高考英语考点精析复习讲义-书面表达看图作文
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专题十九书面表达(图画图表类)高考英语作文可简单分为应用文、说明文、记叙文和议论文。
应用文的主要形式为:建议信、申请信、投诉信、邀请信、电子邮件、通知、倡议书、演讲致辞等;说明文和记叙文的主要形式为图画叙述和图表说明;议论文可分为陈述观点型、正反观点型和说明利弊型。
以下对高考英语书面表达中常见的错误进行汇总:高考英语书面表达常见错误一、写作点拨(图画图表类)说明文是以说明为主要表达方式,要求用简洁明快的语言来解说事物、阐明事理,从而给读者提供知识的一种文体。
近几年高考说明文多数以图表、表格或文字的形式给出提示,并往往融合应用文体进行考查,一般分为场所路线介绍、事物介绍、方式方法或计划安排介绍三大类。
时态通常用一般现在时。
写说明文宜采用三段式:第一段:主要介绍要说明的对象及说明的目的。
第二段:说明事物的主要特征或做事情的方法步骤。
第三段:进行总结概括。
二、词句模板(图画图表类)1.说明方位、路线常用语:(1)…is located at the foot of/by the side of/to the east of/to the north of…(2)In front of it is…,with…on its left and…on its right.(3)Turning to the left, you will see…,behind which is…(4)Walking past…,you will see the building that appe ars in front of you is…(5)Along the road are lines of trees, from which students can find shade from the hot sun.(6)A walk around…is a feast for the mind as well as the eyes.(7)On your left lies a(n)…,with all kinds of…in it.(8)Next to the door ag ainst the wall there is a(n)…,in which we sit to watch TV every evening. 2.说明事物特点或优势的常用语:(1)…is a new kind of…produced by…,which is…(2)Made of…,it is light, small, and easy to carry.(3)Containing much top and new technique, …is famous for its exce llent quality and reasonable price.(4)It is rich in natural resources such as coal and gold and has mild weather.(5)Built in the 16th century, the castle has witnessed too much coming and going in history. 3.格式模板(图画图表类):【示例一】①From the picture (graph, chart, table, pie, bar), we know that ________(图表内容总概括).②On the one hand, the left/first picture tells us that ________(情况一,图一/表一的内容).③On the other hand, (the right/second)picture informs us that ________( 情况二,图二/表二的内容).④It can easily be seen that ________(揭示图画/表寓意).【示例二】①As is vividly shown/described/depicted in the cartoon/picture, ________(图表内容总概括).②In the first picture, ________(描述图/表一内容,如果是一个表,则可左或上半部分).③As is shown in the second drawing/picture, ________(描述图/表二内容,如果是一个表,则右或下半部分).④It is safe to draw the conclusion that ________(提示寓意,或主题句,回应主题但不是主题句的重复).10 议论文写作之陈述观点型、正反观点型、说明利弊型一、写作点拨议论文是一种剖析事物、论述事理、发表意见、提出主张的文体。
专题 49 看图写话类书面表达(二)关键词:看图写话,记叙类写话,多图(一遍为四图),书面表达难度系数:✱✱✱✱推荐指数:✱✱✱✱✱【基础回顾】考点归纳:图画式作文要求考生将画面所包含的信息转换成文字,旨在避免考生汉语思维,要求考生直接用英语思维。
它要求通过图画提供的图像信息写一篇短文,包括叙述一个故事,或通过几幅相关的图画说明某个问题或得出结论。
图画式作文就内容而言,可以写观察到的内容,也可以根据合理想象适当进行发挥来补充一些内容;就表达方式而言,可以单纯地理解、说明,也可以在说明中加以描写、叙述。
基础必读:图画式作文要求考生不仅具有一定的观察分析能力,还要有较强的语言表达能力、想象力和逻辑思维能力。
考生在写图画式作文时,有时难以取得比较理想的成绩,其原因主要有:观察图画不细致,不能准确地对图画内容加以分析概括;分不清内容主次,从而不能层次分明地表达作文主题的意思;无法将图片所要求表达的意思恰到好处地用文字写出来。
写好图画式作文的关键是:一定要根据自己掌握的词汇与熟悉的句型结构构思短文内容,并直接用英语表达,千万不要先想好一句句的中文,然后逐句译成英文,那样就往往会超出自己的英语水平,作文中就会出现“生造”的英语句子,难免会出错。
另外,对于与图画无关的事要少写,还要注意人称、时态的呼应,整个作文要通篇考虑。
写作要领:①准确审题。
这是看图作文写作的基础。
准确审题就是注意文体、人物和时态。
②把握情境。
这是看图作文的关键。
要根据图画,合理想象,围绕特定的主题,把握情景,(利用图中人物间的关系、人物的对话、人物的活动及所处场所,以及图中的文字说明和标识来)提炼要点等。
③发表感想。
围绕主题展开合理的想象,发表自己的联想或感想。
【技能方法】记叙类看图写话应从以下几方面着手:一、提炼要点:围绕图中人物的动作和重要的图标来提炼要点。
二、遣词造句:根据提炼的要点进行造句,注意使用高级词汇和句型。
三、连句成篇:连句成篇,注意使用恰当的连接词,使文章自然流畅。
专题28 应用文写作备考高考英语二轮复习讲练测--讲练距离高考还有一段时间,不少有经验的老师都会提醒考生,愈是临近高考,能否咬紧牙关、学会自我调节,态度是否主动积极,安排是否科学合理,能不能保持良好的心态、以饱满的情绪迎接挑战,其效果往往大不一样。
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做题前,要认真阅读题目要求、题干和选项,并对答案内容作出合理预测;答题时,切忌跟着感觉走,最好按照题目序号来做,不会的或存在疑问的,要做好标记,要善于发现,找到题目的题眼所在,规范答题,书写工整;答题完毕时,要认真检查,查漏补缺,纠正错误。
总之,在最后的复习阶段,学生们不要加大练习量。
在这个时候,学生要尽快找到适合自己的答题方式,最重要的是以平常心去面对考试。
英语最后的复习要树立信心,考试的时候遇到难题要想“别人也难”,遇到容易的则要想“细心审题”。
越到最后,考生越要回归基础,单词最好再梳理一遍,这样有利于提高阅读理解的效率。
另附高考复习方法和考前30天冲刺复习方法。
命题解读图画作文一般提供一幅或者多幅图画,要求考生根据题目要求进行写作。
图画作文主要考查考生的观察能力和理解能力,首先它要求考生抓住图画所传递的信息,然后根据自己掌握的信息进行发挥、创作。
此类题型的体裁比较广泛,可以是记叙文,要求将图画中的信息完整地表述出来,也可以是说明文,根据图画内容从时间、过程、步骤等方面加以解释,说明,还可以是议论文,描绘图画中的一些现象,得出结论,提出解决问题的方法。
解题步骤1.仔细审题,准确定位(1)确定主题。
考生须通过分析图画的表层含义来弄清命题意图,从而确定文章的主题。
(2)确定体裁。
仔细阅读图画及文字说明,确定文章体裁。
多幅图的图画作文通常要写成记叙文,单幅图的图画作文则通常要写成夹叙夹议文或议论文。
高三英语第二轮复习考点精讲精炼第17讲书面表达看图作文图表作文文字材料作文开放作文(延边F)写作方法指导(延边F)书面表达易错点分析综观近几年的高考英语发展势态:书面表达旨在训练学生对所学语言知识的实践应用,特别是测试学生的语言交际能力和语言知识的活用能力的必考题型,也是高考中重要且难度较大的题型,所占分值为25分,要在30分钟内写出80—100个词左右的短文。
从高考评卷及平时测验题,学生在做书面表达题时,得分率较低,卷面普遍存在的缺点:1.(延边F)文不对题(文体格式不规范);2.(延边F)离题太远(抓不到要点,该说的不说,不该说的说的太多);3.(延边F)词不达意(有的甚至用汉语标注或留空);4.(延边F)病句太多(时态、语态、人称、数等语法);5.(延边F)卷面不工整(字迹潦草、乱涂改、添插箭头满篇飞)。
(延边F)看图作文1.(延边F)(典型例题精选下面四幅图片描述的是,星期一早晨李华在上学路上经历的一件事。
请根据图片所提供的信息以第三人称用英语写一篇短文。
注意:(1)短文必须包括所有图片的主要内容,短文的内容要连贯、完整;(2)短文单词数:100左右(开头已给出的单词不计入单词总数)。
(延边F) [解析]本题是看图作文。
根据图画应把握以下要点:(1)等车;(2)车内情况;(3)图画中的插入语;(4)大家推车;(5)结尾的发挥。
One possible version:It was snowing heavily on Monday morning. Li Hua was at the bus stop, waiting for Bus No. 601 to go to school. Af- ter a while, a bus came and she got on it. There were many passengers in the bus. Some were talking and some were loo-king out of the windows. Suddenly the bus stopped. The driver turned around and said, ." Sorry. The bus has broken down. Please get off and help push "the bus. " When they heard this, Li Hua and the other passengers got off the bus. They worked hard together, pushing the bus slowly forward. Soon the bus was running again. All the passengers were smiling and the sun was shining.2.(延边F) (典型例题精选定你是李华,应英国朋友Bob的要求,写一封短信介绍你校图书馆的基本情况。
高考英语看图作文写作指导精选高考英语看图作文写作指导高考英语看图作文高考英语看图作文写作指导看图进行书面表达的基本要求是:认真审图,确立主题,提炼要点,展开联想,变点为句,连句成篇。
要达到这些要求,我们就必须认真审图,善于利用图中人物间的关系、人物的对话、人物的活动及所处场所,以及图中的文字说明和标识来提炼要点;要围绕主题展开合理的想象,切忌游离于主题展开不着边际的联想。
高考看图作文技巧//方法指导五步法:1.:包括文体,人称,时态.//:整体把握一组图的连贯性理解及题目要求。
2.:保证文章内容的完整.//简单句写出每幅图的主题句。
3.:注意英语表达的习惯,根据提纲扩展句子.//注意每幅图的次要内容(时间,地点,方式,原因等)4.:利用一些表示转折,因果,选择等关系的关联词和过渡句,把句子连接起来.//表达到位:按情节发展先后,承上启下整理成文。
5.:格式文体要点语法字数等.//文定稿。
:记叙文:要抓住记叙文的六要素ll.Heplaystennistwiceaweek.Heplayssoccertwiceaweek.Heplaysb asketballonceaweek.HeoftenlikestowearblackT-shirtandbluepants.Hisphonenumberis5352375.Everyonelikeshim.16、请写一个你最喜爱的季节,要写出你喜欢的原因。
MyfavoriteseasonMyfavoriteseasonissummer.It’shotinsummer.Thereisasum mervacationinsummer.Idon’tgotoschool.Ithinkmanychildrenlik ethisseason,becausetheycaneatice-creamandgoswimming.Icangoswimming.SometimesIgotothebe achwithmyparents.SometimesIgototheswimmingpoolwithmyfriends.Iusuallyvisitmanyplacesinsummervacation.17、描写一种你最喜爱的动物,要对它进行外形描写。
高考,大学,考研的看图英语作文The Importance of the College Entrance Examination (Gao Kao) and Postgraduate Entrance Examination (Kao Yan) in ChinaIn China, the College Entrance Examination, also known as Gao Kao, is a crucial event for every high school student. The Gao Kao determines a student's future as it is the primary means of gauging one's academic ability and potential for higher education. For many Chinese students, the Gao Kao is amake-or-break exam that can open doors to prestigious universities or close them altogether.The Gao Kao covers a wide range of subjects, including Chinese, mathematics, foreign languages, and sciences. Students spend years preparing for this exam, often attending additional after-school classes and participating in mock exams to ensure they are fully prepared. The pressure to perform well on the Gao Kao is immense, as students know that their scores will determine which universities they can apply to and ultimately their career prospects.After successfully completing the Gao Kao and gaining entry into a university, many students choose to pursue further education through a postgraduate entrance examination, alsoknown as Kao Yan. The Kao Yan is another rigorous exam that tests students' knowledge in their chosen field of study and determines if they are qualified to pursue a master's or doctoral degree.The competition for postgraduate programs is fierce, with only a limited number of spots available at top universities. Students must excel in their undergraduate studies and perform well on the Kao Yan to secure a place in their desired program. The pressure to succeed in the Kao Yan is similarly intense to that of the Gao Kao, with many students dedicating months or even years to preparing for this exam.Despite the challenges and stress associated with these exams, the Gao Kao and Kao Yan serve as important milestones in the academic and professional growth of Chinese students. These exams provide a standardized means of evaluating students' abilities and ensure that only the most qualified individuals are admitted to prestigious universities and graduate programs.In conclusion, the Gao Kao and Kao Yan play a vital role in shaping the educational landscape of China and preparing students for success in their future careers. While the pressure to perform well on these exams can be daunting, the rewards ofgaining entry into top universities and graduate programs are well worth the hard work and dedication required to succeed.。
看图作文类本类考题解答锦囊近几年来,看图作文在高考书面表达中占有相当大的比例。
如2000年的全国卷、20典型例题季高考卷、20典型例题卷、20典型例题、20典型例题季高考卷、20典型例题考卷、20典型例题,20典型例题考卷及20典型例题卷等都是看图作文。
由于这类题型的特点是:形象、直观、内容具体,且在图画的前面一般还有文字说明,因此考生一般都有话可写且不会走题。
但在写作时应注意的是:1.仔细阅读图画及文字说明,首先应确定文章体裁。
这类文章一般以记叙文或说明文为主。
记叙文:要抓住记叙文的六要素:时间(when)、地点(where)、人物(who)、事件(what)、原因(w~)和过程(how)。
即:五个“W”和一个“H”。
根据图画提示把这六个问题写清楚了,至少可得及格分数。
如2000年的全国高考题,时间:2000年2月8日清晨;地点:公园外的公园路上;A物;“我”、一个老头;事件;这个老头被一辆黄色小车撞倒,“我”把他送到了附近的医院;原因:司机害怕承担责任而逃走,过程:“我”当时正沿着公园路散步。
说明文:一般先要把图画联系起来,弄清楚图画的目的、意图;然后进行抽象概括,找出一个说明对象,接着根据图画从时间、过程、步骤等方面加以解释、说明;最后进行总结,得出结论。
对事物进行说明时,一定要做到条理清楚,明了易懂。
如20典型例题考英语试题,作者首先告诉对方已经为他找到了房间,接着介绍房间的情况,最后征求对方的意见。
2.确定人称。
如果以日记、回忆录等形式来写,一般采用第一人称;如果是以讲故事的形式来写,则一般采用第三人称来写比较方便。
但不管用哪种人称,全文都必须一致。
3.确定时态。
根据图画内容及所采用的文章体裁,确定文章所要用的时态。
切记全文时态的一致性。
4.发挥联想要合理、适度。
这类文章的说明一般都要求考生作适当的联想和发挥,以便使上下文能更好地连贯起来。
但联想和发挥一定要根据图画做到合情合理,不能过多地胡乱联想和发挥。
如20典型例题考题,如果告诉对方:我几乎把城市找遍了,终于为你找到了一套房子。
这样联想显然是可以的。
然而,倘若你写成:我到东城区去找,那边的房子太贵;于是,我又到西城区去找,而那里正在建设之中,条件不太好;接着,我又到南城区去找,发现那里离新建的华文学校又太远了……像这样的联想和发挥就太夸张了。
5.虚实结合,详略得当。
对于图画中的内容,该详细叙述、描写的,就必须要详细、具体;可以一笔带过的就一笔带过。
也就是平常老师所讲的有时要泼墨如水,而有时又要惜墨如金。
如图画中所有的时间、数字或言论需一词不漏地写清楚,而有些过程或原因则可适当简略。
Ⅰ高考最新热门题1(典型例题假设你是一位生活在某城市的中学生,暑假打算去乡村度假。
请根据下面两幅图提供的信息,写一篇短文。
简要说明城市生活的不足,重点说明你去乡村度假的原因。
注意:1.短文应包括图中所提供的主要信息,并做适当发挥,使短文内容连贯、完整;2.词数:100左右。
命题目的与解题技巧:本题考查图表作文。
【解析】此书面表达有图画兼文字提示,因此考生在动笔前先要审阅提示。
如:文章的体裁为说明文,说明要去乡村度假的原因。
人称:第一人称。
时态:以将来时为主。
陈述城乡环境差别时可用一般现在时。
关联词:although,still,so,what’s more,besides,also,above a11等。
写作要点:1.“我”要去乡下度假的打算。
2.城市化所存在的问题(拥挤、嗓音、空气污染)。
3.乡下的环境(空气、山、水、树木、鸟儿等)。
【答案】One possible version:I will spend this summer holiday in the countryside. Although the city is modern and convenient, there are still some problems,such as air pollution, crowdedness and noise. In the countryside I can enjoy a comfortable and quiet life. There,the air is fresh and the water is clean, trees are green and birds are singing. I can also go boating, fishing and swimming in the lake. What's more, I can climb the hills. All this will be interesting and good for my health. Above all, I can learn more about nature. So I want to go to the countryside for a change. I'm looking forward to the coming of my summer holiday.2.(典型例题假设你是图①中的男孩。
请根据以下图画提供情节线索,以SharingH。
usework为题,用英文叙述你帮妈妈做家务的经过及感想。
注意:1.书面表达必须包括图画所表现的主要内容,可以适当增减细节,使其连贯、完整;2.词数:100词左右.题目的与解题技巧:本题考查看图写一个故事。
【解析】本文记叙“我”帮妈妈做家务的经过,叙述的是已经做过的事,因此用过去时。
要点:1.见妈妈同时做几件事情,觉得妈妈太累,决定帮妈妈做一点家务活;2.在帮妈妈洗衣服时,“我”的朋友来叫我去踢球,“我”拒绝了;3.等把衣服洗完时,“我”累得满头大汗;4.妈妈见“我”把衣服洗好了,夸“我”是个好孩子,“我”感到非常高兴。
【答案】One possible version:One day when I was about to play football, I saw Mother was taking a lot of dirty clothes to wash and a bucket to carry water. I thought Mother was very tired, so I decided to help her wash clothes. While I was doing the washing , Li Ming came and asked me to play football with him. I refused him and told him that I would help Mother finish the housework first. When I got the housework done,I was so tired that I was sweating all over. When Mother came back home, she found I had washed all the dirty clothes and said that I was a good child . I felt very happy.3.(典型例题卷)20典型例题日,你的美国朋友给你写了一封信,祝贺北京申奥成功。
收到信后,你给他写了一封回信,介绍了你们是如何庆祝申奥成功的。
回信应包括下列图画所示内容,并邀请他在2008年来中国。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.信的开头和结尾已写好。
参考词汇:竞标成功win the bid for出墙报put up a wall newspaerDear Bill,Very glad to receive your letter of Julyl3...Sincerely yours,Zhang Hua答案:Dear Bill,Very glad to receive your letter of July 13. Thank you for your congratulations. I was very excited when I heard that Beiing won the bid for the 2008 Olympic Games. Immediately I called Wei Guo and Li Hong to my house. After a brief discussion we decided to put up a wall newspaper for our class. We hurried to our classroom and began to work: Wei Guo wrote a poem. Li Hong copied some news from the newspapers. I drew an Olympic flag. The next Monday, our classmates were both surprised and overjoyed when they saw the wall newspaper. I hope you can come to China to watch the Olympic Games in 2008. Then I'll be very happy to be your guide.Sincerely yours,Zhang Hua4.(典型例题假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文,来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。
请根据图画提供的信,写信介绍住房的情况,并告知住房面积为25平方米,月租500元。
注意:1.词数:100左右。
2.参考词汇:房租rent(n.) Dear Bob,_____________________ _______________________ _____ ______________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________答案:Dear Bob,I'm ,so glad to learn that you're coming in September. I've found a place for you. It's a small flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair. The rent is 500 yuan per month. The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No. 11 can take youstraight to the school. In fact, it is only one stop. Do you thinkyou'd like it? If not, I can try and find another place for you. Just let me know.Yours,Li Hua5.(典型例题卷)(1)某英文报“健康生活”栏目正在讨论有关健康食品、体育锻炼与少年儿童肥胖的问题。