新东方4 6级考试作文免费辅导课程 讲义 第1课

新东方四六级名师解惑之写作篇1.脑子里想好中文的意思，再把它翻译成英文，这样的思路对吗？汪老师：许多同学都是想好中文再翻译成英文。

严格说来，即使对学习英语多年的人来说，在写作时想做到完全用英文思索都是极难达到的一种近乎神话的抱负境界。

关键是中文思索的程度——英文修养极高的人在写作时可能已经很少意识到自己是在用那种语言、很难区分自己在什么时候正在使用什么语言，他已经到了“天人合一”的境界；英文很好的人可能只是在整体构思时用汉语，到详细写作段落或句子时用英语；英文一般的人会将每句的意思大致用汉语想好，但写作时还是要用英文的习惯句型和固定搭配来表达；初学英语基础又很不扎实的人在不仅每句用汉语想好，还基本每字严格对译，这就是中式英文的产生缘由了。

要想少些一点中式英文，就要多积累习惯句型和固定搭配，在“翻译”时尽可能多用这些模式化的句型，少一些逐字对译。

2.经常想不起想用的一个词的英语说法，该如何解决？汪老师：这是考试时任何一个人都会遇到的问题，即使他的词汇量很大。

其实就算一个人的词汇量再大，大到把握全部英文单词，也还是会遇到一些无法用已有单词表达的状况。

由于世界在变化，每时每刻总会有新的事物消失。

遇到不会表达的思想可以用以下几招：第一，模糊化即用上义词表达。

如不会说“手提电脑”，可以用它的上义词“machine”, “gadget”, “invention”, “instrument” 等。

其次，可以解释说明。

如我们可以把手提电脑写作“the kind of computer that you can carry wherever you go and that you can put on your lap”。

第三，可以把一些解释不清的东西略去不写。

写作是一个主动的制造过程，可以并且应当发挥自己的主观能动性。

写那些自己会写的，避开那些自己不会写的。

这才是写作的乐趣所在。

否再和前面的单项选择题有什么区分。

新CET-4写作培训讲义(doc 34页)部门： xxx时间： xxx制作人：xxx整理范文，仅供参考，勿作商业用途新CET-4写作讲义北京新东方学校：王江涛欢迎使用新东方在线电子教材前言开场白推荐两本书：《圣经》《古希腊罗马神话》一共分为四节课，每节课大概2.5小时左右第一节课：1）考试题型；2）考试要求；3）评卷实例第一节一、考试题型1、应用文（7考）：口头作文（2考）、书信作文（5考）2、论说文（25考）：提纲作文（23考）、图表作文（2考）3、段首句作文：4考4、课程安排：1）考试题型、考试要求、评卷实例2）口头作文、书信总论3）书信详解4）论说文、翻译5、学习方法：实力（高分策略）＋技巧（万能框架）二、考试要求《大学英语考试大纲》中明确规定：四级大学英语写作考试时间为30分钟。

要求应试者写出一篇不少于120个词的短文；写作命题源于日常生活和有关科技、社会文化等方面的一般常识，不涉及知识面过广、专业性太强的内容。

其命题方式有：给出题目、或规定情景、或给出段首句续写、或给出关键词写短文、或看图作文。

要求内容切题，文理通顺，表达正确，语义连贯，无重大语言错误。

6、时间要求：30分钟1）审题（3分钟）：2）写作（25分钟）：3）检查（2分钟）：语法（时态、冠词、主谓一致）、拼写、标点【2005.06】For this part, you are allowed 30minutes to write a short essay [IN honour ofteachers on the occasion of Teacher's Day].You should write at least 120 wordsfollowing the outline given below:1. 向老师表达节日祝贺2. 从一件小事来回忆老师的教诲和无私的奉献3. 我如何回报老师的关爱7、字数要求：120－150词8、写作主题：大学校园生活（学习、生活、工作）9、命题方式：段首句、提纲、命题、关键词、情景、图表作文10、具体要求：1）语言第一位：表达通顺、无重大语言错误（1）基础一般：简单原则、安全第一（2）基础较好：句子结构词多变2）结构第二位：（1）逻辑性：A.并列：and/or/butB.因果：because/in that, since/as, forC.转折：but/however（2）关联词：3）内容第三位：切题Last night, I was kicked by my girl friend. She ran away with a small white face. She is my green plum and bamboo horse. Now I know that love is blind. Beauty is but skin-deep. Money is the root of evil. However, I only regret that I have but one life to lose for my country. Could you please tell my why the injured is always me. It is high time that you teachers devoted your love to me. If you do not give me full mark, I will commit suicide immediately.三、评卷实例11、教材第5页第1篇：中英思维差异1）中式思维：情感分段、读者领会、迂回模式、归纳式思维2）英式思维：逻辑分段、作者交代、直线模式、演绎式思维1999年1月真题例文（1）讲解Most people thought that read books should have been selectived. But others belived reading extentively was correction.Selective books or reading extensively?Sure, you can choice one from previous ideas,on one hand, There are too book to read for us. We should choose those which we intrested, and it would be helpful for us.on another hand. Someone's intresting was wide. Each book could bring you specific contain we couldn't reading at only one level.I confirmed all of these ideas were good but weren't wise.As a reader, the main task is to discover more and more books the second task is to held some which wonderful and helpful for us. Don't treat these books with rackless abandon.The best technology of reading is connect.12、教材第4页第2篇：1999年1月真题例文（2）讲解I think reading not only selectively but also extensively. Because the two sides are not contradict. Our time is limited. So we can not read every book in the world. However, we will not be interested in every book. We should read those books may be useful to ours, read those books which we like. But those books which we choose must be extensively so it can give ours all kinds of knowledge, news and so on, it also make ours become a wise man. On the one hand reading selectively let ours not waste our time which it is limitted. Moreover it can emphasis among all books that we can read. On the other hand reading extensively can deal with all kinds of need in our life. They are all useful to ours.13、教材第5页第3篇：1999年1月真题例文（3）讲解Some people think reading shall be choosed. Because some books are good to hummen beings and some books are harmful to people.Some people think that men shoud read books widely. Because wide reading can help man get much knowledge. And man can use it to change the world.It is my point that reading must be selectively. Because reading is important to man. Some books can help man but some books can lead some people to crime. It can be seen in the newspapers and watched on TV. We can make full use of some good books and gain more useful knowledge. It can make our life more beautiful. we must give up those unhelpful books. They are not good to us. Reading them is wasting time and money. So reading selectively is an important part in reading.14、教材第5页第2篇：1999年1月真题例文（4）讲解How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view. Some people think we should read selectively. They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published. It is impossible for us to read all the books. What's more, there are many bad books that are poisonous to our mind, and we shouldn't read them. Since we can't read all the books and we shouldn't read bad books, we must read selectively.But others may not agree. They emphasize that today's society is not what it was. If one man has many kinds of knowledge he'll have more chances to succeed. If a man knows much in one field but knows nothing in other fields, he may be useless. Since we must have many kinds of knowledge, we must read extensively.Who's right? I think both of them have something right. But I think we should read extensively first. We should read books in many fields, and read selectively in one field.15、教材第4页第1篇：1999年1月真题例文（5）讲解When it comes to reading, some people think that reading selectively is a good way, but some other people do not agree with them, they think that reading extensively is better.Those people, who think that reading selectively is better, believe that good books are as many as bad books. Those good books can give us pleasure and knowledge, while those bad books can only lead us to the wrong way. So, they suggest that we should only choose the good books to read and never touch the bad books.But, the other people, who hold that reading extensively is better, think that one kind of books can。

文章结构
开头部分
开篇点题，简明扼要地提出论点或论题，避免 使用生僻词和复杂的句式。
主体部分
分点论述，每段开头应有主题句，内容应紧扣 主题，并注意段落间的逻辑关系。
结尾部分
总结全文，重申观点，呼应开头，避免简单重复。
语言表达
准确用词
选择准确、具体的词汇，避免使用模棱两可 或容易产生歧义的词汇。
语法规范
考试要求
考生需要在规定时间内完成一篇作文 ，并符合题目的要求和格式。
考试评分标准
评分标准
根据考生的作文内容、语言表达、语法和拼写等方面进行评分。
分数等级
四六级作文考试的成绩分为优秀、良好、及格和不及格四个等级。
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CATALOGUE
四六级作文题型解析
议论文
总结词
对某一观点或问题进行正反两方面的讨论，表达个人观点。
THANKS
感谢观看
详细描述
考生需要经常阅读英文文章，提高阅读速度和理解能力 ，同时通过写作练习来培养英语思维和表达能力。此外 ，多练真题和模拟题也是提高应试能力的有效途径。
熟悉考试要求和题型
总结词
熟悉考试要求和题型是提高四六级作文的必要条件。
详细描述
考生需要认真了解四六级作文的评分标准、考试要求和 题型特点，以便更好地应对考试。同时，注意写作时间 分配和文章结构安排，确保在规定时间内完成高质量的 作文。
清晰、准确地表达信息 ，避免歧义和误解。
语言简洁明了，表达得 体。
在《四六级考试作文》 ppt课件中，将选取一篇 优秀的应用文范文进行 深入解析，包括格式规 范、信息表达和行文风 格的写作技巧。
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CATALOGUE
四六级作文常见错误分析

（空）里的句子 the number of-----has increased/decreased by x% from----to-- the loss caused by -----has amounted to -----dollars by the June of this year. X% of people do sth Sb do sth
开阔思路



1、经济 2、安全 3、便利 4、心理或交流 5、站在一个受教育的角度来考虑 6. 国家

万能原因句 The development of__has evolved from an amusing pace towards future to an all -out spurt, Which leads to the phenomenon that countless people (do sth) (to strive for economic benefits.



第一段 1）引话题2）我的观点 第二段 1）承上启下2）原因+举例 3）趋势句 第三段 1）总结 2）决心
引出话题板块
（一）报道法 As was reported on the china daily on June,18th,2007,……

（二）科学举例法




1）According to the recent survey conducted by a certain news agency,…… 2）The headline of the china daily on June,17th,2007，presented a thoughtprovoking data to us that…… 3）As is revealed by the statistics frequently appeared on newspapers recently,…… 4）A report conducted by a certain news agency came to us recently that……

自我介绍
1. 英语专业
2. 领事馆
3. 新东方
ü课程安排
1. 概述和书信
2. 书信和对立观点题
3. 对立观点和单一观点题
4. 单一观点和图表
5. 图表，改错和完型
课程要求
1. 预读——范文，模板，泛读
2. 复读——例文，笔记
3. 实践——押题
ü评分原则——内容与结构
总体评分
1. 找：idea
2. 扫：从，写作方法
3. 感：文字，文法，文体，文笔检查扣分点
1. 作文格式
2. 拼写
3. 搭配
4. 三“一致”
印象分——加分点/闪光点
十大闪光点(求求大家)
1. 提问法
2. 总结法
3. “一些人认为”
4. 从句：宾语从句、定语从句
5. 并列句
6. 理由词汇
7. 理由段公式
8. 路线句型
9. 数据的表达
10. 结语。

写作模板（一）段首句1. 关于……人们有不同的观点。

一些人认为……There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some people suggest that ____.2. 俗话说（常言道）……，它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即使在今天，它在许多场合仍然适用。

There is an old saying______. It’s the experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct in many cases even today.3. 现在，……，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。

首先，……；其次，……。

更为糟糕的是……。

Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, ____ Second,____. What makes things worse is that______.4. 现在，……很普遍，许多人喜欢……，因为……，另外（而且）……。

Nowadays，it is common to ______. Many people like ______ because ______. Besides，______.5. 任何事物都是有两面性，……也不例外。

它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。

Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception，it has both advantages and disadvantages.6. 关于……人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为（说）……，在他们看来，……People’s opinions about ______ vary from person to person. Some people say that ______.To them,_____.7. 人类正面临着一个严重的问题……，这个问题变得越来越严重。

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09：10~09：35 写作（09：35发试题册）09：35~09：40 翻译09：40~09：55 快速阅读理解（在答题卡1背面作答）09：55~10：00 收答题卡1，建议快速浏览听力选项10：00~10：35 听力理解（以下在答题卡2作答）10：35~11：05 仔细阅读理解（选词填空或简答＋篇章阅读理解）11：05~11：20 完形填空（11:05 监考教师提醒15分钟后交卷）三、复习计划：1、攻克词汇：1）词汇书：俞敏洪《四级词汇词根+联想记忆法》2）软件：《新东方背单词》（5）3）真题：最新10套四级真题4）记忆法：参见我的博客/m/jtwang：“考研复习”之“十天搞定考研词汇”2、精研真题：最新10套四级真题，尤其是2006年6月24日以后真题1）词汇：没有一个词汇不认识2）选项：没有一个选项不了解3、适当模考：参见王江涛编著《大学英语四级考试一本通》（群言出版社）四、学习方法：（一）提高实力：1、背诵：10大必背范文1）Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic My Views on Examinations. You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline below:1、大学都用考试来衡量学生的成绩2、考生可能带来的副作用3、我对考试的看法In most colleges and universities the examination is used as a chief means of deciding whether a student succeeds or fails in mastering a particular subject. Although it does the job quite efficiently, its side effects are also enormous.To begin with, examinations lower the standards of teaching. Since teachers are often judged by examination results, they are reduced to training their students in exam techniques. No subjects can be taught successfully merely through being approached with intent to take examinations. In addition,the most undesirable effect is that examinations encourage bad study habits. As the examination score is the only criterion for his academic performance, a student is driven to memorize mechanically rather than to think creatively.In fact, few of us admit that examinations can contribute anything really important to the studen ts’ academic development. If that is the case, why cannot we make a change and devise something more efficient and reliable than examinations?2）Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic My Favorite Novel. You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline below:1、我最喜爱的小说是···2、该小说的内容3、我为什么喜爱My favorite novel is Around the World in Eighty Days which is written by Jules Verne. The author was born in France and devoted himself to literature and wrote several scientific romances, which gained him the name——Father of Modern Science Fiction.This is a book of science fiction which tells us an exciting story about an English gentleman, Mr. Phileas Fogg, who makes a bet with his clubmates and manages to travel around the world in eighty days. It gives us a vivid description of the many difficulties and incidents which happen on his journey.From this story, we can see the author’s deep love for the sea, travel and adventure, which played a vital role in his life. We are also astonished and convinced by his fertile imagination and scientific and geographical knowledge.3）Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic The most unforgettable Person I ever Know. You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline below:1、我生活中最难忘的人是······2、为什么他（或她）令我难以忘怀3、结论In my life I have met a great many people who are really worth recalling. But perhaps the most unforgettable person I ever know is my English teacher.What frequently brings back memories of my school teacher is his special qualities. First and foremost, he gave us the greatest gift a teacher can offer—an awakening of a passion for learning. He not only led us to an appreciation of the beauty and perfection of English language and literature, but also aroused our great interest in exploring something deeper in this field. Furthermore, I was attracted by his lively wit. I remember that we students always anticipated his class with great eagerness because his lecture were humorously delivered, never failing to provoke chuckles or loud laughs.Although it is nearly two years since I attended his last class, he is the talk of our old classmates, and I know part of him has already stayed in my heart.4）Directions: You want to invite some friends to a party. Write an invitation letter to them individually:1）邀请他们参加晚会，2）说明举办晚会的原因，3）为他们安排了什么活动Dear Snoopy,I am greatly honored to formally invite you to participate in Mr. Guo Jing’s wedding ceremony with Ms. Fujiwora to be held at Beijing Grand Hotel from 8 to 10 p.m. on April 1, 2008.As you are a close friend of us,we would very much like you to attend the celebration and share our joy. The occasion will start at seven o’clock in the evening, with the show ing of their wedding ceremony. This will be followed by a dinner party. At around ten, we will hold a small musical soiree, at which a band will perform some works by Bach and Strauss.If you do not have any prior appointment on April 1, we look forward to the pleasure of your company.Yours sincerely,Li Ming5）SpeechMr. President, ladies and gentlemen,Good morning, ladies and gentlemen, welcome to Beijing! To begin with, I would like to make a brief introduction to myself. I am the president of Motorola(China) Electronics Ltd.The following is my introduction to the conference. First, it is my great honor to be here with all of you and declare open the Conference fo International Trade Cooperation. Second, on behalf of our company , I would like to express my heartfelt welcome to all the guests and delegates. Last, I believe our cooperative efforts are sure to be productive. .I was all of you enjoy yourselves during this conference and hope the above information will help you. If you have any question for me, please feel free to ask at any time. Thank you for your attention.6）LetterDear Sir or Madam,I am a senior from the Department of Business Administration of Beijing University. I am writing the letter in purpose of applying for admission into your esteemed institution/your recently advertised position for a staff member.I am sure that I am qualified for it. Fist, enclosed with this letter is my resume, which further details my previous academic qualifications and work experience. Second, not only do my qualifications and experience make me a perfect candidate for it, my cheerful personality is well suited to studying in your prestigious university/working as a staff member. Last, my hobbies include sports and music.Words fail me when I try to express my heartfelt gratitude to the help you render me. Your prompt and favorable attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated.Yours sincerely,LiMing7）RESUMELi MingP. O. Box 237, Beijing University5, Yiheyuan Road, Haidian District, Beijing 100871Tel: 62768888 Email: Liming@Career Objective: A position with management potential in the banking business specializing in international corporate financingEducational Background:Sept 2003 to Beijing UniversityJuly 2007Major in International Business ManagementMain courses include English, Computer, Business Management, Accounting,International Commercial LawWork Experience:July 2006 to Bank of ChinaJune 2007Internship, Secretary to Deputy Manager of MarketingDraft business correspondenceSchedule deputy manager’s appointmentsQualifications:University graduation certificate and bachelor degree to be conferred upon graduation (2007)College English Test Band 4 June 2005Honors & Awards: Twice awarded scholarship by Beijing University 2005& 2006Special Skills:Familiarity with Microsoft Word, ExcelAbility to work independentlyGood Organizational skillsExperience:President of Student Union 2005－presentPersonal Data: Date of Birth: 9/17/1985Gender: FemaleMarital Status: Unmarried8）AnnouncementDirections:The Student’s Union of your department is planning a Chinese Speaking Contest. Write an announcement which covers the following information:1) the purpose of the contest,2) time and place of the contest,3) what is required of the candidates,4) details of the judges and awards.Do not sign your own name at the end of the announcement. Use Department of Chinese Language and Literature.Chinese-Speaking ContestJune 10, 2007 To improve students’ ability to speak Chinese and enrich after-class activities, the Students’ Union of Chinese Language and Literature is organizing a school-wide Chinese-speaking contest to be held on Saturday next week (17june) at the Students’ Recreational Center. Those who are interested in talking part in it may sign up with the monitors of their classes before Tuesday next week. Five professors will be invited to be judges. The first six winners will be given awards. Everybody is welcome to be present at the contest.The Students’ UnionDepartment of Chinese Language and Literature9）InternetOwing to the speedy economic development, the number of the people who use Internet has considerably increased. It is universally acknowledged that Internet playa a crucial role in modern society.Due attention has to be paid to the issue of Internet. With the reform and opening-up in recent decades, people in mounting numbers have come to realize the significance of Internet. Unfortunately, if we let this situation continue as it is, we do not know where humans will be in the forthcoming future.Accordingly, it is imperative for us to take drastic measures. To begin with, we should cultivate the authorities to make strict laws to control Internet. In addition, we should cultivate the awareness of people that Internet. In addition, we should cultivate the awareness of people that Internet is essential to us. Only in this way can we solve the problem.10）Jobs for Graduates (1)Job hunting has always been a headache for college graduates. Though many graduates are employed right after graduation, some are not. Most serious of all, some still have no idea whereto go working even a long time after graduation.The reasons for this phenomenon are various. On the one hand, a few years ago colleges and universities enrolled so many students in popular majors, such as economy, finance and so on that the number of graduates was greater than the need in the market. On the other hand, most graduates would rather stay in large cities without suitable job to do than go to the country.I think the problem can be solved if both colleges and students take measures. First, they should research the market and develop special skills to suit its need. Second, students' attitude towards employment should be changed. They should go to some small cities and country. There they can also give full play to their professional knowledge. In a word, if we pay much attention, the problem can be solved.参考译文1）在绝大多数大学里，考试都是作为衡量学生是否掌握某一课程的主要手段。

Conclusion
注意：如果写影响视力、浪费时间、上瘾等就偏题了）
Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
大学英语四级写作
第一课：概述及结构与审题
第二课：万能观点及展开（1）
第三课：万能观点及展开（2）
第四课：论证方法
第五课：开头段写法 第六课：结尾段写法
• 第一课：概述及结构与审题
根据大纲规定，短文的评分标准是： • 1．正确表达思想； • 2．意义连贯； • 3．无重大语法错误。
阅卷标准分为五等：2分，5分，8分，11分及14分，每一等都可上下浮动一分 ，各等的具体标准如下：
• 4． 注意文章的长度安排，短的作文一定是 不可以的，也就是字数要达到要求。但是 长的作文如果几乎每句话都有错误也不能 得到好的分数。所以大家一定要注意，写 的时候要长度适中，确保写出的句子错误 很少，即使观点只是很一般，没什么新的 地方，也能得到相对好的分数。
• 5． 卷面一定要整洁，字一定要写的漂亮， 这可以在很大程度上影响你们分数的升降 。印象分数几乎全部是这个决定的 ，所以 大家也要主要平时HANDWRITING的练习。
• 2分--条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数 为严重错误。 • 5分--基本切题。表达思想不够清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。
• 8分--基本切题。表达思想比较清楚，文字尚连贯；但语言错误较多，其中 有少量的严重错误。

雅思写作完全攻略Total Solution of IELTS Writing俞伟国－2009－雅思考试作文部分题型课时安排：Marking SystemEssay WritingIntroductionBodyConclusionStructureReport Writing近年雅思考试中国大陆考区作文部分得分情况(From Mat Clark)Band4 or below: 15%-20% Band5: 60% Band6: 15%-20% Band7: <5% Band8 or above: RareKey Language Features in Marking SystemTask Response:1. No evidence of digression/irrelevant content2. Adequate Words3. Position + Supporting Ideas + DevelopmentCoherence and Cohesion1.Logical overall structure2.Topic Sentence3.Cohesive devicesLexical Resource1.Accurateness2.Authentic Vocabulary (Less-common Vocabulary)3.VarietyGrammatical Range and Accuracy1.Accuratenessplex Sentence3.Variety欢迎光临俞老师的BLOG:Chapter One－Essay Writing第一章. 议论文完全攻略______________________________________________________________________ _____________________________Part One－Introduction－闪亮开篇－－Version －Structure of Introduction1. Background Information(1). Lead-in Sentence (Introduce the subject of the topic)(2). Public Opinion2. Statement(State your position)1．主体背景（Background Information）(1) In the last century, the first man walking on the moon said: “It is a big step for mankind”. However, some people think it ma de______________________________, when ________________________________________________________________for the first time, he _____________________________________________________ that it was a great step for mankind. Nowadays, however, some people believe that it actually _____________________________________________________Language Skill: Paraphrase方法之一－具体化(笼统概念－缩小范围)(2) Food can be produced much more cheaply today because of improved fertilizers and better machinery. However, some people think the methods used to do this may have negative effects on local communities and be dangerous to human health.Nowadays people can _______________ food far more _______________ _________________________ more _______________ fertilizers and machinery. Nevertheless, some people hold the methods used may ______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________Language Skill:Paraphrase 方法之二－单词转换（优先考虑三大词类：）Paraphrase方法之三－句型转换（方法1 ）(方法2)(3) Many people say teachers should only teach students academic subjects；Others say teachers should also take the responsibility of teaching students to judge what is right and wrong.Some people hold the opinion that ______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________While some argue that ______________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________Language Skill: 句型转换(方法3)(4) Some people believe that air travel should be prohibited as it uses up fuel resources and causes pollution. Do you agree or disagree with the statement You should use your own experience to support your argument.According to some __________, air travel should be _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________Language Skill: Paraphrase思路顺序：单词转换>句型转换>具体化(5Some people propose that___________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________Language Skill:句型转换(方法4)(6). In modern society, there are more and more old people, do you think its benefits outweigh its disadvantages______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________Language Skill:信息量偏少的Topic Introduction写作对策追根溯源法－Factor(s) [因]－Phenomenon (Subject) [果]2. 总论点(Statement)Topic－If children behave badly, should their parents accept responsibility and also be punishedAverage Example：In my opinion, the parents should not be punished. Decent Example：In my opinion, the parents should not be punished except that (unless) they are those who purposefully teach the child to behave badly.Topic－Some people think that it is beneficial for students to go to private secondary schools. But others feel that it has negative effects on them. Discuss the both viewpointsFrom my point of view, it is an ideal choice to send children to private middle schools ______________________________Exercise1: Topic－Should college students be allowed to get married______________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________Language Skill:句型转换(方法5)Exercise2: Topic－Should college students be encouraged to take up part-time jobs ______________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________Language Skill:句型转换(方法6)3. Report－Introduction写作对策Today, the phenomenon that_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________has aroused growing concern.In my opinion, a lot of factors contribute to the problem and in this article, I would like to _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________*This phenomenon, as far as I am concerned, can be attributed to the following causes, which could be regarded as the apple of discord.Structure of Report Introduction1. Lead-in Sentence (Paraphrase the first sentence in the topic)2. Plan A: Essay StatementPlan B: Linking SentenceExercise1:Exercise2: Topic－Pressure on the school and university students is increasing and students are pushed to studyExercise3: Topic－欢迎光临俞老师的BLOG:Part Two－Body－中流砥柱－－Version －分论点的要求：1.字数要求：One complex sentence preferred. Around 20 words.2. 分论点四项基本原则：(1). 内容原则：分论点应该体现为一种_____________________________并且与总论点为_________________关系。

2023英语四级作文新东方万能作文模板讲义Introduction:In recent years, the importance of English proficiency has been widely recognized. As a result, the English proficiency test, such as the CET-4, has become a crucial gateway for many Chinese students. In this essay, we will explore the New Oriental universal writing template for the 2023 English CET-4 exam.Body:Part 1: Introduction to the topicThe initial paragraph should provide a general introduction to the topic without referring to the specific essay prompt. This part aims to engage the reader's attention and set the tone for the subsequent discussion.Part 2: Background information or definitionIn this section, provide some background information or define the key terms related to the topic. It is essential to ensure that the reader understands the context.Part 3: Thesis statement and previewPresent a clear thesis statement that outlines the main argument or stance of your essay. Additionally, provide a brief preview of the main points that will be discussed in the subsequent paragraphs.Part 4: Supporting argument 1Present the first supporting argument that supports your thesis statement. Use appropriate examples, evidence, or statistics to strengthen your argument. Ensure the paragraph is coherent and logically organized.Part 5: Supporting argument 2Present the second supporting argument that further reinforces your thesis statement. Provide relevant examples, evidence, or statistics to substantiate your position. Maintain a clear and logical flow of ideas.Part 6: Counterargument and refutationAcknowledge and address potential counterarguments or opposing viewpoints. Refute the counterarguments using valid reasoning and evidence. This demonstrates a balanced perspective and strengthens the overall argument.Part 7: Supporting argument 3Present the third supporting argument that solidifies your thesis statement. Use specific examples, evidence, or statistics to strengthen your argument and make it more persuasive. Ensure a smooth transition between paragraphs.Part 8: Conclusion and final thoughtsSummarize the main points discussed in the previous paragraphs and restate the thesis statement. Offer final thoughts or recommendations related to the topic. End the essay with a strong concluding statement.Conclusion:The New Oriental universal writing template for the 2023 English CET-4 exam provides a structured approach to crafting a high-quality essay. By following this template, students can effectively express their ideas in a logical and coherent manner. Remember to practice using this template in various essay prompts to enhance your writing skills and increase your chances of success in the exam.。

CET-4 应试辅导----作文篇 第一讲 基本知识 大学英语四级应试技巧讲座 主讲：Wendy 10
CET-4 应试辅导----作文篇 第一讲 基本知识
评分原则及标准实例：2010年12月短文写作
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent? You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: 1、目前不少父母为孩子包办一切 2、为了让孩子独立，父母应该……
Du attending should be given to spelling?(2010.6) (如今不少学生在学习中不重视拼写；出现这种现象的原因； 为了改变状况我认为……)
大学英语四级应试技巧讲座 主讲：Wendy 5
CET-4 应试辅导----作文篇 第一讲 基本知识
Creating a green campus(2009.12) (建设绿色校园十分重要；绿色校园不仅指绿色环境；为了 建设绿色校园，我们应该……)
CET-4 应试辅导
大学英语四级考试专项辅导
——作文部分
大学英语四级应试技巧讲座 主讲：Wendy1
CET-4 应试辅导----作文篇
第一讲 基本常识篇 第二讲 遣词造句篇 第三讲 布局谋篇 第四讲 体 裁 篇 第五讲 熟能生巧篇
大学英语四级应试技巧讲座 主讲：Wendy 2
CET-4 应试辅导----作文篇 第一讲 基本知识

修改润色
• 整篇论述通 读一遍
• 留意拼写、 标点等差错
写作技巧
提高语言表达能力的方法
多读作品可以学习表达技巧，积累词汇和语法； 多写练习可以多层次、多角度地思考问题，并加 以实践和改善。
常见问题和解决方案
• 冗长赘述：精简措辞，提升可读性 • 词汇重复：用近义词替换或删减 • 语法错误：遵循语法原则，学习典型结构
写作基础
写作目的和对象
写作目的要清晰明确，对象要针对读者需求。怎样选题、定位读者、把握主题，都是基础中 的基础。
写作内容和结构
写作内容要主题明确，重点突出，由浅入深，逻辑严密；结构要清晰合理，层次分明，版式 整齐。
写作方法和技巧
写作方法要因材施教，根据个人差异调整；写作技巧要熟能生巧，多积累多实践。引用举例、 排比比喻、设问反转等，皆是助力写作的好手填写大纲
• 认真阅读题 干，注意细
• 节确立写作目 标，梳理思 路
常见写作类型和模板
• 构思提纲， 清晰分段
• 布局合理， 制定时间
写作细节
• 注意语言准 确性和连贯
• 性运用技巧， 合理搭配
• 议论文：陈述观点，论证立场，提供证据，驳斥对方 • 说明文：解释原理，介绍功能，说明事理，展示特点 • 应用文：办理手续，请求帮助，发送礼物，道谢致歉
总结
写作的重要性和影响
优秀的写作能力是表达自我、交流情感、切实工作能力的必备素质，对个人成长和职业发展 有巨大推动作用。
实战中需要注意的问题
遵守规定，认真审题；分清重点，把握主线；精益求精，追求卓越。
提高写作能力的方法和途径
多练多看，不断反思；善用工具，注重反馈。
《四六级写作》PPT课件
掌握写作技巧，赢得高分。本课程将从写作基础、实战技巧、常见问题等方 面为你详细讲解。

一、写作用词两方面：二、句子写作2.1造句原则：2.2造句基础：2.3写作翻译常用句式：三、六种功能段落（篇章层面为六种功能段落的排列组合）四、篇章写作思路：宏观原因、危害、利弊、观点、建议、意义写作逻辑：1）问题解决型写作思路：Ⅰ段.提出问题；Ⅱ段.分析问题（原因/危害）；Ⅲ段.解决问题（建议措施）Ⅰ.提出问题段落（即现象描述：______）3句：引出问题+具体描述+总结问题1）引出问题：☆首句1. On many campuses/ In contemporary society/Nowadays, it has become a (prevalent) trend/tendency for _______to ______.☆首句2. In present-day society, (nobody could have failed to notice the fact that) __________ has become a problem, which is becoming increasingly serious/grave.或There is no denying the fact that + __________.☆首句3. In recent years, (it can be noticed that) __________________________than (ever) before. (比较级引出问题)☆首句4：In China, _________ has/ have gained great/wide popularity among _______. 或：In China, ______ has been enjoying growing popularity and it is of great importance.2）具体描述：二句1：（事实描述）Meanwhile, an increasing number of individuals/people find it difficult/ hard/ troublesome to __________________.An increasing number of:负面：difficult 正面：二句2：（举例描述1）A case in point of this is /A typical example of this is/This phenomenon can be best illustrated by the fact that .☆（举例描述2）Turning/Taking a look around, we can find a great many/plenty of/a good deal of examples like this: 两个例子.二句3：(举例描述3)：Our daily life has been filled with a variety of examples, (but the following will suffice:) ______________.二句4：（调查法描述：）(According to a recent survey,) a majority/72.34% of people/ students /individuals /citizens /residents admit/reckon /acknowledge that _______.3）总结问题：承上+启下三句1：（承上）Thus/Therefore/Hence, （启下）how to _______________ effectively has become a matter of concern.☆三句2：（承上）As a result/ Consequently/ Accordingly，（启下）_____ requires/ necessitates/ calls for close attention of the whole society.☆三句3: (承上) So, （启下1）due attention should be paid to _____/ （或）we should keep a close eye on ____.Ⅱ.分析问题（原因/危害）四句话：主题句+原因1/危害1+原因2/危害2+总结①分析危害段：主题句1：Such _______ are/is bound to (generate/engender/result in/ give rise to/ lead to) (severe/negative/serious) (consequences/effects/impacts) if we keep turning a blind eye.☆主题句2: Apparently enough, there are some negative impacts which we should not ignore/neglect.☆主题句3：Quite obviously, it is of great necessity to figure out the negative influences behind it. 主题句4：To tackle this problem, it is of great/vital significance to analyze the potential negative impacts of this matter.具体危害写法☆危害1：To begin with, _____ may damage/ hurt/ injure/ harm/ impair/ undermine the over-all development of ______, (because____________).☆危害2：Moreover, (强调句式) it is _____ that exerts/ produces/ generates bad impacts on __________.危害3：In addition/ Furthermore/ What is worse/ Besides, ___________ set bad examples to youngsters/others, leading them to ______.☆危害4：Then, it is manifest that we are developing/gaining __________________ at the expense/ cost/ risk of _____________.☆危害5：Besides, (it can be argued that) _____ means a grave waste of time/energy/natural resources.危害总结1：As has been noted, ____ do/does impact our ____ negatively to a large/some extent. ☆危害总结2：To conclude, it is undeniable that the bad impacts of _____ can never be turned a blind eye to.②分析原因：☆主题句1：Generally speaking, several reasons can account for this phenomenon. (中性话题) 主题句2：In general, there are several reasons/ factors/ causes/ purposes responsible for ____, but the following may be the most critical.（中性话题）☆主题句3：It is evident that the causes of ____ are diverse.主题句4：To solve/deal with this worrying/disturbing issue, it is of vital significance to determine /explore / investigate the possible reasons.☆原因1：In the first place, ___________ is the root cause. A good case in point of this is ______________________________________. (原因+现象描述)☆原因2：In the second place, _____ constitutes another major cause. Specifically, _______. (原因+具体说明:即现象描述).原因3：In addition, _________________ plays a critical role in this issue/matter.原因4：Besides, the _________ policy being carried out in _______ (doesn’t) enables _______ to _____________.原因5: （强调句式）Then, it is _____ that makes /attracts/ enables ____ to ___.原因总结1：Consequently, ____ has not been emphasized.☆原因总结2：As a consequence, ____ pay relatively less attention to _______.Ⅲ.解决问题（建议措施）三句=总结+建议1+建议2+展望☆总结句1: In view of the seriousness of the situation, effective measures should be taken before things get worse.总结句2：Therefore/Thus/Hence/Accordingly, it is high time that we took feasible steps to stop/ limit/ restrain this trend.总结句3：In fact, people’s ways to ___________ do vary/differ.（☆替换：1. There are a variety of ways in which _____________________. 或2. It is apparent that ways to ___________ are various.）Some _____; some ______; some others _____.☆建议1：First, it is essential that laws and regulations should be worked out and enforced to ___________.建议2：Second, it is suggested that public should enhance/ promote/ cultivate/ strengthen their awareness of __________.建议3：Then, it is advisable/significant for ________ to ________建议4：In addition, _______ are highly hoped/ expected/ well-advised to __________.☆建议5：Lastly, we should educate/ advocate/ encourage ___________________________ to ______________.展望未来1：Only by doing so/ Only through these measures, can we __________________________.☆展望未来2：If we try our utmost to do so, the future of ____ will be promising/ hopeful/ rosy. 2．观点对比型写作思路:Ⅰ段：现象描述（即引入主题）+ 支持方观点（利）+Ⅱ段：反方观点（弊）+Ⅲ段：我的观点Ⅰ段（4句）：1句：现象描述（即引入主题）+ 1句支持主题句+ 2句好处分析☆描述现象1：Living in an era of _________, we have access to a ariety of __________.描述现象2：There is no denying the fact that ______________☆描述现象3：Recently, we have been informed frequently that _______________.现象描述4：Nowadays/In recent years, _____, as the product of modern civilization, plays an increasingly significant role in people’ daily life. However/At the same time, …现象描述5：It is universally acknowledged that ______.☆现象描述6：The past years /decades have seen the huge/speedy advancement/ development of _____________.支持方主题句1：Some argue that it is absolutely necessary to ______ (because ________).☆支持方主题句2：A number of individuals favor _____.支持方主题句3：Those who are in favor of ____ claim that it has a lot advantages.☆支持方观点(利)1：In their eyes, without ________, it is impossible for individuals to ___________.支持方观点(利)2：They also point out that _____ will bring great benefit/convenience to ____;(thus, they will have more opportunities/time/energy to ____).支持方观点(利)3: What makes them convinced is that ____ is of great value/necessity /significance for them to _____.支持方观点(利)4：In their opinion, _____ will definitely promote the development/efficiency of _____, which otherwise would be impossible.☆支持方观点(利)5：They firmly believe that ____ will enable them to enrich their social/academic / professional experience and broaden their horizons.☆支持方观点(利)6：Another evident advantage/ merit/ strength/ benefit is that ____ may offer /provide/bring entertainment/ pleasure/ an enjoyable life.Ⅱ段：反方观点（弊）(三句=主题句+反方观点1+反方观点2)☆主题句1：Even so, others hold a different view that ____ carries some risks/doubts.主题句2：Others, however, regard it differently.主题句3：Advantageous/beneficial/rewarding/good/popular as it is, others have an opposite perspective.主题句4：In spite of all these claims, others maintain that it is unnecessary to ____反对本质：危害分析。

2020年大学英语四级考试写作技巧辅导教程(1)记叙文的思路与练习记叙文是以叙述人物的经历和事物的发展变化过程为主要表现形式的一种文体。

记叙文既能够以写人为主，又能够以写事为主。

写记叙文要注意记叙文的“六大要素”即：时间(When)——何时发生，有没有具体时间?地点(Where)——何地发生，有没有地点变化?人物(Who)——何人参与，谁是主角?事件(What)——发生了什么，有何特点?原因(Why)——事件的起因?结果(How)——事件的经过及结局?一般说来，在一篇记叙文中这六大要素是缺一不可的。

记叙文的思路就围绕这六大要素充分展开。

【例】四级考试中，只出现过一次专门的记叙文体裁的写作，即“An Early Morning Walk”(1988.6.)，2003年6月出现过包含记叙文的作文，即“An Eye-Witness Account of a Traffic Accident”。

对于“An Early Morning Walk”，知道命题要求后，我们就要开始构思了。

When：题目已规定了是“清晨”，在这个时候，“我”去散步。

Where：到哪儿散步?去公园?在校园里?在街上(街上空气不好，还是不去!)。

Who：在公园里看到晨练的人：中老年人、年轻人、小孩子;在校园里看到读书背单词的学生。

What：人们热火朝天地做操，随音乐跳舞，打球，等等。

Why：清晨空气清新，适合锻炼;一日之际在于晨，背背书，读读单词。

当然，由这个题目能够令人想到很多东西，因篇幅所限，我们做了删减。

参考范文An Early Morning WalkOne morning I got up very early， and everything around was very quiet. The sun had just risen， shining brilliantly and everything seemed to be covered with a layer of golden silk. There were only some birds singing occasionally in the tall trees. I strolled along the street toward the park，breathing the fresh air and feeling extremely happy.When I arrived at the park， I found， to my surprise，that there were so many people there. Men and women， boys and girls， all were enjoying themselves in their various activities. Some were doing morning exercises， some were playing badminton and some old people were having their tea while talking to each other cheerfully.I wandered around the park. To my delight， I found a few middle-school students talking to each other in English in one corner of the park. I went up and spoke to them in English. We soon became friends. I was very glad to find another opportunity to practice my spoken English. On the way home， I realized that an early morning walk really was good and healthful. Taking early morning walks makes one healthy and wise.【点评】文章按照时间顺序(in chronological order)，第一句话点明时间(One morning)、人物(第一人称“I”)，并简要描述了早晨的特点(What was the setting)，接着第二段第一句话交代地点(in the park)，然后介绍公园里人们及作者的活动(What was happening)，最后在文章结尾点题，即，归纳中心思想——Taking early morning walks makes one healthy and wise. 仅仅189个单词既满足了记叙文的“六大要素”，又有明确的中心思想和生动的细节，行文方式符合要求。

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1. With the development/improvement of ——,——. 2. It is necessary that——. 3. On the one hand, ——. 4. On the other hand, —— 5. Therefore, how to —— is worth paying attention. 6.Firstly—— 7.Secondly—— 8.For example,—— 9. Thirdly, ——. 10.In other words,—— 11.In fact, ways to —— are countless. 12.It’s time that —— 1．空格一处铺垫，空格二处填写某一问题。 2．关注解决现象引出的问题很必要。 3．解决问题很必要的理由一。 4．解决问题很必要的理由二。
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表明个人态度或阐述个 人做法 表明个人态度或阐述个 人做法 得出结论或表明个人看 法或做法
对比选 表明一方或 表明另一方的观点及 择型 双方由的观 理由，指出双方观点 点及理 不足之处及理由 问题解 提出问题 决型 观点论 提出论点 证型 分析问题，给出解决 方案 例证论点
5．承上启下，填要解决的问题。 6. 解决办法一。 7 解决办法二。 8. 举例解释解决办法二。 9. 解决办法三样。 12. 强调解决问题时不可待。
• 2004年1月真题：Reduce Waste on Campus • With the improvement of living standard, waste on campus is increasingly serious. It is necessary that something should be done to reduce waste on campus. On the one hand, our waste has already caused a great loss of precious resources, such as water and electricity. On the other hand, our waste adds our parents as well as our society a burden. • Therefore, how to eliminate waste on campus is worth paying attention. Firstly, we should turn off the light when we leave our dorms or classrooms so as to save electricity as much as possible. Secondly, we should stop wasting water when we bath, or wash clothes and dishes. For example, we should use a basin when we clean faces. Thirdly, we should be economical. In other words, when go shopping, we should buy only what we really need. • In fact, the ways to reduce waste on campus are countless. It’s time that we cultivate the habit of thrift in every possible way.

CHAPTER 1基本写作常识1写作步骤1.审题审题是最重要的一步，应分析题目的构成，辨别义体，抓住关键词，找出主题词和限定词.2.构思构思时应注意以下几个问题：1.研究作文题目的限定范围和可供利用的材料以及具有启发性的暗示.2.从多方面联想与主题相关的材料°3.找出所要论述的关键词或短语4.考虑从儿个方面进行讨论或描述5.具体考虑各段在义章中的作用6.写出全篇的提纲和简单的草稿.例：在构思Why Good Manners 一篇作文的时■候我们应按照如下几个步骤来构思：1.题目给出的话题是good manners,而且限定的范围是分析其原因。

2.根据上述范围我们可以联想到：有礼貌的重要性，没有礼貌会带来的不良影响，社会发展的需要，对学生来说有礼貌的意义，对其他行业的人来说礼貌的意义，从社会学的角度，从经济学的角度等。

但是在四级写作中，根据我们的知识水平，可以适当选择：有礼貌对学生的意义，没有礼貌的坏处等3.关键词：good manners, students, importance, benefits, harms4.应从以下几个方而进行论述①有礼貌的重要性②对学生的重要意义③没有礼貌的危害④总结号召大家要有礼貌首段点题，展开段论证有礼貌的重要性，结尾段重中主题发出号召。

提纲及草稿(略)4草拟写作提纲(1)为什么要写提纲在写作过程中，编写提纲是非常必要的。

TOEFL考试中心建议：”Think before you write, making notes maybe help you to organize your essay." Michigan 考试中心也建议："It is wise to take a few minutes to organize your thoughts, once you have chosen a topic, and make a brief outline-可见在写作文前先编写一个提纲还是必要的，它往往是确保写出内容切题、条理清楚的作文的关键。

这次的四六级的作⽂是在⼤家的意料之外，⼤家关注的要么是奥运会，要么是⼤地震。

其实这种想法是可以理解的，但往往是不可取的。

这次四六级考试的作⽂题⽬，再次证明它真正考的并不是社会的时髦话题，⽽是⽐较常见的社会问题，或者是关于⼤学⽣的问题。

⽽这次的四级考的⼤学⽣校园⾥的娱乐活动。

四级作⽂从分类可以算是陈述利弊型。

第⼀点提纲说的是校园⾥的娱乐活动越来越多。

第⼆段应该是⼀个主体，它说这些活动既有益处，也有害处。

这个是⼀个主⼲，我们可以这⼀点分成两段去写，先写好处，再写坏处。

我想在新东⽅的课堂上说过这样的写作，尤其是在先说好处再说坏处的时候，只要你写的对、语法是正确的，肯定也会给别⼈⼀个很好的印象。

最后⼀段算是总结，说你⾃⼰的看法，对校园⾥的娱乐活动有什么样的观点。

在六级的作⽂⾥，也提过这样的陈述利弊型。

到最后我⼀定会给⼤家⼀个固定的好的段落。

最后的总结我们会⽤⽐较常见的英⽂的说法，但也是汉语⾥有的成语。

⽐如说我们不能因噎废⾷，尽管这些娱乐活动会有危害⽐如说去唱歌，⼀定到D厅去跳舞，但对丰富我们的⽣活是有⼀定的好处的，我们不能因噎废⾷，⼀⽅⾯应该做这样的事，另⼀⽅⾯也更应该把精⼒放在学习上。

六级作⽂其实也是出乎很多同学的意料，考的是⼀个⽐较俗的、⽐较常见的社会话题。

就是电⼦图书能否代替传统图书。

其实我暗中挺佩服出题⼈的，他费尽了脑筋，找到了这样的话题。

其实在我们的课堂上也提出到这样的形式和内容。

⽐如北京新东⽅学校六级冲刺教材⾥也提到了这样的话题，⽐如说现在写信的⼈越来越少，⽽写Email的⼈越来越多，那它会不会替代我们的信件？这个我也是在课堂上说过的，但上过我们强化班的同学也会感觉这次的四六级写作并不是太难。

它在我们考过的作⽂中，是第⼀⼤类——对⽴观点型。

这次第⼀点提纲说，随着信息技术的发展，电⼦图书越来越发达。

第⼀点其实是没有什么的，你只是提出了现象，⽐如说我们在课上讲过有⽤的句⼦，我回头会把这个放在我的博客⾥。