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2012恩波胡小平写作冲刺讲义1

2012恩波胡小平写作冲刺讲义1
2012恩波胡小平写作冲刺讲义1

一、图表作文:

第一段: This chart is about ……… from 2000 to 2004. // The graph printed above shows / depicts / describes the …… in China during the last 5 years. // As is shown in the table (picture), ______ dropped from _____ in 1996 to _____ in 1998. According to the figures given in the table, _______ has greatly increased (decreased) in the past _____ years (decades), reaching ______ in 1998. From the table we can also see that there has been a sharp decrease (decline / rise) in _______. It is clear that __________.

第二段: (原因段) (主题句——列举法) (略)

二、漫画作文:

第一段:

1. This is a thought-provoking picture in which ________.

2. This picture is very thoughtful and instructive. As we can see in the picture, a man ______.

3. This cartoon depicts a very vivid scene in our daily life, in which a man

______.

4. The two pictures form a sharp contrast. In the first picture, _______.

From the second picture, we can see ______.

5. There is an interesting but instructive picture which goes like this:

________.

6. The above picture illustrates a very common and interesting phenomenon in our society. As is depicted in the picture, ________. The same

is true in our daily life. As we all know, in our reality, it is common to see that

________. It is obvious that _______.

7. It goes without saying that the cartoon aims at revealing _______ in this country. As is described in the first picture, _________. The second picture is

in a sharp contrast to the first one. _________. From the two pictures, we can

see that ________.

8. It goes without saying that two drawings aim at revealing a common and serious problem in the world: how to relieve stress in this fiercely competitive society. Let's take a closer look at the two pictures. The one on the left shows _______; whereas the one on the right illustrates _______.

第二段: (结合社会现象,社会问题)——(4种备选或组合)

1. The phenomenon illustrated in this cartoon can be seen virtually everywhere in this society. _____________. It is really a thought-provoking social fact. ________________. In contrast, ____________. Suppose you are _______, will you _______?

2. We should strongly stick to such an opinion that _________. Just like what is described in the cartoon, __________. Furthermore, __________. So let us do what we should do from now on, ____________.

3. From the drawing we can easily define what the author of the drawing tries to reveal to us— _______________. This is true not only in ______, but also in one's life. ___________________. Therefore, ___________________.

4. This drawing reminds me of quite a number of stories. The most persuasive example is _____, which is regarded as _________. Another example that occurs to me is that ___________.

5. What does the author really want to tell us? In my opinion, his real implication is that _____. (补充)

6. The purpose of the pictures is to warn us that due attention has to be paid to the decrease of ocean resources. (补充)

7. I cannot help relating these drawings to reality. They clearly show how human interpersonal relationships have developed. (补充)

三、图表,漫画作文结尾段:图表,漫画作文结尾段:

1、建议法【如果文章主题涉及"不好"的方面,如社会问题等】 .

议法1) It is essential that effective measures should be taken to solve this problem. 2) It is high time that we urged an immediate end to this phenomenon.

3) If we can not take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable result may come out unexpectedly

2、评论法【如果文章主题涉及"不好"的方面,如社会问题等】

1)Accordingly, (In a word), we must look for an immediate method, because the present situation, if permitted to continue, will be sure to lead to / result in _________.

2)Consequently, it is necessary (essential) that effective measures (actions / steps) should be taken to prevent the situation (to correct the tendency / to end the phenomenon)

3) To conclude, there is little doubt that serious (considerable / special) attention must be paid (called / devoted) to the problem of______. (the shortage of ______).

3、预测法【如果文章主题涉及"好"的方面】【主题涉及"不好"的方面也可用】

1) It goes without saying that the problem will be solved to a great extent when everyone realizes the urgency to cope with it and seeks solutions to its control.

2) I would predict that the revenue to be derived from tourism in China could be certainly increased five-fold, and probably ten-fold, in the next ten years, provided that the business is properly managed.

3) It can be predicted that with further implementation of agricultural policy in China, farmers' income will continue to increase in the next ten years.

4) If drivers continue to drive more carefully and further strengthen their sense of safety, the rate of accidents can be expected to decline even more dramatically in the near future.

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