记叙文-指点迷津
记叙文的写作要求：
1、要素要交代清楚
记叙的要求即时间、地点、人物，事件的起因、经过和结果。记叙文既然是记人叙事的，而事情总是有时间、地点、前因后果的，因此，写记叙文总要交代清楚什么人，在什么时间和地点，做什么事情，事情的起因、经过和结果怎样，如果不把这些记叙的要素说清楚，文章就显得内容不完整、脉络不清晰。也就不能很好地表达中心思想。
交代记叙的要素有两点应该注意。第一因为事情有时是比较复杂的，随着事情的发展，人物活动在增减，时间在推移，地点在转换，场景在变化，所以写作时要随时把这些变化交代清楚。第二，在一篇具体的记叙文中，这些要素如何交代，不是死板的，也不需要平均用力，某些要素，例如时间和地点，如果读者已经熟悉，或与文章内容关系不大，有时也可以不写或略写，有的事，应当写明发生在某年某月某日某时(甚至某分)；有的事，只说“十几年前”或“我小时候”就可以了，一切要根据表达需要而定，切不可机械照搬某种模式。
2、立意要深刻新颖
从“深”处立意。“深”是指深刻。根据自己的思想认识、生活体验，从中找出我们感受最深刻的东西，去反映生活的真实本质。某些生活细节、平凡小事，在不经意间，会触动我们的心弦。在感动之余，我们何不揭开事件表面的面纱，去体会、咀嚼一下内在的、本质的东西呢?
从“新”处立意。“新”是指具有时代精神。每个人的思想经验，都是时代的产物。如果你能时时站在全新的角度，把握时代的主旋律，那么，你一定能从一些常见的事中翻出一些新的感受来。
从“小”处立意。“小”是指平凡的小事。你要善于借日常生活中细小的材料来反映生活中的典型意义。吃饭、走路是小事，但唐人李绅能在吃饭时慨叹“粒粒皆辛苦”，鲁迅能在回“故乡”时思考走什么样的人生、社会之路。其实，你也可以从读书交友、梳洗穿衣等琐屑小事中找出生活表层之下的典型意义，从而提炼出恰当的主题。
3、中心要明确集中
中心思想要明确集中，是对所有文体的基本要求，所选的材料都是要紧紧围绕着中心思想的，让读者在看完文章之后对文章所写内容有一个清晰透彻的理解和认识。如果文章的中心思想不明确，所写内容散乱，读者便不知作者所云，更谈不上理解文章内容了。在一篇文章中，最好集中表现一个中心思想，即使写几件事，也应从头至尾一线贯串，不能搞多个中心，喧宾夺主。
4、内容要具体生动
文章的中心思想明确集中了，还应让表现中心思想的内容具体生动。我们在写作时、往往容易犯内容抽象笼统、材料剪裁不当、材料不够典型的毛病，这些都会影响文章中心的表现。为了使文章的内容具体生动，我们可以选取那些最能表现中心的材料，所选材料要“真”“精”“新”。所谓“真”，就是要注意材料的真实性，如实反映自己最熟悉的现实生活；所谓“精”，
是指选材不在于多，而应根据主题需要，选取典型材料，以少胜多；所谓“新”，是指选材要新颖，即使是平凡小事，也要有时代气息。
5、表达要灵活多变
叙述、描写、议论、抒情、说明等表达方式并不是孤立地运用在一篇文章中，而是综合运用的。我们在写记叙文时不一定每一种表达方式都用，可以选择其中的一两种或两三种综合运用即可。一般来说，记叙和描写是记叙文中常用的两种表达方式，抒情和议论也经常运用，主要是用来抒发情感。但不管选用哪种表达方式，还是要以记叙为主，从记叙中自然引发出来，而不是脱离记叙内容，凭空添加进去。
6、结构布局要严谨
记叙文是很讲究布局谋篇的，一件普通的小事，如果我们善于安排文章结构，也能体现出波澜起伏的艺术效果，要注意安排好文章的开头、过渡和结尾。
从行文次序来看，记叙文的结构安排法主要有以下几种:
以介绍人物、事物为主的记叙文，结构上通常按照“总一分一总”“总一分”“分一总”这三种方式来安排，其中“总一分一总”运用最普遍。所谓“总”，即是概述；“分”就是对，‘总”的展开，展开的内容之间一般是并列关系。
以叙述事件过程为主的记叙文，通常按照时间、地点的转换，或者事件发生、发展的顺序来安排结构。其中，以事件发展变化为线索的做法较为常用，即按照”发生一发展一高潮一结局”来安排结构。
以叙述感想、看法为主要内容的记叙文，结构安排一般遵从感想、认识的发展变化，例如不喜欢某人—因某个契机而对此人产生兴趣—通过交往真正了解此人—赞扬此人的品质
回忆性的记叙文通常以倒叙手法开头，结尾再“回到现在”，使全文的结构形成环状。行文中如果有需要补充说明的事件或人物，可采用插叙的手法，但文字不要过多，同上下文的意思要连接起来。
7、顺序要恰当合理
记叙的顺序一般有顺叙、倒叙、插叙、平叙等。顺叙是按人物的经历或事件的发展先后次序叙述。这种叙述力一式符合人们认识事物的习惯。倒叙是把事件的结果或事件发展中突出的片段提到前面来写，然后再从事件的开头叙述。它能造成悬念，渲染气氛，使文章波澜起伏。插叙分为追叙和补叙，是根据补充说明或交代衬托的需要，暂时中断原叙述线索而插人相关的另一人或事的叙述，它能使内容更充实，情节更曲折。平叙是对同时发生的两件以上的事情的叙述，也叫分叙，是“花开两朵，各表一枝”的手法。不论采用哪种叙述方法，都要按照叙述的基本规则办事，努力做到完整清晰，详略得当，重点突出，语言流畅。
8、人称要通篇一致
在记叙文中，一般有两三种人称，即“第一人称”“第二人称”和“第三人称”。前者用“我”“我们”来作为叙述的主体，后者用“他”“他们”来作为叙述的主体。第二人称使用一般较少，
1. 感谢信 假设你是李华，梁教授去年六月推荐你去悉尼大学深造，现在你已经被悉尼大学化学学院录取，请写封信向梁教授表示感谢。 【优秀满分范文】 Dear Professor Liang, I am writing to extend my gratitude to you. Because of your help，now I am a student of Chemistry Department of Sydney University. Last June, when I applied to become a graduate student of Sydney University, you really gave me a lot of valuable help. You not only wrote a recommendation for me to Professor Wells who works in the Sydney University，but also gave me careful and patient instructions on how to fill the application forms and write the application letters. It is your unreserved help that enables me to obtain this splendid opportunity of further education. For the following two years I will study hard to reciprocate （回报）your sincere help and expectations with excellent grades. Yours truly, Li Hua 2. 道歉信 假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你和在上海上学的英国朋友Tom约好下周末去北京旅游，但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件： 1. 表示歉意； 2. 解释原因； 3. 另约时间。 注意：1. 词数120~150；2. 可适当增加细节。
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The environmental pollution is worse and worse today. 【优秀满分范文】 My Low-carbon Life The environmental pollution is worse and worse today. Many trees are cut down, and water and air are polluted. As a student I try to have a low-carbon life to save energy and reduce pollution. Firstly, I often walk to school. It can reduce air pollution. Secondly, I always turn off the lights and fans when leaving the classroom. Thirdly, I always make full use of paper and other school things and never waste water. I wish more students to join me and make the earth more and more beautiful. 第二篇： 【写作要求】 每当朋友之间即将分手的时候，耳边常常会响起这首歌“朋友啊朋友！你可曾想起了我，如果你正享受幸福，请你忘记我……”。请你以Friends为题，
新课标英语七年级上册作文范文：1. My Friend（我的朋友） Her birthday is March 5th. She is good at English and Chiese.She often plays the piano. She likes reading books and listening to the music. Her hobbies are reading and listening to music. She is a nice girl. We often help each other. We are good friends. 2.假设你是李枚，下面的照片是你的全家福，请你写一篇文章介绍你的家庭。 Hell o,everyone!I'm LiMei.Look! This is my family photo. This is my grandmother. She is 58. This is my father. He is a teacher. He is 36. and my mother is 36, too. Who’s that boy? Oh, he is my brother. He is 13 and I am 12. My brother and I are stud ents. 3.假设这是TOM的房间，请你用80词左右介绍他的房间。 Look! This is Tom’s room. His photos are on the wall. His T-shirt is on the bed. His baseball bat is behind the dresser. The keys are in the drawer. The computer is on the desk. Where is Tom’s baseball? Oh, It’s under the bed. What is on the fl oor? They are Tom’s shoes, socks and computer games. What do you think of Tom’s room? 4.写一篇文章介绍你的朋友JIM所拥有的体育器材和他喜欢的体育运动。 Jim has a great sports coll ection. He has 10 basketballs, 4 footballs,2 ping-pong balls, 15voll eyballs and 9 baseballs. He d oesn’t have a ping-pong bat, but he has 8 tennis rackets. Of all the sports, He likes tennis best. He likes sports very much, because he thinks sports are good for health. He often plays tennis and basketball with his friends after school. 2.大家好！我是LiMei.看！这是我的全家福。这是我的祖母。她58岁。这是我的父亲。他是一名教师。他36岁。我的母亲也是36岁。那个男孩是谁？哦，他是我哥哥。他13岁，我12岁。我的哥哥和我都是学生。 3. 瞧！这是汤姆的房间。他的照片挂在墙上。他的T恤在床上。他的棒球棒在梳妆台后面。钥匙在抽屉里。计算机在书桌上。汤姆的棒球在哪里？哦，在床底下。地板上是什么？它们是汤姆的鞋子，袜子和电脑游戏。你觉得汤姆的房间怎么样？ 4.吉姆拥有一个大的体育用品 收藏。他有10个篮球，4个足球，2乒乓球，15个排球和9个棒球。他没有一个乒乓球球拍，但他有8个网球拍。在所有的运动中，他最喜欢打网球。他很喜欢运动，因为他认为运动是对健康有益的。他经常在放学后和他的朋友们打网球和篮球。5.自我介绍 My name is Wang Ming.My birthday is June 5th. I am Chinese. I am a stud ent.I study very hard.My favorite subject is English. I like it because it is interesting. I can play the piano and the trumpet, but not very well. I love swimming and I am good at it.Of all kinds of movies, I like comedies best. I think they're interesting. I’m one of the best stud ents in my class. My teachers all say I am a good
英语作文常用谚语、俗语 1、A liar is not believed when he speaks the truth. 说谎者即使讲真话也没人相信。 2、A little knowledge is a dangerous thing. 一知半解，自欺欺人。 3、All rivers run into sea. 海纳百川。 4、All roads lead to Rome. 条条大路通罗马。 5、All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. 只会用功不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。 6、A bad beginning makes a bad ending. 不善始者不善终。 7、Actions speak louder than words. 事实胜于雄辩。 8、A faithful friend is hard to find. 知音难觅。 9、A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真情。 10、A friend is easier lost than found. 得朋友难，失朋友易。 11、A good beginning is half done. 良好的开端是成功的一半。 12、A good beginning makes a good ending. 善始者善终。 13、A good book is a good friend. 好书如挚友。 14、A good medicine tastes bitter. 良药苦口。 15、A mother's love never changes. 母爱永恒。 16、An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 一天一苹果，不
初一英语作文范文：我的好朋友 I have a very good friend. His name is Philip. As far as I'm concerned, he's very kind-hearted and generous. Once I was in high school, he treated me friendly and sincerely. When I was happy, he was also happy with me. When I was sad, he always comforted me. When I was defeated, he always encouraged me. When I stumbled, he always pulled me up. Although we quarreled at times, we were still in good relationships. We could know each other better after the argument. When my birthday came, he always sent me a special present. He's very hard-working and intelligent. He always studied hard at school. Because of his hard work, he always did very well in exams. His oral English was better than mine. Most of the time, he was willing to chat with me in English. Owing to his help, I made a lot of progress in oral English.
水污染Water Pollution Everybody knows that there is serious problem of water pollution on the earth. Yes, water pollution is increasing. Look! The water in the river is getting dirtier and dirtier. Most of fish in the water have died, and we can’t swim in the water. My grandfather says, when he was very little, the water in the river was very clean. He often swam in the river with his friends. That was before, but now we can’t see such clean rivers. Let’s protect the water from pollution, be cause we can’t live without water. The water is really important to us all. 2.元旦英语作文（初中） January 1st is New Year's Day. It's a great day for all the people throughout the world. As the saying goes, "A good beginning is half the battle". So, many people go all out to celebrate the important day. On that day, I went to the Book City with my classmates. We bought a lot of useful reference books and interesting story books. I believe "Knowledge is power". I hope I can learn a lot from these books and improve my study. In the evening, my family had a big dinner party. All the members in my family wished me a good luck in the new year. 3.关于时间的英语作文初中英语作文 We often hear the saying"Time is money."But I think time is much more precious than money.Because If we lost time, we can't find it.But We can try to woke harder to get more money.No matter whatever you do ,you can not get lost time back. "Time flies.time and tides wait for no men".You can see how important time is.Lunxun had said"I spent the time on my work while others are havig coffee."We must make good use of our time,especially for our students,we shouldn't waste time in playing games and the like. 4.初中英语作文My friend (我的朋友) I have many friends. One of them is my classmate Ma Hua.He is a League member and one of the best students in my class.He is fond of English and good at it. He often practises reading aloud. So he has a good pronunciation. He is always ready to help others. With his help I have made great progress. I have made up my mind to catch up with him and to join the League in the near future. 5.初中英语作文水 Water is very important to us. If you don’t have water for three days, you will die. We can use water for flowers, swimming, washing and many different things. We use it to cook, make electricity, put out fires and so on. We use millions of liters of water every day. Do you know how does the water come to your home? It travels through water pipes. Some are long and wide but some are short and narrow. Then the water travels through the water pipes to the reservoirs. Then it travels through the water pipes to the river and to the special factories (we call water plants) that purify the water. When the water is purified, we can drink it. Please don’t leave garbage in the water on which we line, and keep the water clean.
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初中英语写作范文10篇 一、个人情况&家庭、朋友与周围的人&个人兴趣 假如你是李华，得知某英文报社要招聘一名兼职校园小记者，你有意应聘。请你给该报社写一封自荐信。 内容包括： 1. 表示对该工作感兴趣； 2. 说明你的优势； 3. 希望得到回复。 要求： 1. 内容要全面，语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯； 2. 词数不少于80，自荐信的格式及开头已给出，但不计入总词数。 Dear Sir or Madam, I’m glad to learn that you are looking for a part-time English reporter. I’m quite interested in the job. I think I’m fit for the job. As a middle school student, I have read a lot so I have a wide knowledge of many things. I like English and do well in both speaking and writing. Besides, I’m easy to get along with and I enjoy working with others. Most importantly, I have experience. I once worked as a reporter for my school radio station. I’m sure I can do a good jo b if you give me a chance. I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua
初一英语作文范文 初一英语作文：A letter to Uncle Wang Dear Uncle: I'm not well today.Because I have a lot of homework to do that I don't finish.But after reading your advice,I'm better than before. I have lots of good friends at school. On my birthday Eve,they gave me many presents and said"Happy birthday"to me.When I saw these beautiful presents,I was so happy and excited. When I got a very difficult question,my friends always helped me and they tought me slowly and clearly. And I'm very excited to hear that we'll go to a summer camp.I think it's very good! 初一英语作文：暑假英语作文--A Letter 在忙碌紧张的考试过后，同学们终于迎来了期盼已久的暑假生活，同学们在这个暑假里都去了那些名胜古迹游玩呢，下面这篇初一(七年级)暑假英语作文，供大家参考，希望同学们能够把自己游玩的感受用英语写下来与同学们共同分享. 根据个人实际情况写一则征笔友启事，启事中要做适当的自我介绍，例如：姓名、年龄、国家、现居住地、爱好、最喜欢的科目(电影、运动......)想找怎样的笔友等。 Dear friend , I’m Liu Fang .I’m 14 years old .I’m in HuiLi ,China . I have no ————来源网络搜集整理，仅供个人学习查参考
最新初中英语作文范文10 篇 初中英语作文篇1 请以" ?Make(s) Me So Happy" 为题写一篇英语短文。 Social Work Makes Me So Happy Why so many young people are not happy in modern society?But even so ,you can find many merry things if you like to. I join aa much as social work as I can.It is a good method to widen my vision and enlarge my social circle and close the realationship between the old and the young.It also improve the capability of social touch.Most of all,I can feel great pleasure. Helping other people is a kind of soul and built up my spirit,and understanding when I pay my kindness to others. virtue.It can purify my also I can get much
初中英语作文篇2 微笑，是人们用以表达内心喜悦的一种方式，它可给人以欢欣，给人以安慰，是自我感情的抒发，是对他人表示关爱，是爱心的奉献。微笑可以给人激励，给人奋进，它能使绝望者重新燃起期望之火，是失意者重新引起自信的风帆。请以Learn to smile 为题，用英语写一篇短文。 注意：1.80 词左右 2.不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通畅;文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Learn to smile(Don’t forget to smile) Smiling is an attitude toward life.In our life,there may be some unpleasant things.For example,you fail in an exam;or another time,you are misunderstood by your friends.These unpleasant things may make you feel sad.Then what will you do?Why not learn to smile?Smiling to yourself can bring back your confidence.Sometimes,the greatest enemy is 第2页共13页
英语优秀作文范文（9篇） 关于友谊 In our daily life if we get on harmoniously with our friends we’ll feel more joyous. But we’ll feel lonely without friends.When our friends feel upset or get ill we shouldn’t ignore them or look down upon them. On the contrary we ought to calm them down show our love and concern to them and try our best to help them overcome the hardships. Sometimes we may have some misunderstandings or disagreements with our friends thus we had better have a discussion with them and try to accept their good ideas instead of quarreling with them. As long as we can follow these good suggestions we’ll find it easy to make more friends。 译文： 在日常生活中，如果我们跟朋友相处融洽，我们的心情也会更加愉悦。然而若是没有朋友则会觉得孤单。当我们的朋友忧伤或是生病时，我们不应冷落或轻起他们，相反地，我们要帮他们平抚心情，尽自己最大的努力关心他，帮助他渡过难关。有时候我们会与朋友产生误会，发生分歧，这时我们最好是跟朋友好好谈谈而不要争吵，尽量理解他的好的想法。只要我们遵循这些建议，我们会发现想要结交更多的朋友很简单。 学习和玩耍 Everyone has to study going to school occupies a lot of people’s time before they go to work they need to study in the school. In China students work very hard for they have a lot of pressure they have many exams to take so students are immerged into the books all the time. While studying all the time is not good for students they need to go out of the classroom and take in some fresh air. The outside world is beautiful they can play with their friends watching movies taking a break now and then. Play can make study better students can have new idea so they won’t stuck in the unsolved problem. Study needs to combine with play。 译文： 每个人都要学习，上学占据了很多人的时间，在他们工作前，他们需要在学校上学。在中国，学生很努力学习，因为他们有很大的压力，他们有很多的考试，因此学生整天埋头苦读。然而整天学习并不利于学生，他们需要走出教室，呼吸新鲜的空气。外面的世界很美，他们可以和朋友玩，看看电影，时而不时的休息下。玩耍能让学习更有效率，学生可以有新的注意，这样他们就不会被无法解决的难题困住。学习要和玩耍结合起来。 做自己 I believe that everyone will have the moment that they envy others they want to be others. It is so common people will see other people’s advantages easily while at the same time they feel they
初中英语作文范文21篇 参考文献： 1、假如李明是你的好朋友，根据提示写一篇80词左右的短文介绍李明的业余爱好。（短文开头已给出） 提示语： (1).李明以前是个电影迷, 一周至少去看两次电影，有时租VCD在家里看，最喜欢的影星是姜文； (2).李明现在的兴趣是集邮, 认为集邮非常有趣，可以从邮票上学到很多关于人物、地点、历史的知识, 有些旧邮票非常有价值； (3).上周五是李明的生日, 他从朋友那里得到了许多邮票，非常高兴。 Li Ming is my good friend. He has many hobbies. He used to be a movie fan. He went to the movie theater at least twice a week. Sometimes he rented VCDs and watched them at home. His favorite movie star was Jiang Wen. Now Li Ming is interested in collecting stamps. He thinks it’s great fun. He can learn a lot about people, places, history and many other things from stamps. Some old stamps are very valuable. Last Friday was Li Ming’s birthday. He got many stamps from his friends. Li Ming was very happy. 2、假如你的新笔友叫Mike。请你给他写一封回信，介绍你的情况。信的内容必须 包括：你的姓名，年龄，所就读的学校，年级、班级，爱好，最喜欢的学科及 理由，最喜欢的影片及理由等。信的内容不得少于十句话。信的开头和结尾已 给出。 January 12 th,.2002 Dear Mike, Thanks for your letter. Now I’d like to tell you something about myself._______ Yours, Bob January 12 th,2002 Dear Mike, Thanks for your letter, Now I’d like to tell you something about myself. My name is x x. I’m twelve. I study at Bei Da Resource Middle School,
中考英语作文一直是热点，该如何的去开展呢?下面看看小编带来的中考英语作文范文，供大家参考阅读! 最好的旅游方式 People travel by plane, by train, by ship, by bus. To me, the best way of traveling on a summer vacation is to go on foot. 人们会乘坐飞机、火车、轮船、公交车去旅游。对于我来说，最好的旅游方式是暑假期间徒步旅游。 On a summer vacation I travel to refresh myself and to see the countryside. When I use my feet and walk on a grass covered path or among the hills I feel detached from the noise of the city and closer to the nature. And when I travel on foot I get more freedom. I can plan my own schedule. I can choose my own route. I can stop where I like. And I can see things and people that I might miss if I travel on a train or on a bus. 暑假的时候，我通过旅游去释放自己和游览乡间。当我用双脚走在铺满小草的小径或山间时，我感觉(自己)远离城市的喧嚣，并且更亲近大自然。当我徒步旅行时我可以得到更多的自由。我可以自己选择行程。我可以自己选择路线。只要喜欢，我就可以停下来。而且我可以看到很多人和事，那些我可能乘坐火车或公车旅行而错失的。 When faster and more convenient ways for travel are becoming available, I still favor using my own feet. I get much pleasure from it. 当更快、更方便的旅游方式变成通用的，我仍然支持用自己的双脚(旅行)，我从中得到了许多乐趣。 白色的世界The White World As I live in the south, I never have the chance to see snow. I wish I could witness it once in my life. My wish came true this year, because my parents flied to the north city to spend the holiday. We bought a lot of clothes. When we took off the flight, it was so cold for me, because I never experienced such coldness. The world was white for me. The trees were covered with white snow, and it was amazing. I felt like I was in the story world. But in the house, it was so warm because of the central heating. It was even warmer than the south. The most exciting thing was to play snow. I built snow men with all kinds of shapes. It was so funny. My father and I played in the snow for a long time. It is so unforgettable for me. 由于我生活在南方，所以我从未有机会看到过雪。我希望我能见一次雪。今年我的愿望实现了，因为我的父母飞到北方度假.我们买了很多衣服，当我们航班落地时，对我来说是非常的冷，因为我从未经历过这样的寒意。整个世界对我来说都是白色的，白雪覆盖着树，真是很神奇，我觉得自己就好像在童话世界里一样。但在家里，却是非常的温暖，因为有中央供暖系统，甚至比南方还暖和。最令人兴奋的事情就是玩雪了。我做了各种形状