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雅思大作文2之写作段落展开思路

雅思大作文2之写作段落展开思路
雅思大作文2之写作段落展开思路

I.雅思写作段落展开思路

问题实质:写作通常围绕某个社会热点话题的下列要素展开:

影响(后果);解决策略(条件);原因;

II.辩论类题型:考题问题可以分为双方进行比较以及辩论的题目;

双方观点Some people believe that…while others hold that… Discuss both views and give your opinion. /Which one do you agree?

利弊分析Nowadays, more and more…Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?/ Is it a positive or a negative development?

一方观点Some people believe that… To what extent do you agree or disagree?

III.报告类题型:

原因加解决策略;

影响加解决策略;

原因加影响;

根据历年真题统计报告类题型通常占比10%左右;其余均为辩论类题型;

IV.辩论类大作文写作思路:

策略类;影响类;

A 需要B,C可以带来B,所以A需要C。

A还需要D,但是C只能带来B,而E可以带来D,所以

A也需要E。

i. 策略类题型:

策略:

为了实现某个目标而采取的方法;

本质上可以理解为达成某个目的而具备的条件;

策略类题型大多数含有“某人应该/should做某事”

这一关键词;

充分条件:足够实现考题所要实现的目的;仅仅...是不够的;

必要条件:如果缺少就无法实现考题目的;没有...也可以;

解决考题中含有should的题型时,首先必须理解如何证明“某人应该做某事”。

sb. should do...(while others believe...should do...)

ex1. "parents should teach children how to be good members of society"

应该事实上包含两重含义,即

某事是某人的责任或义务,因此某人应该做某事;

某事对某人有好处(即满足某人的某项需要),因此某人应该

做某事;

Should: Obligation

1) it is a part of their responsibility;

2) it is the result of one's behavior;

3) one has the irreplaceable role;

+ it is very important/someone needs it

某人有责任或义务的理由是

*这是某人引起的后果;

某人有着无可替代的作用;

这是某人职责的一部分;

+ 这件事很重要;

Some people believe that the companies causing pollution should pay for the cleaning of it. Others, however, believe that the government should pay the money. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Should the polluting companies pay for the cleaning of the pollution they cause or should it be the responsibility of the government? Considering the complexity of this task, I would like to make a point that it needs the money from more than one side.

ex2. Cleaning up pollution is vitally important for people's health and even lives and it costs huge amounts of money. Some companies are polluting our environment for their own interest, so it is reasonable to demand them to pay for what they did.

ex3. However, cleaning pollution costs huge amounts of money, which may be beyond the affordability of any private company.

Also not all the polluters can be found and pay for this cleaning.

However, if these kinds of pollution are left without cleaning, people's health and safety would be put at risk. As protecting people's health and safety is the responsibility of the government, it is reasonable for the tax money to be used in this way.

课堂练习:

"parents should teach children how to be good members of society"

*这对某人有利;

好处:满足某人的某项需要;

弊端:阻碍人们满足需要;夺走人们需要的东西;

考题分析的理论基础:

Abraham H.

Maslow

EX4. Some people believe that young people should follow the old traditions of society, but others say that young people should be individuals of free behaving. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

年轻:缺乏知识经验;需要找到自己的生存与发展方向;

社会传统:社会中大多数人遵守的,长期传承的一系列思考以及行为方式;

双方观点很多情况下是互补而不是矛盾的;

与考题无直接联系的内容会导致成绩的损失;

大作文= 开头段+ 主体段+ 结论段;

开头段:核心词;点题;表态;

完整开头段:点出后文的主线索;表明作者自己的态度即可,模板套句令人生厌;

*逐字翻译考题原文;

*把代词补全成为名词;

*双方观点重叠部分往往为考题核心即本文要解决的核心问题;

***** 看准看清考题中的名词与情态动词;

背景,点题,表态;

开头段:点出文章的核心关键词,点题,表态;

第二段:一方观点(比较不倾向的一方);

第三段:上段观点不足引出另一方观点;

第四段:我的观点兼结论段;/我的观点;

(第五段)结论段;

主体段结构:

Topic Sentence (考题的一部分内容);

Development (把观点句中的概念清晰化解释);

Evidence (举例或如果假设);

Conclusion (回归主题句的内容);

sb. should do... ——It is reasonable to require sb. to do.

It is not unreasonable to expect sb. to do...

例题1. Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.

Discuss both views and give your opinion. (C8T1)

考题翻译:一些人认为父母应该教孩子如何成为社会的好成员。

其他人,然而,认为学校是孩子们学习如何成为社会好成

员的地点。

设问开头1:Is teaching children how to be good members of society only parents' duty? Considering the complexity of the task, I would like to give a negative answer to the question. 设问开头2:Should parents teach children how to be good members of society or is school the place to learn this?

Considering the complexity of the task, I believe that it needs the efforts of more than one side.

陈述开头:Raising children to be good members of society needs the efforts of more than one side, so I do not believe that it is parents' duty only.

Indeed, parents have the responsibility of teaching children how to be good members of society(Topic Sentence). A good member of any society must follow the rules in it when interacting with others.(Develop "good members of society") As we all know, children are gradually taught these rules when they grow up(Develop "children"). Parents bring the children to the world, and have the biggest influence before adulthood, so they have unmatchable influence in teaching children this lesson(Develop "parents"). Most children, for example, learn politeness, the foundation of social rules, from their parents first(evidence). As raising qualified social members is vitally important to society and individuals, it is reasonable to expect parents to teach the lesson(conclusion).

(Indeed, parents have the responsibility of teaching children how to be good members of society.主题句在有结论句的情况下可以省略) A good member of any society must follow the rules in it when interacting with others. As we all know, children are gradually taught these rules when they grow up.

(前两句develop 关键词“good members of society”和“children”)Parents bring the children to the world, and have the biggest influence before adulthood, so they have unmatchable influence in teaching children this lesson.(前面的句子解释关键词“parents”,并且为“应该”铺垫)Most children, for example,learn politeness, the foundation of social rules, from their parents first.(本句为“evidence”)As raising qualified social members is vitally important to society and individuals(前半句继续铺垫“应该”), it is reasonable to expect parents to teach the lesson(结论句回归考题内容).

课堂练习:仿照上文写一个段落,证明:

确实,污染企业应该为清除污染付费。清除污染需要大笔的资金,而且它对于人们的健康甚至生命至关重要。污染企业为了自己的利益把污染物排放到环境中。因此要求他们为自己的行为付费是合理的。

"the polluting companies should pay for cleaning pollution"

Cleaning pollution is vitally important to people's health and even their lives, but it costs huge amounts of money. Many companies discharge pollutant into the environment during

their production activities. According to study,for instance, over 70% of pollutants in the atmosphere, the soil, and the water is from industrial waste. In a sense, these companies are making their money by damaging the environment that belongs to everyone, so it is not unreasonable to demand them to pay for what they did.

However, teaching children to do things within social rules and values needs more than parenting.(点出第二段观点的不足“充分性”或/与“必要性”)It also needs children to learn the right ways to live with various people in the society wider than home.(换一个角度解释考题的目标)School is exactly this place.(点题)At school, children can meet and live together with peers, teachers, and many others from different backgrounds and of various habits.(develop关键词“school”)Living with these people can let children know the social roles that they should play.(本段结论句)Is this not an important lesson to be a good member of society?(提出本段观点的“必要性”)

课堂练习:“the government should pay for cleaning pollution”

然而,清除污染仅靠污染企业付费是不够的,它还需要政府的资金支持。治理污染需要花费大笔的资金,它可能远远超过企业能力范围。此外,很多污染来自人类近百年的工业化进程,所以许多污染者已经无法找到。政府有着私人企业无法比拟的财力,而且保护人们免遭污染的伤害是政府职责的一部分,因此它也应该承担这笔费用。

在我看来清除污染需要巨额的资金以及全面的措施,所以不仅仅污染企业应该承担付费责任,政府也应该在污染企业无力承担或者找不到污染者时支付这笔费用。

In my opinion, raising children to be good members of society needs complex efforts (呼应开头段)both in and outside home(进一步解释开头段内容), so it is not only parents' responsibility(呼应开头段)but also what children learn at school and in the rest of their lives. (进一步解释开头段内容)

思考练习题:找出需定义的核心词,准确定义并从中引申出主要观点;

Some people believe that the cost of cleaning pollution should be paid by the companies causing it. Others, however, believe that the government should pay this money. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

一些人认为清除污染的费用应该由造成污染的企业支付。然而,其他人认为政府应该支付这笔钱。讨论双方观点并给出你的看法。

清除污染对于人们的生存至关重要,而且它花费巨大,所以我不认为仅仅造成污染的企业应该为之付费。

许多企业为了增加自己的利润而污染环境。例如,一些工厂把制造过程中产生的废气,废水直接排放到环境中。他们从销售产品中获得利润但是周围人们的生存环境遭到了巨大的甚至是无法挽回的(irreversible)破坏。例如,据报道,。。。

要求他们为此付费时合理的。此外,这样做还可以震慑那些

想要这样做的人(deter the followers)。

然而,清除污染仅仅靠企业付费是不够的。许多环境中的污染物来自人类一百多年来的工业化进程,现在很多污染者已经找不到了,所以也不可能要求他们付费。即便是可能,这些企业也许也无力承担这笔费用。例如,仅仅治理福岛核电站泄露事故对环境的破坏就需要数以千亿计的资金,远远超过了企业的承受能力。然而,如果不治理的话,这些污染会严重威胁人们的健康甚至生命。由于政府有责任维护公民的健康和生命,而且它也比企业有更多的资金用于处理这方面的问题,所以它也应该承担起这部分的责任。

在我看来,清除污染首先应该要求污染企业付费。然而如果污染企业找不到或者无力承担这笔费用时,政府也应该付费。

Should paying for cleaning pollution be the obligation of the enterprises causing it or should it be financed by the government? Considering the complexity of the task, I would like to make a point that it needs money from both sides.

Cleaning up pollution is of vital importance to individuals' health and the development of society, but it costs huge amounts of money. Many companies are making their money by damaging our environment. For instance, over 80% of pollutants in the atmosphere, the water, and the soil come from industrial wastes. In a sense, these companies are making their own money by polluting the environment that belongs to everyone. Naturally, it is not unfair to demand them to pay for what they did. Furthermore, this cost would discourage the potential copycats.

However, can this exempt the government from paying the money? Not all the sources of pollution, as we all know, can be found. Most of it has been accumulated in the centuries-old industrialization, so the source of it can hardly be located.

Even if the polluters are found, they may not be able to afford to clean the pollution they cause. Take the nuclear leakage in Fukushima, Japan, for example, the cost of dealing with the problem is thousands of times more than the owner company can afford. In these cases, as pollution is putting public health and even their safety at extreme risk, the government as the ultimate protector of public interest should be responsible for paying the money.

In my opinion, cleaning up pollution is vitally important to individuals and the society, so the money of cleaning it should be paid both by the polluter companies and (in case the polluters are not available or able to do it) the government.

例题2. Some people think that personal happiness is directly related to economic success. Others, however, think that personal happiness is also related to other factors. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

考题翻译:一些人认为个人幸福和经济成功直接有关。其他人认为个人幸福也与其他因素有关。讨论双方观点给出你的看法。

题型判定:条件类/策略类(分析条件的充分性和必要性);

关键词解析

个人幸福:是一种满足各种需求的感觉;

经济成功:有大量的钱;

直接有关:有A必然有B;A增加B也会增加;

考题日期:2012年10月11日

参考范文:Is personal happiness directly linked to economic success or is it related to other factors? Personally, I believe that happiness is related not only to one's successful financial conditions.

According to psychologists, personal happiness is largely related to the sense of satisfaction, whether one gets what he or she wants or not. Economic success brings people much money, which can be used to buy things people want or, in other words, to satisfy their needs. For instance, a starving person would feel happy for getting enough money for food.

There are many similar cases, too many to be listed all in this one essay. Therefore, personal happiness has certain relations with one's successful financial situation.

However, what people need is more than things that can be bought with money. For instance, whether a person is happy is also influenced by whether he or she enjoys health, family affection, others' respect, and many other factors. Large amounts of money do not necessarily bring people these, but it is hard to imagine one can be happy without them.

Therefore, personal happiness is also associated with getting these things.

In my opinion, personal happiness is not only related to what people get but also linked to their standards of satisfaction. A person with a low standard, like a monk seeking truth in a remote temple, may get little but still feel very happy for what is in hand. By contrast, a man may have already got all the things mentioned above, money and other factors, but still feel unhappy for what is beyond reach. Therefore, personal happiness is not necessarily related to economic success or other factors, but is influenced by one's standards of satisfaction as well.

To sum up, economic success is neither necessary nor sufficient in getting personal happiness. Instead, happiness is much related to other factors, especially individuals' standard of satisfaction.

英文原题:Some people think personal happiness is directly related to economic success, while others believe this depends on other factors.

范文翻译:个人幸福直接和经济成功有关吗?从个人角度看我不同意这个观点而且我认为个人幸福需要的不仅如此。

据心理学家说,个人幸福与满足感,即人们得到自己想要的东西,有很大的关系。经济成功给人们带来大笔的金钱。这些钱可以帮助人们购买自己想要的东西,即满足他们的需要。所以说,个人幸福和经济成功有一定的联系。

然而,人们需要的不仅仅是钱能买到的东西。例如,一个人是否幸福与他或者她是否拥有健康,亲情,他人的尊重等很多要素有关。大量的金钱不一定能给人们带来这些,但是很难想象人们如果没有这些会幸福。

在我看来,个人幸福不仅和人们得到什么有关也与他们各自满足(satisfaction)的标准有关。一个满足标准很低的人,如一个在远离尘世的寺庙中追寻真理的僧侣,很可能得到的很少但是依然为自己得到的东西感到幸福。然而,一个贪婪的人可能会得到前文提到的所有的东西,金钱和其它要素,却依然可能会因为没有得到的东西感到不幸福。所以说,个人幸福不一定与经济成功或其它要素有关,而是受到个人满足标准的影响。

总之,经济成功对于获得个人幸福来说既非必要条件也非充分条件。相反,个人幸福与个人的满足标准有很大的联系。应该/should并不表示责任义务,而是表示“有利的选择”;

“有利”或“有好处”可以理解为能够满足某人的某项需要;所以解决此类考题首先需要分析考题涉及的相关方的需要;

论证思路:某人/某物可以满足人们的某项需要,但是仅仅靠该人或物不足以满足这种需要,所以人们还需要另一个观点

中提出的人或物;

例题1:Some people believe that students should concentrate on their study. Others, however, believe that they should be encouraged to do some part-time work.

Discuss both views and give your opinion.

一些人认为学生应该专注于学习。然而其他人认为他们应该被鼓励做一些兼职工作。讨论双方观点并给出你的看法。

A需要B,而C可以带来B,所以A需要C。

然而,A不仅仅需要B还需要D,但是C不能带来D,而E 可以带来D,所以A也需要E。

学生需要:生存发展——足够知识;对社会尤其是对就业的了解;收入;

sb. should...

某人需要...;考题所说策略可以带来人们需要的...;所以人们应该....;

然而,人们还需要...,但是考题所说策略无法带来,所以人

们还应该...;

开头段:学生需要为了自己的未来培养多方面的能力,所以仅仅专注于学术学习是不够的。

Students need to develop various skills for their future, so they should not only concentrate on their academic study.

Should students concentrate on their academic study or should they be encouraged to do some paid work?

Considering their various needs, I would like to make a point that both are necessary.

第二段:(先逐一解释考题中的核心词)为了未来的生存,学生首先需要有足够的能力养活自己,所以他们应该具备足够的工作能力以便于在未来找到养活自己的岗位。在学校和大学的学习让学生可以提高自己的学术知识,而学术知识众所周知是现代许多工作能力的基础。例如,工程师需要足够的物理,数学,化学等知识。此外,学生处于人生中最佳的学习时期,如果错过这个时期,他们可能需要在未来花费更多的时间来学习同样的内容。所以,学生有必要花大多数的时间在学习上。

To survive in the future, most students first need to develop enough skills, so that they could be able to do the jobs in the future. Studying at school or colleges brings them academic knowledge, which, as we all know, is the foundation of modern working skills. For example, an engineer always needs enough knowledge in physics, mathematics, chemistry, and so on.

Besides, young students are in their best time for learning.

Missing the time, they would have to spend much longer time learning the same thing. Therefore, it is reasonable for them to spend most of their time studying.

第三段:(点出上段观点的不足,然后再引出本段观点)然而,准备未来的生存发展仅仅靠学术学习是不够的。学生还需要具备一些工作能力以及更重要的是,需要对社会有一定的了解。利用业余时间工作让学生有机会了解工作的真实情况以及社会对青年的要求。这帮他们为未来打下基础。

此外,一些家庭比较贫困的学生需要一些收入来支持他们的学习甚至来帮助家里的其他人。兼职工作给他们提供了必要的收入来源。所以,学生们也应该做一些兼职工作。

结论段:在我看来,学生需要为未来的生存和发展做准备,而这需要他们不仅仅具备学术知识,所以他们应该把主要精力用于学习但同时也需要利用业余时间做一些兼职工作。

英文范文:Students need to develop comprehensive skills for their future, so they need more than concentrating on their academic study.

To survive in the future, students first need enough skills to support themselves, so they should have sufficient working skills to find jobs for enough income when they grow up.

Schools and universities teach students academic knowledge which, as we all know, is the foundation of doing modern jobs.

For instance, an engineer needs knowledge in physics, mathematics, chemistry, and so on. Similar cases are many, too many to be listed all in this one essay. Therefore, it is necessary for students to spend most of their time on their study.

However, young students need more than what is learned at school. They also need the chances to put what they learn in real working to get ready for their entry into society. Also young students need some basic knowledge of the society wider than school. Part-time working offers a good opportunity to meet these needs. When working, students can experience how the academic knowledge is put to use in real life and meet people whom they have no chances to know on campus. What is more, part-time working can bring the students some income,which is important for those from poor families. Thus, it is also advisable for students to be encouraged to work in their spare time.

In my opinion, students need to acquire knowledge and develop skills both in and outside the classroom,so they should not only spend the majority of their time studying but also be encouraged to do some part-time jobs, in order to get ready for their future.

2012年2月4日Some people think young people should follow the old traditions of society. Some people think young people should be individuals of free behaving. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Should young people obey the old social traditions or should they be individuals of free behaving? Considering the needs of themselves and that of the society, I believe that only one side is not enough.

分析考题可以优先定位考题所说事件的直接相关方;

Indeed, young people should follow the old traditions. To survive in society, they should first be accepted by the mainstream group. Traditions are the ways of doing things that most people take, so obeying these codes can reduce the difficulties in the young's entrance into the society. For instance, a polite young man will certainly be more popular among colleagues than a rude one. What is more, young people are commonly lack of experiences. Traditions, as we all know, are the combination of time-tested experiences, following which can well make up the shortage of experiences of the young and reduce their risk of making mistakes. Therefore, it advisable/wise/necessary/beneficial/favorable for young people to follow the old traditions of society.

然而,社会和年轻人自己的发展需要的不仅仅是遵守旧的传统。首先,一些旧的传统如对女性的歧视已经不符合现代社会的环境,所以遵守它们可能是有害的。其次,年轻人自己和社会都需要创新才能发展。而创新需要摆脱旧的东西的束缚。和成年人不同,年轻人并没有过多地受到旧传统的限制,所以他们更有可能有一些创新性的想法。例如,现在世界上许多伟大的公司都是年轻人创立的。所以,年轻人应该享有一些行动的自由。

总之,年轻人不仅仅应该为了生存和避免错误而遵守传统,也应该享有一些行动的自由以便于促进个人和社会的发展,只要这种自由不会给自己和他人造成严重的损害。

What young people should do ought to be good for the development of themselves and the whole society, so I do not think that they should only follow the old traditions of society.

Young people need first to survive in the society. To do so, they need to be accepted by the mainstream society. (Young people need to be accepted by the mainstream society in order to survive.) Social traditions are the ways of doing things that are accepted by the majority of social members, so following them could make their entrance into society easier than otherwise. For example, a good mannered young man could certainly be more welcomed in an office than a rude one.

Also young people are commonly lack of experience, but the traditions are exactly the experiences passed down for a long time, so following these traditions could avoid their risk of making mistakes.

However, young people's development and that of the society need more than old traditions, some of which, like the discrimination against women, are based on the old social conditions and become obsolete(out of time过时的). Following them could cause bad influence both to the young and the society. What is more, innovation is also an important part of young people's task. Innovation, as we all know, needs people to challenge the present society to find problems and to have the unbounded ideas to explore into the new frontiers. Unlike the grown up, young people are not so confined by old traditions so they are more likely to have innovative ideas. If they are bond up by old traditions like the adult, the society would be lack of innovative power. Therefore, they should also be individuals of free behaving.

In my opinion,young people should follow the old social traditions to survive in the society and to avoid making mistakes but, at the same time, they should be allowed some freedom of doing things as long as/on the condition that this freedom does not cause serious damage to themselves and others so that the society could move forward with innovative power.

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应该遵守社会旧的传统;

社会传统:长期传承的,社会中大多数人遵守的行为和思考方式;

行动自由:按照自己的意愿,不受约束的行动;

年轻人:缺乏经验和阅历的人;

年轻人需要:在社会中生存与发展;

年轻人责任:社会未来的建设者;社会的继承者;

年轻人的行为应该有利于自己和社会的生存与发展。

传统:长时间传承的,社会大多数人接受的行为和思考方式;

年轻人需要在社会中生存,首先要被社会主流接纳。接受传统可以促进这个过程;年轻人缺乏经验容易犯错误。传统是经过时间检验的正确行为方式。接受传统可以避免错误。传统是社会大量经验和文化的传承,遵守传统可以保证文化遗产不会灭绝。

年轻人没有旧的经验的桎梏,他们比成年人更容易创新。

而创新对于社会和个人的未来都是至关重要的。传统是在过去的社会现实中产生的,因此可能不符合现代的要求。

所以不仅仅是年轻人,所有人都应该有自由去挑战它。

一些人认为年轻人应该遵守社会的旧的传统。一些人认为年轻人应该是行为自由的个体。讨论双方观点给出你的看法。

年轻人的行为应该有利于他们自己和整个社会的发展,所以我不认为年轻人仅仅应该遵守社会的旧有传统。

年轻人普遍缺乏经验,因此他们可能会在工作和生活中犯各种错误。传统是经过长时间检验的做事情的方式。遵守这些经验可以帮助年轻人避免错误有利于他们的成长。此外,大多数的年轻人需要找到自己在社会中的位置。传统是社会中大多数人遵守的行为习惯。按照这些习惯做事有利于年轻人被主流社会接纳并且促进他们的发展。

然而,年轻人仅仅按照过去的习惯做事是不够的。他们还需要发挥他们的创造性并且推动社会的发展。要做到这一点,年轻人需要一定程度的自由。众所周知,创新需要发现现有的一些问题并且提出解决办法。如果年轻人受到传统的束缚,完全服从传统的话,很难想象他们能够通过发现现有的问题而做出自己的创新。这样的话,社会的进步很难实现。所以,年轻人需要一定程度的不受传统束缚的自由。

在我看来,年轻人的行为应该有利于自身和社会的发展。

因此他们不仅仅应该遵守社会的旧传统以汲取经验和获得认可,而且他们还应该享受一些行动的自由以便于社会的创新。

2012年1月12日Some people think the government should pay for public libraries in every town, while some people think it is a waste of money, as we can access to information from the Internet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

一些人认为政府应该为每个城镇的公共图书馆付费,而其他

人则认为政府为每个城镇的公共图书馆付费是浪费钱,因为我们现在可以从互联网获得知识。讨论双方观点并给出你的看法。

政府的职责:满足人民的需求;

公共图书馆:储存图书,供人民免费获得知识;

互联网:人们利用电脑网络轻松获得大量知识的渠道;

浪费:不能满足需要;有其他更好的办法满足同样的需要;

含有因果关系的题目需要考虑这个“因为”是否足以证明“所以”的推论。

确实,互联网可以很大程度上满足人们对知识的需要。互联网连接着世界各地的电脑。人们只需要在家里搜索就可以找到储存在这些电脑中的信息。相反(by contrast),人们必须离开家亲自去图书馆而且花费很长的时间才能找到自己想要的东西。此外,电脑和互联网可以轻松地把数百万本书储存在一个很小的硬盘上但是传统的图书馆则需要大量的空间和人力。所以,政府花钱在公共图书馆上看起来是浪费。

然而,人们需要电脑和网络连接才能利用网络获得知识。如果没有这些,网络就不能帮助他们。此外,有些老人不知道如何使用网络。此外,许多书籍因为版权的限制是在网上找不到的。在这些情况下他们的知识需求也无法通过网路满足,所以他们需要图书馆。然而,图书馆是非盈利性的而且需要大量的资金建立和维护。政府有足够的资金而且有责任满足公民的需要,因此它应该为每个城镇的图书馆付费。

尽管现在人们可以利用互联网轻松地获得知识,但是这足以证明政府为每个城镇的图书馆付费是浪费钱吗?因为下列理由,我不同意这个观点而且我认为政府应该付这笔钱。

确实,互联网可以取代图书馆的大多数功能。传统的图书馆储存图书并且供人们借阅。但是,互联网的发展使得读者可以在自己家里轻松地浏览世界各地的图书馆的书籍。这显然比去图书馆借书并且在阅读之后归还图书更容易。此外,人们可以轻松地把数百万册的图书储存在网络上的硬盘中而传统的图书馆则需要几座庞大的建筑物才能储存同样数量的书籍。

然而,互联网能够完全取代图书馆的作用吗?首先,并不是所有人都能从互联网中获得知识。即便是在那些互联网非常发达的城市中,许多人也没有能够连接互联网的设备如电脑,手机等。即便是有,许多老人和年幼的学生也不会使用

它。对于他们来说,图书馆是必须的。此外,许多书籍,尤其是古代的书籍,本身就是宝贵的财富。它们需要专门的技术和场所才能保存。图书馆有专门的技术人员和专门设计的建筑可以很好地保存这些财富。因此,建设和维护图书馆是必要的。然而,由于它不能挣钱却需要花费大笔的资金以建设和维护,政府应该用纳税人的钱以满足人们的这一需要。

在我看来,尽管互联网可以取代图书馆的大多数功能,但这不足以证明政府投资维护它是浪费。相反,政府应该资助每个城镇的图书馆。

Although internet can perform a large part of the functions of public libraries, it is still reasonable for government to offer financial support to these facilities in every town.

A library is an organized collection of sources of information, made accessible to a defined community for reference or borrowing. Internet, with its revolutionary technologies, offers people a much more advantageous source of information. For example, modern searching engines enable readers to find the information they need from the data bases all over the world in just a few seconds while finding the same thing in a traditional library could take hours, not to mention all the trouble of traveling to the library oneself. This, therefore, makes the tax money spent on public libraries seemingly a waste.

However, a second thought may lead to a quite different conclusion that the government should pay for public libraries in every town. Libraries play an indispensable role as the source of knowledge and this function cannot be totally performed by internet. For example, not every town has enough internet service for every citizen. Even if there is enough service, there are many people who do not know how to use it in the town. Without public libraries, their needs for knowledge can hardly be satisfied. As few libraries are profit making but all of them need money to maintain, it is reasonable to require the government, the provider of public service, to allocate enough money for these facilities in every town.

In my opinion, internet is of great advantages as the source of information, but as it has its own limitations in meeting people's needs, it is justified rather than a waste of money for the government to pay for public libraries in every town.

2011年7月30日Some people think governments should ban dangerous sports. Others, however, argue that people have freedom to make their own decisions. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 一些人认为政府应该禁止危险的体育运动。一些人认为,人们应该有自己做决定的自由

危险运动会威胁运动员甚至公众的安全。维护公共安全是政府的职责,所以它应该禁止这个观点看似合理(...is seemingly reasonable)。

然而,如果可以确保避免这些风险,政府就没有必要禁止这些运动。例如,许多运动员都经过专门的训练,有专业的设备和专门的场地。这可以吧对他们自己和公众的危害降至最低。在这种情况下政府的禁令是没有必要的。成年的公民都有为自己行为负责人的能力和义务,如果他们在知道行为的后果,而且可以避免所带来的伤害的情况下,他们应该有自由选择从事任何运动。

总之,尽管政府禁止危险运动看似合理,但是在问题可以避免的情况下这些禁令是没有必要的。所以我认为人们有选择运动的自由。

策略类题型II. 评判是否最优策略考题中经常会出现“某某方法是否解决某个问题的最好方法”的问题;

什么是好方法?

局限性小或没有

局限性:在什么情况下,该方法不起作用,这种情况就是局限性;副作用:除了能实现考题所说的方法之外还会导致附带伤害;有些时候,考题所说方法是既有局限性也有副作用,也有些时候是有两者中的一个;

解题推导思路:

如果要实现考题所说目标首先需要什么?

考题所说方法的直接效果是什么?

这个直接效果是否足以带来实现目标所需要的条件?

例题1:增加运动设施是改善公众健康的最好方法;

改善公众健康需要减少人们的疾病。增加运动设施可以给需要的人们更多的用于运动的设备。运动,众所周知,是提高人体免疫力抵御疾病的有效方法。所以说,增加运动

设施对于改善公众健康有一定的效果。

例题2:Increasing the petrol price is the best way to deal with growing traffic and pollution problems.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

What other ways do you think might be effective?

提高油价是解决不断增加的交通和污染问题的最好办法。

你在多大程度上同意或者不同意这个观点?

什么其他的方法是你认为有效的?

局限性:

副作用:

要想解决这个问题需要做到什么?

考题所说方法在什么情况下可以做到这一点?

提高油价——开车成本—<在乎成本>—减少汽车使用——交通拥堵和污染

判断是否最佳策略:局限性;副作用;

开头段:

让步段:确实该方法在一定情况下有效,但。。。局限性/副作用。。。所以人们需要更好的方法。

更好的建议;

最好的建议/另一个更好的建议;

结论段;

(并非所有的最佳策略题都有局限性和副作用);

Is increasing the petrol price the best method to deal with the growing traffic and pollution problems? Considering the limitation and the collateral damage of it, I do not agree with this opinion and I believe that there are better options.

第二段(解决考题所说问题的先决条件“要想。。。人们首先需要。。。”)

As these problems are mainly attributable to the growing use of cars(可选), the key to solve these problems is to reduce the car use. (解读策略目标)Increasing the petrol price can higher the cost of driving(方法的直接效果)and, therefore, force some price-sensitive people to drive less(间接推导到考题的目标). However, with the economic growth increasing people's wealth, fewer people will care about the increased

cost, so the method cannot be effective for long(提出该方法的局限性). Even worse, high petrol price will result in the rising price of almost everything that needs transportation, adding to people's financial burden(提出该方法的副作用).

Therefore, some other ways with better effect and smaller harm are needed.

Government's limiting car use(本段的建议方法)can be effective on both the rich and the poor(排除上一段的局限性)without increasing the price(排除上一段所说的副作用).

In many cities facing serious problems like these, a common practice is that the governments limit or ban people from driving in certain areas at certain times of the day(develop本段所提方法). For example, Beijing succeeded in removing 20% of car use in this way(证据). Obviously, this is much better than raising the price of petrol.(结论句扣题)

However, as government limit will cause inconvenience to people's traveling(上一段方法的不足), the policy needs to be combined with developing the public transportation(提出本段方法). As we all know, a bus can carry 10 times passengers of private cars with the same amount of emission and the same length of roads, not to mention the subway can carry even 10 times more passengers than the bus without causing any pollution or congestion. If these means of traveling are built enough to satisfy people's needs, the car use will be effectively reduced and the pollution and traffic problems will thus be solved.

In conclusion, increasing the petrol price has little effect on the rich and could worsen people's financial situations, so I do not think it the best way(回答第一问问题). Comparatively, the combination of limiting car use and developing the public transportation has better effect and less side effect.(回答第二问)

Some people believe that giving criminals longer prison sentences is the best way to reduce the crime rate.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

What other ways do you think are better?

Are longer prison terms the best way to reduce crime? Considering the following facts, I would like to give a negative answer to the question and I believe that there are better solutions.

To reduce crime, people first need to curb the number of criminals

in society and to reduce the chances of crime. Putting the convicts behind bars for longer time reduces their opportunities to hurt law abiding citizens and deters those who want to do that.However, any punishment can be effective only after the crime has been done and the criminals are brought to justice. As not every criminal can be caught, the effectiveness of this method is limited. Even worse, over punishment violates the law breakers' legitimate right and longer imprisonment raises the burden on the government. Compared with punishing criminals after they hurt people, reducing their opportunities of offense can both reduce the crime rate and avoid the harm. To do so, people should improve their self-protection. For example, if people take care of their belongings when they are in some crowded places, the thieves could not steal anything from them easily and, if burgle alarms are deployed in houses, many people may not lose their wealth when they are out on holidays. Is this way not better than simply punishing criminals with longer imprisonment?

However, as self-protection costs much money and usually increases trouble in life like the security check in almost every public place now, the best way should be to reduce the reasons of crime. To be specific, as many people commit crime because of their ignorance of law,it is necessary to strengthen education efforts to spread the legal knowledge. More importantly, the social security system and the economic development should be promoted so that people especially the poor could get the basic support and then get jobs for living. In this way, they would not have to break the law out of desperation.

To sum up, longer imprisonment has limitations and side effect in reducing the crime rate so I do not think it the best way. Comparatively, improving people's self-protection and reducing the fundamental reasons of crime are better solutions.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

提高公众健康水平需要多方面的努力,所以它不可能仅仅靠增加运动设施数量就能够实现。

Is building more sports facilities the best answer to the improvement of public health? Considering the limitation of this method, I would like to give a negative answer to this question and I think people need to do more.

Improving the public health first needs to improve their defense against illness. Increasing the number of sports facilities makes it easy for people to exercise with special equipment. Doing sports, as we all know, can strengthen people's immune system and protect them from disease. Therefore, it has some effect on improving public health.

However, if people do not like to do sports, they cannot benefit

from the increasing sports facilities no matter how many are built. By contrast, if people know the importance of doing so, they would not need special facilities. For instance, they could find only a piece of land to do jogging, pushing-up, and many other activities. Therefore, education efforts to arouse people's awareness of doing sports and to teach individuals healthy lifestyle are more useful than simply giving them sports hardware. With these lessons provided, people can improve their health not only by voluntarily doing sports with whatever facilities available but also by many other things like having enough rest, taking a balanced diet, and so on. Are these not useful in improving their health?

In my opinion,improving public health needs more than strengthening their own bodies. It also involves giving people a healthy environment to live in. For one thing, pollution should be reduced so that people could have clean and safe air, water, and food. For another, the government should also build enough hospitals and train enough doctors and nurses to protect people from illness. These are also necessary in making people healthier. To sum up, increasing the number of sports facilities has limitation in improving public health so I do not think it the best way and promoting healthy lifestyle and perfecting healthy environment are also necessary.

Nuclear power is the best way to meet people's needs for energy. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

核能是最好的满足人们能源需求的方法。你在多大程度上同意或者不同意?

核能是最好的满足人们能源需求的方法吗?考虑到它的局限性和潜在的危险,我的答案是否定的。

Is nuclear power the best way to meet the growing needs for energy? Considering the limitations and potential danger of it, I would like to give a negative answer.

满足人们的能源需求需要生产处足够人们使用的能源。核能利用放射性元素的反应释放大量的能量,这使得它比起那些产量低微的所谓新能源,如风能,太阳能等,有明显的优势,而且与即将耗尽的石油、煤炭等传统能源相比它可以使用更长的时间。例如,一个反应堆可以驱动一个如小城市大小的航母航行长达十年之久。

To meet people's needs for energy first involves producing enough energy for them to use. Nuclear power releases huge energy with the reaction of radioactive elements. This gives it huge advantages over the so-called 'new energies' like solar power and wind power which only have minimum production. Also, compared with the exhausting traditional oil and coal, it can be used for much longer. For instance, a nuclear reactor can drive an air-craft carrier which is as big as a small city to sail at sea for as long as 10 years.

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