1 高考英语作文赏析(图表作文)
作文一：
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
上海市正提倡建设“节约型社会”，下图为某校两个学期用水、用电、用纸的情况。请对其进行简要分析，以“How to build an economized society”为题，写一篇作文，谈谈自己的想法。
According to the graph, this school, the epitome of all the schools in Shanghai, didn’t have a good control of its water and electricity use. The water amount rises from 80 to 95 while electricity climbs from 60 to 75, both of which demand our prompt attention. As a citizen, my suggestions to develop Shanghai into an economized society are listed as follows.
To begin with, lights should be turned off when no one is in the room. The mentioned “room” ranges from classroom to home in definition. Fans are highly recommended to replace air-conditioners in summer time. In addition, water is encouraged to be recycled if possible. Finished using in dish-washing, water can be used in toilet-flushing. Creative minds are appreciated in using water in different purposes. What’s more, clothing bags ought to substitute for paper bags in daily life. The behavior of bringing one’s paper bag to the supermarket contributes to terminating white pollution.
Shanghai, a metropolitan city worldwide, expects our efforts to help itself turn into an economized society, which in turn will benefit ourselves and our future generations as well.
(180r ds)
审题：
本文是非常典型的图表材料议论文。此类体裁的写作首先要求作者能够细致、全面地观察图片，能够从图片中得到关于论点乃至于论据的信息，这样，作文就有了成功的基础。比如本图表，我们可以从中得知一个最明显的结论：该学校下半学期的用水、用电和用纸量都比上半学期多。接下来，应该重点围绕“How to build an economized society”，提出自己认为可行的解决方法。最后进行归纳总结。
高级词汇及短语：
epitome 缩, terminate 终止
多样句型：
1.非限制性定语从句1）The water amount rises from 80 to 95 while electricity climbs from 60 to
75, both of which demand our prompt attention；2）Shanghai, a metropolitan city worldwide, expects our efforts to help itself turn into an economized society, which in turn will benefit ourselves and our future generations as well.
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作文二：
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
最近学校在高中学生中做了一次”有烦恼向谁说” (To whom do you go when in trouble)的调查活动，调查结果如图所示。请你简要描述调查结果，并结合自己的选择，谈谈想法和理由。
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A survey has been conducted among senior high students on the topic “T o whom do you go when in trouble.” The data from the pie chart shows that “classmates and friends” ranks first at 58%, which is followed by “their own” at 33%. However, the least proportion goes to “parents and teachers” at only 9%.
As far as I am concerne d, I’m not among the majority that tends to ask friends for help. I am more willing to go to parents and teachers and I think my peers should also consider going to them when in trouble.
Firstly, parents and teachers may know more about you than yourselves. Since they have a more objective and all-around perspective on you, they are bound to give you useful advice. What’s more, parents and teachers are experienced adults who must have suffered many worries and hardships. They must have accumulated much experience which can broaden your horizons when you deal with matters. Last but not least, by having constant communications with your parents and teachers, you are sure to strengthen the relationship with them despite the generation gap. In a word, to go to adults when in trouble may help you more when you are in difficulty.
For the reasons above, I want to call on my peers to communicate more often with their parents and teachers.
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审题：
首先，文章需要大致介绍背景。其次，我们看出这个圆内扇形图有三个量，可以依次将数据表达出来。第二部分，需要学生做出自己的一个选择。注意，你可以选择三者中的任意一者，只需言之有理。但是，学生应该牢记一句翻译名句：Always give the money what he wants ，即“投其所好”，选择一个较容易下笔的面进行论述。提示考生没有必要为了博阅卷老师眼球，选择较难论述的一面。
高级词汇及短语：
the least proportion, have a more objective and all-around perspective on sb., be bound to, call on my peers to do
多样句型：
1. 非限制性定语从句 The data from the pie chart shows that “classmates and friends” ranks first at 58%, which is followed by “their own” at 33%.
2. 定语从句 parents and teachers are experienced adults who must have suffered many worries and hardships.
作文三：
请根据你对以下两幅图的理解，用英语写一篇作文。
参考词汇: banner (横幅)
stump (树桩)
你的作文应包括以下内容:
1. 简要描述两幅图的内容;
2. 概述你对两幅图中不同做法的理解;
3. 举例说明两幅图对你的启示。
注意:
1. 可参照图片适当发挥;
2. 作文词数150 左右;
3. 作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
7 As is vividly depicted in the two pictures, ways to celebrate Earth Day vary considerably from person to person. In the 1st picture, a man is trying to put up a banner on a lonely tree surrounded by stumps only to end up in vain, while the 2nd picture shows a couple happily planting trees with harmonious atmosphere penetrating all around.
The message conveyed here is clear: "Actions speak louder than words." Our earth is suffering increasingly severe damage. Should we just pay lip service or take practical measures to protect it? The answer is definitely the latter. Immediate actions should be taken, like stopping cutting down trees to better the environment.
As for me, I cannot agree with the view more that actions are also of vital importance in other aspects of our daily life besides environmental protection. Instead of shouting empty slogans, it is more meaningful to donate books stationeries and sports appliances to children in need. We ought to feel it our duty to strictly follow traffic rules, stopping at the red light rather than complaining about traffic jams. Only when we match our words with actions can we make a difference in whatever we hope to accomplish.
审题：图表作文 高级词汇及短语：
vividly adv.生动地 depict v.描绘 penetrate v.穿透，渗入 pay lip service 口惠无实
to better the environment ：better v.使….好转，使…更好 of vital importance 很重要
多样句型：
only to end up in vain 不定式作结果状语
I cannot agree with the view more that actions are also of vital importance in other aspects of our daily life besides environmental protection. 比较级表达最高级
Only when we match our words with actions can we make a difference in whatever we hope to accomplish.倒装，宾语从句
作文四：
How Computers Weaken Our Brain
9 As is illustrated in the ironic picture, in the long history of human evolution, mankind develops with our own culture. But the leaps in computer science appear to have made everything seem in vain. Thus I’m convinced that computers do weaken our brain.
Most fans of the Internet are not conscious of their time lost before the screen. The Web offers colorful pictures and diverse voices, filling our life with various sources of information but few standards of selection. All these high-tech illusions capture us and weaken our ability to think and reflect. While hooked online, we lose the peaceful moment of meditation.
But this is not the only illusion; we also communicate less in real life. One can be a star on social networks but a freshman in reality. Fascinating as the computers may look, they set walls for the revelation of our personality and nature. Only through face-to-face communication can one actually communicate, and communication serves as the frame －work of a society and paints the picture of life.
From what has been mentioned above, computers weaken our brain in one sense, but it is not the machines that are to blame. Only when we embrace culture can we empower our future.
审题：图表作文
高级词汇及短语：
illustrate v.用图片或例子解释说明 ironic adj.讽刺的
made everything seem in vain 使一切白费 diverse adj.不同的，多种多样的 hook v.钩住，牢牢抓住
多样句型：
Thus I ’m convinced that computers do weaken our brain 强调句型 While hooked online, we lose the peaceful moment of meditation 分词作状语 Fascinating as the computers may look, they set walls for the revelation of our personality and nature 分词作状语
Only through face-to-face communication can one actually communicate 倒装
it is not the machines that are to blame 强调句
作文五：
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay. you should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and comment on parents’ role in their children’s growth. you should write at least 120 but no more than 180 words。
11 How impressive the cartoon is in describing the most widespread social phenomenon concerning the independence of the children. let’s take a closer look at the drawing, the girl told her mother she was accept ed by the university of her mother’s choice with pride. the author’s real purpose is not the drawing itself, but to lead us to secure what hides behind the picture 。
What are the reasons for it? in the following sentences, i’ll venture to explore the reason s. to start with, the only-one child policy in china has made more and more parents pay much attention to their children that they would like to replace their children to do everything. in addition, parents don’t believe that their children have enough ability to deal with their personal matters and make any decisions. there are some suggestions given to our parents 。
For one thing, it is quite important for our parents to realize that their children will grow up and have their own ideas as time goes by. for another, children should be encouraged to make some decisions alone so that they are able to pursue what they really want. i contend that our parents should give their children a free hand in some matters to help them to be independent 。
审题：图表作文
第一段：漫画描述，重点是母女之间的对话内容，从而引出文章的主题是有关孩子的独立性，家长干涉孩子过多。
第二段：可以分析此现象产生的原因。 第三段：采取措施解决此现象。
高级词汇及短语：
impressive 有印象的social phenomenon 社会现象in addition 此外replace 代替 deal with 处理goes by （时间）消逝pursue 追求
多样句型：
1. let’s take a closer look at the drawing, the girl told her mother she was accepted by the university
of her mother’s choice with pride （宾语从句）
2. To start with, the only-one child policy in china has made more and more parents pay much
attention to their children that they would like to replace their children to do everything.(结果状语从句)
3. for another, children should be encouraged to make some decisions alone so that they are able to
pursue what they really want.（宾语从句）
作文六：
For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture below.you should start your essay with a brief descrption of the picture and commen on this kind of modern life.you should weite at least 120words but no more than 180 words.
13 This picture vividly describes that the person uses a computer in the whole day even when he falls asleep at night. what the cartoon conveys is the impact of computers on people.
New products are being invented every minute of every day, all of which will hold sway over people in some respects. however, in all these technologies and products, computers have exerted the most important influence on people. some people assert that computers have made life more complex and stressful, while some people believe that computers have made life easier and more convenient. now many of my classmates like to surf the internet in their free time. i think internet can bring us both advantages and disadvantages. for example, if i have some trouble studying ， i can surf the internet to find more helpful information. however, internet can make some problems at the same time.
In a word, in spite of the fact the computer appears to have made life more complex and stressful, i feel that the advantages are more obvious, which have become an integral part of everyday life 。
审题：图表作文
第一段：描述漫画内容，引出文章主题：电脑的使用越来越广泛，使用的时间也越来越长。 第二段：分析该现象的原因。
第三段：提出措施解决。或得出自己的结论。
高级词汇及短语：
fall asleep 入睡impact 影响 convey 表达exert 发挥assert 主张，声称 complex 复杂的
多样句型：
1. This picture vividly describes that the person uses a computer in the whole day （宾语从句）
even when he falls asleep at night.（时间状语从句）what the cartoon conveys （主语从句）is the impact of computers on people.
2. New products are being invented every minute of every day, all of which will hold sway over
people in some respects （非限制性定于从句）
作文七：
据一项调查显示，有85.8%的中学生说自己的字不好看，而他们又不想改善它，其理由有很大差别。请根据下图内容用英语写一篇短文，说明该现象并发表看法。
15 Nowadays, with the growing popularity of computers, more and more people are paying less and less attention to their handwriting.
According to a recent survey, about 85.8 percent of middle school students think that their handwriting is poor. Yet for various reasons, many students don't want to improve their handwriting. 51.5 percent of them think that they can just use a computer, so there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting, And 32.3 percent believe that they are so busy with the study that they do not have time to practice. 10.9 percent think that practicing handwriting is useless. The rest have other reasons.
As the saying goes, writing style shows the man. Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial, especially for middle school students. Therefore, in my opinion, more emphasis should be placed on this aspect in future.
审题：
这是一篇图表类的议论文，第一步引出话题，第二部写明调查结果，第三步发表看法。
高级词汇及短语：
popularity 流行
more emphasis should be placed on this aspect 更多地关注这一方面
多样句型：
1．根据最近的一项调查，大约85.8%的中学生认为他们的字不好看。
?According to a recent survey, about 85.8 percent of middle school students think that their handwriting is poor.
2．漂亮整洁的书法是有益的，尤其对中学生来说。
?Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial, especially for middle school students.
作文八：
假如你是李华，在最近的研究性学习当中，受《21世纪中学生英语报》（The 21st Century）之邀，你对你所在的班60名同学（男女各半）进行了上网目的的调查。现将调查结果（如下表所示）用英语给报社的编辑写一封信，报道此事，以引起舆论的关注，并提出你的观点和建议。
注意：
1、报道应包括图表所示全部内容，可适度发挥。
2、文章的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
3、词数：150
4、参考词汇：调查：make a survey
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Dear editor,
I have recently made a survey among 30 boys and 30 girls in my class about their purpose of getting on the Internet.
The g irls’ favorite is chatting, but few boys like it. What the boys like to do most is playing games and the girls also like it. Both boys and girls like to read news or send e-mails on the Internet. Maybe they think it’s the most convenient way to get informa tion from keeping in touch with friends. As for studying , the numbers of boys and girls are equal, but altogether only several of them will use the Internet as a tool to study.
In my opinion , useful as the Internet is , the students had better make better and wise use of it. Otherwise , it’s impossible for us to benefit from it. Moreover , I also hope the parents will pay enough attention to their children using the Internet in their spare time.
Yours ， Li Hua
审题：1、题材：书信；说明+议论
2、时态：一般现在时
3、人称：第一人称、第三人称
高级词汇及短语：
1、连接词的选用：but, both…, and, moreover, otherwise
2、高级词汇的选用：keep in touch with, as for…, use… as …, benefit from, pay attention to, altogether, in one’s opinion.
多样句型：
复杂句型的选用：what…most 引导的主语从句；as 引导的让步状语从句（倒装语序）
作文九：
Directions: In this part, you are to write an essay of about 200 words within 40 minutes. Study the following table care fully and your composition must be based on the information given in the table. You should quote as few figures as possible.
Outline: 1. Changes in people’s daily expenses in the past five years
2. Possible reasons for the changes
3. My own conclusion
Year
Item 1997 1998 1999 2000 2001 Food 65% 60% 48% 42% 35% Clothing 5% 7% 10% 13% 15% Recreation 3% 5% 7% 8% 13%
Others 24% 26% 33% 36% 38%
Total 100% 100% 100% 100% 100%
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In the past five years, there have been great changes in people’s daily expenses in XX city. According to the figures given in the table, the amount of money spent on food decreased gradually, accounting for 35 per cent in 2001. However, there was a rapid increase in clothing expenses, which made up 15% in 2001. In addition, the table shows an upward tendency in recreation expenses. The same was the case with other expenses.
What caused these remarkable changes? In my opinion/As far as I am concerned, there are at least three good reasons. To begin with, with the rapid development of agriculture in China, the output of grain, fruit, vegetables and milk has sharply increased, which contributes to the decline in their prices. Secondly, the family incomes of people both in the city and in the country have greatly risen so that people now can afford expensive clothing and some of them even want to dress in the latest fashion. Finally, as the living conditions improve, the demand for a variety of recreations is growing steadily, too.
In short/In brief/In a few words, with the incomes continuing to rise, people will no longer resign themselves to living a dull, monotonous life. They are eager to make their life interesting and exciting. Therefore, I am sure that people will spend more money on clothing and recreations.
作文十：
某学校在学生中展开调查，了解学生对科学这门学科是否感兴趣。下图是调查结果。
文章必须包括以下内容：
1. 描述图表（the pie chart）
2. 试分析产生该调查结果的原因
3. 简要谈谈你的看法
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图表及漫画类作文 一写作模板 (1) 组图写作模板 The story took place 时间和地点. 事件起因(要点一，图片一的内容). 事件的发展(要点二、三……，图片二、三……的内容). 事件结局(最后一个要点，最后一张图片的内容) From the story, I feel自己的看法或感想． （2）对比图写作模板 Great changes have taken place in地点since时间． In the past, 描述过去的情景(图片一的内容). But now our village/school/city is taking on a new look. 描述现在的情景(图片二的内容). There are many reasons for the great changes. First, 变化的第一个理由. Second, 变化的第二个理由. Third, 变化的第三个理由…Last but not least, 变化的最后一个理由. I think自己的感想． （3）单张图写作模板 As can be seen in the picture, 图画内容. The picture tells us概括图片大意． The implied meaning of this picture should be taken into consideration seriously. To begin with, 揭示涵义/原因/结果1. Second, 揭示涵义/原因/结果2. In my opinion/ As for me, we should take some measures to deal with the problem. First , we should具体措施1. Second, we must具体措施2. Only in this way can we solve the problem of 图画内容． (4)图表作文模板 As is shown/ indicated/ illustrated by the figure/ percentage in the table/ graph/ chart/ pie, _____________ (作文题目的议题）has been on rise/ decline, significantly/ dramatically/steadily rising/ decreasing from ________ to _______. From the sharp/ marked decline/rise in the chart, it goes without saying that ____________________. There are at least two reasons accounting for _______________. On the one hand, ______________. On the other hand, ___________ is due to the fact that ______________. In
高考英语作文万能模板之图表作文框架 As is shown by the figure/percentage in the table(graph/picture/pie/chart) has been on rise/ decrease (increases/drops/decreases),有表格或图像可以看出。。。significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from______ in _______ to ______ in _____. From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that _毫无疑问的看出_______. There are at least two good reasons accounting for __这里至少有两个原因可以对_ X X 作出解释__. On the one hand, _一方面_____. On the other hand, ______ is due to the fact that ________. 另一方面---的原因是。。。In addition, 而且_______ is responsible for _______. Maybe there are some other reasons to show _也许有其他原因要展示_______. But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing. As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______. I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.
【高考优秀英语作文赏析】 ◆简要描述一下你通常是怎么过生日的，并阐述如何过生日更有意义。 My birthday never means cakes capped with inviting icing(糖霜)or throwing a crazy party. Usually, a simple piece of cake is bought for my mother, not for me, for I want to thank her for bringing my life and soul to this world and honor the hardships she had been through during her pregnancy. I would also feel needed when part of my money is donated to charity on that day. My birthday-just an ordinary day-spells two words: respect and give. Birthday should be extended to a deeper thinking of life. Days are gone when we were surrounded by those who loved us and were soaked in "happy birthday to you." Instead, it should be our turn to care about others with our respect and affection. No man can live in this society without being connected with others. All we’ve gained is largely due to others’ devotion and sacrifice. Our birthday has provided us with a platform to pay back what we’ve taken for granted and cherish what we’ve obtained. Show your gratitude and respect; give a helping hand to those who are desperate for help. All that makes our world a better place will make our birthday meaningful and prove our being mature. That’s what birthdays are all about! ◆描述你平时最喜欢去的地方，并说明理由。 As the world is becoming noisier and noisier, I would like to seek for a place to calm my heart. So the library is the best place for me to go to. Libraries are the places where you can find the origin of human civilization, the places where you can find high spirits of human beings, the places where you can have everlasting communication with ancient persons, where you can exchange ideas with people all over the world. You may broaden your mind and gain precious experiences of life which will lead you to a bright destination. The reason why I like visiting libraries most is that I show great interest in books since an early age. I am fond of equipping my mind with a great amount of knowledge and fulfilling my life. As books are teachers of life and can expand a person’s horizons, I would like to go to libraries to make my life more meaningful. In terms of all these facts concerned, libraries are my favorite place to go to in my leisure time. ◆DIY现在越来越受到青睐。你愿意选择这一方式吗？请说出你的理由。 According to a recent survey, there is a growing trend that modern people, however busy they are, turn to DIY when they are preparing a gift for their family members or close friends. From my point of view, I’m among the majority that tends to follow the trend. There are several reasons accounting for my choice. To begin with, through DIY, we are bound to improve our ability of using our hands. There is no denying that this kind of ability is of great importance to our work in the future. Moreover, it is in the course of DIY that we can be fully aware how difficult it is to make a thing on our own. As a result, we can better understand the saying “No pains, no gains.” Last but not least, we’d better take into account the fact that the things made by ourselves are far more meaningful. Only in this way can we truly express our love and care for others.
高考英语满分作文精选三(附翻译) 健康对于我们每个人来说是非常重要的，但你的父母天天忙于工作而忽略了这个问题，你很为他们担忧。请你以此为话题，并结合提示给他们写一封信。 提示：1.要走路去上班，而不是开车或坐车； 2.每周至少去体育馆锻炼一次，或打球、或游泳； 3.饮食要健康； 4.不要工作太晚，要早休息。 要求：1.短文结构完整，意思连贯，语言流畅，语法准确，符合逻辑； 2.80—100词左右； 3.开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。 【例文】 Dear Dad(Mum), You’re so busy every day that you don’t pay much attention to your health. I’m worried about your health all the time. I’d like to give you some suggestions. I hear walking is the best sport. Your company isn’t far from home, is it? Why not walk to the office? You’d bet ter take exercise at least once a week, such as playing tennis in the gym. Going to swim is also a nice choice, too. What’s more, it’s necessary to have healthy food. Try not to stay up too late. Having enough sleep can help your brain work better. Dad, please accept my advice. I really wish you healthy! Your loving son (daughter) Tom (Mary) 【翻译】 亲爱的爸爸（妈妈）， 你每天这么忙，你不重视你的健康。我对你的健康担心所有的时间。我想给你一些建议。我听到走路是最好的运动。您的公司没有远离家乡，是吗？为什么不步行到办公室吗？你最好锻炼，每周至少一次，如在健身房打网球。去游泳也是一个不错的选择了。更重要的是，它需要有健康的食物。尽量不要熬夜太晚。有足够的睡眠可以让你的大脑工作得更好。
2004年高考英语满分作文及名师评析 2004高考英语满分作文 【全国卷I】 【试题回放】 假设你是李华，你在报上看到北京电视台今年七月将举办外国人"学中文，唱中文歌"才艺大赛。你的美国朋友Peter正在北京一所大学学中文，你觉得他应去试一试。请按以下要点给他写信告知此事，并表示可以提供帮助。 比赛时间：7 月18日。报名时间：截止到6月30日。报名地点：北京电视台 注意：1.词数：100左右 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 3.参考词汇：才艺大赛talent show Dear Peter, I read in a newspaper today that a "Learn Chinese, Sing Chinese Songs" Foreigners' Talent Show will be held in Beijing Television Station on July 18. I know you like singing, and you are in Beijing during that period. I think this is a good chance for you to show your singing talent, and how well you've learned Chinese. If you would like to try, you' U have to go to the TV station to sign up before the end of June. If there is anything I can do for you, I would be more than glad to help. Yours, Li Hua [名师点评] 从整体上说，本文书写得简洁明快。语言简单平实，要点囊括齐全，结构完整。本文的主要特点是让步状语从句的使用，最后两句话，采用了if引导的让步状语从句，结合将来时使用。 【全国卷II】 【试题回放】 假设你是李华，加拿大一所学校将于今年暑假组织学生来你校访问。其间，Andy Smith将借住你家。请你代表全家写信给Andy，欢迎他的到来，并告知有关事宜。信的要点如下：
高考英语满分作文精选一(附翻译) 假设你叫王明，昨天收到了笔友David的e-mail，得知他不久要到北京来学习中文。他想了解如何学好中文。请你用英文给他回复一封e-mail，介绍学习中文的体会和方法，提出你的建议，以及表达你帮助他学好中文的愿望。 【例文】 Dear David, I'm glad you'll come to Beijing to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful, and many foreigners are learning it now. It's difficult for you because it's quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. It's also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practise your listening. Do your best to talk with people in Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me. I'm sure you'll learn Chinese well. Hope to see you soon in Beijing. Yours, Wang Ming 【翻译】 亲爱的大卫， 我很高兴你会来北京学习中文。中国是非常有益的，许多外国人正在学习，现在。这很难为你，因为它是相当的英语不同。你要记住尽可能多的中国话。同样重要的是做一些阅读和写作。你可以看电视，听广播练习你的听力。你最好不要谈论与中国人民。你可以学习汉语，不仅从书本上，而且从你周围的人。如果您有任何问题，请问我。我敢肯定你会学好中文。希望能尽快看到你在北京。 此致， 王明
2007-2015江苏高考英语满分作文 2007年江苏高考英语满分作文 2007年4月29日上午10点到11点，全国亿万学生阳光体育活动在各地大中小学校同时举行。江苏省1100万学生积极参与了这项活动。 教育部倡导学生：每天锻炼一小时·健康工作五十年·幸福生活一辈子 请你根据以上提示，用英语准备一份发言稿，向同学们讲述一下阳光体育活动的有关情况，并就高三学生是否需要每天花一小时锻炼，谈谈你的看法及理由。 注意： 1.发言稿应包括以上所有信息，要有适当发挥。 2.词数：120左右。发言稿的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。 3.参考词汇：阳光体育活动—a national student sports program; 教育部—the Ministry of Education Good afternoon, everyone, Thank you! 参考范文： Good afternoon, everyone, On the morning of April 29,2007,from 10:00 to 11:00,hundreds of millions of students fromprimary, middle schools and universities all over China joined in a national student sportsprogram. Eleven million students in Jiangsu took an active part in this program. The Ministry of Education calls on students to exercise for an hour every day,in the hope thatthey will have good health to work fifty years and enjoy the whole life. Personally,I think it a good idea for us senior 3 students to have daily exercise. Although wetake a n hour a day for exercise,it is well worth it. Taking exercise helps us build up our bodyand keep a cl ear mind. Therefore,we can work more efficiently. Thank you! 2008年江苏高考英语满分作文 实现有效的沟通，建立良好的人际关系，不仅要善于言表、更要学会倾听。请你根据下表中所提 供的信息，写一篇题为“Being a Good Listener”的英文演讲稿。 为何倾听表示尊重，增进理解，建立良好的人际关系 谁来倾听家长倾听孩子理解孩子，消除代沟，…… 老师倾听学生了解学生，满足需求，…… 同学相互倾听增进友谊，互帮互学，…… 怎样倾听（请考生联系自己拟定内容，列举两至三点。） 注意：1. 对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。 2. 词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。 3. 演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。 Good afternoon, everyone! The topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener”........... Thank you for your listening! 参考范文： Good afternoon, everyone!
一.用词准确;表达地道 【北京卷】【试题回放】第一节情景作文(20分) 美国中学生jeff将要来你所在的红星中学学习中文，经协商安排住在你家。假设你是李华，请给Jeff写一封信，按照下图顺序介绍他来中国后的生活安排。 注意：1. 信的开头已为你写好。 2.词数不少于60。 Dear Jeff, I’m Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School. I’m very happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Beijing. While you are here, we’ll provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of chairs and a TV. You’ll also have your own bathroom. Our school is quite close to our home, so we could go to school t ogether by bike. At noon we’ll eat at the school dining hall. I’m sure you’ll like the delicious Chinese food there, and enjoy talking with friends over lunch. Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon. You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming. It’ll be a lot of fun. If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. We’ll try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience. Best wishes, Li Hua [名师点评]
高考英语满分作文精选(2) 2018-02-09 【译文】 中国旅游 最近几年，在中国的趋势，旅游业增长较快。根据最近的一项调查显示一些专家认为，约47%城镇居民定期作出旅行，28%的农村居民，也使他们的全国巡演。该调查还显示，更多的人在旅游有兴趣，并会在将来加入军队。 面对这一趋势，我们不能不说是负责任的开发一些潜在因素。在第一个地方，随着改革开放政策，对中国人民的生活水平有了很大提高，因此，他们大多数都不能周游。更重要的是，它相信，人们现在更积极的态度，旅游业，把它作为一种生活方式。此外，旅游设施正在变得越来越好。例如，交通运输发展迅速，许多景点都已经上市。 高考英语满分作文精选四 【例文】 Olympics and I Dear friend, I have a great news to inform here. Through long efforts, Beijing has been granted the right to host 2008 Olympic games. As a resident in Beijing, I feel quite excited and like to share with you my happiness. This success means a lot more than a game to me. In the first place, this Games will definitely promote the development of our economy. According to a recent survey by some experts, this games will raise our GDP by about 3%, and offer about 10,000 jobs. What’s more, our culture will be widely recognized and accepted all over the world through the Games. People will come over from every corner of the world, and experience Chinese culture in every aspect. Besides, through the games, our living environment will be greatly improved. For example, the public transportation system will be up-dated. Moreover, it’s known that more trees will be planted, and grassland will be considerably expanded.
请根据以下提示,以Advertisement为标题,写一篇词左右的英语短文. 广告成了人们生活中不可或缺的点缀 有的广告走向极端 你对广告的看法 Possible version: Advertisement广告 Advertisements appear everywhere in modern society. When you walk along the streets, you can see large boards with pretty girls smiling at you. You read newspapers, and see half of the pages covered with ads. You turn on TV, and you see commercial advertisements again. Whether you like it or not, advertisements fill your life. 广告在现代社会中无处不在。当你走在街上，你可以看到大的董事会与漂亮的女孩在你微笑。你看报纸，看到有一半的网页上覆盖着广告。你打开电视，你看到商业广告。不管你喜欢不喜欢，广告填满你的生活。 In order to attract more customers, advertisements will sometimes go to extremes. Advertisements use every possible means in producing their announcements. For example, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will employ an actor to sit at a table and eat up their seemingly delicious food product while they film him. 为了吸引更多的顾客，广告有时会走向极端。广告在制作公告的过程中使用各种可能的手段。举例来说，要做广告，广告主会雇用一位演员坐在一张桌子上，吃上他们在电影中的美味食物。 Although advertisements enable you to make decisions quickly, sometimes they can cause lots of trouble. There are always many of them and they make you forget what you are sitting there for. 虽然广告让你快速做出决定，但有时他们会给你带来很多麻烦。他们中有很多人，他们让你忘记你坐在那里的。 春天是旅游的好季节,某外国语学校校长要求各班同学就春游一事展开讨论.讨论的主题是:学校要不要组织学生春游.校长还要求班长就讨论的情况用英语写一封信给他. 假定你是某班班长李华,请你根据下列表格中的信息客观地介绍讨论情况. 注意:1,信的格式已为你写好;2,词数:100左右;3,生词:拓宽broaden 70%的学生赞成春游 30%的学生反对春游 1. 可以领略大自然的优美风景; 2. 拓宽视野,增长知识; 3. 呼吸新鲜空气,有益于身体健康. 1. 时间紧,耽误学习; 2. 增加父母经济负担; 3. 担心安全. Dear Headmaster, I’m writing to tell you the discussion we’ve had on whether the school should organize a spring outing for the students. 范文 Dear Headmaster,
高考英语优秀作文精选五篇欣赏 很多考生英语总是打不了高分，做了很多题，背了很多单词还是没有提高，那高考英语如何快速提高呢? 高考英语作文1 如何看待上网 Nowadays many youngsters prefer to go online in their spare time. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows: first, through the Internet, they can gain new knowledge and the latest news at home and abroad. Besides, network offers them a convenient way to communicate with each other. The Internet makes their life outside class colorful. But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that some students prefer to play computer games instead of studying their lessons. To make matters worse, there are some students who are often absent from school for days. Through the above analysis, I think we should take
2015高考英语满分作文范文及翻译（1） 假设你叫王明，昨天收到了笔友David的e-mail，得知他不久要到北京来学习中文。他想了解如何学好中文。请你用英文给他回复一封e-mail，介绍学习中文的体会和方法，提出你的建议，以及表达你帮助他学好中文的愿望。 【例文】 Dear David, I'm glad you'll come to Beijing to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful, and many foreigners are learning it now. It's difficult for you because it's quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. It's also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practise your listening. Do your best to talk with people in Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me. I'm sure you'll learn Chinese well. Hope to see you soon in Beijing. Yours, Wang Ming 【翻译】 亲爱的大卫， 我很高兴你会来北京学习中文。中国是非常有益的，许多外国人正在学习，现在。这很难为你，因为它是相当的英语不同。你要记住尽可能多的中国话。同样重要的是做一些阅读和写作。你可以看电视，听广播练习你的听力。你最好不要谈论与中国人民。你可以学习汉语，不仅从书本上，而且从你周围的人。如果您有任何问题，请问我。我敢肯定你会学好中文。 希望能尽快看到你在北京。 此致， 王明 2015高考英语满分作文范文及翻译（2） 请你根据下面的提纲，以“我的家乡”为题，写一篇100—120字的短文。 提纲： (1) 家乡的地理位置; (2) 解放前的情况; (3) 解放后的变化; (4) 对家乡的感情。 【例文】 My Home Town My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice. But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town. Many people had no work. They lived a hard life. In 1949 my hometown was liberated. Since then great changes have taken place there. The streets have been widened. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. The life of the people is greatly improved. I love my hometown. All the more I love its people. They are working hard so as to make it