全套商务信函练习（一）
练习一
Dear Mr. Andy Burns,
From the Internet we have learned that you are in the market for chinaware, which j ust falls
within our business scope. We are now writing you in the hope of entering into busin ess relations with you.
As a leading trading company in Shanghai and backed by nearly 20 years of export ex perience, we have good connections with some reputable ceramics factories and suff icient supplies and
on-time delivery are guaranteed.
To give you a general idea of our products, we enclose a complete set of leaflets sho wing various products being handled by this corporation with detailed specifications and means of packing.
Quotations and samples will be sent upon receipt of your specific enquiries.
In particular, we could like to inform you that we have a new line that may be most s uitable for
your requirements--DR series. They are all made of first-class porcelain, decorated wi th hand-painted patterns, and packed in eye-catching gift cases. Most of articles are a vailable from stock.
We are sure you will find a ready sale for our products in Canada as have other retail ers throughout Europe and USA.
Please let us know if we may be of further assistance, and we are looking forward to your specific inquiry.
Yours faithfully,
Desun Trading Co., Ltd.
Minghua Zhao
练习二
Dear Mr.Zhao,
Thank you for your letter of Oct.12,2005 and your latest catalogue. We are much im pressed by your DR series,especially DR2010,DR2202,DR2211,DR2300 and DR2401.It would be appreciated if you could quote us your best price on FOB Shanghai,CFR Tor onto CIF Toronto all including 5%
commission.
Meanwhile we would like to have some samoles of the above items for our custome rs to test
before we could place a firm order.
If teh lab tests go well,and your prices are competitive,we’d cetainly be able to place a
substantial order.
We are looking forward to your early reply. Yours faithfully,
NEO GENERAL TRADING CO., LTD. Andy Burns
练习三
Oct 16, 2005
Dear Mr. Andy Burns,
Thank you for your inquiry of Oct 14, 2005 .In compliance with your request, We ar e airmailing you one catalogue and quotation sheet.
In order to start a concrete transaction between us, we take pleasure in making you an offer,
subject to DR series being unsold, as follows based on per 20’ FCL.
Packing: As to DR2010、
DR2300, one set to a case, two cases to a carton. As to DR2202、DR2211、
DR2401, one set per carton. Payment: By sight L/C.
Shipment: within 2 months from receipt of the relevant L/C. Insurance: For 110% inv oice value covering W.P.A, Breakage & Clash Risk and War Risks.We will keep this offe r valid only for 7 days. In addition, we have airmailed to you the samples you request ed.
If you find the above acceptable, please fax us for confirmation. Yours faithfully, Desun Trading Co., Ltd.
Minghua Zhao
练习四
Dear Mr. Zhao,
Thank you for your letter of Oct 16, 2005 and your samples.
For your information, our customers are quite satisfied with the test result of your s amples but they are still holding back.
After careful examining and comparison with similar products of other makes, we fi nd your
quotation is really much higher. Unless the prices could match with the market level, it is difficult to persuade customers to purchase from you.
So, we would counter offer as follows:
Article No. DR2010 USD19.00 CIFC5 Toronto per set
Article No. DR2202 USD23.80 CIFC5 Toronto per set
Article No. DR2211 USD30.00 CIFC5 Toronto per set
Article No. DR2401 USD23.50 CIFC5 Toronto per set
Actually, competitive prices for a trial order can often lead to a high market share wit h enormous profits in future. We hope you will consider our counter-offer favorably a nd let us have your acceptance by telex.
Yours faithfully,
NEO GENERAL TRADING CO., LTD. Andy Burns
练习五
Dear Mr. Andy Burns,
We are in receipt of your returning signed Sales Confirmation No. DTC5210. Howev er, we regret to inform you that we did not receive your L/C concerning the above co ntract till today. It is
clearly stipulated in the said contract that the relevant L/C should reach us date Nov 25. Please
be assured to open your L/C strictly in accordance with our offered bank information , especially
it should be “Bank of China, Shanghai branch” not “Bank of China” only. Please pay at tention to it because last time another customer’s L/C reached to Bank of China in Sh enzhen.
Owing to the punctual shipment, the early arrival of your L/C will be highly appreciat ed. Yours faithfully,
Desun Trading Co., Ltd.
Minghua Zhao
练习六
Dear Mr. Andy Burns,
With reference to your L/C No. BWO5823684 issued on Nov 23, we regret to say that there are a
few points are not in conformity with the terms stipulated in our sales contract. Ther efore, please make the following amendment:
1.The name of commodity should be “CANNED WHOLE MUSHROOMS” not “CANN
ED SLICED
MUSHROOMS”.
2. Delete the wording “documents presented for negotiation should include cargo rec eipt issued by buyers”.
3. The quantity of commodity should be 1320 cartons, not 1230 cartons.
As the time of shipment is approaching, please make the amendment as soon as pos sible so that we can ship the goods in time. Yours faithfully,
Desun Trading Co., Ltd. Minghua Zhao
台布 我们从我国商务部处得悉贵公司的名称和地址，现借此机会与你方通信，意在建立友好业务关系。 我们是一家国营公司，专门经营台布出口业务。我们能接受顾客的来样定货，来样中可具体需要产品的花样图案，规格及包装装潢的要求。 为使你方对我各类台布有大致的了解，我们另航寄最新的目录供参考。如果你方对产品有兴趣，请尽快通知我方。一俟收到你方具体询盘，即寄送报价单和样本。 盼早复。 SPECIMEN：INTRODUCING BUSINESS OPERATION Dear Sirs, RE:TABLECLOTH We have your name and adress from Ministry of Commerce of the People's Republic of China.We take this opportunity to write to you with a view to set up friend business relations with you. We are a carpet manufacturer, our products are a unique style of novel, inexpensive..We are in a position to accept orders according to the customer's spmples.In the customer's spmples,request about the assorted pattern,specification and package of the needed goods can be indicated particularly. In order to give you a gengral idea of various kinds of the table-cloth we are handling,we are airmailing you under separate cover our latest catalogue for your reference.Please let us know immediately if you are interested in our products.We will send you our price list and sample to you as soon as we receive your specific inquiry. Looking forward to your early reply,we are. Yours faithfully Xiaoli
贸函电的构成部分如下： 现在的电子邮件时代的函电的形式比较简洁，主要包括： 第一行：主题（事由）。 第二行：对收信人的称谓。 第三行：寒暄语，主要是感谢词和为何而感谢。 第四行：以下为正文。 第五行：结束语，一般内容为：祝福的词语，并期待很快收到回音。 最后为：发函人签字。 外贸函电常用范文如下： 1.Dear Mr. Li, Your firm has been recommended 1 to us by the Dickson Electrics Company, with whom we have done business for many years. We are interested in your Electric Typewriters for use in offices and shall be glad if you will send us a copy of your illustrated catalogue 2 and current price list. Yours sincerely,
Susan Block Manager A Reply Dear Ms Block, We welcome you for your enquiry of Fed. 1 and thank you for your interest in our commodities. We are enclosing 3 some copies of our illustrated catalogues and a price list giving the details you asked for. We trust that you will agree that our products and price appeal to 4 the most selective buyer. And we also allow a proper discount 5 according to the quantity ordered. Thank you again for your interest in our products. We are looking forward to your order and you may be assured 6 that it will receive our prompt and careful attention. Yours truly 2.Dear Mr. Lu,
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would like to take this opportunity to introduce our company and products, with the hope that we may work with Bright Ideas Imports in the future. We are a joint venture specializing in the manufacture and export of textiles. We have enclosed our catalog, which introduces our company in detail and covers the main products we supply at present. You may also visit our website https://www.doczj.com/doc/4a6424224.html,,which includes our latest product line. Should any of these items be of interest to you, please let us know. We will be happy to give you a quotation upon receipt of your detailed requirements. We look forward to receiving your enquires soon. Sincerely, John Roberts 本文档由实惠网（https://www.doczj.com/doc/4a6424224.html,）编制，版权所有，尽供外贸交流学习商业目的请联系实惠网（https://www.doczj.com/doc/4a6424224.html,）
外贸函电范文常用语 Importer Writes to Exporter Dear Sirs, We have obtained your address from the Commercial Counsellor of your Embassy in London and are now writing you for the establishment of business relations. We are very well connected with all the major dealers here of light industrial products, and feel sure we can sell large quantities of Chinese goods if we get your offers at competitive prices. As to our standing, we are permitted to mention the Bank of England, London, as a reference. Please let us have all necessary information regarding your products for export. Y ours faithfully, 外贸英语函电范文写作常用词汇： Notes https://www.doczj.com/doc/4a6424224.html,mercial adj. 商业的，商务的 commercial counsellor 商务参赞 commercial counsellor’s office 商务参赞处 commercial attache 商务专员 commercial articles 商品，（报上）商业新闻 commerce n. 商业 commerce department 商业部门 2.embassy n. 大使馆 the American Embassy in Beijing 美国驻北京大使馆 ambassador n. 大使，使节 3.dealer n. 商人 retail dealer (or:retailer) 零售商 wholesale dealer (or:wholesaler) 批发商 deal n. b. 贸易，成交，经营 make (or:do) a deal with... 与...做交易 deal on credit 信用交易，赊帐买卖 4.connected with... 与...有联系；与...有关系 5.light industrial product 轻工业产品 https://www.doczj.com/doc/4a6424224.html,petitive adj. 有竞争力的 competitive price 竞争价格 competitive capacity 竞争能力 competitive power 竞争能力 competitive edge 竞争优势 eg.If your price is competitive, we will place an order with you. 如果你方价格有竞争力的话，我们将向你方发出订单。 Y our products has no competitive capacity in our market. 你方产品在我市场上没有竞争力。 compete v. 竞争 ～with (or:against) sb. in sth. 在...方面与某人竞争 eg.We should compete with other enterprises in the quality of the products. 我们必须在产品的质量方面与其它企业竞争。 ～with (or:against) sb. for sth. 为...事情与某人竞争 eg.We must compete against other countries in trade for obtaining larger international market. 为了获取更大
范文一： Dear Tom, Recently, my company and your company purchased a number of stainless steel screw sets. In cartons and cartons, it is shipped by sea to Manila, Philippines, as agreed in the contract. But after the arrival of the goods, after our company inspection found that some of the goods of the outer packaging damage is serious, many cartons in the screw kit scattered around. After my company's professional certification, the goods damage is not hard enough cartons and in the transport process caused by moisture. In order to avoid subsequent orders again cashing out the goods, resulting in losses, our company hopes that your company changes the packaging. Hope that your company's goods packaging all use wooden boxes, the inner packaging can continue to use the original carton can only be packed 500g per box, every 50 boxes of 1 wooden box. Enclosed is a picture of the packaging designed by our company.
经典外贸函电范文汇总 外贸函电是一种商务信件，英文foreign correspondence。写外贸函电是外贸业务员的日常工作之一，然而，能写好外贸函电的外贸业务员却不多，为了有助于大家写好外贸函电，本文总结了几个经典外贸函电范文，可供参考。 外贸函电就是有着国际贸易关系的双方由于彼此的业务往来而产生的信件，但在信息化高度发达的今天，该信件并不局限于纸质信件，也可以是电子邮件、传真或MSN。 外贸函电最常用的内容：建立业务关系、询盘、发盘、回复、销售合同、包装、保险、赔偿、仲裁等。 外贸函电基本要求：主题明确，内容简洁，语言精炼，表述完整。 外贸函电的格式：有固定的语言、习惯用法和常用句型。 外贸函电的语气：各部分语气。开发信、询盘回复一般要客气，表达感谢;平常业务联系要细心、信任;催促付款要紧急而不失礼貌;客户索赔要理解、给予足够的解释和说明。 外贸函电范文： 一、如何表达在涨价前订货 Thank you for your letter of October 10 for business copiers. We are now sending you our price-list and catalog of the newest types that are under production and we can supply at once from stock. We want to notice you that prices of copier parts and components have gone up steadily since the second half of the year. Though we have tried hard to keep our quotations down, we are afraid the margin for keeping on going like this will not long. Therefore, we suggest that you will let us have your order before further rises in costs, which will lead to a raise in prices very soon unavoidably. 感谢贵方10月10日关于商用复印机的询函。现随函奉送本公司正在生产的、并有现货供应的最新型号的产品清单和价目表。 我方想告诉贵方，自下半年以来，复印机的零、部件价格一直不断增长。尽管我方尽量压低报价，但恐怕有此余地的时间不会太久。因此，建议贵方在零、部件再次涨价，并不可避免地引起成品涨价之前便向我方订货。
Dear sir or madam: We get your name and address from the net, and the products that your company need’s are in our scope of business. So we send mail to you ,in hope to establish a long-term relations of cooperation. Our company is a big foreign tread company, engaged import and export business with nearly 20 years, and get good reputation. Sending enclosed with a catalogue and a price list for your reference. After receiving your inquiry, we will give you the most preferential price. Your early reply will be highly appreciate. 0003: Dear sir or madam: It is my pleasure to be looked by you of this mail. we gone into your company net , and glade to fond that your products are our needs’ . Our company Intercom Import & Export Co .,Ltd have done business of Children’s Bicycles importing for many years , and enjoy good reputation . We hope can establish relations of cooperation with you. In order to our deep treading , hoping that you can send a catalogue and the most good price list for our reference. Your early reply will be highly appreciate . Yours Intercom Import & Export Co .,Ltd James Brown 0007: Dear sir of madam: We get your address from internet , and know that you are one of the leading company in garment industry. We are interested in your No. MS1201 MEN’S DORM PANT, we hope to get detailed information on MEN’S DORM PANT, including prices 、colors , and all kinds of article numbers’samples , these are important for our reference. If your price and quality are attractive , we will place an order. Hoping for your early reply.
外贸函电常用范文 一、开发新客户 Dear XXX, We have learned from our old client that you are one of the leading XXX importers in Italy. Therefore, we do hope there is a chance for us to cooperate with each other in the near future. （表明合作意向） We are one of the biggest XXX manufactures in China.（介绍自己的身份）All our products are manufactured strictly and provided to over 30 countries already. Attached please find our latest catalogue and quotation.（直接给出报价单） We look forward to your trial order. Yours faithfully, XXX 二、样品寄送通知 Dear XXX, I’m now writing to inform you that the samples that you
requested were sent by Federal Express today. （告知客户寄送时间及方式） In the mail, I’ve also enclosed a quotation.（附上最新的报价单）Please let me know at your earliest conveniences as soon as they arrive. Thanks a lot! I’m looking forward to your earliest response. Yours sincerely, XXX 三、拒绝临时取消订单 Dear Sir, Thank you for your letter of March 12th. We’re very sorry that we can’t accept cancelling the order at the last moment.（表明自己的态度） Since your products are ready for shipment, it will be a huge loss for us if you cancel the order.（说明理由）So we have difficulties in accepting your request. Best regards, XXX
7种外贸函电常用模板 1、请求建立商业关系 Rogers Chemical Supply Co. 10E.22Street Omaha8,Neb Gentlemen: We have obtained your name and address from Aristo Shoes, Milan , and we are writing to enquire whether you would be willing to establish business relations with us. We have been importers of shoes for many years. At present, We are interested in extending our, range and would appreciate your catalogues and quotations.If your prices are competitive we would expect to transact a significant volume of business. We look forward to your early reply. V ery truly yours 自米兰职权里斯托鞋类公司取得贵公司和地址，特此修函，祈能发展关系。多年来，本公司经营鞋类进口生意，现欲扩展业务范围。盼能惠赐商品目录和报价表。如价格公道，本公司必大额订购。烦请早日赐复。此致 2、回复对方建立商业关系的请求 Thank your for your letter of the 16th of this month. We shall be glad to enter into business relations with your company. In compliance with your request, we are sending you, under separate cover, our latest catalogue and price list covering our export range. Payment should be made by irrevocable and confirmed letter of credit. Should you wish to place an order, please telex or fax us. 本月16日收到有关商务关系的来函，不胜欣喜。谨遵要求另函奉上最新之出口商品目录和报价单。款项烦请以不可撤销保兑之信用状支付。如欲订货，请电传或传真为盼。此致敬礼 3、请求担任独家代理 We would like to inform you that we act on a sole agency basis fora number of manufacturers. We specialize in finished cotton goods for the Middle eastern market: Our activities cover all types of household linen. Until now , we have been working with your textiles department and our collaboration has proved to be mutually beneficial. Please refer to them for any information regarding our company. We are very interested in an exclusive arrangement with your factoryfor the promotion of your products in Bahrain. We look forward to your early reply. ` 本公司担任多家厂家的独家代理，专营精制棉织品，包括各灯家用亚麻制品，行销中东。与贵公司向有业务联系，互利互作。贵公司纺织部亦十分了解有关业务合作之情况。盼望能成为贵公司独家代理，促销在巴林市场的货品。上述建议，烦请早日赐复，以便进一步联系合作。此致敬礼 4、拒绝对方担任独家代理 Thank you for your letter of 1 September suggesting that we grant you a sole agency for our household linens. I regret to say that, at this stage ,such an arrangement would berather premature. We would, however, be willing to engage in a trial collaboration with you company to see how the arrangement works. It would be necessary for you to test the market for our productsat you end. You would also have to build up a much larger turnover tojustify a sole agency. We enclose price lists covering all the products you are interested in and look forward to hearing from you soon. 9月1日有关建议担任家用亚麻制品独家代理的来信收悉。谨致衷心谢意。目前时机尚未成熟，不能应允该安排深感抱歉。然而，本公司乐意与贵公司先试行合作，为今后合作打下基础。为证明担任独家代理的能力，贵公司宜上述货品作市场调查，研究是否可扩大现有之营业额。奉上该货品之报价单，敬希查照。专此候复。此致敬礼 5、同意对方担任独家代理 Thank you for your letter of 12 April proposing a sole agency for our office machines. We have examined our long and ,I must say ,mutually beneficial collaboration. We would be very pleased to entrust you with the sole agency for Bahrain. From our records, we are pleased to note that you have two service engineers who took training courses at our Milan factory .the sole agency will naturally be contingent on you maintaining qualified aftersales staff. Wterms and conditions and let us know whether they meet with your approval. On a personal note, I must say that I am delighted that we are probably going to strengthen our relationship. I have very pleasant memories of my last visit to Bahrain when you entertained me so delightfully .I look forward to reciprocating on your next visit to Milan . My very best wishes to you and your wife. 4月12日建议担任为公室器具之独家代理来信已经收悉。过去双方合作皆互利互助，能获您的眷顾作我公司于巴林的独家代理，殊感荣幸。据知您公司两服务技师曾到我公司米兰工厂受训。相信您公司在取得代理权后，仍会继续注重合格售后服务人员的训练。现随信附上协议草稿，请查实各项条款，惠复是盼。能加强业务，我亦感到欣喜，前次到访巴林，蒙盛情款待，不胜感激。祈盼您莅临米兰时，容我一尽地主之谊。此致敬礼
最全的常用外贸函电范文 外贸函电的规范与否直接影响到客户对公司的印象，对于外贸人员来说，每天写外贸函电，回复函电。你的函电是否规范呢？把直接的函电于下文对照看看。。。 说明涨价原因 Dear Sir or Madam: Enclosed is our new price list which will come into effect the end of this month. You will see that we have increased our prices on most models. We have, however, refrained from doing so on some models of which we hold large stocks. The explanation for our increased prices stems from the fact that we are now paying 10% more for our raw materials than we were paying last year, along with some of our subcontractors having raised their prices as much as 15%. As you know, we take great pride in our product an dare proud of the reputation for quality and dependability we have built over 15years. We will not compromise that reputation because of raising costs. We have, therefore, decided to raise the price of some of our products. We hope you will understand our position and look forward to your cooperation. With best regards, Hillary 说服买家涨价之前下单 Dear Sir or Madam: This is regarding our quotation dated 2 November, and our mail offer dated 8 November concerning the supply of widgets(小机具).We are prepared to keep our offer open until the end of this month. For your information, the market is firm and growing. There is very little likelihood of any
最全的常用外贸函电范文外贸函电的规范与否直接影响到客户对公司的印象，对于外贸人员来说，每天写外贸函电，回复函电。你的函电是否规范呢？把直接的函电于下文对照看看。。。说明涨价原因Dear Sir Madam:Enclosed ournew price list which month.You wehave increased our prices mostmodels. We have, however, refrained from doing so somemodels whichwe hold large stocks. ourincreased prices stems from nowpaying 10% more ourraw materials than we were paying last year, along oursubcontractors having raised youknow, we take great pride ourproduct dareproud dependabilitywe have built over 15years. We reputationbecause raisingcosts. We have, therefore, decided ourproducts. We hope you understandour position lookforward yourcooperation. bestregards, Hillary 说服买家涨价之前下单Dear Sir regardingour quotation dated ourmail offer dated Novemberconcerning keepour offer open until yourinformation, verylittle likelihood anysignificant change visiblefuture. greatdemand secureyour order, we would recommend youaccept offerwithout delay. Yours sincerely, Hillary 对价格作出让步Dear Sir Madam:Thank you yourmail. We ourprice yourrequired product toohigh youracceptance. You mentioned Japanesegoods beingoffered priceapproximately 8%
1.向顾客推销商品： Dear Sir, Inquiries regarding our new product, the Deer Mountain Bike, have been coming in from all parts of the world. Reports from users confirm what we knew before it was put on the market----that it is the best mountain bike available. Enclosed is our brochure. Y ours faithfully. 2.提出询价： Dear Sir, We received your promotional letter and brochure today. We believe that you would do well here in the USA. Kindly send us further details of your prices and terms of sale. We ask you to make every effort to quote at competitive prices in order to secure our business. We look forward to hearing from you soon. Truly 3.迅速提供报价： Dear Sir, Thank you for your inquiry of June the 1st concerning the Deer Mountain Bike. It gives us great pleasure to send along the technical information on the model together with the catalog and price list. After studying the prices and terms of trade, you will understand why we are working to capacity to meet the demand. We look forward to the opportunity of being of service of you. 4.如何讨价还价: Dear Sir, We have received your price lists and have studied it carefully. However, the price level in your quotation is too high for this market. If you are prepared to grant us a discount of 10% for a quantity of 200, we would agree to your offer. Y ou should note that some price cut will justify itself by an increase in business. We hope to hear from you soon. 5.同意进口商的还价： Dear Sir, Thank you for your letter of June the 8th. We have accepted your offer on the terms suggested. Enclosed our will find a special price list that we believe will meer your ideas of prices. Y ou should note that the recent advances in raw materials have affected the cost of this product unfavorably. However, for your order we have kept our prices down. Sincerely. 5-2拒绝进口商的还价： Thank you for your letter of June the 8th. We regret that we cannot meet your terms. We must point out that falling market here leaves us little or no margin of profit. We must ask you for a keener price in respect to future orders. At present the best discount offered for a quantity of 200 is 5%. Our current situation leaves us little room to bargain. We hope you will reconsider the offer. 6.正式提出订单： Dear Sir, We have discussed your offer of 5% and accept it on the terms quoted. We are prepared to give your product a trial, provided you can guarantee delivery on or before the 20th of September. The enclosed order is given strictly on this condition. We reserve the right of refusal of delivery and/or cancellation of the order after this date. 7.确认订单：