上海继光初级中学书面表达英语作文汇编中考英语专项训练含答案解析
一、中考英语书面表达汇编
1．（·海南中考模拟）假如你是王梅，有一个弟弟/妹妹一直是你的梦想，去年你家里添了一个弟弟/妹妺，你非常开心，请根据内容要点，写一封电子邮件给你的笔友李蕾，和她分享你的快乐，告诉她你的变化。（ brother， sister任选其一）
内容要点: （1）我一直想有个弟弟、妹妹；
（2）去年我的梦想实现了，有了弟弟/妺妹；
（3）他/她非常可爱，给我们带来了欢乐，伴我成长，不再孤单；
（4）我学会了分享和照顾家人；
（5）请补充几点弟弟、妹妹到来后你的变化。
参考词汇：joy； grow up with sb.伴某人成长;on one’s initiative主动地；help do the housework；study hard； set an example 树立榜样。
写作要求：（1）不得使用真实姓名和校名
（2）包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯；
（3）字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清楚；
（4）词数80左右。（书信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。）
Dear Li Lei,
I have been dreaming to have a brother/sister. Last
year,___________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________
I’m lucky and happy to have a brother/ sister. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Wang Mei 【答案】Dear Li Le,
I have been dreaming to have a sister. Last year, my dream came true. I was really happy to have such a lovely baby sister.
She brings lots of joy to our family and she grows up with me day by day. Every time I see the big smile on her face, my heart is full of sweet feelings. I will come over to see her and play with her as soon as I get home every day. Now I’m not alone any more.
Above all, I have learned to share and look after others since she was born. I learn to help my mother do the housework, such as washing clothes, cooking and looking after my little sister on
my own initiative. In order to set a good example for my little sister, I decide to study hard all the time and go to a famous university one day. Taking care of the baby is a hard job and I learn to be patient from it. I also learn to be kind and friendly to her.
I’m lucky and happy to have a sister. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours
Wang Mei 【解析】
【分析】
这篇书面表达顺应了当今的热门话题，“二胎”，主要是站在孩子（考生）的角度，分享有了弟弟或妹妹后的喜悦。
【详解】
这是篇材料作文内容要点给的比较详细，考生主要把所有要点表达清楚连贯就是篇不错的短文；参考词汇中，给了一些很好的词汇，考生一定要把它们融合到作文里。在写作时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，这样才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。
2．（·北京中考模拟）“友善”是一种美德，它犹如阳光和雨露照耀并滋润着美德的形成。同学们，请奉献你的友善，为创建和谐社会做出贡献。
某英文网站正在开展以“友善待人、快乐生活”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈生活中你对他人提供善意帮助的经历。主要内容包括:你对友善行为的认识和理解，你平时做哪些友善的事情，以及你这样做的美好愿望。
提示词语:kind，politely, trouble, offer, proud，society
提示问题:What do you think of showing kindness to others?
How do you help them kindly in your daily life?
What do you dream about being kind to them?
It's our duty to show kindness to others around us.
_________________________________________________
【答案】It’s our duty to show kindness to others around us. I think everyone should be kind to each other. When someone is in trouble, we’ll gi ve a hand politely. In our community, I try my best to help the neighbors and take care of the old people at weekends as a volunteer. At school, I get on well with my classmates and help them with their lessons. I also send my books and clothes to the chil dren who live in poor areas. I’m very proud I have made many friends by helping others in need.
I believe our society will become better and better if everyone shows kindness to each other.【解析】
【详解】
本文属于话题作文，谈谈生活中你对他人提供善意帮助的经历。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如be kind to, each other, be in
trouble, give a hand, try one’s best to do, take care of, get on well with, help sb with等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
3．（·浙江中考模拟）书面表达
假如你是Li Ming, 最近你的英国笔友Susan要来温州体验中国的传统文化，请你为Susan设计温州一日游的活动，帮助她体验温州的文化习俗。请根据以下要点用英语给她写一封电子邮件：
1.计划去的地方；
2.一日游的活动安排；
3.阐述安排的理由
要求：1. 不能出现真实的个人身份信息；
2. 词数：110词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Susan,
I’m glad to he ar that you are coming to Wenzhou._______________________________________ Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】Dear Susan,
I’m glad to hear that you are coming to Wenzhou soon， where there are lots of places of interest． To experience traditional Chinese culture better， We can begin our tour by going sightseeing along Wenzhou Road． I bet you will be attracted． Along the Wenzhou Road．not only can you watch the wonderful scenery， but also you will find many historical relics， from which you can learn a lot of traditional culture．
Sincerely waiting for your coming!
Yours，
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
本文是一篇书信作文。根据以下要点用英语给她写一封电子邮件。文章时态用一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称。本文所给材料比较详细，考生要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并可适当发挥。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
【点睛】
点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求。
4．（·浙江中考模拟）
如今，很多父母很关心孩子的学习，想随时监控孩子的学习状况如下图中 Tony 的母亲。请简要描述图片内容，分析图中现象，谈谈你的看法和建议，并写一篇 110 词左右的短文向Parents 杂志投稿，让父母们通过阅读你的文章有所启发。
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________【答案】Tony's mother wanted to keep watch on Tony's study. She was wrong to do so. First of all, he violated the right to privacy. It also disturbs Tony's study and makes him respond strongly. From a child's point of view, children may yearn for independence. What they want is affirmation of their own abilities. But excessive supervision itself denies and distrusts their own abilities. Although we never mean to look down on their own children, maybe they don't think so. When children find themselves under surveillance, how can they confide in us in the future? It will also affect the future self-confidence building, which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parent-child relationship. In any case, family environment is the root of children, but first of all, it must be stable and reliable. In this way, monitoring children's learning is of little significance. We should always do our part well. Let children learn and grow in a relatively independent environment.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇图画作文，根据图片中的相关信息介绍一下父母为了关心孩子的学习，想随时监控孩子的学习状况，就这样对吗？仔细分析所提供的图片内容，主要从你的看法和建议这个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含图片中的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
【高分句型一】
When children find themselves under surveillance, how can they confide in us in the future? 当
孩子们发现自己受到监视时，他们将来怎么能向我们吐露心声呢？
句子When children find themselves under surveillance是由when引导的时间状语从句。【高分句型二】
It will also affect the future self-confidence building, which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parent-child relationship. 这也会影响未来的自信心建设，也会导致更多的担忧儿童，形成影响亲子关系的恶性循环。
which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parent-child relationship.是由which引导的定语从句。
5．（·北京中考模拟）中国传统文化源远流长，代代相传。近期各校都在开展学习中国传统文化活动。某网站正在开展以“弘扬中国传统文化”为题征文，请你用英文写一篇报道，介绍你校上周举办的“讲中国成语故事”活动并谈谈你的收获与感受。
提示词语： Chinese idioms, story, collect, share, learn from, acient
提示问题：● What did you do during the activity of "Telling Chinese idioms story"?
● What did you learn from the activity?
● What do you think of it?
【答案】The activity of “Telling Chinese idioms story” was held in our school last week.
In order to take part in this activity, I collected lots of Chinese idiom stories in advance. Many students, including me, actively shared the Chinese idiom stories in the activity. After each story, the teacher explained the meaning of idioms and how to use it correctly. We learned a lot from our teacher.
I did lots of reading in the process of preparati on. My reading ability has improved greatly. What’s more, I realized the richness of Chinese acient culture. I really had a good time on the activity.【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：这是一篇提纲类书面表达，只给了一些要点提示，但都不很明确。学生除了要把所给要点提示都表达出来外，还要进行适当拓展，使文章内容充实。
2.例文点评：例文采用三段式；用第一人称来叙述讲成语故事活动；因为活动已经举办，所以时态采用一般过去时；对参加活动的过程描写完整且条理清晰。
3.高分亮点：
短语：in order to，take part in，lots of，learn from，in the process of，What’s more，have a good time。
句型：被动句型。
6．（·北京中考模拟）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友 Jack 给你写邮件表达了想参加你校暑期为外国学生举办的汉语夏令营的愿望，希望你告知活动举办的具体时间地点，活动安排以及你的建议。
提示词语： Chinese classes, learn, attend, culture, prepare
提示问题：● When and where will the Chinese Summer Camp be held?
● What activities will be held at the Chinese Summer Camp?
● What is your advice for Jack?
Dear Jack,
I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in our
school this summer holiday .
.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jack,
I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in our school this summer holiday.
The Chinese Summer Camp will be held in our school from July 10th to July 30th this summer. The activities of this Chinese Summer Camp are as follows:
First, you will attend Chinese classes, learning the meaning of Chinese characters.
Second, you will take part in different parties, knowing the history of China and Chinese culture, especially Chinese holidays, which will impress you deeply.
What’s more, you will have chances to visit some museums and the Great Wall. What you should prepare is a pair of shoes for the visit.
If you have any questions, please tell me. I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua 【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：这是一篇提纲类书面表达，只给了一些要点提示，但都不很明确。学生除了要把所给要点提示都表达出来外，还要进行适当拓展，使文章内容充实。
2.例文点评：该题要求写作体裁为书信格式，所以例文用第一人称I进行写作，在文章结尾也按照标准书信格式进行了收尾。文章时态用一般现在时和一般将来时。文章条理分明，三个要点提示都已表达清楚，并进行了适当拓展，所给单词也都全部用上。
3.高分亮点：
短语：as follows，take part in，What’s more，look forward to。
句型：被动句型，现在分词作状语，主语从句。
7．（·北京中考模拟）4月23日是“世界读书日”，你校英语俱乐部正在开展主题为“多读书，读好书”的活动。假如你是李华，请你写一封倡议书，向全体同学发出号召。内容包括：应该读什么样的书，以及读书的意义。
提示词语：story, novel, knowledge, improve, important
提示问题：● What kind of books should we read? ● Why do we read?
Dear students, the World Reading Day is coming.
So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books.
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear students, the World Reading Day is coming. As a middle school student, everyone should read books. Firstly, reading increases our knowledge and we can learn the world affairs without going out. Secondly, reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills. Finally, reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future. Therefore, start to reading, no matter how old you are and what you are doing.
So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more book s and read good books.
Li Hua 【解析】
【详解】
题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时要按照应用文格式写，写作时承接短文开头，写出对学生的倡议。
例文点评：例文采用的是一段式，写的是阅读的好处，时态采用的是一般现在时，描述倡议时，描写细致，条理清晰。
高分亮点：
短语：Firstly；Secondly；Finally；a good way to do sth；broaden our knowledge and horizon。
句型：reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills；reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future。
8．（·辽宁中考模拟）（B）根据要求完成大作文,词数:80-100
体育运动是中学生的共同爱好.请根据下面提示写一篇题为What We Get from Sports 的短文,应该包含以下要点:
1,学生参加体育运动的兴趣不同,理由各异.
2.多数学生学习疲倦时,通过运动来放松自己.
3.男孩参加各项体育运动,希望运动能使自己更强壮.
4.女孩也喜欢运动，希望运动使自己减肥和保持健康,苗条.
5.你对运动的观点.
6.注意:文中不得出现自己的名字和学校的名字
7.短文开头已给出,不计入词数.
8.参考词语:keep slim （保持苗条）
What We Get from Sports
Students in our school have one thing in common an interest in
sports._________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________
【答案】Students in our school have one thing in common an interest in sports. But different students have different reasons for taking part in sports.
Many students have sports when they feel tired after study. They just want to relax themselves and have fun. Most boys love sports. They take part in all kinds of sports in order to become stronger. They join in the sports that interest them most, such as soccer, basketball and volleyball. As for girls, they want to lose weight. They want to keep slim, so they also like taking exercise.
In my opinion, no matter what reasons we have, we all can get a lot from sports.
【解析】
【详解】
本篇写作主要是谈论自己对运动的观点和看法，应该用一般现在时态，写作要点要包括：1.提出目前学生对运动的不同看法及原因。2.具体分析（多数学生的观点、男生的观点、女生的观点）。3.提出自己对运动的观点。
亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好地完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态，主谓一致，在文中使用了时间状语从句，定语从句，特别使用一些亮点词句，如have fun，in order to，as for，in my opinion等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，句子通顺，行文连贯。
9．（·陕西师大附中中考模拟）书面表达
“文明是一面镜子，折射出一座城市的品质”。西安作为一座古老的城市在创建国际化大都市的过程中，离不开精神文明建设。在你身边有哪些不文明现象？作为中学生，我们应该从哪些方面做起，为文明城市的建设出一份力？请根据提示词，以“Let’s help Xi’an be better”为题，号召全体中学生共创美好西安。
提示词：spit 吐痰； respect; traffic rules; volunteer; collect the trash; plant trees; clean the streets; an environmental project….
要求：1. 不少于70词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
3. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁。
Let’s help Xi’an be better
Our city is making its effort to become an international city. But in our daily life, we
find_____________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________
【答案】Let’s help Xi’an be better
Our city is making its effort to become an international city. But in our daily life, we find many
bad behaviors around us. For example, many students spit everywhere. Some students don’t follow the traffic rules. Also, some students don’t respect others. These are not right. As students, we should do our part to build a civilized city. We can plant more trees to make our environment better. On weekends, we can help clean the streets and collect the trash in public places. Besides, we can do volunteer work to help others. Let’s work together to make our city more civilized and more beautiful.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们阐述身边的不文明现象，并阐述我们应该如何做，为文明城市的建设出一份力。题目中只给出了话题和一些提示词，具体的写作内容应由学生们自己发挥想象力，进行补充，这是写作中的一个难点。需要注意题目中给出的提示词在文章中必须要用上，可以根据表达需要调整顺序。写作时，学生们可以根据提示词，或联想自己的实际生活，列举身边的不文明现象，然后对创建文化城市提出自己的看法。审题可知，短文应以一般现在时态为主，第一人称来叙述。写作时应注意英语句式结构和汉语是不同的，不能按照汉语思维逐词翻译，应从句子的整体结构考虑，写完整的句子，并注意使用适当的句型去表达，变化单词的正确形式。为提升文章档次，在文章中应穿插几个并列句或复合句的结构。同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目提示，介绍了自己身边的不文明现象，并对中学生如何创建文明城市贡献自己的力量提出了自己的看法。短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整，包括了题目中要求的所有信息，且叙述完整，内容充实。文章内容分成两个部分：第一部分列举了一些不文明现象；第二部分介绍了为创建文明城市，中学生应该怎么做。层次清晰，结构合理。其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确。句式结构完整，以简单句为主，叙述清楚、简洁。短文中的一些好的句型和短语有Also, some students don’t respect others、As students, we should do our part to build a civilized city.、We can plant more trees to make our environment better. 、On weekends, we can help clean the streets and collect the trash in public places. 、Besides, we can do volunteer work to help others等。
10．（·江苏中考模拟）假设你是Beth,前段时间曾向英语校刊投送一篇题为My English Teacher Miss Zhang的短诗。近日，又至毕业季，师生们忙着互致临别赠言。为此，编辑部策划开“A Letter to My Teacher”专栏，邀请你以信件的形式重新投稿。短诗如下：
My English Teacher Miss Zhang
There is a teacher, Miss Zhang,
Who is friendly, patient and helpful.
Always encouraging us to try,
She leads us to a world of "why".
We all respect and admire her.
注意事项：
1.稿件内容须根据短诗展开合理想象，不得抄写短诗原文：
2.要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合情境。
3.词数在70个左右，稿件的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数：
4.稿件必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________
【答案】Dear Editorial Office,
I am writing to recommend as The Most Popular Teacher．She is Miss Zhang.
She is my English teacher． She is in her forties． Her small round glasses make her look smart． She often works to high standards and is willing to work extra hours． She is kind and helpful， too． She always helps us with our study． She loves jogging， so she looks healthy． To my surprise， she has donated blood many times since 2001． She has also decided to donate her body for medical research after her death． I really love her and I want to be a teacher like her in the future． I think Miss Zhang is the most suitable person to be the Most Popular Teacher．
I hope that you agree with me．
Yours sincerely，
Beth,【解析】
【详解】
本文是一篇给材料作文。根据编辑部策划开“A Letter to My Teacher”专栏，邀请你以信件的形式重新投稿。文章时态用一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称。本文所给材料比较详细，考生要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并可适当发挥。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
【点睛】
点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检
查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
11．（·陕西西北工业大学附属中学中考模拟）当代雷锋郭明义，在《幸福就这么简单》一书中，用自己的点滴平凡小事诠释出幸福的真谛。幸福就围绕在我们身边，简单得触手可得，平凡得召之即来。那你的幸福观又是什么呢？请以 My Happiness 为题写一篇短文。内容包括以下方面：
1. 你认为幸福是什么？
2. 描述一件令你感到幸福的事（需交代时间、地点、过程与感受）。
3. 以自己的感悟揭示：应该如何创造幸福。
写作要求：
1. 短文结构完整，意思连贯，语言流畅，语法准确，符合逻辑；
2. 卷面干净整洁；
3. 词数 80 左右；
4. 开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
My Happiness
After reading Guo Mingyi’s “Happiness Is So Simple”, I am deeply moved by his view on happiness. As for
me,____________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________【答案】Happiness is important in our life. In fact, happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it.
I will never forget one thing. Once, I had a bad mark at a math test. I was shy and afraid to meet my parents. But when I got back home late, my parents knew what happened, they said to me: “It doesn’t matter, my child. Remember we’ll be always beside you when you need help. We believe you can be better next time. Never give up!” I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder.
I feel happy. Whenever I am in trouble, I can f eel my parents’ love. I want to be a good child for my parents.
【解析】
【详解】
幸福就围绕在我们身边，简单得触手可得，平凡得召之即来，这篇作文要求写一写自己的幸福观，描述自己对于幸福的定义，描述一件到幸福的事，最后谈谈应该如何创造幸福，要注意叙述流畅，在描述过去的幸福往事的时候要注意正确使用时态，可以使用到的短语表达有：happiness is always around you 幸福总在你身边；put your heart into it 把你的心投
入其中；had a bad mark at a math test 数学考试成绩很差；afraid to meet my parents 害怕见家长；got back home late 回家晚；be always beside you一直在你身旁；need help需要帮助；Never give up永不放弃；made up my mind to下定决心去做…；in trouble有困难。总体来说这篇文章分为三大段，条理清晰，叙述完整，完成了既定的写作任务。
12．（·北京中考模拟）题目①
假如你是李华，你们学校的英国友好校下周将要来访。学校国际部正在招募接待英国学生的志愿者，陪伴他们度过周末。你想成为志愿者。请用英语写一封申请信，在信中说明你申请的理由，以及你打算拿给英国学生安排哪些周末活动。
提示词语：get along with, friendly, places of interest, Chinese dishes
提示问题：1. Why would you like to be a volunteer?
2. What do you plan to do during the weekend?
Dear Sir/Madam，
I would like to be a volunteer to receive the British students.
I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours，Li Hiua
【答案】Dear SiraMadam.
I would like to be a volunteer to receive the British students I like making friends andI am outgoing，so it's easy for me to get along well with them.
I have some plans for the weekends.First of all，there are a lot of places of interest in Beijing，so I plan to take them to some places like the Great Wall，the Forbidden City and so on.
I'll also cook some Chinese dishes for them.I am sure they will have a great and unforgettable time in Beijing.
I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours，Li lHua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇是材料作文，以书信格式，根据所给材料写申请信；书写时材料要用全，注意紧扣主题，结构严谨。
【详解】
1.本篇是书信格式，以第一人称向学校国际部申请当志愿者；根据材料提示，介绍自己的情况用一般现在时，计划如何安排周末活动用一般将来时。
2.本例文层次分明，第一层阐述自己申请的理由，介绍自己开朗的性格适合志愿者的工作；
第二层详细介绍给英国学生安排哪些周末活动；最后表明自己的期待。文体正确，文句通顺，内容完整。
3.本例文恰当地使用了很多的短语和句型，是文章文句精彩。如：用不定式would like to be
a volunteer to receive the British students阐述自己的愿望，make friends、It's easy for me to
get along well with等介绍自己合适志愿者的工作；用动词短语have some plans for、介词短语like the Great Wall，the Forbidden City and so on.、宾语从句I am sure they will have a great and unforgettable time in Beijing.详细介绍周末的活动，短语丰富，句型多样。
13．（·扬州市江都区第三中学中考模拟）毕业之际，学校要求每位九年级学生给各自家长写封信，简要汇报三年来初中生活的收获与存在的问题。假如你是Jim,请根据下表的提示，用英文做一个简短的汇报。
要求：
（1）：表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
（2）：必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥；
（3）：不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
（4）：词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
Dear Dad ＆ Mum ,
I’ll leave junior school soon and meet a new challenge of my life. Now I would like to tell you what I have done in the past three years
_______________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ Jim
【答案】例文Dear Dad ＆ Mum ,
I’ll leave junior school soon and meet a new challenge of my life. Now I would like to tell you what I have done in the past three years.
I have learnt a lot of knowledge from the books and I have improved my study skills. I have learnt about a lot of famous people all over the world. Tan dun is a great musician. He said his music is to dream without boundaries. I can also get along with my teachers and help each other too. At home I can do some housework so that you can have more time to rest. When I meet difficulty, I can talk to my friends about it.
However, I feel stressed in my study. I have a lot of homework to do everyday .As a result, I have no time for my hobbies.
I would thank you for taking good care of me and thank my teachers and friends for their help. I will plan my time well to study better and sleep well.
Yours sincerely
Jim
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇书信作文。在毕业之际，学校要求每位九年级学生给各自家长写封信，简要汇报三年来初中生活的收获与存在的问题。假如你是Jim，要求根据表格的提示内容，用英文做一个简短的汇报。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。在写作过程中，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
14．（·浙江中考模拟）假如你是李华，是某英文电台“ Say it”栏目的兼职编辑。最近你收到一名叫王平的中学生发来的电子邮件，向你们栏目组求助。请你根据电子邮件内容给她回复一封电子邮件，帮助她解答困惑。
Dear Li Hua,
I' m a middle school student. Recently I argued with my parents over using Wechat. You know Wechat has become a part of our everyday life, but my pa rents don’t allow me to use it. What 's worse, they have changed my password（密码）so that I can’t use it. There has been a "cold war" between us for over a week. What should I do?
Yours,
Wang Ping
要求：1．语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯；
2．词数80-100左右，电子邮件的格式、开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
参考词汇：欺骗tick；许可permission
Dear Wang Ping,
I'm sorry to hear that you are having problems with your parents because of using
Wechat.________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________
I believe things will get better,
Yours
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Wang Ping
I‘m sorry to hear that you are having problems with your parents because of using Wechat. In fact,
your problem is very common . Cheer up and let’s find a good way to solve it.
You may be tricked or get into trouble when you use Wechat. Also, using it for a long time is bad
for your health, especially for your eyes. Maybe your parents worry about these things. In my
opinion, communication is very important. Why not have a good talk with your parents about
how to use Wechat properly? Try t elling them you won’t use it for too long and won’t use it when
you are studying. What more. tell them you’ll never add strangers without their permission.
I believe things will get better.
Yours
Li Hu
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇应用文写作，写一封回信。本题给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要
点，确定写作内容，并适当发挥。根据内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态和将来时态，写
作中注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意
连贯。
【点睛】
这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者根据题目要求,层次非常的清晰。短文中需要作者自己补充
的内容完成得也不错这些内容都比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些
比较好的句型Maybe your parents worry about these things. In my opinion, communication is
very important.；Why not have a good talk with your parents about how to use Wechat properly?
15．（·江苏中考模拟）加入你是英国交流学生 Neil，你在南京 Sunshine Middle School 两个
月的学习生活即将结束。请你根据以下提示，以 Neil的名义，用英语给 Sunshine Middle
School 校长写一封感谢信。
? what you've learned about Chinese culture
? how the teachers and students help you
? what your homestay family do for you
注意：
1. 对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥。
2. 词数 80 左右，感谢信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I would like to express my thanks to you. During my two-month stay in Nanjing, I feel really grateful for what you have done for us.
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I would like to express my thanks to you. During my two-month stay in Nanjing. I enjoyed myself
very much.
I took the rich and colourful courses. I have learned Chinse Kungfu from a P.E. teacher.It is really amazing! I also know something about Chinese paper-cutting in Art lessons.Though I can’t speak Chinese.I have little difficult talking with the teachers and students here,theyare always ready to help me.
I felt excited when I spent a weekend with a family. In their family,they taught me how to make dumplings.We also visited Confucins Temple.We had a good time together. I feel really grateful for what you have done for us.
【解析】
【详解】
本文是一篇书信作文。根据以下提示，以 Neil的名义，用英语给 Sunshine Middle School 校长写一封感谢信。文章时态用一般过去时，人称主要为第一人称。本文所给材料比较详细，考生要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并可适当发挥。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
【点睛】
点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
16．（·河南中考模拟）书面表达
初中生活即将结束。在这三年里你的生活中定不乏难以忘怀的人或事，请以“An unforgettable in my school life”为题，用英语写一篇短文。讲述
一个你最难忘的人或事。
要求: 1.请补全题目，如teacher. classmate或trip等:
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校姓名;
3.语言表达准确,短文连贯通顺，80词左右。
【答案】An unforgettable teacher in my school life
For these three years, I regard my English teacher as one of my best teachers. She not only helps me with my English but also cares for me in life. When I first learned English ,I dared not talk in her class because of my pronunciation. She taught me how to pronounce the words correctly again and again with patience. After class , she gave me lots of advice on how to learn English well. Now I can speak English as well as my classmates. She looks after me like my mother while I am busy studying. We have fun doing sports together .She is so kind and helpful that I can’t
forget her in my school life.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇是话题作文，介绍自己难忘的人或事。
【详解】
1.本篇要求学生自己补全题目，确定写作的目标，写自己3年初中校园生活里难忘的人或事，描述难忘的人用第三人称，讲述过去发生的事情用一般过去时，开头和结尾一般性阐述，用一般现在时；书写时要围绕中心“unforgettable”，叙述清楚具体的事件或情节，文章结构要清晰明了，注意短语、句型的正确使用。
2.本篇例文叙述难忘的英语老师，开头句“regard my English teacher as one of my best teachers.”直入主题，正文部分详细描述了老师如何耐心的多方面的帮助自己，结尾句.She is so kind and helpful that I can’t forget her in my school life.呼应中心词unforgettable。整篇文章结构严谨，紧扣主题，前呼后应。
3.高分亮点：巧用连词，not only…but also，because of as well as，so…that…句子得以有机结合；短语how to do sth，teach sb to do sth，care for也为文章的语言增色不少。
17．（·湖南中考模拟）阅读可以使人开阔视野，阅读可使人心旷神怡，不管是参加中国汉字听写大会，还是中国诗词大会，都需要有良好的阅读基础。下面请大家谈谈阅读的好处并在生活中养成良好的阅读习惯。
注意：作文字数，不低于60字.
参考词汇：increase our knowledge open up our eyes improve writing skills
learn the world affairs without going out make the life colorful
Reading is very important in the whole life for people. There are many benefits of reading
____________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________ Therefore, start reading, no matter how old you are and what you are doing. Then, you may find the great charm and benefits of reading.
【答案】Reading is very important in the whole life for people. There are many benefits of reading.
Firstly, reading increases our knowledge. It teaches us skills about getting a good job, cooking and so on. Secondly, reading is a good way to improve writing skills. Before you learn to write, you must know how others write. Thirdly, reading can open up our eyes and we can learn the world affairs without going out. we can know how things happened in the history and how to avoid bad things from happening. Finally, reading all kinds of books can make our life colorful.
Therefore, start reading, no matter how old you are and what you are doing. Then, you may find the great charm and benefits of reading
【解析】
此篇书面表达是根据提示介绍读书的好处及养成良好的阅读习惯。文章的时态以写作时为主。写作时注意firstly，secondly，thirdly，Finally的使用。开篇点题，分析读书的好处。最后发出呼吁让人们读书。
18．（·中央民族大学附属中学昆明五华实验学校中考模拟）A good book is important to me 要求：1. 紧扣主题，意思连贯，语言通顺，书写规范。2. 不得使用真实姓名和校名，如需使用名字，请用Mike, Gina等英文名字; 校名统一使用Guangming Middle School。3. 词数不少于60。
【答案】A good book is important for me. It can not only help broaden my horizons, but also give me inspiration. From the good book, I can learn what others think, and their views about the world. What’s more, I can even live their li ves, which are totally different from mine. For me, a good book is really like a good friend, who can teach me how to solve the problems when I am in trouble. A good book helps me a lot, and it is quite important for me in my life.
【解析】
【分析】
本题是命题作文，根据题目一本好书对我是重要的，自己写相关内容，可以是你读了什么书，该书对你产生了什么影响。也可以是一本好书为什么对你来说是重要的。
【详解】
本篇文章主要从为什么对我重要这个角度来写。文章时态主要用一般现在时，人称为第一人称。题目并没有给过多的提示信息，所以需要学生自己思索行文内容。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
【点睛】
首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
19．（·天津中考模拟）书面表达
86. 如今，中学生的学习时间长，压力大。上周我班学生对如何减压、放松进行了讨论。大家提出了许多种减压、放松的方法。请根据提示，以How Can We get relaxed为题，写一篇短文。
词汇：压力pressure
要求：
（1）词数：80~100个。
（2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥
How Can We Get Relaxed
These days, many students study too long every day and suffer from great pressure. Last week, my class had a discussion on how to get relaxed and reduce the pressure.
【答案】These days, many students study too long every day and suffer from great pressure. Last week, my class had a discussion on how to get relaxed and reduce the pressure。
The students offered different good suggestions. As well as going to the movie, listening to music, even going sightseeing at the weekends, some students think it a good way to take exercise between lessons. After all, too long study without exercise is harmful to our health. Other students feel it important to communicate with our parents. We can get help from them when we are in trouble.
In my opinion, we should spend a little time developing our hobbies like reading or doing sports while working hard. In this way, we can get relaxed and reduce the pressure.
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于话题作文，主要讲述如何减压放松。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如as well as，a good way to，take exercise，after all，be harmful to，communicate with，get help from，be in trouble，in my opinion，spend+时间+（in）doing以及in this way，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符
合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
20．（·无锡市江南中学中考模拟）书面表达
亲子关系是目前广受关注的话题。假设你是张华，你正在以“如何与父母更好地相处” 为题进行英语自主课程研究。通过搜集资料，你查找到中国青少年研究中心（CYCRC）近日就中美两国亲子关系进行了问卷调查，结果如下表。请你根据下表选取并整合你认为有用的信息，结合你的实际经历以How to get along well with parents为题写一篇感想。
注意事项：
1.内容须根据表格数据和实际经历合理展开；
2.要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合情境；
3.词数在90个左右，首尾已经在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；
4. 内容必须写在答题卡指定的位置。
【答案】How to get along well with parents
More and more people begin to focus on the parent-child relationship. Here’s my understanding of how to get along well with our parents.
CYCRC did a survey in the United States and China. The results showed that 48.1% of Chinese children often talk to their parents, far fewer than the Americans. More understanding lies in American parent-child relationship. I think we should not only talk often but open our heart. For example, when I got low marks in exams, I always talked to my parents. They helped me find the reason and encouraged me. I also shared my secrets and worries with them. A good relationship requires efforts from both parents and children.