对话帝国理工学院招生主任Angela Lin——帝国理工学院招生主任指导个人文书写作
问题：我们都知道，英国教育界有一种“三足鼎立”的说法，认为文科最好的院校是牛津大学，理科最好的学院是剑桥大学，工科则非帝国理工学院（IC）莫属了。您能否简单介绍一下帝国理工学院的情况？
A：我们的优势专业分别由医学、工程和研究生课程。我们非常欢迎广大学生成为我们其中的一员。2007年是我们下百年校庆，女王也来到我们学校正式宣布帝国理工学院独立成校。我们以前隶属于伦敦大学但现在是独立学院，我们正在努力成为英国的顶尖名校。目前由大约1.3万名学生就读于帝国理工学院，其中约有8000名本科生和5000名研究生。我们的师资队伍非常的国际化、多元化。目前大约有2%的老师来自英国以外的国家。
问题：帝国理工学院（IC）对中国的招生是以重点大学为主任何一所大学都享受同样的条件，对于学生的专业成绩有着怎样的要求？
A：帝国理工学院（IC）对于申请研究生学位的中国学生，我们希望学生是来自211或985工程的学校。我们的录取要求十分严格，所以学生必须要符合中等的录取要求。我们需要学生在专业上一直都有出色的表现。我们希望学生相关的分数以及证书
能在个人陈述中有所体现。你知道，这确实可以从一定程度上保证学生做科研的能力，他是否具备了相当的学习能力、研究能力继续到帝国理工学院（IC）来攻读跟高一层的学业，这个很重要。如果有切实的数据做说明，比如分数或者曾经获得的科研成果、各种形式的奖励，我是说，一些数据化的证明，最好这些在个人陈述里面都能有所体现。要知道这些能帮助我们尽快地认识学生和了解学生，认识到你却是很优秀，可以让你从激烈的竞争中脱颖而出。当然还需要有比较好的优秀的推荐信，这是必不可少的因素之一。整个申请的程序可能会比较复杂，因为我们要对学生进行全面考察而非仅仅关注于某一个方面。
问题：好的。谢谢您所做的详细的阐述！接下来，可以给他们谈谈具体的申请流程吗，我们可以开始逐项地进行分析。首先，帝国理工学院（IC）对GPA有着什么样的要求？
A：要知道，不同的专业可能会有不同的要求。在帝国理工学院（IC），据我所知，GPA的最低要求是3.5，最高需要达到4.0。并且我们也期待有10%-20%的优秀学生是来自中国排名前10或者排名前20的名校。
问题：可是据我所知，确实有GPA3.0也同样获得了帝国理工学院（IC）录取了的先例在前，可以给我们解释说明一下吗？
A：是吗？他叫什么名字？是那个专业的？的确是会有这样的学生，但这一定是个别现象，而非普遍的现象。我相信这个和该学生的录取专业有直接的关系，又或者是这个GPA3.0的学生
一定是有某个其他方面打动了我们，综合考虑之下，我们觉得他很优秀，适合到帝国理工学院（IC）来继续深造，所以就录取了这个GPA3.0的学生。个别专业的一个或者两个学生，稍微降低GPA3.5的最低要求到GPA3.0也不是不可能的。但我必须强调，那一定是极为个别的现象。
问题：谢谢您的回答！不过GPA3.5的要求要是太强硬了，可能会把很多好学生都挡在门外的，您认为呢？
A：您说的很对，但是我想说的是，帝国理工学院（IC）不是要选拔好学生，而是要选拔出“好学生中的好学生”。GPA的确是能够在一定程度上说明学生是否具备该领域的专业素质，是否具备了所必须具备的基本的学习和研究的能力。
问题：那么，帝国理工学院（IC）对于学生的英语水平有着什么样的要求？
A：与其他的应该大学相比，我们对于学生英语水平的要求其实并不是太高。如果是雅思成绩，通常帝国理工学院（IC）需要学生达到平均分为6.5即可。当然，不同的院系对英语水平的要求可能也不会相同的。但是，帝国理工学院（IC）各个院系有一个底线，那就是学生的每项雅思成绩最低不得少于5.0分。针对研究生课程的学习，通常我们需要学生达到的平均分数为7.0分。通过对GPA分数和雅思分数设定的门槛的高低，就不难发现，帝国理工学院（IC）更注重学生的科研能力、学术能力，而不是英语能力。英语能力只要能够满足基本的交流和沟通，不影响日
常的上课、交流、科研学术等活动就可以了，不需要学员考出过高的分数。帝国理工学院（IC）建议申请学生把更多的精力用来提高自己专业的研究能力，比如GPA，帝国理工学院（IC）是非常喜欢有高的GPA成绩的申请学生。从这个方面来说，帝国理工学院（IC）还是比较人性化的。
问题：嗯，听你这么说，帝国理工学院（IC）对英语水平和分数的要求的确是独树一帜的。对于像帝国理工学院（IC）这样的名校，要求的语言成就的确不算很高的。那么，帝国理工学院（IC）有哪些专业对雅思成绩的要求是6.5分的，您能具体介绍一下吗？
A：像医学、工程学和类似这样的理科专业，雅思只需要达到6.5分就可以了。帝国理工学院（IC）并不愿意仅仅因为申请学生的英语水平不太理想就将这些申请学生拒之门外。帝国理工学院（IC）最看重的还是申请学生的在校专业成绩。如果大家需要了解帝国理工学院（IC）的其他专业的具体要求，可以查阅我们的网站，帝国理工学院（IC）的网站上面都有详细的介绍。此外，帝国理工学院（IC）还设置了一些英语培训课程来帮助申请学生提高语言水平，并且这些课程都是免费的，欢迎大家来学习！
问题：太好了！请问这些都是对所有的申请学生开放的吗？
A：只是对一局注册过的学生开放。帝国理工学院（IC）希望对这些学生继续提供在英语水平方面的帮助，以此来使申请学生达到其专业的要求。帝国理工学院（IC）是一所国际化的大学，
有来自不同国家的学生来到这里来学习，这其中也包括中国的学生。即便是通过了雅思考试，也并不意味着申请学生就能够完全适应我们这里纯英文的教学，所以特别开设了免费的英语培训课程，用来帮助同学们提高英语的水平，已达到申请学生专业所需的英语水平的要求。我建议同学们要积极地利用类似这样的学校资源，提高自己的英语水平。
问题：那对于那些在雅思成绩上只与你们的要求差了一点的申请者呢,你们是否考虑通融一下，看看有没有录取这些申请学生的这个可能存在呢？
A：对于这些学生，我们也在每个专业中安排了由于提前培训课程，通常是8周为一个周期。
问题：请您解释一下，到底什么样的分数才是只与你们的要求差了一点的呢？就过往的录取工作经验来看，通融的最底线究竟在哪里呢？
A：好的。比如好像有些学生的平均分是6分，这就只与我们的要求相差了一点的。
问题:像这样的学生也是有机会参加相关的语言培训的吗，就好像前面提到的免费的语言培训？
A:是的。所以我们建议资质优秀的申请学生，可以大胆地向帝国理工学院（IC）递交申请材料。不要因为自己的英语成绩不够优秀就望而却步，我前面已经再三强调过了，帝国理工学院（IC）更为看重的是学生在专业领域的研究能力，而不是英语考试的成
绩。
问题：请问您可以向我们介绍一下教授这些语言培训课程的师资力量是什么水平，或者说这些教授的老师培训的重点有哪些？
A：我们专门配备了优秀的师资教师来教授这些课程的，最大限度地提高学生的语言水平，不仅是英语水平也包括专业水平。你知道传统的英语老师仅仅善于英语的教学，但是在我们为学生准备的语言培训课程中，可以由专业的老师针对你所学的专业制定相应的专业的英语教学，有的放矢地提高英语成绩，并可以灵活运用到日常的专业学习中。
问题：那么有多少学生参加过这些培训课程之后成功地达到了你们的语言水平要求？
A：说到这个问题，我非常荣幸地告诉你，目前绝大多数参加过这些培训课程的学生都成功达到了我们的语言水平的要求。
问题：也就是说学生可以选择参加雅思考试，即便是成绩暂时没有达到要求，也可以随后参加帝国理工学院（IC）的提前语言培训来达到要求，那么，对于成功写好个人陈述，您有什么好的建议吗？
A：是的。不要为了不够高的雅思成绩犯愁，那不是帝国理工学院（IC）最看重的。我们希望在个人陈述里面有70%的部分是与申请专业有关的信息。举个例子来说，申请学生应该说明为什么想选择这个专业和想怎样学习好这门专业；这门专业里面，
什么最吸引申请学生，还有什么领域是申请学生想雪地更多的；过往在专业中取得的成绩或者获得的奖励，我提到过，最好有具体的数据来证明或者说明。我们需要看见申请学生对于专业的热情。我们有许多优秀的学者、教授在钻研非常具体细致的领域，他们也希望有更多有潜质的年轻申请学生加入到这个队伍中来。所以，申请学生需要让我们印象深刻，并且成功说服我们来接纳你。
问题：多数的中国学生都比较内敛一点，在如何成功展现自我、推荐自我的这些方面，您对他们有什么特别好的建议吗？
A：我很乐意与大家分享一下我的个人感触。我刚来英国的时候，英语能力也不是特别的好，仅仅能应付日常的交流。和现状能够自由的表达自己的想法还有一定的差价。在这方面，我的最大的心得就是：来到英国最重要的品质就是要主动。在西方国家里面学习，你应该制度资金最大的亮点是什么，并主动地发挥资金的长处，确保让别人来关注你、肯定你，这样才能够很快获得成功。
所以我建议申请学生们在写个人陈述时，应该通过一些具体的事例，讲述资金如何一步步准备，最后达到的专业水平和提高的学术水平。通过具体的事例，可以让我们更了解你，所以，一定要先我们证明你自己有实力来学习好这门专业。大家还应该在个人陈述里面展现资金显而易见的优势，除了专业成绩，还应该展现资金的领导能力、与人交往的交际能力等综合的能力。仅仅
说自己的兴趣，说自己想要来这里读书，说自己非常喜爱这门专业。。。。。。仅仅这样，是远远不够的。
还应该通过个人陈述体现资金的优点、亮点。比如，你曾经是校足球队的队长，那你就应该说明，你是如何扮演好足球队长这个角色的，以此来体现自己的主动性和创造性。还有你是如何带领足球队达到你们所希望达到的目标的等等。把这些具体的事例清晰地在个人陈述中展现出来，就会深刻的吸引我们。帝国理工学院（IC）也需要这样的学生，他们不仅在资金的专业学习上表现异常优秀，还应该体现在自己潜在的领导才能方面。
问题：接下来让我们来谈谈推荐信的问题。关于推荐信，您对国内的申请学生有什么比较好的建议吗?在国内的留学界经典的传说之一，就是“越是著名的教授的推荐信，对学生的录取就越为有利”。你同意这样的观点吗？
A：我建议大家找非常了解自己的老师或者同学来写推荐信，而不是非常著名的教授来写推荐信。至于是不是非常著名的教授来写推荐信，这个与录取的成功没有关系。只要老师或者同学非常了解这个申请学生的专业学习情况，能够对这个学生作出相对客观的评价就可以了。
此外，如果申请者有几年的工作经历，那么这会对他们更有利，因为这些申请者不仅有着良好的专业表现，还很清楚自己到底想要什么，知道自己为什么在工作了好几年以后仍然想回归学校充电。所以，我们需要的学生不仅要有有益的专业成绩，还应
该有能力对学校、对社会作出实际的贡献。如果申请者有着几年的工作经历，那么还应该找到他们的经理来写推荐信，所以应该准备两封推荐信。对于没有工作经历的申请者，只需要两封来自学校的推荐信即可的。
问题：现在让我们来谈谈奖学金。许多的中国学生可能承担不了他们的学费，这样的学生应该如何申请奖学金呢？
A：现在英镑贬值、人民币升值，这对于中国学生来说是比较有利的情况。但是很遗憾，我们并没有针对本科生或者是学期一年制的研究生专业设置太多的奖学金。但是我们还是建议大家可以在英国学习的时间久一些。因为在英国，年博士后课程的学生受到的待遇就是前期研究性人员获得的待遇，通常会有非常丰厚的资金赞助，当然只有非常优秀的学生才会有这样的待遇的。在这一点上，英国和美国就很不一样。日前英国首相布朗也在我们学校作了讲话，他表示，尽管现在正面临全球的金融危机，英国政府还是不会考虑减少奖学金或者基金的金额。
伴随着近年来中国经济的迅猛发展，帝国理工学院（IC）迎来了越来越多的中国自费生。与过往的公派生相比，自费生的来源相对比较复杂一些，但能够被帝国理工学院（IC）录取也足见这些人的优秀潜质。但是这里面一个值得提到的现象是，不少人虽然通过了严苛的入学审查，但在学习期间被淘汰下来的情况也时有发生的。
问题：到英国以后常常听当地的朋友说起，中国留学生身上
有一股浮躁之气。您是如何理解这句话的，您认同这些人的说法吗？
A:关于这个问题，现在中国学生的整体优势并不明显。帝国理工学院（IC）是一个国际性的大学，各国的优秀学生都云集到帝国理工学院（IC）求学。相对比之下，学习压力的确很大，就像我上面提到的那样，即使通过了帝国理工学院（IC）严苛的入学审查，也并不表示在整个学习过程中不会被淘汰。所以，学习压力还是相当的大的。有一些体系甚至从入学开始就到处打听毕业时怎样找工作的事情，状态的确是显得有那么点浮躁。进入优秀的学校，学生和他的家庭都付出了很大的代价，学习的目的应该是为了成为世界一流的人才，而不仅仅是混个饭碗这么简单。成为优秀的人才，则需要很审慎地思考和脚踏实地的不懈努力才可以的。
下面是一篇来自留学生事务所的catherine（官方QQ：1127994113）执笔的优秀的成功申请帝国理工学院留学的留学生个人陈述，请大家仔细体会帝国理工学院国际招生办主任的话，认真体会下面这个优秀的个人陈述的成功之处。
个人陈述——Imperial College（帝国理工学院）
Thank you so much that you can read this letter. As an aspiring senior student from China, I write this letter in hope of applying for
the further undergraduate study in your prestigious and distinguished school—Imperial College majoring in Computer science. I would like to obtain a broad academic insight and set up a career in this field of computing science that would strongly stimulate and interest me.
I have developed a keen interest in computers when I am at an early age, and have been fascinated by its application in biology and other fields, as well as the advances brought about for ordinary life. Computing has changed our life a lot during these decades. Its application extremely accumulates the pace of human development. It helps us get more information online and allow us communicate easily at long distance and storage our data more safely. As far as I know, its application in the biology makes the diagnose results more accurate and reduce the pain of patient, even help produce high-tech materials and other items. The manufacture of robots brings a great of convenience for the modern production. It largely reduces the human labor and cost, completes some difficult tasks that human can’t. In a word, I think our life will benefit more from computing science and I would like to contribute myself in this field out of my strong interest and its bright prospect.
I am active, full of kinds of ideas and good at logical analyzing the problems. And I always try my best to put my idea into practice and
logically discuss the outcome, which I think is one of my strengths comparing these competent candidates. My faith is ‘where there is a will, there is a way’. Therefore, no matter how little the task is, I will engage in it with my full endeavor. As a girl, it is strange in China that I am so addicted to robots and computing. But I still take Marie Curie, the world renowned and female scientist as my idol. During her life time, she won twice Nobel Prize and made great contribution for the society. As a successful female pioneer, her success inspires me all the time.
The reason why I love computing and robots so much is partly due to my father, who engaged in computing. He always brought me about booklet about robots. And he sometimes directed me to make some robot modules. Afterwards, in the junior school, I attend the robot group by chance. This is my first time to study the related knowledge of robot and computing. I get very well with the other members in the group. I have taken part in individual competition for two times. In 2007, I won the second prize in the national competition of IROC (international robot Olympic competition) for the nation. In 2008, I got the golden prize in the creative competition of IROC. You know, I am the only girl in the whole competition process, which greatly inspires me and increases my confidence. In the interest group, we always initially discuss the feasibility of each
proposal and assign the task. My responsibility is programming and resemble. In addition, I get the second and slivery prize in the provincial ‘star of hope’ competition in 2006. Meanwhile, I am the leader of the biological interest group (about 20 members). We ever went to Yan Tai to collect marine biological specimens. I take the responsibility for assigning task and organizing to discuss the results. My activities out of class are fruitful, which help me be capable of analyzing problems and learning how to coordinate and communicate with the other members. Extensive hobbies give me so many opportunities to make many friends and get my life better. During my education period in China, I form precious academic attitude and my average score –86/100 is rather high in my class. I am good at mathematics and logical analyzing. In spite of that, I have a clear position on my future career. First of all, out of the reason that I want to reach a successful achievement in biology, I will finish my undergraduate study in your school in the field of Computing Science. And then, I want to apply for my postgraduate study in computing science, which is a branch of Biomedical Engineering. Hoping I can get academic achievement like other scholars in our university.
To sum up, I would greatly appreciate this opportunity if I can successfully be a student in your university. I will work extremely
hard to gain the Master Degree and I have prepared to challenge with the future potential difficulties no matter in life or academic research. I believe IC University is the best place for me to extend my interest and widen my horizon in the science. I hold the belief that I have the commitment and confidence of giving my best during my university career and afterwards.
Personal Statement For nearly one year, when all other colleagues had gone back home after work or to the bars for relaxation, I kept myself busy with the designing, programming, and refactoring work. W hen I got home every day after ten o’clock in the nig ht, I would read papers of XXX and continue for seeking the universities and professors attractive to me until one o’clock in the morning. My sense of responsibility for the company made me obliged to finish all the projects in my hands before I leave for America. And my yearning for the free American environment which is easy to inspire researchers’ potential made me willing to live such hard life under much greater pressure. Although over two years’ software development work in Beijing Grandsoft Technolo gy Co., Ltd has already helped me accumulate considerable experience in software programming and designing and make some achievements admirable in others’ eyes, I, who will be promoted as a senior development engineer, know clearly that only the xxx program in your department can fully exert my strength and make my pursuit come true. I know that I belong to the kind of people who are able to better realize the life values and meaningfulness while doing certain interesting things, who enjoy challenges and thinking and who are always in pursuit of creative ideas. However, the work I was taking up now is almost always repetition of what has already existed. That’s why I gave up the achievement without hesitation. I know that I will be able to master the most advanced technology and thoughts in the xxx program. In such a bright and promising field, I believe I will be able to inspire all my ability in facing challenges, and finally become a top talent to make contributions to the development in the field. Moreover, my studying and working experiences make me very confident in myself to believe that I have got the ability and potential to realize my pursuit. I became interested in computer science in Chongqing Nankai Middle School, a school emphasizing cultivating personal interests. But my unusual performance in the National Entrance Examination failed me for entering the Department of Computer Science of Tsinghua University. Being clear of my interest and goal, I spent quite a lot of time in computer science besides the basic courses required by the university. Although I didn’t gain an extraordinary GPA, I succeeded in transferring to the School of Software. Afterwards, my GPA continued increasing and my foundation in the major was consolidated. I have a good habit in learning and working. No matter how great the pressure was, I would stick to my studies after work. And I finished reading books like Interconnection Networks - An Engineering Approach and reviewed (Introduction to Algorithms, Computer Networks, Database Systems Concepts) twice. In addition, I am very creative. I could solve the instability in file transmission by using FTP/HTTP method instead of the original Web Service/COM+ method to cope with different network situations after independent
Personal Statement My decision of studying in finance field is very natural and I firmly believe that I will be one part of this industry, even elite. Before this dream comes true, a long way is in front of me, and a key station on this road is pursuing master degree in finance field in your prestigious university. Financial management has brought me much sense of accomplishment and enjoyment. In terms of knowledge, I have learnt many core modules finance field, e.g. Financial Management, Statistics, Accounting Cost, Intermediate Financial Accounting, Advanced Financial Management, Money and Banking, and Financial Analysis and so forth. Due to my strong interest and hard working, I become one of the top ten students in terms of specialized modules and the Second Prize Scholarship. Besides, my mathematics ability is good to be capable of being successful in future finance study and working. In addition to these, what the more important for me is the study and research capabilities. Critical and proactive thinking and research by referring various references such as the latest information and classic academic books are much more crucial. Admittedly, the Britain education on research will help me to get a big step. I prefer to improve myself well-rounded. Therefore, I worked in the Student Union Office to organize the first School Game as team leader, communicating with other departments, negotiating with team members, and plan the schedule. This successful Game is a
美国计算机专业留学个人陈述模板 美国研究生申请文书包括个人陈述、推荐信、简历、 Essay以及Writing Sample等，而个人陈述（PS）所占的比重更大，因而个人陈述的撰写更需慎重，需要全面考虑。和小编一起来看看美国计算机专业留学个人陈述模板。 I thought much before I began to
the PS. However，holding the pen， I suddenly felt wordless because I have too much to
too much to write. Standing on the crossroad of life， I determined to study abroad without
hesitations. 出国留学的想法并不是源于我对国外生活的向往，而是源于我对专业的追求，因为我对我所学习的专业具有的与众不同的兴趣.我向往着再能够更加深入的学习和掌握信息科学的内涵，体会她的魅力！凭借着一种懵懂的感性指引将我带进了信息科学的殿堂，在大学几年的学习过程中，逐渐认识到了当前的信息社会，不仅需要一系列方方面面懂得信息技术的人才，更需要我们对信息科学和技术做更深入的研究，将这个学科的技术应用到各个行业。而且，信息科学很明显是未来的趋势，它将颠覆性地改变人们过去曾经熟悉的生活方式。在对这个专业的学习过程中，我感到了它的有趣、挑战、永远与最新技术保持同步，最重要的是让我觉得它非常有前景，为了她挥洒自己的青春是值得的。 It was not the
for the life overseas，but the pursuit of my professional study that aroused my idea to
准留学生们在动手写个人陈述（Personal Statement）的时候往往摸不着头脑，不知如何下手，其实留学个人陈述只要在写之前理清思路和重点，就能下笔如有神助哦。专门提供留学资讯的Hotcourses中国小编就以一篇留学个人陈述范文为例，为大家解析一下留学个人陈述模板的框架和语言风格。 留学个人陈述模板的开头部分 留学个人陈述在开头需要直奔主题，因为外国老师不喜欢绕来绕去的措辞，最好在开始就表现出积极的态度，以及表明自己为什么想要学这个专业，同时也不要忘记了阐述自己的独特之处。当然，因为这个是开始，所以要以简单明了为主。 以下就是英文的模板例文： I graduated from xxx university with a degree in xxx (subject). I would like to apply xxx at youruniversity. With my great passion in the area, I hope to become an expert in xxxx industry. Iunderstand that xxxx university is famous for xxxx, it has established a great r eputation in thexxx industry with lots of graduates from becoming leaders in the field. I want to become one ofthem, and therefore, I am very interested and keen to be involve d in your university… 译文：我是某某大学某某专业毕业的学生，想申请贵校的某某专业。我对某某专业很感兴趣，希望将来能成为这个行业的专家。我知道贵校的这个专业十分出名，在业界有很高的声誉，也培养了很多此行业的精英。我想成为此行列中的一员，所以我很想成为贵校的一份子，在该专业领域深造。 分析：这个开头的语言简练，并以第一人称为主，能让招生老师一目了然。留学生们切记，开头段不要写太长太复杂的句子，因为长难句不仅会显得啰嗦，还会让人失去阅读兴趣。 留学个人陈述模板的主体部分 需要开始阐述留学生的学术背景，如果有工作经验的话，需要描述一下工作背景如何和此专业相关 英文模板例文如下： My preparation for your programme has been expansive and thorough. First, I have a sol idbackground in xxx and xxx. Second, during my undergraduate years, I joined a club cal led xxxwith the focus on xxx. Our projects dealt with xxx, and other xxx. My work outsid e the campus,in job placements through xxx university, granted me excellent opportuniti es for real-worldexperience. While exploring the possibility of graduate-level work, I discovered that my interests are perfectlymatched with your programme. My interest in xxx, especially, was piqued during my xxx class.The aspects of the xxx fascinated me and made me long to supervise a lar ge project in this fieldone day. Although I realise my current limitations, my whole-hearte d enthusiasm, combined withguidance from your exceptional faculty, will carry me throug h the rigors of studying and forge meinto an expert xxx after the one/two year master co
Personal Statement A desirable career should be the one where people lay their passions and interests, and meanwhile this career should be able to widen their visions, enrich their lives and ultimately fulfill their aspirations to realize life values. The legal profession, I reckon, is the ideal career in line with all my life pursuit. Currently, with my undergraduate study approaching the end, I would like to apply for further study in your LL.M. program to enrich my knowledge base and build up my critical thinking skills to prepare myself to launch a successful legal career. My undergraduate study in Minzu University of China has proved to be fruitful and colorful. As a self-motivated student, I have spared no pains to equip myself with specialist knowledge and practical skills. Thanks to my unremitting efforts, I have built a firm academic grounding about jurisprudence, criminal law, civil law, commercial law and etc, and scored an exemplary average score of 89.5%, ranking me the first in the whole grade comprised of about 100 students. Moreover, by frequently attending the moot courts and drafting a range of legal documents, I significantly harnessed my verbal and writing skills, and gradually sharpened my insight into China’s judicial system. Furthermore, I have double majored in English, and thereby greatly improved my English proficiency, which enabled me to effectively acquire the knowledge pertaining to international economic law, international law, international private law, and so forth, and thereby consolidated my resolution to pursue further study in a programme which is delivered in English. Besides my endeavors to solidify academic knowledge, I have thrown myself into a stream of research projects. Among those examples I could cite would be my experience in carrying out the national-level undergraduate innovation training programme titled Fire Protection Regulations of Villages of the Miao Nationality-a Case Study about Xijiang Village Leishan County Guizhou Province. Starting from conducting investigations and interviewing residents in that village, our team collected plentiful data, and studied the pros and cons of current regulations. After consulting professional literatures and seeking advices from scholars& experts, we proposed our suggestions about improving current regulations to better protect villagers’lives and properties. In recognition of the practical value of our research, our project was awarded as the Excellent Project, and our research paper will soon be published in the 2nd Issue of Journal of Original Ecological National Culture. By undertaking those researches, for one thing, I have largely broadened my intellectual horizon; for another, I enhanced my skills in data collection, analysis and interpretation of results to conduct productive researches, which, in my opinion, will
牛津大学商科留学个人陈述范例 留学个人陈述是申请英国留学文书中的重要组成部分，在硬件条件相当的申请人相互竞争时，提供一份令人印象深刻、能表现申请人个人特质的留学个人陈述无疑能为申请加分。下面是由“出国汇”（百度一下）的指导下学员制作的一份成功申请到英国牛津大学商科的留学个人陈述，大家一起来看看作者的写作有何值得借鉴的地方吧! Since a very young age - where all my friends were aspiring to become firemen, astronauts and rockstars - I have always dreamed of wearing a suit to work. I don…t know what it was, but I guess I just identified all these men as being the real players in the world - driving fast cars and hitting it off with beautiful women. These guys - the lawyers, entrepreneurs and accountants - were all sipping champagne and living the high life. Of course, you don?t have to wear a suit to be making money (look at Steve Jobs, for example), it…s not all fun and games, and you have to be damn good at what you do, but my ambitions have remained the same. This is what I want to be, but money is no longer the sole object, in my opinion. This has stemmed from my upbringing, where every morning CNN is put on the TV, stock portfolios lie in messy stacks around the house and political conversation runs rife at the dinner table. Every day I would hear my father talking about his business ventures and garnered a great interest. To me, the business world seemed entirely different to our regular one: it was a grandiose battlefield of thousands of opposing teams –a vicious free for all where the only objective was to win. Language like “slaughtering the competition” was frequently used, and I instantly knew that this game was more intense than any sport, more exciting tha n any video game and more fulfilling than any hobby. I once even tried my hand at business of my own –selling gumballs at school –which, to my surprise, was rather successful, if short-lived (regulated into the ground). By the time I was beginning my IGCSE year I was absolutely itching to take a Business & Management course. I felt a lot of it come naturally to me, remembering all the terms and advice I had heard from my father. All along it was extremely satisfying to know that whilst I would hardly use anyth ing I had learnt in math’s (unless I need to know the exact angle that my ladder is at), no matter what profession I would take, I could apply this. I took part in stock competitions, both in and outside of school, in an attempt to better my understanding of the seemingly confusing concept of stock exchange. One of the most interesting aspects of business for me is international markets, which then extends into economics. I have often been told that one of my most valuable qualities is that I am tri-cultural, coming from an extremely interesting background. I have lived in Spain my entire life, with an American mother and English father, who is a chartered accountant and previously owned a successful record label; he
美国留学申请如何写个人陈述 什么是个人陈述 个人陈述是在申请过程中按照学校要求来写一篇有关申请人背景,学术成就和未来研究和职业目标的文章。一篇成功的个人陈述不但应该语言流畅,逻辑严谨,层次分明,更要充分显示申请人的才华并抓住审阅人的注意力。几乎所有学校都要求提交个人陈述。 个人陈述也有不同的名称,如Personal Statement,Statement of Purpose,Statement of Intent, Statement of Objectives, Academic Statement,Study Plan,Academic Objectives等。 个人陈述应当包含以下内容： （一）申请者的学术或专业兴趣及背景； （二）欲研究的方向； （三）未来的职业目标。 如果个人陈述写作得当,可以很大程度地提高申请者获得录取和奖学金的机会。这对申请者来说是一个绝好的机会。可惜的是很多申请者对TOEFL、GRE可谓呕心沥血,而对个人陈述往往一蹴而就,敷衍了事,内容贫乏、语法错误连篇。而西方的大学并不单是通过传统的考试来考评其申请者的资格,这并不是说他们的录取标准不严格。外国教授在决定你是否正是他们想要的人时,首先希望听一听你对于你自己作何评价。当你通过申请文书来介绍你自己时,你会发现所面临的机遇和挑战同样之大。 要写出成功的申请文书仅仅有那些适用于任何类型写作的基本写作技巧（清晰、简洁）是远远不够的。一篇好的申请文书要求申请人能够用一种与其他申请人完全不同方式,巧妙地展现自己的独特个性和经验。这是一件要求比较高,通常非常繁累的工作。这不仅仅对中国人如此,以英语为母语的人在此类写作时也会感到十分的头疼,但是我们中国人还需克服语言的障碍。 美国留学申请如何写个人陈述 个人陈述的内容应包含下列三项资料： （一）申请者的学术或专业兴趣及背景； （二）欲研究的方向； （三）未来的职业目标； 写作时,依以上三点将文章分为三个主要部分。不要像列清单,也不要重覆申请表格已有的资料。 注意事项： （一）详读学校的写作说明并了解问题的重点,不赘言,不遗漏,且在要求的字数内完成。例如学校要求五百字内完成(In 500 words or less discuss ...),则全文最好不要超过五百字。如果学
哈佛大学个人陈述PS三篇优秀范文示例 撰写留学文书最难的部分是personal statement（PS），我们可以通过以下三篇优秀的哈佛大学优秀essay来了解下，如何撰写高质量的文章。 第一篇申请美国哈佛大学的Essay范文，以音乐才能为主题，采用的是场景描述式来制造戏剧冲突，引起读者注意。Essay题材类型为talent。Essay短文讲述了作者的才能：Music。 "A special Performance" I stood behind the curtains listening to the applause to the previous act. I exhaled, realizing that this was a moment that fulfilled my childhood wish. Tonight was special because instead of an alto aria or a jazz lick, I had prepared a song unique to my identity. I curled my fingers around the microphone and waited impatiently as the curtains opened. My love for performance stemmed from my appreciation of music as a child. In the city in China where I spent the first ten years of my life, I never found a choir to join and never laid eyes on a grand piano. Nonetheless, I treasured my passion for song and sought ways to bring music into my life. I sang with our old record player when I was barely tall enough to reach it. On certain afternoons, my best friend and I would tape bed sheets to the ceiling as curtains and invite neighbors to come listen. There, we sang in duet, danced, and bowed while clasping each other's hands. Captured in our own musical sanctuary, we never noticed the hours that passed by. Music evokes in me the emotions that words and pictures cannot. I also revel in the intellectual challenges that music offers. I find it thrilling to tackle difficult, delicious repertoire, and I enjoy composing my own melodies. Through music, I can share and celebrate my past. When I was asked to share my cultural talents at my high school, I looked for a song that my mother sang when I was young, but I could not find the sheet music. A week before tonight, I sat down by the old piano in the practice room at school. With only the old tune ringing faintly in my mind, my hands soon took a life of their own and experimented with chords, arpeggios, and trills. I superimposed these on the original melody and composed variations. My voice, too, frolicked with the piano as I sang the tune repeatedly. I was lost in another musical paradise. I felt like a child again, tucked under the covers, listening to my mother's song as I drifted away to dreams. Now, dressed in an old Chinese dress that my mother had worn in her youth, I stepped onto the empty stage illuminated by pale blue light. I held the microphone up to my lips and smiled before starting. Then, I brought to life the beautiful ballad that had brightened my childhood in China. My mind overflowed with warm memories of that faraway city as I lulled the audience with my melody. When I caught my mother's face in the audience, I knew she nestled in the same air of nostalgia. Music allows me to present my native culture and contribute to the diversity in my community. It has stimulated my mind and provided an outlet for my creativity. To me, nothing is more pleasurable than being imaginative. Carrying my childhood love of music through my teenage years has been a gratifying experience, and I look forward to continuing in my undergraduate years.
出国留学如何写个人陈述 First, you will have to register with Ucas and enter your personal details. You will then be able to apply for up to five courses. Make sure you cross reference the course requirements with your predicted grades and A-level choices so you won t get rejected before you have even taken your exams. You will then be asked to detail your education and qualifications to date and to give details of any jobs you have had. It s also a good idea to nail down who will be providing your academic reference as soon as possible - make sure you give your teacher enough time to make it a good one. Finally, before you submit your application, you will be asked to include your personal statement. This is your chance to convince your university or college that you are the right person to study their course. For some people, writing a personal statement will come easily. But for those who are feeling daunted1 about the prospect2 of putting 4,000 characters together, you are not
留学申请个人陈述范文 留学申请个人陈述范文 个人陈述样本一： 个人陈述 申请人：********* 申请学校及专业：************* 尊敬的学校领导，您好，我很高兴能写这样一篇文章向您描述我的个人背景，以及对贵校和想 学专业的一些见解。 我叫*******，是一个活泼开朗、热情大方的女孩，我做事积极上进，有责任心，适应能力很强。我是一个即将毕业的大四学生，大学四年让我学到了许多专业的知识，马上要毕业了，我不打算工作，也没有选择考研，而是非常希望去贵校继续学习，因为我对时尚买手与产品管理这个专业有着浓厚的兴趣。我出生在中国北方的一个沿海城市，父母一起经营着一家广告公司，在他们的努力下，我从小到大一直过着衣食无忧的生活。因为工作的关系，我的父母很注重穿衣打扮，这对我也有着潜移默化的影响，平时我很喜欢看各种时尚杂志，逛商场，买服装、饰品，对时尚产业有着非比寻常的热爱。所以，我想在大学毕业以后去贵校求学，学习时尚和管理的知识，成为一个真正 懂时尚，并且可是在时尚领域工作的人。 上中学的时候我就知道，意大利是欧洲文艺复兴的发源地，在艺术、时尚、宗教、料理、电影、建筑、经济及音乐等方面具有重要的影响力，现在的意大利走在时尚最前沿的国家，拥有无数顶尖的时尚品牌，在悠久的历史文化的衬托下，散发着无穷的魅力，去意大利求学是我一直以来的梦想。意大利优秀的学校很多，最吸引我的就是贵校--Polimoda。我了解到，Polimoda时尚学院是全世界最为著名的时尚专业院校之一，有着优厚的师资力量，是国际时尚奢侈品业备受推崇的专业院校，坐落在国际时尚创意设计与奢侈品管理教育之都、世界历史文化名城意大利佛罗伦萨，在实习