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大二英语写作汇总

大二英语写作汇总
大二英语写作汇总

写作作业汇总

学院:外国语

专业:英语

班级:102

学号:……

姓名:……

2012年6月14日

七篇note-writing

○1.

Draft 1:

Mar 8, 2012

Dear Sheila,

I thank you deeply for your most generous birthday gift. It is so nice and helpful that I can not like it more. It is the best one I have received this year. I will keep it forever. What else, I will save enough money so that I can buy a better gift for you when your birthday come.

Sincerely,

Iris

评论:1. 格式不正确。

2. 正文不够具体,细节不到位。

Draft 2:

Mar 8 Sheila,

I thank you deeply for your most generous birthday gift. The desk lamp is so nice and helpful for me that I can not like it more. With the desk lamp, I can read the book more clearly and do the homework more convenient when it is dark. It is my favorite gift I have received this year. I will keep it forever.

What else, I will save enough money so that I can buy a better gift for you when your birthday come to give you a surprise.

Iris

○2.

Draft 1:

Mar 8, 2012

Dear Sheila,

I’m terribly sorry about that I can not find the English book you lent to me. Please do not worry. It is probably at home, I will find it quickly. If it is so unfortunately that I can not find it, I will buy a new one for you.

Sincerely,

Iris

评论:1. 格式不正确。

2. 行文矛盾,不符合逻辑。

Draft 2:

Mar 8 Sheila,

I’m terribly sorry about that I could not find the book you lent to me. I went to the library to study with your English book last night, it really gave me much help. But when I left, I forgot it. When I returned to find it this morning, it was nowhere. I know it is important for you, so, I buy a new one for you, although there may be some inconveniences without your notes on the book.

Iris

○3.

Draft 1:

Mar 8, 2012

To whom it may concern,

Please do not interfere with my things when I am not here. I am so annoyed because there always have people using my things without my permission, and then make them a mess. People even take them away do not tell me. If you really need it, please give me a notice. Of course, you can also phone me if I go out. If you do this, I will thank you deeply.

Sincerely,

Iris

评论:1. 格式不正确。

2. 描写不够具体。

Draft 2:

Mar 8

To whom it may concern,

Please do not use my things unless you get my permission. I am so annoyed because there always have people using my things without my permission, and then make them a mess, which cause many troubles for me to arrange them in order again. People even take them away do not tell me, and never return it until I ask for it one by one. All of those behaviors make me nearly mad and feel that nobody respect me.

If you really need it, please let me know. Of course, you can also phone me if I go out. Do not forget to put it back where you found it after use.

If you do this, I will thank you very much.

Iris

○4.

Draft 1:

Mar 8, 2012

Dear Miss Zhou,

English major students are going to have a Christmas party at Foreigner Language School tonight. We were wondering if you could come to the party. There will be various interesting programs. It is a pity that if you miss it. It begins at 7:30. We are looking forward to your coming.

Sincerely,

Iris

评论:1. 格式不正确.

2. 展开的太简单,不够具体.

3. 三要素之时间不够详细.

Draft 2:

Dec 24

Dear Miss Zhou,

English major students are going to have a Christmas party at Foreigner Language School on Dec 24 evening. It begins at 7:30.We were wondering if you could come to the party. There will be various interesting programs. The party has dancing, singing, and some short act. It is a pity that if you miss it.

We are looking forward to your coming.

Sincerely,

Iris

○5.

Draft 1:

Mar 8, 2012

Dear Miss Zhou,

I am very sorry to tell you that I have to be absence your lesson for four days because of my terrible cold. It is from 9th to 12th. I should be very much obliged if you grant me my application. And I hope that I make few troubles for you before I am able to resume my duties. At regards the lessons to be missed during my absence, I will do my best to make them up as soon as I get back.

Sincerely,

Iris

评论:1. 格式不正确.

2. 逻辑不清晰.

3. 口吻不对。

4. 语法错误。

Draft 2:

Mar 8

Dear Miss Zhou,

I am very sorry to tell you that I have to be absent your lesson for four days because of my terrible flu. It is from 9th to 12th. Here is my certificate of disease. The doctor told me that I have to stay in the hospital for several days. I will be very much obliged if you grant me my application. At regards the lessons to be missed during my absence, I will do my best to make them up as soon as I get back.

Sincerely,

Iris

○6.

Draft 1:

Notice

To meet the needs of other reasons, the English lecture on “American History” will held in building 1, room 305 on this Friday, has been canceled. Please tell the other people if they don’t know it. 评论:1. 具体原因不清楚。

2. 时态不对。

Draft 2:

Notice

For the teacher had a bad cold suddenly, the English lecture on “American History”to be held in building 1, room 305 this Friday evening, has been canceled. Please tell those people who don’t see the notice.

○7.

Draft 1:

Dear John:

I’m so happy and excited to hear that you invited me to a dinner party on Saturday, May 4. It is my honor, I’d love to. However, God is sleeping. I have already had an appointment with my tutor that evening. Well, please accept my sincere apologies for the absence of me. I hope you have a good time at the party. Maybe, I will be present last time.

Yours Sophia

评估:1. 格式不对,没有日期。

2. 标点符号运用错误。

3. 语气不当,太过正式。

Draft 2:

Mar 3

John,

I’m so happy and excited to hear that you invited me to a dinner party on Saturday, May 4. It is my honor, I’d love to. However, God is sleeping. I have already had an appointment with my tutor that evening. Well, I am sorry for the absence of me. I hope you have a good time at the party. Maybe, I will be present next time.

Sophia

三篇作文

○1.

Is it good to enhance social experience?

Nowadays, more than half of the college students don’t know how to deal with the various difficulties in their life properly because of their lack of social experience, so the question of if college students should enhance social experience became more and more popular. Some people think that college students should enhance social experience as much as possible, and the others do not think so. About this problem, I hold the view that college students enhance social experience is very essential and helpful.

The reasons are as follows: firstly, the college is a special stage of life for us, we should not only grasp more and more professional knowledge, but also learn to adapt to the transition from campus to the community gradually. Therefore, increasing social experience is equally important to the first class. Secondly, copious social experience is a shortcut. It can tell us what things you can do, what things can not be done, and how to do when you encounter difficulties. Thirdly, enhance social experience can effectively improve your abilities and qualities, and the copious social experience is a strong guarantee to find a good job.

Thus, enhancing social experience of college students is a

priority.

○2.

The internet will not isolate us from one another?

As we all know, people can do many things through internet. Such as calling, shopping, playing, even some other essential activities. People can do these entirely at home by internet instead of going out, which may make people have less and less human communication. So, as more and more college students spend a lot of time on the internet, their parents and teachers worry that they may live in a virtual world and isolate themselves from their friends. However, I hold the idea that the internet will not isolate us from one another no matter how popular the internet become.

When we have our computer linked to the net, a new world is opening up before us. After college, for the sake of working study in different place, we are isolated each other, so we nearly can not meet long time. I like the internet because it is cyber-interaction that I can keep in touch with my remote high school classmates and my parents conveniently and easily. What’s more, I can send lovely cards to them via email on some special days without spending a lot of money. The internet not only helps us keep old ties but also brings us new friends. It is very common to meet a stranger when we are on line, and after some friendly talks, we can get to know each other gradually. We can

share interests and exchange views just like intimate friends.

As stated above, the internet can help us keep contact with our friends and family members and make new friends as well. Instead of isolating us from one another, it serves to shorten or eliminate the distance between us and brings friends closer.

○3.

Will phone kill letter writing?

Nowadays, phone plays a more and more important part in our lives. On the contrary, letter-writing became not as common as the past. So someone holds that phone will kill letter-writing in future. However, I do not agree with it.

It could not be denied that phone can make people keep in touch with each other more conveniently and easily, but letter-writing, as a traditional and common method for people to communicate with others, owns its own particular characteristics and advantages which are not bestowed to phone, so it will not be killed in future. First, sending a letter is much cheaper than having a telephone call. Second, people can not only greet each other but also exchange their thoughts in letters. When a person writes, he can organize his mind and express his idea and feelings more logically and completely, but it is hard for phones to make it. Third, people can keep some secrets or classic jokes easily in the letter and say whatever they want to say,

while they sometimes can not do that in a telephone. Finally, convenient as well as rapid as phone is, it takes disadvantages, too. What is more important is that it will do harm to our health for its radiation.

So from the above, we can conclude that no matter how importance the phone is, letter-writing will not be killed for ever.

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