgiveness.
6.尽管她很虚弱，但她挣扎着站起来，继续寻求帮助。Weak as she was, she struggled to her feet, continuing searching for assistance.
7.他小心翼翼地环顾四周，溜进房间，轻轻地关上门。Looking around him cautiously, he slipped into the room and softly closed the door.
8. 他好奇地想知道里面有什么，蹑手蹑脚地走进黑暗的山洞。
Curious to know what was inside, he tiptoed into the dark cave.
“说”的不同表达
1.鲁本低声说了声谢谢，然后一路跑回家。
Reuben murmured a thank you and ran home all the way.
2.“给你，妈妈！在这里！鲁本一边喊一边跑到她身边。
“Here, Mum! Here!”Reuben exclaimed as he ran to her side.
3. 一个年轻人来到警察局，在一群记者的簇拥下，宣称他发现了凶手。A young man came to the police station, surrounded by a group of journalists, declaring that he had spotted the murderer.
4.“我想……”我低声说。
“I guess......” I murmured under my breath.
5.“该走了。”我低声对女孩说，希望她能马上跟我走。“Time to go.” I whispered to the girl, wishing she could follow me right away.
7. 他打破了沉默，宣布：“参加比赛的最后期限是明天。”
He interrupted the silence with an announcement: “The deadline to enter for the Competition is tomorrow.”
10. 她向詹姆斯打招呼，问道。“你准备好我们的实地考察了吗？“詹姆斯没有回应。She greeted James and inquired. “Are you ready for our field trip?” James didn’t respond.
11.“你认为对于鸟来说什么是重要的？达蒙太太问道。
“What do you think matters for a bird?” Mrs. Damon questioned.17.他轻声补充说：“我想你。”He added softly,“I miss you.”
25“好吧，我们现在对此无能为力，”她叹了口气。
“Well, there is nothing we can do about it now,”she sighed.
其他动作句式
1.当我问他为什么要这样做时，他只是耸耸肩。
When I asked him why he had done it, he just shrugged his shoulders.
2. 她激动得心怦怦直跳。Her heart was pounding with excitement.
3.无数的事情闪过我的脑海Countless things flashed through my mind
4.她看到这情景吓得麻木了，张大了嘴巴。She was numb with shock at the sight,with wide open mouth
5.听到呼喊，邻居们冲了出来，想知道发生了什么
Hearing the cry, the neighbors rushed out to know what had happened
或Hearing the cry, out rushed the neighbors,trying know what had happened
6.天寒地冻，他走在上学路上，瑟瑟发抖。
It was a freezing day, he was on his way to school,trembling from head to toe.
7.没有多想，他收拾好野营装备直奔树林
Without any hesitation, he packed up his camping gear , heading straight to the woods
8.在这学年剩下的时间里，我全身心地投入到学习中
I devoted myself completely into study for the rest of the school year.
9.我躺在床上，关于父亲的回忆涌上心头
Memories of my father flooded back when I lay in bed.
10.她坐在那儿，眼睛盯着电视屏幕。She was sitting there, staring at the TV screen
或She sat there with her eyes glued to the TV screen
11.她站在原地，陷入沉思，好像明白了什么.
She stood still, lost in thought, as if she had understood something.
三、情绪心理描写句子
喜乐：
1. A smile of understanding flashed across his face.他脸上露出了一种理解的微笑。
2. Laughter lingered around the room.笑声在房间里萦绕。
3. His eyes twinkled with pleasure.他的眼睛闪烁着快乐。
4. I was wild with joy.我欣喜若狂。
5. I was pleased beyond description.我高兴得难以形容。
6. She wore a shining smile on her face.她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。
7. Her smile lit up the whole room.她的笑容照亮了整个房间。
8. She shed tears of joy.她高兴得流下了眼泪。
9. Her eyes were sparkling like diamonds.她的眼睛闪着钻石般的光芒。
10. She was overflowing with happiness.她洋溢着幸福。
11. Her flushed face was shining with excitement.她激动得满脸通红。
12. Joy welled up inside her.她心中涌起喜悦。
13.Heard of her admission, she could not conceal her excitement.当她得知自己被录取的消息时，她无法掩饰内心的兴奋之情
14.He was so excited that he immediately took out his cell phone and couldn't wait to tell his friend about the experience.他感到很激动，立刻拿出手机，迫不及待地告诉他的朋友这次经历
或Feeling excited,he instantly took out his phone,eager to tell his friends the experience.
我安静快乐耐心地看着太阳描绘出崭新的一天。
15.She was overjoyed at the news that her father was taking her to Disney.听到爸爸要带她去迪斯尼的消息，她欣喜若狂
或者She went wild with joy at the news that her father would take her to the Disneyland
16.There was obvious pleasure in her voice.她的声音中明显地透露着开心
17.At the thought of this ,there's a long- expected smile across her lips.
一想到这个，她嘴角露出了久违的笑容。
愤怒:
1. I was seized by anger.我充满了愤怒。
2.He could hardly/scarcely contain his rage.他几乎控制不住怒火。
3.His voice trembled with anger.他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。
4. He glared at me with burning eyes.他用灼热的目光怒视着我。
5. His face clouded with anger.他气得脸色阴沉。
6.His face flaming with shame ,he stole out without being noticed.他羞愧难当，满脸通红，趁人不注意溜了出去。悲伤烦恼：
1.He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks.他静静地站着, 眼泪顺着面颊流了下来。
2. She burst into tears and ran out of the room.她突然哭了起来,跑出了房间。
3. She sobbed, hiding her face in her hands.她掩面哭泣。
4. I tried to fight back tears. /My eyes were filled with tears.我努力忍住眼泪。/ 我的眼里充满了泪水。
5.The news cast a cloud of gloom over his face.这消息使他脸上蒙上了一层阴影。
6. These days he was in low spirits.这些日子他情绪低落。
7.Hearing the news, she fell into deep sorrow.听到这个消息，她陷入极度的悲伤之中
8.Seeing the ending of the letter,she could not contain her sorrow and tears rolled down her cheeks.看到信的结尾，她再也抑制不住内心的悲伤，潸然泪下。
9.His heart sank when stepping into the room.一走进屋里，他的心就沉了下去
10.He returned to his room,tears rolling down beyond control.他回到房间，眼泪不由自主地流了下来
11.He was physically and mentally exhausted.他身心俱疲
害怕:
1.He turned to me, with his eyes full of horror.他转过身来,眼里充满了恐惧。
2.She was choked by fear. 她因恐惧而窒息。
3. A flood of fear welled up in him. / Fear flooded over him. 他心中涌起一阵恐惧。/ 恐惧淹没了他。
4. She shook all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles.她浑身颤抖,觉得如坐针毡。
感动:
1. Touched deeply/immensely, we… 被深深感动, 我们……
2.With tears streaming down her face, she... 泪水顺着她的脸颊流了下来, ……
3.At the sight of the familiar handwriting,tears welled up In His eyes.他一看到熟悉的字迹，便热泪盈眶。
4.A warm current welled up in his heart the moment he realized how much love his father had devoted to him.当他意识到父亲为他付出了多少爱的时候，一股暖流涌上心头
5.The painting brought tears to my eyes as I remembered how important I was to my father.这副画让我落泪，因为我想起了我对爸爸来说是多么的重要。
四、各种衔接词
Early in the morning 一大早
the other day = a few days ago 几天前
The next/following day 第二天（一般过去时）Just then, … = Just at that moment 正在那时，… After that, =Later on, ….
Then … 然后，…After a while 一会儿以后 Ultimately, finally, In the end/ at last/ finally/eventually 最后 from then on
从那以后, from now on 从今以后 at the same time, Meanwhile, 同时
Apparently, Unfortunately, Luckily, Amazingly, Unexpectedly, Before they knew it,不知不觉中，
After seemingly a long time, 在过了似乎很长一段时间后， All of a sudden,突然 Hearing this,听到这个
Almost without thinking,几乎想都没想。 Without hesitation, 毫不犹豫地
Knowing what had happened, 知道发生什么事情后，
to one ’s surprise/joy/disappointment/relief 令人惊讶/高兴/失望/放心的是 For one frozen moment ，在那一瞬间，.. After several attempts, 经过几次尝试， On arriving home, 一回到家 五、主题升华句（共17句）
1. 我永远不会忘记这次经历。 I will never forget ... 倒装句否定词置于句首
2. 正是我的妈妈教会我这么宝贵的一课。 强调句
3. 从那时起，无论我遇到什么困难和问题，妈妈鼓励性的话语——every cloud has a silver lining, 总会嬴荡在耳边。
4. 5. 我会尽我所能做的一切来帮助有需要有困难的人。
6. 我要学会珍惜并感激我所拥有的一切。
7. 这是我生命中一段意义深刻的时光，我会永远铭记在心。 8.尽管外面天气很冷，但有了爱，他们的心不再寒冷。
In this bitter winter, they would never felt cold because of love and kindness. Cold as the weather was, they felt warm like the sun shining on their body.
9.我们的圣诞树看起来一样，但今年，它似乎更明亮。1939年的圣诞节是最神奇的圣诞节，它让我想起了晚年生活中必不可少的东西——来自家庭的爱。Our Christmas tree looked the same, but this year, it seemed brighter. Christmas of 1939 was the most magical Christmas that reminded me of what was essential in later life---love from a family. 10.世界总会给有梦想的人开路。 The world always makes way for dreamers. 11.苦难是磨炼人的好机会
Suffering is a good opportunity to cultivate people
12.事实上，每个人都有天赋。发现它的时候要勇敢，也要付出努力。最终，你会创造奇迹。In fact, everyone has talent. Be brave when you find it and work hard. In the end, you'll create miracles .
13.生命就是充满欢笑和泪水的。只有同时接受两者，我们才能享受生活。Life is full of laughter and tears. Only by accepting both can we enjoy life. 14.有时候一些小小的善行也能带来巨大的改变 Sometimes a little kindness can make a big difference.
15.有时候,一些小小的关爱也能融化人们内心的孤单。Sometimes a little love can also melt people's inner loneliness.
16.一个小小的善行，无论是对施予者还是接受者，都是一份祝福。 A little good deed is a blessing to both the giver and the receiver.
17.永远不要低估你的行为的力量。Never underestimate the power of your action.
六、环境描写，氛围烘托（共20句）
1.教室的每一个角落都洋溢着极大的喜悦。Enormous delight welled up in every corner of the classroom.
2.全班爆发出热烈的掌声。The whole class burst into applause.
3.笑声在房间里萦绕。Laughter lingered around the room.
4. 一片漆黑立刻笼罩了整个森林。Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest.
5.天气寒冷。The day was bitterly cold.
6.天空蔚蓝，阳光明媚。The sky was blue and the sun was shining.
7.大雨倾盆而下It was pouring really hard.
8.皓月当空The moon was shining brightly in the sky.
9.天空繁星密布The sky was dotted with stars.
10.云散开了，太阳出来了。The clouds parted and the sun shone.
11.山丘沐浴在阳光下。The hills were bathed in the sunshine.
12.风越来越大，天空开始乌云密布。The wind was getting up and it was becoming cloudy.
13.浓雾笼罩着整个大地The thick fog blanketed the field.
14.微风轻拂着他的头，仿佛在安慰他所有的疲惫。The gentle breeze stroked his head , as if comforting all his tiredness.
15. 太阳躲在山后，在黑暗中什么也看不见。The sun hid himself behind the mountains, making it hard to see anything in the thick darkness.
16.夜里一点声音都没有，只有萤火虫还醒着，小心翼翼的在夜空里织着一幅画.
There's not a single sound at night.Only the glowworms were still awake,carefully weaving a picture in the night sky.
17.阳光下河面波光粼粼.The river glitters in the sunshine.
18. A dense earthly sweet smell rose from the ground, enveloping everything within its soft embrace.一股浓郁的泥土般的香味从地上升起，把一切都包裹在它柔软的怀抱里。
19.月亮在天空中好像一盏夜灯，闪烁的星好奇地眨着眼睛。Like a lamp,the moon shone from above.The stars twinkled their eyes with curiosity. 七、无灵主语句子翻译练习（共16句）
1.我忘了确切的日期。（exact date）The exact date has escaped me. （slipped out of my mind)
2.他的工作使他不可能比每隔一个周末一次的频率更加经常地回家。His work made it impossible for him to get home oftener than every other weekend.
3.你吃了这药就会好些。This medicine will make you feel better.
4.一见到那个孤儿，我就想到了她的父母。Whenever I see the orphan, I remember her parents.----The sight of the orphan always reminds me of her parents.
5.天气太坏，我们无法动身。We could not start because of bad weather.-------Bad weather prevented us from starting.
6.五年来，环境状况逐步好转。Over the past five years, the environment has seen gradual improvement.
7.他突然想出了一个好主意。A good idea occurred to\hit\struck him.
8.我心里热呼呼的。Warmth flooded over my heart.
9.一想起这事他就狂躁得无法工作。The thought of it made him so wild that he couldn't work.
10.他失职了，这说明他没有资格做这件事。His failure in duty shows he is not qualified for the job.
11.这个问题如果不解决，势必严重损害两国关系。Failure to settle this issue is bound to impair the relations between the two countries seriously.
12.黄昏的时候，她独自在街上哭泣。Dusk found her crying alone in the streets.
13.我立刻对他产生了一种崇敬和感激之情。Admiration and gratitude swept through me.
14.得知老人的经历后，我们对他深感同情。All our sympathy went to the old man after we knew his experience.
15.她笑得说不出话来。Laughter had deprived her of speech.
2021高考英语读后续写素材积累（一）一：语料积累 1.Stanley weighed three times as much as the other boy. （人物，肖像描写） 2.Once he started a project he would work on it for years, often going days without sleep. （人物性格） 3. Elya blushed(红脸) when Myra entered the room. （人物，神态描写） 4. His clothes were soaked(被…浸湿的) with sweat. （人物描写） 5. He felt like he was digging his own grave. （心理描写，修辞） 6.Even the people looked broken, with their worn-out(疲惫不堪) bodies sprawled(四肢摊开懒散地坐或躺) over the various chairs and sofas. (环境描写，人物描写) 7. Every muscle and joint in his body ached as he tried to get out of bed. （病痛，人物描写） 8. Now he had such a huge smile it almost seemed too big for his face, like the smile on a jack-o'-lantern. （笑容，人物描写） 9. Zero's mouth was shut tight. As he glared at(怒视) Mr. Pendanski, his dark eyes seemed to expand. （生气，人物描写） 10. If he jerked(猛的一动) too quickly, he felt a throbbing(阵阵的疼痛) pain just above his neck where Zigzag's shovel had hit him. （疼痛，人物描写） 11.A big smile spread across Zero's face. （人物描写） 12. Zero's face looked like a jack-o'-lantern that had been left out too many days past Halloween— half rotten, with sunken eyes and a drooping(颓丧) smile. （人物描写） 13. Zero sat as still as a statue. （人物描写） 14. His legs were sore from remaining rigid for so long. （人物描写） 15. He had dark circles under her eyes from Jack of sleep(因缺乏睡眠). （人物描写） 16. Stanley was overcome by a rush of dizziness and almost fell over. （人物描写） 17. Stanley felt his ears redden. （人物描写） 18.A man was sitting with his feet up on a desk. （人物，动作描写） 19.Stanley could see some kids dressed in orange and carrying shovels dragging themselves toward the tents. （人物，着装与动作描写） 20. Theodore whirled(急转) and grabbed Stanley by his collar. （冲突，动作描写）
专题10 读后续写高分技巧综合训练 一、请运用所学技巧翻译下面的段落。 （一） Jim 看到袭击者逃进了黑暗中，他想到了那个姑娘。Jim 仍然喘着粗气，朝着她走去。那姑娘坐在灌木丛后面哭着。尽管Jim在黑暗中几乎看不清那姑娘，他还是能确定地感觉到她惊魂未定。Jim不想再吓着她，他隔开一定距离和她说话。Jim轻轻地告诉她袭击者已经逃跑了，她安全了。姑娘许久没说话，接着他吃惊地听到姑娘问道：“是你吗，爸爸？” 【参考范文】 Seeing the attacker flee/disappear/run into the darkness, Jim thought of the girl. Still breathing heavily, Jim walked towards her. The girl was sitting behind the bushes, sobbing. Although in the darkness Jim could hardly see the girl clearly, he could sense her trembling alarm with certainty. To avoid frightening the girl further, Jim spoke to her at a distance. In a soft voice, Jim told her that the attacker had run away and that she was safe. There was a long silence and then in astonishment he heard the girl ask, “Dad, is that you?” 【点评】这篇短文用到了前面学过的Ving、副词和介词短语，丰富了表达形式，使情感描写和动作描写更加细腻生动。 （二） 第二天，Meg去跟Mrs.Gilson 解释了她为什么不交回家作业。为了不让同学知道这件事，她趁没人注意时悄悄地溜进了Mrs. Gilson的办公室。Meg低着头，她告诉了Mrs.Gilson她的回家作业找不到了。“我保证我完成了回家作业。。。。。。”她解释道，眼里含着泪。见此情景，Mrs. Gilson 打断了她。她笑着告诉Meg 她已经在上一天把她的作业和试卷一起交起来了。她知道Meg不会因为偷懒而说谎。听到Mrs.Gilson的话，Meg 如释重负。她开心地笑了，眼里的泪水落了下来。 【参考范文】 The next day, Meg went to tell Mrs. Gilson why she couldn’t hand in her homework. To avoid being known by her classmates, she secretly slid into Mrs. Gilson’s office without being noticed. Her head drooped, Meg told Mrs. Gilson the truth that she just could not find her homework. “I promise that I did finish my homework and…” she explained, tears welling up in her eyes/ eyes brimming with tears. Seeing this, Mrs. Gilson interrupted her. With a smile, she told Meg that she had handed in her homework with her paper the day before. She knew Meg was not lying because of laziness. Hearing this, Meg felt a surge of relief. She smiled brightly, drops of tears rolling down her cheeks. 【点评】这篇短文用到了前面学过的Ving、副词、介词短语、情绪表达和独立结构，尤其是独立结构。文
续写积累 _______________ 班级：姓名：______________ 一、环境描写的素材环境描写分为客观和主观两种角度：客观为从环境事物本身入手，主观则从观察者角度描 写。通常在描写时主客观交替进行，主观描写比重稍大。客观环境描写：adj环境描写的要求：有声，有色，有质感，有味道Part 1 the thundering clouds（电光闪雷鸣）（鸟鸣）蓝天）the songs of birds the blue sky(（青the green grass;娇嫩的花）（the dark,raining evening 雨夜交加的夜晚）the fragile flowers (…/冉冉升起的太阳）落日草）the fragrant roses（艳丽的玫瑰）; the setting/rising sun(）要求verb Part 2 环境描写的（vi&vt blow/click/howl/wail/roar)一．Wind （）1.A gust of wind blew and parted the drooping branches of the weeping willow like a curtain,…一阵风吹，吹起了弯柳的低垂枝条，就像卷起的窗帘。2.The wind, soft and cold, clicked through tree branches and stirred the bushes that sprinkled the slope.风，轻柔却寒冷，轻点着树枝，搅动着斜坡下的灌木丛。3.A cool breeze blew through the quiet park.凉爽的微风吹拂着寂静的公园。4.A cold breeze wafted through my hair.冷风吹拂过我的头发）(The wind was perfect for kite flying, blowing just hard enough to give some lift. （今日正是放风筝的好天气，强劲的风力带动了风筝的上升。）Water (flow/travel/move/meander/enter)．二)1.At one point, the faint sound of water tumbling through the valley.声音：在某处，潺潺的的水声在山谷中奏响。2.The water was deep blue and sunlight glittered on its looking glass-clear 颜色surface.水是深蓝色的，阳光在透明的玻璃表面闪闪发光。 3.A little way off was a small brook, rushing and sparkling along between green bank.有一条小溪，在绿色的河岸间奔腾闪耀。,离此不远 4. It murmured in a soft voice like a little innocent girl whispered to her loving mother. 似乎它在温柔低语，就一位天真少女对着她那慈爱的母亲细细私语。(action, sound, colour)三)．Sky (stand/ appear/turn)The sky was a curdled gray burdened with lumps of clouds. 1.天空是浓浓的灰色，伴着拥挤的朵朵云2.Blue skies stood tall and far 蓝蓝的天空高高耸立 1 主观环境描写：1.Sb found sth adj/doing/done... 某人发现某物（状态/动作/被）2.Sb saw/heard/felt/smelt sth doing/done 被）//听到感到/闻到某物（状态/动作/某人看到3.It was so adj that we find/feel ....以至于它是如此4.Sth kept sb spellbound/amazed// /惊讶景物使我如此陶醉sth held sb entirely in their power景物让我完全惊呆了5.It looked/seemed/appeared/felt like …景物看起来像… （来自原著：追风筝的人）二、场景描写的素材. like paper sharks roaming for prey1. At least two dozen kites already hung in the sky, , and red, blue, and yellow kites glided and spun the number doubled Within an hour, was perfect for kite flying, The wind A cold breeze wafted through my hair. in the sky.
读后续写细节描写素材二：心理描写 开心 My heart is full of joy. 我的心里乐开了花。 My heart is as sweet as honey. 我心里像喝了蜜一样，甜滋滋的。 The surface of the calm lake stirred the waves, and my mood was as cheerful as a wave.平静的湖面激起了浪花，我的心情也像浪花一样欢腾。 I couldn’t restrain my joy and jumped into the house.我抑制不住内心的喜悦，蹦蹦跳跳地进了家门。 We were very pleased to hear this encouraging news. 听到这个令人鼓舞的消息，我们十分高兴。 He was delighted to receive such impressive recognition for his achievements.他的成就获得大家的认可，他很开心。 悲伤 be in tears 含泪 have tears in one’s eyes 眼里含着泪水 burst into tears 放声大哭，突然哭起来 fight back tears 抑制住泪水 be close to tears 快要哭了 He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks. 他静静地站着，眼泪顺着面颊流了下来。
I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness. 我感觉正漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。 Her hands were shaking. She was on the verge of tears. 她的手在颤抖。她快要哭了。 It was a time of great sorrow. 这是一个非常悲伤的时刻。 Words cannot express my sorrow. 言语无法表达我的哀伤。 As he looked at Katherine, great sorrow clouded his eyes. 他看着凯瑟琳，满眼忧伤。 Their reunion after a long separation brought mixed feelings of joy and sorrow to them both. 两人久别重逢，悲喜交加。 This article brought back sad memories for me. 这篇文章使我想起了伤心的往事。Separation from his friends made him sad. 与朋友们分离使他伤心。 愤怒 fly off the handle 勃然大怒 lose one’s temper 发脾气 His anger has cooled. 他的怒气平息了。
续写亮点突破系列 一、主句，+ 简短状语（介词短语，分词，状语从句的省略，形容词，副词） 1.At last he came, with his hands in his pockets 2.He was stunned there, staring at me with wide eyes. 3.With apparently unwilling affection, he nodded. 4.With a mixture of surprise and confusion, he managed a forced smile. 5.When coming back, he still folded his arms with a little anger on his face. 6.With an impatient look, he listened to me reluctantly. 7.He was numb with shock, staring at me. 8.Then the next second his eyes were shining like diamonds, with a bright smile on his face. 9.Curious, he approached to find a silver balloon. 10.With tears in her eyes, he decided to help Desiree. 11.Touched deeply, he decided to tell a white lie. 12.With heart beating wildly, she hurried to show it … 13.Holding back my tears, I tried to squeeze a smile. 14.Bathed in a festival atmosphere, he was in high spirits. 15.He attempted to find the owner, but all in vain. 16.Her eyes began to water, with her stomach uncomfortably twisting. 17.Looking at each other, we smiled, hiding ourselves in the car and expecting his reaction to the gift. 18.Obviously confused at the sudden disorder around, Rafael turned to me for reasons in written words. 19. Surprisingly, my explanation put a smile on his face. 20.Greeting us with a confident smile, Rafael shared his story in a magnetic voice, which left me surprised. 21.Feeling a lump in the throat, I clapped my hands even more loudly, determined never to judge a book by its cover. 22.He gave me a bright smile, with his eyes sparkling. 23.To our delight and relief, Tom recovered quickly. 二、形容词、副词的恰当使用 1.Cherish every single moment when you can stay with her. 2.I turned to him and said gently. 3.He looked at me with a broad smile. 4.I praised him sincerely. 5.Taking it home, Wade read the touching lines 6. A thunderous applause burst out. 7.I’m firmly convinced that … 8.with a burning desire to win, he … 9.So excited was he that he held it tightly, rushing into the house. 10. 11. 12.
What is a climax of a story?（什么是故事高潮?） More tension=satisfying climax 文学故事中的高潮（climax）----故事的主要场景（key scene）也通常是故事的转折点（turning point），是指故事达到最紧张或扣人心弦的那一部分。高潮有时候是剧情中的 "危机" 点。有时候, 它只是达到关键时刻或者转折点, 发生了一些事情, 或者主角必须做出决定, 从而导致一个结果或其他。我们在分析叙事类故事或者小说故事的时候常常用下面的图表来表示故事情节。 常见故事高潮示例： 1. A little girl has been searching for her lost dog. All of a sudden, she hears a bark coming from around the corner, and she looks around to see . . . 2. Kevin has worked very hard to try out for the soccer team at school. The coach has posted a list of this year's team members on his office door. Kevin walks forward to look at the list . . . . 3. Mary's parents have been discussing whether or not to move to another state. They call Mary and her sister down to talk with them about their decision . . . 4. Lois has performed in the state gymnastics finals. She waits anxiously to hear the names of the winners. The announcer says, "And first place goes to . . ." 文学名著中的一些故事高潮 1. The deaths of Romeo (who kills himself because he thinks Juliet is dead) and Juliet (who kills herself when she awakes and sees Romeo dead). Romeo and Juliet, Shakespeare （罗密欧和朱丽叶，莎士比亚） 2. When Gaston and the townspeople come to attack the beast, and Belle admits her love for the beast. Beauty and the Beast, Disney （美女与野兽，迪士尼） 3. In "The Three Little Pigs," suspense builds up until the confrontation between the third pig and the wolf. This confrontation is the climax.（三只小猪） How to create a climax of a story? (如何营造故事的高潮？) 方法1.增加外部冲突 增加外部冲突是一种明显有效的可以达到故事高潮的方式。冲突带来紧迫感, 将故事推向必要的解决或崩溃。 1）角色之间的冲突(人物观点差异, 竞争需要等) 如：2017年11月浙江英语高考：On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why
文档 专业资料续写积累 姓名：______________ 班级：_______________ 一、环境描写的素材 环境描写分为客观和主观两种角度：客观为从环境事物本身入手，主观则从观察者角度描 写。通常在描写时主客观交替进行，主观描写比重稍大。 客观环境描写： Part 1 环境描写的adj 要求：有声，有色，有质感，有味道 the blue sky(蓝天）the songs of birds（鸟鸣）the thundering clouds（电光闪雷鸣） the fragile flowers ( 娇嫩的花）;（the dark,raining evening 雨夜交加的夜晚）the green grass（青草）the fragrant roses（艳丽的玫瑰）; the setting/rising sun( 落日/冉冉升起的太阳）? Part 2 环境描写的verb （vi&vt ）要求 一) ．Wind （blow/click/howl/wail/roar） 1.A gust of wind blew and parted the drooping branches of the weeping willow like a curtain, 一?阵风吹，吹起了弯柳的低垂枝条，就像卷起的窗帘。 2.The wind, soft and cold, clicked through tree branches and stirred the bushes that sprinkled the slope.风，轻柔却寒冷，轻点着树枝，搅动着斜坡下的灌木丛。 3.A cool breeze blew through the quiet park凉. 爽的微风吹拂着寂静的公园。 4.A cold breeze wafted through my hair.(冷风吹拂过我的头发） The wind was perfect for kite flying, blowing just hard enough to give some lift. （今日正是放风筝的好天气，强劲的风力带动了风筝的上升。） 二) ．Water (flow/travel/move/meander/enter) 声音： 1.At one point, the faint sound of water tumbling through the valley. 在某处，潺潺的的水声在山谷中奏响。 颜色2.The water was deep blue and sunlight glittered on its looking glass-clear surface. 水是深蓝色的，阳光在透明的玻璃表面闪闪发光。 3.A little way off was a small brook, rushing and sparkling along between green bank. 离此不远,有一条小溪，在绿色的河岸间奔腾闪耀。 4. It murmured in a soft voice like a little innocent girl whispered to her loving mother. 似乎它在温柔低语，就一位天真少女对着她那慈爱的母亲细细私语。(action, sound, colour) 三) ．Sky (stand/ appear/turn) 1.The sky was a curdled gray burdened with lumps of clouds. 天空是浓浓的灰色，伴着拥挤的朵云 2.Blue skies stood tall and far蓝蓝的天空高高耸立 1
高考英语作文高分素材训练 8. 高考读后续写高分技巧 (2018·浙江高考) 阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。 It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West. We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos. His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guest room of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. “The day starts at dawn on my farm, ” he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool. In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn’t going to take
2021新高考英语读后续写素材积累（5）--看的动作描写 1.She stared at him in disbelief, shaking her head. 她摇着头，狐疑地看着他。 2.I saw the deaf kid sitting there just looking at me as the bullies pulled me down from the wall. 当一群恶棍正在把我从墙上扒拉下来时，我看到那个聋哑儿童就坐在那儿并且看着我。 3.When he finished, he raised / lifted his eyes and looked out the window. 说罢，他抬起眼睛并望向窗外。 4.We all gather in front of the television, hoping to catch a glance / glimpse of his face. 我们都聚在电视机前，希望能看一眼他的脸。 5.I glanced back over my shoulder to make sure that no one was following me. 我回头瞟了一眼以确保没有人跟踪我。 6.Seeing no other people notice us, I placed the Christmas present down and pounded doorbell. 看到没有人注意到我们，我放下圣诞礼物并且敲了敲门铃。
7.There are two kinds of things in the world that can't be gazed at directly. One is the sun, the other is human nature. 这世上唯有太阳和人心不可直视。 8. The guard had orders to shoot on sight. 士兵接到命令，一看到人就开枪 9.We lost sight of the boat in the fog. 由于大雾我们看不见那条船了。 10.She had spotted a man pacing down the hall. 他看见一个大男人在客厅里踱步。 11.Jalil’s eyes lifted slowly, met Mariam’s, paused for a moment, then dropped. 贾利勒慢慢抬起眼睛，看见了玛利亚的眼睛，停了一会儿，然后垂了下来 12.A big leafy tree came into view at some distance. 远处有一棵枝繁叶茂的大树映入眼帘。 13.She turned her eyes to me when I tapped her shoulder. 当我轻拍她的肩膀时，她把目光转向我。
专题09 高分情绪描写技巧 一、情绪描写之笑 smile brightly; grin at sb; laugh; beam; light (sth) up; light up with; burst into laughter; burst out laughing；wear a bright/broad smile; give sb a smile 学一学： beam: smile very happily 例：获胜者满意地笑了。 译法一：The winner beamed/smiled with satisfaction. 译法二：The winner wore a satisfied smile on his face. light up: if someone’s face or eyes light up, they show pleasure, excitement etc light up with：His eyes lit up with laughter. Her face lit up with pleasure. light sth up: to make someone’s face or eyes show pleasure or excitement Suddenly a bright smile lit up her face/eyes. 练一练： 看到直升飞机，Jane 高兴地笑了起来。 判断正误：Seeing the helicopter, a bright smile lit up her face. 二、情绪描写之高兴激动 V.dance; whistle; jump/leap with joy; feel a surge of happiness/delight/joy/excitement; be overcome with happines/delight/joy/excitement;(one’s eyes) twinkle；(one’s heart) beat/pound wildly Adj.happy; delighted; overjoyed; excited; thrilled; wild with joy 练一练： 当她知道考试结果时，她兴奋极了。 三、情绪描写之生气 feel/get angry/furious; feel a surge of anger(rage/fury); eyes blaze; storm out of/into/off ; storm(say angrily); sth. makes sb’s blood boil(sth makes sb extremely angry); clasp one’s hands; clench one’s fists/teeth; speechless 练一练： Sam 感到非常生气。 四、情绪描写之伤心痛苦
续写积累 姓名：______________ 班级：_______________ 一、环境描写的素材 环境描写分为客观和主观两种角度：客观为从环境事物本身入手，主观则从观察者角度描写。通常在描写时主客观交替进行，主观描写比重稍大。 客观环境描写： Part 1 环境描写的adj要求：有声，有色，有质感，有味道 the blue sky(蓝天）the songs of birds（鸟鸣）the thundering clouds（电光闪雷鸣） the fragile flowers (娇嫩的花）;（the dark,raining evening 雨夜交加的夜晚）the green grass（青草） the fragrant roses（艳丽的玫瑰）; the setting/rising sun(落日/冉冉升起的太阳）… Part 2 环境描写的verb （vi&vt）要求 一)．Wind （blow/click/howl/wail/roar） 1.A gust of wind blew and parted the drooping branches of the weeping willow like a curtain,…一阵风吹，吹起了弯柳的低垂枝条，就像卷起的窗帘。 2.The wind, soft and cold, clicked through tree branches and stirred the bushes that sprinkled the slope.风，轻柔却寒冷，轻点着树枝，搅动着斜坡下的灌木丛。 3.A cool breeze blew through the quiet park.凉爽的微风吹拂着寂静的公园。 4.A cold breeze wafted through my hair. (冷风吹拂过我的头发） The wind was perfect for kite flying, blowing just hard enough to give some lift. （今日正是放风筝的好天气，强劲的风力带动了风筝的上升。） 二)．Water (flow/travel/move/meander/enter) 声音：1.At one point, the faint sound of water tumbling through the valley. 在某处，潺潺的的水声在山谷中奏响。
读后续写细节描写素材一：身体动作 head He hung / dropped / lowered / bent / bowed his head in shame. 他羞愧地低下了头。 They nodded their heads in agreement. 他们点头同意。 She shook her head in disbelief. 她怀疑地摇摇头。 He scratched his head, not understanding a word. 他挠了挠头，一个字也听不懂。 scratch [skr?t?] v抓；挠 She buried her head in the pillow. 她用枕头捂住脑袋。 She rested her head on his shoulder. 她将头靠在他的肩膀上。 His head drooped and tears fell into his lap. 他耷拉着脑袋，眼泪滴落在大腿上。 droop [dru:p] vi 低垂，垂落 I fell asleep as soon as my head hit the pillow. 我头一碰到枕头就睡着了。 He put / held his head in his hands, greatly annoyed. 他双手抱头，十分生气。 It never entered my head that he might be lying. 我从未想过他会是在撒谎。 I decided to go for a walk to clear my head. 我决定去走走，清醒一下头脑。 He could feel his head spinning after only one drink. 他只喝了一杯就觉得天旋地转。 spin [spin] v旋转；眩晕 He turned and headed for the door. 他转身朝门口走去。 She stood up and headed towards the exit. 她起身朝出口走去。face A bright smile appeared on / spread across / crossed his face. 他的脸上露出了灿烂的笑容。 Her face lit up / brightened / glowed when I gave her the present.我给她礼物时，她的脸上焕发出了光彩。His face suddenly grew serious.他的表情突然严肃起来。 His face looked a little confused.他看起来有点困惑。 Jack’s face flushed / burned with embarrassment.杰克窘得满脸通红。flush [fl??] v发红；脸红 Her face paled with fright.她吓得脸都白了。 He had a slight frown on his face.他的脸上显出有点儿愁眉不展的样子。frown [fra?n] n皱眉 cheek He rested his cheek on her shoulder. 他把面靠在她的肩上。 He felt his cheeks burning with shame. 他因为羞愧而感到脸颊发烧。 Her cheeks were wet with tears. 她泪流满面。 Color rushed / flooded / rose to her cheeks when she realized she was being watched. 意识到有人在看她，她顿时涨红了脸。 A tear slid down her cheek. 一滴泪顺着她的脸颊滑落下来。 He kissed her on both cheeks and got on the train. 他亲了亲她的脸颊，然后上了火车。 eye His eyes were wide with horror. 他惊恐地瞪大了眼睛。 The dog’s hungry eyes fell on my sandwich. 那条狗饥饿的眼神落在我的三明治上。 He turned his eyes to the door when he heard the handle turning. 听到门把转动的声音，他向门那边看去。 Tina shut her eyes tightly and bit her lip. 蒂娜紧闭上双眼，咬了咬嘴唇。 She looked her father straight in the eye and answered his question truthfully. 她直视父亲的眼睛，诚实地回答了他的问题。