2018届二轮复习 短文改错模拟训练10篇之四 学案(11页word版)

第二讲短文改错[全国卷3年考情分析][命题者说]短文改错主要考查语法基础知识，语篇通常取材于考生自己的习作或类似于考生的随笔，且话题常见，篇章结构的难易程度符合高中生的认知水平，即通俗易懂，基本上无生僻的语言障碍和怪、偏、难的语法结构。

短文词数通常与书面表达一样，也是100词左右。

Ⅰ短文改错命题原则表——高考就考这些点短文改错10处错误中，设错方式是有规律的，一般情况下，多、缺词2～3个，错词7～8个，做完题后，可按此规律进行查验。

见下表：A(2017·全国卷Ⅰ)In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Befo re getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word, “Speed up！”“Slow down！”“Turning left！” I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.答案：In the summer holiday following myeighteen eighteenth birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard ∧the/myfirst day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, so but/yet once I started the car, my mind goes wentblank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word words ， “Speed up ！”“Slow down ！”“Turning Turnleft ！” I was so much ＼ nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minuteslate later ， the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly sudden stop just in the middle on ofthe road. B(2017·全国卷Ⅱ)Mr. and Mrs.Zhang all work in our school.They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the Internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables!答案：Mr. and Mrs.Zhang /all both all ＼work in our school.They live far from the school, and it takes them about a an/one hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting interestedin planting vegetables in their garden, that which is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier earlyand water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools.Beside Besides ， they often get some useful informations information from the Internet. When summer came comes ， they will invite their students ∧ topick the fresh vegetables! C(2017·全国卷Ⅲ)When I look at this picture of myself, I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically, and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club.Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time: car magazines and musical instruments.I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes ，playing pop music ，and collecting the late music albums.This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high schooldays. 答案：When I look at this picture of myself, I realize of＼how fast time flies. I hadhave grown not onlyphysically, andbut also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo wastooktaken， Ientered my second year of high school and becomebecame a new member of the school music club.Around mein ∧this/thepicture are the thingstheythat/which were very important in my life at that time：car magazinesand musical instruments.I enjoyed studying differencedifferent kinds of cars and planes，playing popmusic，and collecting thelatelatest music albums.This picture often brings back to me many happymemories of yourmy high school days.名词单复数的误用1．此类题的错误设置一般包括以下三个方面：(1)可数名词单复数的错用：一般考查错把复数用作单数，有时也考查错把单数用作复数。

2018届二轮复习短文改错解题技巧学案练与析一、分清错误的类型，对症下药1．缺词短文改错中所缺的词常常是冠词、介词、代词等虚词，它通常与词的搭配相关，比如：见到名词，应考虑是否缺了冠词；见到动词，可注意后面是否少了应与之搭配的介词或其他词；见到某些固定表达，如in fact，as soon as等，应考虑是否完整；还有某些短语加冠词与不加冠词意义不同，如in front of，in the front of；某些短语加介词与不加介词用法不同，如：as a result，as a result of。

高考常考点具体如下表所示：典型例题：①In the car park there Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry.答案及分析：在as后加a。

car是可数名词，此处表示“有一辆汽车冲了过来”，表泛指，故要用a。

②For example，how many times have you walked out of a room and left the lights or television when no one else was there?答案及分析：在television后面加on。

句意：例如，当那里没人的时候，有多少次你让电灯或电视开着就离开了房间？leave...on表示“让……开着”。

③There was one in particular I’d always wanted.I put into my pocket when he wasn’tlooking.答案及分析：在put后加it。

及物动词put后缺少宾语，代替“我特别想要的那个玩具”要用it。

2．多词短文改错中多余的词常常是虚词，如冠词、介词、代词、副词、连词等。

一种是根据涉及的名词、动词的特点等判断是否多了冠词、介词、副词或其他词；另一种是根据全句的结构和意义，判断是否多了连词或其他词。

2018届二轮复习短文改错原创试题10篇汇聚之七【一】I was a newly qualified foot-health practitioner（执业者）. One day I was in thephone to a female patient recently, go over the details of an appointment. I carefulwrote down her address, phone number and the set time in case of I forgot. We werejust finished the conversation when she said, “I hope you don’t mind, so I have arather strange question.” “of course” I reply.” Go right ahead.” “Well,” said a ladynervously, “I was wondering if they offered discounts because I only have o ne leg.” Feeling that the lady extremely serious, I said yes without hesitation.【答案】【小题1】把in改为on【小题2】把go改为going【小题3】把careful改为carefully【小题4】把in case of去掉of【小题5】把finished改为finishing【小题6】把so改为but【小题7】把reply改为replied【小题8】把a改为the【小题9】把they改为you【小题10】把extremely serious前面加上was【解析】【小题1】把in改为on；第二句One day I was in the phone…在打电话句式是on the phone。

2018届二轮复习 短文改错模拟训练10篇之四【1】Three years ago I failed an important exam in my life and became a student in a ordinary school.Disappointing as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorlyequipped classroom ，I found the teachers patient.Besides ，I enjoyed the friend atmosphere in class.I decided to make the best it.I worked hard and get along well with my teachers and classmate.Whenever I had difficulties ，you were always available.Soon ，I became one of the most best students in my class.My experience tells me that it ’s not what you are given and how you make use of it which determines who you are.答案Three years ago I failed an important exam in my life and became a student in a an ordinary school.Disappointing Disappointedas I felt at the shabby campus and the poorlyequipped classroom ，I found the teachers patient.Besides ，I enjoyed the friend friendlyatmosphere in class.I decided to make the best ∧of it.I worked hard and get got along well with my teachers and classmate classmates.Whenever I had difficulties ，you theywere always available.Soon ，I became one of the most best students in my class. My experience tells me that it ’s not what you are givenand but how you make use of it which thatdetermines who you are.28．答案 a →an解析 ordinary 是以元音音素开头的单词，要用不定冠词an 修饰，故把a 改为an 。

2018届二轮复习短文改错专题10篇训练之一【1】Last year, I spent my summer holiday at my uncles in Beijing, which I stayed for nearly one month. In the first two weeks, I visited some places of interest such as the Forbidden City. In the following days. what interested me most was explore several op universities, including the PekingUniversity. Deeply attracted by the beautiful sceneries and academic atmosphere, I found myself greatly inspire to study hard to be admitted by one key university in 2018. Additional, one of the most interesting but meaningful things was to teach my cousin to learn English. Even though we had much difficulty at first, neither of us improved much both in knowledge and patience. I indeedenjoyed that summer holiday, which have benefited me a lot from life and study ever since.答案【2】In recent years it seems to be a common practice which students tear up their textbooks when graduating from high school. There are some reasons of this. First, after buried themselves in lessons all day long , students may find the school life boring but want to do something interesting. Second, students are under so great pressure that they need a way to relax.Personally, I don’t think students should tear up his textbooks. It suggested that textbooks be recycled so that we can save up more tree and protect the environment. Meanwhile, schools should provide them with guidance in a time on how to remove their pressure proper.答案In recent years it seems to be a common practice which students tear up their textbooks when graduating fromthathigh school. There are some reasons of this. First, after buried themselves in lessons all day long , students may findfor buryingthe school life boring but want to do something interesting. Second, students are under so great pressure that theyand suchneed a way to relax.Personally, I don’t think students should tear up his textbooks. It/\suggested that textbooks be recycled so thattheir iswe can save up more tree and protect the environment. Meanwhile, schools should provide them with guidance in atrees删除atime on how to remove their pressure proper.properly【3】Going to college can be terrifying. When I first arrived at my college, I was extreme nervous. What if I couldn’t fit? What if I couldn’t make friends? … All these thought just could not stop float in my mind. When I got to the campus, I was shocked at how outgoing everyone seems. I had only been on the campus for a few minutes when the lovely girl came up and started a conversation with me, which later became one of my best friends. His friendliness pushed me out of my comfortable zone and made me to open up faster than I had expected. So please reach out or you will find out people are more friendly than you think!答案Going to college can be terrifying. When I first arrived at my college, I was extreme nervous. What if I couldn’textremelyfit∧? What if I couldn’t make friends? … All these thought just could not stop float in my mind. When I got to thein thoughts floatingcampus, I was shocked at how outgoing everyone seems. I had only been on the campus for a few minutes when theseemedalovely girl came up and started a conversation with me, which later became one of my best friends. His friendlinesswhoHerpushed me out of my comfortable zone and made me to open up faster than I had expected. So please reach out or删除to andyou will find out people are more friendly than you think!【4】I woke up lately yesterday because my alarm clock didn't ring. With no time for the breakfast, I rushed out of my house. I had intended to catch the 7: 30 subway, and I didn't make it. Have a little time left, I take a taxi instead. I arrived at the school only find, with great sadness mixed with some relief, that the school where should have been full of students was empty. It was Saturday. However, our ill luck showed no sign of coming at an end. When I returned home, I found myself lock out. I had forgotten to bring the key. Just my luck.答案第一句lately--late;第二句breakfast前the去掉；第三句and---but;第四句Have--Having,take---took 第五句find前加to,where---which;第六句at---to第七句lock--locked【5】I was often troubled by lack of confidences. So I applied for a job at an exhibition as reporter last term. The exhibition was held annual to display the latest products in the field of education. At that time, I was responsible for interview parents who bought the learning tools. While talking with him, I found it was not so hard as I think. One lady even praised me but asked her son to learn from me. I realized the experience was in great value and nothing was more excited than communicating with people.From this experience, I am fully aware that we should take real action if our personality that needs improving.答案I was often troubled by lack of confidences. So I applied for a job at an exhibition as ∧reporter last term. Theconfidence a exhibition was held annual to display the latest products in the field of education. At that time, I was responsible forannuallyinterview parents who bought the learning tools. While talking with him, I found it was not so hard as I think. Oneinterviewing them thoughtlady even praised me but asked her son to learn from me. I realized the experience was in great value and nothingand ofwas more excited than communicating with people.excitingFrom this experience, I am fully aware that we should take real action if our personality that needs improving.删除that【6】Recently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream. Some mentioned the inspired Chinese Dream that was put forward by President Xi. Andothers talked enthusiastically about his understanding of the Chinese Dream. We are all believe that this dream will come true in the future. I also talked about my own dream. I had always wanted to be a doctor. Not only can doctors save people’s life but also they are doing a respectably job. Doctors can also help people to live a better life without their professional knowledge. To realize my dream, I should try to work hardly from now on. I must learn as much as I can get into a good medical college, which I can prepare myself fully for the job of a doctor.答案Recently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream. Somementioned the inspired Chinese Dream that was put forward by President Xi. And othersinspiringtalked enthusiastically about his understanding of the Chinese Dream. We are all believetheirthat this dream will come true in the future. I also talked about my own dream. I hadhave always wanted to be a doctor. Not only can doctors save people’s life but also they arelivesdoing a respectably job. Doctors can also help people to live a better life without their respectable withprofessional knowledge. To realize my dream, I should try to work hardly from now on. Ihardmust learn as much as I can ∧get into a good medical college, which I can prepareto wheremyself fully for the job of a doctor.【7】When my grandfather left school, he got his first job as a office worker. In those days, he was extreme thin. He paid very little, so he could not afford to eating a lot. I have one or two photos of her from that time, and he looks just like me, but a lot thin! When he grew older, he worked at all sorts of thing, such as reporting for a local newspaper and worked as a part-time salesman. He worked hardly all his life, but he always found out time for the things he enjoyed, like going fishing on weekends or reading books at home.答案71. ... a office worker. a → an72. ... extreme thin. extreme → extremely73. He paid ... paid前加was74. ... eating a lot. eating → eat75. ... photos of her ... her → him76. ... a lot thin! thin → thinner77. ... sorts of thing ... thing → things78. ... worked as a ... worked → working79. He worked hardly ... hardly → hard80. ... found out time ... 去掉out【8】The first time I went to the zoo was several years ago, with parents. Yesterday I went to the zoo with some classmates. Arriving here, we got a guidebook and started walking round a zoo. We all got pretty exciting about visiting the animals. But something in their eyes made me to think they might enjoy live in the wild rather than be kept in a cage. One classmate might have guessed what had come in my mind, as he tells me at least in this way we had a good chance to know more about the animals. I don't know. Maybe some days there will have a better way to see and study them.答案71. ... with parents. parents前加my72. Arriving here ... here → there73. ... round a zoo. a → the74. ... pretty exciting about ... exciting → excited75. ... made me to think ... 去掉to76. ... enjoy live ... live → living77. ... come in my mind ... in → to / into78. ... he tells me ... tells → told79. Maybe some days ... days → day80. ... will have a ... have → be【9】Last week, I went out with my family for the meal in a restaurant. The food is not very good though. For my first course, I chose a dish calling “Cook's special”, turned out to be a kind of pizza. Generally, I enjoyed fast food, and this meal was quite disappointed because it wasn't very tasty. The rest of my families didn't enjoy their food very much either. Personal, I think we would have enjoyed us more if we'd cooked a meal at home. After all, we always have had plenty of food in the fridge.答案71. ... for the meal ... the → a72. ... food is not ... is → was73. ... a dish calling ... calling → called74. ... turned out to ... turned前加which75. ... and this meal ... and → but76. ... was quite disappointed ... disappointed → disappointing77. ... my families didn't ... families → family78. Personal, I think ... Personal → Personally79. ... enjoyed us more ... us → ourselves80. ... have had plenty ... 去掉had【10】It's hard to make friends if you stayed at home alone all the time. Instead, you should get out of the house and does things that will put you touch with others. Joining a club or play a sport. Go to meetings of different group in the neighborhood. It's a lot easy to make friends when you have similarly interests. Plan things to talkabout with others people. Find out that what's in the newspaper, listen to the top CDs, and get to know something interesting about my favorite TV or movie star. 答案71. ... stayed at home ... stayed → stay72. ... and does things ... does → do73. ... put you touch ... touch前加in74. Joining a club ... Joining → Join75. ... of different group ... group → groups76. ... a lot easy ... easy → easier77. ... similarly interests. similarly → similar78. ... with others people. others → other或去掉people79. Find out that ... 去掉that80. ... my favorite TV ... my → your。

2018届二轮复习短文改错模拟试题10篇汇聚之二【1】When I look at this picture of myself，I realize of how fast time flies.I had grown not only physically，and also mentally in the past few years.About one month after this photo was took，I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club.Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time：car magazines and musical instruments.I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes，playing pop music，and collecting the late music albums.This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.答案When I look at this picture of myself，I realize of how fast timeflies.I hadhave grown not only physically，andbut also mentally in the past fewyears.About one month after this photo was tooktaken，I entered my secondyear of high school and becomebecame a new member of the school musicclub.Around me in∧this/the picture are the thingstheywhich/that were veryimportant in my life at that time：car magazines and musical instruments.Ienjoyed studying differencedifferent kinds of cars and planes，playing pop music，and collecting thelatelatest music albums.This picture often brings back tome many happy memories of yourmy high school days.71.答案删除of解析考查介词。

2. 2015全国新课标卷 II One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. parents Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it in so very much that he quickly walked into the
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本文叙述了Tony在购物中心与父母走散后，在热 心人的帮助下找到父母的经历。 1. parent→ parents 由下文的his parents were missing可知用复数。 2. on→ in 据常识，玩具应在橱窗里面，故用in。 3. 去掉so后的very 这是so…that…结构，不用 very。 4. looks→ looking 介词after后面接动名词，故用 looking。 5. where→ that 或者去掉where宾语从句，从句 的结构与意思完整，用that引导或省略that。

短文改错1、（2018·河北省唐山市二模）第二节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1．5分，满分15分)此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。

对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(八)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

注意：原行没有错的不要改。

(请在答题卡的指定位置作答)Animals are close friend of human beings．Their existence 76. _________especially that the existence of rare animals，makes the whole 77. _________world lively and colorful．Unlucky, we have heard such news that 78. _________rare animals，even keeping in the zoo，can’t escape being hurt 79. _________and killed．You may wonder how this can happen．The reason 80. _________is that some people lacked understanding about these animals 81. _________and care little about them.However, we should make information about rare animals 82. _________known to the public．Let’s keep on mind that protecting animals 83. _________is duty of everyone．Meanwhile，we should take active and effective 84. _________ measures．After all，protecting animals are protecting ourselves． 85. _________ 76．friends77. that去掉78． Unluckily79． kept80．√81．1ack82．Therefore83. in84．the85．is2（2018·河南省开封市二模）I picked out a baby bird without any feathers on my 76．way home. It was too young to feed itself, so I took it 77．into my room and fed it careful. It grew up a month later. 78．It kept in a birdcage made by myself. One morning. I 79．happened to think that it should return to nature or that 80．the forest should be it’s home indeed, so I set it free. To81．my surprise any joy, it fly down and stood on my shoulder, 82．appeared to welcome me when I came back after school. 83．From then on, I often saw it to fly away as I left for school 84．and fly back when I came home. We were good friend for years. 85．76. out – up 77. √ 78. careful – carefully 79. 在kept前加was80. or –and 81. it’s – its 82. fly – flew 83. appeared – appearing84. 去掉to 85. friend – friends3（2018·山西省大同五中二模）I’m very glad to have received the letter you sent me two 76. ___________weeks ago . I have been thinking about a question you asked 77. ___________me . In my opinion, you should go back after you finish your 78. ___________studies abroad. For one reason, that you are studying is badly 79. ___________needed nowadays in our country, It will be quite easily for you 80 ___________to find a good job , In fact , I know a few big company here in 81 ___________our city hopes to hire people like you , For another reason, . 82 ___________I think it will be very much more convenient for you to look 83. ___________after your parents as they are getting old, Therefore this is on ly 84. ___________my point of view, It is up for you to make right choice. 85. ___________76. √ 77. a →the 78. go →come 79. that →what 80. easily →easy81. company →companies 82. hopes→hope 83. 去掉very84. Therefore →But 85. for →to4（2018·浙江省菱湖中学二模）When I was 5, my father bought me the piano with all the money he had saved. Every day Ipracticed playing it though my father demanded. But before long, I transferred my interest inthepiano to some other thing so began to avoid practice it. When m y after realized this, he encouraged me, but was strict whit me than before. With her help, I went the hardest time and made greatprogress. Here I sincere express my gratitude to my father. On the journey of life, our parentshavelit the light of hope for us. What they have done broaden our horizon. No one deserves biggerthanks to our parents.5（2018·甘肃省天水一中三模）On the earth, all living things need others. Each kind of life eats 76________one another kind of life in order to live, and together they form 77________a food chain. Some food chains are simple, while others don’t. But 78________all food chains begin with the sun, and one of the links disappears, all 79________food chains become break up. It is known that all lives need to live on 80________the sunlight. But only animals can use sunlight directly. Plants are 81________as “factors”. They make food from sunlight, water and other things. 82________Plants feed food to other things. Animals can’t use the sun’s energy 83________only after it has changed by the plants. Some animals feed directly 84________by plants, while others eat smaller animals. They eat plants indirectly.85________76. 正确 77. 去掉one78. don’t改为aren’t 79.and后加if/when80. break改为broken 81. animals改为plants82. 去掉as 83. can’t改为can84. has后加been 85. by改为on6（2018·河北省衡水中学三模A卷）Dear Carmen,It is early afternoon and I am sitting in the small restaurant 76.____________closed to my work . It is a terrible day in New Orleans. It is 77.____________raining and I am feeling homesick . I am thinking you 78.____________and my other friends in Mexico. Outside, the sidewalks 79.____________is crowded with people. All of them are wearing coats 80.____________and carry umbrellas. Everyone is in a hurry to get a dry place. 81.____________Bus and cars are moving up and down the streets. Inside, 82.____________it is warm and pleasant. I attend classes in every morning. I 83.____________don’t have man y free time. But I like my life here. I hope 84.____________that you are good and happy. Please write soon. I enjoy your 85.____________letters with news from home.76.a77.close78.of / about 或thinking---missing79. √80.are81.carrying82.Buses83.in84.much85.well7（2018·河北省正定中学三模）I received your letter was dated April l6 the day 76．before yesterday．All of our family greatly delighted to 77．learn how you are getting along very well with your 78．lessons．Time passes quickly．After dozens of days, you’ll79．finish the middle school．What pleases us most is that you 80．do very well to make up your mind to enter for the college 81．entrance examination this summer．What wonderful it is ! 82．Dad, as well as Mom and I, is with you．We wished 83．you to make better use of your time．The full preparations 84．you make, the surer of success you’ll certain be．85．76．was前加that或去掉was77． greatly前加are 78．去掉how 79． After→In80．去掉the 81．√82． what→how 83．wished→wish 84．full→fuller 85．certain→certainly8（2018·河南省开封市三模）When people think about precious things, they usuallythink about money or jewelry. I am not very rich, and I have 76.something very preciously in my room. It’s not a CD player or 77.a cellphone. It's the view from my window. I’m lucky live 78.near a park. My window faces with the tops of the trees in 79.the park. Below the tree I can see children on the playground, 80.young couples walked quietly, mothers with children, and 81.old people sitting on the beach. The whole world is before 82.their eyes. My classmates like to go online or listen to music, 83.but when I have a free time, I just sit on the chair and 84.enjoyed the most precious thing in my room: the view. 85.76. and → but77. preciously → precious78. lucky后加to79. 去with 80. tree → trees81. walked → walking82. 正确83. their → my84. 去a。

2018届二轮复习短文改错典题阶梯10篇训练之四学案【一】The old saying“The early bird catches the worm.”show us the importance of planning, working hard and trying constant. To achieve outstanding results, most people must plan ahead and work diligently to overcome all kind of difficulties.That has been my own experience, either. When I first started high school, I seldom passed my exams, so I never prepared well. Later, my teacher, Mr. Black, advised me plan everything in the advance. She asked me to study hard as well. After a year of putting his advice onto practice, I can now easily pass all my exams. There are no shortcuts to succeed.答案The old saying“The early bird catches the worm.”showshowsus the importance of planning, working hard and trying constantconstantly. To achieve outstanding results, most people must plan ahead and work diligently to overcome all kindkindsof difficulties.That has been my own experience, eithertoo. When I first started high school, I seldom passed my exams, sobecauseI never prepared well. Later,my teacher, Mr. Black, advised me ∧to plan everything in the＼advance.SheHeasked me to study hard as well. After a year of putting his advice ontointopractice, I can now easily pass all my exams. There are no shortcuts to succeed.success/succeeding【二】One of the most important rule of finding happiness in life is to do what you love. I remember when my mom takes me to an English class in primary school, I suddenly found that learn English was fun and I really enjoyed it. The voice at the bottom of my heart said, “Maybe I can learn Engli sh well and become English teacher.”It was not easy at first. For almost one and a half year, I didn't do very well in all my English exams. Disappointing and frustrated, I doubted that whether I could follow my dream. But I told me not to accept this reality. Gradual, my grades started to improve and I had much confidence than before.答案of finding happiness in life is to do One of the most important ruleruleswhat you love. I remember when my mom takesme to an English classtookEnglish was fun and I in primary school, I suddenly found that learnlearningreally enjoyed it. The voice at the bottom of my heart said, “Maybe IEnglish teacher.”can learn English well and become ∧an或把become改成turnIt was not easy at first. For almost one and a half year，I didn't doyearsand frustrated, I very well in all my English exams. DisappointingDisappointeddoubted that＼whether I could follow my dream. But I told menot tomyself，my grades started to improve and I had accept this reality. GradualGraduallyconfidence than before.muchmore【三】Life is always full of something that you can not expect. Bob is very sorry to have missed the first two lesson this morning. He got up early as usually in the morning, but when he was ready to leave he find his bicycle's front tyre (轮胎) flat. He wanted to take taxi to school, and he didn't have any money on him. He had to look for a place along the street to get his bicycle repairing. Unluckily, there were not any bicycle repair shops was open in the early morning. So he had to walk to school, carrying his bicycle all the way. That was the reason how he was late for school. He told Mr. White not to worry with his lessons, for he would make up for it and turn to his teachers for help if necessary.答案Life is always full of something that you can not expect. Bob is very sorry to have missed the first two lessonlessonsthis morning. He got up earlyas usuallyusual in the morning, but when he was ready to leave he findfoundhisbicycle's front tyre (轮胎) flat. He wanted to take ∧a taxi to school, andbuthe didn't have any money on him. He had to look for a place along the street to get his bicycle repairingrepaired. Unluckily, there were not any bicycle repair shops was＼open in the early morning. So he had to walk to school, carrying his bicycle all the way. That was the reason howwhyhe was late for school. He told Mr. White not to worry withabouthis lessons, for he would make up for itthemand turn to his teachers for help if necessary.【四】Good morning, everyone! Today, I'd like to talk about culture shock. Perhaps you think studying in the different country is something sounded very exciting. It is a new experience, where brings the opportunity of discovering amazed things. It also brings a feeling of free. Despite of these advantages, therefore, there are also some challenges you will face. You may have difficulty adjust to quite different things. To be exactly, culture shock is a feeling of anxiety, uncertainty and confusion felt by people when you first arrive in another country.答案Good morning, everyone! Today, I'd like to talk about culture shock. Perhaps you think studying in theadifferent country is somethingsounded sounding very exciting. It is a new experience, wherewhichbrings theopportunity of discovering amazedamazingthings. It also brings a feeling offree freedom . Despite of＼these advantages, thereforehowever，there are also somechallenges you will face. You may have difficulty adjustadjustingto quite different things. To be exactlyexact，culture shock is a feeling of anxiety, uncertainty and confusion felt by people when youtheyfirst arrive in another country.【五】Dear Sir or Madam，I have heard the news which you are recruiting volunteers for the Winter Olympic Games to be held in 2022. So I am writing to apply to be one of the volunteers.I am Li Hua, a 18-year-old boy who is built up by doing sportsregularly in my spare time. I loved sports so much that I can devote all my energies to serve the game. However, with a very good command of English, I can speak the language fluent, which makes me more qualified to help foreigners. Meanwhile, not only do I have the ability to organize activity, but also I am outgoing and energetic, which is benefits me in communicating with strangers. Everything taking into account, I think I am a good fit for the position. I would appreciate if you could consider my application and offer me the opportunity at your convenience.Looking forward to your reply.Yours，Li Hua答案Dear Sir or Madam，I have heard the newswhichthatyou are recruiting volunteers for the Winter Olympic Games to be held in 2022. So I am writing to apply to be one of the volunteers.I am Li Hua, aan18-year-old boy who is built up by doing sports regularly in my spare time. I lovedlovesports so much that I can devote allmy energies to serveserving the game. HoweverBesides，with a very good commandof English, I can speak the language fluentfluently，which makes me more qualified to help foreigners. Meanwhile, not only do I have the ability to organize activityactivities，but also I am outgoing and energetic, which is benefits me in communicating with strangers. Everything takingtakenintoaccount, I think I am a good fit for the position. I would appreciate ∧itifyou could consider my application and offer me the opportunity at your convenience.Looking forward to your reply.Yours ，Li Hua【六】I fell love with travelling when I was a little girl. I dreamed of travel around the world one day. However, my family wasn't rich, as I couldn't ask my parents for money to travel. In order to make my dream come truly, I worked part-time to save money while I was studied at college. After I left for college and started working, I tried my best to save money, too. When I was 28 year old, I quit my job and began to realize my dream. While I was traveling, I took photographs and write articles for websites to make some money so that we could travel longer. If you have the dream, just go for it.答案I fell ∧inlove with travelling when I was a little girl. I dreamed of travel travel (l )ing around the world one day. However, my family wasn't rich, as so I couldn't ask my parents for money to travel. In order to make my dream come truly true ， I worked part-time to save money while I was studied studyingatcollege. After I left for ＼ college and started working, I tried my best to save money, too. When I was 28 year yearsold, I quit my job and began torealize my dream. While I was traveling, I took photographs and write wrotearticles for websites to make some money so that we Icould travel longer.If you have the adream, just go for it.【七】People used to communicate with each other through letters and public phones. So nowadays they use mobile phones and the Internet instead of. This change in communication have good effects on our works and life. Comparing with letters and public phones, mobile phones and the Internet are fast and much more convenient. If you missed your grandmother, you just take out your phone and say“hello” to him. And she will be happy to hear your voice. If you want to place order with a foreign company, you can e-mail the message. It'll be minutes after you get their reply.答案People used to communicate with each other through letters and public phones. So Butnowadays they use mobile phones and the Internetinstead of ＼. This change in communication have hasgood effects on our works work and life. Comparing Comparedwith letters and public phones, mobile phones and the Internet are fast fasterand much more convenient. If you missed missyour grandmother, you just take out your phone and say“hello” to him her . And she will be happy to hear your voice. If you want to place ∧an order with a foreign company, you can e-mail the message. It'll be minutes after beforeyou get their reply.【八】Good morning, everyone. It's great honor for me to speak here. My name's Li Xiaojun, born in a harmonious family. My father and mother are all high school teachers. Influenced by them, I read widely during my early age, but I've developed a great interest in arts and sports. I'm easy-going, get along well with my classmates.It is this personality which helps me win over all my classmates' friendships, and also help me overcome many difficulties both in academic and personal life. Being admitted in your university has always been a beautiful dream for me. I dream constantly that I, along with mine classmates, will study happy with the help of the respectable professors. I dream that I will swim freely in the sea, enjoying the waves of knowledge.I hope all my dream will come true in the near future. Thank you.答案great honor for me to speak here.Good morning, everyone. It's ∧aMy name's Li Xiaojun, born in a harmonious family. My father and mother are allhigh school teachers. Influenced by them, I read widely bothduring my early age, butI've developed a great interest in arts and sports.soI'm easy-going, getalong well with my classmates.gettinghelps me win over all my classmates' It is this personality whichthatme overcome many difficulties both in friendships, and also helphelpsyour university has academic and personal life. Being admitted intoalways been a beautiful dream for me. I dream constantly that I, alongwith minemy classmates, will study happyhappilywith the help of the respectableprofessors. I dream that I will swim freely in the sea, enjoying the waves of knowledge.I hope all my dreamdreamswill come true in the near future. Thank you.【九】Nowadays Senior 3 students are general faced with a lot of pressure, which is rather common. To reduce it, the followed suggestions may help. First of all, know exactly what lead to your pressure, and then you can take measures to deal with it. Secondly, set up a goal what is not too high, in another words, don't put too much pressure on yourself. Thirdly, find a way to relax you occasionally. For example, you can listen to music, go swim or just simply go walking. Eventually, make friend with others, for example, your classmates, your teachers, your parents.They will understand you and come to your help when you are really in the trouble. In a word, never get yourself stuck in the pressure for “impossible is nothing”．答案Nowadays Senior 3 students are generalgenerallyfaced with a lot of pressure, which is rather common. To reduce it, the followedfollowingsuggestions may help. First of all, know exactly what leadleadsto your pressure, and then you can take measures to deal with it. Secondly, set up a goal whatthat/whichis not too high, in anotherotherwords, don't put too much pressure on yourself. Thirdly, find a way to relax youyourselfoccasionally. For example, you can listen to music, go swimswimmingor just simply go walking. Eventually, makefriend friends with others, for example, your classmates, your teachers, ∧or/andyour parents.They will understand you and come to your help when you are really in the＼trouble. In a word, never get yourself stuck in the pressure for “impossible is nothing”．【十】Dear Zhang Ping，I'm glad to hear that you want to study abroad in your letter. Here is that I know about what kinds of Chinese students are favored in foreign colleges and universities.As far as I know, the language ability is essential, which help you communicate with others and makes easier for you to understand the courses. However, you should have the ability to adapt quickly to the new environment. What's more, our interest is valued as well, for it has a lot to do on success. Last but not the least, those who were willing to shoulder social responsibility are especial respected and welcomed.This is some of my advices, and I hope it can be of some help to you. May you succeed! Best wishes and a good luck.Yours，Mike答案Dear Zhang Ping，I'm glad to hear that you want to study abroad in your letter. Here is thatwhatI know about what kinds of Chinese students are favored in foreign colleges and universities.As far as I know, the language ability is essential, which helphelpsyoucommunicate with others and makes ∧iteasier for you to understand the courses. HoweverBesides，you should have the ability to adapt quickly to the new environment. What's more, ouryourinterest is valued as well, for it has alot to do onwith success. Last but not the least, those who werearewilling toshoulder social responsibility are especialespeciallyrespected and welcomed.This is some of my advicesadvice，and I hope it can be of some help to you. May you succeed! Best wishes and a good luck.Yours，Mike。

2018届二轮复习短文改错模拟试题10篇训练之一【一】Dear Mrs.Li,I am a student of Class Six,Grade One.The day before yesterday,I had borrowed a dictionary from the library.Fortunately,my schoolbag with the dictionary got stealing yesterday in a bus,which made me very angry.The dictionary belongs to the library after all.It is with great regret which I am writing this letter of apology to you.I feel terrible sorry for it.I do hope that what I did doesn’t give you such much trouble.As middle school student,I shouldn’t be responsible for what I did.I will compensate(赔偿) according to the loss and I want to know whether I can buy a new one that is the same as I lost to replace them.Sincerely,Wang Xia 答案与解析1.第二句中的had去掉考查时态。

根据时间状语the day before yesterday前天,可知用一般过去时。

2.第三句中的Fortunately改为Unfortunately考查行文逻辑。

根据句意―前天,我从图书馆借了一本词典。

不幸的是,在一辆公交车上装有这本词典的书包被盗了……‖,可知unfortunately恰当。

2018高考英语二轮备考教学案--短文改错【考纲解读】1、短文改错的短文内容与学生的学习生活非常贴近好像就是学生的习作。

2、长度均在100词左右。

3、材料都是记叙文，简单易懂，不存在理解方面的问题。

4、新课标的设题通常是一般情况下，每句至多有两处错误，每处错误，改动一词为原则，即在一个词上进行改动，可以是添一词，删一词或改一词。

没有错误的句子，无需改动。

【要点分析】一、短文改错万能公式1.谓语动词的错误是历年考试的重点和热点，常见动词错误类型有：①一般现在时与一般过去时错用;②and前后动词时态不一致;③主谓不一致;④缺少动词,特别是be动词;⑤第三人称单数形式错用;⑥主动语态和被动语态错用。

2.名词的常见错误：单复数名词错用，可数名词与不可数名词错用。

3.连词错误：连词包括关系代词、副词，并列连词and/or/but等。

关于连词，一般考查从句关系：who/whom/whose/what/which/how/why/when/where/if/whether等。

4.冠词错误：误用a和an(根据单词的第一个音素来判定);误用a/an和the(固定搭配，或泛指、特指;多冠词或少冠词)5.形容词和副词错误：系动词后用形容词(be/am/is/are/was/were/become/go/感官性动词smell/feel); 词性的误用(形容词修饰名词;副词修饰动词、形容词)。

6.代词错误：代词的主格和宾格(I/me;he/him;she/her;we/us; they/them)错误;反身代词(myself/yourself/himself/herself/themselves/ourselves)使用错误; 代词的单数和复数使用错误;代词指代错误;多代词或少代词。

7.非谓语动词的常见错误：不定式、动名词作主语、宾语时;and连接的不定式或动名词前后不一致(尤其距离较远时);介词后用动名词形式作宾语;某些动词后要求接动名词或不定式。

2018届二轮复习非谓语在短文改错中的考查一高考真题单句改错(1) David and I wanted go off to find help but Bill insisted on staying near the car. (wanted 后加to，因为want 后要接不定式) (全国卷)(2) …rather than go into the forest and getting lost. (getting 改get，因为get 与其前的go 并列) (全国卷)(3) David pointed to a path which he thought would probably leading to a village. (leading 改为lead，因为其前有助动词would) (全国卷)(4) I went back to get David and helped him to stood up. (stood 改为stand，因为to stand up 在此为不定式结构) (全国卷)(5) Charles and Linda Mason do all of these things as well as climbed building. (climbed 改为climb / climbing，若将as well as 视为连词，则将climbed 改为climb，因为它与其前的do 并列；若将as well as 视为介词，则climbing，因为介词后动词用动名词) (全国卷)(6) Modern people know more about health, have better food, and to live in clearer surroundings. (去掉live 前的to，因为live 与其前的know, have 并列) (全国卷) (7) The World Health Organization and other organizations are working improve health all over the world. (improve前加to，to improve…为表目的的不定式短语) (全国卷)(8) …you pay the cost of send a po stcard, the librarian will write to you. (send改为sending，因为介词后接动名词作宾语) (全国卷)(9) …and let you to know when the book you want has returned (去掉know 前的to，因为其前有动词let) (全国卷)(10) I want to thank you again for have me in your home for the summer holidays. (have改为having，因为介词后接动名词作宾语) (全国卷)(11) I had always wanted return to the village after moving away. (return前加to，因为want 后要接不定式) (全国卷)(12) It was very kind of them to meet me at the railway station and drove me to their home. (drove改为drive，因为drive 与其前的to meet 并列，此处的drive 为省略to 的不定式) (全国卷)(13) I look forward to hear from you soon. (hear改为hearing，因为其前的to 是介词) (全国卷)(14) Play football not only makes us grow up tall and strong but also gives us a sense of fair play and team spirit. (第一个play改为playing，因为动词原形不能用作主语) (全国卷)(15) I was often a little tired after a day’s work and watch TV demands very little effort. (watch改为watching，因为动词原形不能用作主语) (全国卷)(16) I’d like very much come but I have an examination on Monday morning. (come 前加to，因为would like 后接不定式) (北京春季卷)(17) I’ll spend the whole weekend reading and prepare for it. (prepare 改为preparing，因为它与其前的reading 并列，与其前所用的动词spend 有关) (北京春季卷)(18) But then there is always more mysteries look into. (look 前加to，此处为不定式作后置定语) (北京春季卷)(19) After learn the basics of the subject, nothing else seemed very practical to me. (learn 改为learning，因为介词后接动名词作宾语) (北京春季卷)(20) My parents love me dearly of course and will do all they can make sure that I geta good education. (make 前加to，因为to make… 在此用作目的状语，注意句型do all one can to do sth) (全国卷)(21) He did not want share things with other people. (want 后加to，因为want 后要接不定式) (北京春季卷)(22) That is, a game of tennis making him very busy. (making 改为made，因为缺谓语，不能用非谓语形式，根据上下文用一般过去时) (北京春季卷)(23) As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories.(visiting 改为visited，因为它与其前的fed 和其后的told 并列) (全国卷) (24) But his parents think go to college is more important than playing sports. (go 改为going，因为动词原形不能用作主语) (安徽春季卷)(25) …children may not develop the habit of read and the ability to enjoy themselves. (read 改为reading，因为介词后要接动名词) (年北京春季卷)(26) …to make children to want things that they don’t really need.(去掉want 前的to，因为want…在此用作使役动词make 的宾语补足语) (年北京春季卷) (27) Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express myself in simple English. (talk 改为talking，因为动词enjoy 后要接动名词作宾语) (全国卷)(28) Shake her head, she said, “It isn’t a good time to do that, dear.” (Shake 改为Shaking，现在分词表伴随) (江苏卷)(29) It’s like going to a huge library without have to walk around to find your books. (have 改为having，介词后用动名词作宾语) (广西卷)(30) I am thinking of making a trip to London, and visit the British Museum and some parks. (visit 改为visiting，因visit与making并列，作介词of的宾语) (四川卷) (31) I have some records giving to me as birthday gifts.(giving 改为given，“把某物给某人”是give sth to sb；句中records与give是被动关系，故用过去分词)(32) I dream of standing on the platform in the classroom and give lessons to lovely boys and girls. (give改为giving，因它与standing并列，作dream of的宾语)三、模拟单句演练(1) In those days we were forced work twelve hours a day.(2) It’s very difficult for a foreigner learn Chinese.(3) It was silly of you believe what he said.(4) He was made wash the boss’s car once a day.(5) I’ll let you to know as soon as I hear from her.(6) I waved to her but failed attract her attention.(7) I have already seen the film twice. I don’t want see it any more.(8) What I want know is when all this happened.(9) It was clear that he wanted be alone.(10) Most children are interested in listen to stories.(11) Walk quickly is difficult for an old man.(13) Be careful in cross the street.(14) The film is very interesting. It is worth see twice.(15) Find work is very difficult these days.(16) Most of us students enjoy ask questions in English.(17) Look, some of my classmates are practising speak English over there.(18) Teach a child to sing and dance is very interesting.(19) Learn to speak English is more difficult than to write it.(20) My friend Jim is very good at making things and repair things.(21) He decided to go to the south, find a good job and living there.(22) It was very kind of you to buy us some much fruit and seeing us at the station.(23) Excuse me, would you to tell me the way to the zoo?【参考答案】(1) work 前加to，此句为force sb to do sth 的被动形式。

精题分解：短文改错（1）1、（2018·浙江省诸暨中学高三12月月考）第一节短文改错（共10小；每小题1分；满分10分）此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。

对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线(＼)划掉。

该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

原行没有错的不要改。

注意：本题所有的标记和答案都写在答题纸上。

Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurted my foot. I was in great pain at that mom ent, but I tried to act as if nothing happened until the class was over. Though I had difficulty walk back to my classroom, but I still didn’t tell anyone and even refused the offer of help from my classmates. As the result, the hurt on my foot became worse. Now I know I am wrong. We can tell others our need for help and accept their help. Someday we can help him in return. In this way, we can get along each other happily and peacefully.答案：短文改错Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurted my foot. I was in great pain atwhen hurtthat moment, but I tried to act as if nothing ^ happened until the class was over. Though I hadhaddifficulty walk back to my classroom, but I still didn’t tell anyone and even refused the offer of walkinghelp from my classmates. As the result, the hurt on my foot became worse. Now I know I ama in was wrong. We can tell others our need for help and accept their help. Someday we can help him inthemreturn. In this way, we can get along ^ each other happily and peacefully.with2、（2011·浙江省温州市十校联合体高三上学期期末联考）第一节：短文改错(共10小题；每小题l分，满分l0分)下面短文中共有10处错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

2018届二轮复习短文改错的常见考点2018年的高考即将来临，笔者在仔细审读前两年全国卷Ⅰ英语试题的基础上，拟就短期内如何“立竿见影”提高短文改错能力谈谈看法，以期快速提高考生短文改错的分数。

1分析现状短文改错是整套高考英语试题中最简单的题型，一般涉及到的高中知识点就只有定语从句或者非限制定语从句，其余都是初中的语法知识，但最简单的题型往往在省英语高考中得分却不高，一般情况下平均分只有3.3分左右，可以用一句话概括学生短文改错的情况：会而不对。

2解决问题针对这种情况，我尝试了一种“立竿见影”提高短文改错的方法，可以快速提高学生改错水平，对只能够改对1－2分的学生能瞬间提高到5－6分。

什么方法这么奇特？这就是“1818”改错秘诀。

“1818”中的181指的是加1个词，改8个词，减1个词；还有一个8则指8个高频考点：(1) book, books；(2) do, did, does；(3) slow, slowly；(4) me, you, mine；(5) a, an, the；(6) doing, done, to do； (7) and, but, so, yet；(8) which, that, what, where。

3真题检验1.(2017年全国卷Ⅰ) In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor's orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank, I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word, "Speed up!" "Slow down!" "Turning left!" I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.答案如下：(1) eighteen →eighteenth； (2) first前加the/my； (3) so →but/yet；( 4)goes→went；(5) word →words； (6)Turning →Turn； (7)去掉much；(8)late →later；( 9)suddenly →sudden；(10) on →of检验结果：涉及了“1818”中的6个考点。

2018届二轮复习短文改错原创试题10篇汇聚之三【一】I was only 12 when we moved to California. I remember that I enjoyed flying non-stop across a whole country and that I wasn’t very happy about leave my friends. But Dad think it’d be good for we all to live in a suburb instead in the middle of a city. And Uncle Jeff, his brother, who’d been living in California for about 20 years, were always telling us how wonderful California it was. He said it would be easily for Dad to get a job driving a taxi, that had been Dad’s jo b in New York. But we all agreed to try it for one year. Now we’ve been here for four years, and we all love it.【答案】【小题1】a改为the【小题2】leave改为leaving【小题3】think改为thought【小题4】we改为us【小题5】instead后加of【小题6】were改为was【小题7】去掉it【小题8】easily改为easy【小题9】that改为which【小题10】But改为So/And【解析】【小题1】a改为the；考查定冠词和不定冠词；第二句across the whole country穿过整个国家中，the 特指whole country整个国家，定冠词也可特指上文提及的事物，而a表示泛指。

专题9 短文改错[2016·全国卷Ⅰ]假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多着(从第11处起)不计分。

My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.74．honest→honesty 此处指诚实是他成功的秘诀，故用名词形式。

75．or→and从句意判断是并列关系，把or改为and。

76．using→used 此处表示被动含义，be used for“被用来做”。

2018届二轮复习短文改错原创试题之四【一】Dear Mr and Mrs Johnson，I’m writing to you from my home in China. I returned at home safe and sound. When I think of the wonderful two weeks I spend in Australia, I just can’t help think of both of you. It was so kind for you to have provided everything to make my stay here pleasant. It was a happy and luck experience. Not only has my English improved and I’ve also learned so much about your culture. And I enjoyed all the funs we shared together. Thank you very much. I’ll always remember your kind as well as this trip.I’ll keep touch with you and write to you later. Please take care!Yours，Li Ming答案：第二句：去掉at第三句：spend→spent; think→thinking或think前加but第四句：for→of; here→there第五句：luck→lucky第六句：and→but第七句：funs→fun第九句：kind→kindness第十句：keep后加in【二】It was the Christmas. I saw a 7-and 8-year-old boy wearing a man’s overcoat it covered him from neck to toe. The sleeve of the coat were cut short casual to match the boy’s arm length. I went to the nearby shop. As I had a son with the same age, I knew the size. A few moments later, I buy a nice pair of trousers, with a matching overcoat. Wore Santa’s hat, I went away and gave the new clothes to the boy. The unexpected joy on face thrilled me. Unplanned charity brings a strange sense of contentment that money can never buy.答案：第一句：去掉the第二句：and→or; it→that/which第三句：sleeve→sleeves; casual→casually第五句：with→of第六句：buy→bought第七句：Wore→Wearing; away→back第八句：face前加his【三】Dear Mr. Zhang，Known that our school is going to set up elective (选修的) English courses, I’d like to give some advices. English Visual-Audio-Oral Course is a good choice. Most of us are interested at English videos and songs, that provide us with great images and beautiful music to listen to. As result, we can enjoy some local customs and singing English songs with joy. In addition, we need to improve our oral English. When we are always learning English, we may not be able to make a fluent speech. We can’t easy communicate with others like native speakers. That is why I suggested taking a Speech Course. I’ll be glad that if you can consider my suggestions.Yours，Li Hua答案：第一句：Known→Knowing; advices→advice第三句：at→in; that→which第四句：result前加a; singing→sing第六句：When→Although/Though/While第七句：easy→easily第八句：suggested→suggest第九句：去掉that【四】It was a sunny day today but I went to Xishan Park for a spring outing. The moment when I entered the park, a variety of beautiful flowers and green trees came into sight. Attracting by the beauty, I couldn’t help taking photos. As I wandered along the path, enjoying the beautiful view, I noticed anything unpleasant. Two schoolgirls jumped over the fence to pick flowers. Obviously they didn’t realize that their behavior has done great damage to beauty of the park. Without hesitation, I went up and stopped her politely. Feeling quite embarrassed, the two girls came out immediate. Then they took pictures inside the fence. Seeing that, I smiled and everything looked nicer in my eye.答案：第一句：but→and第二句：去掉when第三句：Attracting→Attracted第四句：anything→something第六句：has→had; beauty前加the第七句：her→them第八句：immediate→immediately第九句：inside→outside第十句：eye→eyes【五】My hobby is collecting stamps. I had stamps from many countries, like England, Canada, China and other countries. Yesterday, one of my favorite stamp was lost, this made me really upset. I looked for it anywhere and asked everybody in the room, but still I couldn’t find them. “Where could it have gone？”I thought to myself, “Maybe I should tell my teacher.” With my eyes filling with tears, I came in Mr. Li’s office. “Don’t be so worrying！”Mr.Li told me with a smile, “You must put it somewhere else. I am sure it will turn up soon.” At the last, I found it in my English book.答案：第二句：had→have第三句：stamp→stamps; this→which第四句：anywhere→everywhere; them→it第六句：filling→filled; in→to/into第七句：worrying→worried第八句：must后加have第十句：去掉the【六】Not only our parents give us endless love, but they also give us enough support, always sharing their happiness and sorrow. I’m very grateful to my parents. They give me so much love and spare no efforts to support me. I still remembered once I was seriously ill, they were so worrying and almost accompanied me the whole night. Besides, they are considerate. Now I’m the Senior 3 student. Lucky for me, my parents can understand my stressful condition and often talk to me by encouraging words. Furthermore, I am given enough personal space, what I appreciate so much.Now I have made up my mind to study hard. When I grow up, I will try my best to make my parents to live a happy life.答案：第一句：only后加do; their→our第三句：efforts→effort第四句：remembered→remember; worrying→worried第六句：the→a第七句：Lucky→Luckily; by→with第八句：what→which第十句：去掉第二个to【七】Yesterday my friend Linda and I had lunch at the pizzeria (做比萨饼的店) behind our school. I know Linda isn’t crazy for pizzas; she came along just because me. At the table next to me, there were two guys from our class. One of them was really funnily. He tried to imitate all the people in the pizzeria. We couldn’t stop to laughing. But there were some customer who did not like the fact which two boys were imitating them.They complained to an owner of the restaurant, and he came over and tell them to stop. It was a pity because Linda and I was really having fun!答案：第二句：for→about; because后加of第三句：me→us/ours第四句：funnily→funny第六句：去掉to第七句：customer→customers; which→that第八句：an→the; tell→told第九句：第二个was→were【八】Insurance companies are normally willing to insure anything, but it must be unique to insure a dish.It was a unusual pie dish, for it was eighteen feet in long and six feet in width. They had been purchased by a local authority so that an enormous pie could baked for an annual fair.The pie committee decided that the best way to transport would be by a canal, so they insured it for the trip. Short after it was launched, the pie committee went to the local inn to celebrate.In the same time, a number of teenager climbed on to the dish and held a little party of their own. Dancing proved to be more than the dish could bear but during the party it capsized (倾覆) and sink in seven feet of water.答案：第二句：a→an; long→length第三句：They→It; could后加be第四句：去掉a第五句：Short→Shortly第六句：In→At; teenager→teenagers第七句：but→for; sink→sank【九】A day I came back from shopping with my family and we were on our way to home. While walked in the street, I saw a tall man in front of us taking his phone out. He accidental dropped the money he had. I was the only one that saw this and I picked up the money. I didn’t know that I should keep them. Then I started thinking that if I were that man, I will like the money giving back to me. I immediately ran up to him but gave him the money. I feltpretty good for doing the right thing. Seeing this, my parents praised me what I had done.答案：第一句：A→One；去掉to第二句：walked→walking第三句：accidental→accidentally第五句：that→if/whether; them→it第六句：will→would; giving→given第七句：but→and第九句：me后加for【十】For students learning instruments, summer is always a “music season”. During vacation times, we are always busy attending variously lessons, taking exams and participating in competitions. This summer I joined the music competition and was lucky to get the second place. It was the first time that I had played on the stage in front of such many people. I felt very upset at first, but the encourage from my teacher keeps me going ahead.Surprising, I was given the silver medal, that increased my confidence. If we try our best to get ahead, we will be able to achieve what we desire and deserve it.答案：第二句：times→time; variously→various第三句：joined后加in；第一个the→a第四句：such→so第五句：encourage→encouragement; keeps→kept第六句：Surprising→Surprisingly; that→which第七句：去掉it。