如何在雅思写作中灵活运用正式的书面语
写作不同于口语，应当尽量符合书面语的正式性。随着雅思考生的趋于低龄化（2008年多于半数的考生介于19-22岁之间），很多考生因为学识或者社会阅历等各方面的原因不是很熟悉书面表达的正式风格，这也是造成写作分数偏低的一个主要原因，尤其是造成其它三项高分而写作“偏科”的原因之一。
但这并不意味着写作高分的遥不可及，高分作文是改出来的，所以我们要掌握好从哪几个方面入手把成型于脑中或者已经付诸于纸上的构思改成阅卷人青睐的表达法即可。下面就是具体的几个客观表达的方面：
一避免太多的人化主语
口语中我们很习惯用“某个人做某件事”来构成基本句式，以至于议论文中有的考生依然写的是这样的句子：
More and more young students go abroad because they want to get better education and find a better job in the future. I think that they may have problems in study and also in life.
上例中第一句的主句和状语从句中都是以某个人开始的，第二句中主句和宾语从句也是以人做主语。虽然说这两个句子的WPS（每句中的词汇数）都超过10个，应该说不能算是写的特别初级的简单句，如果句法和词汇没有问题还是很有希望达到6分的。但如果全篇都是这样的句式，整个文章就显得幼稚，类似于记叙文写作，绝对突破不了7分。
其实改法很简单：我们只要避免从“某个人”开始句子就可以了，也就是说用比较客观的就事论事的态度。如：避免“学生出国”，只写“出国”；避免“他
们想要…”，只写“想要…”。这样，上面的句子就可以写成：go abroad to get better education and find a better job in the future,不但很客观，而且把原来的主句和从句两部分精简处理成了一个动词短语。既可以做谓语动词加上原来的一个主语构成句子，也可以用不定式、动名词和分词处理为非谓语动词做主语、宾语或者状语，还可以以从句的形式处理。至于原来第一句中的主语young students可以用介词短语的形式插入不定式或者动名词短语中，而下面的句子里的评价部分的内容提上来做主句的谓语，组成一个新的句式。
另外，第二例句中的“have”，一般情况下主语都是某个人，而在写作中多为“there be”句型所代替，更加客观。所以上面的两个例句就可以合并成一句：
There may be problems in study and also in life for young students to go abroad in order to get better education and find a better job in the future.
这样合并不但客观而且精炼，每个单位句子所表达的内容自然就扩大，词汇密度也相应地增多，自然容易得高分，如果加上个别单词或短语的替换，就可以达到7分。但切记不可机械照搬范文中的长句，从朗阁的学员反馈情况看判为模板的文章最低分数降至4.5.
更进一步说，“have”和“there be”句型都可以简化成更简单的介词“with”结构，如以下所示：
On the table is a box. There is a cover beside it.
这两个小句子是小作文的流程图中经常要用到的具体描写事物的句型，凡是描写具有某种属性或者带有某种外部特征都可以用”with”结构表达，所以上述两句可以合并成：On the table is a box with a cover beside it.
除了一般的“某个人做某件事情”和“…have…”句型，常见的人化主语的句型还有很受考生偏爱的几个情态动词，如can, may, should等。一般建议前两个改成It is likely /possible to do/ that….；后一个改成It is necessary/ imperative/ highly expected/ suggested that sth. be done.的句式，请看下面的例示：
We can go anywhere we like with our bicycle. →
It is possible for us to go anywhere we like with our bicycle.
To curb global warming, our government should promulgate new laws to govern the felling of trees.→
To curb global warming, it is imperative that our government promulgate new laws to govern the felling of trees.
归纳起来说，议论文中我们要积极避免“某个人”做主语，尽量用不定式、动名词或者一个从句做主语，谓语动词用评价性的动词充当，这样就可以由记叙文性质的“过程性句式”顺利转化成更符合议论文文风的客观评价性的句式。
二被动句式的使用
在比较正式的新闻、商务、法律等英语文体中，被动句式因为其更突出客观性的宾语或者事实被广为使用。雅思的图表分析和议论文都是比较正式的文体，所以我们也应该注意多用被动句式。尤其是在以下两个方面：
1.主语不确定
Someone murdered the millionaire last night.→
The millionaire was murdered last night.
2. 主语是泛指很多人或者大部分人
To improve the air quality, we should reduce the use of private cars. →
To improve the air quality, the use of private cars should be reduced.
Most people think that we can get a large share of benefit in the sales campaign.→
It is widely believed that we can get a large share of benefit in the sales campaign.
被动句的用法不仅体现在主句中，在从句、非谓语动词短语中都有可能用到，如：
It is important for nations all over the world to join hands to control the software piracy. →
It is important for nations all over the world to join hands to have the software piracy controlled.
I don’t expect that she returned. →She is not expected to have returned.
I am not sure whether the college graduates will find jobs in the financially difficult year. →
I am not sure whether the college graduates will get employed in the financially difficult year.
但是因为汉语中本来是没有被动句式的，所以受汉化思维的影响很多考生不会想到这一点。这就要求我们对此要引起足够的重视，并且在平时多加练习以培养对其敏感度。
三名词化
写作中把原本用动词或者形容词表达的地方换成名词叫做名词化（nominalization）。名词化是为了避免太多动词造成的句法处理上的困难，同时也可以把某些陈述型的句式转化成更客观的评价句，更符合议论文的文体要求。如：
Our monitor didn’t come today. He has got a flu.
很明显这两个小句可以用因果关系的信号词连成一句：Because our monitor has a flu, he didn’t come today.，但这个because引导的原因状语从句以及其它的状语从句是考生们很常用的复合句，虽然看似比较复杂，其实仍然是某个人做主语。如果非谓语动词掌握得好，可能我们会想到用Having a flu, our monitor didn’t come today.如果我们把前后两部分分别用一个概括性的名词来替代，中间加上我们熟悉的表示因果关系的动词，这个句子就非常符合议论文的风格：The flu caused the absence of our monitor today.或者The absence of our monitor is because of his illness.至少我们可以尽量将其中的一个小句变成名词，减少某个人做主语的口语化句式的出现频率。
虽然这种表达方法更为客观，句式上更加简洁，但是用比较抽象的概括性词汇来写句子对于越来越趋于低龄化的考生来说的确是个挑战。但是有一些单词是我们在写作中几乎必须要用到的，平时要备好以下几个常见的名词化：lack
of(if there is no…), ignorance of (don’t know …), illiteracy in(can’t read…/ can’t use…), failure (didn’t do…)等。而且在具体的使用过程中可以结合介词with使用，使得句法更加凝练。此外个别单词也可以利用题目中的动词的名词性后缀如：-tion，-ment, -isation, -ness, -ity等或者变成动名词形式-ing。如：
More younger generations celebrate the western festivals→the celebration of the western festivals by more younger generations
四个别表达
如more and more/ a lot等口语化的短语尽量避免，可以用increasing（ly），a large number of…/a great deal of…./swarms of…等代替。此外缩略形式也是正式的写作中要避免的。
雅思作文高分套路 一、首段就能定7分？ “良好的开端是成功的一半”，有个良好的雅思写作开头段也是相同的道理，写好了开头段离雅思写作高分也就更近一步了。那么我们该如何写好开头段?下面给出几个写好雅思作文开头的几个简单方法，各位烤鸭们可以参考参考~教大家如何做到在第一段给出清晰的个人观点！ 很多国内的考生受到写中文作文或者传统英语教学的影响，写一篇文章的开头段时总是想要尽力抓住考官的眼球，不停地摆弄自己还不成熟的词汇和句型，结果非但没有得到想要的分数，反被考官倒打一耙。那么我们要如何在最短的时间内，以最简单以及最能得分的方式写出好的作文开头段呢? 其实我们可以把雅思写作题目中的提问方式分成四个大类：观点类（opinion essay）、讨论类（discussion essay）、优劣势类（advantage and disadvantage essay）和报告类（report）。每一种提问方式的题目都有自己不同的开头段写作方法。 01 Opinion Essay 观察观点类题目的特征，我们不难发现，此类题型的特征是题目有且只有一个观点。而题目要求我们回答的是"同意" 或"不同意" 的观点。所以只要确定好自己的观点，开头段就可以写出来。 例如：Some people believe that living in big cities is bad for health. Do you agree or disagree? 如果，我们选择同意此观点，可以根据"背景句+直接转述题目+个人观点" 的公式。 These days, it is quite common to see that a growing number of people choose to settle down in large cities. （背景句）But some people argue that leading an urban life would produce negative influences on people’s health. （直接转述题目）Personally, I agree with this idea. （个人观点）
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雅思大作文开头段模板 第一大模板法：①引题+ ②一方观点+另一方观点+ ③我方观点 ①引题：九大引题方法 一：①在谈到……时，人们对于这个充满争议的话题所持的观点各不相同。 ①When talking about （/it comes to /it refers to) _____, people’s opinions are divergent on such a controversial 有争议的issue. 有分歧的 二：①最近经常辩论的一个问题是…… ①A much debated issue these days is whether …… ①There is a public (/general) debate (/discussion/ controversy) today (/nowadays) on (/about/ over/ as to) the problem (/issue) of …… 三：①最近……的问题已经引起了人们广泛的争议。 ①Recently the problem（/issue）of _____ + has drawn(/aroused) public (/worldwide) attention. + has caused(/aroused) wide (/general/ considerable/ international) concern. + has arisen(/loomed up/ cropped up) as controversial(/as noteworthy/ more distinctly for settlement). 四：①近来……的问题已经广为天下人所知。 ①Recently the issue(/problem) of ……has been in the limelight (/brought into focus/ brought to public attention/ posed among the general public). 在公众的注意之下 五：①在过去的……年里，很多城市面临了……的严重问题。 ①In recent(/ the past ……) years, many cities (/nations/ people) have been faced with (/plagued with/ troubled with/ experienced/ witnessed/ undergone) the(/a/an) serious problem of(/acute shortage of/ alarming increase in) …… 六：①如今我们国家面临的最为紧迫的任务之一是…… ①One of the burning(/pressing/interesting) problems facing (/confronting/ troubling) our nation (/society/ world/ community) today is that …… 七：①现在很多人谈论的最热门的话题之一是…… ①One of the biggest issues（/ hottest topics/ most popular things/ most serious problems）many people talk (/complain) about now is …… 八：①随着…… ①With the rapid(/marked/ amazing) development(/increase/improvement/expansion/growth/ decline) of __, ①With the general(/growing/ common) recognition (/realization/ acknowledgment) of _____, ①With the general (/growing/ common) commitment (/devotion/ dedication) to_____, ①With the general(/growing/ common) interest in(/concern over/ enthusiasm for)_____, ①With _____ playing an increasingly big role in _____, a growing number of _____. ①With _____ attaching much importance to _____, an increasing number of _____. 九：①如今有一种……趋势。 ①Nowadays(Currently/ Recently), there is a growing (/ unhealthy) tendency to (/in/ that) …… ②一方观点+ 另一方观点：两大表述方法 一：②一些人认为……，另一些人认为……。
雅思小作文开头段应该如何写 在雅思写作的小作文部分里，往往我们可以采纳“老三段”式的写法，以不变应万变，不论是线图，柱图，表格，饼图，亦或是流程图，我们都可以采用此种方式完成雅思小作文的写作。 那么老三段式的经典写法中，强调着第一段“开门见山”介绍出本文讨论内容，即改写题目。将必要内容进行改写，这样可以获得高分效应。 第二段“丰实的内容”尽量多地将图表中的信息表达明确，不时的需要我们之前总结的常用表达(敬请参见前几篇文章关于雅思作文经典表达介绍文章)。第三段也就是文章的最后一段，对全文进行一个总结概括即可。 本文将着眼于介绍雅思作文开头段的常用高频高分表达，希望对同学们准备雅思有所帮助。也请同学们积极准备! 五分表达： The chart depicts (that)…该图呈现出… The chart shows (that)… The figures/statistics show (that)… The diagram reveals … The chart illustrates (that)… 六分表达： The graph provides some interesting data regarding…该图为我们提供了有关…有趣数据。 The graph describes the trend of …这个图描述了…的趋势 As is shown/demonstrated/exhibited in the chart/diagram/chart/table…如图所示… According to the chart …根据这些表格… As is shown in the table…如图所示… This table shows the changing proportion of A and B from …to …该表格描述了…年到…年之间A与B的比例关系。 This graph,presented in the chart,shows the general trend in…该图呈现了…总的趋势。
雅思作文常见开头结尾形式 注：如下方式，雅思写作针对性强，且略带模板印迹，同学应在充分理解结构的基础上，用上面的方法去灵活写作 雅思大作文第一段一定要包括这样三个基本要素：“背景句”，“话题”和“观点”。这三个部分是完整统一的，一定不能忽略。 第一，背景句：背景句主要起到引题的作用，但要紧密联系题目中的话题。其方法是围绕题干中的关键词或核心词展开。 背景句的写作方法： 1 联系社会背景：任何一个话题肯定都于一定的社会发展息息相关，所以联系关键词的社会背景是一种最简单、最常用的方法。具体可以有以下5种句式： 1) The 21st century witnesses --- 2) With the development of science and technology,--- 3) In modern society, --- 4) It is quite common these days that --- 5) Recently,--- 例如：There are social, medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. Do you agree that the problems outweigh the benefits of mobile phones? 参考背景句： The late 20th century witnessed the boom of science and technology, which gave rise to a series of technological innovations, including the mobile phone. 或with the development of science and technology, the mobile phone is more and more available to and popular with common people. 2 重述话题：有的时候题干里是有一个背景介绍的，这时候我们只需将题目所给话题重新复述一遍即可。但切忌原样照搬照抄，不过可以将原文中的词汇和句式进行同义转换。转换句型可以有以下三种． 1) it is generally believed that --- 2) it is said that--- 3) it is reported that--- 例如：Nowadays, people are facing more and more work-related stress. State the possible reasons for this phenomenon and make some recommendations about how to combat it. 参考背景句： It is generally believed that individuals are confronted with psychological and physical stress coming from work. 3解释中心词: 即将中心词进行解释或展开说明。此种方法一般适合容易下定义的词比如图书馆。可以有以下三个句型： 1)It is known to all that --- 2)As is known to all, --- 3)--- is known as--- 例如：The main purpose of public libraries is to provide books and they should not waste their
雅思大作文开篇如何让人眼前一亮 雅思写作除了词汇量要达到以外，还有很多提分点的哦。出guo 为雅思栏目大家带来雅思大作文开篇如何让人眼前一亮，希望对大家备考雅思有所帮助! 正所谓好的开始是成功的一半，雅思大作文的写作也一次次验证了这个道理。很多同学往往不重视雅思大作文开头段的写作，只是简单套用一些现成的模板，殊不知这样已经给考官留下“背诵模板”的印象，这样一来，不仅给后面的主体段带来了巨大压力，而且人的第一印象往往是很难改变的。大作文开头段往往要包含如下几个关键内容，即，介绍背景，引出有争议的话题，阐述对立观点和陈述作者自己的观点。无论使用还是不使用模板，这几个关键信息是一定要包含在开头段落当中的，不然云里雾里，只能是适得其反。 根据这些信息，备战过的考生们一定都熟悉下面这一套开头写作流程，首先It is quite mon these days...介绍背景，或者用The issue of ... is a plex and sensitive one.这样的句型来引出有争议话题，然后千篇一律地分别介绍对立双方观点，如Some individuals believe that..., while others hold the view that...最终用Personally, I agree with...至此，内容上完美无
瑕，但恐怕考官心中已经大大打下“模板”两个字的烙印，这无疑对于想取得6分及以上的同学最不利的事情。 例如，一道雅思写作高频题目，讨论到底大学应该教授实用性课程(如计算机和商科课程)还是传统课程(如历史和地理)。我们依然按照开头段应该包含的关键信息开始写作，但是却可以这样轻松突破：These day there is a growing tendency for college students to have difficulties in finding jobs when they graduate.(介绍背景)A large number of people hold the opinion that lack of practical knowledge, among other things, contributes to this situation. In light of this, they contend that college teachers should lay more stress on practical courses than on traditional ones. (引出有争议的话题，并阐述大多数人的观点)For my part, I am in favour of their viewpoint.(作者观点)这一段写得非常灵巧，第一句结合题目背景，介绍现如今有一种趋势，即大学毕业生很难找到工作，紧接着作者陈述有许多人认为这是由于学生缺少实用性的知识，并因此提出大学应该更多关注于教授实用性的知识，这一句将有争议话题的其中一方观点用因果链条清晰阐述。最后一句表达作者自己的立场，就是支持前面大多数人的想法。总的来看，这一段只提及了对立双方的其中一方观点，然后表达自己支持这一方观点。这就是一种对于开头段模板的超越，简单可行，只对其中一方观点清晰论
雅思写作干货：原来雅思考官喜爱这样的开头段 新东方在线致赢雅思涂秋玲在雅思考试中，雅思写作对于不太擅长逻辑架构的大陆考生来说是取得高分的一大门槛，与雅思考试中的其他几项相比较，写作往往是得分最低的一项。究竟怎样才能写出高分作文，雅思考官会喜欢什么样的开头段?下边我们就跟随新东方在线致赢雅思的涂秋玲老师一起来看看开头段的写作技巧。 写作要考察我们的能力比较多，这其中包括文章是否扣题，整体逻辑，词汇运用能力以及语法准确度等，想要在一个小时内完成两篇高质量的文章，取得高分着实不易。怎么才能最快速有效地提升自己的写作分数呢? 除了多积累好的词汇和句型，多看范文这项工作也是必不可少的。写作是输出型考试，输出的文字质量是高是低，与我们平时输入多少好的词、好的句子密切相关。所以在这里也特别提醒大家，不要一味地埋头苦写，从不看范文，从不背好的句子。一味埋头苦写无异于只是把自己4分、5分的作文水平练的更加纯熟，练成了钢琴十级跆拳道黑带而已，一定要多读范文，多背好的句子，这样才
能真正提高写作水平。俗话说“熟读唐诗三百首，不会作诗也会吟”，范文的力量，可见一斑。 我们先来看一道机经真题：? Some people think that government should establish free libraries in each town. While others believe that it is a waste of money since people can obtain information from the Internet at home. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 拿到这个题目，很多同学写开头都陷入了一种典型的模板化形式，笔下的开头是这样的： Nowadays, the human society is progressing rapidly on various fronts. Yet at the same time, whether government should establish free libraries in each town has sparked much debate. Some people think government should establish free libraries in each town, while others believe that it is a waste of money since people can obtain information from the Internet at home. Personally, I am in favor of the former view. 不知道有没有同学“躺枪”，写这种开头的同学，分数绝对不可能高于5.5，整个开头几乎可以说是在“自杀”，除了套模板，就是照搬原题，考官拿到这种开头是绝对不会有好印象的。那真正好的开头是什么样子的呢?我们以剑8的
开头常用模板 第一类：引出一个争议 1．The issue of … is of great interest to many people. 2．The topic of … is of great concern for many parents. 3．The subject of … is of great importance to many scientists. 4．The discussion about … is of great significance to both industrialized an d underdeveloped nations. 5．The question of … is a matter of much contention among the general public. 6．The problem … has been widely debated in the world of politics. 7．The inquiry into … has triggered an intense controversy in the realm of science. 第二类：驳斥对方观点 1.Although it is commonly believed that…, this is actually not the case. 2.Although it is widely accepted that…, this is simply untrue in our day-to-day experiences. 3.Although it is generally acknowledged that…, this can hardly be held true in many real-life situations. 4.Although conventional wisdom has it that…, the reality of the situation is often far more complicated than that. 5.Although the received opinion is that…, the harsh realities usually turn out to be a completely different picture. 6.Although many pe ople subscribe to the belief that…, this is in fact a common misconception that we need to clear up. 7.Although most individuals are convinced that… this is actually a myth that must be exploded. 第三类：引出一种现象 1．In recent years, there has been a growing trend th at… 2．In recent years, there has been an interesting tendency that/ of… 3．In recent years, there has been a common practice of… 4．In recent years, there has been a widespread belief /phenomenon that… 5．In recent decades, there has been a popular belief that… 6．Recen t decades have seen an increased awareness of… 7．Recent decades have witnessed a major transformation in… 第四类：摆出两种观点 1．While some people think that…, others believe that… 2．While some people say that…, others feel that… 3．While some people claim that…, others argue that… 4．Whereas some people assert that…, others declare that… 5．Some people hold that…, whereas others insist that… 6．Whereas some people maintain that…, others may disagree and contend that…7．Some people hold the opinion that…, whereas others who are not so convinced
雅思大作文开头段巧思 万事开头难，很多考生在刚开始动笔写雅思大作文时就陷入无话可说的状态，大多情况下可能会胡乱写作，甚至抄题，这对于雅思写作是非常大的忌讳，导致多如繁星的语法问题、字数被扣以及文思枯竭的印象。因此，快速写出合格甚至高分的开头段落刻不容缓。以下专家将为考生们总结一下大作文开头段写作的两大要素，供考生们参考。 要素一：现象句 雅思写作考题中会出现一个社会现象，考生的任务就是在自己文章的第一句话将之改写，重述这个社会现象。 E.g.1 Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? It is true that in almost every country today each household and family produces a large amount of waste every week. 套句+同义词替换：more and more= a large amount of E.g.2 Some people believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six or seven years old.Others believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible. What do you think are the advantages of attending school from a young age? In many places today, children start primary school at around the age of six or seven. 主被动之间的转换：should be allowed to stay at home = start their primary school 同义词的替换：until they are six or seven years old = at the age of six or seven E.g.3 In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people to do this. It is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have a break from studying
雅思大作文开头段高分模板 雅思写作要多积累多写，不要一味的依靠模板，对模版和资料灵活运用。出guo雅思栏目为大家带来“雅思大作文开头段高分模板”，希望大家能有所收获! 正所谓好的开始是成功的一半，雅思大作文的写作也一次次验证了这个道理。很多同学往往不重视雅思大作文开头段的写作，只是简单套用一些现成的模板，殊不知这样已经给考官留下“背诵模板”的印象，这样一来，不仅给后面的主体段带来了巨大压力，而且人的第一印象往往是很难改变的。今天，我就和大家分享一点儿我在雅思VIP课堂上讲授的怎样巧妙突破雅思大作文开头段写作模板的实用技巧，力争让雅思考官眼前一亮。 大作文开头段往往要包含如下几个关键内容，即，介绍背景，引出有争议的话题，阐述对立观点和陈述作者自己的观点。无论使用还是不使用模板，这几个关键信息是一定要包含在开头段落当中的，不然云里雾里，只能是适得其反。 根据这些信息，备战过的小烤鸭们一定都熟悉下面这一套开头写作流程，首先It is quite mon these days.。。介绍背景，或者用The issue of ... is a plex and sensitive one。这样的句型来引出有争议话题，然后千篇一律地分别介绍对立双方观点，如
Some individuals believe that..., while others hold the view that.。。最终用Personally, I agree with.。。至此，内 容上完美无瑕，但恐怕考官心中已经大大打下“模板”两个字的烙印，这无疑对于想取得6分及以上的同学最不利的事情。 有很多独属于学生自己的、超越市面上普通模板的大作文开头段，现在，我们仅以两份雅思范文为例，抛砖引玉，为大家讲解到底应该怎样突破大作文开头段模板。 例如，一道雅思写作高频题目，讨论到底大学应该教授实用性课程(如计算机和商科课程)还是传统课程(如历史和地理)。我们依然按照开头段应该包含的关键信息开始写作，但是却可以这样轻松突破：These day there is a growing tendency for college students to have difficulties in finding jobs when they graduate。(介绍背景)A large number of people hold the opinion that lack of practical knowledge, among other things, contributes to this situation. In light of this, they contend that college teachers should lay more stress on practical courses than on traditional ones. (引出有争议的话题，并阐述大多数人的观点)For my part, I am in favour of their viewpoint。(作者观点)这一段写得非常灵巧，第一句结合题目背景，介绍现如今有一种趋势，即大学毕业生很难找到工作，紧
雅思大作文万能开头 一提到雅思写作模板，有人想到的是一大篇完整的文章，其中有少许空缺，用来填上某个特定话题的特定内容，一篇及格的雅思文章即出炉，其实这是对模板的误解。 最有效且值得初学者模仿的内容，是句子！接下来为大家分享20种经典的雅思大作文开头句模板。 1、According to the first graph, it can be seen that ______________, it can also be concluded from it that ______________. 2、There is an interesting and instructive picture which goes like this: ______________. 3、Nowadays there is a growing concern over ______________. Many people like ______________, while others are inclined to ______________. 4、Nowadays, it is common to ______________. Many people like ______________ because ______________. Besides, ______________. 5、 ______________, just like many other things, are preferred by ______________. While being attacked by the idea that ______________, some people consider ______________. They point that ______________. 6、Everything has two sides and ______________ is not an exception, it has both advantages and disadvantages. 7、For years ______________ had been viewed as ______________. But people are taking a fresh look at it now. 8、It has stipulated by the government that ______________. To this stipulation, many people respond actively because ______________. 9、______________ is a common occurrence in our daily life. Whatever we do, ______________ can't be avoided. 10、______________ has become a hot topic among people, especially among the young, and heated debates are right on their way. 11、Recently, ______________ has become the focus of the society, and in this way.. People swarm to ______________.
雅思写作开头如何写 这样写雅思写作开头，7分离你不远，下面小编就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。 这样写雅思写作开头，7分离你不远 雅思写作题目中的观点类，我们通常以认可或者不认可来进行作答。并且这类题型中的观点也只有一个，考生也无需担心选错哪一个。考官在乎的是论证的过程，就是考生是否有足够的例子证明自己观点的对错。小站君认为开头应该遵循第一句是题目中的背景。第二句是对观点进行选择，一般同意的话可以进行转述题目，不同意的话可以用让步状语从句改写，例如although，if等。第三句是说明自己的观点。我们从下面的例子进行分析一下。 例子：Some people believe that living in big cities is bad for health. Do you agree or disagree? 按照上述的方法，我们选择同意的话，就第一句就是背景句“These days, it is quite common to see that a growing number of people choose to settle down in large cities.”第二句则是对观点进行同意，那么可以写成“ But some people argue that leading an urban life would produce negative influences on people’s health. ”最后一句就是表述自己的观点 “ Personally, I agree with this idea. (个人观点)”。考生若想要一个引人关注的开头，最重要的就是对背景和题目的改写，切记不要直接照抄题目。 雅思写作题目第二种就是讨论类，通常这种的重点就是探讨两方的观点，然后表明自己的观点。这种题目的开头只需要写出讨论话题的背景以及用用自己的话陈述双方的观点。对于个人的观点，无需放在开头。考生若要出彩的开头，还是需要落脚在改写上面，可以通过一些模板的套用，和语句的转化进行改写，侧重点就是双方的观点是什么。 雅思写作题目第三种就是优劣势类，通常是题目会给出一个背景或者趋势，让考生进行比较分析优劣之别。往往考生认为此类题目需要陈述背景，其实是不
大作文的开头 大作文的类型： ?单边支持/反对?探讨双方 ?陈述利弊?半支持半反对 ?分析解决?多重选择 构成：引言段 + 主体段 + 结论段 一、引言段 组成：开头句（Opening sentence）+ 中心论点步 骤：引入话题，同义转述，再根据写作任务表达中心 论点 I、Opening sentence 五种方法: （一）、引人入胜思路：用一个比较有趣的话题先吊起考官的 胃口，并吸引他们往下看 题目 1：Many schools demand the students to wear uniforms. Some people think that such a practice can undermine their personality and individuality. 范文： The issue of whether the practice of requiring students to wear school uniforms will affect their personality and individuality is of great interest to many people. 备选： Be of great concern for many parents …引起父母的关注 Be of great importance to many scientists …对科学家来说至关重要 Be of great significance to both A and B …对于 A 和 B 都是非常重要的
题目 2.：人类如何定义和追求幸福，这样的问题引起公众广泛的 争议。范文： The question of how human beings can define and pursue happiness is a matter of much contention among the general public. 备选： The question of _____________ has been widely debate in the world of politics. （二）、力排众议思路：先驳斥大众的某个普遍但却错误的观念，指出其与现实不符，然后提出自己的想法或正确想法，并在主体段列举各种理由、证据以及活生生和例子来论证。 套路：Although it is + 副词 + 过去分词+ that ….，this is ….... 题目1：The older generations have very traditional ideas about the correct ways of life, thinking and behavior. However, some people think that these ideas are not helpful for the young generations to prepare for modern life. 范文 1： Although it is commonly believed that conventional views about a healthy lifestyle and proper conduct are no longer to young people’s needs today, this is actually not the case. 题目 2：越来越少人照看年老的亲属，而是把他们送到专业人士那边去。 范文2：Although many people subscribe to the belief that their old relatives can be taken better care of in a nursing home, this is in fact a common misconception that we need to clear up. From my point of view, it is the younger family members who should really be responsible for looking after these old people during the rest of their lives. 释义：①普遍认为…，但事实并 非如下。 Although it is commonly believed that …, this is actually not the case. ②许多人认同这样的观点…，但事实上这却是一种我们需要去澄清的普遍错