Part three
Comma Fault
Declarative sentence
Interrogative sentence
Imperative sentence
Exclamatory sentence
Simple
Compound: two or more independent clauses
Complex: one main clause and one or more dependent clauses.
Compound-Complex: at least two main clauses and one dependent clause
Short sentences: emphatic or important
Long sentences: clear and accurate
Loose: main idea before all supplementary (easier, simpler, direct)
Periodic: main idea at or near the end of the sentence (complex, formal, emphatic) Balanced: similar in structure and contrasted in meaning
Unity: one complete thought
Faulty: ideas not closely related or incomplete thought
Coherence:
a.Not parallel in form: We have faith in and high hopes for her(different prepositions)
b.Pronoun with ambiguous reference: He was knocked down by a bike, it was not serious
He was knocked down by a bike, was not badly hurt
c.Dangling modifier: On entering the classroom, the students stood up and said good morning. On entering the classroom, the teacher was greeted by the students, who stood up and said good morning.
d.Misplaced modifier: He gave a reason for not attending the meeting, which nobody believed. He gave a reason, which nobody believes, for not attending the meeting.
e.Confusing change: Those who attend the meeting must sign his name on the paper.
Those who attend the meeting must sign their name on the paper.
Concise
Faulty: Wordy, unnecessary repetition
Method: can sometimes be achieved by changing the structure of the sentences.
Emphasis
a.Emphatic sentences:
1.Short sentences
2.Sentence fragments
3.Inverted sentences
4.Parallel constructions and balanced sentences
5.Periodic sentences
6.Imperative and exclamatory sentences
7.Rhetorical sentences
8.Negative-positive sentences [There was so many errors in the play that the result was not a
tragedy, but a comedy.]
9.Sentences with repeated words or phrases.
b.Emphasis within the sentence
1.Placing [the beginning and the end, end especially]
2.Repetition: Bright, very bright, were the stars over the wild, dark the town.
3.The verb and active voice. Active voice stress on action itself, whereas passive focus on the
receiver of the action.
4.Subordination
5.Emphatic words and phrases (very, best)
6.Alliteration. [Busy as a bee]
Part Ten
The Comma (,)
1.Before the conjunction or connective ( and but or so for not yet)
2.Adverbial phrase[When the door bell rang, …]
3.Separate a series of words and phrases having the same function in the sentence[sing, dance
and act]
4.Nonrestrictive clauses and phrases are set off by commas [A lady, smiling and nodding,
invited us in]
5.Parenthetical elements [Your work, I’m sorry to say, is not satisfactory]
6.Date: May 24, 1979 or 24 May 1979
The Period (.)
1.Full stop of a sentence
2.Is used with abbreviations (U.K, Mr.)
3.The ellipsis (…) indicates the omission of one or more words within a quoted passage. Or a
pause in conversation or faltering speech. If used at the end of the sentence, four periods will be used together.
The Semicolon (;)
1.Between two coordinate clauses not linked by a conjunction. Conjunctive verbs (however,
therefore, hence, nevertheless, moreover, thus, otherwise, besides) should not be used as conjunctions to link two coordinate clauses.
2.When clauses have internal punctuation [Unfortunately, he couldn’t come; and his absence
made things difficult for us]
3.Separate a series of items which contain internal commas[Professor Zhao, Dean of Normal
University; Miss Xu, a famous actress]
4.Join a clause with a word or words omitted.
The Colon (: )
1.Introduce an explanation, a summary or an appositive.
2.Precede a quotation or a statement
3.Hour or scores of games [5:2 10:45]
The Question Mark (?)
1.After direct questions
2.Declarative or imperative sentence that is converted into questions [Pay 10 dollars?]
3.Between parts of a series. [Did she buy milk? egg? butter?]
4.Uncertainty [He was born in 1066(?) and died in 1100].
The Quotation Mark (“,”’,’)
1.Enclose direct quotations
2.The titles of articles, essays, short stories, short poems, songs, and chapters and subdivisions
of books.
3.With special meaning
4.The commas and the periods are placed in the quotation marks.
The colon and semicolon are placed outside the quotation marks
The dash, question mark, and the exclamation mark are placed within quotation marks when they are connected only with the quoted words; and they are placed outside when they are connected with the whole sentence.
The Dash (--)
1.Change in tone or break in thought [He might do many good things for people of the city—if
he was elected][I went through a lot of terrible things during the past years—but who didn’t?]
2.Unfinished or interrupted statement [“My idea is—“][This is really—really—disappointing]
3.Set off a parenthetical element [The three countries—Spain, Italy, and Hungary—abstained.]
4.Introduce a final summarizing clause [Father, Mother, John and Susan—all were surprised by
my announcement.]
大学英语写作课怎么上 要上好大学英语写作课除了积累经验以外还要吸取别人的授课方法。下面是给大家整理的大学英语写作课怎么上，供大家参阅! 大学英语写作课怎么上1 关键，备课环节 上好大学英语写作课，关键是备好课，俗话说“台上一分钟，台下十年功”，从中引申出来意思就是准备工作容不得半点马虎。备好课主要做到备课程、备学生、备方法。一要备好课程。我们知道，单列的写作课往往只有几节课，且安排在学期末;可以说，写作课是检验学生一学期的课程内容的标尺，包括学生的单词积累、逻辑思维和行文习惯。因此，在备课时，笔者目的明确，所教的写作内容决不允许局限于课本的例题，而要在各种文体(说明文、论说文和应用文)上加料，突出主题延伸;如笔者在备书信写作课时，就会把书信的各种类别找出来，并自己归纳其格式;;日期的写法+称呼+内容+结束语。二要备好学生。大学生写作水平参差不齐，层次有上中下，必须采取的策略是抓小放大促中间，达到教学的总体均衡;具体操作是备课内容重点放在学习层次较为一般的中下层学生，容易的题目占比增大，体现为从易到难、由有感性向理性逐渐过渡;同时积极参阅历年全国大学语言四六级考试真题，参考《大学英语实用写作课程》[1]等教辅，使得备课内容切合实际、内涵丰富，学生能既能“吃饱”，又容易消化。如我采编的写作常用过渡词(学生运用起来方便快捷)，(1)
对照/but、whereas、however ……(2)让步/nevertheless、although……(3) 原因/because 、since 、for ……(4)结果/so、thus、hence等等。三要备好方法。针对不同的写作课程内容，采用不同的教学方法备课：描写文和记叙文写作课程;;讲授法、探究法，论说文;;讲授法、练习法，应用文;;探究法、讨论法;并利用PowerPoint或Authorware软件将课程内容制作幻灯片，加插动画、视频、音频和解说手段，力求内容生动、直观、有趣，学生容易接受。 2 重心，施教环节 我们知道，教学目标的实现很大程度上依赖课间教学。为实现成果转化的最大性，笔者会在课堂上采用各种不同的教学法或多种教学法穿插进行。特别在讲授应用文写作时笔者多采用探究启发式教学法，因为应用文类别多、各有格式，导致学生很容易混淆。 谈大学英语写作教学中的几点体会一、大学英语写作教学的现状分析1、对英语写作重视程度欠缺 在大学英语教学中，仍然是教师占主导地位，在语言知识的输入与输出地关系上，大多数学校的学生仍然是被动的知识接受者，即所获取的语言知识大多是听力、阅读等输入型的言语信息，一旦接触到语言输出环节(说和写)，学生就会感觉到力不从心。 在教学环节中，从教师的角度来看，在听说课上，他们的主要精力用于对学生听的训练，而让学生说的机会甚少;在读写课上，由于课堂时间所限，教师将大部分时间用来传授基本的语法知识和词汇用
大学英语过程写作林娟（排错版） Week 1 1 Why is brainstorming important? A、It allows writers to analyze the writing prompt and organize their thoughts. B、It contributes to unity and coherence of writing because it allows writers to map out their ideas. C、all of the above D、none of the above 我的答案：C 2 At what point in the writing process should we brainstorm? A、at the beginning B、at the beginning C、at the end D、in the middle E、always 我的答案：A 3 What are 6 types of brainstorming? A、listing, clustering, t-chart, freewriting
B、listing, clustering, cubing, freewriting, looping, t-chart C、freewriting, mapping, cubing, q-chart, looping, listing D、organizing, listing, looping, freecharting, cubing, t-chart E、organizing, cubing, researching, q-chart, freelisting, looping 我的答案：A 4 In which situation would a T Chart be the most effective form of brainstorming? A、when creating formulating an argument B、when showing the cause and effect of a situation C、when comparing two things D、both answers a and c E、Do not judge your ideas at the beginning. Simply just get your ideas out. 我的答案：D Week 2 1 Outlining is ( ) in the writing process. A、the first stage B、the second stage C、the third stage D、the fourth stage 我的答案：B
大学英语基础写作 大学英语几种常用文体 1.书信作文： 事务信函（business letter）和私人信函（personal letter） 2.应用文： 便条（病假条，事假条，邀友来访，借物，订票，留言），请柬，单据，启示，海报，通知（凌茜p110） 3.图表作文： ●常考查的图：餠型图，曲线图，条形图，数据图 ●图表作文常用的展开模式 ●图表作文常用的表达方式 ●图表作文常用的句型 ●范文分析 (是文涛p91) 4.留学申请写作 ●个人陈述Personal Statements ●推荐信Letters of Recommendation ●简历resumes ●与外国大学的联系信及自述信和签证申诉信 5.CET4，CET6写作 ●写作要求，命题规律及评分标准 ●主题句 ●段落展开：列举法，对照法，因果推理法，分类法，举例法，综合法 ●语篇：结构模式和衔接方法 ●CET4,CET6作文分类讲解及范文分析： 论说文的结构 论说文的类型 (是文涛p91) 6.学术交流英语 ●SCI 写作规范 ●Research report and essay 教学安排 十一周：概况 十二周：书信作文，应用文 十三——十七周：CET4作文，图表作文及练习 十八周：留学申请写作 十九周：学术英语，考试
CET4，CET6写作 一．语段 1.语段的结构： Developing Sentence 1(扩展句) Topic sentence (主题句) ----Developing Sentence 2(扩展句) ---- Terminator(结论句) Developing Sentence 3(扩展句) 2.写好主题句 一个好的主题句必须满足以下基本特征： ●高度的概括性 ●主题思想表达明确 ●能使读者预测其段落的发展方式 ●一般应该是一个观点，想法或意见等 分析下列的例子： 1）It is very necessary to be a good university students. (议论主题句) 2）There are several respects of necessities to be a good university student. (说明体的主题句) 3）What I will do in the future is the following. (描述体的主题句) 根据要求写出主题句 1）Please write about Study Habits 2）Please write about College Life 3）Please write about Your hobby 扩展下列主题句 例如这样的一篇作文：Good Health a.Importance of good health b.Ways to keep fit c.My own practice (是P59) 3. 段落展开 主题句是陈述段落的中心思想。因此，段落的展开（paragraph development）也就是主题句的展开。展开的方式有多种，如：列举法，对照法，因果推理法，分类法，举例法，综合法等。 列举法常用词语：first/second/third/last; firstly/secondly/finally; to begin with/to start with/inthefirstplace/then/next/in addition to/besides/also/moreover/furthermore/what’s more 以下有3篇短文的题目，请用顺序排列法的发展方式完成，每篇要求80字左右： a.Many people now prefer to live in the countryside. The main reasons are… b.Watching TV at home is better than going out to a movie c.Chatting on line has brought many problems into people’s life Making a good impression at an American dinner party is not difficult if you
1.段落解释： is a unit of thought composed of sentences,smaller units of thought,that relate to a single topic.Paragraph divisions serve two very useful functions 2.A good paragraph is composed 组成 in such a way that it has : idea with nothing in the paragraph not covered by the topic explores the main idea explicitly and concretely,with 3.第一个写作常识has sound internal structure.The qualities that indicate sound internal structure are unity,coherence,and completeness. 4.怎样做到内容一致An excellent way of achieving unity is by means of the topic sentence.Properly used,the topic sentence forces the writer to adhere to and to sustain the point he is trying to establish 5.标题句① the topic sentence properly used can achieve unity in the paragraph,which indicate the importance of the topic sentence;②the topic sentence 6.第二个写作常识 In short,a good topic sentence has a limited subject and a sharp focus,namely,a good topic sentence is not too general nor too narrow.A topic sentence that is too general requires much more than a paragraph to develop it.A topic sentence that is too narrow leaves little to be said in the rest of the coherence is connection and consistency.A coherent paragraph is one in which all the sentence are related logically and grammatically to make a whole that allows the reader to follow the writer’s train of thought step by step 8．第三个写作常识 Just as topic sentences help readers follow our ideas,other signals also help them understand what we have to say.When we write and when we revise,look for the areas that seem choppy or unconnected—that lack coherence.We can establish better coherence by using the following devices:pronoun reference,repetition ,and in a paragraph means that the topic is adequately developed by details,explanations,definitions,evidences,and the like,so that the reader is not left with only a fuzzy idea of what the writer means 1第四个写作常识：Development of the main idea, then, is like enlarging a photograph to make the details clearer. So, development in the paragraph is as important as unity and coherence between skillful development helps us to stick to our subject and focus and to keep up the sense of oneness. 2Inductive Pattern (归纳法概念)：In developing a paragraph by means of the inductive pattern of reasoning the writer presents particular instances of a like kind and leads them into valid generalization which serves as his topic sentence. 3Deductive Pattern (演绎法概念)：In developing a paragraph by means of the deductive pattern the writer begins with a generalization(the topic sentence) and proceeds with specific elaboration or application of the general idea. 4Inductive-deductive Pattern(归纳演绎法)：As the name indicates, in developing a paragraph by means of inductive-deductive pattern the writer first presents particular instances and a resulting generalization, then applies the generalization to a new instance.5第五个写作常识：Sequences of development are not independent of types of development. The most important sequences of development are general to particular, particular to general, climactic, chronological, and spatial. 6Climactic Sequence (层递顺序)：In a climactic sequence, the most intense or highest point of interest is saved for the final sentence, which may be, but is not necessarily, the topic sentence. 7.Chronological Sequence (时间顺序):A chronological sequence is one in which earlier things precede later things; items are listed in the order in which they occur in time. The most obvious use of a chronological sequence is in telling a story. 8Spatial Sequence (空间顺序)：A spatial sequence is used in descriptions of various types. It starts the reader at a particular point and then moves logically in some direction, from one place to another. 9第六个写作常识：The type of development is the way in which the main idea is supported-by details, definitions, statements of cause and effect, and so on. 10段落展开方式：Among the most important types of paragraph development are development by detail, comparison and contrast, process, classification and partition, cause and effect, definition, and mixed development.
第一单元语法部分参考答案 PART III GRAMMAR Subject- Verb Agreement When the subject is compound Reference for the Classroom Activities Summary: 1. A compound subject with and takes a plural verb in most cases, but when it expresses a singular meaning or when each of the singular subjects is considered individually, it takes a singular verb. 2.After a compound subject with or, nor, either…or, neither…nor, not …but,the verb agrees in number and person with the nearer part of the subject. 3.Intervening phrases or clauses not introduced by coordinating conjunctions do not affect the number of a verb. Such phrases are normally introduced by prepositions or prepositional phrases such as well as, as much as, rather than, along with in addition to, together with, with, plus, and including. When the subject expresses quantity Reference for the Classroom Activities All the sentences are correct. Summary: 1.Nominal phrases of time, money, weight and measurement normally take a singular verb. 2.Some words or phrases, such as all, most, alf, the last, the rest, take a singular or plural verb, depending on the meaning of the noun or pronoun that follows. 3.Phrases lik e lots of, heaps of , loads of take singular or plural verbs depending on the form of the nouns that follow. 4.In sentences with more than one or many a modifying the subject nouns, the verb should take a singular form though it is plural in meaning. When the subject is a relative pronoun, a what-clause, or in the there-be structure Reference for the Classroom Activities
ANSWER KEY Part One: Essay Writing 1 An Introduction to Writing Activity (Point and Support in a Paragraph), pages 5–6 Point: There are drawbacks to moviegoing. Support: 1. Inconvenience b. Long time to find parking spot and long walk to theater d. Sticky floor 3. Other moviegoers a. Running kids b. Laughing, shouting teenagers Activity (Introductory Paragraph), 8 1. c 2. b 3. a 4. a. Inconvenience of going out b. Temptations of the theater c. Behavior of some patrons Activity (Body: Supporting Paragraphs), 9–10 1. To begin with, I just don’t enjoy the general hassle of the evening. 2. b. Parking lot is always jammed d. Tickets may sell out, and theater is crowded e. Tickets cost up to $8 each 3. Second, the theater offers tempting snacks that I really don’t need. 4. b. 2) chocolate bars 3) Milk Duds 5. Many of the other patrons are even more of a problem than the concession stand. 6. a. Little kids race up and down the aisles b. Teenagers talk back to the screen, whistle, make funny noises Activity (Concluding Paragraph), 10 1. a 2. c Review Activities, 18–20 Answers will vary. 2 The Writing Process Activities (Freewriting, Questioning, Making a List, Clustering, Scratch Outline), 25–31
大学英语基础写作常用句型 Part A: 段首句 1. __________________________________ Many people are inclined to __ . In their opinion, _____________________________ they believe that 2. ______________________________________________ There are different opinions among people as to_____________________________ . Some people suggest that 3. ________________________________ People's opinions about vary from person to person. Some people say that _____________ . To them, ___________ . 4. _______________________________________________ N owadays although more and more people __________________________________ , still there are some who think _____________ , they may think ___________ . 5. ____________________________________ R ecently the phenomenon of has caused public concern, and understandably so. 6. __________________________________ Nowadays, it is common to _____ . Many people like __________________________ because _____________ . Besides, ____________ .
1. 成功的四个步骤 Four Steps to a Successful Four Steps to a Successful The first time in life? Then grasp your chance with your perfect performance on the dating night, by learning the following principle in heart. Dress properly. While everyone wants to give an impressive debut on the first date, you should avoid wearing something too bizarre to be accepted. If you are still in school, a sportswear can fulfill your purpose. For businessman or grownups, casual clothes are recommended. Never put up your working uniforms,no matter how well you like that Armani suit. It is no work. A few accessories such as a pair of sunglasses or silver loops on the wrist can add up to the romance sphere. Take a bath before dating. And if you like, spray a little perfume, but unless you're sure that he or she likes the smell,don't use ones that are too strong. Watch your manner. You're no prince of the Scotland nor Cinderella in the legend. Proper manners will ensure a lasting relationship while bad ones scare away your sweetheart. And do make sure you do not boast about your fortune, for, not everyone are green addicts. And your way of smiling, or your greatestoath, should neither be "coy" nor "by St. Loy!" after the nun in Chaucer. Be a little sensitive than merely innocent. Do make sure you do not intrude his or her privacy on the first date. For there maybe something deeply concealed within the inner core of every heart, of which the owner doesn't share often with anyone but his intimacy. Finally, wish you good luck. May you get your hearts combined and start a new journey in the miracle of life and love. Stay tuned till a borderline is reached, and keep on through out the whole way. 简评 看来第一次约会真是令人兴奋并紧张期待的。为第一次约会所提出的建议也是仁者见仁、智者见智。王永同学用词简单、结构精炼，读起来节奏快，例如：“Dress Properly....If you are still in school，a sportswear can fulfill your purpose.For businessman Orgrowmups，casual clothes are recommended.”这样的文章结构像是在提醒我们时不我待，要抓住机会，抓紧时间。 2. 我的宿舍生活My Dormitory Life
Figures of speech 1 metaphor Metaphor involves a comparison between two or more unlike things which share at least one property on characteristic in common, but the comparison is implied or condensed 2 personification Writing about a nonhuman thing as if it were human 3 metonymy The substitution of the name of one thing for that of another 4 parallelism Employ the deliberate arrangement of a succession of parallel constitution to achieve emphasis 5 climax Climax is a rhetorical device which arranges a succession of thought according to the rate of significance or interesting like the steps of a ladder ascending events. 6 hyperbole Hyperbole is the deliberate use of overstatement or exaggeration to achieve emphasis 7 simile makes a comparison between two unlike elements having at least one quality or characteristic in common. To make the comparison, words like as, as...as, as if and like are used to transfer the quality we associate with one to the other. 8 irony achieves emphasis by saying the opposite of what is meant, the intended meaning of the words being the opposite of their usual sense. 9 analogy a form of comparison, but unlike simile or metaphor which usually uses comparison on one point of resemblance, analogy draws a parallel between two unlike things that have several common qualities or points of resemblance. 10 understatement It is the opposite of hyperbole, or overstatement. It achieves its effect of emphasizing a fact by deliberately understating it, impressing the listener or the reader more by what is merely implied or left unsaid than by bare statement. To understand what the definition of the figure of speech and to analyze its function in a certain sentence
大学英语课总结范文 由于语文教学的目的日益关注，如何把大学语文教学更好的让学生吸收和学习，更好的进行外语交流，下面就是小编给大家带来的大学语文课总结，希望能帮助到大家! 大学语文课总结篇一 走进大学，语文学习是必然的，虽然语文成绩不是太理想，但是从几年的学习过程中也领会了一些怎样应用策略的方法，如何学习才能更家对语文有兴趣。最终学好语文一定要多下功夫。应做到“四勤”与“四多”，具体说来，有以下几点： 一、“四勤” 1.勤背诵。 2.勤朗读。 3.勤练习。 4.勤总结。 积极记忆课本中出现的生词及词组，理解其用法，并适当运用一些正、反义词对比，相似词对比等方式加强记忆。相对于其它学科来说，语文的知识点相当零碎，一定要在平时的收集、整理、总结上下功夫。平时听老师提到或是在参考书上看到的一些零碎的小知识都要及时记录下来，以备以后复习时用。 二、“四多” 1.多看。 2.多听。 3.多说。 4.多练。
近年来语文试题的难度逐渐增大，试题的触角涉及到日常生活的各个领域，因此，从高一开始就应尽可能地扩大阅读面，广泛阅读，以求开阔视野，并在潜移默化中提高自己的英文水平。培养敏锐的语感将有助于增强辨析力和判断力，是语文学习过程中十分重要的一环。多说可以增强口语能力，加深记忆，使学过的知识清晰地映在脑海里，不容易被忘记。通过做大量的习题，可以增强实践经验，不至于临阵发慌，手足无措。 具体实行方案如： 1.最重要是单词，开学之时制定个计划，准备在什么时候把第几课的单词背熟，如果可能尽早把所有单词记得滚瓜烂熟，要是不行至少在每一节上课之前把此课的单词记熟。 2.每天至少看30分钟的课文，哪一篇都好(前提是单词读熟)，最好以娱乐的心态去进行，不要当作苦差，如果坚持不了至少一周看三次，在读的时候慢慢培养速度，当然这是在读的质量有保证的前提下。 3.买语文系列磁带，每天坚持听一段时间，至少多长自己把握。 我认为，如果可以完全或80%地做到以上几点，学习语文就自然而然变成了一件乐事，既的到了提高有增强了自己的自主学习能力，我想这是我学习语文的最大收获!
大学英语学习心得体会范文【五篇】 强度并不高，课程安排少，老师几乎不加以辅导，更别说习题作 【五篇】，希望能帮助到大家! 回首来，大学第一个学期就这样匆匆过去了，我大学生涯的最后一节英语课(希望是)就在这圣诞将至的欢快气氛中带着淡淡的寂寥和遗憾结束了。回想高考结束后的那个暑假，等待出分的那一个多月实在是没什么心情外出游玩，而尘埃落定后又怕在开学的英语分级考试中落后而逼着自己报了半个多月的新东方四级班，这样算来，我这个“等了十八年的joyful暑假”着实有些落魄寒酸罢。但当我在三级班名单里找到自己的名字时，我又突然觉得，All these were worthy! 但你若说它轻松，它却堪称是项力气活。他绝非理科那样需要沉浸在茫茫公式和题海中，又绝非文科那样在考前突击一下就可以拿到很好的分数。慢工出细活，英语最贴切的形象怕就是根iron
pestle吧。时时锤日日磨，不可有一时的松懈和放弃，它才能到最后蜕变成为最完美的needle。 说了这么多大道理，我也该将自己为数不多却又保质保量的英语学习秘笈拿出来向大家分享一下了。 先说WORDS。单词可谓是英语学习中最annoying的一项了。很多人都说要每天背坚持背，但当自己做起来却很难坚持下来， 里，我还要向大家推荐一种“四级应试”用的单词记忆法(只是应试，不可完全凭这个提升英语水平!)： 1、将近五年来(如果实在没时间也要保证三年)的阅读真题搜集起来，将其中题干和所有选项中的生词牢记 2、将阅读题的correct answers在*中的对应句找出，将对应句中的生词牢记 3、听力原文、选词填空和完型选项中的生词就不用我说了吧，一定要记! 再要说的就是我上了大学自己发现的一种非常好的练习听 力和扩充词汇的方法——OPEN COURSES法。我想所有人都会因 己不学英语的原因归结成“把时间都用在数学上了呀”，Dont worry, 不需抽出学习数学的时间，只需听听MIT教授的同样甚
大学英语写作 Due to the increased enrollment of college students in recent years, the total number of graduates coming out at the same time is such that many college graduates have difficulties in procuring jobs, especially when the economy is suffering a slowdown. And then many scholars suggest that colleges should lay emphasis on vocational training by setting relative courses in the college curriculum so that graduates are more likely to be employed. Taking the employers’ requirements into consideration, that is, working experience, the suggestion seems reasonable. However, I think, even if universities become vocational-oriented, it can not serve well for the employment. Besides, the vocational orientation will do harm to the higher education. 最近几年，随着大学生人数的增多，同时，大学毕业生的人数也在增加，许多应届毕业生很难找到工作，特别是在经济发展缓慢时期尤为如此。许多学者建议大学应该注重的是职业培养，并在大学课程中建立相关课程，这样，毕业生才更有可能找到工作。我们需要把雇主的要求考虑进内，这样的话，这样的建议是很有道理的。但是，我认为如果大学变成了以职业化教育为主的学校，那么这反