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2013高考上海卷英语作文点评
II. Guided Writing
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given in Chinese.
上海博物馆拟举办一次名画展，现就展出场所（博物馆还是社区图书馆）征集公众意见，假设你是王敏，给上海博物馆写一封信表达你的想法。你的信必须满足以下要求：
1. 简述你写信的目的及你对场所的选择；
2. 说明你的理由（从便利性，专业性等方面对这两个场所进行对比）
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I’ve just learned that Shanghai Museum is to hold a famous painting exhibition and you’re collecting public suggestions about which location to hold it. I’m writing this letter to share with you my opinions. As far as I’m concerned, it is more reasonable to hold the painting exhibition in Shanghai Museum than in community libraries. My reasons are as follows.
On the one hand, it is more convenient for people to reach Shanghai Museum, located in the center of the city. Visitors can go there by subway and bus and so on. What’s more, Shanghai Museum is much more extensive than community libraries, providing visitors with a more comfortable environment to appreciate the famous paintings.
On the other hand, Shanghai Museum, a well-known and distinguished museum at home and abroad, is more professional in holding painting exhibitions. What’s of great significance is that not only does it provide advanced facilities and high-tech monitors but also offers professional security guards to protect those famous paintings from being damaged or stolen in the process of exhibition.
Consequently, I strongly propose that the painting exhibition is to be held in the Shanghai Museum.
Yours,
Wang Min
赏析：
今年上海市的高考英语作文话题贴近学生的生活实际，用书信的载体呈现，让考生对画展感觉到有话可以说，但是想要达到A类作文，不仅需要有扎实语言功底，还需要对博物馆和社区图书馆及画展等生活类的语言应用娴熟，更需要学生从专业一点的角度，深入分析其选择的理由，这个层面很多学生很难用专业的语言区描述，学生平时学习时间紧张，没有时间到社会上参加一些社会活动，而且在紧张的时间里，更别提用一些复杂的语言结构区展示自己的理由，所以学生写到高分不是很容易，大部分学生得到
15/16分是没有问题的。采取这样的命题思路对英语教学有较好的反馈作用，学校和家庭不仅仅督促学生的学习更要提供机会让孩子走出课堂，走向社会，培养学生创造性和批判性思维。
提示：
生活类词汇: museum library painting exhibition advanced facility high- tech monitor security guard
分词的应用：located providing distinguished
句型：主语从句标语从句倒装等
2012年上海高考英语作文
Directions: Write an English composition in 120 - 150 words according to the instructions given
below in Chinese.
上周一，你在一所小学观摩了小女孩Amy所在班级的两堂绘画课（如图所示），回家后你用英语写了一篇日记，内容包括：
● 对两堂绘画课的具体描述；
● 你从中获得的启发。
2012 Shanghai English Test writing sample 3
( for reference only )
Today I had an unusual experience , which refreshed my mind. With pupils I spent two periods of time in a primary school, watching them learn how to paint. A little girl named Amy, one student of the class, left me a deep impression with her unique painting.
In the first lesson the teacher required the pupils to paint freely. Namely , in any way they could draw whatever they’d like to. Amy was the first one to have a try. I saw her think for a little while, take off her shoes, then dip her feet slightly into the paint/ink. Much to my surprise, in a flash she managed to make a nice design on a broad piece of white paper/blanket with both of her feet. What happened next, various of types of works painted by other children appearing before my eyes one by one ,kept me laughing with joy and amusement.
Following a break, the second class began. smiling ,the teacher made a brief comment, which was full of praise as well as appreciation. After that ,she gave the students some guidance about the traditional way of painting. With her teachers’ words in mind , Amy practiced again. Painting-brush in hand ,she sat a desk properly/straight ,paying full attention to her work. This time，with ease and excitement she drew some birds flying high in the sky /sun.
Looking back at the two ways of giving a class, I have to admit the teacher was well worth following in matters of cultivating “flowers” in the spirit of originality. Given that children are of great imagination and elasticity in their growth , they are supposed to be given as many chances and opportunities as possible in the course of being educated so as to develop their potential to the full. Were the young always confined to the established ways of doing things without a free world ,one that is also longed for by the ambitious birds drawn by Amy , how can we expect the next generation our civilized nation would be more innovative and creative
2012 Shanghai English Test writing sample 4
( for reference only )
Today I had an unusual experience , which refreshed my mind. With pupils I spent two periods of time in a primary school, watching them learn how to paint. A little girl named Amy, one student of the class, left me a deep impression with her unique painting.
In the first lesson the teacher required the pupils to paint freely. Namely , in any way they could draw whatever they’d like to. Amy was the first one to have a try. I saw her think for a little while, take off her shoes, then dip her feet slightly into the paint/ink. Much to my surprise, in a flash she managed to make a nice design on a broad piece of white paper/blanket with both of her feet. What happened next, various of types of works painted by other children appearing before my eyes one by one ,kept me laughing with joy and amusement.
Following a break, the second class began. With a smile ,the teacher made a brief comment, which was full
of praise as well as appreciation. After that ,she gave the students some guidance about the traditional way of painting. With her teachers’ words in mind , Amy practiced again. Painting-brush in hand ,she sat a desk properly/straight ,paying full attention to her work. This time，with ease and excitement she drew some birds flying high in the sky /sun.
Simple and amusing as it seemed, the two ways of painting are thought-provoking. As is generally accepted ,students ,especially, children have great potential in their growth and development. As a matter of fact, whether their talents can be developed to the full, to a great degree, depends on how children are educated. While some valuable traditions are well worth cherishing, thinking in an original way should be encouraged and emphasized among children when it comes to teaching or education, who are supposed to be characterized by “innovation and creation ”. Only in this way, can they keep in pace with the f ast-developing modern world.
2011年上海卷高考英语作文范话题：向一个基金会申请2000元做个项目来支持贫困学生，需要包含以下的一些要点1.介绍自己 2.项目具体实施方案元如何利用
Dear foundation organizers,
My name is Jerry Lu, a student currently studying at Shanghai XX High school. I am writing, on behalf of my classmates, to apply for the 2000 yuan worth of fund in a bid to initiate a program aimed at helping those students who are financially disadvantaged.
Being raised in families that don’t have to worry about putting food on the table need not mean oblivion to our less fortunate peers. On this account, we would appreciate it if you could sponsor our poverty-relief endeavor. The following is how we would go about using the money. We would spend 1500 yuan purchasing some stationery for the needy students at our school. It is worth noting that we would inform them to pick up the school supplies themselves instead of us “doling out” the supplies so
that we wouldn’t embarrass those who we want to help. The remainder of the fund would be used to invite a motivational speaker who was to talk about how to lift oneself out of poverty by making right academic and professional decisions.
Modest as our efforts may sound, we believe they will warm some hearts. Much obliged if you could reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours Sincerely,
Jerry Lu
2010年上海高考作文及范例
下图是小学新生的课堂一脚，对照你当时的上课情况，作出比较并谈谈你的感受。你的作文必须包括：
●描述图片里学生上课的场景
●比较你同时期的上课情况
●简单谈谈你的感受
As is described in the picture, a group of foreign students are raising their hands to give answers to the question in a joyful and active way. The purpose of the picture is to show us how active the class performance is in the foreign country.
Western students are more likely to be open-minded and willing to express their unique ideas in class. Just as the picture shows: When the teacher is asking a question, every child raises their hands and is eager to answer the question. They do not fear giving the in-class performance while others are watching.
This scene reminds me of my own class situation when I was at elementary school. As Chinese children are more often than not very conservative and modest, therefore, my teachers
usually called a student's name if nobody dared to answer the questions. Then the appointed child behaved awkwardly and was reluctant to say just a few words.
This recollection makes me feel rather disappointed. In fact, we should at least give a try, whether the answer is perfect or not. It's a chance of learning, more specifically, if we are well-done, we will gain confidence; if not, we will get informed of a better solution, which will provide us experience in the later situation. All in all, it's more sensible to be active in class.
图画式议论文
1. 特点：
是通过观察和分析单幅或一组画，把图画内容转化成文
字信息。
2. 注意点：
(1). 要认真审图
(2). 需从整体上把握图画所呈现的主要内容，处理好人物与时空的
关系及局部与整体的关系，找出文章的线索或主题。
(3). “丰满的想象 + 变化的表达”
3. 结构：
第一段描述图画，一般不超过三分之一篇幅
第二段揭示画旨（一般一言即可）
第三段发表感想、评论或提出建议（占主要篇幅）
第四段简单谈谈自己的感受
注意：二三两段可合成一段
2009年上海高考作文及范例
某海外学校举办英语夏令营，开设了如下课程：园艺（gardening），烹饪（cooking）,防身术（self- defence），护理（nursing）。假如你是王跃华（不可以用自
己的真实姓名），写一封申请信，报名参加其中一门课程的学习。信的内容必须包括：
1、你感兴趣的课程
2、你期望从这门课程中学到什么
3、为什么想学这些内容
It is said that a summer camp is to be held by your school and a few courses are available to choose from. I am interested in gardening, in that I believe it features my character and personal benefits.
During the learning period, I expect to gain some unexpected knowledge. A radical technique I’d like to obtain is to know how to tell different species of plants and flowers apart. This helps me to have a clear outlook of those in my garden. Furthermore, the proper cutting time and frequency to water are some other skills I want to learn. A little knowledge concerning choosing suitable soil or the reasonable planting positions will also be a good choice.
The mani reason why I choose gardening is that I want to help my parents with their work in the domestic garden. In addition, I find that we students generally lack the knolwdge of gardening, missing a chance to have a word with nature, so that knowing the surroundings is imperitave. Last but not least, by attending the course, I will have a meaningful summer vacation, and drowning myself bewteen plants will by all means add a brilliant touch to my life. 2008年上海高考作文及范例
你班将组队参加学校组织的集体舞比赛（group dancing cooipetition)，班长希望大家积极参加。对此谈谈你的看法。
你的文章必须包括以下内容：
·你是否会参加比赛
·你做出该决定的具体理由
Version 1:
A group dancing competition will be held in our school and the monitor calls on everybody to take an active part in it. While most of my classmates are still hesitating whether to participate, I have said yes to our monitor with great pleasure.
Generally speaking, there are two reasons for my decision. First, it is a good opportunity for me to relax myself, which will enable me to study more efficiently. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy, so goes the saying, which clearly shows us the importance of relaxation. Besides, I think I am a good dancer after learning dance for more than five years. Participating in the contest will be a golden chance for me to show my dancing skills and make some contributions to the class.
For the two reasons mentioned above, it is no surprise that I have such a strong enthusiasm on the group dancing competition.
Version 2:
Today the monitor calls on everybody to take an active part in the group dancing competition which will be held in a couple of days in our school. But after some careful consideration, I have decided not to participate.
There are a number of reasons for my decision. First and foremost, as the College Entrance Exam is just around the corner, study is the top priority for me. Participating in the group dancing competition has to give way because it might take me too much time. What’s more, without any experience of dancing, I don’t think I can be a good dancing partner. I am afraid my poor dancing skills will probably spoil the performance of the whole class. In this case, it’s better for me to be a spectator cheering for my classmates.
For these reasons, it seems more appropriate for me to watch the competition than to dance myself.
2007年上海高考作文及范例
以“礼物”为主题写一篇作文。该文章必须包括以下内容：
你送礼物的对象及所送的礼物；
该礼物对他（她）可能产生的影响或带来的变化。
A Present for Father’s Day
The Father’s Day will come soon. and I want to give my Dad a present. That is a VIP card of a health club. When I was a little boy, Dad worked hard as a teacher. During term, Mother and I sometimes accompanied Dad in his office till a late hour. From then on, I understood that Dad worked with great effort. There are still too many precious memories which I’ll cherish in my heart. And I want to give this present to express my thanks to him.
Time flies and I’m 18 now. As I grow up, Father is getting older. He is now still diving into piles of books. With the health club membership, I hope that he will make time to do more exercises. I think that he will relax in the health club and make more friends.
2006年上海高考作文及范例
下表提供了你所心仪的南、北两所大学的招生信息。通过比较作出选择，并结合个
Of the two universities listed above, I prefer the one in the north. The main reason is that the tuition is only 5,000 RMB for the university a year, compared with 8,000 RMB for the university in the south. This makes a big difference for a family like a mine, because my father is peasant and the only breadwinner in the family. Studying at the northern university can save my father big money.
Another reason I take into consideration is the preference policy the northern university offers. Any candidate who chooses to study there may gain an extra 20 points, which greatly raises the possibility of my being admitted to this university. Of course, it doesn't mean that it will be quite easy to pass the entrance exam because this university has limited the number of qualified candidates to 10 only. However, I have been doing quite well in school, so I believe I can pass the entrance exam with flying colors.
Version B
Compared with the northern university, the southern one is more to my liking. It is true that in terms of tuition the former is 3,000 RMB cheaper than the latter. However, that's not a problem to me because I can work my way through college once I get admitted. What counts is the reputation it has. Once I enter this school, my future career is guaranteed.
Also, the university in the south recruits 20 new students instead of 10, which means that I will stand a better chance of getting admitted. The competition is very keen, though, as you can see because this university doesn't give candidates any extra points. So all I can do now is study hard, pass the tough entrance exam, and qualify as a student of the university of my choice.
2005年上海高考作文及范例
古人云：“天生我材必有用” 请你描述你生活中的一件事，说明人各有所长，无论才能大小都能成为有用的人。
Many people, especially those who think they are not as talented as others, tend to give up in their undertakings and thus complain about life. Such people will certainly end up getting nowhere. Notice that most successful people are not unlike us. What makes them stand out is their devotedness to the job they are doing, which is typical of the story of Li Dahua, a neighbor of mine.
Dahua was brought up in a poor family. Since he didn't do well in school, he joined his father in collecting garbage for a living soon after he graduated from elementary school. His neighbors shook their heads whenever they saw him, thinking that this boy would by no means carve out a bright future. Years passed by, and Dahua kept collecting garbage, but he took one step further. Through books he knew how to sort out the waste he had collected and have it recycled. You know what He has set up a recycling factory and become the richest man in town! His success proves the ancient Chinese saying: "There must be a use for my talent." 2004年上海高考作文及范例
老师要求你负责班级墙报(wall newspaper)工作并征求你的意见。在日记中表述你的决定并谈谈想法。
My Diary
Thursday, March 11
This morning my headmaster had a chat with me. He told me that he decided to choose me to be in charge of the class wall newspaper. He wants to kinow if I am willing to accept the task and what I plan to do for it.
First of all, I would like to say I would always set a high value on doing a service for the class. So I’m only too willing to be in charge of the wall newspaper. As a student, to do my bit for our class is a good way to put my ability to good use. To help run the wall newspaper can give ful play to my talent. We all know our society needs people full of creativity anf creativity
doesn’t come from books but from practice. The wall newspaper provideds me with a chance to practise. I’m sure I can benefit a lot from it.
Secondly, I regard the wall newspaper as a window of our class. It serves as a bridge between the teachers and the students. With the active participation of the whole class I can have it published every two weeks. Through the wall newspaper we can exchange our ways of learning, freely communicate our views on school life, voice our concerns over health cares and even make proposals on the teaching method and the testing system. Some of my classmates are good at drawing. They can help to add colour to the wall newspaper.
I hope my ideas for the wall newspaper will meet with the teacher’s favourable consideration.
2003年上海高考作文及范例
你的好友因家境一般买不起名牌而闷闷不乐。给他写封信，谈谈你的看法和建议。
收信人：徐海青
寄信人：黄平（不可用自己的真实姓名）
写信日期：2003年6月8日
June 8, 2003
Dear Xu Haiqing,
You said in your letter that many of your classmates were wearing fashionable clothes, but you couldn’t afford to buy the best brands. So you flet very depressed. There are different views on people’s wear. The following are my ideas about it.
Firstly, you shouldn’t put too much emphasis on physical appearance. You must always remember the most important task for you today is to concentrate your attention on your studies. No matter what you wear, you will really look your best when you come out first in your examinations.
As a famous saying goes, “Grugality(节俭) is the mother of virtue.” So, secondly, you must understand that it is a fine virtue to learn to live in frugality will benefit you a lot in your later life.
I hope you understand what I mean. I am sure you will take a positive attitude towards life and will be happy again when you read my letter.
Bet Regards,
Huang Ping
2002年上海高考作文及范例
2002秋季高考
II. Guided Writing
Directions: Write an English composition in over 120 words based on the picture and the instructions given below.
简要描述图片内容，结合生活实际，就图片的主题谈谈自己的感想。
Due to the one-child policy in China, most families have only one child and therefore this child is regarded as the treasure of the whole family. Both the parents and grandparents usually spoil the child too much.
As is depicted in the picture, when a child is learning to ride a bicycle, her parents and grandparent are sweating, running alongside the bike and trying their best to protect the child for fear that she should fall and get hurt.
We all know the greatest glory consists not in never falling, but in rising every time we fall. So I think, for the parents, they should be aware of the negative effect too much spoiling has on their child. Under the parents’ protection, the child knows only comfort and ease. If they don’t learn how to live independently, how can they cope with the hardships and trials which they will meet in the future For the children, they should let their parents know that they have confidence in themselves and are able to exist in the competitive community without the constant watchful eye of an eager parent.
The path to success is filled with various kinds of difficulties and obstacles. Only when we have learned to stand on our own feet, can we survive the challenging world.
(219 words) 2002年春季高考
根据所给图表，简要描述某城市近年每百人手机（mobile phone）用户增长情况，并试
分析其增长原因。
More and more people have mobile phones in recent years , shown as the above diagram. In 1995, only one person in a hundred had a mobile phone in some city.10 people in a hundred had mobile phones. The number of the people who had mobile phones was ten times as many as in 1995. In 1999, there were 20 people in a hundred who had mobile phones.In 2001, a half of the people in a hundred had mobile phones.
There are several reasons for the increase of the number of people having mobile phones. Firstly, mobile phones are useful in people’s life.We can communicate with others very conveniently.We can take photos and even surf the Net with the latest model.Secondly, people’s income has been increasing quickly, and the mobile phones are cheaper than before.In this case, people can afford a mobile phone.
For the two reasons mentioned above, it is no surprise that so many people have bought cell phones and this trend will not stop in the near future.
图表式作文的几种形式:
一是以表格形式,将统计的数据或被说明的事物直接用表格形式体现出来,即统计表。
二是以图形形式
A 表示数据变化的曲线图;
B 表示数据的大小或数量之间的差异
的柱状图;
C 表示总体内部结构变化的扇形图。
图表式作文写作分三步:
第一步：开门见山地点明本图表所反映的主题。
常使用的词汇有:table, chart, figure, graph, describeFrom the above graph/chart, it can be seen that...
3. As is shown in the graph, ...
chart/table shows the differences between…
第二步：分析数据间的主要差异及趋势，然后描写（在描写数据间变化及总趋势特征时，可采用分类式或对比式以支持主题，并阐明必要的理由）。注意层次。即 facts and reasons
常用转折，对比及比较的词汇：
While, but, on the contrary, however, compare with, in contrast to ,as…as, the same as, be similar to, be difference between, among, more than, less than
常用描写趋势变化的词汇：Increase, rise, go up, reduce, drop, go down, fall, reach, remain, by/to, slowly, slightly, gradually, sharply, rapidly, the number of…, from…to及比较级，倍数句型等。
常用句型：
Facts:
was a great /slight increase /rise in…
has been a sudden/slow/rapid fall/drop in…
is 20% lower/higher than…
number /rate has nearly doubled, as against that of last year.
number is …times as much as that of….
increases/rises/decreases/reduces by…/…% / two thirds.
comparison with…,it decreased/increased/fell from…to…
Reasons:
reason for…is that…
may think of the change as a result of…
change in…largely results from the fact that…
are several causes for this significant growth in….First,….Second,…
brings out the important fact that…
6. The following reasons are responsible for …
第三步：归纳总结或发表评论。
常用词汇：
a word,/ in short, /generally speaking
’s clear from the chart that…
summary, it is important…
what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that…
, if we want to…,it is necessary…
is no doubt that attention must be paid…
第四步：如果要求谈谈感受
As far as I am concerned, …
2001年上海高考作文及范例
请你谈谈轿车大量进入家庭后，对家庭、环境和经济可能产生的影响。
Nowadays the number of people who own private cars is on the rise. Like everything else, private cars have both favorable and unfavorable aspects. Generally, the favorable aspects can be listed as follows.
First, private cars can bring convenience and mobility to owners. A car allows a person to move comfortably and safely as well as quickly and freely. Because my family owns a car, we are able to make extensive journeys every year. Therefore, I believe the tourist industry in China will develop more quickly with the increase in the number of private cars. Secondly, if more peop le buy cars, the automobiles industry will develop dramatically. What’s more, the growth of the automobile industry can trigger the boom of other important and related industries such as iron and steel production, energy and technological application.
Every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. To begin with, too many cars will give rise to a series of problems, such as serious environmental pollution and more traffic accidents. In addition, the driver may have drive around and around looking for available parking spaces.
Through above analysis, we can see that private cars should be restricted rather than encouraged. (199 words)
2000年上海高考作文及范例
1。我最难忘的一课 2。具体说明为何难忘 3。感想
An Unforgettable Lesson
In my life I have experienced many important things. But perhaps the most unforgettable thing which is really worth mentioning is the lesson given by my Chinese teacher just after she had an accident.
One morning just before our Chinese lesson, we were told our Chinese teacher, Miss Liu, had had an accident. One of her legs was badly injured and she couldn’t come to teach us. While we were planning to visit her after school, we also thought that maybe we would be free to do whatever we wanted during our Chinese lesson, and hoped our homework load would be reduced. But to our surprise, shortly after the bell, Miss Liu, with the help of a stick, came to the door of our classroom. With great respect w all stood up and greeted her.
She sat on a chair and began her lesson. She spoke slowly but forcefully. She prepared her lecture quite well and demanded that we do the same. Towards the end of the lesson, we got lots of homework from her.
A good teacher is many things to many people. Everyone has definite ideas about what a good teacher is. In my opinion the teachers who demanded the most from the students are perhaps liked best. (210 words)
1999上海高考作文及范例
一些学生认为学英语很重要；一些学生则认为不必学英语；我认为。。。。。。（观点、理由）
Some students think it is very important to master English. They believe “A foreign language is a weapon in the struggle of life”, Others consider English useless. They feel learning English is nothing but a burden to them.
In my opinion, English is one of the most important subjects we learn at school. Of all subjects I like English best.
There are several reasons why English is my favorite , English is one of the most widely used languages of the world. Nearly all information on the Internet and over half of the world’s technical materials are in English, thus a good command of English will greatly benefit me in my work. Secondly，it is believed that good English also leads to greater chances and opportunities. In the competition for a well-paid job, the one who can speak English has an advantage over those who cannot.
For all these reasons we should not only learn English but master it in the shortest time possible. (166words)
) be glad to do sth. 很高兴做 2017 上海中考英语写作模板（附常考短语句型） be back/in/out 回来 / 在家 / 外出 be at home/work 在家 / 上班 be good at 擅长 be careful of 当心，注意，仔细 be covered with 被??覆盖 be ready for 为??作好准备 be surprised (at ) 对??感到惊讶 be interested in 对??感兴趣 be born 出生 ) be on 在进行，在上演， (灯)亮着 ) be able to do sth. 能够做?? )be afraid of ( to do sth. that ?) 害怕(做) ) be angry with sb. 生(某人)的气 )be pleased ( with ) 对??感到高兴(满意) ) be famous for 因??而著名 )be strict in ( with ) 对事(人)严格要求 ) be from 来自?? ) be hungry/thirsty/tired 饿了 / 渴了 / 累了 ) be worried 担心 )be ( well ) worth doing (非常)值得被?? ) be covered with 被??覆盖?? ) be in ( great ) need of (很)需要 ) be in trouble 处于困境中 1) 2) 3) 4) 5) 6) 7) 8) 9) 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24
2015年上海高考英语作文解析，及，作文范文 II. Guided Writing (25分) Directions: Write an English composition in 120–150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 学校即将举办“读书节”，目前正广泛征集“读书节”宣传册图片。假设你是该校学生潘阳，你已找到以下三幅图片，决定给读书节组委会写一封信，推荐其中一幅，你的信须包括以下内容： 1. 简单描述你想推荐的那幅图片； 2. 阐述你用这幅图片宣传“读书节”的理由。 作文解析： 今年的英语作文题目同样重点考察了主观理由型作文的写作手法，这篇文章要求学生在三幅学校读书节宣传图片当中选出自己最喜欢的一幅，对图片进行描述并说明原因。这也是继2013年和2014年连续两年考察书信体与主观理由型文章的结合体之后出现的第三篇主观理由型文章。 整体来看，今年的作文题目似乎与往年没有什么区别，但细细分析，我们会发现今年英语作文的难度，不管是在文章内容、还是在形式上面，都有了大幅提升。因为考生需要同时兼顾三个难点：1、书信体正确的的书写格式；2、对图片内容进行细节的描述；3、找出恰当的理由(2-3点)进行论证，说理充分，同时注意论点和论据相结合，以及文章语句之间的逻辑严密性。可以说，近三年来英语作文虽然都在考察主观理由这个大的方向，但是考察的难度确实是在逐年递增。 对于考生来说，要想在短短的20分钟之内写好这篇作文，首先需要拿捏好这篇文章的结构。一般来说，文章第一段用来引出话题，第二段可以对所选择的图片进行描写，描写时要格外注意的地方是对细节的详细描述，基本内容讲清楚就可以开始第三段的理由阐述了。
2013上海中考英语作文 【篇一：2013年中考英语作文案例】 how to protect yourself self-protection is a lifelong topic. earthquakes are the most dangerous disasters because they are unpredictable. if you are outside when an earthquake happens, find an open place. apart from tall structures, electric wires can also be dangerous. if you are in a building, hide yourself under a desk or a chair at once. don’t be afraid because the most powerful part of an earthquake lasts for only a minute. as soon as power lessens, rush to the ground carefully. you should never use lifts in this situation. actually the death rate of an earthquake is quite low and it can be still lower if you know the right methods of escaping. i wish that everybody will be safe during earthquakes. 7+8+4 believe it or not, we may confront with many accidents such as natural disaster, electric shock and so on. thus, it’s essential for us to be careful in daily life and calm down when something happens. for example, electricity brings us convenience, but it can also be the killer. we must remember these points to protect ourselves from danger. first, never touch the electrical appliances with wet hands. second, don’t use too much equipment at the same time, this may cause a fire. if we are more careful, we can enjoy more from what the electricity brings us and live a happier life. 8+8+3 self protection is very important in my daily life. it can prevent me from getting hurt. for example, if a fire breaks out in my apartment, i need to calm down and call “119” as soon as possible. if the rescue team can’t arrive in time, it’s w ise to cover my nose and mouth with a piece of wet cloth. and it’s crucial to take the stairs instead of an elevator. only by doing things mentioned above can i get myself out of danger. 8+8+3 life is colorful but full of danger, so our students must learn some basic skills to prevent ourselves. for instance, when a fire breaks out, i can try to put it out by myself if it isn’t very big. but if it is out of control, i must dial 119 to ask for help immediately. i should stay calm and tell the firemen where
历年上海高考英语作文及参考范文 1999上海高考作文及范例 一些学生认为学英语很重要；一些学生则认为不必学英语；我认为。。。。。。（观点、理由） Some students think it is very important to master English. They believe “A foreign language is a weapon in the struggle of life”, Others consider English useless. They feel lear ning English is nothing but a burden to them. In my opinion, English is one of the most important subjects we learn at school. Of all subjects I like English best. There are several reasons why English is my favorite subject. First, English is one of the most widely used languages of the world. Nearly all information on the Internet and over half of the world’s technical materials are in English, thus a good command of English will greatly benefit me in my work. Secondly，it is believed that good English also leads to greater chances and opportunities. In the competition for a well-paid job, the one who can speak English has an advantage over those who cannot. For all these reasons we should not only learn English but master it in the shortest time possible. (166words) 2000年上海高考作文及范例 1。我最难忘的一课2。具体说明为何难忘3。感想 An Unforgettable Lesson In my life I have experienced many important things. But perhaps the most unforgettable thing which is really worth mentioning is the lesson given by my Chinese teacher just after she had an accident. One morning just before our Chinese lesson, we were told our Chinese teacher, Miss Liu, had had an accident. One of her legs was badly injured and she couldn’t come t o teach us. While we were planning to visit her after school, we also thought that maybe we would be free to do whatever we wanted during our Chinese lesson, and hoped our homework load would be reduced. But to our surprise, shortly after the bell, Miss Liu, with the help of a stick, came to the door of our classroom. With great respect w all stood up and greeted her. She sat on a chair and began her lesson. She spoke slowly but forcefully. She prepared her lecture quite well and demanded that we do the same. Towards the end of the lesson, we got lots of homework from her. A good teacher is many things to many people. Everyone has definite ideas about what a good teacher is. In my opinion the teachers who demanded the most from the students are perhaps liked best. (210 words)
COMPOSITION 1 I Would Like to Be a Polite Person I am pretty sure that I would like to be a polite person throughout my life. I am brought up in a family whose members are polite to each other. My parents share the same quality with me. I am taught never to be rude to anyone else even if he behaves badly enough. I am aware that a polite person should have an air of tolerance. My mother always says, “Ignore the ill-mannered people because they do not know what they are doing. Be polite to those who deserve your respect.” I also hold many other good manners to be a polite person，such as being friendly and helpful to others, keeping graceful postures all the time, trying to be understanding, talking in a modest way and so on. All in all, my family’s motto, never stop being polite, will stay with me forever. (146) COMPOSITION 2 I Would Like to Be a Soldier My dream changes all the time. But the other day, I happened to hear an English song named Tell Me Why, which tells something about poor kids whose country is in war. At that moment, I made up my mind that I would like to be a soldier in the future. If I become a soldier, I can fight for people’s freedom. I can help those who suffer a lot in war, especially the innocent kids, who are supposed to sit in class studying, just like the ones living in the peaceful world. I will do whatever I can to realize my dream. (103) COMPOSITION 3 I Would Like to Be a Singer The other day, I was on my computer going on You Tube to listen to music. I happened to find out that one song had almost five hundred million views. At that moment, I decided that I would like to be a lead singer in the future. I think it would be awesome seeing tons of fans wearing a shirt with my face right in the center. How great it is to hear my song played on the radio that billions of people will listen to! What a delightful sense to have my face appear on the cover of a magazine! Then I can afford to tour the world purchasing expensive and nice clothes. Maybe I will be rich enough to buy a cruise ship. All in all, being a rich and famous lead singer is my dream. I really hope it will come true someday. (146) COMPOSITION 4 On Helping with Family Chores Nowadays many students say they are too busy with their study and they do not have time to help their parents with the housework. I do not think it is true which make them appear to be all excuses. In my opinion, doing some housework such as washing our own clothes and making the bed is our own responsibility. We cannot depend on others all our life. Doing housework can make us independent. Thus we can take better care of ourselves when growing up. Besides, sharing the housework is helpful for us to set up good relationship with our parents. What’s more, I am aware that trying to do some housework, among which hard work can be regarded as a kind of physical exercise, can keep us healthy and strong. On weekdays, I often clean my bedroom every morning and wash dishes after supper. At weekends, washing clothes and mopping the floor is my duty. Also I offer to carry heavy bags from the supermarket. Just as the saying goes, “One cannot make a big success without being self-reliant.” Therefore, I hold the opinion that it is necessary for students to share the housework. (194)
最新2018上海中考英语作文范文预测 2018上海中考英语作文篇1 世界在发展，文化在交融，英语已经成为人们沟通的桥梁。怎样学好英语是我们一直在探索的问题。几年的学习经历你一定积累了许多成功的经验，请从听、说、读、写四方面谈谈你的建议。 要求：1. 词数：80—100词(开头已给出，不计入总词数) 2. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。 如何学好英语 How to learn English well English is important and useful to us. How can we learn it well? Here are my suggestions。 First, we should often listen to the tapes, English songs and programs. Watching English movies is also helpful to us. Second, we should speak English in class as much as possible.
Don't be afraid of making mistakes. The more you speak, the fewer mistakes you'll make. We'd better join the English club and practice with others. Third, we can read more English newspapers and magazines. It's good for us. At last, we should recite some good passages and keep diaries。 In a word, as long as we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing, we will learn English well。 2018上海中考英语作文篇2 近年来我国的发展世人瞩目，中国的传统文化正越来越受到各国朋友的关注。请根据提示，以"The Spring Festival"为题写一篇短文，向外国朋友介绍我国的春节。 要求：1、字迹工整，规范; 2、80词左右; 3、根据所给要点及参考词汇，可适当发挥。
2019全国8套高考英语作文真题及范文指导 1.全国Ⅰ卷 【题目要求】 假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括： 1．写信目的：2．个人优势：3．能做的事情。 注意： 1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．结束语已为你写好。 【参考范文】 Dear Sir/Madam, I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China during this summer vacation. I’m delighted to learn that volunteer students are wanted for a Chinese painting exhibition to be held in the local art gallery. Now I’m writing to apply for the position. The reasons for my application are as follows. First of all, having been exposed to foreign teachers since a young age, I can communicate freely with others in English. What’s more, years of being monitor makes me a brilliant organizer, which will help a lot to keep the exhibition in order. The most important factor is that my related knowledge will undoubtedly help the audience learn more about the unique Chinese art form. All in all, my sense of responsibility will make me a qualified volunteer. I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration. Yours, 1
2015年上海初三一模英语作文题目及范文精选 宝山区2014-2015学年度第一学期期末质量抽查试卷 初三英语 Recently there has been a discussion about the topic “Water Is Precious” in your class. Please write at Host 60 words about the topic "Water Is Precious" to express your point of view,(请以“水是珍贵的”写一篇至少60词的作文，标点符号不占格） (你的作文内容须包含以下几点) 1）Why is water very important in our life? 2）What are the causes of the water shortage? 3）How can we protect our precious water resources? 范文（1） Water is precious Undoubtedly , no man can live without water. When we begin the new day, we need water to drink, wash things, work. Farmers need water to make the crop grow healthily. The factory needs water to process the production. Animals need water to live their lives. However, polluting and wasting make precious water less and less. Some immediate actions must be taken to protect water resources. As students, we should have the sense of saving water. Saving a little day by day, it would make a big influence on protecting water. Given all of its importance and urgency, we must spare no effort to do what I have suggested you. 范文（2） Water is precious Water is the birthplace of life and it plays an indispensable part in our daily life，so water is very vital for us human. Although the ocean covers 71% of the surface of the earth ,there are many people who can’t get access to water in the world. But how can this be? Above all, the water shortage results from the huge number of people on the world who take it for granted using the water immoderately. Another reason for water scarcity is water pollution caused by farming and chemistry industry. Facing these two main reasons, we are supposed to save water in our daily life and reuse it. Only in this way can we protect our precious water resources. 崇明县2014-2015学年度第一学期教学质量调研测试卷 初三英语 Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic "Changes in my school".(以“学校发生的变化” 为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) (注意:短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。) Use the fallowing points as a reference(以下提示仅供参考) -----What changes have taken place in your school? -----What do you think of these changes? (注意:文中不得出现任何姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)
你是××中学的××，你校学生会即将组织一次徒步活动，已在校园网发布方案，征求师生的修改意见。你需要写一封邮件，包含以下两点： 1.提出你觉得需要改进的地方； Dear Sir/Madam, I’m really excited to heat that a hiking activity is going to be held near the Bund on the Labor Day holiday. However, there may be further improvement of the scheme you’ve posted on the campus website, as I’d like to point out. are willing to have a clearer picture of security precautions and necessary medical support for the the scheme should be comprehensive and thoughtful enough to ensure the success of the activity. Only by clarifying these details, are you likely to attract more attention from the students. I suggest the hike be more suited to the theme “Discover Shanghai” through additional activities. Upon arrival at the Bund, I propose an introduction of the architecture on both sides of the Huangpu River. By appreciating different artistic styles of the buildings, we can gain a deeper insight into the authentic Shanghai culture mixed with exotic , the experience may well be unforgettable one, because it of organizing the activity. , if the hike is organized in more detail and in a more supportive way, it is sure to succeed. I hope that my voice above can be heard and considered and wish the activity a great success. Yours sincerely Wang Lei
上海中考英语备考训练：写作 一，一等文要求， 1，结构三段式： 第一段：简单明了，开门见山。 如我们想表达小强很强壮，直接说XQ is extremely strong. 观点明确，一句足矣。第二段：分析为什么他强壮。 A. 每天吃10顿饭，He has ten meals everyday! 详举吃的是什么。 B. 每天运动2小时，He does exercise 2 hours a day! 详举做了什么运动。 第三段：结论，与第一段呼应，但不能完全照，要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如，How strong and robust XQ is! I hope to be him one day! 2，内容和要点： 话题topic必须符合题意，提示的要点必须写全，一个都不能漏写。确定主题、要点是要发表观点，还是举出例子。如果有具体提示，写作就等于翻译，把提示内容变换句式翻译到位，全面切题。如果没有提示，自已提炼，找到主题, 跟主旨无关的话不要写。 3，逻辑合理： 递进：first, second, third, finally, to begin with, first of all, in addition, what's more, moreover, on the one hand, on the other hand, the last but not the least。 转折：but, yet, however, as far as I am concerned, in the meantime。 总结：in a word, all in all, in conclusion。 4，语法和亮点： 单词拼读和语法必须准确，不可以有错误。在此基础上，用几个有难度的词汇，编几个高级的句型。一般词汇和简单句型要限量用，不可占字太多。 二，三段十句话： 1，三段布局： 高考作文题型多样, 有命题作文和材料作文。材料作文是根据给出的书面材料, 按要求作文。话题主要三方面：学生学习生活，学生日常生活，社会热点现象。无论哪种文体：记叙文、议论文，夹叙夹议文，应用文、说明文、图片描述文都可以用三段法：引入，具体，结尾。 记叙文：A. 背景介绍：时间、地点、人物、事件。B. 故事发展经过结果。C. 结局和感受。 议论文：A. 发表观点。B. 论据理由。C. 结论呼应论点。 图片文：A. 描述图片内容，提炼观点。B. 论据理由。C. 结论呼应论点。 日记写法同一般记叙文或议论文。通知，书信，演讲稿在引入部分写话题，意图，主题；在具体部分写活动要求，具体内容，观点陈述；在结尾部分写活动时间、地点、联系方式、结语、总结、希望或号召。 2，十句成篇： Passage 1, 1）Topic 话题 2）Thesis 论点 Passage 2, 3）Transition 过渡句 4）Argument1 论据1
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1999年 一些学生认为学英语很重要；一些学生则认为不必学英语；我认为……（观点、理由） 2000年 1。我最难忘的一课 2。具体说明为何难忘 3。感想 2001年 请你谈谈轿车大量进入家庭后，对家庭、环境和经济可能产生的影响。 2002年 你们让我骑好吗？ 简述图片内容，结合生活实际，就图片的主题谈谈自己的感想。 2003年 你的好友因家境一般买不起名牌而闷闷不乐。给他写信，谈谈你的看法和建议。 收信人：徐海青 寄信人：黄平 写信日期：2003年六月八日 2004年 老师要求你负责班级墙报（wall-newspaper)工作并征求你的意见。在日记中表述你的决定并谈谈想法。 2005年 古人云：“天生我材必有用”（There must be a use for my talent）。 通过描述你生活中一件事，说明人各有所长，无论才能大小都能成为有用的人。 2006年 下表提供了你所心仪的南、北两所大学的招生信息。通过比较作出选择，并结合个人情况说明理由。
南方大学北方大学 学费8000元/年5000元/年 招生人数20人10人 优惠政策无加20分 2007年 以“礼物”为主题写一篇作文。该文章必须包括以下内容： 1、你送礼物的对象及所送的礼物； 2、该礼物对他（她）可能产生的影响或带来的变化。 2008年 你班将组队参加学校组织的集体舞比赛（group dancing cooipetition)，班长希望大家积极参加。对此谈谈你的看法。你的文章必须包括以下内容： ·你是否会参加比赛 ·你做出该决定的具体理由 2009年 某海外学校举办英语夏令营，开设了如下课程：园艺（gardening），烹饪（cooking）,防身术（self- defence），护理（nursing）。假如你是王跃华（不可以用自己的真实姓名），写一封申请信，报名参加其中一门课程的学习。信的内容必须包括： 1、你感兴趣的课程 2、你期望从这门课程中学到什么 3、为什么想学这些内容 2010年 下图是小学新生的课堂一脚，对照你当时的上课情况，作出比较并谈谈你的感受。你的作文必须包括： ●描述图片里学生上课的场景 ●比较你同时期的上课情况 ●简单谈谈你的感受 2011年 假如你是启明中学（Ming Qi Middle School）的李明，想申请一个扶贫项目，帮助贫困地区的儿童。根据以下启事，写一封申请信（信中不能提到真实姓名和学校）。
2010年山东高考英语作文 假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你和在上海上学的英国朋友Tom约好下周末去北京旅游，但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件： 1. 表示歉意； 2. 解释原因； 3. 另约时间。 注意：1. 词数120~150； 2. 可适当增加细节。 【范文】 Dear Tom, I am indeed very sorry that I can not go to Beijing with you next week , which I have promised .I feel sorry for about it and want you to know what happened . Just now ,my cousin , Li Qiong , who left home to Australia for his further study last year , informed me that he would return this Saturday morning and asked me to pick him up at the airport with his family . You know , we haven’t seen each other for nearly a year . I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies and understand me . I would appreciate your allowing me to make another date to show you around Beijing .Once again ,I’m sorry for any inconvenience caused . Sincerely yours, Li Hua 2011年山东高考英语作文 假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom上个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛(speech contest)，你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给Tom写一封电子邮件： 1．询问Tom的生活和学习情况； 2．谈谈你的困难并请Tom帮忙； 3．告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。 注意：1．词数：120-150；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 【范文】 Dear Tom, It’s a month since you studied in Beijing. How is everything going with you? I am really happy to spend such an unforgettable experience with you here. I am going to take part in an English speech contest for middle school students in July this summer. I think the chance is of great importance for me. To have a very good performance, I am making preparations for it. However, I still have some trouble in collecting useful materials. Meanwhile,I find it hard to use English properly. I would appreciate it if you could offer me a