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符号的解释:

“---------”代表可以替换为另一种说法

大作文

1、先审题

(1)审direction:

①有没有题目,题目在direction里,没有题目不写题目,好像只有02年的没有题目。有题目的不要跑题。另外,图画下的文字为图解,不是题目。

②规定的要点有哪些?描述----解释------评论、建议

(2)审图画和文字

①图画的数量(涉及到写作文的时候的单复数形式)

②图画的种类:是cartoon、photo、picture等,图画的表示方法还有photograph、image、illustration,还可以用it来表示。

(3)在图画及文字中找到对立的两个点(即文章所要评论的点),不用刻意描写细节,同样不能跑题,如2010年的火锅问题只需大体表述图画的内容,具体细节无需再写。另外,超纲词不要写。

(4)文章所表达的是正面的还是反面的问题,正面的有01、02、03、08、10年的考研题,反面的有04、05、06、07、09年的。

2、下笔:

总构思:第一段描述图画

第二段解释含义(即普遍性+举例子)可正说说,再反说说。正说说的说法有:only with...,can we...

反说说的说法有:we can hardly...without ...

第三段写严重性或重要性,再写举措措施等,适当的时候可以展望一下未来。

3、具体写法

第一段:No other things could capture our attention and imagination like this picture. Indeed, whoever in front of it may be very much enlightened. What can be clearly seen from it is that 描写图画,必须为完整的句子。How instructive it is! Farfetched as it appears,the illustrator undoubtedly intends far deeper meaning.

举一反三:No other things---------few things

Could-------can

attention and imagination------..ion and ..ion可以去掉其中一个\interesting and instructive\impressive\instructive

this picture----- the above picture\the picture above

Indeed,whoever in front of it may be very much enlightened------It is so fascinating and illuminating that anyone in front of it cannot help thinking deeply.

Thinking deeply----being fascinated(impressed\attracted\ enlighted ) What can be clearly seen from it is that 描写图画,必须为完整的句子。-------------------- what is subtly(vividly\apparently) featured in it is that 描

写图画,必须为完整的句子。②Illutrated in it is that描写图画,必须为完整的句子③what can be clearly seen from the cartoon above is不是句子,而是名词\名词词组+who\which....

第二段:本段中的首句或者首段的尾句,可以用“设问句”形式,如What on earth does it actually intend to mirror?

on earth ----on the world mirror-------reflect\present

第二段要包含的内容主要有:1、引出图画要表达的含义的句子;2、图画要表达的意思;3、介绍这种现象的普遍性;4、举例

That the above image does carry fairly significant intended meanings goes far beyond any reasonable dispute. Indeed, it is indicative of a pretty familiar scene in nowadays society—图画要表达的意思。Nowhere in history has the issue of 切题been concerned so much as in our society today.Looking around, we can find similar events too numerous to list. A persuasive example goes to one of my acquaintances, who 举例子,补充细节。

A persuasive example-----a telling example\a telling illustration\a case in point

who举例子,补充细节...-------an acquaintance of mine\a former colleague of mine\one of my former colleagues.

其他介绍普遍性的句子还有:it should be noted that such a scene is fairly familiar to us all, occurring all too often in nearly all walks of life. 可以虚构一些统计的数据,如:

①A survey conducted by China Youth Daily at the end of last year reveals that 越来越多的人。。。。。。

越来越多的人-------a growing percentage of the population\an increasing number of people

第三段:介绍严重性、重要性以及举措

*本段可能用的句型

(1)直接引语或间接引语

①“某位名人说的话”,notes Dr.名人的名字,同位语。

②As a song puts it," "

③As a proverb puts it," "

(2)虚拟语气和被动语气

(3)通用句型,可用于最后一段的段首

①Much can be done.

②What is needed is a package deal

③There has to be joint efforts of the whole society.

④As long as the whole society make substantial efforts, our society will surely be better.

⑤However much importance we attach to such a phenomenon, it is, of course, far from being enough.

⑥The general public, fortunately, have been made aware that 从句

第三段范文:

What to do ? "Effective and efficient measures should be encouraged to curb(或者promote)切题的句子。,says Dr.Mi min, 同位语.There has to be joint efforts of the whole society.What tops the agenda is to enhance people's awareness of the severity(或者significance) of such a phenomenon. The government,mass media and schools of all levels should serve as a counterbalance(或者driving force) to this tide, communicating their positive messages to the public.Meanwhile, each of us should make substantial efforts to take plunge into the campaign to curb(或者promote) .

最后结尾可以展望一下未来:

I am confident that \ I'm strongly believed that \There are reasons to be optimistic .

基础-- 核心句写作

重要性说明:核心句写作是考研小作文和大作文的核心部分,也是临场发挥成分最大的部分,所以一定要花时间好好练习。

A.小作文一般是应用文,包括各种书信(道歉,投诉,咨询,申请,辞职,感谢,安慰,推荐),通知和工作备忘录。不过考的是上述的哪一种,写作的重点都是

要把事由用一句话写清楚,这句话就是我们现在要训练的核心句写作。

B.大作文近几年考的都是看图说话,所以2006靠的很可能也是图画文章。这就要求我们文章第一段学会用一句话描述清楚图画的内容,这句话也就是我们现在

要训练的核心句写作。

C.即便大作文不考图画作文,也一定是议论文。者也要求我们在第一段能用一句话就说清楚要评论的事物或现象,这句话也是我们现在要训练的核心句写作。

____________, 主语,_____________, 谓语(及物动词后加宾语),_________. 具体步骤

步骤1:看清图画的主要含义,并因此确定S + V .(或者S + Vt + n)迅速写出句子。每幅图一句。

(此步重点:确定主语,也就是抓住图画中最主要的事物是关键,一般这一事物居于图画正中间)

例如

A lamp is flickering.

步骤2.围绕图片主语列出所有的细节并添加到句子当中,包括:

1.找出可以修饰主语的形容词(单个的放在主语前边)A small oil lamp is flickering.

2.找出主语的同位语后加定语从句(主语后)A small oil lamp , the only object that gives off light , is flickering.

3.找出可以修饰主语的介词短语(主语后边)A small oil lamp , the only object that gives off light in the picture, is flickering.

4.找出主语发出的其它动作,做成伴随状语,放在主语前做导入Standing lonely but full of confidence, a small oil lamp , the only object that gives off light in the picture, is flickering.

步骤3 围绕谓语展开细节并添加到句子当中,包括:

1.找出可修饰动作的副词,放在谓语后Standing lonely but full of confidence, a small oil lamp , the only object that gives off light in the picture, is flickering quietly.

2.看看动作发生的时间和地点可不可以用介词短语来做,放谓语及副词的后边,地点在前,时间在后Standing lonely but full of confidence, a small oil lamp , the only object that gives off light in the picture, is flickering quietly in the darkness all the time.

3.看看句子谓语动作造成什么结果或意义没有,如果有,做成后置的伴随状语Standing lonely but full of confidence , a small oil lamp , the only object that gives off light in the picture, is flickering quietly in the darkness all the time,bringing brightness to everything around it.

4.如果谓语动作没有造成什么结果或意义,看看有没有其它的主谓结构可以做成独立主或伴随状语,来把谓语动作细节化。

步骤4 如果谓语后有宾语,再按主语扩展模式略作处理(加前后定语,尽量短)

最终版本:Standing lonely but full of confidence , a small oil lamp , the only object that gives off light in the picture, is flickering quietly in the darkness all the time,bringing brightness to everything around it. (37字)

大家再看一个例子,进一步熟悉一下以上四个步骤

中外文化的融合图片描述

1.An American girl appears pleasant.

2. A beautiful young American girl appears pleasant.

3. A beautiful young American girl, an international student, appears pleasant.

4. A beautiful young American girl, an international student who is dressed in traditional

Chinese costume, appears pleasant.

5.Standing under a tree, a beautiful young American girl, an international student who is dressed

in traditional Chinese costume, appears pleasant.

6.Standing under a tree, a beautiful young American girl, an international student who is dressed

in traditional Chinese costume, appears obviously pleasant.

总结:通过以上四个步骤,从定主谓入手,通过添加细节,迅速制造出一个30-40字左右的好句子作为大作文开头。

在小作文当中,也是利用同样的方法,迅速的说明事由,细节的添加主要以回答下列几个问题为主:谁(who)在什么时候(when)在什么地方(where)出于何种原因(why)通过何种方式(how)作了什么事情(what)

例如:投诉信:---对两条狗进行投诉

1.These dogs were abandoned and have been causing trouble.

2.These vicious dogs were abandoned and have been causing trouble.

3.These vicious dogs, two German shepherds which were bought, were abandoned and

have been causing trouble.

4.These vicious dogs, two German shepherds which were bought by my neighbor three

weeks ago, were abandoned and have been causing trouble.

https://www.doczj.com/doc/3017869377.html,st week, these vicious dogs, two German shepherds which were bought by my

neighbor three weeks ago, were abandoned and have been causing trouble.

https://www.doczj.com/doc/3017869377.html,st week, these vicious dogs, two German shepherds which were bought by my

neighbor three weeks ago, were abandoned and have been causing trouble in our neighborhood ever since.

https://www.doczj.com/doc/3017869377.html,st week, these vicious dogs, two German shepherds which were bought by my

neighbor three weeks ago, were abandoned and have been causing trouble in our neighborhood ever since, barking day and night, leaving waste everywhere, and even attacking both residents and passers-by. (44字)

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