2019年雅思写作小作文流程图解析及范文：废纸回收 The chart below shows the process of waste paper recycling. 范文： The flow chart shows how waste paper is recycled. It is clear that there are six distinct stages in this process, from the initial collection of waste paper to the eventual production of usable paper. At the first stage in the paper recycling process, waste paper is collected either from paper banks, where members of the public leave their used paper, or directly from businesses. This paper is then sorted by hand and separated according to its grade, with any paper that is not suitable for recycling being removed. Next, the graded paper is transported to a paper mill. Stages four and five of the process both involve cleaning. The paper is cleaned and pulped, and foreign objects such as staples are taken out. Following this, all remnants of ink and glue are removed from the paper at the de-inking stage. Finally, the pulp can be processed in a paper making machine, which makes the end product： usable paper. (160 words, band 9)
●批改By Will 本次批改严格按照ILETS小作文评分标准进行。ILETS小作文评分项：TA (内容的完整性), CC (连贯性及一致性), GRA (语法范围及精准度), LR (词汇资源)。文末会进行总评及打分。 ●文中标识： 用词不当逻辑错误语法错误修改添加 The graph provides the information concerning the average temperatures on a month basis in three major cities.(介于有两张图，都要提一下。此后可加一句：In addition, clearly demonstrated in the table are the time of sunshine on an annual base.) (补充：在下一段看到了你对于后一张图的总结，这样的话建议你在开头强调一下“the first graph”) As can be seen from the graph, there is a similar trend in terms of average monthly temperature between London and New York during the period from January to December. (可加入连接词：To be specific) The average temperature in London (介于你后面写的是两个城市的数据，这里改为：for both of the cities) gradually rises from January to July both in London and new york, reaching a peak at 25 degrees and 20 degrees respectively. After that, the following 4 months witness a dramatic decrease both in London and new york. In comparison (这里不妨分段), an opposite trend is found in Sydney. It (这是悉尼的第一句，建议写出来具体的量词至少：The temperature) keeps stable at 25 degrees from January to march, after which the average temperature undergoes a considerable descent, reaching the bottom point at approximately 15 degrees, before there is (there is 没必要了，可以去除) a steady ascent by 10 degrees. It is obvious that the table depicts the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities. As we can see from the statistics, when it comes to the total annual hours of sunshine, new york ranks first, followed by Sydney ,London lies last. Specifically, people who live in new york enjoy 2,353 hours of sunshine every year, which is similar to people living in London with 2,473 hours (不是人和人像，是时间长短像，改为：which is similar to the amount of sunshine for those in London). However, only 1,180 hours of sunshine are found in London annually. 总评6.5（TA6.5 CC6.5 LR6.5 GRA7.0） 1.语法变化上从句数量可以了，分词的使用还可以多一些。偶尔试试一到两句倒装，如我在开头给你的那个。 2.趋势等词汇变化可以，试着多换换题目话题词汇，如people=residents=citizens
常见雅思小作文句式整理 今天小编为大家带来的是关于雅思小作文句式的内容，供大家参考，希望可以帮助到大家。 雅思小作文句式1、趋势类词汇 上升动词类: increase, go up, rise up, grow up, jump up, surge, shoot up, keep an upward tendency 下降动词类: decrease, go down, decline, fall down, drop, sink, dip, keep a downward tendency 波动动词类: fluctuate 持平动词类: remain the same, stabilize, remain stable, remain constant 修饰动词的副词: slightly 轻微地, slowly 缓慢地, gradually 逐渐地, steadily 稳定地, rapidly 迅速地, moderately 温和地, 轻微地, significantly 明显地, sharply 明显地, dramatically急剧地, drastically 急剧地 上升名词类: increase, rise, growth, jump, surge 下降名词类: decrease, decline, fall, reduction, drop 波动名词类: fluctuation 修饰名词的形容词: slight, slow, gradual, steady, rapid, moderate, significant, sharp, dramatic, drastic 雅思小作文句式2、极值类词汇和表达 最高点: reach the peak/top/highest point Increase to the peak/top/highest point(所有上升类的动词都可以替换掉increase) 最低点: reach the bottom/lowest point drop to the bottom/lowest point(所有下降类的动词都可以替换掉drop) 占的最多: occupy/make up/take up/account for the largest proportion/number/percentage of … 占的最少: occupy/make up/take up/account for the smallest proport ion/number/percentage of… 雅思小作文句式3、倍数的表达方式
一个地图题的开头： The map about the development of the village sufficiently illustrates the way of progress of this area. In this map, we can find four main sectors and two main roads intersected with one railway and one motor way. It seems the overall development of this village has strong connection with the construction of roads. 雅思小作文地图题词汇 Part 1：表时间 流程图和地图题中都可能涉及时间表达。流程题中，使用较多的是过程时长的表述，而地图题的时间使用则体现为地理变迁的时间变化。一般在方位选址图题中较少出现。确切的时间指引，既增加文章的自然和连贯度，也能体现行文的精确性。 常见表示时间的词： in few hours几小时 during the period of …在…期间after 10 days 10天后 from…to从…到… between …and在…之间 over the…year period在一个…年期间5 years before 5年前a decade earlier几十年前from that moment on从那时起after a while一会 since自从 since then自从 finally最后 over the subsequent …years近连续几年 例句：The process lasts for up to 7 day s and the products are finally distributed to customers. Part 2：表空间 空间表达地图题出现概率较高，但流程图也偶尔出现。空间应该是地图题解题关键和主要特点。许多考生容易误把地图题的空间位置写成上下左右位置，这是失分点非常大的地方。朗阁海外考试研究中心的专家们提示烤鸭，空间表达时需要注意区分：在空间状语里，in表内部，on表接壤，to表分开。 常用的空间词： lies 靠近
101. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph below gives information about the number of visitors to three London museums between June and September 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Test Tip Check the horizontal axis to find whether the graph refers to past, present, future or all three. We use the present simple to describe the graph: The graph shows… , We can see… If the graph refers to past period of time, we use the past simple, and if the graph includes future times, we use will or it is predicted that. Look at the line graph and complete the text with the correct forms of the verbs in brackets and the correct prepositions.
雅思小作文写作
Writing Notes Date: July, 9th, 2017 Task I 1.Three Types i.Data: Bar Chart, Line Graph, Table, Pie Chart ◆图表类型：动态图、静态图 ◆动态图：有两个或以上时间 ◆重点 ●趋势 ●特殊值：起点、重点、最高点、最低点、交叉点 ◆静态图：只有一个或者没有时间 ●比较描述对象：使用倍数、比较级 ii.Process: Flow Chart iii.Map ◆Describe the change ◆Eg: Hospital is located to the west of car park 2.评分标准 i.Task Achievement/ Task Response ◆Cover the Requirements of the task ◆No off topics ◆不能添加主观想法，只能描述 ii.Coherence and Cohesive ◆使用路标性词汇：顺承和转折 iii.Lexical Resource ◆使用非高频词汇 ◆Use words and phrases naturally and appropriately ◆Vocabulary diversity ◆Accurate spelling words iv.Grammatical Range and Accuracy ◆Accurate grammar of sentences ◆Use different ranges of sentences, structures to achiever grammatical 3.写作方法 i.开头段 ◆图表词改写 ●The chart : bar chart, line chart, pie chart, table, diagram ◆动词shows改写 ●注意时态 ●Shows: illustrates, gives information about, compares, indicates, demonstrates ◆关键词（一定要改写） ●数量改写 ?The number of + 可数 ?The amount of + 不可数 ?The quantity of + 可/不可数 ?The figure for +可/不可数 ●百分比改写
The table below shows changes in the numbers of residents cycling to work in different areas of the UK between 2001 and 2011. The table compares the numbers of people who cycled to work in twelve areas of the UK in the years 2001 and 2011. Overall, the number of UK commuters who travelled to work by bicycle rose considerably over the 10-year period. Inner London had by far the highest number of cycling commuters in both years. In 2001, well over 43 thousand residents of inner London commuted by bicycle, and this figure rose to more than 106 thousand in 2011, an increase of 144%. By contrast, although outer London had the second highest number of cycling commuters in each year, the percentage change, at only 45%, was the lowest of the twelve areas shown in the table. Brighton and Hove saw the second biggest increase (109%) in the number of residents cycling to work, but Bristol was the UK’s second city in terms of total numbers of cycling commuters, with 8,108 in 2001 and 15,768 in 2011. Figures for the other eight areas were below the 10 thousand mark in both years. (172 words, band 9)
雅思小作文柱状图Bar类解析 关于柱状图我们主要分两种写法： 1.如果横轴有明显的时间推移的话，烤鸭们应连接柱子顶点，重在描述柱子的升降起伏，写法类似于线状图。 2.如果无时间推移，则写法和饼状图一样。即按照各比较对象所占比例的高低写，同时要注意各所占比例之间的比较。 可以用到的词汇有： 1.表示“占多少”的动词 Account for Take up Make up Contribute to Have Represent 2.表示“最高级”和“比较级” 第一/最小the largest/biggest proportion of 第二the second/next largest/expensive(+ 形容词的最高级) 第三followed closely by 最低/最小the smallest percent of all 3.表示“相同比例” 即在饼状图中遇到了比例相同或者差不多的饼，如有A B两个比较对象。 A accounts for the same percentage as B . The proportion of A is as high as B A and B contributed equally/evenly to (all ) 在观察柱形图的时候首先要留意横轴的数据，若横轴为时间轴或者是年龄趋势，那么我们在主体段写作时候的基本思路就为从左到右;若横轴数据为具体专有名词诸如地点，交通工具等时，主体段的写作思路就可能是按照柱形的长度排列。本文根据上述的分析做以下的总结： 一、按照横轴从左到右排列数据： 1. 两根柱且趋势截然相反 在这种写法中，我们要注意观察2根柱的上升/下降的幅度。以下我们就来看一个例子：
雅思小作文模板句必备50句型 A 1.the table shows the changes in the number of...over the period from...to... 该表格描述了在...年之...年间...数量的变化。 2.the bar chart illustrates that... 该柱状图展示了... 3.the graph provides some interesting data regarding... 该图为我们提供了有关...有趣数据。 4.the diagram shows (that)... 该图向我们展示了... 5.the pie graph depicts (that).... 该圆形图揭示了... 6.this is a cure graph which describes the trend of... 这个曲线图描述了...的趋势。 7.the figures/statistics show (that)... 数据(字)表明... 8.the tree diagram reveals how... 该树型图向我们揭示了如何... 9.the data/statistics show (that)... 该数据(字)可以这样理解... 10.the data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that... 这些数据资料令我们得出结论... 11.as is shown/demonstrated/exhibited in the diagram/graph/chart/table... 如图所示... 12.according to the chart/figures... 根据这些表(数字)... 13.as is shown in the table... 如表格所示... 14.as can be seen from the diagram, great changes have taken place in... 从图中可以看出，...发生了巨大变化。 15.from the table/chart/diagram/figure, we can see clearly that...or it is clear/apparent from the chart that... 从图表我们可以很清楚(明显)看到... 16.this is a graph which illustrates... 这个图表向我们展示了... 17.this table shows the changing proportion of a & b from...to... 该表格描述了...年到...年间a与b的比例关系。 18.the graph, presented in a pie chart, shows the general trend in... 该图以圆形图形式描述了...总的趋势。 19.this is a column chart showing... 这是个柱型图，描述了...
Writing Notes Date: July, 9th, 2017 Task I 1.Three Types i.Data: Bar Chart, Line Graph, Table, Pie Chart ◆图表类型：动态图、静态图 ◆动态图：有两个或以上时间 ◆重点 ●趋势 ●特殊值：起点、重点、最高点、最低点、交叉点 ◆静态图：只有一个或者没有时间 ●比较描述对象：使用倍数、比较级 ii.Process: Flow Chart iii.Map ◆Describe the change ◆Eg: Hospital is located to the west of car park 2.评分标准 i.Task Achievement/ Task Response ◆Cover the Requirements of the task ◆No off topics ◆不能添加主观想法，只能描述 ii.Coherence and Cohesive ◆使用路标性词汇：顺承和转折 iii.Lexical Resource ◆使用非高频词汇 ◆Use words and phrases naturally and appropriately ◆Vocabulary diversity ◆Accurate spelling words iv.Grammatical Range and Accuracy ◆Accurate grammar of sentences ◆Use different ranges of sentences, structures to achiever grammatical 3.写作方法 i.开头段 ◆图表词改写 ●The chart : bar chart, line chart, pie chart, table, diagram ◆动词shows改写 ●注意时态 ●Shows: illustrates, gives information about, compares, indicates, demonstrates ◆关键词（一定要改写） ●数量改写 ?The number of + 可数 ?The amount of + 不可数 ?The quantity of + 可/不可数 ?The figure for +可/不可数
剑桥英语10雅思考官范文(大作文+小作文)
剑10 1-2 It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children? One important stage in a child’s growth is certainly the development of a conscience, which is linked to the ability to tell right from wrong. This skill comes with time and good parenting, and my firm conviction is that punishment does not have much of a role to play in this. Therefore I have to disagree almost entirely with the given statement. To some extent the question depends on the age of the child. To punish a very young child is both wrong and foolish, as an infant will not understand what is happening or why he or she is being punished. Once the age of reason is reached however, a child can be rewarded for good behavior and discouraged from bad. This kind but firm approach will achieve more than harsh punishments, which might entail many negative consequences unintended by the parents. To help a child learn the difference between right and wrong, teachers and parents should firstly provide good role modelling in their own behavior. After that, if sanctions are needed, the punishment should not be of a physical nature, as that merely sends the message that it is acceptable for larger people to hit smaller ones-an outcome which may well result in the child starting to bully others. Nor should the punishment be in any way cruel.
1.On Open Policy The open policy means that our country is open to investment, trade and technical and economic cooperation with other countries on the basis of equality and mutual benefit. The purpose of open policy is to acquire advanced technology, management skills to serve our socialist construction so as to promote the realization of the four modernizations. We must adhere to the open policy. Because economic relations between states today have become increasingly close, and no country can possibly advance behind close doors. Only in this way, can we gradually close the gap between our country and the developed countries. Through the implementation of policy, we can learn advanced technology and managerial expertise from abroad; make full use of the foreign capitals to set up great enterprises; absorb useful and healthy ideas and new knowledge of the modern civilization; and broaden our views and raise our level of competence. ? 2. The place of Science and Technology in Modern Life. Human life can not continue without science and technology. For many years, human society has developed with the advance of science and technology while the development of science and technology has in turn brought the process to mankind. So the life we are living now is more civilized than that of our fore fathers.
The development of Chorleywood village from 1868 to 1994. 思路: 1. 严格按照时间的推进进行描述，不可以出现倒序或是插叙的情况。 2. 物体的坐标词汇应该是绝对方位词：东西南北，物体的大小词汇应该是相对单位词：较大，较小，倍数等。 3. 线段的描述应该包含两方面：方向和动作。 4. 注意使用被动句来表达客观存在。 答案： The map shows the changes and development of Chorleywood village in Great Britain over a period of 126 years from 1868 to 1994. Chronologically, during the first 15 years from 1868 to 1883, Chorleywood was merely a very small village with two crossing main roads for its all transportation. From 1883 to 1922, with the expansion to the south, a new living area took shape and almost tripled the original scale. Besides, in 1909, a railway line, parallel with the east-bound main road, was built, linking the east and west, as well as forming Chorleywood Station. During the next period between 1922 and 1970, Chorleywood extended both eastward and westward and almost doubled the previous size. The year 1970 saw another big change of Chorleywood--the establishment of a south-bound motorway as the axis, which connected east-west main road with the railway. By 1994, there emerged 5 new resident places and some entertainment including Chorleywood Park and Golf course, all of which scattered along the two sides of the newly-built traffic system.（177）
雅思小作文基础词汇句型 Yicheng 必备同义词替换： 展示，提供（首句谓语动词）： show/ describe/ indicate/ illustrate/ provide 占百分之多少：Account for/ make up/ provide/ represent/ occupy … with… 趋势：trend/ tendency 数据：number/ data/ figure 百分比，比例：percentage/ proportion 类别：category / type/ kind/ group 然后：thereafter（替换then）, after that e.g. Thereafter, the number of cases dropped slowly to about 2800 in September. 从前，过去：formerly （代替past） e.g. Many formerly inaccessible places are now reached by road and rail. 段落中的连接词： 同样的：likewise 同时：meanwhile 并且：moreover 但是：however，whereas 相反：conversely 相比之下：by comparison, in contrast, compared with sth, comparatively 四大趋势灵活表达总结：上升，下降，波动，不变
Task 1 的六大句型 (一) 开头段 The table / line graph / bar chart / pie chart / graph / chart shows / illustrates /describes / … 这个表格/ 曲线图/ 柱状图/ 饼图/ 图表/ 显示了… … (二) 描述“上升、下降、不变、波动” （各个对象在一段时间内进行变化） 1.There was / is / wil be a (+adj.) + n. in the number / percentage of A(数据+) 时间 A是对象的名字（图表中肯定有，照着写） n. 是表示“上升、下降、不变、波动”的名词 (1) 表示“增加（上升）”的名词increase / rise / growth / jump / surge / boom (2) 表示“减少（下降）”的名词decrease / decline / fall / reduction / drop / slump (3 )表示“波动”的名词fluctuation (4 )表示“不变”的名词no/little change adj.是形容词 (1 ) 表示“快速的，剧烈的，显著的”的形容词rapid/ sharp/ significant/ dramatic/ drastic (2 ) 表示“逐步的，适度的，稳定的，慢的，一点点的”的形容词Gradual / moderate / steady / slow
表格图001 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below give information about Favorite Pastimes in different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. model answer: This table clearly presents and compares favorable pastimes in eight different countries. The pastimes, across the top of the table, are analyzed in relation to each country. As can be seen, about 60% of Canadians, Australians and Americans like watching television. On the other hand, this figure is quite low for China where only 15% of people watch television. Predictably, Americans like music at 23%, whereas only 2 to 5% of people in the other countries feel the same way. 20% of people in England enjoy sleeping as a pastime whereas in Canada and the USA, for example, the figure is only 2%. Interestingly, the Chinese like hobbies the most at 50%, as opposed to only 20% in France. It isn't surprising that the highest percentage of beach-lovers is in Australia and the USA at 30%. It seems that pastimes of people of different nationalities may be influenced by a number of
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts below show the levels of participation in education and science in developing and industrialized countries in 1980 and 1990. Write a report a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words. 1.The data shows the differences between developing and industrialized countries’ participation in education and science.
2.In terms of the number of years of schooling received, we see that the length of time people spend at school in industrialized countries was much greater at 8.5 years in 1980, compared to 2.5 years in developing countries. The gap was increased further in 1900 when the figures rose to 10.5 years and 3.5 years respectively. 3.We can see a similar pattern in the second graph, which shows that the number of people working as scientists and technicians in industrialized countries increased from 55 to 85 per 1,000 people between 1980 and 1990, while the number in developing countries went from 12 to 20. 4.Finally, the figures for spending on research and development show that industrialized countries more than doubled their spending, from $200bn to$420bn, while developing countries decreased theirs , from$75bn down to $25bn. 5.Overall we can see that not only are there very large differences between the two economies but that there gaps are widening. 分析 第一段： 1 The data shows the differences between developing and industrialized countries’ participation in education and science. 本句话依旧是对题干进行改写。Data是“数据”，相当于figure，number，percentage，proportion等。