西安郭杜大学城学校面表达汇编中考英语专项训练含答案解析
一、中考英语书面表达汇编
1．（·四川中考模拟）旅行是学习的最好方式之一。请以“Travelling”为题，根据以下思维导图的提示，写一篇短文，并发表你的看法。
注意：
1. 要点齐全，适当发挥；
2. 从思维导图Sayings部分，选择恰当的格合理利用在短文中；
3. 词数：100词左右；
【答案】例文
Travelling is one of the best ways for learning. You may have read or heard about something, but you can never get an exact picture of it until you see it yourself. Seeing is believing. If you are a careful observer, you can learn much during your travel about the geography, biology, and history of the places you visit. You can also create great memories for your lifetime. Furthermore, while travelling, you can meet more people and make more friends. No matter how well educated you
are, there is always a lot for you to learn through travelling.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如one of the best ways，learn much，an exact picture of，a careful observer，seeing is believing，no matter，a lot等。而非谓语动词结构Seeing is believing./ Furthermore, while travelling, you can meet more people and make more friends.和If you are a careful observer, you can learn much during your travel about the geography, biology, and history of the places you visit./ No matter how well educated you are, there is always a lot for you to learn through travelling.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
2．（·河南中考模拟）“苔花如米小,也学牡丹开。”我们大多数人虽然微不足道,但也能有所作为。请以One thing I felt very proud of 为题用英语写以写一篇短文,描述你曾经做过得引以自豪一件事情。
要求:1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;2.词数80左右。
【答案】One thing I felt very proud of
I will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother. To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday. I tried many times but failed before she came back. Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned. However, I didn’t give up, and finally I succeeded. Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears.
I felt proud of cooking on my own.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以One thing I felt very proud of为题，介绍自己曾经做过的一件令自己感到自豪的事情。作文是开放式的，题目中只给了主题，具体的写作内容，需要学生们自己发挥想象力去补充。审题可知，体裁是记叙文，记叙一件自己做过的事情，且是能让自己感到自豪的，故文章应使用一般过去时，人称以第一人称为主。短文应由开头、主体和结尾三部分组成，开头引出话题；第二部分为中心，具体描述事情的过程；最后一部分简要描写一下自己的感受。写作时应注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能按照汉语思维逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语，应从句子的整体结构出发，使用较常见、易于把握的简单句结构，如主谓宾或主系表结构。为提升作文档次，穿插使用并列句或复合句，如宾语从句、状语从句等。或使用祈使句、非谓语动词、感叹句等特殊句式结构。语句之间使用恰当的
连接成分，以使文意连贯。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求描述了自己做过的一件引以为豪的事情。短文有如下几个特点：首先短文内容完整、充实，叙述具体，详细，作者描写了自己做饭给妈妈庆祝生日这件事，符合题目要求。文章分三段，第一段用一句话引出话题；第二段详细描写了事情的过程；最后一段写了自己的感受。结构清晰，安排合理。其次短文里使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般过去时、第一人称叙述，注意了谓语动词过去式的变化，尤其是不规则动词的过去式。语言得体，语法规范，句式结构以简单句为主，也使用了时间状语从句、并列句、非谓语动词等复杂句式结构。短文中较好的句型和短语有：I will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.、To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday、Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned、Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears等。
3．（·山东中考模拟）写作
假定你是李华，在一位名叫Tiger Mom的学生家长的博客上，你看到以下内容。请你根据博客内容，写作要点和要求，给这位家长回复。
I’m the mother of a fourteen-year –old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ?
写作要点：1. 表明自己的看法。
2. 陈述自己的理由。
3. 提出至少2条建议。
【答案】Hi,TigerMom,
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China.My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so.
Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university
admission,development in wisdom,emotion,health,and life attitude should never be ignored. There are
many examples around us. Some all-A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in
society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore,punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up
mentally and physically.
So I suggest that you take your friends' advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl；let her
have more friends and social activities；and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do.
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文，对学生家长的博客进行回复。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：My idea is that……，There are……，Some all-A students in school have…….，The reason is……，So I suggest that……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头表明自己的看法，接下来陈述自己的理由，最后介绍自己的建议。此处turn out , by no means, help sb do sth, grow up, let sb do sth, make mistakes, of one’s own等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
4．（·海南中考模拟）假如你是Tom, 你的父亲工作很忙，经常熬夜，吸烟，很少吃早餐，也没有时间锻炼，所以身体不太好。6月17日是父亲节，请你根据你父亲的情况，给他写一封信，谈谈你的看法并给他提一些具体的建议。
要求:1. 意思连贯，语言流畅，语法正确，书写规范。
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称等信息。
3. 词数:80词左右，开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Dad,
This letter is a gift for the Father’s Day.
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Happy Father’s Day, Dad!
Yours,
Tom 【答案】Dear Dad,
This letter is a gift for the Father’s Day. June 17 is Father's Day, and I sincerely wish you good health. I know that you are busy working all day and often stay up late to work. The next day you often go to work without having breakfast. You smoke a lot to relieve the pressure of work, but it’s really bad for your health. Long hours of work and little exercise make you unhealthy, I am worried about your body.
Health is more important to you. I hope you can take care of your body and don’t st ay up late at night. Smoking is harmful to health, so give up smoking as soon as possible. I hope you can exercise in your spare time. I wish you have a strong and healthy body. Happy Father’s Day, Dad!
Yours,
Tom 【解析】
【详解】
考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。通读材
料可知，这是一篇向父亲表达情感的写作。因为是写给父亲的一封书信，因此人称为第二人称。时态为一般现在时态。要根据短文提示，把父亲身体不好的原因写清楚，并提出中肯的建议，表达出对父亲的体贴与关爱，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。要求语句通顺、意思连贯。文章结构紧凑、行文连贯、表达清楚。
5．（·湖南中考模拟）书面表达
假如你校英语社团即将举办为“My hobby” 的征文活动，请你根据下面的提示问题写一篇短文介绍你的爱好，然后参加此活动。
提示问题：
1. What’s your hobby?
2. Why do you like it?
3. When did you start it?
4. How do you benefit from（得益于） it?
要求：
1. 紧扣主题，语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯；
2. 不少于80词。
My hobby
【答案】My Hobby
I have many hobbies, such as singing, listening to music, reading and so on. But my favorite hobby is swimming. Because I think it is cool and relaxing. In summer days, it's always very hot. We can’t do any sports but swim. So I often go swimming with my friends in my hot summer. I began to learn swimming when I was eight years old. And now I am a good swimmer. Last year I got the first prize in a swimming competition. And I hope I can swim in the sea one day.
【解析】
【详解】
本篇作文按照要求可分为4块儿内容，首先指出我的爱好是什么But my favorite hobby is swimming.，接着说明为什么喜欢这个爱好Because I think it is cool and relaxing....., 然后I began to learn swimming when I was eight years old.我开始这个爱好的时间，最后Last year I got the first prize in a swimming competition. And I hope I can swim in the sea one day.自己的收获以及期望. 中间用到短语such as…,以及连词because…., when….and…等，使文章表达清晰，也具有连贯性，时态运用正确，是一篇不错的文章。
6．（·吉林省实验中考模拟）B）初中生活马上就要结束了,三年的初中生活一定给你留下
了很多挥之不去的回忆。请你给大家讲一个最值得你回忆的故事。包括时间、人物、事情经过和事后你的感想。
要求：
1.文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
2.语句流畅，过渡自然，语法正确，富有逻辑性。
3. 注意时态的正确使用，80-100词。
提示词语: three years, memories, one of, one day, think, happy/ sorry
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【答案】How time flies! I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate from middle school in a month. I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you.
I had so many memories in three years’ life. One of them impressed me very much. I s till remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, she has kept helping me. Little by little, I’ve become interested in English and I’m good at it. I think I am so lucky to become one of her students. I’ve learned a lot from her.
I will try to help others when they are in trouble. I think it is a happy thing to help others.
【解析】
【分析】
本文一篇话题作文。
【详解】
英语作文一般分为三个部分：
第一部分：交代写作目的：即将毕业，想和大家分享这三年的经历。
第二部分：具体介绍三年中最难忘的经历：别人帮助我的经历。
第三部分：总结全文。我愿意帮助别人。
7．（·扬州中学教育集团树人学校初三）现在有些学生缺乏“感恩”意识，对待家人、朋友、老师等很冷漠，而且行为方式和价值观令人担忧。请你根据下表中所提供的信息，以“Learn to Express Thanks” 为题，用英语写一篇演讲稿。
要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；2）必须包括表格中的相关信息，并适当发挥；3）词数：100词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Good morning, boys and girls!
The topic of my speech today is “L earn to express
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Thanks for your listening.
【答案】Good morning, boys and girls!
The topic of my speech today is “Learn to express thanks.” Nowadays some students consider it natural to eat well and wear fashionable clothes. They think it is their parents’ duty to provide a happy life for them. Howeve r, they don’t show any sense of “Thanks”.
I don’t think it’s right. It’s our parents who take good care of us and love us very much. In addition, we are supposed to be thankful to our teachers for teaching us so much knowledge. What’s more, we should say thanks to our friends because they share joy with us and give us courage to overcome many difficulties.
In my opinion, it’s time for us to learn to express thanks to them. First of all, we should be polite to our parents and teachers. Besides, we should try our best to help others when they are in trouble. Last but not least, we must study harder to make a great contribution to our country in the future. And only in this way can we better reward our parents, teachers, friends and so on. Thanks for your listening.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如provide a happy life，any sense of，take good care of；very much，be supposed to do；be thankful to，so much，share with，what’s more，say thanks to，in my opinion，be polite to，try our best，in trouble，in the future，and so on 等。而固定句型it’s time for us to learn to express thanks to them.和They think it is their parents’ duty to provide a happy life for them,/ It’s our parents who take good care of us and love us very much./ we should try our best to help others when they are in trouble.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
8．（·北京中考模拟）题目②
“持之以恒，方得始。”坚持是一种可贵的品格。生活中想要做成任何一件事情，都需要持之以恒的精神。
某英文网站正在开展以“坚持”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿。谈淡你在初中生活中坚持的一件事（爱好，习惯……），你是怎样做的，以及你的感受。
提示词语：keep, practice, difficult, give up, proud
提示问题：1. What did you do?
2. How do you feel?
It s important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals.
【答案】It's important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals.I love running and I have kept running for three years.
When I was in Grade 7，I was not good at sports and running was always my headache.I often failed in my running test.In order to catch up with my classmates，I began to practice running every day after school.Sometimes，I was so tired that I really wanted to give up.But I kept telling myself that I could make it.No matter what kind of difficulties I faced，I tried my best to keep running.Now I do much better in running and I'm very proud of myself.I feel more confident and I'm ready for any challenges in the future.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇是材料作文，根据所给提示写一篇自己在初中生活中坚持做的事；文中写明自己是怎么做的并谈谈自己的感受。
【详解】
1.本篇要求根据所给材料，用第一人称写初中生活中自己坚持做的一件事，根据提示，描写“What did you do?用一般过去时，描写How do you feel?用一般现在时。书写时要紧扣主题，文句通顺。
2.本例文开篇立即点明自己的坚持做的事是“跑步”，正文部分详细地描写了自己起初跑步总是不及格，通过克服困难、不懈地努力，坚持跑步，到现在比以前会跑；结尾谈了这件事对自己的影响；文章结构清晰，前后呼应。
3.本例文出彩之处在于用了很多的短语和重点句型。比如：固定搭配、固定句型It's +adj+ for us +to do sth、love doing sth、keep doing 、be good at、 catch up with、be proud of；不定式in order to；try my best to；状语从句so…that …；比较级do much better in …、feel more confident等；短语多彩、文句表达多样。
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9．（·陕西师大附中中考模拟）书面表达
“文明是一面镜子，折射出一座城市的品质”。西安作为一座古老的城市在创建国际化大都市的过程中，离不开精神文明建设。在你身边有哪些不文明现象？作为中学生，我们应该从哪些方面做起，为文明城市的建设出一份力？请根据提示词，以“Let’s help Xi’an be better”为题，号召全体中学生共创美好西安。
提示词：spit 吐痰； respect; traffic rules; volunteer; collect the trash; plant trees; clean the streets; an environmental project….
要求：1. 不少于70词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
3. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁。
Let’s help Xi’an be better
Our city is making its effort to become an international city. But in our daily life, we
find_____________
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【答案】Let’s help Xi’an be better
Our city is making its effort to become an international city. But in our daily life, we find many bad behaviors around us. For example, many students spit everywhere. Some students don’t follow the traffic rules. Also, some students don’t respect others. These are not right. As students, we should do our part to build a civilized city. We can plant more trees to make our environment better. On weekends, we can help clean the streets and collect the trash in public places. Besides, we can do volunteer work to help others. Let’s work together to make our city more civilized and more beautiful.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们阐述身边的不文明现象，并阐述我们应该如何做，为文明城市的建设出一份力。题目中只给出了话题和一些提示词，具体的写作内容应由学生们自己发挥想象力，进行补充，这是写作中的一个难点。需要注意题目中给出的提示词在文章中必须要用上，可以根据表达需要调整顺序。写作时，学生们可以根据提示词，或联想自己的实际生活，列举身边的不文明现象，然后对创建文化城市提出自己的看法。审题可知，短文应以一般现在时态为主，第一人称来叙述。写作时应注意英语句式结构和汉语是不同的，不能按照汉语思维逐词翻译，应从句子的整体结构考虑，写完整的句子，并注意使用适当的句型去表达，变化单词的正确形式。为提升文章档次，在文章中应穿插几个并列句或复合句的结构。同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目提示，介绍了自己身边的不文明现象，并对中学生如何创建文明城市贡献自己的力量提出了自己的看法。短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整，包括了题目中要求的所有信息，且叙述完整，内容充实。文章内容分成两个部
分：第一部分列举了一些不文明现象；第二部分介绍了为创建文明城市，中学生应该怎么做。层次清晰，结构合理。其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确。句式结构完整，以简单句为主，叙述清楚、简洁。短文中的一些好的句型和短语有Also, some students don’t respect others、As students, we should do our part to build a civilized city.、We can plant more trees to make our environment better. 、On weekends, we can help clean the streets and collect the trash in public places. 、Besides, we can do volunteer work to help others等。
10．（·无锡市江南中学中考模拟）书面表达
亲子关系是目前广受关注的话题。假设你是张华，你正在以“如何与父母更好地相处” 为题进行英语自主课程研究。通过搜集资料，你查找到中国青少年研究中心（CYCRC）近日就中美两国亲子关系进行了问卷调查，结果如下表。请你根据下表选取并整合你认为有用的信息，结合你的实际经历以How to get along well with parents为题写一篇感想。
注意事项：
1.内容须根据表格数据和实际经历合理展开；
2.要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合情境；
3.词数在90个左右，首尾已经在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；
4. 内容必须写在答题卡指定的位置。
【答案】How to get along well with parents
More and more people begin to focus on the parent-child relationship. Here’s my understanding of how to get along well with our parents.
CYCRC did a survey in the United States and China. The results showed that 48.1% of Chinese children often talk to their parents, far fewer than the Americans. More understanding lies in American parent-child relationship. I think we should not only talk often but open our heart. For example, when I got low marks in exams, I always talked to my parents. They helped me find the reason and encouraged me. I also shared my secrets and worries with them. A good relationship requires efforts from both parents and children.
As children, getting well with parents is of great importance to us. We should find a proper way to create a healthy parent-child relationship.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以How to get along well with parents为题，就中国青少年研究中心（CYCRC）近日对中美两国亲子关系问卷调查的结果进行介绍，并结合自己的实际经历，发表自己的感谢。写作前，应仔细审题，观察所给表格，弄清楚表格中每一项的内容以及它的意义。然后结合自己的实际情况，对如何与父母良好相处，发表自己的看法。短文应主要以一般现在时为主，第一人称和第三人称来叙述。写作时应注意：内容应密切结合表格中所给的数据以及自己的实际经历，有叙述，有议论。合理安排各部分内容之间的关系，注意分清结构，表达要有条理。其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能根据汉语式思维逐词翻译，应从句式的整体结构出发，使用适当的单词、短语和句型表达。句式结构要完整，可以简单句为基础，穿插使用并列句和复合句以及其他复杂句式。同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使行文连贯、自然。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，介绍了中美两国亲子关系的对比，并结合自己的实际对如何与父母相处，发表了个人看法。短文有以下几个特点：首先文章内容完整，符合题目要求。短文分三段：第一段引出文章的话题parent-child relationship，点明文章主旨Here’s my understanding of how to get along well with our parents；第二段对调查结果的第一项内容进行了介绍，并结合自己的经历，讲述了如何与父母相处。这是文章的主体部分，叙述非常详细，内容也很充实，所占篇幅也最大；最后一段作者重申主题，点明了良好亲子关系的重要性。其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，语句通顺。句式结构完整，以简单句为主，也使用了宾语从句、状语从句、并列句、非谓语动词等复杂句式和结构。行文连贯、自然，表达流畅。短文中较好的句型有：The results showed that 48.1% of Chinese children often talk to their parents, far fewer than the Americans.、I think we should not only talk often but open our heart.、I also shared my secrets and worries with them. A good relationship requires efforts from both parents and children、We should find a proper way to create a healthy parent-child relationship.等等。
11．（·天津中考模拟）近日中央电视台报道了一个十四岁小男孩何思汗的事迹，介绍了他卖画筹款医治姑姑的感人故事。请你根据以下内容提示，写一篇短文。
（1）何思汗从小和姑姑生活在一起，他自幼对绘画有很大兴趣。
（2）年姑姑患上重病，何思汗的家境日渐贫寒。
（3）他作画筹款给姑姑治病。
（4）思汗勇于面对困难、主动承担家务且刻苦学习。
（5）你的想法……
参考词汇：严重的serious 疾病disease
要求：
（1）词数：80?100个。
（2）短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
The Moving Story of He Sihan
Recently, the moving story of He Sihan has been reported on CCTV. The 14-year-old boy is a student in Grade 9. He________________
【答案】Recently, the moving story of He Sihan has been reported on CCTV. The 14-year-old boy is a student in Grade 9. He has lived with his aunt since he was only one year old. When he was a little boy, he showed great interest in painting. At that time, they led a happy life. Unfortunately, his aunt got a serious disease in . Their family became poorer and poorer after that. So he decided to do something for his aunt. By selling the pictures he painted, he raised money for his aunt to treat her disease. You can’t imagine what difficulties he faces, he never gives up. In addition, he offers to do all the housework. What’s more, though he is busy, he studies hard and gets good grades.
I feel proud of him. Because he never gives up and tries his best to pay back his aunt, no matter how hard the life is.
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于材料作文，介绍何思汗的感人事迹。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如show great interest in, at that time, unfortunately, 比较级and比较级, raise money, give up, in addition, offer to do, what’s more, get good grades, feel proud of, pay back以及try one’s best等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
12．（·海南海口实验中学中考模拟）书面表达
安全对于每个人都很重要。中学生年龄较小，学生安全更是人们关注的焦点。请根据以下提示，写一篇关于学生安全的英语作文。
内容提示：
1.交通安全：遵守交通规则，不闯红绿灯等；
2.食品安全：吃健康食物，不吃垃圾食品等；
3.活动安全：进行体育锻炼时，不要弄伤自己，不私自下河游泳等。
提示词语：
study hard, read, healthy food, exercise, help, chores, at home,
Travel Safety is very important to everyone.
_______________________________________________________________
【答案】Safety is very important to everyone. Middle school students are like precious flowers –so their safety is becoming a focus for us all.
First, we must obey the traffic rules when we go out. Don’t cross the street when the light is red. Secondl y, we should eat healthy food. Don’t eat junk food. Eat more fruits and vegetables. Eat less meat and eggs. Finally, be careful not to hurt yourself while you are playing outside. It’s dangerous to go swimming by yourself, so don’t go swimming without perm ission. These are some important safety tips to remember.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要使用一般现在时，主语是第一人称。写作时注意人称、时态的搭配及主谓一致问题。同时适当使用连接词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】
这篇短文涵盖了题目要求的所有要点内容，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上很好地使用了简单句和复合句，文章脉络清晰，自然流畅。同时，文章还使用了一些常用的句式和短语，如：祈使句的使用、we must、we should、in a word、It’s +形容词+ to动词不定式结构以及序数词的使用等，这为文章增色不少。在学习中注意积累，牢记一些常用句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。
13．（·广东中考模拟）书面表达
根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。
生活中常常会发生一些意外的事，但每个人处理事情的方式不同。有些人冷静温和地处理，有些人简单粗暴地对待。当你与人发生冲突时，你会如何处理呢？请你写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的经历与看法。内容包括：
1. 请你简单叙述一次与别人发生冲突的经历；
2. 你认为该如何正确处理日常生活中发生的冲突（至少两点建议）；
3. 呼吁大家友好相处。
作文要求：
1. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
2. 语句连贯，词数80左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Life is full of the unexpected, ___________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Life is full of the unexpected. During the basketball game yesterday afternoon, a schoolmate and I hit into each other, trying to catch the ball. Then we started shouting, and it turned into a terrible quarrel. To be honest, it was neither my fault nor the schoolmate’s, only because we both cared too much about winning and losing. That made me feel shameful.
In our daily lives, we should deal with these quarrels properly. Firstly, try to be friendly to each other. Secondly, we should communicate more an d put ourselves in other’s place. Don’t be a selfish person and try to deal with everything calmly and wisely.
It’s very important to get on well with each other. Let’s build a friendly, peaceful and safe society together and make our life better and better.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如full of，during the basketball game，each other，try to do，turn into，to be honest，neither…nor，care about，too much，deal with等。而固定句型It’s very important to get on well with each other.和Don’t be a selfish person and try to deal with everything calmly and wisely.的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
14．（·天津中考模拟）请你根据以下内容提示，以“The Story of Lingling”为题，为社区宣传专栏写一篇短文，介绍在玲玲身上发生的一件事。
（1）上周晚饭后玲玲和妈妈一起出去散步，在社区的门口看见一个钱包；
（2）玲玲把钱包捡起，发现钱包里有身份证和一些钱；
（3）玲玲和妈妈把钱包交给保安，保安把这个消息发到小区的微信群中；
（4）失主看到消息后，过来取回钱包并对玲玲和妈妈表示感谢；
（5）你觉得……
参考词汇：社区 community 身份证 ID card 保安 guard 微信群 Wechat group 失主owner
要求：
（1）词数：80～100个。
（2）短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
The Story of Lingling
Last
week___________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________
【答案】The Story of Lingling
Last Friday, Lingling went out for a walk with her mother after supper. She saw a wallet at the door of the community. Lingling picked up her wallet and found that there were ID cards and some money in it. Lingling and her mother handed the wallet to the security guard, who sent the news to the microphone group in the community. When the owner saw the news, he came to fetch her wallet and thanked Lingling and her mother. .I think Li Hua did a good deed.We should learn from her.
【解析】
【详解】
本文是一篇给材料作文。根据以下内容提示，以“The Story of Lingling”为题，为社区宣传专栏写一篇短文，介绍在玲玲身上发生的一件事。文章时态用一般过去时，人称主要为第三人称。本文所给材料比较详细，考生要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并可适当发挥。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
【点睛】
点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
15．（·海南中考模拟）假如你是王梅，有一个弟弟/妹妹一直是你的梦想，去年你家里添了一个弟弟/妹妺，你非常开心，请根据内容要点，写一封电子邮件给你的笔友李蕾，和她分享你的快乐，告诉她你的变化。（ brother， sister任选其一）
内容要点: （1）我一直想有个弟弟、妹妹；
（2）去年我的梦想实现了，有了弟弟/妺妹；
（3）他/她非常可爱，给我们带来了欢乐，伴我成长，不再孤单；
（4）我学会了分享和照顾家人；
（5）请补充几点弟弟、妹妹到来后你的变化。
参考词汇：joy； grow up with sb.伴某人成长;on one’s initiative主动地；help do the housework；study hard； set an example 树立榜样。
写作要求：（1）不得使用真实姓名和校名
（2）包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯；
（3）字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清楚；
（4）词数80左右。（书信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。）
Dear Li Lei,
I have been dreaming to have a brother/sister. Last
year,___________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________
I’m lucky and happy to have a brother/ sister. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Wang Mei 【答案】Dear Li Le,
I have been dreaming to have a sister. Last year, my dream came true. I was really happy to have such a lovely baby sister.
She brings lots of joy to our family and she grows up with me day by day. Every time I see the big smile on her face, my heart is full of sweet feelings. I will come over to see her and play with her as soon as I get home every day. Now I’m not alone any more.
Above all, I have learned to share and look after others since she was born. I learn to help my mother do the housework, such as washing clothes, cooking and looking after my little sister on my own initiative. In order to set a good example for my little sister, I decide to study hard all the time and go to a famous university one day. Taking care of the baby is a hard job and I learn to be patient from it. I also learn to be kind and friendly to her.
I’m lucky and happy to have a sister. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours
Wang Mei 【解析】
【分析】
这篇书面表达顺应了当今的热门话题，“二胎”，主要是站在孩子（考生）的角度，分享有了弟弟或妹妹后的喜悦。
【详解】
这是篇材料作文内容要点给的比较详细，考生主要把所有要点表达清楚连贯就是篇不错的短文；参考词汇中，给了一些很好的词汇，考生一定要把它们融合到作文里。在写作时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，这样才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。
16．（·湖北中考模拟）书面表达
我校决定让学生轮流打扫厕所，以此作为教育学生的一种方式。这件事在学生中引起了强烈的反响，请你把下列不同意见整理成一篇书面材料，报告给学校。
同意：1．多数学生是独生子女，不会做事。
2．学生应该学会做艰苦的工作。
3．学会理解和尊重清洁工人的劳动。
不同意：1．很脏，容易使学生生病。 2．不是学生应该做的事情。 3．打扫教室就足够了。
注意：1．短文应包括表中所有内容，可适当发挥，但不要逐字翻译； 2．不少于80词。生词提示：respect尊重
【答案】A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor.
Some students think it is a good way of education. Now most families have only one child. They never do hard work. To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. It can also help them understand and respect the cleaners.
But others have different points. They think it is easy for them to get sick. They don’t think it is students＇jobs. Cleaning the classroom every day is enough.
【解析】
【详解】
阅读题干要求，这是一篇看法类的作文，那么首先得点明讨论的话题，然后分别写出不同人群对此事的看法，时态以一般现在时为主。
重点词汇及短语：argument争论；take place发生；among（三者或三者以上）之间；a good chance for sb对某人来说是个好机会；help sb do sth帮助某人做某事；get sick生病。亮点句型：
（1）A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor. 自从我们学校让学生做自愿劳动以来，在学生中发生了一场激烈的争论。现在完成时（have/has+done）。
（2）To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. 做义务劳动是他们学习如何做困难工作的好机会。动词不定式作主语，谓语动词用单数，疑问词+to do。
17．（·辽宁初三）近年来“汉语热”在全球各地悄然兴起，你的笔友 Peter在如何学好汉语方面急需你的帮助，快来帮帮他吧！
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua 【答案】例文
Here are some ways to learn Chinese. You could watch Chinese movies. You could also write to me in Chinese. It's good to find a partner to practice Chinese with. These will be helpful.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇书信，书信的内容为方法策略，给外国笔友推荐一些学习汉语的方法。因此在信件中，写出一些你认为有效的学习方法即可，写作过程中注意语法、拼写正确。
【高分句型】
It's good to find a partner to practice Chinese with.找一个同伴一起练习汉语很不错。句子为It is+形容词+to do sth.结构，句中it为形式主语，真正的主语为不定式短语。
18．（·重庆中考模拟）书面表达。
职业生涯规划（career planning）一词源于1908年的美国，指的是对职业生涯乃至人生进行持续的系统的计划的过程。作为即将毕业的初中学生，我们也是时候该思考我们的职业生涯规划了。请以此为主题写一篇短文。
写作要求:
1.词数：80—120词；
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考要点：
1. 职业选择及原因；
2. 现阶段的准备（学习、兴趣发展等）；
3. ……
My Career Planning
_____________________________________________________________________________【答案】My Career Planning
Everybody has his or her dream and career. Different person has different ideas in choosing their career. For me, my ideal career is to be a teacher.
When I was still a little child in the primary school, I found it was so great to be a teacher. In my heart I think the teachers can teach students a variety of knowledge. What's more, to be a teacher could contribute a lot both to their students and to the society.
To be a teacher should be interesting but challenging. So I must study hard to learn a lot of knowledge and I should learn how to get on well with others. If I have a chance one day, I will choose to be a teacher.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇话题作文，以My Career Planning为话题，介绍我的职业规划。
【详解】
结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般过去时，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Everybody has……，my ideal career is……，When I was……，So I must……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我的理想职业是当一名教师，接下来介绍我选择当老师的原因以及我现阶段的准备，最后表示只要我有机会，我将会选择做一名老师。此处a variety of, what’s more, both…and…，get on well with, choose to do sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
19．（·广州市天河中学中考模拟）书面表达
请根据提示内容，以My low-carbon life为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的“低碳生活”，以及你对“低碳生活”的认识。
提示：1. 出行方式
2. 不浪费纸、水、电等
3. 其他低碳生活的方式（补充一点）
4. 低碳生活的作用
注意：1．词数80左右，开头已经写好，不计入总词数；
2．回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺；
3．文中不得提及真实的人名等相关信息。
My low-carbon life
Low-carbon life is a kind of lifestyle. It’s a habit to save all the sources of energy around us. It’s important to protect our environment. _______________________
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【答案】My low-carbon life
Low-carbon life is a kind of lifestyle. It’s a habit to save all the sources of energy around us. It’s important to protect our environment. First, I always go to school on foot and tell my parents to walk to work instead of driving the car. Second, I save water and electricity by turning off the taps , fans; TV sets and lights in time when I don't need them. What's more, water is reused by us in my family all the time. Third, I use the both sides of the paper. I think it is good to make full use of paper. By doing this, we can save many trees. At last, I would go shopping with basket rather than plastic bags.
I believe our life will become better and better if we can do these things.
Lower carbon, happier life. Let's take actions.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇话题作文。请根据提示内容，以My low-carbon life为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的“低碳生活”，以及你对“低碳生活”的认识。本文时态主要为一般现在时。人称主要为第一人称。认真阅读所给提示要点，确定主题，根据要点列出提纲，所写内容必须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：
我的低碳生活
低碳生活是一种生活方式。节约我们周围所有的能源是一种习惯。保护我们的环境很重要。首先，我总是步行去上学，告诉父母步行去上班，而不要开车。其次，当我不需要的时候，我会及时关掉水龙头、风扇、电视机和电灯，以节约用水和用电。更重要的是，我们家里的水一直都在重复利用。第三，我使用纸张的两面。我认为充分利用纸张是件好事。通过这样做，我们可以拯救许多树木。最后，我会带着篮子购物而不使用塑料袋。
我相信如果我们能做这些事情，我们的生活会越来越好。
低碳，快乐生活。我们采取行动吧。
【点睛】
书面表达要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。语言要规范，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用。注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。写作六步法：1.审题：文体，时态，人称。2.抓住要点：要点是否齐全，适当补充。3.扩充句子：通过增加状语，定语，连词，使句子意思饱满充实。4.连句成文，合理使用连词。5.改正错误：拼写是否错误，语法时态是否正确，连词是否恰当等。6.誊写作文：注意书写工整美观整洁。
20．（·北京中考模拟）假如你是李华，你们学校准备组织学生本周五去北京世园会参观。你打算邀请外教 Peter参加。请用英语写一封电子邮件，告诉他集合的时间和地点，在那里可以做什么，以及参观时需要准备什么。
提示词语： school gate, nature, culture, food and drink
提示问题：●When and where are you going to meet?
●What are you going to do there?
●What do you advise Peter to prepare for the visit?
Dear Pete,
How is it going?
I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition in
Yanqing.________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________