无老师iBT新托福作文巨讲堂(2014)

无老师奥巴马作文模板【篇一：无老师讲攒模板】自从大学开始，英语就成了每一个人的必修课。

但是与高中不同，在大学一部分学会了荒废，一部分人学会了执着。

但是不管你是要荒废还是要执着，每个人都必须看一眼头上的达摩克利斯之剑——大学四六级考试。

虽然现在很多大学对于四六级已经没有了硬性要求，但是学习的最终目的还是为了就业，当就业单位还在拿着这把宝剑的时候，每个人就还只能转过身去，去找解决四六级考试的方法。

不知何时，“模板”这个词进入到了我们的眼帘。

太中国风！太分数至上了！而一个优秀的模板，考友们会想：不用担心老师会给我们的。

这个时候太多的人实在是太相信众多教育机构老师的精力了，别说每一个人做一个新模板，哪怕是每一个班级做一个新的模板都是不可能的，原因很简单：没那个时间！那么我们就只有求助于网络了，但是网络的传播性实在是太广了！一个模板刚刚出现，有可能明天就有100个人在用了，你想想当考官看到100个人写出来的作文都用同样的开头的时候，他将会是什么情景^_^当然这里指的是国外的考官。

国内的考官看到的时候可是很爽的，太棒了！又造出来一帮一模一样的学生，加分点明确，可以给分了！^_^当面对重重阻力的时候，很多人不禁产生了怀疑。

我们是否应该使用模板？使用模板是否会导致低分？我们到底该用什么模板？其实答案很简单，模板应该用，必须用，大胆用！但是有一个十分重要的前提性条件，那就是模板一定是要原创的！原创的？！开玩笑，我们这辈子从来就没自己思考过，一直都是老师喂到我们嘴里的！是的，这就是你一直咒骂中国式教育的起点。

其实很多满分作文都是使用了模板，但是由于使用的十分之精巧，同时再加上是原创模板，因此连考官也拿他没有办法，人家写的就是棒吗！ok，先来看两段例子！第一段是不好的例子，第二段是好的例子。

——————————————————————————————perhaps no issue in this world is as significance to students as education. despite various responses people may have onthe topic concerning the issue regarding which thing shouldthe education aim at. i, given the chance, prefer to endorse that preparing for careers should have primary consideration.作为阅文无数的无老师，当看到第一篇文章的时候，已经没有了当初得的兴奋，因为这样的文章实在是太常见了！首先nowadays这个单词是被无数老师推崇的“高级”单词-_-！！！无老师一直无法理解，为什么有的单词会更高级。

无老师作文巨讲堂20149月【篇一：无老师作文巨讲堂合集】2014年12月无老师优秀范例：―to spend, or not to spend: that is the question.‖ when it comes to government expenditure on space project, the debate in both the community and the common world has come to a vogue. should government spend a considerable amount of money on exploration of the universe, as asserted by scientists, scholars, and government officials;or should these money go to more pressing issues of the day, as the poor and the miserable maintains? as for me i commit to the notion that space technology, though impractical at first glance, is of vital importance to humankind, and is therefore worthy of our taxes.无老师优秀翻译：―剁手，还是不剁，这是个问题‖当涉及到政府对于空间探索的投资，坊间关于这一点的争论已经甚嚣尘上。

政府应该把很多钱花到空间探索上么，就像科学家，学者和政府官员所宣扬的那样；亦或者应该把钱花在今天更迫切的事情上，比如说穷人救济和低保户的救济？对我来说，我赞成空间科技，虽然乍看上去不是很实际，但是其实对于人类来说很重要，我们的纳税花在这上也更值得。

无老师托福作文【篇一：无老师托福写作】无老师优秀范例：first of all, young adults are increasingly selfish. as they are exposed to much better material life since they were young, some of them take all of these for granted, believing that naturally they should wear fashion clothes, eat fancy dinner and be equipped with iphone and ipad. thus,when the time comes that they are asked to sacrifice for others, it is unlikely they are willing to give their good life up. even a poor little child asks for 2 dollars for lunch might be rejected because the young adult thinks, without these 2 dollars he cannot order the steak he is supposed to eat. the belief ofinherit privileges occupies them, making them unwillingly to make any sacrifice for others and, less helpful.无老师优秀翻译：首先，年轻人现在越来越自私。

自从很小的时候，他们就有更多更好的物质生活，他们之中的一些人觉得这些是理所当然的，相信他们就应该穿很新潮的衣服，吃很梦幻的晚餐，有iphone和ipad可以用。

2014年5月25日托福综合写作分析南京环球北美考试院2014年5月25日托福综合写作分析阅读部分听力部分阅读部分讲到了一个叫asn anazi的部落消失是由于se vere drought，理由如下：听力持反对意见，理由如下：1.历史上有global warming 的时期。

1.有一种树就在asanazi 的附近生长的很旺盛，说明有足够多的rainfall 让人生存。

2.温度高。

2.村落边有很多dams和运河等水利措施，说明哪里人的preserve的insufficient。

但是听力认为这些东西在asanazi人消失之前50年就有了。

3.缺水。

3.阅读说族人突然消失还留下了很多artificial，听力反驳说突然消失不一定是由于干旱，还可能是conflict和wars，比如说为了争夺food resource突然发生的conflicts.2014年5月25日托福独立写作分析题目Do you agree or disagree with the foll owing statement?Parents must have stri ct rules if they want their children t o be successful in life.简析今天考试的孩子有点小悲催,因为今天考试的孩子托福写作机经也没有中呢，但是即使没有中，这道题大家也不用非常的担心，因为只要平时功夫深，上课的时候专心听讲，好好完成我们的作业，认真复习的话，其实这道题的难度系数并没有很大的哟，这道题偏向不同意，参考理由如下：参考思路（1）让步段：在有些方面父母需要给孩子严格的规定，在道德（ethics）上父母就要给孩子严格的规定，因为这样可以避免孩子误入歧途（go astray），如果父母在这方面没有给孩子严格的规定，孩子可能会做出些违背道德（morally and legally wrong）的事情；（2）但是在其他的很多方面父母有严格的规定是不太好的；首先会限制孩子的创造力（innovation），孩子在尝试许多东西的时候会有所顾虑，不太有勇气起尝试新的事物，变得比较懦弱（coward）。

无老师作文巨讲堂【篇一：无老师作文巨讲堂 2012 】2012 年 01 月号无老师优秀范例： a more realistic and rational criterion to value teachers ‘ work (and therefore decide their salary) should include factors such as comprehensivedevelopments of students, teachers ‘ own capacity to cultivate and educate, and parents ‘ f ebeadc k . yet my disagreement does not suggest that students ‘ performance should be abandonedbut rather included along with other indispensable factors in evaluating teachers ‘ work, since school report is still among most parents ‘ top concerns and students ha ve to use it as anchor when applying for further studies. also, it is reasonable that teachers who can enhance students ‘ performance shouldbe paid better, as the measure would moderately motivateteachers to work hard.无老师优秀翻译：一个衡量教师工作，同时也可以决定教师工资的更为现实的，同时也是更为理性的标准应该包括如下这些因素，比如对于学生的全面发展，教师自己的提升及教学能力，以及对于家长的反馈。

无老师新托福作文巨讲堂【篇一：无老师ibt新托福作文巨讲堂(2014)】无老师ibt新托福作文巨讲堂（2014年01月号）来源: 本站浏览: 我要评论(3条) 字号: 大中小无老师优秀范例：the major reason for my propensity for space technology is the potential of scientific research. no matterhow the impact it occurred, from the moment of its very advent, scientific research had become the very dictator of our future.it is by these researches that human beings, the only creature with intelligence on earth, began to soar their wings of aspiration. and more importantly, it had indeed done a great good for the humankind. can you imagine getting access to the world wide web at your desk if there were not for the researchof millions of computer ancestors? similarly, it is highly probable that the great-grandchildren of your great-grandchildren would be enjoying a trip across the ―worm hole‖ while giving thanks secretly to his forefathe r, you, who voted for the expenditure on scientific research. in a word, the space project enjoys great potential, and should therefore be taken into account in top priority to ensure a better future of mankind.无老师优秀翻译：我非常支持空间技术的最大的原因是他的科研上的潜力。

作文巨讲堂10月无老师优秀范例：However, a part f rom c onnective a bility, t here e xist more v aluable a nd e ssential q ualities i n s uccessful p eople. I n t he f irst place, p eople h ave t o b e p ersistent t o t he c areer t hey h ave c hosen i n order t o a chieve t he p eak o f t heir l ives. F or i nstance, M adam C urie h ad already s tayed i n h er h umid l aboratory w ith h er h usband f or 10 y ears before s he d iscovered t he r adial e lement a nd g ot n ominated f or N oble Prize. W hat’s m ore, a c reative m ind i s a lso u navoidable. W ithout t he great c reativity, S teve J obs w ould n ever b e a ble t o t ransfer m agnificent idea i n a ll t hose p roducts l ike i mac a nd i phone, w hich t otally c hange t he life s tyles o f p eople, a nd h e w ould n ever b e t he g reatest C EO i n t he p ast ten y ears. L ast b ut n ot l east, a g reat s ense o f r esponsibility i s t he necessity e specially f or s uccessful b usinessmen. S uccess c an n ever b e gained b y o neself, a nd h e n eed m ore h elps f rom o thers. T he p atience must b e p aid t o o vercome a ll t he d ifficulties o n t he p ath t o s uccess, a nd they m ust b e r esponsible f or t heir c ompanies a s w ell a s t heir e mployees so t hat t he w hole t eam c ould s tay t ogether t o w in t he f inal f ight i nstead of b reaking u p.无老师优秀翻译：但是，除了沟通的能力，这些成功的人身上，还有更多必不可少的重要品质。

2014年10月18日托福写作真题及答案解析综合写作：阅读材料听力材料Pterosaurs恐龙不能飞教授认为Pterosaurs可以飞1、冷血动物不产生能量1、P有dense covering hair跟fur一样。

即使外部很冷，也可以保持温暖的身体。

因此，它不需要产生energy就能飞2、P像长颈鹿那么大，体重太重以至于无法飞行2、P的体重在同等大小的动物中算是轻的。

它是light bone 的， hollow不是solid的骨架结构其重量很轻，wings带的动。

3、从化石判断，P的后腿力量很小，没法像鸟类那样快速奔跑或跳很高，进而没法飞起来3、P跟鸟不一样。

birds用two behind limbs起飞：Pterosaurs用four limbs起飞(push off the ground)独立写作Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should know about events happening around the world even if they have little influence on their daily lives. Use specific examples to support your answer.There is no denying that the world is getting smaller every day. The globalization of the economy has made people and nations more closely connected and more dependent than ever before. People should keep up with global current affairs because whether people can see it or not, these events impact our lives more than we realize.Take for example the political situation in places like the Middle East. Political unrest and the most recent social movements in this region may not directly affect our daily lives, but this indirectly affects oil prices. The global market largely depends on oil from the Middle East. The unrest creates disorganization, leading to disruption in the production of oil.This affects global oil prices which then impacts every other facet of industry and economy. The price of everything, such as farm produce, is affected by this seemingly localized instability.Another example of a local issue that has global impact is labor movements. Most recently protests from workers at Foxconn factories have created a rippling effect on the global economy. Decisions made at Foxconn and other Apple Company suppliers can affect the Chinese and global standards of labor and production. Of course as a native of China I think these changes are significant, but no one, from China or any other country, will deny that they have a direct impact on intentional business and labor organization.Finally the development of global industry has had a significant impact on the environment. Local issues of industry affecting the local environment also have a global impact. This is not just limited to industries, but also many economic and social sectors that have affected theenvironment. For example the desertification of areas in Mongolia and Northen China have created huge dust storm do not only affect weather in China. The dust from these storms travels across the Pacific Ocean to North America by means of high atmospheric winds. This dust then lands on the snowcapped peaks of the North American mountains, making the snow darker and more easily heated by the sun. Consequently, this premature melting of the icecaps leads to severe weather locally and globally.It is important for people to know about global current events because however small the event, it inevitably has a global impact. If people want to understand what is going on locally, they need to think globally.。

If you could study a subject that you have never had the opportunity to study, what would you choose? Explain your choice, using specificreasons and details.Students graduating from colleges today are not fully prepared to deal with the "real world." It is my belief that college students need to be taught more skills and information to enable them to meet the challenges that face everyone in daily life. The areas in which student need training are playing the credit game, planning their personal financial strategy, and consumer awareness.Learning how to obtain and use credit is probably the most valuable knowledge a young person can have. Credit is a dangerous tool that can be of tremendous help if it is handled with caution. Having credit can enable people to obtain material necessities before they have the money to purchase them outright. But unfortunately, many, many young people get carried away with their handy plastic credit cards and awake one day to find they are in serious financial debt. Learning how to use credit properly can be a very difficult and painful lesson indeed.Of equal importance is learning how to plan a personal budget. People have to know how to control money, otherwise, it can control them. Students should leave college knowing how to allocate their money for living expenses, insurance, savings, and so forth in order to avoid the "Oh, no! I'm flat broke and I don't get paid again for two weeks!" anxiety syndrome.Along with learning about credit and personal financial planning, graduating college students should be trained as consumers. The consumer market today is flooded with a variety of products and services of varying quality and prices. A young person entering the "real world" is suddenly faced with difficultdecisions about which product to buy or whose services to engage. He is usually unaware of such things as return policies, guarantees, or repair procedures, information of this sort is vital knowledge to everyday living.For a newly graduated college student, the "real world" can be a scary place to be when he or she is faced with such issues as handling credit, planning a budget, or knowing what to look for, when making a purchase and whom to purchase it from. Entering this "real world" could be made less painful if persons were educated in dealing with these areas of daily life. What better place to accomplish this than in college?[380 Words]。

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