2018届二轮复习 短文改错模拟训练10篇之四 学案(11页word版)

第二讲短文改错[全国卷3年考情分析][命题者说]短文改错主要考查语法基础知识，语篇通常取材于考生自己的习作或类似于考生的随笔，且话题常见，篇章结构的难易程度符合高中生的认知水平，即通俗易懂，基本上无生僻的语言障碍和怪、偏、难的语法结构。

短文词数通常与书面表达一样，也是100词左右。

Ⅰ短文改错命题原则表——高考就考这些点短文改错10处错误中，设错方式是有规律的，一般情况下，多、缺词2～3个，错词7～8个，做完题后，可按此规律进行查验。

见下表：A(2017·全国卷Ⅰ)In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Befo re getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word, “Speed up！”“Slow down！”“Turning left！” I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.答案：In the summer holiday following myeighteen eighteenth birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard ∧the/myfirst day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, so but/yet once I started the car, my mind goes wentblank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word words ， “Speed up ！”“Slow down ！”“Turning Turnleft ！” I was so much ＼ nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minuteslate later ， the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly sudden stop just in the middle on ofthe road. B(2017·全国卷Ⅱ)Mr. and Mrs.Zhang all work in our school.They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the Internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables!答案：Mr. and Mrs.Zhang /all both all ＼work in our school.They live far from the school, and it takes them about a an/one hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting interestedin planting vegetables in their garden, that which is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier earlyand water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools.Beside Besides ， they often get some useful informations information from the Internet. When summer came comes ， they will invite their students ∧ topick the fresh vegetables! C(2017·全国卷Ⅲ)When I look at this picture of myself, I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically, and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club.Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time: car magazines and musical instruments.I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes ，playing pop music ，and collecting the late music albums.This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high schooldays. 答案：When I look at this picture of myself, I realize of＼how fast time flies. I hadhave grown not onlyphysically, andbut also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo wastooktaken， Ientered my second year of high school and becomebecame a new member of the school music club.Around mein ∧this/thepicture are the thingstheythat/which were very important in my life at that time：car magazinesand musical instruments.I enjoyed studying differencedifferent kinds of cars and planes，playing popmusic，and collecting thelatelatest music albums.This picture often brings back to me many happymemories of yourmy high school days.名词单复数的误用1．此类题的错误设置一般包括以下三个方面：(1)可数名词单复数的错用：一般考查错把复数用作单数，有时也考查错把单数用作复数。

2018届二轮复习短文改错解题技巧学案练与析一、分清错误的类型，对症下药1．缺词短文改错中所缺的词常常是冠词、介词、代词等虚词，它通常与词的搭配相关，比如：见到名词，应考虑是否缺了冠词；见到动词，可注意后面是否少了应与之搭配的介词或其他词；见到某些固定表达，如in fact，as soon as等，应考虑是否完整；还有某些短语加冠词与不加冠词意义不同，如in front of，in the front of；某些短语加介词与不加介词用法不同，如：as a result，as a result of。

高考常考点具体如下表所示：典型例题：①In the car park there Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry.答案及分析：在as后加a。

car是可数名词，此处表示“有一辆汽车冲了过来”，表泛指，故要用a。

②For example，how many times have you walked out of a room and left the lights or television when no one else was there?答案及分析：在television后面加on。

句意：例如，当那里没人的时候，有多少次你让电灯或电视开着就离开了房间？leave...on表示“让……开着”。

③There was one in particular I’d always wanted.I put into my pocket when he wasn’tlooking.答案及分析：在put后加it。

及物动词put后缺少宾语，代替“我特别想要的那个玩具”要用it。

2．多词短文改错中多余的词常常是虚词，如冠词、介词、代词、副词、连词等。

一种是根据涉及的名词、动词的特点等判断是否多了冠词、介词、副词或其他词；另一种是根据全句的结构和意义，判断是否多了连词或其他词。

2018届二轮复习短文改错原创试题10篇汇聚之七【一】I was a newly qualified foot-health practitioner（执业者）. One day I was in thephone to a female patient recently, go over the details of an appointment. I carefulwrote down her address, phone number and the set time in case of I forgot. We werejust finished the conversation when she said, “I hope you don’t mind, so I have arather strange question.” “of course” I reply.” Go right ahead.” “Well,” said a ladynervously, “I was wondering if they offered discounts because I only have o ne leg.” Feeling that the lady extremely serious, I said yes without hesitation.【答案】【小题1】把in改为on【小题2】把go改为going【小题3】把careful改为carefully【小题4】把in case of去掉of【小题5】把finished改为finishing【小题6】把so改为but【小题7】把reply改为replied【小题8】把a改为the【小题9】把they改为you【小题10】把extremely serious前面加上was【解析】【小题1】把in改为on；第二句One day I was in the phone…在打电话句式是on the phone。

2018届二轮复习 短文改错模拟训练10篇之四【1】Three years ago I failed an important exam in my life and became a student in a ordinary school.Disappointing as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorlyequipped classroom ，I found the teachers patient.Besides ，I enjoyed the friend atmosphere in class.I decided to make the best it.I worked hard and get along well with my teachers and classmate.Whenever I had difficulties ，you were always available.Soon ，I became one of the most best students in my class.My experience tells me that it ’s not what you are given and how you make use of it which determines who you are.答案Three years ago I failed an important exam in my life and became a student in a an ordinary school.Disappointing Disappointedas I felt at the shabby campus and the poorlyequipped classroom ，I found the teachers patient.Besides ，I enjoyed the friend friendlyatmosphere in class.I decided to make the best ∧of it.I worked hard and get got along well with my teachers and classmate classmates.Whenever I had difficulties ，you theywere always available.Soon ，I became one of the most best students in my class. My experience tells me that it ’s not what you are givenand but how you make use of it which thatdetermines who you are.28．答案 a →an解析 ordinary 是以元音音素开头的单词，要用不定冠词an 修饰，故把a 改为an 。

2018届二轮复习短文改错专题10篇训练之一【1】Last year, I spent my summer holiday at my uncles in Beijing, which I stayed for nearly one month. In the first two weeks, I visited some places of interest such as the Forbidden City. In the following days. what interested me most was explore several op universities, including the PekingUniversity. Deeply attracted by the beautiful sceneries and academic atmosphere, I found myself greatly inspire to study hard to be admitted by one key university in 2018. Additional, one of the most interesting but meaningful things was to teach my cousin to learn English. Even though we had much difficulty at first, neither of us improved much both in knowledge and patience. I indeedenjoyed that summer holiday, which have benefited me a lot from life and study ever since.答案【2】In recent years it seems to be a common practice which students tear up their textbooks when graduating from high school. There are some reasons of this. First, after buried themselves in lessons all day long , students may find the school life boring but want to do something interesting. Second, students are under so great pressure that they need a way to relax.Personally, I don’t think students should tear up his textbooks. It suggested that textbooks be recycled so that we can save up more tree and protect the environment. Meanwhile, schools should provide them with guidance in a time on how to remove their pressure proper.答案In recent years it seems to be a common practice which students tear up their textbooks when graduating fromthathigh school. There are some reasons of this. First, after buried themselves in lessons all day long , students may findfor buryingthe school life boring but want to do something interesting. Second, students are under so great pressure that theyand suchneed a way to relax.Personally, I don’t think students should tear up his textbooks. It/\suggested that textbooks be recycled so thattheir iswe can save up more tree and protect the environment. Meanwhile, schools should provide them with guidance in atrees删除atime on how to remove their pressure proper.properly【3】Going to college can be terrifying. When I first arrived at my college, I was extreme nervous. What if I couldn’t fit? What if I couldn’t make friends? … All these thought just could not stop float in my mind. When I got to the campus, I was shocked at how outgoing everyone seems. I had only been on the campus for a few minutes when the lovely girl came up and started a conversation with me, which later became one of my best friends. His friendliness pushed me out of my comfortable zone and made me to open up faster than I had expected. So please reach out or you will find out people are more friendly than you think!答案Going to college can be terrifying. When I first arrived at my college, I was extreme nervous. What if I couldn’textremelyfit∧? What if I couldn’t make friends? … All these thought just could not stop float in my mind. When I got to thein thoughts floatingcampus, I was shocked at how outgoing everyone seems. I had only been on the campus for a few minutes when theseemedalovely girl came up and started a conversation with me, which later became one of my best friends. His friendlinesswhoHerpushed me out of my comfortable zone and made me to open up faster than I had expected. So please reach out or删除to andyou will find out people are more friendly than you think!【4】I woke up lately yesterday because my alarm clock didn't ring. With no time for the breakfast, I rushed out of my house. I had intended to catch the 7: 30 subway, and I didn't make it. Have a little time left, I take a taxi instead. I arrived at the school only find, with great sadness mixed with some relief, that the school where should have been full of students was empty. It was Saturday. However, our ill luck showed no sign of coming at an end. When I returned home, I found myself lock out. I had forgotten to bring the key. Just my luck.答案第一句lately--late;第二句breakfast前the去掉；第三句and---but;第四句Have--Having,take---took 第五句find前加to,where---which;第六句at---to第七句lock--locked【5】I was often troubled by lack of confidences. So I applied for a job at an exhibition as reporter last term. The exhibition was held annual to display the latest products in the field of education. At that time, I was responsible for interview parents who bought the learning tools. While talking with him, I found it was not so hard as I think. One lady even praised me but asked her son to learn from me. I realized the experience was in great value and nothing was more excited than communicating with people.From this experience, I am fully aware that we should take real action if our personality that needs improving.答案I was often troubled by lack of confidences. So I applied for a job at an exhibition as ∧reporter last term. Theconfidence a exhibition was held annual to display the latest products in the field of education. At that time, I was responsible forannuallyinterview parents who bought the learning tools. While talking with him, I found it was not so hard as I think. Oneinterviewing them thoughtlady even praised me but asked her son to learn from me. I realized the experience was in great value and nothingand ofwas more excited than communicating with people.excitingFrom this experience, I am fully aware that we should take real action if our personality that needs improving.删除that【6】Recently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream. Some mentioned the inspired Chinese Dream that was put forward by President Xi. Andothers talked enthusiastically about his understanding of the Chinese Dream. We are all believe that this dream will come true in the future. I also talked about my own dream. I had always wanted to be a doctor. Not only can doctors save people’s life but also they are doing a respectably job. Doctors can also help people to live a better life without their professional knowledge. To realize my dream, I should try to work hardly from now on. I must learn as much as I can get into a good medical college, which I can prepare myself fully for the job of a doctor.答案Recently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream. Somementioned the inspired Chinese Dream that was put forward by President Xi. And othersinspiringtalked enthusiastically about his understanding of the Chinese Dream. We are all believetheirthat this dream will come true in the future. I also talked about my own dream. I hadhave always wanted to be a doctor. Not only can doctors save people’s life but also they arelivesdoing a respectably job. Doctors can also help people to live a better life without their respectable withprofessional knowledge. To realize my dream, I should try to work hardly from now on. Ihardmust learn as much as I can ∧get into a good medical college, which I can prepareto wheremyself fully for the job of a doctor.【7】When my grandfather left school, he got his first job as a office worker. In those days, he was extreme thin. He paid very little, so he could not afford to eating a lot. I have one or two photos of her from that time, and he looks just like me, but a lot thin! When he grew older, he worked at all sorts of thing, such as reporting for a local newspaper and worked as a part-time salesman. He worked hardly all his life, but he always found out time for the things he enjoyed, like going fishing on weekends or reading books at home.答案71. ... a office worker. a → an72. ... extreme thin. extreme → extremely73. He paid ... paid前加was74. ... eating a lot. eating → eat75. ... photos of her ... her → him76. ... a lot thin! thin → thinner77. ... sorts of thing ... thing → things78. ... worked as a ... worked → working79. He worked hardly ... hardly → hard80. ... found out time ... 去掉out【8】The first time I went to the zoo was several years ago, with parents. Yesterday I went to the zoo with some classmates. Arriving here, we got a guidebook and started walking round a zoo. We all got pretty exciting about visiting the animals. But something in their eyes made me to think they might enjoy live in the wild rather than be kept in a cage. One classmate might have guessed what had come in my mind, as he tells me at least in this way we had a good chance to know more about the animals. I don't know. Maybe some days there will have a better way to see and study them.答案71. ... with parents. parents前加my72. Arriving here ... here → there73. ... round a zoo. a → the74. ... pretty exciting about ... exciting → excited75. ... made me to think ... 去掉to76. ... enjoy live ... live → living77. ... come in my mind ... in → to / into78. ... he tells me ... tells → told79. Maybe some days ... days → day80. ... will have a ... have → be【9】Last week, I went out with my family for the meal in a restaurant. The food is not very good though. For my first course, I chose a dish calling “Cook's special”, turned out to be a kind of pizza. Generally, I enjoyed fast food, and this meal was quite disappointed because it wasn't very tasty. The rest of my families didn't enjoy their food very much either. Personal, I think we would have enjoyed us more if we'd cooked a meal at home. After all, we always have had plenty of food in the fridge.答案71. ... for the meal ... the → a72. ... food is not ... is → was73. ... a dish calling ... calling → called74. ... turned out to ... turned前加which75. ... and this meal ... and → but76. ... was quite disappointed ... disappointed → disappointing77. ... my families didn't ... families → family78. Personal, I think ... Personal → Personally79. ... enjoyed us more ... us → ourselves80. ... have had plenty ... 去掉had【10】It's hard to make friends if you stayed at home alone all the time. Instead, you should get out of the house and does things that will put you touch with others. Joining a club or play a sport. Go to meetings of different group in the neighborhood. It's a lot easy to make friends when you have similarly interests. Plan things to talkabout with others people. Find out that what's in the newspaper, listen to the top CDs, and get to know something interesting about my favorite TV or movie star. 答案71. ... stayed at home ... stayed → stay72. ... and does things ... does → do73. ... put you touch ... touch前加in74. Joining a club ... Joining → Join75. ... of different group ... group → groups76. ... a lot easy ... easy → easier77. ... similarly interests. similarly → similar78. ... with others people. others → other或去掉people79. Find out that ... 去掉that80. ... my favorite TV ... my → your。

2018届二轮复习短文改错模拟试题10篇汇聚之二【1】When I look at this picture of myself，I realize of how fast time flies.I had grown not only physically，and also mentally in the past few years.About one month after this photo was took，I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club.Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time：car magazines and musical instruments.I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes，playing pop music，and collecting the late music albums.This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.答案When I look at this picture of myself，I realize of how fast timeflies.I hadhave grown not only physically，andbut also mentally in the past fewyears.About one month after this photo was tooktaken，I entered my secondyear of high school and becomebecame a new member of the school musicclub.Around me in∧this/the picture are the thingstheywhich/that were veryimportant in my life at that time：car magazines and musical instruments.Ienjoyed studying differencedifferent kinds of cars and planes，playing pop music，and collecting thelatelatest music albums.This picture often brings back tome many happy memories of yourmy high school days.71.答案删除of解析考查介词。

短文改错1、（2018·河北省唐山市二模）第二节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1．5分，满分15分)此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。

对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(八)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

注意：原行没有错的不要改。

(请在答题卡的指定位置作答)Animals are close friend of human beings．Their existence 76. _________especially that the existence of rare animals，makes the whole 77. _________world lively and colorful．Unlucky, we have heard such news that 78. _________rare animals，even keeping in the zoo，can’t escape being hurt 79. _________and killed．You may wonder how this can happen．The reason 80. _________is that some people lacked understanding about these animals 81. _________and care little about them.However, we should make information about rare animals 82. _________known to the public．Let’s keep on mind that protecting animals 83. _________is duty of everyone．Meanwhile，we should take active and effective 84. _________ measures．After all，protecting animals are protecting ourselves． 85. _________ 76．friends77. that去掉78． Unluckily79． kept80．√81．1ack82．Therefore83. in84．the85．is2（2018·河南省开封市二模）I picked out a baby bird without any feathers on my 76．way home. It was too young to feed itself, so I took it 77．into my room and fed it careful. It grew up a month later. 78．It kept in a birdcage made by myself. One morning. I 79．happened to think that it should return to nature or that 80．the forest should be it’s home indeed, so I set it free. To81．my surprise any joy, it fly down and stood on my shoulder, 82．appeared to welcome me when I came back after school. 83．From then on, I often saw it to fly away as I left for school 84．and fly back when I came home. We were good friend for years. 85．76. out – up 77. √ 78. careful – carefully 79. 在kept前加was80. or –and 81. it’s – its 82. fly – flew 83. appeared – appearing84. 去掉to 85. friend – friends3（2018·山西省大同五中二模）I’m very glad to have received the letter you sent me two 76. ___________weeks ago . I have been thinking about a question you asked 77. ___________me . In my opinion, you should go back after you finish your 78. ___________studies abroad. For one reason, that you are studying is badly 79. ___________needed nowadays in our country, It will be quite easily for you 80 ___________to find a good job , In fact , I know a few big company here in 81 ___________our city hopes to hire people like you , For another reason, . 82 ___________I think it will be very much more convenient for you to look 83. ___________after your parents as they are getting old, Therefore this is on ly 84. ___________my point of view, It is up for you to make right choice. 85. ___________76. √ 77. a →the 78. go →come 79. that →what 80. easily →easy81. company →companies 82. hopes→hope 83. 去掉very84. Therefore →But 85. for →to4（2018·浙江省菱湖中学二模）When I was 5, my father bought me the piano with all the money he had saved. Every day Ipracticed playing it though my father demanded. But before long, I transferred my interest inthepiano to some other thing so began to avoid practice it. When m y after realized this, he encouraged me, but was strict whit me than before. With her help, I went the hardest time and made greatprogress. Here I sincere express my gratitude to my father. On the journey of life, our parentshavelit the light of hope for us. What they have done broaden our horizon. No one deserves biggerthanks to our parents.5（2018·甘肃省天水一中三模）On the earth, all living things need others. Each kind of life eats 76________one another kind of life in order to live, and together they form 77________a food chain. Some food chains are simple, while others don’t. But 78________all food chains begin with the sun, and one of the links disappears, all 79________food chains become break up. It is known that all lives need to live on 80________the sunlight. But only animals can use sunlight directly. Plants are 81________as “factors”. They make food from sunlight, water and other things. 82________Plants feed food to other things. Animals can’t use the sun’s energy 83________only after it has changed by the plants. Some animals feed directly 84________by plants, while others eat smaller animals. They eat plants indirectly.85________76. 正确 77. 去掉one78. don’t改为aren’t 79.and后加if/when80. break改为broken 81. animals改为plants82. 去掉as 83. can’t改为can84. has后加been 85. by改为on6（2018·河北省衡水中学三模A卷）Dear Carmen,It is early afternoon and I am sitting in the small restaurant 76.____________closed to my work . It is a terrible day in New Orleans. It is 77.____________raining and I am feeling homesick . I am thinking you 78.____________and my other friends in Mexico. Outside, the sidewalks 79.____________is crowded with people. All of them are wearing coats 80.____________and carry umbrellas. Everyone is in a hurry to get a dry place. 81.____________Bus and cars are moving up and down the streets. Inside, 82.____________it is warm and pleasant. I attend classes in every morning. I 83.____________don’t have man y free time. But I like my life here. I hope 84.____________that you are good and happy. Please write soon. I enjoy your 85.____________letters with news from home.76.a77.close78.of / about 或thinking---missing79. √80.are81.carrying82.Buses83.in84.much85.well7（2018·河北省正定中学三模）I received your letter was dated April l6 the day 76．before yesterday．All of our family greatly delighted to 77．learn how you are getting along very well with your 78．lessons．Time passes quickly．After dozens of days, you’ll79．finish the middle school．What pleases us most is that you 80．do very well to make up your mind to enter for the college 81．entrance examination this summer．What wonderful it is ! 82．Dad, as well as Mom and I, is with you．We wished 83．you to make better use of your time．The full preparations 84．you make, the surer of success you’ll certain be．85．76．was前加that或去掉was77． greatly前加are 78．去掉how 79． After→In80．去掉the 81．√82． what→how 83．wished→wish 84．full→fuller 85．certain→certainly8（2018·河南省开封市三模）When people think about precious things, they usuallythink about money or jewelry. I am not very rich, and I have 76.something very preciously in my room. It’s not a CD player or 77.a cellphone. It's the view from my window. I’m lucky live 78.near a park. My window faces with the tops of the trees in 79.the park. Below the tree I can see children on the playground, 80.young couples walked quietly, mothers with children, and 81.old people sitting on the beach. The whole world is before 82.their eyes. My classmates like to go online or listen to music, 83.but when I have a free time, I just sit on the chair and 84.enjoyed the most precious thing in my room: the view. 85.76. and → but77. preciously → precious78. lucky后加to79. 去with 80. tree → trees81. walked → walking82. 正确83. their → my84. 去a。

2018届二轮复习短文改错典题阶梯10篇训练之四学案【一】The old saying“The early bird catches the worm.”show us the importance of planning, working hard and trying constant. To achieve outstanding results, most people must plan ahead and work diligently to overcome all kind of difficulties.That has been my own experience, either. When I first started high school, I seldom passed my exams, so I never prepared well. Later, my teacher, Mr. Black, advised me plan everything in the advance. She asked me to study hard as well. After a year of putting his advice onto practice, I can now easily pass all my exams. There are no shortcuts to succeed.答案The old saying“The early bird catches the worm.”showshowsus the importance of planning, working hard and trying constantconstantly. To achieve outstanding results, most people must plan ahead and work diligently to overcome all kindkindsof difficulties.That has been my own experience, eithertoo. When I first started high school, I seldom passed my exams, sobecauseI never prepared well. Later,my teacher, Mr. Black, advised me ∧to plan everything in the＼advance.SheHeasked me to study hard as well. After a year of putting his advice ontointopractice, I can now easily pass all my exams. There are no shortcuts to succeed.success/succeeding【二】One of the most important rule of finding happiness in life is to do what you love. I remember when my mom takes me to an English class in primary school, I suddenly found that learn English was fun and I really enjoyed it. The voice at the bottom of my heart said, “Maybe I can learn Engli sh well and become English teacher.”It was not easy at first. For almost one and a half year, I didn't do very well in all my English exams. Disappointing and frustrated, I doubted that whether I could follow my dream. But I told me not to accept this reality. Gradual, my grades started to improve and I had much confidence than before.答案of finding happiness in life is to do One of the most important ruleruleswhat you love. I remember when my mom takesme to an English classtookEnglish was fun and I in primary school, I suddenly found that learnlearningreally enjoyed it. The voice at the bottom of my heart said, “Maybe IEnglish teacher.”can learn English well and become ∧an或把become改成turnIt was not easy at first. For almost one and a half year，I didn't doyearsand frustrated, I very well in all my English exams. DisappointingDisappointeddoubted that＼whether I could follow my dream. But I told menot tomyself，my grades started to improve and I had accept this reality. GradualGraduallyconfidence than before.muchmore【三】Life is always full of something that you can not expect. Bob is very sorry to have missed the first two lesson this morning. He got up early as usually in the morning, but when he was ready to leave he find his bicycle's front tyre (轮胎) flat. He wanted to take taxi to school, and he didn't have any money on him. He had to look for a place along the street to get his bicycle repairing. Unluckily, there were not any bicycle repair shops was open in the early morning. So he had to walk to school, carrying his bicycle all the way. That was the reason how he was late for school. He told Mr. White not to worry with his lessons, for he would make up for it and turn to his teachers for help if necessary.答案Life is always full of something that you can not expect. Bob is very sorry to have missed the first two lessonlessonsthis morning. He got up earlyas usuallyusual in the morning, but when he was ready to leave he findfoundhisbicycle's front tyre (轮胎) flat. He wanted to take ∧a taxi to school, andbuthe didn't have any money on him. He had to look for a place along the street to get his bicycle repairingrepaired. Unluckily, there were not any bicycle repair shops was＼open in the early morning. So he had to walk to school, carrying his bicycle all the way. That was the reason howwhyhe was late for school. He told Mr. White not to worry withabouthis lessons, for he would make up for itthemand turn to his teachers for help if necessary.【四】Good morning, everyone! Today, I'd like to talk about culture shock. Perhaps you think studying in the different country is something sounded very exciting. It is a new experience, where brings the opportunity of discovering amazed things. It also brings a feeling of free. Despite of these advantages, therefore, there are also some challenges you will face. You may have difficulty adjust to quite different things. To be exactly, culture shock is a feeling of anxiety, uncertainty and confusion felt by people when you first arrive in another country.答案Good morning, everyone! Today, I'd like to talk about culture shock. Perhaps you think studying in theadifferent country is somethingsounded sounding very exciting. It is a new experience, wherewhichbrings theopportunity of discovering amazedamazingthings. It also brings a feeling offree freedom . Despite of＼these advantages, thereforehowever，there are also somechallenges you will face. You may have difficulty adjustadjustingto quite different things. To be exactlyexact，culture shock is a feeling of anxiety, uncertainty and confusion felt by people when youtheyfirst arrive in another country.【五】Dear Sir or Madam，I have heard the news which you are recruiting volunteers for the Winter Olympic Games to be held in 2022. So I am writing to apply to be one of the volunteers.I am Li Hua, a 18-year-old boy who is built up by doing sportsregularly in my spare time. I loved sports so much that I can devote all my energies to serve the game. However, with a very good command of English, I can speak the language fluent, which makes me more qualified to help foreigners. Meanwhile, not only do I have the ability to organize activity, but also I am outgoing and energetic, which is benefits me in communicating with strangers. Everything taking into account, I think I am a good fit for the position. I would appreciate if you could consider my application and offer me the opportunity at your convenience.Looking forward to your reply.Yours，Li Hua答案Dear Sir or Madam，I have heard the newswhichthatyou are recruiting volunteers for the Winter Olympic Games to be held in 2022. So I am writing to apply to be one of the volunteers.I am Li Hua, aan18-year-old boy who is built up by doing sports regularly in my spare time. I lovedlovesports so much that I can devote allmy energies to serveserving the game. HoweverBesides，with a very good commandof English, I can speak the language fluentfluently，which makes me more qualified to help foreigners. Meanwhile, not only do I have the ability to organize activityactivities，but also I am outgoing and energetic, which is benefits me in communicating with strangers. Everything takingtakenintoaccount, I think I am a good fit for the position. I would appreciate ∧itifyou could consider my application and offer me the opportunity at your convenience.Looking forward to your reply.Yours ，Li Hua【六】I fell love with travelling when I was a little girl. I dreamed of travel around the world one day. However, my family wasn't rich, as I couldn't ask my parents for money to travel. In order to make my dream come truly, I worked part-time to save money while I was studied at college. After I left for college and started working, I tried my best to save money, too. When I was 28 year old, I quit my job and began to realize my dream. While I was traveling, I took photographs and write articles for websites to make some money so that we could travel longer. If you have the dream, just go for it.答案I fell ∧inlove with travelling when I was a little girl. I dreamed of travel travel (l )ing around the world one day. However, my family wasn't rich, as so I couldn't ask my parents for money to travel. In order to make my dream come truly true ， I worked part-time to save money while I was studied studyingatcollege. After I left for ＼ college and started working, I tried my best to save money, too. When I was 28 year yearsold, I quit my job and began torealize my dream. While I was traveling, I took photographs and write wrotearticles for websites to make some money so that we Icould travel longer.If you have the adream, just go for it.【七】People used to communicate with each other through letters and public phones. So nowadays they use mobile phones and the Internet instead of. This change in communication have good effects on our works and life. Comparing with letters and public phones, mobile phones and the Internet are fast and much more convenient. If you missed your grandmother, you just take out your phone and say“hello” to him. And she will be happy to hear your voice. If you want to place order with a foreign company, you can e-mail the message. It'll be minutes after you get their reply.答案People used to communicate with each other through letters and public phones. So Butnowadays they use mobile phones and the Internetinstead of ＼. This change in communication have hasgood effects on our works work and life. Comparing Comparedwith letters and public phones, mobile phones and the Internet are fast fasterand much more convenient. If you missed missyour grandmother, you just take out your phone and say“hello” to him her . And she will be happy to hear your voice. If you want to place ∧an order with a foreign company, you can e-mail the message. It'll be minutes after beforeyou get their reply.【八】Good morning, everyone. It's great honor for me to speak here. My name's Li Xiaojun, born in a harmonious family. My father and mother are all high school teachers. Influenced by them, I read widely during my early age, but I've developed a great interest in arts and sports. I'm easy-going, get along well with my classmates.It is this personality which helps me win over all my classmates' friendships, and also help me overcome many difficulties both in academic and personal life. Being admitted in your university has always been a beautiful dream for me. I dream constantly that I, along with mine classmates, will study happy with the help of the respectable professors. I dream that I will swim freely in the sea, enjoying the waves of knowledge.I hope all my dream will come true in the near future. Thank you.答案great honor for me to speak here.Good morning, everyone. It's ∧aMy name's Li Xiaojun, born in a harmonious family. My father and mother are allhigh school teachers. Influenced by them, I read widely bothduring my early age, butI've developed a great interest in arts and sports.soI'm easy-going, getalong well with my classmates.gettinghelps me win over all my classmates' It is this personality whichthatme overcome many difficulties both in friendships, and also helphelpsyour university has academic and personal life. Being admitted intoalways been a beautiful dream for me. I dream constantly that I, alongwith minemy classmates, will study happyhappilywith the help of the respectableprofessors. I dream that I will swim freely in the sea, enjoying the waves of knowledge.I hope all my dreamdreamswill come true in the near future. Thank you.【九】Nowadays Senior 3 students are general faced with a lot of pressure, which is rather common. To reduce it, the followed suggestions may help. First of all, know exactly what lead to your pressure, and then you can take measures to deal with it. Secondly, set up a goal what is not too high, in another words, don't put too much pressure on yourself. Thirdly, find a way to relax you occasionally. For example, you can listen to music, go swim or just simply go walking. Eventually, make friend with others, for example, your classmates, your teachers, your parents.They will understand you and come to your help when you are really in the trouble. In a word, never get yourself stuck in the pressure for “impossible is nothing”．答案Nowadays Senior 3 students are generalgenerallyfaced with a lot of pressure, which is rather common. To reduce it, the followedfollowingsuggestions may help. First of all, know exactly what leadleadsto your pressure, and then you can take measures to deal with it. Secondly, set up a goal whatthat/whichis not too high, in anotherotherwords, don't put too much pressure on yourself. Thirdly, find a way to relax youyourselfoccasionally. For example, you can listen to music, go swimswimmingor just simply go walking. Eventually, makefriend friends with others, for example, your classmates, your teachers, ∧or/andyour parents.They will understand you and come to your help when you are really in the＼trouble. In a word, never get yourself stuck in the pressure for “impossible is nothing”．【十】Dear Zhang Ping，I'm glad to hear that you want to study abroad in your letter. Here is that I know about what kinds of Chinese students are favored in foreign colleges and universities.As far as I know, the language ability is essential, which help you communicate with others and makes easier for you to understand the courses. However, you should have the ability to adapt quickly to the new environment. What's more, our interest is valued as well, for it has a lot to do on success. Last but not the least, those who were willing to shoulder social responsibility are especial respected and welcomed.This is some of my advices, and I hope it can be of some help to you. May you succeed! Best wishes and a good luck.Yours，Mike答案Dear Zhang Ping，I'm glad to hear that you want to study abroad in your letter. Here is thatwhatI know about what kinds of Chinese students are favored in foreign colleges and universities.As far as I know, the language ability is essential, which helphelpsyoucommunicate with others and makes ∧iteasier for you to understand the courses. HoweverBesides，you should have the ability to adapt quickly to the new environment. What's more, ouryourinterest is valued as well, for it has alot to do onwith success. Last but not the least, those who werearewilling toshoulder social responsibility are especialespeciallyrespected and welcomed.This is some of my advicesadvice，and I hope it can be of some help to you. May you succeed! Best wishes and a good luck.Yours，Mike。

2018届二轮复习短文改错模拟试题10篇训练之一【一】Dear Mrs.Li,I am a student of Class Six,Grade One.The day before yesterday,I had borrowed a dictionary from the library.Fortunately,my schoolbag with the dictionary got stealing yesterday in a bus,which made me very angry.The dictionary belongs to the library after all.It is with great regret which I am writing this letter of apology to you.I feel terrible sorry for it.I do hope that what I did doesn’t give you such much trouble.As middle school student,I shouldn’t be responsible for what I did.I will compensate(赔偿) according to the loss and I want to know whether I can buy a new one that is the same as I lost to replace them.Sincerely,Wang Xia 答案与解析1.第二句中的had去掉考查时态。

根据时间状语the day before yesterday前天,可知用一般过去时。

2.第三句中的Fortunately改为Unfortunately考查行文逻辑。

根据句意―前天,我从图书馆借了一本词典。

不幸的是,在一辆公交车上装有这本词典的书包被盗了……‖,可知unfortunately恰当。